My Friendship is Magic fanfics

Allicloud · **on:** September 17, 2011, 05:52:56 AM

Well, as final confirmation of my Brony status, I've actually written a few of my own fanfics. Reviews would be much appreciated:

(QUICK WARNING: With my interests and suchlike, you can always expect my fics to be at least a little grimdark.)

1. The Statement of Twilight Sparkle. My very first ponyfic, and I daresay, I'm rather proud of it. Dunno why, but FiM/Lovecraft crossovers are pretty rare it seems...

Alternate fanfiction.net link

2. Ever Watching (unfinished). My latest fic, that I hope will grow to become my opus. Plagued by mysterious sounds and visits in the night, Twilight decides to figure out what is going on and catch them in the act.
But given the nature of her prowler, she'll wish she hadn't.

3 chapters in at the moment, with more to follow. (WARNING: This may or may not delve into OC territory at some point)

Anyways, feel free to give them a read, and as I said before, I'd be very grateful for reviews and comments.

Justin1993 · **Reply #1 on:** September 17, 2011, 07:23:58 AM

I just read the 3 chapters of Ever Watching. I feel another good story in the works

I will read the other story later and give a full review.

Petrie85 · **Reply #2 on:** September 17, 2011, 07:27:23 AM

When I get home I will check them out.

Allicloud · **Reply #3 on:** September 19, 2011, 01:48:51 AM

Just a quick little update: Chapter 4 of Ever Watching is up.

Justin1993 · **Reply #4 on:** September 20, 2011, 02:58:49 PM

I just read "The Statement of Twilight Sparkle."
I'm still recovering from the shivers the story gave me. I kept wondering, "What happened to Rainbow Dash?" I was frantic to get to the end to find out what happened to Rainbow Dash. When Rarity came in with the tea from Zecora, I said, "Yes! Now I get to find out what happened to Rainbow." That memory had to be quite nerve wracking for Twilight. I know I sure found it as such.
When I read that last conversation between Twilight and Rainbow I got the chills and then I teared a bit when I began to realize that Rainbow was dead.

Then the sentences leading up to the very last line in the story made me shudder, as did the last line.
The description you used made the story all the more intriguing and unnerving. Great short story

And I hope it gets displayed on ED!

Daddytops2009 · **Reply #5 on:** September 21, 2011, 03:12:27 PM

I gave a first try at a Friendship ios Magic fic.

They dream about what will happen in season 2.

http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,2177.0.html

Allicloud · **Reply #6 on:** September 21, 2011, 04:58:57 PM

Quote from: Daddytops2009,Sep 21 2011 on 07:12 PM

I gave a first try at a Friendship ios Magic fic.

They dream about what will happen in season 2.

http://www.equestriaforums.com/index.php/topic,2177.0.html

Erm, not to sound rude or anything, but this is a thread concerning MY Pony fanfics, not a general thread for fanfics.

Anyways, glad to see you liked "Statement..." Justin. I really wasn't sure if an HP Lovecraft/My Little Pony crossover fic would work, but most reactions have been pretty positive.

And to anyone who actually reads it, the newest chapter of Ever Watching will be hopefully up by the weekend.

Daddytops2009 · **Reply #7 on:** September 21, 2011, 06:37:59 PM

And I made MY thresad concerning my fanfics.

Allicloud · **Reply #8 on:** September 22, 2011, 01:55:02 AM

Quote from: Daddytops2009,Sep 21 2011 on 10:37 PM

And I made MY thresad concerning my fanfics.

Well, yeah, but you're still advertising yours in my thread.

Daddytops2009 · **Reply #9 on:** September 22, 2011, 04:37:52 AM

I'm sorry.

Keep up your work.

Allicloud · **Reply #10 on:** September 22, 2011, 05:49:18 PM

Quote from: Daddytops2009,Sep 22 2011 on 08:37 AM

I'm sorry.

Keep up your work.

No biggy.

And I have indeed kept it up. The newest chapter of Ever Watching is up. A bit of a WHAM episode, if you ask me.

Allicloud · **Reply #11 on:** September 25, 2011, 06:41:57 AM

Well, ED are saying that "Statement..." is a bit too short to give its own post, so they say they're gonna save it for the next shortstory compilation.

But they apparently do lkie Ever Watching, and they agreed to put it up!

Allicloud · **Reply #12 on:** September 28, 2011, 01:07:45 PM

Okay, while I wait for the right time to publish my newest chapter of Ever Watching Which, BTW, is now on Equestria daily, currently holding a 4.5 star rating), here is another Lovecraftian short story, The Strange Music of Octavia.

I'm thinking I'll make this an anthology fanfic, with a series of Lovecraftian horror short fics, all tied together somehow. I'm already working on ideas for my third! But I probably won't do that one for at least a week. I still gotta do my newest chapter of Ever Watching.