The Great Day of the Swimmers

Kor · **Reply #60 on:** March 04, 2014, 11:48:54 AM

Ah, ok. I did a slight change, removing the bit aobut going to live with a swimmer only herd. Not sure if that is enough or not, or if you want me to further edit my post. Removing that sentence of dialog made it so it made no sense for Diver to have thoughts what she'd do since she has no reason to run away, thus removing a summary of her back story.

Ducky123 · **Reply #61 on:** March 04, 2014, 01:21:52 PM

The post is alright the way it is now, Kor

I haven't seen the original though, but that's not important to know-

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Though I do not know what David has exactly in mind, I'm pretty sure it's not true that Ms. Swimmer wants to go to permanently live with another herd, or that she would risk her children's lives for something you can live without.

This theory is a nice one, albeit it is not what I had in mind. The siblings are worried and curious so coming up with theories about their mother's unusual behavior is exactly what I had in mind

I'm happy that you really put some effort into your posts. It's much easier to find something to reply to in a post of.. say three paragraphs than in one with two sentences... However, it sometimes just can't be helped

Some situations rather require a shorter response, such as Kor's recent post

BTW: It's your turn to post, Rocky

Ducky123 · **Reply #62 on:** March 24, 2014, 03:07:47 PM

I'm basically waiting for Loyfe to post but he seems to be really busied... If you want to continue the story rather than wait until he posts, please let me know. I'm fine either way

Pterano · **Reply #63 on:** March 24, 2014, 03:31:50 PM

Whatever you want to do, Ducky. You're the GM.

If you feel it's necessary to wait, then wait.

jansenov · **Reply #64 on:** March 24, 2014, 06:08:10 PM

Nobody gets left behind. I'll wait.

Ducky123 · **Reply #65 on:** April 24, 2014, 07:10:37 PM

I have messaged Loyfe again. If he doesn't make an appearance soon, I'm afraid we need to move on without him for a while. If we're waiting any longer we'll lose interest and ideas possibly...

Ducky123 · **Reply #66 on:** October 14, 2014, 05:28:09 PM

bump!

Some people still haven't posted and some show inactivity lately which worries me... Filling in for OC's is always tricky...

Kor · **Reply #67 on:** October 15, 2014, 03:35:49 PM

If this doesn't work you could try pm's maybe. Not sure which most prefer.

Ducky123 · **Reply #68 on:** October 15, 2014, 04:02:11 PM

Yeah I could pm them.