Land Before Time: Petrie's Day dreaming.

WeisseEdelweiss · **on:** March 05, 2007, 01:59:01 AM

This piece was suggested to me by Malte279. This person viewed The Land Before Time: Adult Petrie and suggested that something would happen to him because of his reckless flying.
Thank you so much for the idea, Malte! ^^
(Note that he was day dreaming about Ducky. I'm a Ducky/Petrie fan just for the record).

Link to Adult Petrie:
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1106949/

Malte279 · **Reply #1 on:** March 05, 2007, 04:55:09 AM

You're welcome

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I'm a Ducky/Petrie fan just for the record

I'm sure nobody had noticed this so far

Nice job, and a funny short comic. It makes me wonder if anyone else has been thinking about creating one or several LBT comics? Comics with actual long stories I mean. It sure would be some work but I would like to give it a try once I find the time (not this month for sure. There are BA exams for me on March 23rd and March 28th and I'm sitting amidst a huge pile of book at the moment, though the situation is not as strained anymore as it was a few days ago when I had to realize that 17 pages I had written for one exam were totally beside the actual topic, so I was back to page 0). I've also been thinking about making a comic of the actual movie's stories using screenshots to do this.
Anyway (I'm talking to much), the only piece of constructive criticism (not to be confused with talking down your work) I can offer is that in the last panel Ducky looks too small besides Petrie. Perhaps it might have been better to show just a foot of her (emphasizing the worm's eye view) or the like to keep the correct size relation without any need for a very large panel.

WeisseEdelweiss · **Reply #2 on:** March 05, 2007, 10:48:08 AM

Thanks ^^ The reason why Ducky looks so small is because she's behind him. ^^; I didn't know it would be that hard to tell. I guess I didn't do a good enough job with that effect. ^^;

Malte279 · **Reply #3 on:** March 05, 2007, 01:22:20 PM

In that case she should have been placed a bit higher to create the impression of distance, an effect that would be even stronger with the hill in the background.
This is not meant to be sound disrespectful of your picture (there are similar mistakes in mine too), but shall only serve the purpose of helping to make your future pictures even better.

Petrie. · **Reply #4 on:** March 05, 2007, 03:12:25 PM

Ahh...so that's how I ended up with that headache and dose of amnesia.

Thanks for sharing it.