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The Swimmer Trials

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Alright, hope I don't forget to mention something... so many things happening again :p

Odd start but soon the mist clears (literally) and we realise it's just dreams! Bron's having a nice one, made me smile :smile

Ducky and Trough sitting in a tree, K.I... ^^spike

I've got to say I'm not really surprised by the events at the Big Water (Trough being allowed to stay (he'd run off otherwise indeed :p) and Bron leaving his herd (about time, Bron!)). Though... Bluey is... pregnant? :o

Meanwhile, Ruphus is learning that Ducky has a lover. Priceless :lol

Oh Diver what did you do!? Nobody make my little Ducky sad :! Ehh well it kinda led to an interesting talk, didn't it? Oh Sculra, you have something coming your way *raises fork*

Though, what is it that Cyrest is planning to do? Surely, he wouldn't... arg cliffhanger :lol

Well, you have me very excited for the next chapter, mate. You better go ahead and write the next chapter sooooon :p Actually, take your time so it'll be good, that's more important ;)

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Chapter 56: Final Preparations  

It was early morning in The Mysterious Beyond, long before the rise as the land was still cloaked in the darkness of the night. Nothing moved, all the dinosaurs in the small herd of children and adult Swimmers and one longneck were still fast asleep, however one twitched uncomfortably in his sleep. Cyrest gave a tired moan and rolled onto his side but he could not escape what he saw in his dreams.

*

All Cyrest could see was black but he could hear what was said and it made him tremble.

“I’m scared dad” said the young voice of his son, he sounded nervous though he tried to keep the fear out of his voice. Cyrest remembered that day though he wished he couldn’t. Suddenly the black background swirled, colours mixed in with the swirling spiral until a scene formed. Cyrest could clearly see The Crescent Caves in the distance, he was standing right by the river that flowed into them, though he was not alone. Just ahead of him he could see his younger self standing in front of the small dark green Swimmer that was his beloved son, Swayer. He watched the conversation though he already knew what was going to happen.

“I know you are scared Swayer but I’m sure you will get through this. I’ve trained you as much as a youngling your age should be” said younger Cyrest in an attempt to reassure his son. The older Cyrest remembered the training he gave Swayer, it was not nearly as extensive as Ducky’s as it was not in The Swimmer Wisdoms but he had thought it would be enough after all that was the training he had before The Trial and he survived it, so why wouldn’t his son?

Swayer did not look very reassured “but no one has survived The Trial here” he whimpered.

“That doesn’t mean you won’t” said Cyrest, putting a hand on Swayer’s back in a supportive gesture.

Swayer sniffed “I don’t want to die dad” he whispered fearfully. His father nuzzled him in response.

“You won’t die Swayer, I will be right here when you come out and then we can go and have some of your favourite long water grass together” said Cyrest referring to the water reeds which was one of Swayer’s favourite foods.

Swayer looked up at him hopefully. “Promise?”

“I promise”

Cyrest himself closed his eyes tightly as a few tears ran down his face. “I’m so sorry Swayer” he said softly, his voice riddled with guilt. When he heard that he had been chosen for The Trial by Sculra he was sure his son would do it and he in some cases openly bragged about how special his son was but it didn’t end well. Swayer was often left out of the games of the other few Swimmer’s his age that were doing The Trials, they saw him as to much of a daddy’s boy and a smart ass. Swayer was effectively devoid of any real friends his age. However, Cyrest had been sure that when his son completed The Trial, he would have every Swimmer in The Great Valley at his feet. Like father, like son, it would be an honour to have him follow in his footsteps…..but it wasn’t meant to be.

The scene changed.

Cyrest was now standing at the finish line of The Trial of Destiny with every adult Swimmer in the Great Valley, the finish was indeed one long vine from one side of the river to the other that marked the end of The Trial of Destiny. Swayer had been in The Crescent Caves for a while now and while Cyrest watched his younger self put up a brave face he knew that inside he was starting to doubt his decision and that he was really trembling like a frightened newborn on the inside.

Cyrest looked around at the gathered Swimmers and spotted Sura standing anxiously by the river bank, if only he knew what would happen to her then….  
Cyrest then caught sight of the one person that made his blood boil; Sculra. She stood casually by the river bank looking very cold, she looked like she had the edge of a smile on the tips of her beak, Cyrest glared at her and wondered what was going through that wicked fiend’s mind. He was about to walk straight up to her and give her a piece of his mind but that was when the gathered crowd gasped. Cyrest turned and his stomach fell he watched his younger self walk into the water in what almost looked like a daze. He had an expression of refusal on his face.

The river was now red and something dark green travelled down the river and into Cyrest’s gasp. He gazed in horror at it as did everyone else, he was holding the flesh of his own son in his hand. His breathing became unsteady as his mind tried to deny what he knew had happened but in his heart, he knew the truth, that his son was never coming out of those caves, that his son was gone forever, just like his mate. The realisation broke the poor Swimmer’s heart he fell onto his knees in the water. That was when he screamed.
Older Cyrest suddenly felt himself running. No. He was charging at the one person he knew was responsible for his son’s demise; Sculra.    

“I’LL KILL YOU!!! YOU EVIL MONSTER!!!!”  he shouted at the top of his lungs and he saw Sculra’s face twitch into a nasty smirk at watching his younger self break down, that action alone cause Cyrest to completely lose it. He sent his clenched first straight at her head but it went through as if he was a ghost.

Cyrest internally cursed but suddenly the background turned black again and this time when it again reformed he found himself back at the cave he left only yesterday. He dropped to his knees and looked at the ground solemnly. He tried to calm his nerves with deep breathing but his mind was in too much emotional turmoil to be pulled back under control. It was at that moment that a sudden solemn voice split the air around him.

“I’m so sorry Dad”

Cyrest’s heart skipped a beat, he knew that voice but it had been years since he last heard it. He turned to the direction of the voice and saw the person that he never thought he would ever see again. Swayer was standing by the shore, the sun behind him, painting his back a beautiful gold colour.

Cyrest suddenly sprang forward and took his son up in his loving but a rather strangling embrace, he nuzzled him all over and sobbed without composure. His son returned his hug with a strength just as strong as his father’s, he didn’t seem to be physically affected by the crushing embrace his father held him in.

“Oh my son” said Cyrest with unrestrained emotion in his voice. “I’m so very sorry”

“I didn’t make it, I failed you” said Swayer who, like his father was sobbing now.

“I should have stopped that stupid Trial, I didn’t know there was a Swimming Sharptooth in those caves” Cyrest lamented.  

“Nor did I,” said Swayer “I know you would not have let me do it if you knew” he said, trying to reassure his father that it wasn’t his fault.

“I missed you” said Cyrest quietly as he nuzzled his son.

“I am happy you are helping Ducky; I don’t want her to die” said Swayer looking up at his father with a proud expression on his face.

“You told her about me, about the Swimming Sharptooth?” asked Cyrest to which his son nodded.

“She is the best friend I never had, I wish I had met her when I was still alive, I am trying to help her anyway I can” explained Swayer.

Cyrest smiled. “I am glad you are, I like Ducky too and there’s not a day goes by that I wish you weren’t here to enjoy her company, I just wish you could have visited me” Cyrest said the last part sadly and almost accusingly.
The tone of his father’s voice was not lost on Swayer. “I can’t control when these things happen Dad, I am sorry” said Swayer apologetically hugging his father. He looked up when he was done. “You’re doing the right thing”

His father nodded “I am going to show Ducky how to-“ began Cyrest.

“No, I meant…..” interrupted Swayer “what you’re thinking about doing tomorrow……. it is the right thing” he said gently. Cyrest however looked conflicted.

“What if the worse should happen Swayer?” he asked. “How could I forgive myself and how will everyone else, her family and friends, how will they cope?” He sounded afraid of what might happen.

“At least you’ll know whether she can do this,” said Swayer “If she can then I know she could do The Trial, if it doesn’t turn out well then you’ll know that she tried her hardest but this is something she must face to overcome The Trial dad. Ducky ëmust’ do this” Swayer’s last words were of firm conviction and they seemed to do the trick in persuading his father.

“I know Swayer, I just wish things didn’t have to be so grim” said Cyrest solemnly. He placed his son back on the ground. However, his son turned to leave.

“Wait!” cried Cyrest in alarm.

“I must go Dad,” said Swayer sadly, turning his back briefly “but I will always be with you, you are never alone.”

The scene started to turn white and Cyrest shouted out to his son one last time.

“Swayer! I love you! I will make sure Sculra pays for what she did to you! You shall not have died in vain!” he called as the scene turned white however just before he woke up he heard Swayer’s voice whisper to him as if on a breeze of silent wind.

“I love you too Dad”


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Ducky opened her eyes and found herself standing on a rock in the middle of a large waterhole surrounded by a dense rainforest, one that she recognised, having been their once before and just like last time it was filled with dozens of Swimmers, both males and females all her age but unlike last time they were not playing but rather looking at her. She was the centre of attention, this made Ducky more than a little nervous as she did not know what they wanted. Suddenly she saw Swayer appear from the crowd and just as everything started turning white he said: “The time has come; you will join us today Ducky”


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Ducky and Cyrest woke up at almost the exact same moment, though it was actually early morning now, with The Bright Circle just peeking over the horizon and illuminating the land with its waking, warm rays. Cyrest sighed and stretched, Ducky however was pondering her most recent and rather cryptic sleep story. What did Swayer mean when he said ëyou will be joining us today’? Ducky didn’t know but for some reason she felt different today, there was something in the air but she did not know what it was.

It wasn’t long before the others started waking up. Diver yawned right next to her and opened her eyes slightly, she looked rather tired. Trough too, woke up shortly after however he literally jerked awake from a rather unpleasant dream about The Trials, thankfully he got over it quite quickly. Sura opened her eyes and yawned. She raised her head to see the children waking. “Good morning everyone” she said warmly. She got a few returned courtesies from some of them but most of them were tired affirmations.  

Sura bent her head and gave Spike a firm push in order to wake him and unlike usual Spike actually woke, he yawned and nuzzled his mother’s beak before licking his two sisters. Ducky and Diver laughed as Spike tickled their tummies with his tongue. Littlefoot, Ali and Cera were all still asleep though along with Grandma Swimmer who was in the process of being woken up by Bluey. “Wake up Cera” said Sura, giving the young Threehorn a push with her beak that succeeded in rousing her but did not help soothe her annoyance.

“Oh why couldn’t you let me sleep a little longer?” she grunted irritably.

“Well the sooner you get back home, the sooner you can see your sister again” said Sura positively.

“Yeah” groaned Cera unenthusiastically, thinking more about the lecture from her father. However, Shorty seemed to guess this.

“What’s the matter Cera? Don’t want to see your Dad to soon?” he said playfully to which The Gang chuckled.

“You’d be too if you had my father!” retorted Cera as she got to her feet.
Bron had just roused Littlefoot and Ali. The couple was now nuzzling each other as they both got to their feet. “Good, someone else to toy with” thought Cera with a mischievous smirk.

“Well, who wants to make a bet that Mr and Mrs Longneck here will be making eggs first or will the two smaller loveling Swimmers here will be making eggs first” she said rather loudly to the embarrassment of both couples. They cringed as the children laughed at Cera’s snide comment.

Littlefoot and Trough both rolled their eyes at this while Ducky and Ali both shook their heads irritably. “Breakfast!” announced Sura as she placed a large load of plants down for the children to eat while Ruby and Chomper both started looking in the water for fish and snapping shells which were rather easy to find due to their relative abundance and soon they were enjoying breakfast as well.

No one really noticed Bluey go into the forest a short way to forage however she came across several large piles of different types of green food that she had secretly prepared the night before. She started gorging herself as her hunger was ravenous and in all too short a time there was no green food left and she was still hungry. She had already noticed the symptoms of her current condition but keeping it hidden from everyone else would be a great challenge but she wanted to surprise them so she would keep a low profile.

She had to come out as the small herd started moving again, Sura and Cyrest at the front while Bron and Grandma Swimmer took up the sides, the children were in the protective circle and Bluey lagged a short way behind them eating any and every plant she could get her hands on while at the same time, trying not to attract to much attention, she was making Spike’s hunger look tame but thankfully everyone was preoccupied with other activities which mainly was entertaining Jane.

The group continued their long walk and for the most part the journey was uneventful however the suspense and tension in Cyrest grew with each step he took to what was inevitably waiting for them to arrive, he guessed that they would arrive around noon and pretty soon that was not far away and Cyrest was starting to tremble, his hands shook and he started panting as if he was suddenly very hot, his hands were already covered in sweat.

They were getting closer to the destination but as they drew closer, the conflict in Cyrest’s mind raged with greater intensity. Could he really put this task up to Ducky? Could she do it? What would the others think of him if he did? What if Ducky failed….? That last question hung in his head the longest and bringing with it an incredible fear to Cyrest. He clenched his trembling hands into fists and had one fist on his chest.

Isira had noticed Cyrest’s change in demeanour for a while and it worried her, this was not like the wise and sometimes cheeky elder that she had grown to like. Something was bothering him, something major for him to be like this.
Grandma Swimmer decided to inquire, she walked over to Cyrest “Are you alright Cyrest?” she asked sounding a little concerned.

Cyrest almost jumped out of his skin when Isira broke him out of his current train of thought. “Don’t do that again!” cried Cyrest “You almost gave me a heart attack!” he said wiping the sweat off his brow.

Grandma Swimmer was a little taken aback by Cyrest’s somewhat rude reaction. “Sorry Cyrest, I wasn’t trying to scare you. I just want to know what’s getting you all worked up like this” said Isira, the concern in her voice and facial expression was obvious to Cyrest.

“I’m fine Isira” replied Cyrest with a dismissive gesture of his hand.

This response was not to the liking of Isira for she gave him a firm frown. “Don’t give me that ëI’m fine’ nonsense, I can tell you anything but fine.”

Cyrest grimaced at the biting remark. “I’ll talk about it later” he said. Grandma Swimmer might have continued her interrogation but Cyrest turned his head away from her and increased his pace so he was no longer next to her. She shook her head, at least Cyrest would tell her about this bothersome issue later.

Finally, as The Bright Circle reached its zenith the small herd came across something unexpected. The river was wide here and flowing very fast, too fast to be very accommodating to any of the younger Swimmers. However, what really made this site interesting was what looked like a huge rock formation that stretched almost five longneck’s length where the river bent, several other rivers joined at it and made the current look rather powerful but this big rock was half the height of an adult Swimmer and it stayed right in the middle of this junction, right in the path of the flow and yet it still stayed there.

Observing from high Petrie could see water pouring out of the other end of the rock in a huge foamy torrent.

It was here that the herd chose to stop for lunch.

Cyrest was staring at the rock in a trance like state and would not take his eyes off it, it was as if everything was muted and he was looking back on a moment preserved in time, a moment he would never forget for as long as he lived.

“…..Cyrest!” said Sura loudly for the fourth time in a row.

Cyrest practically jumped with a yell of surprise. Sura backed away in order to avoid getting hit by his flailing arms, everyone turned to stare at him. Cera and Diver and Shorty were all chucking under their breath but for some reason the sight wasn’t as funny as it should have been. Cyrest regained his composure although he was breathing hard from the jump scare. “You scared the hell out of me!” he cried.

“What’s wrong?” asked Sura, she gazed at him with a worried expression, Cyrest knew that she was worried for his wellbeing but as he gazed at that rock he figured that now would be the time to tell them all.

“This place…..” he said, his voice trailing off into the distance.  

“What about it?” asked Bron.

Cyrest sighed and pointed to the rock. “That….. is where The Trial of Destiny used to take place…… that is where I took it” he said. His words descended on them all like a ton of rocks as the true significance of this place was suddenly revealed.

“That is where you did your Trial” said Ducky staring at the rock; Cyrest nodded once.

However, Sura did not look to impressed she pointed her finger at him and said accusingly “You knew we would pass here didn’t you?”

Cyrest nodded. “I knew; it is time for Ducky to take her Trial” he said in a deep but calm tone.

Silence followed their words and everyone stared at him in disbelief. Sura herself could not believe her ears. Did she really just hear what she thought she just head? Did Cyrest just thrust The Trial on Ducky like Sculra had done? Sura stared at him in a thunderstruck fury.

“She is ready” finished Cyrest, looking down at Ducky who was now the centre of attention for the whole herd however all that registered in Ducky’s mind was shock that Cyrest would do this and as she recovered from the shock she felt herself frozen with fear at what she was now facing and Swayer’s words suddenly had a huge impact on her. Did he mean she would…..? Ducky’s eyes widened and her breathing became unsteady, she backed away from the rock and looked at Cyrest in dread.

“Do you seriously think I will permit my daughter to try this!?” asked Sura firmly, raising herself up to her full height and staring down at the elder Swimmer.

“I didn’t think you’d be very receptive but-“

“You damn right I’m not!” scolded Sura. “I am not going to send my daughter into some death trap! I would die before I let that happen!” said the rather irate Swimmer firmly.

“Your daughter already is going into a bigger death trap in The Great Valley” retorted Cyrest.

“And how do I know there is no Swimming Sharptooth in there?” she pointed back at the rock and looked back at Cyrest, demanding an answer.

“I did that Trial and there was no-“

Sura interrupted again. “You did that Trial ages ago and who’s to say that there isn’t some Swimming Sharptooth hiding in those caves now?!” demanded Sura who was almost yelling. She placed her hands on her hips and shook her head in repulsion.

“Sura, If Ducky does this then The Trial is done, she will be able to do it, we just need to get around The Swimming Sharptooth problem” said Cyrest trying to be reasonable, he turned his head to Grandma Swimmer.

“He does have a point Sura” she said calmly and she knew that Cyrest had put a lot of thought into it after all, he had been trembling like mad earlier in the day and she was sure it was because of this decision. Her daughter however was not convinced; she shook her head vigorously.

“I have sent Ducky into far too much danger. I will not send her on a suicide mission!” Sura shouted out angrily. Bluey watched her sister in alarm and worry, there was only one time she had seen her sister act like this and that was when she left home in a very…..unpleasant manner.

“Sura calm down,” Bluey said soothingly, holding her hands up in front of her chest “I think Ducky can do this” she added.

Sura looked at her with a deep sense of betrayal “What is going on here!? Are you all trying to get Ducky killed!? I am not letting her do it and that is that!” she yelled, her voice was frighting fierce, so much so that Diver took a step back and Spike whimpered. Jane was hiding behind Spike’s foot, she had no idea what was going on but all this shouting frightened her. She squawked in fear, Ruby placed a comforting hand on her back however even she and the rest of the children were rather taken back by Ducky’s mother’s actions, they had never seen her act this way before.

“She’s not in her right mind, if she was, then she would not be doing this” Ruby thought with growing concern.

Grandma Swimmer was having similar thoughts. “Is this Sura who’s speaking or is it her protective instincts?” she questioned in her mind.

However, the situation suddenly escalated as Cyrest took a step forward toward Sura who was standing in front of Ducky “Sura, this is something Ducky ëmust’  do” he said, his voice now firm and commanding.

Sura backed away and picked up Ducky in her arms and held her away from Cyrest. Her heartbeat was working overtime as adrenaline surged through her body. She would never let Ducky die. Never! “Don’t you dare!” whispered Sura fiercely “Don’t you even think about it!” she said, unconsciously moving herself into a defensive position.

Cyrest noticed this with alarm. Sura was not in a normal defensive stance she was in a fighting stance which could only mean “Is she really that scared that she’d fight?” thought Cyrest in growing fear as he observed Ducky in her mother’s other hand and what he saw frightened him. Ducky was struggling to breathe; her mother was holding onto her much too tightly. Sura turned her flank broadside and brought her tail into a striking position, her other hand brandished a branch that she picked up and she stood on her toes, her muscles tensed, ready for the slightest move, she was clearly ready to fight to the death here.

“Sura, let go of Ducky quick!” he said but his tone did nothing to help Sura’s current state of mind. Who only backed away toward the water’s edge.

“KEEP AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER!”  she shouted, lashing her tail in front of her defensively.

“Mom, please stop! Your scaring me!” cried Diver who was supported by Spike’s fearful cry. Sura’s eyes widen in shock, if anything could penetrate the fog of her mind and break her trance it was the voices of her own children. She shuddered when she became aware of her defensive fighting poise, she dropped the branch and moved out of the fighting stance and looked back at Ducky and loosened her grip over her daughter.

“I am scared-ed mommy I am, I am” whimpered Ducky who was trembling in fright in the now open palm of her mother’s hand. “Please do not fight please, please, pleeeaaaassse” she begged, looking up at her mother with wide, tearful eyes and trembling hands.  

Ducky was relieved to see her mother calm down and gently nuzzle her in a consolatory manner. She sat down on her haunches and tried to catch her breath “Was I really doing all that?” she asked herself, horrified that she had allowed her instincts to almost cause a fight.

She looked down in shame and closed her very moist eyes tightly “I’m sorry, I’m sorry” she said in a breathless whisper.

Her mother and sister quickly came to support her, her sister hugged her and her mother nuzzled her in a comforting fashion. “We know your scared dear, we understand” said her mother. Her daughter choked back a sob as she finally got her breathing under control. Ducky jumped onto the ground and watched the scene, in concern.

“Are you okay now Mama?” she asked uncertainly.

Her mother, took a moment to look at her and nodded her head. “Yes dear, I’m okay now” she said in her usual comforting voice.

A clearing of a throat turned everyone’s attention to Bron who had watched the ordeal in stunned silence, not sure whether he should interfere or not but after seeing the situation almost break he had to step in. “Has anyone asked Ducky what she thinks about this?”

His question got every head to turn back to Ducky who found herself turning her back to them, she realised what her words would mean, she could choose what happened and she knew what she should do but she wasn’t sure if she could bring about the strength to say it. She was so scared right now and if she said what she was going too would her mother finally snap? Ducky didn’t want that and of course Swayer’s message only gave her a sense of terrible foreboding about this moment, however it all hung in the balance, she had to decide whether to do this or not.

The atmosphere around the small herd was incredibly tense as they waited for Ducky’s response, they all just stared into Ducky’s back silently, knowing that this was her choice and her choice alone. Finally, after what felt like hours Ducky finally turned around to face her friends and family, however her gaze lingered on her mother, she bore a begging expression that clearly said “Please do not be mad at me”

“I am so scared-ed and I do not want to do this but I know I have to yes, yes, yes.” She looked up at everyone and said quietly “I will do it, yes I will…..” she took a deep breath “I will” she finished.


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The water rippled away from Sandy as she and her brother Spinner helped wash four of their younger siblings in the water of the river near the nest. Two of the siblings were from the second clutch. One was a similar shade of red to Sandy though much darker and of course he was a boy; Ketane was his name, he was one of the four boys of the second clutch, the rest were all girls. The other smaller girl was an aqua light green that almost looked like a blue shade on her back while her belly was brown, though it looked more like dusky gold and in many cases, new dinosaurs would mistake her for a gold and aqua blue Swimmer, her name was Sophie, she and her brother were both five years old and were heading onto six soon.

The two other children were even younger, they were almost two years old and could talk but in broken sentences, though they still retained their more younger and in their opinion, easier unique toddler language, as was the case, they were part of Sura’s third clutch of younglings that had been the latest to hatch during the fire mountain incident. Like their older siblings one was a boy and the other was a girl. They were both a light shade of green but had different eye colours; the boy whose name was Webblay had a red eye colour while his clutch mate had green eyes, her name was Bridget.

Another big difference between the siblings was their height while Spinner and Sandy were the oldest at eleven years of age their younger siblings where much shorter than them. Ketane and Sophie were only up to their chests in height while their youngest siblings Webblay and Bridget were about as tall as their legs were high.

It was a cool day in The Great Valley a rainy drizzle fell lightly on the dinosaurs which was much better than the last time they had rain which was during The Killer Storm.

The four smaller younglings had been playing at the bubbling mud and had gotten themselves covered in the slimy brown goo. This hardly phased Spinner or Sandy who gladly pulled them out despite getting muddy themselves, though they did splash each other with the stuff on the way out. Spinner and Sandy often played with their younger siblings, occasionally joined by Opal or Ray and Echo. Today however the air felt different as yesterday when they were all enjoying dinner by their mother’s fourth clutch of eggs their father told them the news that they had been longing for since The Killer Storm.

Their mother was coming home along with Ducky, Spike and Diver and all of The Gang. To hear that Ducky and their mother would be finally returning was to set off an explosion of cheers because that is exactly what happened when they heard the news. The youngest children in particular were fired up at the thought of seeing their mother again while the older clutch younglings were looking forward to seeing Ducky back as well, they all knew that she would need support from them with all that had been going on around her.

Their father had also mentioned that one of Ducky’s new friends a boy Swimmer was going to come home with her along with Cyrest’s hatchling niece, he told his children to make them feel welcome. This sparked a lot of controversy between Ducky’s clutch mates, Rapid in particular was joking that Ducky had found a mate which Echo vigorously protested against and retorted that ëDad said he was just a friend’ and so the two boys started arguing again, causing their siblings to leave and consider the implications of their father’s words without the two competitive boys. Rapid’s leg was also looking much better, though he couldn’t walk alone he had to be helped along, though he tried to avoid Echo since he feared he would tease him and brag about being the family’s boy team racing leader, however Echo had remained passive, rather than annoying Rapid he offered him sympathy (which Rapid found even more distasteful) as he did not want to have this new privilege stripped from him by his father.  

