Fanfic Help

f-22 "raptor" ace · **on:** January 13, 2007, 11:14:18 PM

I'll start it off. Currently the villian in my fanfic is talking to his friend about his identy being discovered. Can't think of anything at the moment. Can someone help me?

Petrie. · **Reply #1 on:** January 14, 2007, 10:18:02 AM

That's not much to go on.

Place of story?
Time of story?
# of characters?
Type of plot?

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #2 on:** January 14, 2007, 10:41:21 AM

Right! Sorry! Place great valley. Time of the dinosaurs. It's the lbt fanfic I've been working on. number of characters in scene 2. Plot The villian doesn't know what to do. Is that better?

Petrie. · **Reply #3 on:** January 14, 2007, 10:57:37 AM

Well I guess so...I don't know what type of story I could come up with that does not repeat what you could find in a LBT sequel. -_-

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #4 on:** January 17, 2007, 12:53:19 AM

Any other suggestions? Anyone need help on fanfics your writing?

DarkHououmon · **Reply #5 on:** January 17, 2007, 02:44:56 AM

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Right! Sorry! Place great valley. Time of the dinosaurs. It's the lbt fanfic I've been working on. number of characters in scene 2. Plot The villian doesn't know what to do. Is that better?

Hmm..can you explain in more detail what you mean?

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #6 on:** January 17, 2007, 09:54:00 PM

Well The villian knows that littlefoot and the gang know who he is he is currently talking to a friend of his about the situation. The most recent thing I had him say was "They don't understand me". And I mean the great valley residents don't understand him. The villians life has been well questionable. Does that help? He just hasn't made the right decisions in life ok?

Malte279 · **Reply #7 on:** January 18, 2007, 01:59:36 AM

To me this sounds a bit as if you could get some inspiration for dialogue in LBT 7. It sounds very similar to me.

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #8 on:** January 18, 2007, 08:40:08 PM

Thank you malte! I'll do that