I guess you misunderstood me Arvens. This 158 pages story is the one I finished. It is titled "The Cold Time" (and I consider it important to point out that it was finished before LBT 8 was released, and that there is almost no similarity except for snow). As I'm afraid it may really take ages for me to complete the correction of this story I think it may be a good idea if I send it to you before I finish the correction. Really, I don't know when and maybe not even IF I'll ever finish it. Last time I worked with the correction was on August 24th. So far the corrected part ends on page 67. However, those who read it and told me about their thoughts never told me about problems to understand anything (though I encouraged the readers to criticize whatever ought to be criticized), so it might not be too bad. Littlefoot-1616 read a totally uncorrected version of it, so you can ask him if there were any real problems.
As for the story I'm working with right now, it is titled "Old Threehorns" and I'm now on page 177
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