Sandy gently scrubbed away at her sisters while Spinner washed his two younger brothers. Sandy sighed contently. “I can’t wait to see Ducky and Mommy again” she said longingly.

“Nor can I” said Spinner looking at his sister in excitement.

“I want to see Mom again too and Ducky” said Sophie.

“Mommy coming home” said Webblay, clapping his hands and nodding his head in pleasure. His sister jumped up and down in the water when he said that, her tail wagging excitedly.

Their older siblings chuckled at their antics. For Spinner and Sandy, it was a reminder of innocence. They still retained theirs but like their fellow clutch mates they had also seen the most trauma and had experienced life at its harshest, having been born and raised for their first five years in The Mysterious Beyond. Their younger siblings had not seen as much trauma as they had though they had still seen and been through rough times but their newest siblings had seen no trauma or harsh times, they didn’t even know about The Trial of Destiny, having been too young to really understand the concept of death or The Swimmer Trials. Spinner and Sandy had already been aware of death and the dangers of the world at their age but now their younger siblings could live a happy life free of trauma here in The Great Valley, that was if Ducky could complete The Trial and survive.

“I wonder how Ducky is going” said Spinner in an undertone to Sandy. They both exchanged a clueless glance with each other, Sandy obviously did not know but they both hoped that she was okay and that she would now be ready for The Trial, the news their father had told them about Ducky being trained by Cyrest was very reassuring though he had not gone into any details about said training.

“Well we can ask her when she gets back” said Sandy as she finished scrubbing off the last of the mud off of Bridget who squeaked in thanks, reverting back to toddler language or as Rapid called it ëBaby language’.

Sandy got out of the water and shook herself dry and walked over to her rock while the two girls started playing in the water, Spinner was still scrubbing off his younger brothers so he was preoccupied. Sandy jumped onto her rock and sat down on it and took the stick that was leaning against it into her hand and placed the tip in the sand at the base and started to draw. It was widely known that if there was any kind of drawing competition in The Valley for everyone then Sandy would win hands down as she was the only one who drew things on a regular basis and her ability to draw in great detail had been refined over the many years she had done this. The small rock she was on was nicknamed by her family as Sandy’s drawing space. Here Sandy would sit here for hours at a time, sometimes even a whole day and just draw whatever came to mind.

She would leave her work for anyone to see, it was often common for one to see a different picture every three days or more, each better than the last as Sandy continuously tried to improve her technique. Recently however Sandy had found something at the base of some trees; ochres, that she had been experimenting with in order to bring colour to her drawings and opening up a whole new ability, the ability to colour and paint and she loved it, even though sand was not the best canvas she still preferred to do her drawings in the sand near the nest but the black charcoal that she got her hands on from a lightning struck tree after The Killer Storm could be used on bark and she had done a few coloured drawing that way and actually kept them close to the nest, on display for all her family to see.

Today however she was not using colours, nor was she being very detailed hence her drawing was done in very quick time. She looked down at it and closed her eyes and imagined what she had drawn and sighed contently. “What are you doing Sandy?” asked Spinner curiously, walking over from the water having finished bathing his younger brothers who were both playing with their sisters in the water. He stopped next to the rock and stopped dead in his tracks when he saw what his sister had drawn on the sand.

“It’s Mom and Ducky and Diver and Spike arriving home” said Sandy. Her picture was made from as if someone was viewing it from a distance, so the tiny details were not added. It showed her mother entering The Great Valley with Ducky riding on her usual place on Spike’s back and Diver walking beside them.    

Spinner looked at it and smiled, he had a look of longing on his face. “You know you’ve captured how I think we all feel perfectly in this amazing drawing of yours Sandy….yep, yep, yep” Spinner added Ducky’s catchphrase at the end. Sandy gave him a friendly pat on the back and looked very happy and not just because of Spinner’s complement.

“Thank you Spinner, I didn’t realise how much I miss Ducky’s way of talking” she said gratefully.

“Well we’ll see her soon so no worries Sandy, now you actually going to help me with making a whirlpool for once?” asked Spinner with a grin.

Sandy groaned for her brother’s ëlost cause’ but she was feeling in the mood for some action. “Okay Spinner, I’ll see you in the water” she said and ran off to the river with Spinner following close behind. After all this time, they were eager to see their mother and sister again but little did they know of what Ducky had just said she’d do in The Mysterious Beyond.


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“Are you sure you want to do this?” asked Sura to her daughter “It isn’t too late to back out” she added. She was sitting by the river along with everyone else, gathered before her. The four adult Swimmers sat directly in front of Ducky while the kids stood behind her with Bron towering over them all.

“Sura” said her mother, placing a hand on her daughter’s back and gave her a reassuring look. Sura took a deep sigh and nodded, though she was still rather tense. The shock brought on by Ducky’s decision was silencing for them all, hardly anyone could think of the words to say but Ducky’s decision was final and they all knew it, whether they liked it or not she was going to do The Trial of Destiny, the proper one, today, here and now.

The mood around the small herd was very grim and everyone was watching Ducky have her final prep talk with the adults but they did not know if it would be her last, it certainly felt that way, each of their hearts had been run through by the icy shaft of fear, Spike was trembling non-stop where he stood, he could not believe what Ducky had chosen to do but he knew it was not his choice to make on the issue but if he had it his way then he would not allow Ducky to get within a Longneck’s length of that place.

Cyrest began, his voice a slow, clear monotone that almost felt like it was a sign of impending doom. “Ducky, I have not been in those caves for a very long time and I only took one route and there are many routes through those caves so I don’t know what you might face in their but before you begin you should know a few things.” He said to which Ducky nodded her head, though her hands were trembling, never had she felt so scared in all her life on what she was about to do but she knew it had to be done regardless if it would mean her end or not. She looked back at the frightened faces of her friends, who had come to support her in her darkest of moments. “Will I ever see them again” thought Ducky mournfully, she turned her head back to listen to Cyrest, it was important advice he would give her and there was no reason not to listen to it.

“First of all when you start the first thing you must get is any nightlight you can find, collect as much of it as you can to take in with you but don’t use it all at once and also keep an eye out for any air pockets they could just be the thing that saves your life, understood?” said Cyrest.

Ducky nodded. “Yep, yep, yep” she said slowly, the fear evident in her voice, making even her catchphrase sound less cheerful as it nearly always was.

“And lastly and most importantly is to go slowly and whenever you can go tail first” he said. Everyone stared at him in surprise, even Bron but he knew he was out of expertise here, he knew nothing about swimming like a Swimmer did, so he just listened. “The current is very strong and it could push you straight into sharp rocks and that’s not something you want, it could be your undoing, so unless you have sufficient light then go cautiously and whenever there is a junction hold the cave wall and use your tail and ears to find it’s direction and strength that you’ll know if it is a dead end or not and how to navigate it. If you let the current push you backwards then you can slow yourself down and get a hold on the rocks easier, okay?” explained Cyrest.

Ducky nodded. She knew how to tell if a passage was a dead end or not and Cyrest’s advice was perfectly logical and sound, she was probably as ready as she’ll ever be.

“Oh and Ducky…..good luck, we’ll be thinking about you, just remember your training and don’t give up hope and we will see you again” Cyrest spoke as warmly as he could in order to give Ducky just a small bit of confidence, it might not be much but it could make all the difference in the world. “Now we’ll start in just a few moments once everyone is ready” announced Cyrest, he let out a long sigh and withdrew.

Ducky in the meantime went straight to her friends who were already on their way to meet her, every one of them, all the friends she knew and loved were right here for her and even if she could not see them, she knew that they believed in her. So, Ducky didn’t object when she was completely smothered by a group hug of all her closest friends, she held each one closer than she ever had before, she could feel the tears running down her face and her friends faces as they prepared to depart for possibly the final time. Spike, Diver and Trough were all hugging her the hardest and Trough whispered. “You’re my best friend, I know you’ll do it” he said lovingly licking her cheek, everyone else hardly knew what else to say, it summed up everything, they just begged that she would live through this.

Eventually everyone broke off allowing Ducky to finally go back to the adults of her family who each nuzzled her at once, her mother picked her up and held her in a gentle but at the same time, a tight embrace. “No matter what happens dear, I am proud of you and I will always love you no matter what, you’ll always be my little Ducky” said her mother lovingly nuzzling her.

“I love you mommy” said Ducky, holding on tightly to her mother.

“I love you to my sweet Ducky” replied her mother as she finally broke off, allowing Ducky to see her tear drenched face. Sura felt like she was saying goodbye to her daughter for the last time she inwardly preyed to her ancestors that Ducky would return to her, though it didn’t make the parting any easier. She looked to the caves and saw Cyrest standing next to the caves looking at her sadly and nodded once, he knew how she felt and even this small piece of gratitude was helpful to Sura, though she also knew that it was time.

“Ready?” she whispered to Ducky.

Ducky hugged her mother tightly on last time “Ready” she replied in a whisper.
Sura nodded and walked her to the bank and stepped into the shallow water which was moving very fast, she moved deeper until she was standing at chest depth in the middle of the river with Ducky in her hands. Everyone else took up positions on the bank, all waiting in anticipation and fear that one moment.

“Ducky,” it was Cyrest that broke the silence between the dinosaurs, his voice was loud and clear for all to hear. “You have been chosen to perform The Trial of Destiny in The Great Valley, you were chosen because you are the best Swimmer in the herd even though you are going to compete in a Trial that nobody has survived due to play of the foulest sort. Today…..You come to the place where this Trial was once held and by choice you have chosen of your own accord to do this Trial to prepare yourself for your most difficult Trial. Today you shall do the true Trial of Destiny.”

Everyone one took a breath on at the same moment while Cyrest continued. “I admit that when I first met you, I didn’t think you would have what it takes but you have been trained by a survivor of The Trial, a loving mother and by Swimmers of The Big Water and now, even if you were not the best Swimmer in the herd of your age you are now, since no Swimmer your age has ever mastered the wisdoms of our race and I am proud to have had you as a leaner under my care.”

Cyrest smiled warmly at Ducky, who despite her dire position could not help but feel uplifted by Cyrest’s warmness. “I only wish that this was the true Trial and that you would get your reward after completing it but it is not but know this we, your friends and family” Cyrest gestured to everyone gathered on the bank watching. “Will always believe in you.” Cyrest prepared to close his speech.

“Have hope, never give up and good luck, we will all be thinking about you and will be waiting for you when you come out, Let The Trial of Destiny Begin!” Cyrest said loudly and clapped his hands once.

“Goodluck Ducky!” everyone yelled their encouragements to their friend and Ducky looked at them all one last time and smiled at them. She knew that she would never give up, she would do this, she had to do this, nothing was going to stop her, even with Swayer’s warning Ducky felt much more warm with this display of support from the ones she loved, the ones that cared about her as well. Ducky turned to her mover and hugged her one last time, feeling the smooth warm skin pass under her hands and the beating of her mother’s heart. That hug seemed to last for an eternity for Ducky and she didn’t want to let go, it was only by sheer force of will that allowed her to disengage and look up and her mother who smiled compassionately down at her.  

“You’ll do it my little Ducky; I know you will” she said in her warm reassuring voice.

However, as Sura said her words quietly Ducky’s replied was yelled out as she took her final breath of air. “YEP, YEP, YEP!!!”  

Ducky jumped from her mother’s hand and dived into the water and as of that moment The Trial of Destiny, the true Trial of Destiny had begun.








DUN, DUN, DUN!

I was tempted to put The Trial in the same chapter but decided to do it in the next one (Besides who doesn't like a cliff hanger), hoped you enjoyed this one and you'll all soon see just what happens in the next one when Ducky faces the real Trial and we'll see if she makes it or not.  

MWAHA HA HA!

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Wow, awesome chapter again, mate :D

The dream sequence at the beginning was really cool (we finally see some of Cyrest's past, yay) and Cera just never fails to amuse me (whenever she's not bitching about something, that is) :p Egg-making contest, anyone? ^^spike

Bluey has grown quite some appetite, I wonder why (hehehe) ^^spike

Cyrest appears to be very uneasy about seeing and meeting Sculra again at the Great Valley, acting very rude and absentmindedly because of that but it turns out they come across the TRUE place for the trial to be held which is the reason for his behavior (or so I figured)
The scene is pretty intense, I think you've done a great job there. Can't wait for the "ultimate practise trial" that already is dangerous without a Swimming Sharptooth...

EDIT: And I forgot to mention... the scene in the Great Valley was really awesome! The sheer concept of LBT dinosaurs drawing is pretty cool :D Ducky's siblings are so interesting, I hope you'll do a spin-off of the story with just them  :smile
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Chapter 57: You Call This a Practice Run!?


Ducky entered the fast-flowing water, which mercifully was not as cold as she had expected so that at least meant that she didn’t need to make freezing a high priority. Ducky dived down until she was on the river bed, she dug into the sediment with her hands and legs and began to crawl around in search of the plant Night Light. She didn’t need to look far since she was right on the boundary of a Night Light bed, the light blue-green sea grass like plant grew on stretched all the way to the entrance of the caves. Ducky picked up as many of the largest pieces she could find until both her hands were full. When she was done, Ducky looked back, the water was not murky so she could still see the lower portion of her mother’s massive body, still standing in the same place as before. Ducky looked up into her mother’s eyes which were right on her, they could see each other though the sight they each saw was a distorted shimmering image. In that moment, they felt so close yet so far, being separated by only a small amount of water but with Sura viewing from above and Ducky from below in two different mediums. It was the last time they saw each other for Ducky slowly broke her gaze and allowed the current to take her towards the entrance to the caves while her mother wearily pulled herself from the water.

Ducky did not swim hard she only made swimming movements to keep herself on course as she was already being pushed along by the current. Her heart beat was loud in her ears and grew even louder and faster as the blackness approached ever nearer until that was all she could hear. Finally, the darkness swallowed her whole and she entered the haunted caves.

On the bank Cyrest started leading everyone to the exit of the caves, all of their steps were slow and hardly anyone could take their eyes off of the caves, every footstep seemed to be a measure of how far Ducky would have to go before she could be greeted by the warming sunshine. No one said anything when they arrived and Cyrest got onto the water and attached a vine on both ends of the river to create the finishing line and got back out from the water. Everyone stopped on the bank, some sitting, others standing, the atmosphere was restless as the slow torturous wait began.

The blackness was complete inside the caves, no light within once the entrance was out of sight for Ducky. Here she was in a dark, airless environment that she could not linger in, however with the current moving with her for now she could made reasonable progress and she did. As soon as she got into the caves she had crushed one plant in her hand and held it in her hand, the light illuminated the things she needed to see in order to make her passage safe and it was probably a life saver as the cave was spiked and uneven, collision with any surface would be very nasty and possibly fatal if she was going fast with the current.

So far, the tunnel was only one way which Ducky was grateful for, having seen no possible twists or turns that could get her lost in this inhospitable underwater labyrinth. However, her strand of Night Light was dimming, making it even harder to see. Ducky reached her hand out to an outcrop on her left and grabbed hold of it with all her might. The current did nothing to help, it was so strong it nearly pulled her off but she just managed to get a hold just as all light faded.

Ducky realised it was now time to use her other senses, smell would be useless here since the current was not in her favour but her hearing was and her sense of touch. What Ducky proceeded to do next would have looked silly to other Swimmers in normal circumstances. She started to slowly make her way backwards. It was like climbing on a cliff sideways, to Ducky it was almost as if her entire sense of gravity had been tipped on its side and she was climbing backwards down a cliff, a horizontal cliff. She took time to use her hands to touch and feel the surrounding rock around her until she found a suitable hold which was relatively easy considering that the rock was weathered and had plenty of crevices to hold on too.

Ducky’s sense of gravity was further confused by the sharp, pointing rocks coming out from the side of the wall, almost like how stone teeth pointed down or up in caves but if Ducky could see the cave at that moment then she would have been glad she had stopped because the whole tunnel was now a tangled gauntlet of pointed rocks, long enough to be near the centre of the cave in some cases. They came out of any part on the tunnel and were easily capable of skewering a Swimmer. Ducky used these rocks as handholds and while keeping ever mindful about the sounds travelling through the cave she continued her horizontal underwater climb.

Ducky continued on her way for what felt like ages for her limbs were rapidly being exhausted by the effort of holding her body against the fierce current. As she settled her feet on another of the pointed rocks she skipped and lost her footing and her arms were too slow to regain a hold on the wall. It happened terrifyingly fast that she was shot down the passage, her small body being slammed into the sides of the stone teeth hard as the merciless current pulled her along. Ducky vainly tried to regain control but every time she got close to regaining her bearings she would be knocked about again by the stone teeth to her utter dismay.

Finally, she was thrown into a wall with tremendous force. Ducky was pinned but she managed to get a hand onto the right side of her chest and felt the fierce pain that would have brought tears to her eyes had she not been underwater. She guessed that she might have broken a rib or two during her pounding along the tunnel. Already she found that her chest was hurting with every movement. Thankfully it wasn’t as bad as it would have been if she was breathing, though she was covered with multiple bruises.

Crumble!

The wall Ducky was pinned against suddenly gave way, being rather thin it collapsed inward into a different, vertical passage where Ducky suddenly found herself swept downwards by another current, she was at its complete and utter mercy as she was rushed downwards until she was slammed on her back against the cave floor. However, before Ducky could even move a large rock from the wall that had collapsed landed none to gently on her chest, pinning her to the ground and resisting her efforts to remove it.


*


Sura was pacing restlessly while all the children were huddled closely together anxiously. For a group of friends that helped each other at every turn it was torture to not be there for Ducky and aid her in her time of need, as it was they did not even know if they would ever see her again, for all they knew she might already be dead but since they had seen no blood which The Trial was infamous for doing when it claimed another victim. Bluey settled herself beside Diver, Spike, Jane and Trough. The latter of which went up into her hands, she held him in a tight embrace. “She’ll be okay, won’t she?” whispered Trough.

Bluey nodded without hesitation for her sake as much as Trough’s “She’ll come out soon Trough, I know she will, just have faith in her” she said nuzzling her friend as she tried to keep her fear from drowning her in a bottomless bog. She looked at Sura who was now standing like a statue at the water’s edge, she might have been mistaken for one had she not been trembling all over. Bluey put a hand around Spike and held him close along with Diver. They were both grateful for her comforting presence as they both exchanged nuzzles. The same thought echoing in each of their minds.

“Please be okay Ducky”

Littlefoot, stood in between Ali and Shorty, Ali was leaning heavily on him as if he was the only thing keeping her up. They had tried to reassure each other but that could not keep the icy cold chill of fear out of their system so the three longnecks just stayed close to each other in the hopes of finding some comfort.

Cera was pacing restlessly, she kicked up gravel with her feet every now and then but she absolutely hated this feeling of helplessness. Ducky could be going through all hell just a few metres away and she would be powerless to do anything to help her. “Curse this infernal Trial!” shouted Cera internally, though she did feel like screaming, she knew that would not help her current situation nor would it comfort her friends. Petrie, Ruby and Chomper were all sitting together, Chomper in Ruby’s embrace, she was the only stable thing he had to latch on and Ruby in turn held on tightly to him.

“You can do it Ducky” whispered Chomper.

Petrie was staring transfixed at the cave exit, trembling all over. He did not know what he would do if Ducky fell, least of all what her family including Spike would do, they would be heartbroken. Cyrest stood next to Grandma Swimmer, she was surprisingly calm under the circumstances, however Cyrest knew that was just on the outside, he could almost feel the fear she was harbouring inside. He placed an arm around her, he knew how she felt. She gave him a soft smile and went back to her attentive watching. Cyrest had been through this before and hated it. The last time this happened he lost the person that meant the most to him. He wished he could be in there and keep Ducky out of danger but he knew it was foolish to wish that as he could not do anything now.

Looking up to the sky he closed his eyes and made a silent plea. “Ancestors, please keep Ducky safe”

He opened his eyes and saw something in the distance that made his stomach drop like a rock. Rain clouds were approaching rapidly bringing with it a downpour that would do nothing good for Ducky.


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Despite the pain in her chest Ducky struggled again and again to get free of the rock upon her chest that was slowly crushing her but no matter what she did she could not get free and even worse was that she was running out of air, each second, she felt her need for air grow greater and greater. Desperately, she reached her hands out to anything that might be around that could help get the rock off and suddenly she felt her hands close around what felt like a stick. She slotted it into the space between her body and the rock and using this new leverage and all her strength she pushed the rock off her chest. She took a second to crush another one of the luminescent plants, she needed to find air but what she did find startled her out of her mind.

She was now sitting right next to the skeleton of what used to be a young Swimmer, one of the countless victims of The Trial and the stick in her hand was actually one of the rib bones from the skeleton. Ducky dropped it immediately when she realised what it was and desperately tried to calm the panic that had almost swept through her, she looked around for any air bubble as a sudden urge to hit the surface gripped her. The cavern she was in was rather circular but it had no air bubbles and there were three possible passages in the wall that could lead to her salvation or her doom. Ducky listened at the left tunnel and performed a underwater call using her crest and waited, it didn’t take long for her to hear an echo which meant that the left path was a dead end, she repeated her call at the other tunnels and found them both clear but which one?

She felt the current. It swirled around her but there was a current coming out of the right tunnel which did not suit Ducky so she went down the central tunnel with the current. Ducky was looking frantically all over the place for any sign of an air bubble but could see none suddenly she heard a subtle sound of water displacing right ahead, she was heading for a junction. Ducky turned around and began to kick her legs as she grabbed hold of the walls and not a moment too soon. The current changed direction and went to the left passage only Ducky’s tail was in that area and she could feel the force of the current on her body. Ducky was surprised that even though she had light she found that she was using her other senses more than sight even though the plant in her hand was lighting the way.

It was then that she noticed an unusual sound, it sounded like water lapping on rocks but how could that be in a cave? Unless……    

Ducky looked up and saw to her joy and relief a large air bubble that she could easily fit her whole beak into. Ducky quickly and carefully climbed her way up to the air bubble and poked her beak out of the water and took a breath of sweet life giving air, it may have been stale but Ducky couldn’t care less about that she took in several deep breaths, her heart rate slowed and her mind became clear but her chest protested with a terrible burst of pain when she took any breath, Ducky closed her eyes and did her best to ignore the pain as she used up the last of the air. Taking her last painful deep breath, she closed her mouth and was once again completely submerged. Ducky followed the current, figuring that it would eventually lead her to the exit and while that was reasonable thinking, Ducky had forgotten that there was more than one river running into the caves.

While Ducky was sure she was on the right track she was actually getting turned around, unbeknownst to her she was actually completing a full circle by following the current through the twists and turns of the haunted caves. After a considerable time and no air bubble stops, she realised this mistake when she crushed her sixth plant and saw the skeleton of the same Swimmer who’s rib she had used to get the rock off of her chest and the tunnel where the crevice with the air bubble had been and realised with despair and horror that… “I just went in a circle I did, I did” Ducky was looking around frantically for any way out “Where do I go? I am lost, I do not know what to do no, no, no” she thought in dismay, not realising her mistake.


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Trough hit his leg hard with his hand in frustration, he ignored the sting of the hit on his leg. “Damn it!” he exclaimed loudly, finally breaking the silence that had lasted ever since Ducky begun The Trial. Everyone looked at him. Understanding what he was feeling as they all felt it too.

“This is taking too long” thought Trough since he didn’t want to increase the tension as there was too much of that at the moment and then of course there were those huge dark rain clouds that were now over them, it was actually spitting now but it was just preliminary to the downpour that would come down at any time.  

“I have a bad feeling about this” said Cera looking up at the clouds. Her stomach dropping, she had a feeling that Ducky was now in mortal danger and she didn’t know whether she would make it. If only they could help her but that was quite impossible now suddenly the rain started pouring down drenching everyone in an instant.

“Come everyone” called Cyrest, gesturing to some nearby trees a short distance away which he took shelter under some trees, everyone hurried to get under cover with him. Well, almost everyone.

“Sura! What are you doing? Come on under here, it’s dryer!” called Cyrest when he saw Sura standing unmoving from her position but she turned her head and gave him a firm look, making it abundantly clear that she was not going to be moving. Cyrest sighed. “This is pointless” he thought as he watched the sky water pour all over Sura until she was totally drenched, however Sura stayed there, stoic and as unmoving as a rock under the cold beat of the sky water, waiting for her daughter to come out.

Grandma Swimmer walked out into the rain and stood vigilantly next to Sura and put a hand on her daughter’s shoulder. Sura gave a small smile, grateful for this small showing of support. However, this smile was promptly wiped from Sura’s face when a sudden rumble caught their attention. Everyone looked upstream and saw to their dread a thundering torrent of water, a flash flood that was travelling down the river and headed straight towards the caves.

“Oh no!” cried Sura in horror, a feeling felt by everyone as the deafening sound of water splashing against rock reached their ears as the torrent of water entered the caves and headed straight for Ducky. Everyone’s hearts were in their mouths at the thought of Ducky tackling that, Sura felt faint. Only her mother’s hold was keeping her from keeling over. Would Ducky be able to survive this?

