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on: August 26, 2010, 07:19:08 AM
After reading a post in The Insane Crossover Thread, I've decided to write a crossover of Final Destination and The Land Before Time.

Here's the link.


I'm only going to include the violence from all four movies, and profanity. Nothing other than that.


Rated M for Rated R for strong violent/gruesome accidents, gory images with terror, language


A cross between all four final destination movies in the Rating. I've written a short introduction just like the movies go and that's all so far.

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Reply #1 on: August 26, 2010, 09:38:30 AM
I'm a little bit confused during the dream. Littlefoot starts off with the gang. Then Shorty is in the group, but Littlefoot isn't? Then while everybody else is on the Great Wall, Littlefoot is walking by himself? It kind of seems to me that you meant to have Littlefoot on top of the Great Wall, not Shorty. Then again, I could be wrong.

One other thing I noticed. Some of the language the characters are saying I don't believe they would know. As far as I know, there is no Jesus or God in that universe, so I would be careful about things like that. Then again, I might be guilty of this as well in my fanfic, but just food for thought.

I'm not entirely sure how a crossover like this would work, but it certainly does seem interesting. If you can pull it off, then by all means go for it.

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Reply #2 on: August 26, 2010, 03:38:03 PM
Yeah... idea is a bit weird but since it is ScratteLover3's  fanfic, you can put in whatever you want. The power is within your creativity.

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Reply #3 on: August 26, 2010, 03:43:11 PM
Quote from: LBTFan13,Aug 26 2010 on  08:38 AM
1) I'm a little bit confused during the dream. Littlefoot starts off with the gang. Then Shorty is in the group, but Littlefoot isn't? Then while everybody else is on the Great Wall, Littlefoot is walking by himself? It kind of seems to me that you meant to have Littlefoot on top of the Great Wall, not Shorty. Then again, I could be wrong.

2) One other thing I noticed. Some of the language the characters are saying I don't believe they would know. As far as I know, there is no Jesus or God in that universe
1) No. They were all during the dream, but somehow (I'm not sure how) Littlefoot got seperated from the (probaly the earthquake).


2) I'm following in the steps of a real final destination movie, profanity and violence. But not as common in the actual movies, they are also supposed to be about 18, or how ever old they are in Twilight Valley (or Blood Ruby).

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