They all pleaded for the answer to be good.


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It took several moments for Ducky’s panic to subside and the calm reason to return to her mind, looking at the only available exits, she swam slowly back to the three passages and instead took the right one. Now the current was against her, meaning she had to push her legs hard to gain any headway, it was bad enough that her arms were almost drained and that she probably had broken a rib or two earlier but she knew that she had to get out to survive so she continued to push on in an attempt to find the way out. It was a struggle and soon her legs wear burning with the exertion of fighting this constant current but on the plus side was that Ducky was sure she had made reasonable progress through the caves, she was probably near the heart of the caves by her guess and holding onto this idea made everything no matter how bad, slightly more bearable to her.

Crushing another plant in her hand, leaving only three left in her left hand she took a look at the tunnel she was currently swimming through, the current was moving against her and she could see more spikey rocks ahead but with the current against her it would be easier to deal with as long as she did not lose her strength. It was at that moment however that Ducky felt a loud rumble throughout the caves, it came from behind, she turned her head and felt her stomach drop and her heart rate blast off. It was a huge rush of fast flowing water coming straight towards her, obliterating everything in its path, Ducky looked desperately around but there was nowhere to swim and nowhere to hide, all she could do was brace her body for impact as she got into position to ride it.

The seconds to impact past extremely slowly for Ducky, all she knew was that she was in the most dangerous situation she had ever been in and was more terrified then she had ever been before, she didn’t know if her skills would be enough to get her out of this one alive or if she would see her beloved friends and family again but thinking of them set her will in stone, her mother’s words “Never give Ducky, I love you” ran through her head, it was time to try her absolute best if she ever wanted to see her again.  

All these thought passed through Ducky’s mind a second before the jarring impact of the water which initially sent Ducky spiralling out of control into a few stone teeth which really hurt but as the initial shock passed she found navigating the current more manageably and with the Night Light in her hands illuminating the way, she began a deadly and dangerous dance, weaving in and out of the stone teeth, hitting one at such speeds the wrong way could be fatal but avoiding these obstacles was a huge challenge as the current shifted and Ducky had no choice but to go with it and when it held her she could not break out till the very last second.

All motion was a blur of adrenaline and fear as the rocky spikes came within millimetres away from her face or body and there was simply so many. She was going all over the place, left, right, up, down, spiralling around and all at a ridiculously fast speed. Every time she cleared an obstacle, another took it's place with only a second to react. Thankfully the night light allowed her to see where she was going and through twists and turns she rode the current. It actually almost felt like fun had the situation not been a life or death one. Heart rate working overtime, Ducky finally emerged into a long straight passage and out of the needle work of stone teeth and she felt the current start to dies down, she looked back and saw that it was but as she turned her head….

Shluck!

Ducky let out a scream of pain as the pointed tip of one last stone tooth slashed across her spine of her back, all the way from near the base of her neck, down to the tip of her tail, the pain was terrible but the cut was shallow but seeing all the blood in the water did not help Ducky’s current mental state she trembled in pain and fear, letting only the current take her.

“It is hurting so much” whimpered Ducky internally, holding a hand out to touch the long cut and flinched as pain coursed through her body, she withdrew her hand.

Although Ducky was even more terrified she knew that she still had to get out of this place and that the cut wasn’t life threatening although it caused her much pain, she was also aware that she was now probably more than three quarters of the way through the caves…..at least that is what she guessed so she continued on slowly and carefully due to her sore body, she was also now getting desperate for air and started looking around for any sign of air bubbles.

“I cannot use anymore plants unless I need to” thought Ducky as she was aware she only had two plants left. She swam on and begged that the exit would come soon and that no more trouble would befall her.

She swam slowly along the tunnel, her strength drained from all that hard work and from a lack of air but thankfully she could see and hear an air bubble directly overhead which she quickly exploited by breathing in deeply from the small pocket of air until the crevice was underwater again. As if getting air was not good enough, her back and tail were no longer bleeding out, the bleeding having clotted but it was still fragile. Ducky swam on but that was when she saw a very peculiar anomaly at the end of the tunnel.

It looked like orange water or an orange mist in the water. Ducky did not have a clue what it was but it was heading on a path that was her only way out so for better or for worse she would have to go through it. Little did Ducky know of the mortal danger she was swimming into as she approached the strange mist which was actually sulphuric acid.

Since Ducky didn’t know what she was going into she thought that it would be best to get through it as quickly as possible, so she gathered all the speed she could and entered the acidic underwater cloud. As soon as she entered she felt a strange tingling sensation over her body but that instantly changed as her wounds became amerced in the acid. Ducky let out an agonised scream, never had she felt so much pain in her life as her wounds were not only opened up and bleeding again from the acid but the stuff had also poured right into her body as well, causing her extreme pain. Ducky convulsed and felt herself ram into the wall ahead. Trembling in pain, she suddenly realised that the pain was no longer as bad, since she had made it through the cloud but looking back she immediately knew what would happen the next time she had to go into one of those pain-inducing mists.  

A whimper could be heard from Ducky as she tried to calm her frantic nerves and heart. “Somebody help me please!” she screamed in her mind. “I want my mooommmmyyyyyyy!” she thought desperately but all she could see was darkness now as her plant’s light died and taking with it most of the hope she had and replaced it with fear.

Ducky sank to the bottom of the tunnel and curled herself up, in a trembling ball but as she shifted, she felt the hard structure of bone and holding her hands out next to her she realised that she was right next to another one of The Trials countless victims. Ducky shivered unnerved. Was this how it would all end? Is that what she would soon become? An unrecognisable skeleton locked away deep within the darkest and scariest caves? Never to be found again? Never to see her precious mother, her family, her friends?

Ducky suddenly felt like her heartbeat made an extra loud thump when she started thinking of her loved ones, of how she missed them and of how they were probably missing her. She closed her eyes and made a wish “I wish to see them all again to be with my mom and my sister and my brother and all my bestest friends, yes I do, I really do” she thought loudly, as if her thought could actually be heard by an outside listener.

Ducky slowly moved out of her ball and swam slowly onwards, keeping an ear out for air. The current was not against her so she moved swiftly but she was tired, her back bled and her chest hurt and she was starting to become cold but move on she did then suddenly as she turned a corner she saw it: Daylight at the end of the tunnel. Ducky’s heart soured and she swam as fast as she could towards the light. “I am going to do it, I am, I am!” she thought joyously, however her thoughts were short lived when she discovered that it was not the exit but an air pocket, leading all the way out of the caves but it was too steep to climb.

Ducky surfaced in this small air bubble and took a huge gulp of air and revelled in the sunlight, shining down upon her and bringing hope and warmth into all her soul. Ducky took this time to take a well needed respite from her exertions. And thankfully there was some Night Light growing around that she could use but at the moment Ducky was more interested in satisfying her hunger and replenishing her strength so she grabbed a handful of the luminescent plants and began to eat.  


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Littlefoot let out a long sigh as he continued to sit, watch and wait with his friends for Ducky to come out. If she ever… “No! I can’t think like that, Ducky will do it” thought Littlefoot in an attempt to keep positive. However, he just couldn’t sit here any longer, he had to move about and calm his on-edge nerves. “I’m going for a walk” he said suddenly to the surprise of everyone present.  

“I won’t go far just down in the direction of the caves and back” he said to assure his father that he would not be in any big danger.

“Okay Littlefoot, just don’t go too far and keep your eyes and ears open” said Bron reciting a wisdom that Littlefoot was all too familiar with. He rolled his eyes and was about to walk off when another voice spoke out.

“I’ll join you” Littlefoot looked back to see Trough getting to his feet.

“Me too” said Ruby a second later and as one all the other kids got to their feet and walked over to him. Only Jane remained behind in her Uncle's arms. Littlefoot smiled at the show of support from his friends even now it made a huge difference to his mind set and already the world seemed less gloomy.

The friends walked silently up the bank. As they passed the large rock that housed the caves beneath Trough stopped and looked solemnly at the massive hunk of rock. He gave a sad sigh and didn’t know why but he spoke seemingly to the rock. “I know you probably can’t hear me Ducky but I know that I am always with you even if it is in spirit, you’re my best friend and I love you like a brother” he said sadly.

“Trough! What are you talking to a rock for?” came Cera’s voice from afar. Trough saw the Gang returning. He hoped they hadn’t heard what he said. “That Cera would never let me hear the end of it” thought Trough.

“I was trying tell Ducky that I’m here for her” said Trough, slumping his shoulders.

“Well, we are all here for her” said Ali as she stopped next to Trough.

“But we're not!” said Cera angrily.

Petrie nodded his head in agreement “She should not have to go through this alone” he said.

Spike looked distastefully at the rock and wished he had some way to tell his sister that he was here and standing tall for her. But how? He couldn’t talk and even than it was unlikely his sister would hear him from where she was. That was when the idea popped into his head. He smiled and started to softly to hum, it was soft enough to be touching but it was also loud enough to be heard. The tune he hummed was something that only the original Gang would know.

While Trough, Ruby, Shorty, Ali, Chomper and Diver all eyed Spike curiously it held a different meaning for Littlefoot, Cera and Petrie who all smiled at the sound of the familiar tune. It brought back old find memories of their first night on Chomper's Island and as Spike hummed the concluding verse they added they’re voices to the song.

“Always there, someone you can count on to comfort you”
“Always there, like a green, green Valley you can come home too”  

They concluded their song with smiles in their faces.

“We will always be there for you Ducky, you are never alone” said Littlefoot to the rock.

“Never!” The children yelled out as one. Littlefoot then gestured with his head to the others to follow him back to the adults.


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Ducky wiped a happy tear from her eye after she heard those words, she took them all straight to heart, bringing warmth to the dark, even though they didn’t think Ducky had heard them, she really was touched by them all. “I can do this” said Ducky closing her eyes and imagined how each of her friends had looked when they had sung that song the first time and what they might have looked like when they were singing just before. Each one of their faces burned brighter than The Bright Circle. She let those warm feelings of love fill her body. “There is always hope, I am not alone, I can do this yep, yep, yep” said Ducky, feeling her confidence and strength return to her tired body. She took her final breath and dived under once again. She had a Trial to complete.

Ducky swam with a greater determination as the song and her friend’s voices ran through her head keeping her hope and strength alive. They believed in her and with that thought in mind Ducky felt that nothing would stop her from reuniting with the ones she loved and Trough he actually said he loved her. Ducky felt like she had been catapulted high into space when she heard those words and her feelings of love flew through the wall and inspired her to new heights, it was these thoughts that filled her exhausted body with a strength she never would have believed she had.

However, her journey suddenly took a turn when she heard a thundering noise of water on rock like before but it was nothing like that in volume, it sounded as loud as thunder itself and something else, something she had faced once before that was that loud, Ducky stomach dropped, she had a very bad feeling about what was coming up, she braced herself against the wall and began her horizontal climb again, albeit much faster than before but as she got to the next junction the current was pulling hard to the left.

“I am glad that I got some more Night Light I am, I am” thought Ducky who was aware of the handful of Night Light in her hands, she also noted the feeling of fullness in her belly, she had the energy she needed now. Ducky crushed a plant in her hands and looked in the direction that the current was moving and noting its strength but she also felt a strange tingling around her head. It was a terrible realisation, she realised what water she was about to swim into and not just the pain inducing water from before but when she looked at where the water was going she felt sick. It was heading for a huge circular chamber with four large passages around the sides but the whirlpool that was created in the middle was almost completely orange. She was going to swim into an acid whirlpool!

Ducky of course didn’t know about the acid but she knew what would happen when her wounds touched the water and felt sick, would she be able to handle that much pain? She knew she couldn’t go back or she would run out of air or get lost. Thankfully she saw the water moving through a passage on the far end of the chamber which was where the water was exiting the chamber which meant that would lead her out. The other passages just brought in huge amounts of water from the other connecting rivers and because of weathering in the rock sulphide minerals had intermingled with the water, creating the clouds of orange which was sulphuric acid.

Ducky knew she had to make it through fast or the pain would consume her, it was a mercy that she didn’t know that she would be dissolved by the acids if she stayed in there for too long. Ducky silently thanked Noon and Mo for teaching her how to get through a whirlpool but how to get around the pain. Looking at the plants in her hands. Ducky got the longest ones she could find and stuffed them into the cut on her back. She grimaced with pain throughout the procedure but hopefully it would help slow the pain.

Summoning all her courage and strength and fortitude Ducky took the plunge into hell’s pool.

The pain was immediate but it wasn’t crippling like it was before, it seems that the plants had helped slow the acids progress into the wounds. Ducky followed the current into the whirlpool and right before she closed her eyes to stop the burning pain she felt on them but just before she closed them she saw that the floor of the cavern was littered with innumerable skeletons of Swimmers who had fallen during the Trial. It seemed that this hell pool had claimed many lives but Ducky was determined to see her friends and family again. She held onto all their voices and the last song they sung to her as she moved into the down current.

Her speed doubled, then tripled, the further she went down and so far, the pain was bearable thanks to the plants. The cavern wasn’t too deep so she was able to make it down pretty quickly but then she had to blindly dodge the skeletons, just by feeling the water and the current. She swerved left and right in her tight circle but no matter how hard she tried she could not avoid hitting the crest bone of one of the fallen skeletons and while it didn’t knock her off course, it did tear some of the plant from her tail and the acid entered her body through her open wounds causing another wave of intense pain. Ducky screamed and struggled to remain in the same position as an unbelievable burning sensation shot up her spine from her tail, as if her tail was on fire.

Ducky swam on concentrating every ounce of effort into ignoring her pain and thinking of her friends, their words, their faces, the song, her love for them all. She kept her eyes closed continued another circle however as she finally found the up current she suddenly felt weaker, she felt frail as if strength was being drained from her limbs. She didn’t realise it but the acid was starting to have a dangerous effect on her small body, she couldn’t see but a part of her tail looked very red, as the skin slowly started to melt away.

Ducky felt her legs fault as she battled her way through the up current, towards the tunnel out, she was relying solely on her sense of hearing and touch to guide her as everything else was useless in this environment. Ducky felt the current starting to win. “I cannot do this no, no-“ She halted herself and thought back to her brief respite before. “My friends believe in me and Trough loves me I can do this, I must do this, I will see them again yes, yes, yes!” Her mental voice which had previously been small and full of despair suddenly became strong, powerful and determined and most importantly it reminded Ducky of who was waiting for at the end of this dark tunnel. Ducky kicked her legs and stroked her arms harder than ever and shot forward like a torpedo despite the intense pain in her body and limbs, right out of the whirlpool and into the tunnel that headed towards her friends and family.

She could hear the raging sound of water behind her but she strained her ears to hear what she thought was more thundering water ahead. “Could that be the way out?” questioned Ducky, her hope rising. She knew she could do it and continued onwards but she made sure to crush another plant and saw she was now making her way through another tunnel with dozens of connecting tunnels and crevices with powerful currents shooting out of them like geezers.

Ducky sped up and as she passed the first connecting passage she was buffered to her left by an unseen current but she had hardly any exposure and as the current joined the main stream Ducky’s speed increased. The currents buffered Ducky from all ends but Ducky got through each of them until Ducky saw a T-intersection ahead but there were a few stone teeth sticking out of the middle of the rock wall. Ducky slowed herself, but suddenly an unseen current of orange mist hit her from the rear left and tore off the plants blocking her wounds from penetration from the deadly acid.

Ducky screamed and convulsed, going completely out of control. The pain was blinding but almost as quick as it started it was over but then as Ducky turned her head to the direction she had been heading in....

SHLUCK!

Ducky gasped as a cold numbness went over her entire body, which was followed by a small burning feeling that was slowly increasing in her leg. Her light was nearly gone but when she opened her eyes she was blinded by red, by blood, her blood.

Her heart was racing faster than a rocket at that moment as she slowly looked down to see….

Her leg, had been impaled on a stone tooth, which was more like a stone sword. It had gone straight through her left leg when she crashed into the wall. Ducky’s light disappeared just as she pulled her leg free of the sword like stone and she sank to the ground, her body going into shock and with hardly any air left due to her screams. However, Ducky couldn’t scream now, all her mind was telling her now was that she was going to die as her mind started to cloud and her conscious started to fade.


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The small herd had moved back to the bank of the river as the rain had now stopped but all had seen the huge deluge of water rush out of the caves, but so far there was no sign of Ducky and while no one admitted it, they all thought she had been in there way too long. Was she alive? Sura was struggling to keep her composure, she felt like she would faint at any moment even though she had seen no obvious sign that Ducky was dead but she could still have drowned, that didn’t exactly leave any signs.

“Oh Ducky, please come out” she whispered to herself and looked down at the ground solemnly.

It was a collective gasp that drew her attention back to her companions, however their faces conveyed only horror, Sura’s heart skipped a beat and she turned her head to the river and saw the river running red, red with blood, her daughter’s blood. Could that mean that she was……..?

The question hung in the air for everyone as they tried to absorb what they were seeing.

Sura shook her head in horror “No” she whimpered and fell to onto her knees, tears now flowing freely down her face from her wide eyes, had she looked next to her she would have seen similar reactions from her companions.

“She can’t be” she said in rebellion watching as all of a sudden the blood suddenly stopped flowing out of the caves, it wasn’t such a large amount of blood that passed, maybe that meant that Ducky was still alive but…. “She’s hurt” said Sura.

Everyone turned to her, looking hard at her face, begging that Ducky was not dead. “There is not enough blood, she must be alive” said Sura, her voice suddenly becoming firm as she got back onto her feet and held her gaze on the caves. “Come on Ducky, YOU CAN DO IT!” she yelled to the caves as if her daughter could hear her, she was not willing to give up hope that easily and everyone was inclined to believe her words and remain vigilant but if they only knew of Ducky’s situation then their hope would certainly fade.


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“I am so sorry mommy, I am so, so sorry everyone” thought Ducky as the black veil of unconsciousness finally started to overwhelm her, this was it, she was doomed, she would never see her family and friends again. Ducky cried internally as she lay coiled in a foetal position on the cave floor, blood steadily leaking from her leg. Her eyes closed, they felt so heavy and she didn’t feel like opening them, she just felt so tired, some part of her wondered if this is what dying felt like, it wasn’t as bad as she expected. She opened her eyes again through sheer force of will and instead was confronted by something she never expected.

She was looking at a sight she had only seen in her dreams, it was the rainforest waterhole, of pure crystal clear water that sparkled in the gorgeous sunshine and she also noticed that the waterhole was filled with hundreds of young Swimmers, they were all looking at her and yelling at her.

“Don’t Give Up!”

“There Is Always Hope!”

“You’re So Close!”  

“Keep pushing, you’ll make it!”

They were shouting encouragement to her but she didn’t recognise any of them, she was probably seeing things but that was until she spotted a familiar dark green Swimmer walking up onto a rock in front of her field of vision. He smiled at her.

“There is always light in the darkness Ducky, you can do it if you try, you’re so close, just don’t forget your loved ones and never give up” said Swayer.
Ducky felt her eyes water. “I do not know if I can do it no, no, no” she whispered softly.

“You have made me proud Ducky and I consider you my best friend, I am will always be with you” he said walking right up to her and nuzzled her cheek before pulling her into a long kiss, Ducky closed her eyes contently and returned the kiss.

However, Ducky opened her eyes to see the blackness of the cave again but she heard in her head “You are never alone Ducky, you have many friends, now go and beat the tail off of this stupid Trial!” Swayer’s voice was loud and so warm and powerful. Ducky felt her eyes narrow. She had to do this! “I will see every one again yep, yep, yep!” Ducky yelled in her mind, she narrowed her eyes and despite the burning pain in her body she righted herself and began swimming slowly, but surely forward. Every kick of her legs, ever stroke of her arms seemed to take an eternity and the pain and dizziness were still present but they were dulled by the feelings of love that she allowed to flow through her body and give her the strength to complete this blasted Trial.

Finally, as she turned around a corner and looked down towards the left she saw a T intersection and down the left path was dim light. “The way out!” thought Ducky, her eyes widening and she pushed her legs harder but just as she rounded the bend to see the exit to the caves just 10 metres away to her right she was assaulted by another wave of excruciating pain. Ducky realised what she was travelling through but her salvation was right there!

Closing her eyes tightly she fought against the pain she felt, she convulsed and shook but through her willpower she forced herself onwards. “I am going to do this!” said Ducky to herself over and over again, the images of her loved ones and Swayer keeping her determination alive. She made it to the last turn and with one mighty stroke of her arms she entered the current and rode it straight towards the blinding light at the end of the tunnel, as she neared and crossed the threshold everything turned white.


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“DUCKY!” screamed Sura at the top of her lung, her voice boomed with joy when she saw her little one come out of the caves. She was aware of the cheers of the children as they all ran to the bank. Ducky crossed the finished line and completed The Trial. “She did it, she completed The Trial of Destiny!” cried Sura happily however that feeling changed to concern as Ducky finally hit the shore but she didn’t get out and there was blood in the water. She was hurt.

Sura wasted no time in lifting Ducky out of the water and saw to her horror a long cut along her spine from neck to tail tip and another stab wound that had gone clean through her left leg and her chest was very badly bruised. the blood was already flowing over her hands. She felt the bruised area and felt two broken ribs. Sura gasped at the trauma her little one had been through but she was at least alive. Everyone else gasped as they saw Ducky’s injuries.

It was at that moment that Ducky opened her eyes and looked to see her mother and her friends, surrounding her. “Mommy, I did it, yes I did, I am so happy to see you all” she said, smiling contently and suddenly fell back unconscious. Sura nuzzled her little one while Cyrest and Grandma Swimmer looked at her wounds.

“Looks like she was lucky, none of the muscles are severed in the leg and the bone is not broken” said Cyrest, allowing everyone to sigh in relief, she was going to be alright, though she did look very frail for some reason.

“Oh no!” said Grandma Swimmer suddenly.

“Huh?” everyone turned to her, the elderly Swimmer was examining the wounds and Ducky’s tail which had patches of red and the wounds had bubbles around them.

“She’s been in burning water” she said urgently.

The adults gasped and paled at her exclamation. Sura looked horrified as she noticed what her mother was talking about and quickly placed Ducky back into the river and rinsed and scrubbed her wounds. Ducky convulsed violently and Spike whimpered.

“Burning water?” asked Diver looking frightened. It was Bluey who answered her.

“Burning water is not hot water, it’s what we call water that is the same kind as the water that is in our stomach, it breaks down the food we eat and if you ever throw up, then you notice how your throat burns but Ducky has been completely submerged in this water if she stayed in their long enough then she would have been dissolved into nothing but bones” explained Bluey to the shock of the children who all gasped and looked back at Ducky who Sura had finished bathing.

“Is that why she looks so….?”

“Frail?” said Bluey, finishing off Shorty’s sentence. “Yes” she confirmed.

“But she’ll be okay?” asked Trough looking desperate. “Won’t she?” His bottem lip was trembling as was his hands.

Bluey nodded and put a reassuring hand on her small friend “I’m sure she will, she’s in good hands” she looked back at her mother and sister along with Cyrest who were already applying healing herbs and bandaging her wounds.

“Ducky did it” said Ali, everyone looked at her, Ali was smiling widely. “Ducky completed the true Trial of Destiny” she announced happily.

“Which means she can do The Trial in The Valley!” said Cera boldly. Everyone joined together in the happy celebration until Sura moved among them and settled down with a content smile on her face.

“Well, I think we shall be staying here for the night, after all Ducky needs rest and we all need to recover from that dreadful wait” she said as she wrapped Ducky within her tail. Diver, Trough and Spike all came over to settle down next to Ducky and keep her company.

Sura nuzzled her little ones and as she nuzzled Ducky very gently, she whispered “I am so proud of you my little Ducky, I know you can beat Sculra’s Trial, I am so happy for you” she broke off and finally laid her head on the ground and gave a relaxed sigh. Ducky had completed The Trial, the true one and she was now safe and on the road to recovery. She could rest much easier now, that she had a real hope that her daughter would survive The Trial in The Great Valley.  


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Elsewhere in The Mysterious Beyond, The Barren Lands a day’s walk from The Great Valley

“I’m starving” growled Red Claw angrily, he, Screech and Thud had not had any food for days, not to mention they were all still covered with the markings of their last encounter with The Gang which left them all bitter and Red Claw rather short tempered. Screech and Thud were currently searching for any signs of food while Red Claw sat back in an awful temper at the moment, which meant that Screech and Thud were glad to get going so they would not get caught on the end of a red claw from the bigger dinosaur.

Red Claw had been waiting for several hours but so far, the two insufferable fast biters had not returned from their little scouting expedition however he didn’t have to wait much longer as he saw the two Fast Biters approaching at top speed.

That had been a few hours ago, now the three carnivores were feasting on the carrion of a dead Longneck that Screech and Thud had found, each one was eating their fill and enjoying the feeling of fullness that replaced the emptiness in their bellies. Red Claw’s temper had calmed down but he was nearly always in a bad mood now, ever since the last incident with The Gang.

He promised that he would get them soon for this outrage, he was also pissed off that they had managed to escape his teeth again. “One day their luck will run out, one day I will have the feast I deserve” swore Red Claw.

The trio of carnivores were so locked in their meal that they didn’t notice a fourth figure approach from behind.

“Well, took me long enough to find you” said cold feminine voice in the Sharptooth language.

The huge Sharptooth and two small Fast Biters turned their heads sharply around but what they saw caught them completely off guard. Standing a short distance away was what appeared to be an elderly brown female Swimmer.

“Don’t look so surprised I’ve known about you and how to speak your tongue for quite a while now” said the Swimmer coldly.

Red Claw scrutinised her closely, it wasn’t every leaf eater that could speak Sharptooth and even fewer of those would willingly get this close to him. “Who are you and what do you want Swimmer?” stated Red Claw suspiciously. The fact that a leaf eater could speak his kinds tongue alone was clearly a sign of untrustworthiness and trouble.  

“My name is not your business Red Claw but what I want is the same thing that you will soon want” said the Swimmer, her initial retort stinging in the Sharpteeths ears.

“What do you mean?” asked Screech, pointing a finger at her.

“I mean that in a day or two there will be a small herd of Swimmers passing through here. About four adults and those children that you’ve been hunting” said the Swimmer.

The Sharpteeth looked at her in surprise and interest, this was certainly news to them. “How do you know this?” asked Thud.

“That’s not for you to know youngling!” snapped the Swimmer firmly. Thud had to admit that she had a very cold and cruel temperament, he was wondering if this so called ëSwimmer’ was actually a Sharptooth in disguise.

“You can kill them and have a great feast but you must keep the Brown adult female alive and the small light green Swimmer youngling that is her daughter” continued the Swimmer.

Thud narrowed his eyes. He believed he knew which child that this Swimmer was referring, the one that once got trapped on the ledge with Chomper and himself. Why keep her alive though?

“Why should we spare them?” demanded Red Claw.

“The feast you’ll have will be more than enough and I’ve got something very ëspecial’ planned for those two Swimmers but if it counsels you, that little child will soon be dead anyway and if you show me that you've killed some of them then I might just tell you a secret way into The Great Valley that only I know about” said the Swimmer coldly.

“You would betray and kill your own kind?” asked Screech, looking rather uneasy.

“Your one to talk!” shot back the Swimmer “Sharpteeth betray and kill members of their own kind all the time, so why not me? Besides you’ll all get a feast out of it if you catch them by surprise”

“We accept your offer,” said Red Claw with a toothy smile on his bloody face, both Fast Biters looked at him in surprise “in exchange for your life and those two Swimmer’s if you really mean that you will kill that youngling and tell us the secret entrance into that cursed Valley after we are done with them”

The Swimmer smiled coldly. There was an evil glint in her eyes. “Well, since it appears that we have a deal I will bid you all farewell” said the Swimmer coldly with a dismissive wave of her hand  and turned tail leaving two very unnerved Fast Biters and a very eager Sharptooth behind her.

 “Yes,” thought Sculra  “This will demoralize those two pathetic weaklings, everything is going perfectly to plan” She gave a malicious smirk as she headed back towards The Great Valley, it was time to really set her plans and power into stone.  




   
 
Well, here's the chapter you've all been waiting for, hope you enjoyed it and be sure to let me know what you think. Also thanks for the feedback in your previous reviews both in this thread and the GoF FF awards.
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Well done! :wow  This was one of your best chapters thus far. The atmosphere and emotions during the Trial were really excellent and to be honest, I was completely hooked by the chapter which isn't something I say often. Your descriptions of the caverns and the many currents were realistic and managed to tell of the depth of Ducky's distress. The terror of the massive waves and the danger of the sharp spikes were all very clear. Excellent job! ^^spike

I must especially highlight the scene with the Gang singing Always There. I can only guess the relief and nostalgia Ducky felt when she heard her friends' voices and remembered the shelter they brought each other on the island. The scene could have even been longer than it already was.

The only problem I had with this chapter was that I found the ending to the trial very cheesy. The lines of the dead swimmers and especially Swayer were generic and quite awkward. Other than that, there were occasional spelling mistakes but they weren't too distracting.

In the next chapters, we'll probably see what Red Claw's part in the story will be. Lately this story has once again improved remarkably. I'm confident that this trend will continue while the herd and Ducky approach the Great Valley.  :yes




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Yes very good job and a very well written chapter


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At first, Ducky is doing fine in that cave but then shit happens. Stay save my little Ducky...

Understandably, all of her family members and friends are scared as shit... I wouldn't feel any better in that situation...

She made it for the time being, yay. Though swimming in circles ain't good, nope, nope, nope.
How can she complete a full circle anyway, when she was merely following the current which is flowing towards lower lying areas...

Well dang... hurry up Ducky! She's in a worrysome state, oh my brave girl :p

Aww, Always there, how nice :)

I'm amazed that you are using sulphuric acid here. That stuff is vicious, I can tell that from experience. Oh Ducky don't die now, Trough is waiting so move your butt out of that swimmer graveyard now! :p

Wow, that was a close call.... I'm on the edge of my seat!

Sculra, scheming aren't you? :p

Well, what should I say? This chapter was amazeballs! Keep it up! (Also sorry for not posting this until now, I kept forgetting...)
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Thanks for the feedback guys.  

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Well done!  This was one of your best chapters thus far. The atmosphere and emotions during the Trial were really excellent and to be honest, I was completely hooked by the chapter which isn't something I say often. Your descriptions of the caverns and the many currents were realistic and managed to tell of the depth of Ducky's distress. The terror of the massive waves and the danger of the sharp spikes were all very clear. Excellent job!


That's good to know, I was trying to make it a enjoyable, on the edge chapter and appears that I have done that. The description of the caves I based off of real caves that cave divers travel through. Well I am a scuba diver :smile. I am glad it was a realistic description of both Ducky's feelings and the caves.

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I must especially highlight the scene with the Gang singing Always There. I can only guess the relief and nostalgia Ducky felt when she heard her friends' voices and remembered the shelter they brought each other on the island. The scene could have even been longer than it already was.

I really enjoyed writing that part ^^spike Looking back I think it could have been a bit longer but I think it is still good the way it is.

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The only problem I had with this chapter was that I found the ending to the trial very cheesy. The lines of the dead swimmers and especially Swayer were generic and quite awkward. Other than that, there were occasional spelling mistakes but they weren't too distracting.


Ah well, I guess you can't get them every time but of course it is an important scene, it gives Ducky her strength back after all. There is always something that slips by, still after proofreading (multiple times) hopefully there she should be very few of those left now.

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In the next chapters, we'll probably see what Red Claw's part in the story will be. Lately this story has once again improved remarkably. I'm confident that this trend will continue while the herd and Ducky approach the Great Valley.

Oh you'll see what happen with Red Claw soon and I'll continue to try and improve and make more hooking chapter like this one.

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At first, Ducky is doing fine in that cave but then shit happens. Stay save my little Ducky...

Well you can't expect such a Trial to be all smooth sailing, Where would all the fun be? :smile

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Understandably, all of her family members and friends are scared as shit... I wouldn't feel any better in that situation...

Yeah I did try to allow capture the feelings of everyone else watching the Trial as well as Ducky's and though I thought it was a little brief at times I think I got the point across.

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She made it for the time being, yay. Though swimming in circles ain't good, nope, nope, nope.
How can she complete a full circle anyway, when she was merely following the current which is flowing towards lower lying areas...

Well there is more then one fast flowing river moving into the caves and the creates a conflicting amount of currents that won't necessarily go out until you get close to the end of the caves.

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Well dang... hurry up Ducky! She's in a worrysome state, oh my brave girl


Well there is the first obstacle, used that point to show some of The Trials victims
 
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Aww, Always there, how nice

Glad you liked it!:)littlefoot  

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I'm amazed that you are using sulphuric acid here. That stuff is vicious, I can tell that from experience. Oh Ducky don't die now, Trough is waiting so move your butt out of that swimmer graveyard now!

aH, caught you by surprise with the Sulphuric acid didn't I? This phenomenon is also a real danger that cave divers face. Oh yes and Ducky heard what Trough said to her too :smile  

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Wow, that was a close call.... I'm on the edge of my seat!

Well I had to have some awesome ending for The Trial.

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Sculra, scheming aren't you?


Yep, she's still around and still able to cause trouble and where in the blazes did she learn to speak Sharptooth? Well I'll explain this later and of course I'll have to show how her scheme turns out.
 
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Well, what should I say? This chapter was amazeballs! Keep it up! (Also sorry for not posting this until now, I kept forgetting...)

Thanks mate! Glad you enjoyed it and don't worry you got your feedback up. I was really interested to see how this chapter would be received, having said that I wish that that I had more feedback from those I know are reading this story.
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Looks like I've gone above the chapter limit so I'll have the continuation up with this one.

Chapter 58: Passing On

The first sensation that passed through her body as she woke from what felt like an extremely deep sleep was that she was pleasantly warm, she was also vaguely aware of a body right next to hers and a small hand that was gently rubbing the right side of her back. Ducky slowly opened her heavy eyelids and saw the steam rising from a crack in the ground ahead of her that emitted a warm orange glow, the glow of a fire vent.  Ducky could see the sparkling river reflecting the shining stars of the night next to them and a forest of tall trees with orange leafs, preparing to fall as the onset of autumn came over them, however when she turned her head, she found herself looking into the smiling face of Swayer. His smile was as warm as the heat emitted from the steaming vents.

“Swayer?” said Ducky and tried to raise herself up but she found her heads become very dizzy “Ohhhh” she moaned at the queasy feeling brought on by the sudden movement.

“Easy Ducky, you’re still very tired” said Swayer gently and offered his hand which Ducky took, she was almost overcome by dizziness as Swayer pulled her up into a sitting position.    
 
“My head” said Ducky rubbing her head with her hand. “What happened” she asked sounding very tired.

“You don’t remember?” asked Swayer in surprise.

Hmmm, mmmm” said Ducky, with a slow shake of her head.

“Do you remember what happened the other day?” he asked.

“Nope, nope, nope” said a disappointed Ducky.

“Try” said Swayer encouragingly.

Ducky closed her eyes and concentrated on trying to remember her previous day. At first it was all a haze of blurry images but as she concentrated she started to remember. The journey home, the arrival at the place where The Trial used to be held, Cyrest’s announcement, her mother’s reaction and her choice.

Ducky gasped “The Trial!” she exclaimed as the memories of The Trial passed through her mind in a flash. The darkness, the skeletons, the stone teeth, the orange pain inducing clouds, the whirlpool, the touching respite and her injuries and finally….

“I completed The Trial of Destiny” she said in a voice filled with awe.

“Yes you did Ducky,” said Swayer, nuzzling her. “You have joined the finest of Swimmer’s your age. Few are chosen to do The Trial……” Swayer’s next words were very bitter “and even fewer complete it”

Ducky looked upon Swayer with a sympathetic expression. “You did try your bestest Swayer, you did not know there was a Sharptooth in the caves. Oh no, no, no” she said in a comforting tone.  

Swayer nodded. “But it wasn’t enough for so many, even The Trial you faced required you to learn The Swimmer Wisdoms to be able to accomplish and no one but you has had this type of training at this age” said Swayer.

Ducky could think of no way to respond.

“I have often wondered how it was when Dad did it but I was never really told the full story, I mean he told me what to expect but he never spoke about what it was like and what happened when he did it” said Swayer.

“Maybe I can ask him?” suggested Ducky uncertainly.

Swayer nodded. “I have a feeling he’ll tell his story soon anyway now that you’ve done The Trial” said the dark green Swimmer.

“Swayer?”

“Yes Ducky?”

“Thank you for helping through the last part of The Trial, I thought I was going to die” said Ducky holding onto his hand tightly.

Swayer smiled warmly back at her. “That’s what friends do” he said.

“And Swayer what did you mean by ëyou will join us’ in my last sleep story?” asked Ducky.

 “I meant that you’ve now joined our ranks of all the Swimmers who have competed in this Trial but you’ve also joined the exclusive group of successful Swimmers, all of us who didn’t, make it into this group you saw standing with me just before you completed The Trial” explained Swayer slowly.  

“Oh I see now I do, I do” said Ducky in understanding.

“I will see you again soon Ducky but at the moment concentrate on recovering…..”

Swayer’s voice faded as did the background until she was alone in white light when she felt a searing pain over her back and chest and especially on the leg. Ducky let out a pained yell into the air as white light consumed her.


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Ducky let out a pained groan as she woke to feel the pain that she had left her sleep story with. She grimaced and closed her eyes tightly while tears seeped out of them. It was then that she gave a loud cry of pain and shivered violently as her body was wracked with spasms of pain.

“Oh my, Ducky!” came the familiar voice of her mother.

Ducky opened her eyes but found she could hardly see anything through the haze of her tears but judging by what she could see, it was night time and there was quite a commotion about, probably brought on by her cry. It was then that Ducky felt her mother’s beak up against her own. “It hurts, it hurts so much it does, it does. Make it stop pleeeaaassse” whimpered Ducky her tone pleading and desperate.

“Cyrest use the pain killing flowers now” said her mother calmly. Ducky could hear what she assumed to be Cyrest grabbing some type of plant and preparing it. “Now Ducky, this will hurt but the pain will go very quickly dear”  
Ducky shivered and whimpered. Suddenly she felt two hands grab onto her hands and the voices that she heard a second later brought a measure of comfort to her.

“We’re here Ducky” said Diver from her left.

“You’ll be okay” she heard Trough say from her right side then she felt a warm tongue lick her face and the concerned grunt of her brother, Spike.

“It’s ready” said Cyrest and approached Ducky or a least that was what Ducky could hear since her vision was still to blurry to form a coherent image.

“Hold on Ducky” whispered Trough. Ducky knew what was coming and closed her eyes and tightened her grip on Trough and Diver’s hands. Suddenly she felt fiery pain course up her leg as it was smothered with some sort of herbal paste but as quickly as the pain burst it quickly diminished so that she could hardly feel anything in her leg. She gave a relieved sigh as the pain dispersed but grimaced a second later as the process was repeated along her spine but the fact that she could no longer feel the burning pain afterwards was an absolute relief. She opened her hands and eyes to see everyone anxiously gathered around her and a beautiful starry night above them.  

“Are you okay Ducky?” asked her mother, sounding so very worried, Ducky could only imagine how worried she had been since the beginning of The Trial.

“I think so, I cannot feel any more pain now” she said with an exhausted voice.

Her mother nuzzled her in response. “Oh I’m so glad you’re alright, I thought I would never see you again” whispered her mother.

Ducky snuggled up close to her, grateful to be in her company again. “I am so happy to be with you all again” she said.

“Ducky,” The wounded Swimmer looked up at Cyrest, he looked rather serious. “We need to know what happed during The Trial” he said.

“Cyrest, don’t you think we should let her rest first?” asked Sura. “She’s hurt and she’s tired” she added.

“I know” replied Cyrest but he was cut off from saying anymore by the loud grumble of Ducky’s empty belly. “Perhaps after you’ve had dinner then, if you feel up to it Ducky” said Cyrest.

Ducky nodded “Okay”

Bluey came into view and placed a few handfuls of tree stars at her feet, one of which was filled with water. Ducky was quick start eating and in no time, the tree stars were eaten and all the water drunk. “Thank you Aunty” said Ducky.

“Your welcome Ducky” said Bluey warmly and gave her a friendly nuzzle.

“Now, Ducky I think we would all like to know what happened in those caves” said Cyrest.

Ducky nodded and began her narrative. She told of the many passages and the stone teeth as well as the many Swimmer skeletons. She also described how she got her injuries which left everyone gasping; no one had expected her to come so close to death.  Ducky also had to be filled in on the flash flood after she told them about the sudden surge of water going through the caves.

Sura trembled when Ducky told her about getting lost in the caves and of how afraid she was. Sura responded by wrapping her tail around her daughter. “You’re okay dear, you’re not alone anymore we are all here now” she said which did the job of comforting Ducky.

However the real shock was the acid whirlpool. The sheer thought of facing such an obstacle was horrifying to them all. “How in the world was there a whirlpool of burning water in the caves?!” said Cera in shock.

“I remember no whirlpool” said Cyrest.

Sura cast a firm glance at Cyrest “I told you that The Trial might have changed, now it is even more dangerous than the original, Ducky could have died!” she said in distress. Her mother put a hand on Sura while Cyrest gave an apologetic look.

“Ducky didn’t die Sura, she has been trained well and if this is The Trial at its worst then we need not worry any more about it, we just need to worry about The Swimming Sharptooth now” said Grandma Swimmer, Sura lowered her head and nodded silently, her mother was right and yelling at Cyrest would not achieve anything.

“Sorry Cyrest, you didn’t know what she would face, you were just trying your best to prepare Ducky and I can only thank you for giving Ducky the training she needed to survive“ said Sura formally to Cyrest.

“Don’t worry about it Sura, it’s in the past now besides, Ducky is your daughter I would be wrong to think that you would not be protective over her” said Cyrest.

The two Swimmers cast a look down at Ducky, whom Bluey was helping place new bandage leafs on her wounds. Bluey was humming a calming tune to her niece when she finished. Ducky smiled up at Bluey and stretched her arms out to embrace her beak. Blue obliged and the two cuddled together. “I’m here Ducky” she said in a motherly tone, her voice sounding so much like her sister’s that Ducky could almost have mistaken her for her mother.

“I love you Blue” said Ducky, for the first time without saying aunt. Bluey hummed contently and disengaged. Ducky turned her gaze to Cyrest. “Um excuse me Cyrest, but could you tell us what The Trial was like for you?”

Cyrest sighed as all eyes turned to him. It wasn’t that he had seen this question coming, after all he helped train Ducky for this Trial and now she had just completed it where he once did but in a situation so much more dangerous than he had ever imagined. “Well I guess you deserve to know my tale, so sit down everyone and I’ll tell you about my Trial” said Cyrest calmly as everyone took their places around him and waited for him to begin.

“It was on a day rather much like today except without the sky water, I was Ducky’s age as I’m sure you must have guessed and the caves were surrounded by many of the adults of the herd, though there were no children” said Cyrest, closing his eyes as if to remember that day.

“Wait,” said Diver suddenly “There were no children? Didn’t you have any friends?” she asked the elder Swimmer curiously.

“I had friends of course; it’s just that The Trial is supposed to take place in the absence of children” explained Cyrest.

“But that means we won’t be able to cheer for Ducky when she does her Trial” said Cera.

Bluey chuckled at that. “I doubt that would ever stop you kids, even the whole distance between The Great Valley and The Big Water couldn’t keep you apart” she stated with a cheeky smirk.  

“Bluey right, we cheer for Ducky anyway” agreed Petrie.

Cyrest chuckled “At least children aren’t supposed to be there watching The Trial but it turns out that there was someone, a child, slightly older than me who was watching my Trial” said Cyrest.

“So your friends did come to watch you?” asked Chomper.

Cyrest shook his head. “I was surprised to find out that it was actually Sculra who was watching me” There were gasps of shock form everyone and Sura’s face turned to a scowl and her fists clenched as she heard that name.

“What was she doing watching your Trial?” she asked, her voice dark and suspicious, not of Cyrest but of Sculra.

“I don’t know, she never told me, probably hoping I’d drown” he said casually.

“Wait, you knew Sculra?” asked Shorty whom was eyeing Cyrest in surprise.

“We were in the same herd when we were kids but she was a big bully. I’ll to you what I understand about her, Sculra was born into a highly traditionalist family and they were very serious; I don’t think she ever lived as a child. She had these values hammered into her and was told to obey all tradition no matter how dark” Everyone was listening intently to his words.

“As much as I understand it, she was beaten severely any and every time she stepped out of line, she was cast into an adult world and expected to be one as a kid, she hated being under her parents, so she took great joy in bullying everyone else and I think she found that she really liked being in that position of power and has since then always strived to have the most power of any Swimmer” said Cyrest.

“I almost feel sorry for her,” said Grandma Swimmer, ignoring the gob smacked faces directed at her “She was never given a chance to be a kid and experience innocence and friends, all she sees now are potential competitors for her power, I wonder if thing would have been different if she had proper caring parents.” She said sadly.

“I’m afraid it doesn’t matter now because she is bad, she has no desire to change” said Littlefoot.

“Your right Littlefoot,” confirmed Cyrest  “But it got worse with her, anyone she saw as a threat, she picked on as hard as she could, she nearly killed a kid who publicly said that she was just a bully and she beat him up so badly that he had a broken leg and a concussion on the head.”

Trough flinched when Cyrest said that, having been a victim of bullying himself but this was just plain evil and by the appalled looks on everyone else’s faces he could see that the feeling was indeed mutual.

“She might have even killed a child once for saying that he will not stand for her any longer,” Everyone gasped. “No one knew for sure if she was responsible but a child was eaten by Sharpteeth when someone,  whom some people thought was Sculra tipped him off into thinking that there was a bush of berries in a region known to contain fast biters“

“That’s just horrible, horrible it is” said Ruby, with her hands held over her mouth.

“How could a child do that to another child?” said Sura weakly.

“As I said before Sura, I don’t think that she was ever really a child,” said Cyrest. “I think she watched cause she was hoping I’d die, you see I was one of her prime targets since I regularly stood up to her and I can tell you sure as day that she did all she could to make my life a living hell, her parents turned a blind eye to all her activities and did nothing about her bullying, the things that she did to me…..” Cyrest trailed off with a distant and rather pained look on his face.

There was silence for a short while.

“…What did she do to you?” asked Ducky quietly, she looked up at Cyrest sadly, for Cyrest however this was a deeply personal question, he could have easily refused if he wanted too but when he looked at Ducky he knew that she had also been hurt by Sculra, he had been witness to the pains caused by Scurla’s decision, so she should at least get a look into what he had gone through at Sculra’s hand.

He gave a long sigh and closed his eyes, a few tears forming as he remembered the pain he had once been through. “I was saved by my mom, who would not let Sculra even get close to me after she heard one day about an incident involving me and Sculra”

He looked at the intense faces gazing at him; he noticed that the Longneck Bron was also deeply engaged with his story. “It’s now or never” he thought, taking a deep breath.

“It was a misty, wet day, the heard was traveling through swamp land and after we stopped to settle for the day I was allowed to go have some small exploration time by my mother, since these lands were too shallow for belly draggers and we were on an open plain so no sharpteeth could sneak up on us, but this day was misty, not so bad that you couldn’t see far but enough to be troublesome, you know what I mean?” said Cyrest

He received nods from all of The Gang, Ali and Sura, since they had all been through The Land of Mists and knew all about mist. Cyrest continued.

“Anyway the day before I had stuck my tail up at Sculra when I stood up for some younger children and she was furious with me, so when I was out exploring she ambushed me, she knocked me to the ground and knocked me out with a rock. When I woke I was tied down with vines attached to rocks. That’s when she started beating me; she used her fists and legs then a stick she found .I don’t remember how long it lasted but I know it was long and when she was done I was covered in blood. My body was covered in scratches, my nose broken, my head cut and my right leg and right arm were both dislocated” said Cyrest.

Everyone was simply stunned, even Trough and Bluey who had both seen some harsh beatings but nothing like this type of savagery. Ducky even had tears in her eyes after hearing that but her mother looked absolutely appalled but the expressions on the children’s faces was nothing short of shock and horror while the adults, in particular Bron and Grandma Swimmer looked  like volcano’s, about to explode, they were ticking time bombs.

Cyrest took in a deep shuddering breath and fighting away his own feelings continued. “She said that if I ever did anything to humiliate her again then, she would kill me in the slowest most painful way possible. I thought it was over but she refused to let me go and just before she left she… she…” Cyrest took several fast breaths in order to calm down, his voice was breaking all though his anecdote. “She used me as a relief spot and left me tied to the ground…..It was a while later that my mother found me and when she found out she was so angry….” he said sitting down on his haunches and struggling to regain his composure.

Jane let out a concerned cry when she saw her uncle lose his composure and ran to his side where she was embraced and nuzzled by the distressed old Swimmer. Bluey was quick to come to his side while everyone stared at Cyrest in sympathy and shock at what he had been through, none of them could hardly believe it  

CRASH!

Everyone jumped as Bron’s tail and Grandma Swimmer’s foot came down on the ground, Sura’s fist followed hardly a second later. “HOW DARE SHE!!!” shouted Grandma Swimmer. She was boiling with rage.

“What Kind of Sharptooth Like Swimmer Is This!!?” cried Bron, he could believe the barbaric story he just heard, it was a shock to him as well that The Trial of Destiny had been used by this same Swimmer as a way to kill off potential threats. Everyone was in an uproar, everyone was yelling and cursing and in Cera’s case smashing a rock with her horn.  

“That evil monster” said Sura in a whisper of pure loathing, her hatred for Sculra having increased dramatically. She attacked her little Ducky at her own nest, used egg stealers to try and steal her eggs, tried sabotage her efforts to train her daughter by sending a Flyer to dislocate Ducky’s leg and attack her other children as well as Trough and The Gang and that was not including setting Ducky the Trial, the Trial that was rigged with a Swimming Sharptooth to kill anyone who takes it. Now that she knew what she had been like and what she had done to someone she now considered a friend, who was also her savior and her daughter’s trainer, she was just so mad right now, Sculra had done so much wrong.

Sura reflected on what Cyrest had told her about Sculra and could easily see the similarities, traditions forced at such a young age, a need to wipe out any competition and her methods were also similar to the ones she presently used; keeping in power by fear. In The Great Valley Sculra was generally supported by all the traditionalist families in the herd which consisted of half of the herd even though she was extreme they followed her cause they feared change and they knew that Sculra would do anything to uphold their ways. They were also indecisive when it came to new ideas and held deeply to their traditions but they could also be dangerous because of their loyalty to Sculra and with her snakes tongue she could easily manipulate them into doing her dirty work for her.  

The families that weren’t traditionalists, she controlled by using fear, once Sura had heard that one of her friends woke to having Sculra standing over her with her foot raised over her children, she threatened that if she opposed her in any way then all she would wake up too was a bloody mess. She used similar strategies with the other Swimmers in the herd but Sura was different. On the one hand Sura knew that Sculra loathed her just as much as she was against her, but on the other hand she was also mated to Ruphus, the only Swimmer she had ever loved, coming from a traditionalist family and having a sharp wit and battle experience, not to mention his handsomeness. She wanted him from the moment she saw him but when he mated with Sura…..

Sculra wanted revenge on Sura but she couldn’t go hard on Ruphus, so she didn’t try her usual methods until now that she had forced The Trial on Ducky, she had leverage over him to do what she wanted “Her demands,” thought Sura, thinking back to the demands made by her nemesis to Ruphus. “She thought that she could convince him to forsake me so she could torture me properly, she didn’t count on Ruphus staying with me though but she was nearly killed by Ruphus so he chose to go through with her plan instead of stopping it” The revelation hit Sura like a ton of boulders as everything became clear in one flash of insight.

“I understand why she did this now” said Sura quietly. Everyone stopped and stared at her, her one small statement catching their complete attention.

They all looked at her expectantly waiting for a response, Ducky especially.

“Sculra hates me for defying her and she considers Ducky a threat that’s why she gave her The Trial but she also did it for another reason….. She did it to try and get my mate, Ruphus” said Sura quietly.

“She wants Dad?” said Diver with eyes as wide as rocks.

“Sculra loves Ruphus, she was being easy on me because she wanted to remain on your Dad’s good side. She gave Ducky The Trial but she made an offering, she said she might stop The Trial if me and my family were banished to The Mysterious Beyond forever and if Ruphus became her mate” said Sura.

“Of all the devious, cold hearted, low life in the world, that plan is just evil!” hissed Grandma Swimmer, Bluey nodded vigorously.

Sura shook her head “I don’t think Sculra would have done The Trial of Ruphus refused but she did because after she made these demands Ruphus nearly killed her, it was only her loyal traditionalist Swimmers that managed to save her but after that incident she didn’t care anymore, she wanted us all to suffer so she went ahead with her plan” she explained.        

Everyone stood silently as they all digested what Sura said when all of a sudden Ducky let out a groan as the anesthetic paste started to wear off. “Oh Ducky” said Sura, turning her attention back to her little one.

Bluey stood and said “I think you’ll have to tell us about your Trial some other time Cyrest, we’re all going to need a good night’s rest for tomorrow” It was in a silent, uncomfortable preparation for sleep with everyone reflecting what they had been told about Sculra. Ducky was given the last of the pain killing paste and some sleeping plants to help her sleep.

As everyone settled down Sura looked at everyone around her, she knew that going to back to The Great Valley she would have allies “and together we shall stop The Trial from ever taking place and when I see you again Sculra you will feel sorry for all the wrongs you have done to those who are innocent” was Sura’s final thought as she allowed sleep to take her to the realm of dreams.


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It was a calm night with a full moon watching over the small herd as they all slumbered; it was late night as the moon was already past its zenith but the silence was suddenly split by a terrified scream. Sura jolted up, her breathing rapid and her whole body trembled but a quick look of the surroundings told her that she was no longer dreaming but actually wide awake. She took a deep breath in order to calm herself, the dream she just had was so reminiscent of what she had felt while she was watching Ducky’s Trial. In the dream she found herself chained to the ground in the same manner that Cyrest had once been while she helplessly watched Sculra feed Ducky to a hideous Swimming Sharptooth, she remembered the pain she felt and the cruel laughter that followed and seeing to her shock and horror Sculra running away with Ruphus, leaving her chained to the ground and at the mercy of the Sharptooth which proceeded to slowly end her dream. It showed exactly what Sura feared the most and she was heading right back towards Sculra and she knew that sooner or later she would have to face her.

Sura looked down and saw that Ducky too was awake and looking up at her with a frightened look on her face. “Oh dear, did I scare you?” she asked softly. Ducky nodded. Sura nuzzled her in order to comfort her little one. “I’m sorry dear, it’s alright now though you’re fine and everyone else is okay and so am I”

“Mommy it hurts so much….” Whimpered Ducky, there were unshed tears in her eyes that wear threatening to come out. Sura carefully shifted her position so as not to wake all the kids who lay beside her, every one of the children had come to sleep with her in order to be close to Ducky but they were all asleep now. Sura carefully got onto her haunches and lifted Ducky into her cradled arms and gently rocked her back and forth. “If only we hadn’t used all the pain killing flowers” she thought as kept a gentle hold over her daughter.

“Oh Ducky you look so much like a cute little hatchling” said a friendly but quiet voice, Sura turned to see Bluey settled down next to her and lowered her beak and gave her niece a gentle lick, Ducky couldn’t help but smile when her aunt did that. “I wish I could have a little hatchling in my arms that looks like you” said Blue.

Even though Ducky’s wounds stung and throbbed continuously, the presence of both her mother and aunt brought a huge feeling of comfort to her. “What are you doing up sister?” asked Sura.

“Just a short midnight snack” replied Bluey who had really been gorging herself before. She looked back down at Ducky and said “You know when I was sick I would always have my sister to count on” she gestured downward and brought their attention down to Diver and Spike who were both watching their mother and sister with worried eyes. Sura pushed her beak underneath Diver and lifted her up and gently slid her into her arms, though she lowered herself down further so Spike could easily see and support his sisters.

Diver lay next to Ducky and held her hand in support while Spike kept his head right next her other side. “Just as I know you’ll always have a sister and a brother to help you when you are sick” finished Bluey.

“Um Bluey?” said Ducky.

“Yes Ducky?”

“What were your Trials like?” both her sisters and brother looked up at Bluey curiously.

Bluey herself smiled at them warmly. “You will both do so well at The Trials, I can tell that much, my Trials however were a big step for me because I was bullied so much for my skin colour I was treated just like Trough and Cyrest, I was told I was no Swimmer,” There was sadness in Bluey’s voice “but when I did my Trials I let go of all my feelings of anger to do the things I like to do, I came first in several events, from that day on no one could call me anything but a Swimmer, it was the first bit of recognition anyone outside of my family, it was the first time that I had respect you see little ones the Trials my seem like big deal but all you really need to do is let go and do the things you love to do regardless of what others think” said Bluey passionately.

Ducky and Diver were both smiling with appreciation. “And Ducky, you have shown me so much love, I want you to know that no matter what happens I will always love you just as much in return, no Trial shall change that” Bluey nuzzled her nieces and then turned to Spike.

“I know that I’m not a Spiketail and you are not a Swimmer but I see a bond with you and your family Spike that will never change, I know that you’ll look after Ducky and you should know that I will look after you as well, just as much as her” Spike blinked away a tear, he had never heard anything so kind directed at him before, already he felt his family bond grow to encompass Bluey.

“I can’t wait to meet the rest of your family Sura” said Bluey.

“You won’t have to wait much longer Blue, we’ll probably arrive back home at dusk tomorrow” replied Sura.

“Bluey?” asked Ducky again. “Can I sleep with you?” she asked.

Bluey’s smile was all the confirmation she needed as Bluey lifted her and Diver out of her mother’s arms, her aunt settled down next to her mother and placed her gently beside her warm belly, accompanied by Spike and Diver “Have a good night little ones and sweet sleep stories to you all” she said as she nuzzled each one in turn.

Sura couldn’t help but be very touched by Bluey’s showing of love and support and gave her a grateful nod. Ducky yawned and thought about what Bluey said, she had so many friends and even in that dark cave the sounds of their voices and their comforting words had kept her going and Trough, she heard his announcement and felt what she once might have described as a strange feeling wash over her body but now she knew that she loved him, just as much as he loved her. She settled down beside her aunt’s body with Spike and Diver either side of her, it felt warmer here for some reason. Ducky had a feeling that something wonderful was going to happen to her aunt as she closed her eyes and fell asleep as if she felt no pain at all.

They would all sleep peacefully from that moment onward.


*


Elsewhere in The Mysterious Beyond


He ran swiftly along the banks of the fast flowing river, his nose held close to the ground as he sniffed out the trail of the a small herd, a herd which had two scents that he recognized anywhere, the scents of the two Swimmers he had been stalking all this time. He had come so close to revenge during their last engagement but was denied that chance by luck in his opinion, this time however their luck would run out and his vengeance would be served to him on a sweet silver platter.  He could smell the trail growing stronger, he was getting close and if he continued at this rate he would catch up to them on the very next day.

The Fast Biter smiled a toothy smile “I’m coming to get you two Swimmers” he said as he ran off into the night, hot on the trail of Sura and Ducky.


*


The Border of The Barren Lands  


“Let’s get this over with” said Cera as she took the first step into The Barren lands, everyone else followed close behind. The Barren Lands were a very unhospitable place for anyone; it was a plain expanse of nothing, no land marks, no shelter, no plants or water. Those that passed through this area would suffer from heat, exhaustion, starvation and thirst so no one stayed to long, even the Sharpteeth who only entered The Barren Lands to pick off the weak members of passing herbivorous herds.

Today was not at all a pleasant one to be travelling through The Barren Lands which stretched down South East of The Great Valley and continued for hundreds of miles in some places but if approached from the east they could be trans versed in a day to reach The Great Valley. However the Bright Circle blazed over this plain with no clouds to stop its ruthless rays from bearing down on the hot gravel of the plains. Everyone in the small herd knew that there would be no food or water until they had passed through and made it to The Great Valley. Thankfully they had the foresight to bring a load of food with them; however this food was largely for Jane’s case but even then Bluey still brought a large load on food in her hands that the kids could have of they wanted.

They all made sure to fill their bellies with food and water before they entered The Barren lands. Ducky was laying on Spike’s back, there were a few plants next to her for her benefit since they were pain killers and other nutritious plants as well as healing herbs in case she needed them. While her leg and back were no longer bleeding, they had thankfully been well tended so there was no infection but now her wounds were baking under The Bright Circle and she found herself in more pain then before.

Trough, Diver and Petrie remained right next to her while Jane got a small amount of shade beneath Cera’s frill. The herd adults moved in the same box formation that they had before with the children sheltered in the middle for maximum protection. Bron was even kind enough to all the kids to allow them to move beneath his bulk in order to stay in the shade when they got too hot.

So they journeyed on, through the baking heat in silence but by midday everyone was tired but they could not afford to stop and rest on The Barren Plains, not to mention they were becoming drenched in sweat and there feet were sizzling on the boiling sun heated gravel that made up the terrain of The Barren Plains. Ducky herself was panting excessively, her body was so hot and her injuries felt like crispy bacon. Diver and Petrie both held a tree start over her and Trough lay nearby but he couldn’t get to close as even his body heat made her hot.  
   
Grandma Swimmer and Cyrest also seemed to be struggling as they were both the oldest of the bunch and hence found it most difficult to cope with the dry conditions. “When we get to The Great Valley I’m going to drink a river dry” said Cyrest. To that everyone agreed but first they had to get through this roasting plain.

Finally the mountains of The Great Valley came into distant view, they would soon be home. This thought heightened the spirits of The Gang and the thought of food, shade and water was almost impossible to resist. Trough sighed on Spikes back as Ducky let out another pained moan as she struggled to keep consciousness. Sura couldn’t help but be reminded of her journey to The Big Water and she was wounded. “Now it seems Ducky will return wounded” she thought.

“Come on, stay awake Ducky” said Trough fanning her head with his hands. “Hey you….. Why don’t you tell me some more about your home? What is The Great Valley like Ducky?” asked Trough in a rush, desperate to keep Ducky from falling asleep and only maybe waking up again.  

Ducky gave a tired groan but she answered nonetheless “It is beautiful it has so much green food and plenty of rivers and water holes to swim in and tall mountains yep, yep, yep” said Ducky.

“Okay well, what is your nest like?” asked Trough gently.

“It…. Is right next to a big river…. it is shallow in some places and….. deep in other places……. there is a waterfall nearby it comes down from the cliff.”

“Sounds lovely Ducky” said Trough gently with a reassuring smile.

“It is, it is” said Ducky with a sad smile as she remembered her home and her family’s nest, she might have cried if she had any tears to shed but they were all dried out. “Our sleeping spot is near the water under a few trees and there is a tall rock near the tree. I miss my home I do, I do”

“How many brothers and sisters do you have?” asked Trough.

“Mommy has had three lots of eggs before so including Spike I have twenty four brothers and sisters and my mom has laid more eggs before we left, yes, she did” said Ducky.

Trough blinked in shock, he had never expected Ducky to have such a huge family, while it was common for Swimmers to have lots of offspring it was extremely rare to have a one hundred percent survival rate of the children. “Wow…” was all Trough could say.

Ducky and Diver both giggled at Trough’s reaction. “Thank you Trough, I feel much better now” said Ducky and grasped Trough’s hand tightly as they continued onwards. Thankfully for the small herd The Bright Circle was starting to go down, having passed midday and hence the heat intensity was a fraction less but the real relief came when the clouds blocked out the sun’s cruel rays and let loose a short shower which lifted spirits considerably. Soon the mountains of The Great Valley became larger and closer.  

“Well I think we should be back in The Great Valley in a couple more hours at the pace we’re going” stated Sura.

The kids cheered happily as the realization that the journey would end soon and they could go and get some well-deserved rest and relaxation. However none of them were aware that they were being watched….


*


“The Swimmer was right” said Screech in shock as he, Thud and Red Claw watched the small herd concealed behind a large boulder nearby. From observation they could see that the herd was exactly like the herd they had been told to expect.

“She didn’t mention anything about a Longneck” growled Red Claw as he watched the herd. “Alright I’ll go in and attack the two older Swimmers and you two run through the gap and get the kids, then I’ll keep the big Longneck occupied while you try and kill as many of the Swimmers as you can but leave the mother and child if we succeed then we will have a magnificent feast ahead of us.” Red Claw was licking his chops in eager anticipation for the meal he was sure he would have.

“Yes Sir” said both Fast Biters at once.

“Wait for my signal” said Red Claw.

The hunt was about to begin.


*


Chomper suddenly stopped and sniffed the air and uncovered a fresh scent, which was unusual when they were the only ones on the plain. He analyzed the scent and suddenly felt his stomach drop. “GUYS!-“

Chomper never got to finish his sentence when a sudden roar that was almost enough to deafen him burst the air. Everyone jumped around to see Red Claw, Screech and Thud charging at full speed straight towards Grandma Swimmer and Cyrest!

“Cyrest!” yelled Grandma Swimmer and dived into Cyrest just as Red Claw came charging through, thankfully Red Claw missed them but he changed direction to run straight for Cyrest on his way to Bron while Thud went for Grandma Swimmer and Screech charged right through the defensive screen and headed straight for the children.

There was a loud scream from all the kids and cries from the adults as they each reacted. Bron charged at Red Claw and smashed right into him. Red Claw may have been a full grown, healthy Sharptooth but he was no match for Bron’s sheer brute strength when he rammed into him and sent him sailing through the air and hitting the ground on his side. It didn’t take him long to get back off and start to square off against Bron in a duel of the titans. Bluey meanwhile had jumped in front of her mother and swung her tail at Thud who had to fall flat on his side and slide on the ground to avoid the blow but as a result he crashed into Grandma Swimmer in a tangle of bodies as they both tried to extract themselves form the other and none to gently for that matter. Screech however had been tackled by Sura as soon as she saw him heading for the children but her tackle put her at a disadvantage as she and Screech rolled until they stopped with Screech on top of her.

“MOM NO!” screamed both Ducky and Diver while Spike let out a loud cry of horror as they saw Screech in a favorable position to tear their mother apart but that was when something very unexpected happened, unlike what Sura expected Screech did not finish her but jumped off her leaving two lacerations on her belly and ran towards the children while Sura was still down.

There was nowhere to hide and it was too late to run Screech reached the children. With a swipe of his claws Screech aimed to decapitate Littlefoot before he had a chance to react. Littlefoot closed his eyes and expected to feel the burning pain but instead he felt a weight land on his neck, pushing it down underneath Screech’s slash, but only just, he could feel the wind ripple past the top of his head.

Littlefoot opened his eyes to see Ducky struggling to hold onto his neck after she had jumped on top of it and saved his life. Screech growled angrily and prepared his claws for a second strike but that was all the time Cera needed to ram right into Screeches belly and for Shorty to trip the surprised Fast Biter with his tail.

“Run!” cried Littlefoot, his friends didn’t need to be told twice. They turned tail and ran behind Sura who had gotten to her feet. She was joined by her sister whom had managed to extract her badly scratched bleeding mother from the melee with Thud, she’d been in before. Together they stood their ground against Screech and Thud. It was then that Cyrest came charging from Screech’s flank. Screech gave a cry of surprise and ducked while Thud leapt over him and sunk his teeth into Cyrest’s shoulder and he, raising his claws up and other Cyrest’s head, sank them into the meat of his back, near the base of his neck.

Cyrest yelled in pain and suddenly jumped right forward and landed hard on Thud who gave a mighty groan as the wind was knocked out of him. Cyrest covered by Bluey got back to his feet and joined the defensive line.

While a short distance away Red Claw and Bron continued to exchange blows, for Red Claw what he had hoped to be a quick battle was now becoming prolonged and costly. It rested in him. If he could break past this stupid Longneck then he would easily be able to take care of the Swimmers. However that was easier said than done. Bron was keeping his body broadside to Red Claw and behind his massive bulk he protected his son’s and their friends and he was willing to use every weapon in his arsenal to keep them safe.

Meanwhile Screech and Thud were circling the defensive circle created by the Swimmers. Thud gestured to Screech, suggesting they attack the two elder, wounded Swimmers. Screech nodded and both of them charged at once and smashed into their intended targets. Cyrest managed to knock Thud down but Screech had managed to bite Grandma Swimmer’s leg before she kicked him with her free foot, she limped back as blood drenched the ground beneath her left leg. Sura and Bluey were about to join the engagement when a sudden shriek of unimaginable rage that was horribly familiar came from behind. Sura had barely turned her head when a familiar brown of Fast Biter smashed straight into her mid, knocking her to the ground.

The next few moments passed in a rush of adrenaline and fear for as she rapidly dodged her head left and right in order to avoid the vengeful Fast Biter’s jaws which were trying their best to latch onto her face or throat. Bluey grabbed hold of The Fast Biter and pulled him off but the Fast Biter struggled free and kicked her in the gut with his clawed foot and continued his assault on Sura whom had by then realized who this Fast Biter was.

“Oh no, not you again!” she cried.

“It’s the Fast Biter that hurt my mom!” screamed Ducky in fright.

The fight got more intense as Grandma Swimmer and Cyrest both tried to fight off Screech and Thud while Sura and Bluey had to use their combined strength to fight off the single brown Fast Biter that wanted Sura’s blood. While Bron and Red Claw continued to battle it out.

Bron had a nasty trio of gashes on his thigh, a bite near the tail and a long laceration on his front leg while Red Claw was covered in numerous lacerations from his falls and large bruises from the sheer force of Bron’s blows. Red Claw tried to circle around him but Bron would not be fooled into stepping out of line and instead blocked Red Claw’s circle movement, there was only one way to get through him and that was to fight. Red Claw scraped his foot on the ground, kicking up gravel in preparation to charge.

Bron saw this and came up with a counter strategy on the spot. Red Claw charged with a fierce raw but Bron kicked a load of gravel in the Sharptooth’s face then taking advantage of his opponent’s momentary distraction he charged forward and raised himself onto his hind legs and prepared to crush Red Clay under his massive legs.

Red Claw regained his sight just in time to see what Bron was doing and noticing that the Longneck’s huge belly was now exposed he charged at it before Bron could bring his legs down. The two dinosaurs collided with a might thump as each tried to push the other to the ground and Bron was winning but in an underhanded trick Red Claw used his tail to swipe Bron’s back legs which were still on the ground out from under him. Bron and came crashing down atop of Red Claw who attempted to dive away but the two were already caught together so when they fell the very ground shook like thunder.

“Dad!” cried Littlefoot in horror when he say his father go down.

“Bron!” yelled Shorty simultaneously with Littlefoot.

Everyone stopped fighting temporarily to watch the two titans but it was only a brief pause before they were back at each other’s throats.

Red Claw managed to pull himself out from beneath Bron’s bulk and noticed that Bron was still stuck on the ground, his own huge body now a burden; he couldn’t get up fast enough. Red Claw had him, he just needed to finish it but he paused briefly to see what was going on in the other fights and saw Screech and Thud engaged in a battle of attrition with the two elder Swimmer but he was surprised to see the extra Fast Biter however he had no time to wonder what he was doing here, he spotted the children.

He could simply kill the Longneck then come back for the children. That was when he caught sight of the Swimmer mother the one he had been told not to kill who was currently engaged with the Fast Biter. However he stayed still for two long and was sent flying through the air by brutal hit by Bron’s tail he fell to the ground right near the battle between Sura, Bluey and the Fast Biter was taking place.  

Red Claw looked up at the fight happening before him and suddenly another thought, touched his mind it had an ethereal feel to it but the feelings that it brought was nothing but blood thirsty rage and a different set of plans to his own. “KILL!” yelled an unfamiliar male but definitely Sharptooth voice in his head then Red Claw suddenly found his body moving of his own accord straight towards the Swimmer he had been told not to kill. He opened his mouth and roared but the sound that came from his mouth was a roar that had long since vanished but still instilled terror into all who heard it. It was the roar of Sharptooth himself.  

Everyone froze at the sound of the paralyzing roar that could only have belonged to one person but was issuing forth from a different mouth. The sound was like glue that sealed everyone in place as Red Claw charged straight at Sura, all fighting had ceased but for Sura time moved in slow motion and by the time she got out of her daze it was already too late, Red Claw was looming over her now, his jaws opened wide, ready to sink his teeth deep into her flesh.  

She didn’t even have the chance to scream yet a scream did break the sound of thunderous footsteps sprinting towards the paralyzed prey. “SURA NOOOOO!!!” the voice screamed.  

Sura suddenly felt herself being pushed to the side and onto the ground just as Red Claw attacked. An ear piercing scream of terror and agony split the air as Sura looked up in horror to see Bluey being held in the mouth of that red clawed monster. Bluey was screaming as the rows of pointed teeth penetrated deep into flesh of her back, chest and upper belly. Red Claw shook his head viciously from side to side; his jaws almost tearing Bluey’s skin clean off.  

The horror and despair reflected in Sura’s eyes at seeing her own sister in the jaws of a Sharptooth was the same for everyone bearing witness but for Sura a different sensation had taken over her; wrath.

Sura’s mouth opened in a scream of equal pain and fury for in that moment she no longer cared if she lived or died all that she cared about was getting that beast away from her beloved sister. Sura charged head on at Red Claw and rammed her head right into his gut and opening her own mouth wide she bit down hard on Red Claw’s body, sinking in her thousands of plant eating teeth as deep into Red Claw’s hide as she could make them go, she felt the warm metallic taste of blood fill her mouth.

Red Claw roared in pain and surprise as he snapped out of the strange trance that had taken over him and dropped Bluey to the ground but he was still too shocked to read the situation at that moment and instead retreated from Sura’s wrath. Screech and Thud saw this and fell back to protect their master while the herd fell back to a defensive position around Bluey, who’s once beautiful light blue skin was drenched in the crimson red of her blood as was the ground around her.

Unfortunately there was one party that was still on the offensive. The brown Fast Biter growled menacingly at Sura and she responded in a voice filled with rage. “I’ve had it with you Fast Biter! LEAVE ME AND MY DAUGHTER ALONE!!!” Sura shouted at the top of her lungs and at the same time she and the Fast Biter leapt at each other, they met in midair but Sura’s massive momentum was way too much for the Fast Biter and he was pushed right down under her.

Sura tumbled on the ground but quickly regained her feet by which time the Fast Biter was already attacking with slashes from his claws which she narrowly dodged. Sura retaliated with a series of punches but the Fast Biter evaded every fist she sent into his path.

He scurried from each foot, left then right and back again until he suddenly leapt up into the air with a deadly shriek Sura turned tail on him and swatted him down to the ground as if he was nothing but a Fly. The Fast Biter recovered and leapt again to his right Sura turned to face him head on and the both crashed into each other, they fell to the ground and tumbled away.

Sura got back to her feet and glared at this Fast Biter and he glared back, they had both suffered at each other’s hand and now they were going to finish it once and for all in a fight to the death. They each started circling at the same time, each waiting for an opening in the other’s defenses that they could exploit.

“STOP!” cried a sudden voice. Both combatants looked down to see Chomper run in between them with his hands held out to each of them as if he were trying to ward away an attack. “Please stop!” he cried in Leafeater and then in Sharptooth.

“Get out of my way Chomper” said Sura calmly but the malice in her voice made him flinch.

“Stay out of this youngling” said the Fast Biter disgruntledly.

“Why are you doing this?” asked Chomper to The Fast Biter, he briefly translated what he said to Sura .

The Fast Biter’s eyes widened in shock then he fury as he stomped his foot on the ground “Why? WHY?!” shouted the Fast Biter who pointed at Sura “Because she killed my brother! I will have vengeance for his death” he said fiercely.

Chomper quickly translated the Fast Biter’s rage spoken works to Leafeater for Sura and when he did Sura’s face took upon a look of shock “He was your brother, is that what’s this all about?” she whispered to herself, everything made sense now, he was trying to avenge the death of a loved one. Sura finally took the initiative and spoke directly to the Fast Biter.

“I did not kill your brother” she said with a shake of her head.

The Fast Biter’s response after he was told the translation was quick and brutal. “Don’t lie to me Swimmer! The wound I saw was made by your crest I’m sure!” he bellowed.

“I was unconscious the whole time after the Earthshake, I woke up on the shores of The Big Water” replied Sura.

The Fast Biter looked doubtful when he was given the translation by Chomper, who felt that the moment was rather surreal, having two enemies with a history one a leaf eater, the other a Sharptooth talking to each other about resolving a deep dispute between them instead of trying to tear each other to pieces “Then what killed my brother?” demanded the Fast Biter, his scrutiny directly on Sura’s face, he wasn’t as much relying on the translation but more on Sura’s own body language and facial expressions.

“I don’t know,” said Sura sadly, shaking her head “I can only assume it was one of those falling rocks” The Fast Biter looked down tearfully when he was given the translation and all of a sudden Sura felt sorry for this Fast Biter, in an act of faith she walked over to him and put a reassuring hand on his shoulder. The Fast Biter said something which Chomper translated to “What do I do now?” He could tell that she was not lying; he had seen it in her expression.

Sura put her hand beneath the Fast Biter’s chin and lifted it up so he was facing her. “You live life to the fullest as any family member would want, revenge has already brought both of us trouble” she said, looking deeply into the Fast Biter’s remorseful eyes, his bloody claws intermingling with her bloody hand as she held it peacefully. “I am so sorry for your loss” she said.

The Fast Biter took a deep shuddering breath when he heard the translation; he looked down then looked back up again at Sura. “I’ve always been told that Leaf eaters were stupid and I am sure the same might be told about Sharpteeth with you leaf eaters but I can see that you are not stupid, you have feelings just as much as I do, I am sorry for perusing you like I did” said the Fast Biter.

Sura gave a small smile as did her once deadly nemesis, they both understood each other. “I wish you all the best” said Sura as she parted from him, the Fast Biter nodded before Chomper translated her words, he could see what was being said from her body language.

The Fast Biter turned to leave but then stopped and said in such a grief stricken voice that Sura thought he was crying but Chomper translated what he said in slow words. “Farwell Swimmer, I am sorry about your sister”
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No sooner had Chomper translated that to Sura then the brown Fast Biter dashed away with all possible speed, she didn't care how the Fast Biter knew that her sister was the one that was wounded. Sura stood with a lump in her throat and a tear fell down as to what he had said. She had never guessed that she and the Fast Biter would resolve their conflict but his last words pierced her heart. Her eyes widened and she turned and ran back to where everyone was gathered, she yelled out one word as she ran “Bluey!”

Sura went to her knees as she reached her sister’s body. Bluey was lying on her back and her injuries were horrendous but she was still alive. Sura pulled her up and cradled her head in her grasp. “Come on Blue stay with me” she said desperately.  Bluey opened her eyes and looked at Sura, blood was dribbling out of her open mouth. “Sura……you are okay…….I am m…..so sorry” she said in a weak voice, her whole body was trembling with pain and fear.  

She looked to the side and saw the children looking at her with horror etched on all their faces. “Oh little ones” she said, holding out her arm. Ducky with Trough and Diver’s help made it over to her hand, Spike accompanied them. The Swimmers all grabbed hold of a separate finger each, tears racing down on each of their eyes. It was only fitting that she’d be with family and her best friend. Her mother was right next to her side, she may be covered in blood but she was still alright.

“You’ll be okay” cried Trough, his voice fumbled and high.

“Please, stay” whispered Diver.

“Please, do not go, oh no, please do not” said a distraught Ducky as she and her companions all held tightly onto Bluey.

“You’ll be alright, you still have to meet the rest of my family remember” said Sura desperately, her sister however only cried in silence. Sura looked desperately around for anything that could help and her eyes fell on the one who had saved her life. “Help Her!” she cried “Please!” she her face was contorted with pain and tears fell freely down her cheeks.

Cyrest only stood back, shielding Jane from the sight, he looked sick, he knew there was nothing he could do to save her on these barren plains, there were no herbs here. “Help her!” yelled Sura even louder.

“Sura…. There’s nothing-“

“NO!” Sura screamed in denial, she saw what was happening but she refused to accept it. Bluey couldn’t die she just couldn’t! “Come on Blue you’ll be alright Blue” she said keeping her sister’s head up.

Bluey turned her head to look at the little ones holding onto her hand. “Be strong my little dears” she said. “Look after Ducky Trough” she said to her best friend, who could only look up and nod as a cascade of tears fell down his eyes. “Do your best during The Trials, won’t you Diver and Ducky, I know you’ll make it”

Ducky and Diver both gasped, their hearts momentarily stopping as the gravity of their aunts words hit them harder than an asteroid. “Spike, remember you are always loved, no matter where you are or what kind you are with” she said. Spike nuzzled her side and whimpered loudly.

“Don’t talk like that Bluey, you’ll make it” said Sura, her eyes wide and her tone growing more and more desperate with each passing second as her whole body trembled. She looked up and saw in the distance the three Sharpteeth, they weren’t attacking, they were waiting to eat. “We won’t leave you!’ she said defiantly. Everyone but her family remained back as they watched the heart breaking drama unfold, all were lost for words and none of them had dry eyes.

Bluey held up her hands to Sura’s face. Sura closed her eyes and felt the touch of her sister’s hand on her cheek. “I love you sister” said Blue then she began to tremble like crazy. She let out a pained cry. “Mother!" she cried.

“I’m here Blue” said her mother placing a hand on her daughter’s body. She knew what was going to happen and it pained her heart more than anything in the world, all she could do was make Bluey comfortable.  

“My tail,” said Bluey "go to my tail…..please” she said.

Grandma Swimmer looked puzzled as did Sura but she still complied and went down to sit next to Bluey’s tail. Bluey trembled as her body convulsed when she saw her mother reach her tail, her belly muscles clenched and she pushed with all her might. Bluey screamed in agony for a few minutes and everyone held their breath, it was a terrible sound that they all wished they could forget. “What are you doing Bluey!?” cried Sura in alarm. Bluey did not answer, her body was going through spasms, down at her rear it was a disgusting sight for Grandma Swimmer but through all the mess she suddenly caught sight of something white.

Grandma Swimmer’s heart stopped as she realised what it was. She dug her hands through the mess and pulled out a round white orb. An egg. Bluey saw this and stopped pushing, exhausted, as her mother returned to her side. Bluey smiled at the sight of the egg while her sister gaped in astonishment and pain as she came to realise that Bluey was pregnant. Bluey nuzzled her only egg. “Look after it” she whispered. “If it is a boy please name him Rimmer, if it is a girl please name her Mellessa”

Her mother and sister nodded and Bluey gave one last smile before she suddenly dropped limply in Sura’s arms.

Bluey was dead.

Sura gasped as did everyone around her. With a loud ear piecing cry Sura and her family along with Trough began to weep loudly. Grandma Swimmer held her daughter’s egg in her hands and wept quietly while Sura held her sister’s head in her embrace and sobbed uncontrollably. Spike and Diver were at least quiet mourners but Ducky and Trough were both screaming in pain as they embraced each other and sobbed uncontrollably. It was the first real loss that Ducky, Diver, Trough and Spike had to witness of one of their loved ones. Ducky and Trough had been closest to Bluey the longest and Trough had just lost his first friend, leaving his heart shattered, he held onto the only other friend he loved equally as he had Bluey as if he feared she would die at any second.                        

The growl of the Sharpteeth brought everyone’s attention back to the threat of Red Claw, Bron stood on guard; it seemed that they were getting ready to make another assault. “Sura we have to go” said Cyrest gently but to is dismay Sura shook her head in tears, holding her forehead to her sister’s, she couldn’t leave her sister to get eaten by those vile monsters, even though she was already dead, the thought of her body being feasted on was too horrible to contemplate.

“Come Sura” said her mother’s breaking voice “we can’t do anymore here, leave her to her rest” she sobbed. Sura looked down sadly opening her reddened eyes; she gently placed her sister’s head onto the ground. The expression on her sister’s face was one of content as if she had only fallen asleep; it might have been believable if it wasn’t for all the blood.  

Sura forcefully pushed herself up, her body was drenched with the blood of her sister and herself. She looked at the little ones and in one move she lowered herself down to them and scooped Ducky, Trough and Diver into her arms where they all latched onto her like newborns and cried their hearts out. She nuzzled them all and Spike though she too was going through sobbing spasms.

It was with a heavy heart that she turned away from her sister. Everyone else turned and followed her silently, tears falling from each of their eyes. Sura could not bring herself to look back at Bluey’s body after they left, she couldn’t bear seeing those three Sharpteeth gorging themselves on it, he pain was greater than anything she had felt before. Bluey was one of her closest siblings and she had only just reunited with her shortly before and now she was gone. The fact that she had been pregnant made her death even more painful, her sister’s only child would never know their mother and who was the child’s father? She had no clue but what she did know was that she would look after the child herself no matter what. For her sister. For Bluey.  

Ducky and Trough were as well as herself and her mother were the only ones still crying. Sura knew that this loss was hardest on them and so when Diver stopped crying, she was placed on Spike’s back while her mother continued to comfort Ducky and Trough.

The small battered and bloodied herd looked ahead to see the mountains beginning to loom over them. They would soon be back in The Great Valley but they would be one less the number that they had started out with.  


   
Well there you have it, the epic confrontation between the leaf eaters and the sharpteeth, writing this was very emotional in the final part. Make sure to leave feedback, hope it was a good chapter.
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Stepping in rhombus' footsteps are we? ;)

The dream at the beginning of the chapter was certainly well done. Ducky wakes up to crazy pain (what do you expect, half of her skin was eaten by the acid) but help is quickly provided (I think you sometimes take it for granted though that these plants are always available. Which they are not if you look at this realistically... just a thought :))

That Sculra is evil, I knew. It was little surprising to hear about the utmost cruelity she was already showing at a young age, however I was pleasantly surprised by her childhood backstory as well as her relationship with Cyrest back then (now that almost screams after a little spin-off later on :D) Cyrest didn't end up telling his story but I'm sure we'll hear it soon enough. Hopefully as a flashback too :)

I remember you asking me about how to develop Bluey even further and I didn't know an answer back then. But now I see what you did there and I'm absolutely in awe. Such a heartwarming scene as I sit here in the icy cold waiting for my bloody belated train back to home :p

Uhh, I sense trouble... big trouble :unsure: If I remember correctly that Fastbiter isn't the only individual trying to wreak havoc there...

The desert around the Great Valley surely is a hostile place... and now there's a fight about to break loose, oh dear...

As for the rest of the chapter, well... I think the fact that I don't know what to write now is plenty evidence that it had the desired effect on me. Well done...

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It's always nice to see Swayer. His sequence written pretty well and its a good idea to make him the first one to congratulate Ducky for her success. I will certainly wait for the next time he was talking about. Additionally, the entire sequence following her awakening worked well.

Sculra's background story and the reason for evil is quite simplistic, to be honest. Not that it matters too much as her and Cyrest's common history was interesting. Sculra's treatment of him was disgusting but it brought the point of her ways prevailing since her youth. Bluey and Ducky's common scene was adorable and finally managed to build up the character more. It's better than never but Bluey's development could have come earlier. The scene was great but building a character is a long process.

Red Claw's attack was certainly intense. It brought many dangerous situations for Bron and Sura but they managed to survive. Sura and the Fast Biter's conversation had a nice even if a mixed moment. I understand the Fast Biter might have felt the debt repaid with Bluey's death but even then, he had harbored enmity towards Sura for so long that he backed down from killing Sura rather quickly.

Poor Bluey... It was a miracle that the attack claimed only one life but Bluey's death is an enormous blow to Ducky and her friends. I imagine that this will only harden her resolve to cause Sculra's downfall. Overall, this chapter was quite nice, not quite as good as the last one but I still liked most parts of it. Sculra's backstory and Bluey's late character developments were the few nitpicks I could come up with but you still did a nice job with this chapter. I bet Sura and Sculra's reunion will be joyful...




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Chapter 59: Lingering Pain  

Never had Ducky ever experienced such a loss before, the closest she had ever come was the separation from her family during The Great Earthshake and almost losing one of her younger siblings as an egg to Ozzy and Strut and the near death experience of her mother on the journey to The Big Water but now for the first time she had experienced death and it was more terrible then she could ever have imagined. She may have comforted Littlefoot and Cera over the respective family deaths many times before but now that she had just lost Bluey, her aunt, she who helped save her and Trough from Sierra and looked out for her ever since she met her, she who had accompanied her to Thunder Pool and the meeting and her showing of support the night before had entangled Ducky in the bonds of family love. There was so much that she wanted to do with her but now that was all gone forever.

Ducky had not ceased her loud crying and neither had Trough, who probably had just experienced an even harsher loss because he had known Bluey longer and hence had plenty of time to get to know her and she had always been there for him when no one else was there, she was almost like family to him so the loss was just as devastating to him as it was to Ducky. Ducky opened her reddened eyes and looked over to her Grandmother and let loose even more tears as her gaze fell upon Bluey’s only egg, she was going to have babies of her own, but now the only child she could have would be orphaned, doomed to meet its mother.

Ducky put her head back into her mother’s arms and sobbed even louder, holding on to both her mother and Trough with an iron grip, in desperate need for comfort and company. She was vaguely aware of her mother’s tears occasionally dripping on her as she too mourned the loss of her sister. She was however unaware that Littlefoot, Shorty, Cera and Ruby were all grouped very close to her along with the rest of her friends but these four dinosaurs now had another few members join them, for they all had one thing in common; they had all experienced death and lost someone close to them. Littlefoot and Shorty had both watched their mothers die in front of them. Cera had lost all of her clutch mates and mother and although she had not been present during their last moments the pain of their passing still haunted her and although only Chomper knew, Ruby had also lost one of her closest childhood friends to an abusive father and sickness. They all shared her pain because they all knew how it felt. Diver and Spike had also experienced the same loss but unlike poor Ducky they had the small mercy of not having known Bluey long enough to have made such a strong attachment to her but the effects were no less for each of them because Bluey had already given them love last night.

Grandma Swimmer held two precious possessions in her arms that Bluey had given up before she died; one was the egg of her unborn child. Her daughter’s pregnancy haunted her deeply, how many eggs had she made? How many more would she have made? Who was the father? What of Bluey’s poor child?

These questions plagued her troubled mind as well as her death. Grandma Swimmer, while being no stranger to death and had seen many of her family members die as well as her mate but losing Bluey was one of the hardest losses she had ever experienced, topped only by the loss of her mate. Bluey had been one of her favourite children and she had grown so close to her over the years due to the fact that she never left her side even after she reached maturity. She had loved her and looked after and shared so many moments with her that her death had been even more painful then Ducky’s pain or even Trough’s but unlike either of them she had tried and tested ways of dealing with her pain so that it didn’t cripple her, she knew that there was a time for mourning but that was not now. While she cried and needed Cyrest to hold her up she was still functioning better then Ducky, Trough and Sura.

“Oh my poor daughters, I am so sorry” thought Grandma Swimmer as she looked at how traumatised Sura was, she would be unable to introduce her sister to the rest of her family like she planned and then there was the case of her physical injuries which were all pretty bad, while not immediately life threatening, the same went for her Cyrest and Bron. In a way having this physical pain was helping her to deal with her mental pain by drowning it out as she focused on keeping herself going. She kept a vigil hold over her daughter’s egg and a tight hold over a shining sapphire necklace in the other hand.  

Sura however had probably suffered the hardest blow of all. Her steps were slow, weary and very wobbly. She dragged her now limp, droopy tail through the ground despite the burning pain it caused to her wounds. She looked like she was on the verge of collapse, her tears fell and she sobbed but her body was much more severely weakened now after her ferocious fight with the Fast Biter, she hardly cared that she was covered in blood and still bleeding, she just replayed Bluey’s last moments over and over in her mind. While she was haunted by the same things that her mother was, she was also riddled with guilt, if only she had not stayed still, if only she had moved then Bluey would still be alive. A fresh wave of sobbing came over Sura as this new pain and guilt hit her harder than a comet from space, she fell to her knees, placing Ducky and Trough on the ground hastily and holding her hands on hot dusty ground and broke down completely.

That was one of the only things that could shake Ducky out of the abyss of despair was seeing her mother go into complete meltdown, of course she had witnessed her mother during her weak stages before but none came close to this not a single one. Her mother was on the ground, all composure gone and crying her heart out into the dust of the desert. “Mommy” said Ducky weakly crawling over to her side since she could walk with her bad leg. Ducky embraced her mother’s beak which was hanging just over the dust. Sura’s eyes which had been closed tightly now opened to reveal the sheer depth of sadness that she was feeling, the same expression that showed in her little one’s face. Lowering her head she nuzzled Ducky and Ducky nuzzled her back, each providing comfort to other, an embrace that was joined by Spike and Diver who both joined in the embrace as did Grandma Swimmer and Trough.

They huddled close together in a tight embrace of hugging and nuzzling while they cried but even in such despair there was comfort from everyone in that embrace which was not just a gesture for support but a gesture to support. Cyrest helped Grandma Swimmer up, they were both limping from their injuries and Sura needed a boost from Bron who offered her his tail and his uninjured flank for her to lean on, as far as injuries went he had the lightest of them all. Between the Swimmers it was hard to tell who had the worst injuries but there were more injuries then just physical and when it can to that then there was no doubt that Granma Swimmer and Sura had been dealt the biggest blows. Spike allowed both Ducky and Trough to take a seat on his back with Diver and Jane, none of them were crying anymore but the mood was still suppressed and tragic. With heavy hearts they resumed the journey.  

It was only a short while later that Grandma Swimmer with Cyrest’s help made it over to her remaining daughter. “Sura dear, don’t blame yourself, I know you think it was your fault but you have to stop thinking like that, it doesn’t do any good dear” she said, her voice was filled with exhaustion and despair as well as physical pain.

“But it is my fault, if I had just-“

“So what if it is your fault? Will acknowledging that help you to get better? No Swimmer could stand a charge from that tyrant, it was either you or her Sura and your sister chose” said Cyrest in a firm voice that tinged every word with sorrow.

Sura looked down, Cyrest’s response was brief and to the point and in one part of her mind, one sensible logical part, she knew he was right. Bluey had sacrificed herself to save her and in doing so she not only saved her sister but all her children from the pain of losing their own mother. Sura closed her eyes tightly but nodded slowly and silently.

“Sura dear, when you were fighting with that Fast Biter Bluey gave me this” Grandma Swimmer opened the palm of her right hand and showed the beautiful sapphire necklace that had previously hung around Bluey’s neck. Grandma Swimmer shuddered at the memory of Bluey giving it up to her.


Bluey coughed blood from her mouth, her whole body trembled violently and the flood of tears fell, she could see the looks directed at her and already knew how bad it was, there was no getting out of this and she knew but at least Sura was alive. She looked down at Ducky, Diver, Trough and Spike. They all looked horrified. Ducky and Trough were already crying, Ducky looked like she was about to collapse and so did Trough. “I’m so sorry little ones but I had too” she said weakly to them. With that she reached her hand up to her neck and gently undid the necklace. “Mom” she said.

Her mother came to her side and she put a hand on her mother’s and placed her necklace back into her mother’s care “It’s Sura’s now” she whispered to her. Her heart shattered as her mother nearly completely broke down; she sobbed softly and held on tightly to Bluey’s hand and the necklace.

“Bluey!” cried Sura, running towards her downed sister.
 


“She told me to give it to you Sura” said Grandma Swimmer and with great care she placed it around her daughter’s neck and tied the knot. Sura held the sapphire in her hands; it was remarkable that after all the battle and bloodshed, it was still clean and unharmed. Looking at the sapphire surface Sura let out a hard sob as she held it to her heart. She could see her in the crystal; each shade of blue that was on Bluey’s body was in this one crystal. That’s why she cherished it; it seemed to hold her sister’s spirit inside it.

Sura looked down at Spike and saw her daughter’s, almost immediately she knew what to do but that would have to wait till they got back to The Great Valley which was approaching rapidly. However no one noticed a lone Flyer heading back to The Valley.


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The Great Valley

Ariel touched down on the hill in front of the assembled, waiting for her report, for the past day and the day before Ariel had been out for two scouting trips per day to see if the small herd was approaching, she had just come back from her second patrol and the parents were anxious to hear her report.

“They’re coming, they’ll be here at sunset” said Ariel in a delighted voice however she didn’t know what state the herd was in or what had befallen them as she had been too far away to make any detailed observation. The parents all gave happy and eager exchanges when they heard that news.

“Well let’s get our families together at sunset and welcome our children and friends home” said Grandpa Longneck.

“Oh I almost forgot to tell you,” said Ariel to the two elderly Longnecks “Bron is with them”

Both Grandma and Grandpa Longneck took up looks of surprise. “With his herd?” asked Grandma Longneck.

Ariel shook her head. “No, he’s by himself and I think Shorty but that’s all” said Ariel.

“Well, we can talk detail when they get back” said Grandpa Longneck.

“In the meantime, I see no reason why we shouldn’t prepare our families” said Ruphus and headed off to his nest, the circle of parents quickly dispersed after that, each headed for their own nest but none faster than Ruphus.  He was actually running, just short of a sprint towards his home nearly barging through several annoyed Dome Heads along the way. He arrived back at the nest feeling rather light headed and short of breath.  

“Ruphus, what on earth have you been doing, picking a fight with Sharpteeth?” asked Merri when she saw Ruphus’s current state, a few of the older children chuckled. “It is a good thing everyone’s here” thought Ruphus as he quickly counted his children.

“Of course not,” he panted irritably “much better, Sura, Ducky, Diver, Spike they’ll be here soon, by sunset” said Ruphus excitedly.

A chorus of deafening cheers erupted from the children when they heard that their sister and mother were coming back after such a long absence. Tails wagged in anticipation and an excited chatter ran through the children, they could hardly wait to see them again. Merri looked just as excited as the children. “Don’t forget little ones that not only are your mother and sister finally coming home but you’ll also get to meet your grandmother and aunt Bluey” said Merri.

“Is Aunt Bluey really a blue Swimmer?” asked Opal curiously.

“She certainly is but she is a lovely sister, I know you will like her” replied Merri.

There was a murmur of interest between the young ones but the reception was rather well received when compared to so many other Swimmers. Merri was so glad to see such acceptance; she just couldn’t wait to see her long lost family return.

“Is Diver and Spike coming back as well?” asked Rapid.

Ruphus nodded “Yes indeed Rapid, as well as a little hatchling Swimmer and another friend of Ducky’s, he’s also a Swimmer and will be staying with us for the time being so everyone make them feel welcome.”

“I’ll get those two for leaving without me” mumbled Rapid angrily. Unfortunately Echo who was supporting him heard this.

“What would you be able to do out there with this leg?” he asked dramatically. Rapid gave a few angry mumbles at that, he may be able to put a little weight on his leg but he still could not walk without help from anyone and he hated this feeling of helplessness. He had to have his food brought to him and stay off his leg in the nest as if he was a hatchling but the worst thing of all was that he needed help to move when he needed to relieve himself, even when his aunt and father offered him a bed of leaves to make it less problematic for him, he refused, he would not be downgraded to a helpless hatchling but refusing meant accepting help to move from his father or Echo.

“The sooner I can walk, the better” thought Rapid but for now he accepted the help he was given.

“Right little ones when you’re ready we’ll head to the pass and wait for them to arrive with everyone else and I’m sorry Merri but I’ll need someone to stay and watch the eggs” said Ruphus, looking first at his children then apologetically at Merri.

“It’s okay Ruphus, I think I can handle waiting a little longer” said Merri.

“Now come along little ones,” said Ruphus and was about to lead his children off but paused and walked over to where Echo was supporting Rapid. “Echo, I’ll take Rapid” he said.

“Thanks Dad” said Echo, ignoring Rapid’s protest.

Ruphus carefully lifted Rapid into his arms although Rapid grumbled all the way up. However when he was settled Ruphus finally set off with his children towards the pass, little did they know what they would have to confront when the long expected reunion came to pass.


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A few hours later and Ruphus stood with his children along with the Longnecks including Grandma and Grandpa as well as Brace, Arial and the Threehorns which included Topps, Tria and Tricia who looked eager to see her big sister again, as eager as his children. “You and me both” thought Ruphus as he thought of the sheer impatience he felt, he could almost run out of the pass to meet them but that would not set a good example to the children. The Great Valley was coloured a beautiful shade of orange, yellow and gold from the setting Bright Circle which was starting to disappear behind the mountains and in front of the pass that Ducky and Sura had left from they all stood waiting on the warm grass. Everyone fell silent and waited with excitement and anticipation when they all heard the sound of footsteps approaching getting louder and closer every step. Suddenly the shadows appeared on the rocky wall of the pass, the biggest being a shape of a Longneck which was certainly Bron. The shadow was followed by the shapes of adult Swimmers but most of them where hidden by the massive shadow of Bron and then down on the ground that was easy to see was the shadows of the young ones. Big smiles appeared on the waiting crowds the reunion was about to take place, it was then the Bron’s massive body came into view but what everyone say next wiped the smiles from their faces and replaced them with looks of horror.

Bron was covered in lacerations, that still leaked blood down his brown skin but what followed was something that was even worse, holding onto Bron’s flank was the image of a limping Swimmer but this Swimmer was almost completely drenched in blood that gushed out of some horrendous looking wounds but it was who this Swimmer was that brought a deathly silence to the shocked on lookers. “Sura?” said Ruphus in an unmistakably shocked voice, he almost dropped Rapid when he saw her, he could hardly see any of her brown skin under the blood but he saw her eyes, he knew it was her as did his children who all looked like they had just entered a nightmare.          

A few moments later two elderly looking Swimmer’s came into view, they were both limping like Sura but they were using each other for support, they too were covered with gashes and on the females leg was a large bite mark and in her hands she was holding something that Ruphus couldn’t quite see, something terrible had just happened, he could see it in their weary faces and Sura’s eyes they were red from crying, they had the look of someone who had just experienced a terrible loss.  

It was then that the relatively uninjured children came into view and whiles the sight of all the children safe and whole relieved the parents they all spotted something out of place and Ruphus paid special attention to it. He saw Ducky for the first time in ages but like that adults she looked very badly beaten up, he could see that she had been crying as well as Diver and Spike and also another light brown Swimmer next to Ducky that he assumed was Trough but Ducky was different, he could see a series of leaf bandages on her left leg, the spine of her back from her neck to her tail tip and a large tightly tied leaf was placed around her chest. Something terrible had happened.  

“Mom?” whimpered Sandy in horror, putting her hands over her mouth to stop herself from being sick.

“Sura” said Ruphus and gently set Rapid down and walked over to his mate, upon arrive she practically collapsed into his arms as much from despair as well as physical exhaustion. “What happened” asked Ruphus gently.

Sura looked up at Ruphus, tears building around her eyes. “Sharpteeth, Red Claw, Fastbiters, ambush” said Sura.

“Let’s get you to the watering hole” said Ruphus and allowed Sura to use him as his support. Everyone followed silently, none of them could believe what they were seeing and for the Swimmer children, it was a depiction of horror come to life to see their mother covered in all that blood and that badly injured. Echo was once again helping Rapid along but they were both stunned into silence at the sight of their bloody mother. After a short walk they arrived at the watering hole and Ruphus helped Sura to sit down on the bank. There were many residents around the water hole even at sunset and they all stopped to stare with horror at the sight before them.

“Alright I’ll try and find some herbs for you dear, just don’t move too much” he said and moved off to into the water and headed for the other bank. The children in the meantime were reuniting with their parents. Even though Sura was bloodied she found herself approached by all her children. “Mom?” It was Ray who spoke first.

“Oh Ray, little ones, I’m so glad to see you all again” said Sura. She reframed from nuzzling or cuddling anyone, instead she started to wash the blood off her body and in doing so revealing just what kind of injury’s she had sustained, there were lacerations all over her body and some nasty stab wounds and plenty of bruises. Her wounds were still bleeding in some places but the rate was not particularly alarming, it was the same for both Cyrest and Grandma Swimmer as they both bathed however they all grimaced as their wounds touched the water.

“Ducky!” cried Opal, all of a sudden Ducky found herself surrounded by her siblings, they might have pulled her off into a big embrace but after her leg was touched she jolted involuntarily and let out a moan of pain. It was then that everyone realised that not all was well with their sister either.

“Are you okay Ducky?” asked Echo with concern as he eyed the bandage leafs around her body, he could see the blood in some places and dozens of bruises that had not been covered by leaves. It concerned him even more when Ducky shook her head, looking even more closely Echo could see just how red Ducky’s eyes were from crying.

They were distracted on pushing the issue when their father came across from the bank; he had handfuls of herbs in his arms which she placed beside Sura and a few more down near Cyrest and Grandma Swimmer before he headed off to find more, since more would be needed for everyone. Sura started preparing the herbs for herself, crushing them into a paste and spreading them onto her wounds, she grimaced during this part of the process but she forcefully smothered them on then bandaged her wounds with some ferns that Arial supplied. She placed her left over herbs with her mother and went to finally greet her children. She embraced them all in one big hug and nuzzled them all, seeing all her children again brought warmth to her heart despite the pain and loss that she had so recently experienced. “I’ll be okay dears” reassured Sura.

“Did Sharpteeth really do this to you?” said Rapid in shock, Sura nodded only once but Echo also had a question for his mother.

“What happened to Ducky?” asked Echo.

Sura for the first time since her sister’s death smiled. “Well dears Ducky has completed the true Trial of Destiny but not without getting hurt.”

“What!?”    

Sura’s statement caught the attention of everyone gathered, who all turned to look closely at Ducky.  Every eye of every dinosaur, every gender, every family and every age all set on Ducky at once as they drank in the sight of the young Swimmer’s injuries. Injuries that they could easily assume came from The Trial.

“On the way back home we came across the place where the true Trial was held before it moved to The Great Valley and Ducky chose to do it and she did it,” explained Sura to the awestruck crowd. “But not without sustaining some very nasty injuries that nearly killed her”

All at once everyone moved in to question Sura and Ducky about The Trial but Sura raised her hands and said loudly “Everyone we will answer your questions after we have tended to our wounds for we have suffered on this journey and our number is one less then what we started.”

Everyone gasped at the implications of Sura’s words. It explained why the small herd seemed so heartbroken; someone had been killed in the attack. “Who?” asked Grandma Longneck in shock and sympathy as she lowered her neck to the tearful Swimmer.

“No one…..any of you……know…….but……she was…….my younger sister” Sura sobbed through her words, each one drawn as if from a pit of despair as she looked down and closed her eyes and began to sob quietly. Ruphus was by her side in a flash, he held her hand and nuzzled her in a comforting fashion while their little ones gasped at what their mother just said, their aunt, whom they had never met, whom they were going to meet had been killed that very day. Many of the younger clutch children teared up as well but the older children were stunned into a still silence. The silence was finally broken by Grandma Swimmer who had just finished treating her own wounds, she got up slowly and painfully, her legs wobbling as if they would give out at any second and despite the bandage on her leg, the red blood could still be seen dampening the green surface. It was only Bron who kept her from falling over as he helped her walk towards Sura, she nearly collapsed upon arrival. She placed a hand on her daughter and gave her a comforting nuzzle before turning over to who she was sure was Sura’s mate.

“You must be Ruphus. Sura’s told me a lot about you” she said warmly despite her battered appearance and the mental trauma she had just experienced.

“Ruphus, children…..I would like you all to meet my mother” said Sura laboriously through her sharp intake of breaths. Ruphus looked up, his eyes widening for only a second as he had been pre warned of her arrival but his children were a lot more vocal with shocked gasps and quiet murmurs among themselves. “This is Cyrest” said Sura, pointing over to the elder Swimmer tending the last of his wounds; the bite on his shoulder.

Ruphus got up and approached Cyrest. “I think I should say thank you for saving my mate and for training my daughter” he said with a respectable bow.
Cyrest nodded though he grimaced in pain in the process. Ruphus then went over to help Bron with his lacerations. Meanwhile Ducky was introducing Jane and Trough to her siblings. Jane was excited to see such a large gathering of young Swimmer’s, Petrie could hardly keep a hold of her. In contrast, Trough was feeling overwhelmed by the greeting and the sheer number of Swimmers in Ducky’s family and none of them harboured any malice towards him which was a big first. It didn’t help that everyone was trying to introduce themselves at once.

Trough stayed right next to Ducky while Spike laughed at his reaction. So Ducky quietened her siblings down so she could introduce them one at a time. With a grimace Sura managed to force herself up and onto her feet but she could not take a step without almost falling flat on her face. Ruphus was quick to her aid, giving a shoulder for her to lean on. While Grandma and Grandpa Longneck helped support Cyrest and Grandma Swimmer who was being supported by her Longneck counterpart.  “Come, we’ll talk more at the nest” said Sura. Everyone followed slowly. Diver however had gotten down from Spike in order to reunite with her siblings; she was swamped as soon as she touched the ground by her younger siblings while all her clutch mates gave her a warm welcome, well almost all of her clutch mates. Rapid gave her a distasteful frown and Diver saw this.

“Oh what’s the matter Rapid? Angry you couldn’t join me on an adventure with……” Diver whispered the next word in his ear so quietly that no one heard it but the result was priceless to Echo. Rapid look startled out of his wits, he looked like he had just been caught trying to steal his mother’s tree stars, his face was as red as a berry from embarrassment, not anger. Diver and Echo burst into laughter when they saw the dumbstruck look on their brother’s face. “Don’t worry Rapid, you’re not alone now Ducky is back and like you she can’t walk but that is only because she did The Trial successfully while you got swept down the fast water during the storm” said Diver in a teasing voice to a now furiously trembling Rapid, he looked like he was going to blow at any moment. Echo was struggling to hold him up as it was while he laughed uncontrollably.

“Oh shut up you two! I swear when I get back on my feet I’ll get you both!” said Rapid angrily while the two helped him walk. Ducky however had another visitor climb onto Spike’s back, her twin sister Opal. Trough was startled by this, he didn’t know Ducky had a twin but before he started wondering how on earth he’d tell them apart he saw Opal’s shining light blue opal like eyes, which were the key difference between her and Ducky, it was the way that everyone told them apart, her voice was also different which was another means to tell the difference between his Ducky and her twin sister.

It was only a short walk to get back to The Swimmer’s nest but it felt like an eternity for the three wounded Swimmers, each step was agony and the only reason why they had not fallen down was owe to the fact that they each had someone supporting them. However when Sura finally heard the familiar sound of the waterfall she pricked up and saw the familiar site of her nest, she could see her eggs still safe in the nest she had made for them and there was Merri sitting on her haunches by the eggs, a vigil guard for her eggs. However as the sound of footsteps approached Merri got to her feet and looked towards them, her initial expression of excitement and joy was suddenly turned down at the sight of her wounded sister.    
     
“Sura!” she cried as she ran over to her. “What happened to you?” she said in a worried tone.

“Red Claw and his Fast Biter ambushed them in The Mysterious Beyond” said Ruphus gently but Merri suddenly paled, she looked sick, she saw her mother but the thing that caught her attention was the sapphire necklace on Sura’s neck.

“Where’s Bluey!?” she said in a loud voice filled with fear.

Grandma Swimmer approached Merri with a very sad smile on her face and pulled her into a tight embrace.  “I’m sorry Merri” she whispered, it was all the conformation Merri needed as she began to let our harsh sobs. That’s when she noticed the egg in your hands. “Where did-?“ she asked.

“It’s Bluey’s” said her mother gently causing her daughter to sob even harder. Ruphus carefully lowered Sura into her old sleeping spot beside her eggs. Merri finally disengaged with her mother and went back to her sister while Ruphus walked over to Spike out and finally reunited with his daughter.

“Oh Ducky” he said and nuzzled her lovingly, putting a hand gently on her side.

“Daddy!” cried Ducky joyfully, tears of joy springing from her eyes. “I missed-ed you so much yes I did, oh yes, yes, yes” said as she cuddled up to her fatherës beak.

“I missed you too little one” he replied in a whisper to her, there were tears in his eyes but none escaped. He disengaged and gazed in concern at her injuries “How?” The question hung in the air for a rather long time after he said it.

“We’ll tell you our tale now if your all ready” said Sura after she finished watching her children have first contact with her mother then she finally reunited with the rest of her children, she had just licked Rapid’s bad leg before she raised her head up as cue for the start of the story. Everyone settled down for a tale that lasted long past the setting of The Bright Circle. There was certainly a lot of amazement to be found for the listeners but the hate was a unanimous feeling when the story went in Scurla’s direction, Ruphus looked enraged when he finally was told Sculra’s motives and it took a while to calm the atmosphere down enough for the tale to continue however everyone fell silent when it was Ducky’s turn to talk about her taking the true Trial of Destiny. When she had finished the silence had yet to be broken by any other sound, everyone was still trying to absorb what they had just heard about The Trial and what Ducky had to go through and the revelation of how Ducky had received her wounds and how close to death she had been was startling, though they left the details of the ambush out as the wounds were still to fresh for it to be brought up. Finally the cold silence was broken by Sandy; she walked up to Ducky slowly a look of awe on her face.

That look didn’t last long as she pulled her sister into a strangling embrace which her clutch mates joined in enthusiastically. “Don’t you ever get that close to death again Ducky” cried Sandy with unrestrained emotion coming from her.

“Alright everyone, I know you are all happy to see Ducky but she is hurt and hugging her like that won’t make her heal faster” said Ruphus as he gently pushed his children away from Ducky before giving her a long cuddle himself “You are so brave my little girl” he said lovingly. He had been shocked by Ducky’s description of The Trial, it was rather easy to see why so few Swimmers survived it but he could only imagine just how terrified his little one had been to be in such a dark and dangerous place.

I think we’ll call it a night dears after all it is sleeping time for little ones” said Grandma Longneck. The was a unanimous murmur of agreement from the adults and an almighty groan from the children but The Gang each went away with their families for the night except Chomper and Ruby who also stayed to sleep with the Swimmers however when everyone was getting ready for sleep beneath the shining Night Circle Sura pulled Ducky over to her.

“Ducky, I know you have had a very hard day, so have I” she said, her voice counselling as she was referring to the loss of Bluey. Ducky looked down when she said that and sniffed, a few tears falling down her eyes that would have continued had her mother not wiped them away with a tender hand. “I know” said her mother in understanding and held her in her gentle embrace.

“I miss her so much” said Ducky sadly “I did not want her to go” she choked through her tears.

“I didn’t either but she saved me and left a child, all we can do to honour her is remember her fondly and help raise her little hatchling” replied Sura. She gently placed Ducky on the ground in front of her then raised her hand up to the back of her neck and undid the green piece of long grass and held the necklace in her hand.

“I think Bluey would have wanted you to have this” she held the sapphire in her hand in front of Ducky. “It has been passed down from mother to daughter for five generations now with this passing, I give it to you until you chose to pass it down” said Sura as she gently placed the necklace around Ducky’s neck, the beautiful gem resting on Ducky’s chest, she held onto it tightly with her right and, she held it over her heart and smiled up at her mother with tears still falling down her cheeks. “Thank you mama” she said as she and her mother embraced and nuzzled each other.

They disengaged shortly afterwards, although Ducky had suffered a major loss today, the comforting and support shown to her by her friends and family had made a huge difference to the way she coped. “Now come along dear, sleeping time” said her mother and placed her beside Spike, Chomper, Ruby, Trough, Jane and all her clutch mates. Ruphus lay next to Sura and together they made a circle of the bodies that all the children could sleep in but tonight would not be a restful one.


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Blood, lots of blood, blood enough to fill a pond, Sura lay on the red ground of the once dry desert the moon shining overhead, her dead sister embraced in her arms as she screamed into the dark night for her loss, as she looked down in the reflection of the blood at her feet to see the moment Red Claw sank his teeth into her sister’s flesh, the moment she watched Bluey lay her first and only egg, she watched as she fell limply into her arms, inescapable the images played over again and again but when she turned back to her sister she saw at her feet only the bloody bones left on the desert ground as they would have been laid after those foul Sharpteeth had finished with her. I’m so sorry Blue, it’s all my fault.“ She sobbed Sura, falling on her knees and resigning herself to despair.

She closed her eyes tightly and sobbed into her hands but that didn’t last long, it suddenly stopped when Sura felt a hand place itself onto her shoulder and a muzzle cross her beak.  “Don’t blame yourself Sura please” whispered the familiar voice.  

Sura’s eyes snapped open and her head turned to see another Swimmer looking down at her, a light blue Swimmer, she looked at her with a sympathetic expression. “ B-B-Bluey?” Sura said, hardly daring to believe in what she was seeing.

“Sura” said Bluey and pulled her into her embrace, Sura was to dumbstruck to return her hug.  

“It-it-you can’t-Blue” Sura fell into her sister’s embrace and started to sob uncontrollably. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry” she kept repeating over and over again while Bluey held her in her arms as if she were a frightened hatchling.

“It was not your fault Sura, The Sharpteeth you saw during the attack weren’t the only ones participating. As far as I know the one who struck the blow was not Red Claw but Sharptooth possessing his body, no one could stand a charge from him head on” said Bluey calmly.

“But how can-Why would?” Sura stuttered.

“I don’t know sister but I am glad that you are okay and yes Ducky is certainly the right one to hold the necklace, it feels right on her, look after her please” said Blue her voice was becoming soft, like a distant echo.

“But Bluey you were pregnant, who’s the father?” asked Sura, still in tears.

“The leader of The Swimmer herd, you remember him don’t you? His name is Rarlap” said Bluey, holding a hand out and pointed to a short distance away and the image of a strong brown male Swimmer appeared, a Swimmer that she recognised as the herd leader that had defended her during the herd meeting.  

“Please, my child belongs with him, you promise me now to give my child to his father when he comes to The Valley” said Bluey looking directly into her sister’s eyes. Sura could only nod in response. Bluey smiled contently, it was the same smile as the one she had on her face when she died. “Thank you Sura, I’m sorry for all the pain you have felt but I will always look out for you and I’ll keep Dad company for you, now you need to sleep.”

“No Bluey! I want to stay with you!” protested Sura loudly. Her sister didn’t listen and instead placed Sura down on the ground, so that she was in a sitting position. “Please don’t go!” cried Sura desperately.

“We will never go Sura” said another voice. Sura froze, it had been so long since she had heard that voice.

“Not ever”

“We would never leave you”

The two additional voices were the voices of a young boy and girl. Sura felt her body tremble and the tears cloud her vision as she looked at three figures coming into her field of view, two were children but the other was an adult, a male, the tears dripped away from her eyes and gave her a clear view of the Swimmer. Her mouth fell open and her hearty shuddered harder than it would be if The Great Earthshake happened in her body. “Bright…….Clover……..Father” Sura finally said in a chocked up voice before she completely lost all composure and broke down at their feet.

Her eyes may have been closed but it did nothing to hold back the flood of tears and she could not take away her other senses, she felt two small hands gently place themselves upon her beak and another larger hand being placed on her shoulder.

“Oh my beautiful daughter, I’m so proud of you” came the whispered voice of her father in her ear, that loving caring voice that had so often been her guide in her younger days.

“You’re bigger than me now” said Clover.

“And smarter too” said Bright.

Sura opened her eyes and saw the soft smiles of her two siblings in front of her as they each rubbed her beak in a consolatory manner, it was so strange to be this big and see her brother and sister so small now, almost as if they were her own children, the next face she turned to look at was her father’s. He too was smiling but he also looked really proud. His face old but composed, it was what he looked on the last day they saw each other.  

“I’m so sorry” said Sura to them all.

“So am I,” said her father, nuzzling her. “It was as much my fault as yours” he said then added. “But I never imagined how you would end up and I am so proud to see you with your own family” said her father.

“And we forgave you long ago Sura” said Clover rubbing his now much larger sister’s beak.

“Just find it in your heart to forgive yourself, than I know that you were not the silly sister you used to be” added Bright with a cheeky smirk. Sura half sobbed, half laughed at that comment, words utterly failed her now.

“Come Sura you must sleep” said her father.

“No please” whispered Sura.

“You have a family and a brave little one to look after Sura” said her father and took her by the hand. What happened next all happened in a flash of bright white light. Sura found herself standing on the bank of a huge shallow inland sea that stretched out as far as the eye could see, small islands dotted the horizons and Sura was standing on the bank of the whole thing, turning her head she saw a beautiful clearing that she recognised anywhere, this was her old home, her birthplace and her father was already waiting in his scrape with Bright and Clover nestled up beside him. “Come Sura” said her father. Sura took a step forward but only then did she realise something was different, very different. She was no longer an adult, the body she possessed now was the body she had when she was Ducky’s age.

Usually she’d freak out if this were to happen but this was a dream so she wasn’t really disturbed, she approached her father and lie down with her brother and sister, something she had not done since her childhood days. Her father nuzzled Bright and Clover but lingered on her the longest. “I love you dear, never forget that” he said as he nuzzled her then wrapped them all in his tail, Sura didn’t know why  she was so tired but she found herself drifting but just before everything faded away she saw a light blue Swimmer watching her, she was crying.

Sura woke with a gasp only to see that Ducky and Trough were also shaking in their sleep.

She wondered what was going on their heads.


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Ducky opened her eyes to stare at a beautiful sight, a sunset on the shores of The Big Water. She was standing on a hill overlooking the water, there were several tall rocks sticking up out of the water like needles. Ducky looked down at the gold water sparkling with an intensity that dazzled her eyes, that was when she spotted the shape of a Swimmer of her kind swimming with lightning speed and skill, he was weaving around and between the tall rocks with what looked like effortless ease but Ducky knew he was highly skillful to be able to pull off such high speed manoeuvres. Finally the Swimmer jumped from the water and onto the sandy shore a short distance away, he was an adult male with a light brown colour like Trough, though he appeared much older than even Cyrest and Grandma Swimmer. After shaking himself dry he walked towards Ducky slowly but there was no malice or deceit in his facial expression, on the contrary, he was actually smiling warmly.

The two Swimmer’s stood and stared at each other for a while, Ducky looking up at the elder and he looking down on her, his eyes shone with radiance, but past this radiance was a wisdom learned over a long life but ultimately the message conveyed through his eyes was love. Ducky finally mustered the courage to break the silence between them. “Um, Hello, who are you?” she asked curiously as she did not feel the need for fear with such a warm gaze on her.

“Hello Ducky, I am so glad to finally meet you” said the elder Swimmer, his voice was as warm as his demeanour although still old and calm, rather much like Grandpa Longneck but with a different kind of strength, that came from a confidence in one’s ability. Ducky was momentarily startled by the fact that this Swimmer knew her.

“You remind me very much of your mother” said the Swimmer as he proceeded to sit down beside her and look over the ocean glowing golden in the light of the sitting sun, the horizon was almost a purple colour now and cast long shadows on the ground, even Ducky’s shadow looked huge in the light but both their bodies had a golden glow over them made by the setting sun. “As for who I am I think you know the answer to that little one” said the older Swimmer, placing a hand around her back.

In her heart an empty shape appeared, a shape that Ducky had not realised was there, a shape of a Swimmer that had been there ever since that fateful day at The Big Water with Bluey and her grandmother. The night she had talked with her mother came back to her in a flash as the hole in her heart was filled with the Swimmer in front of her and her mother’s words came back to her.  

“He was a very good father, he was often firm but he always had a gentle touch to him that always showed with his family, though not with everyone else."

Yes Ducky knew who this Swimmer was.

“Grandpa” said Ducky in realisation.

Her Grandfather smiled at her and for the first time he and Ducky finally embraced. Ducky never wanted to leave such a loving embrace as she held on tightly to her grandfather tightly, even though she had never met him, she felt that she already knew him, from her mother and her grandmother, the impressions they gave of him painted a vague picture in her mind but now this picture had come into sharp contrast. It was just like what her mother had told her.

The embrace lasted for quite a while until they finally disengaged and Ducky stood on the palm of her Grandpa’s hand. “Oh I am so happy to see you oh yes I am oh yes, yes, yes but what are you doing here? Is this a sleep story?” said Ducky.

Her Grandfather chuckled “Oh you sound so much like I used to Ducky but yes you are in are in a sleep story and after seeing what you are going through I think you’re going to need more help in preparation for your Trial, Cyrest seems good but he was not around when the best Swimming manoeuvres were used before they were forgotten” said Grandpa Swimmer.  

“Oh are you going to show me them?” asked Ducky.

“Only when you’re ready Ducky, you are a very good Swimmer but until Cyrest teaches you some certain manoeuvers then I believe I will be able to help you” he replied.

Ducky nodded in understanding but looked up at her grandfather thoughtfully as she thought of why her mother left her father. “My mom was very sad when she heard what happened to you, she said you chased her away from home” said Ducky.

For the first time Grandpa Swimmer’s expression went down sadly. He let out a long sigh “It’s not something I’m proud of little one, I tried to do what I thought was right by her but instead I misunderstood how your mother felt at the time, we both did things we shouldn’t of and in the end I’m more to blame” said Grandpa Swimmer. The sunset scene suddenly dissolved around them and Ducky saw her mother standing almost beak to beak with her father, both were glaring at each other aggressively with Bluey and her Grandmother as well as several other Swimmer’s that she assumed were part of her family. Bluey was holding onto Sura’s tail while Grandma Swimmer was holding onto her mate’s tail. She saw her mother condemn her Grandfather and her grandfather’s explosive reaction that resulted in her mother fleeing from her home as if her life depended on it.  

“I am only glad that I now have reconcil….reconsilatted….reconcilated….reconciled” said Grandpa Swimmer, stuttering a bit as he tried to get his words right, Ducky remembered being told that that her Grandfather had trouble with his words at times. “With my daughter” he finished looking a little annoyed.

“You have talked with my mom?” exclaimed Ducky with surprise.

Her father nodded then held a finger to the necklace around his granddaughter’s neck. “Bluey was right, this does suit you” he said.

“Bluey?” asked Ducky feeling her eyes water. Her Grandfather nuzzled her in a consolatory manner.

“Bluey will always watch out for you Ducky, she loves you, remember that, you’re her niece. Don’t grieve for her my dear, she is no longer hurt anymore, she is at rest, for death is not merely the end little one, rather it is more like an opening into a different place, she will never be in a bad place here though she may not be with you but she will always watch you” he said, his voice suddenly sounded older and more wiser than before.

Ducky nodded sadly.

“Rest assured that when you need me I’ll be there for you” he said and nuzzled her again, which Ducky accepted openly.

“As will I” said another voice.

Ducky felt something nuzzle her from the other side and turned to around to that side but the scene was fading but just before it vanished she saw the smiling face of a familiar light blue Swimmer.

Ducky woke with a gasp.


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“Are you okay dear?” said her mother in a worried tone as her daughter woke with a gasp, thankfully it wasn’t as bad as the last time Ducky woke from a nightmare, she didn’t look that bad just a little surprised to find herself back in the nest with The Night Circle shining over her head, it was late in the night but her mother was up watching over her.

“I am okay Mama” said Ducky quietly in order not to disturb everyone else but it was then that her gaze fell on Trough, he was wriggling around in his sleep as if he was having a seizure. “Trough” said Ducky in worry and gave him a firm push.

Trough awoke with a loud cry “Bluey!” he woke looking scared half to death. He was pale and shivering uncontrollable and breathing hard and fast, there were unshed tears in his wide eyes. It didn’t take a genius to figure out what Trough was probably dreaming about, both Sura and Ducky were right by his side to provide him with comfort as he started to lose his compose and started to sob as quietly as sobbing could be done into Sura’s flank for Bluey had once again died in his sleep.

Ducky patted her friend’s back lightly for she knew how he felt while her mother nuzzled him and through their comfort he managed to calm down though he still looked rather shaken. “Are you okay Trough?” asked Ducky in concern, it worried her even more when Trough shook his head. “He must still be upset about Bluey” thought Ducky.

Both she and her mother both understood the depth of Trough’s emotion, he had lost his first friend, the first one who had shown him love and care, the only one who had been there for him for so many years of his life and now she was gone forever. For him it was akin to losing a big sister and unlike Ducky and Sura, he didn’t have dreams of reassurance but rather nightmares which only put emphasis on his loss and the pain he felt.

“I am so sorry Trough” whispered Ducky sadly however the response she got from Trough was not what she or her mother had expected.

“How can you be so….so…so. Ah! How can you not be sad” he said as if the very thought pained him. “She was your aunt Ducky” he looked at her with a betrayed look that only managed to confuse Ducky.

“But Trough I am still sad about Bluey” said Ducky calmly. “But-“

“But you never really loved her like you should have!” said Trough through gritted teeth and turned to glare at Ducky, tears still falling down his eyes. “Bluey is dead Ducky and your acting like a buzzer just died, how could you?” said Trough in a voice filled with pain and condemnation. Sura did not like the way this was going, Trough looked tired and angry and she could tell that grief and anger at the whole situation had clouded his mind.  

“But I do love her I do, I do, I do” said Ducky, looking rather hurt, she was on the verge of crying herself.

“Yet you don’t seem sad, if you knew the tiniest bit of what I am feeling then you would be crying like a hatchling!” said Trough harshly causing Ducky to tear up, she never expected such harsh words from Trough.
Sura finally decided that this was enough “Now Trough-“

“You haven’t a clue how I feel! Bluey was like a sister to me and you hardly even knew her! You never really loved her!” shouted Trough loudly, cutting off Sura before he got up and ran off out past the adults and into the water, Sura saw him emerge on the other side of the stream and running into the bushes, to weep no doubt but he wasn’t the only one weeping. Ducky had burst into tears at such terrible words and accusations; she had never been subjected to this before in all her life especially not by someone who she thought she knew, who she loved. Sura had to go back to comforting Ducky after that but it would be a long time before either of them would find sleep. It would be a long night but that was at the back of Sura’s mind what was worse was the rift that had so suddenly been formed between Ducky and Trough and Sura begged that it would not bring more hurt to either of them.
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Wowza, these last couple of chapters have sure been intense :o!  Lots of emotions involved here, which is something I really like about your writing.  It has more of a raw feel; not much sugarcoated or watered down :yes.

As I've said before, I love supernatural elements, so you can guess that I really enjoyed the dream scenes where Sura and Ducky were talking with their deceased loved ones in their dreams.  Whether or not spirits actually visit us while we sleep is of course something debatable, and whether or not it is real, these dreams sure are profound and comforting, providing a sense of security that our loved ones are at peace.

Dangit, Trough!  I understand grief likes to play games with emotions, but he couldn't have picked a worse time to be a total pr***.  I hope he realizes he doesn't deserve a nice girl like Ducky and pretty much has to bust tail to earn his place back in her life.  Let the damage control begin, Trough x(cera :p.


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What a joyous homecoming... I liked the descriptions in the beginning of the chapter, once again deepening the characters' relationship with Bluey. Sura's sure had a rough time lately and I'm beginning to wonder if there's going to become a mental breakdown later on for her... The arrival to the Valley was done nicely, showing the reaction of the Valley residents to the recent events.

Concerning the many conversations during the latter part of the chapter, I found them quite enjoyable. Sura's "reunion" with her family was likely a great moment for her after the recent disasters. Ducky's discussion with his Grandfather was also emotional: the two should have met when they were both alive. We'll see if they'll meet again later on...  I'd like to say that the chance for sudden supernatural overtures and events are one of the greatest points in LBT. However, the way I see it, they shouldn't be overused. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the scenes but even then, I don't think that meeting the dead should be a regular event. They are emotional and hope-giving because they're miraculous and extremely uncommon. (Could be just me though).

Trough doesn't seem to be taking things too well. I hope he finds it in himself to get over this incident, it truly did little to improve his standing with Ducky or the others. His breakdown was quite a sudden one, though. Overall, this was a nice chapter, paving way for the eventual confrontation with Sculra. But even before that, there are some personal matters that hold serious potential for future conflicts and interesting developments.





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I've actually read this a few weeks ago during work but I didn't get around to write a review yet. Oh well, a chapter like this is really worth reading a second time :smile

This is truly a depressing chapter but what did I expect after Blueys demise? In the first scene, you find a good approach on how to show the terrible despair that everybody is facing while not going over the top with it and you find good words of comfort.

The scene of reunion was a joy to read. :smile I won't refer to the details but I really liked what did there. Most  notably, the passing on of the sapphire was a great idea imo :)

Sura's dream is marvelous! And Ducky's just as much! Well done! ^^spike


That ending though :sducky Trough, don't be a fool. Ducky is your love and your future! :bang

On account of what has transpired, I really hope the story won't be on hiatus for much longer, great chapter, mate, great chapter ^^spike


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Chapter 60: First Day Back  

Step after step, each one wearier and more laboured then last with an expression of melancholy still plastered on his face was how Trough looked as he wondered aimlessly around The Great Valley, not taking in any of its majesty or beauty, his mind was to entrenched in the events of yesterday to be focused on such things. Not that it would’ve helped had he been paying attention, no, this sight would’ve just made him feel that much sicker because this was not how it was meant to be now. He expected this day to be a joyous one where could explore The Great Valley with Ducky, Bluey and his new friends but the world was a cruel place it seemed. With Bluey’s death, the day before Trough entered a phase of deep depression, one which he had never experienced so far in his short life, it was unlike anything he had ever felt, it was a feeling of being crushed by the weight of the world and the events that had so recently caused him so much grief. It didn’t help that he was sleep deprived from a night of constant sobbing that served only to drain his already beaten body.

Over and over in Trough’s head had he seen his beloved friend take her final breath, ever since it had happened Trough had been going through a continuous feeling of soul crushing pain and sadness that not even Ducky had been able help him through. How could she? When she was just as incapacitated as he was mentally and even more so physically.

Trough sighed as he reflected on what he had so distraughtly shouted at Ducky, he knew it was wrong, she had been hurt just as badly as he had and he knew it. Yet in his grief he had blindly accused Ducky of being heartless, he did not think of how those words would affect the already beaten up and grief stricken girl. No he just made his friend more heart broken and last he had seen, Ducky was sobbing in her sleep no doubt over her loss and because of him.

“If anyone is heartless it’s me” thought Trough miserably, in pushing Ducky away, the only person apart from Bluey to show him love and compassion he had been the heartless one, he had struck a blow on Ducky that he would never knowingly strike on anyone and now he was sure that her heart had been shattered once again and he as good as did it. She bore all her feelings to him, he held her heart in his hands and last night he had thrown it in Ducky’s face and promptly shattered it into a million pieces. “Some friend I am” thought Trough as he continued to walk on through The Valley aimlessly, not caring where he was or who he crossed.

Although another voice in Trough’s mind told him to return and apologize to Ducky he just could not will himself to stop walking away and turning his back on the problem. However, he resolved to make amends but not now, he and Ducky were both too grief stricken and besides he still needed time alone. He walked alone and weary, past The Stone Circle just as The Bright Circle suddenly lit up the rocky arch at the entrance with golden light as it started to slowly rise above the mountains and bring warmth and light to its residents but not Trough. Not Trough.


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“He has a lot on his mind, Diver” said Echo to his very irate sister.
 
“I don’t give a damn! He has a lot to answer to,” replied Diver “He saw how Ducky was feeling and he just goes and says that she never loved her, it’s all a load of Sharptooth Crap!” Diver stomped her foot on the ground as her clutch mates listened to her rant.

They had all heard what Trough had said last night, how could they not have? He shouted it out for all to hear and left a heartbroken Ducky in the wake of his angry outburst. Which was unfortunate for Trough cause more than one of Ducky’s siblings had been given the wrong impression about him. A few like Diver, Sandy, Spinner and Opal were very angry with him while Echo was rather unsatisfied but he at least tried to diffuse the situation while Rapid’s view was unknown. He was keeping his thoughts on the subject neutral.  

“I’m going to give him one huge piece of my mind when he gets back make no doubt, no one does that to any of my sister’s. No one!” said Diver. Receiving a few nods from her irate clutch mates.

However, Echo put a hand on Diver warningly. “Now that I know that, I’m going to have to stop you from biting his head off” he said.  

Diver let out an irritated groan “Fine” she said as she slowly stomped off back towards the nest where Ducky lay next to her mother on a bed of leaves. She was still exhausted both mentally and physically from the other day and to make things more unbearable, she still couldn’t walk, her leg just couldn’t support her weight. While Ducky may be more at peace now with Bluey’s passing, her recent row with Trough had just torn open new wounds, and reopened the so recently mended ones and it stung terribly.

In all respect her mental wounds were ten times more painful than her physical wounds that she had gained doing The True Trial. “Ducky” The young Swimmer looked up at her mother. “Now I’ve got to go and help with breakfast for your younger siblings, I’ll be back soon dear” Ducky nodded silently as her mother rose up and headed off to prepare breakfast for her children. Ducky looked back down and let out an exhausted sigh. She could no longer move without the aid of someone else and even than it could not be her siblings, she literally had to be carried by an adult in order to keep her injured leg off the ground and so as not to put strain on her broken ribs. Spike gave a welcoming grunt as he lay down next to her, the two shared a brief hug. Spike was still by her side and while he was really mad at Trough he knew that Ducky needed him more at the moment so he was by her side as he always was. “Thank you Spike” said Ducky, grateful for his company.

They were not left alone for long though, the sound of a large body settling down next to her brought her attention back to reality as she looked up into the eyes of her father. He had a bunch of new herbs and a change of bandage leaves in his hand. He looked at her with calm concern. “You alright dear?” he questioned in a lowered voice.

Ducky only looked down sadly, an obvious expression that her father took for a ënot feeling okay’ answer. He settled his head on the ground and settled his beak just below Ducky’s. The two shared a short nuzzle “You’ve been so brave and I could not be more proud of you my little Ducky” said Ruphus.

Ducky replied with a sad smile, she just didn’t feel like talking today and her father could see this. “Now dear I’m going to redress your injuries and I’m sorry but this will hurt” he warned as he started making a paste from the small amount of healing herbs he had collected. Then very slowly, with the uttermost care her pulled the bandage from Ducky’s left leg, the cut was long, scabbed and had residual of previously used herbal pastes on it as well as a corpus amount of dried blood. Thankfully it didn’t bleed much.

Spike snuggled right up to Ducky so that she knew that he was with her and Ruphus let his left-hand fall next to Ducky so she could have something to hold onto during the process while his other hand took up a little paste on his finger and with one sift movement he smothered it onto the injury which was followed with a second smothering of the exit wound on the other side of Ducky’s leg. Ducky grimaced as she held onto her father’s finger for support. Ruphus quickly redressed the wound and gave Ducky a reassuring nuzzle before moving onto the long cut along her spine. There were other places along Ducky’s body like her tail, hands, crest and the skin around the wounds that needed treatment as well due to the effects of the acid which had caused the skin to peel, while these would not take too long to heal they still needed to be treated with herbs to stop infection. The only thing that stayed where it was on Ducky was the large tightly pulled leave around Ducky’s chest that held her two broken ribs together.

Out of all the other injuries the broken ribs still were the biggest danger, if they were knocked out of place the wrong way then the stray bits of bone could end up puncturing one of Ducky’s lungs which is why until they were fully healed the large leaf would not be taken off unless it was absolutely necessary. Which would unfortunately take a couple of painful months.

“All done Ducky” said Ruphus as he wiped his hand clean with another leaf.

“Thank you, Daddy” said Ducky, tearfully even though the most of the physical pain had gone the mental pain was still there. Spike gave her a lick cover the face that caused Ducky to laugh, she could always count on Spike to support her. He gave a reassuring grunt “Thank you too Spike” said Ducky, giving her brother a rub on his belly.  

“I’m so sorry you had to see what you did little ones,” said Ruphus sympathetically. “I know how it feels” He knew what Sharpteeth were capable of doing, he had lost family in battles similar to the one that Ducky had witnessed.

“I miss her so much, yes I do” said Ducky in a chocked voice and Spike gave a sad sigh, he wished he had more time to get to know Bluey, she had already welcomed him with open arms but her life was suddenly snuffed out and taking any thoughts of spending time with her away.

“I know you do” Ruphus put a hand on Ducky’s back and stroked her, a motion he repeated with Spike. The three sat in silence with Ruphus right beside his son and daughter for the first time in ages. Ducky snuggled up close to her father, she hadn’t realised just how much she had missed him.

“I missed you I did, I did” she said, voicing the same thought that was on her father’s mind.

“I missed you too dear, and I’m sorry” Ducky looked up at her father with a questioning expression. Ruphus returned her gaze with a regretful one. “Everyone heard what happened between you and Trough last night” Ducky looked down sadly and let out a few chocked sobs, it hurt her to sob or even breathe now, ever since she had that large leaf over her chest and broken ribs which were constant in pain, every hour of the day and night but Ducky was used to this by now it was not physical pain that brought on her tears.

“What did I do to make him so angry?” she asked her father.

Her father didn’t hesitate to answer “He is not angry with you Ducky, he is angry with the situation”

“He did not need to yell at me no, no, no” replied Ducky in a hurt voice.

Spike gave a firm nod and an angry but affirmative grunt “Your right Ducky” said Ruphus calmly “and I’m sure he will apologise soon, he just needs time. I know how it feels, it is the same that happened between your mother and I”

“Huh?” asked Ducky and Spike in confusion.

“Your mother told me that you saw it all that night” said Ruphus to Ducky averting his eyes in a guilty fashion, both he and Ducky knew what he was referring, the fight on shores of The Big Water that led to the breakup between her mother and father for the next few years.

Ducky nodded and held onto her father’s finger tightly. “I’m so sorry dear, I never knew you were there but I want you to understand that no one ever has an unchallenged relationship dear. There is usually some fight that we all must get through” said Ruphus.

“I think…I understand yes, yes, yes” said Ducky slowly.

“But that will never happen between your mother and I again. I promise and while you no longer have your aunt again, you at least have us again” Ruphus gestured to Ducky’s younger siblings playing tag nearby and Spike right up beside her. “and I’m sure Trough will come around soon dear, once he gets over his loss”

“I hope so” said Ducky as she shared another nuzzle with her father and another friendly lick from Spike. “I am happy to be home with you again, I am, I am” Ducky smiled.

Father, son and daughter both looked out over the water as the light of a new day shone over The Valley, lighting it up with a radiance that Ducky had almost forgot as the sounds of dinosaurs rising and going about their daily routine could be heard across The Great Valley. It was at that moment that Diver and Echo showed up. Echo looked a little worried while Diver still looked rather irate. “Where is that Trough!?” she asked not attempting to keep her anger out of her voice.

Ducky looked worried, she knew what Diver could be like when she was angry, her rages even rivalled Rapid’s being one of her siblings who actually knew how to fight, courtesy of the lessons her father had shown her when she had asked. However, at the moment it looked like that anger was currently directed at Trough which made Ducky fear for her friend.

Her father thought the same thing. “No one knows Diver and you are not to go looking for him is that understood” he said sternly.

“Why? I only want to teach him a good lesson for hurting my sister” replied Diver, punctuating the sentence with a punch of her hand into her other hand. Ducky flinched when Diver did that even Spike felt a little defensive against Diver’s anger as he put his tail round Ducky.  

“Fighting will not make the situation any better” said Ruphus.

“Says one of the adults who solves their problems by arguing” retorted Diver earning a disapproving scowl from her father.

Ruphus gave her a disapproving look “What do you think hurting Trough will achieve? Revenge? A lesson to not hurt Ducky? Fighting only makes things worse” said Ruphus firmly.

“As a matter of fact, yes,” said Diver in response “and name me one instant when a strong hand wasn’t bad” said Diver.

Ruphus was quick to answer “The fight between Mr Threehorn and the Spiketail leader” he said.

“That was resolved in less than a day, besides no one was hurt as a matter of fact they ended up being stuck together” replied Diver turning her head away, refusing to take her father’s words in her angry state. However, her father had one last card to play.

“Fighting divides, just as it did to your mother and I” he said. That caught Diver’s attention, she turned back to look at her father with a curious expression. Her father explained.

“It was a fight that caused our break up and that lasted many cold times and those scars still remain” said her father calmly but his voice was distant, his gaze looked away as if seeing a distant memory. Diver looked shocked, she had never been told of the reason of her parents break up. It was a hard thought to believe, her mother and father fighting.

“I didn’t know” she said, stunned.

“We almost killed each other that night Diver,” said her father in a hollow voice “I am telling you this not to frighten you but to warn you just what fighting causes, it can create scars that can sometimes never fully heal” said her father.

“Do you understand what I am telling you Diver?” asked Ruphus.
Diver nodded silently.

“Trough will make amends, I am sure but only when he is ready, he doesn’t need any further pain to torment him today” finished Ruphus.

“Okay” sighed Diver “But I’m still not happy with him” she said as she moved away to have her breakfast.

“Hey Ducky, Spike” Ducky and Ruphus looked up to see The Gang arriving, Ali and Shorty joined them and Ruby and Chomper had just coming back from having breakfast which they agreed to have away from Ducky’s family so they wouldn’t be too grossed out or scared by their eating habits. They all looked a little apprehensive considering what happened the other day and how that affected Ducky and Spike, they just wanted to see if they were okay.

“Hello everyone” said Ducky in a more cheerful voice, though she still looked rather drained as she had since she lost Bluey though the pain wasn’t crippling anymore but it was still there and coupled with her physical injuries that she gained doing The True Trial. Spike gave out a friendly, welcoming call to them.  

“You okay?” asked Littlefoot, looking closely at his injured friend.

“I think so” replied Ducky.

“We so sorry about what happen yesterday” said Petrie as he landed down beside Ducky.

“We know she was close to you” said Cera sadly, she had an understanding expression on her face. She knew what it was like to lose family but unlike Littlefoot, Ruby and now Ducky and Spike she had the luxury of not having watched those she cared about die in front of her, sure she had seen close calls and she had lost a large portion of her family including her mother and clutch mates but she never saw them die. However, Cera was still not going to let that tiny detail stop her from doing her best to help Ducky get through the resulting aftermath.

The friends took up places around Ducky under the watchful eye of Ruphus, no one said anything but they shared comfort in just that they were all alive and all together to look out for each other as they always had. “Ducky,” said Littlefoot. Everyone looked at him. “Yesterday I never got the chance to say thank you for saving my neck”

“Literally” added Cera, earning an annoyed roll of Littlefoot’s eyes in response.

“You are welcome” said Ducky with a smile “and I would never let anyone hurt any of you if I could”

Littlefoot returned her smile. “So, how’s your leg?”  

“A bit better, it is not as bad as before but it still hurts” said Ducky as she rubbed the bandaged area gently.

“You’ll be right as rain soon Ducky” said her father “You just got to take care not to overexert yourself and to be careful, your leg will heal in good time but until your ribs heals then you must not push yourself”

“I know Daddy” said Ducky.

“How long will it take for her Ducky to feel better?” asked Ali.

“Well,” said Ruphus thoughtfully scratching his chin “Ducky would probably be back on her feet in a week or two but her ribs could take a couple of cycles of the night circle to heal and until then she won’t be able to join in big games or she could end up even worse” said Ruphus in calm thoughtfulness. Ducky let out a sad sigh which everyone noticed, there was no doubt that Ducky did not want to remain static for that long but she knew she had to if she wanted to heal properly.

“Hey, don’t worry,” said Cera when she saw Ducky gave her a glum look “We’ll come by everyday so you won’t get bored” said Cera which was met with nods and affirmations from the rest of The Gang.

“and don’t forget you’ll have us”

Everyone turned to see Spinner and a few of his younger siblings approaching. Ruphus couldn’t help but smile, it appeared that Ducky would have both the support of her friends and family while she recovered however when he looked up he saw Sura nearby, she gestured with her head to follow. Wondering what his mate wanted to talk about Ruphus got to his feet and after a short parting with the children he walked over to Sura.

“What is it dear?” he asked.

“Come, we have to talk”


*


The bushes rustled loudly, Trough opened his eyes at this sudden disturbance, he was laying on his back, half submerged in the secluded lagoon that he had happened across. He had been here for a couple of hours trying to reign some control over his berserk feelings, he could not get the image of Bluey slipping away in her final moments and he could not forget how harsh he had acted towards his best friend, Ducky last night.

Suddenly the bushes and foliage on the edge of the clearing was pushed aside and a large female club tail with a small child on her back walked into the clearing followed closely by a green female Swimmer with three of her children in her arms, all of whom appeared to be toddlers.    

Trough sighed inwardly, the last thing he wanted was company, especially the company of the ësmall tails’ and the club tail. None of them would understand what he was feeling and seeing children only reminded Trough that Bluey had never gotten the chance to be the mother she wanted to be and that her only child would be orphaned before they even hatched.

He thought that there was no point in hanging around here and was about to get up when the mother Swimmer addressed him “Hi there little one, I haven’t seen you around before” she said in a friendly voice causing Trough to cringe slightly, it seemed that he was stuck here for now.

“That’s because I only got here yesterday” he replied glumly.

“Ah, so you live in a migrating herd,” reasoned the mother Swimmer “Funny, I didn’t expect any herds to arrive at this time” she said as she lowered her young ones into the water where they began to play and splash at each other. Their mother lowered herself into the water as well. While the two Clubtails took a drink at the bank.

“No herd arrived here yesterday, I came here with Ducky and everyone else” said Trough. He noticed the adult’s eyes widen in surprise.

“So, she’s back with her Sura is she?” she questioned to which Trough nodded. She gave him a warm smile “Well, perhaps you should go play with her, you look a little glum today”

“Glum is an understatement” thought Trough sadly. “Like she’d what to see me again, I already caused her enough pain yesterday” he said miserably as he watched the small Clubtail child try to join in the games the young Swimmers were playing. Trough had to admit that he had never seen that type of behaviour in The Mysterious Beyond.

The adult Swimmer frowned when he said that. “What’s your name dear” she asked.

“Trough”

“That’s a nice name, you can call Elly” said the adult Swimmer.

“Mommy can he play with us” said one of the smaller boy Swimmers, pointing eagerly at Trough.

“Only if he wants too dears” said their mother who turned to Trough and looked at him closely “and right now I don’t think he is feeling like playing are you?” she asked him. Trough shook his head solemnly while the children groaned but they went back to their playing and thankfully did not bother Trough.

“What’s the matter Trough? You really don’t look to good?” asked Elly in passionate concern. Her voice was a still too soft for his liking, she was obviously used to addressing her much younger children in this tone but Trough didn’t really care about that now.

He let out a long sigh “I messed up real bad” he said sounding deflated and exhausted.

“How so?”

Trough bent his head in shame “I yelled at Ducky last night I told that he never truly loved her aunt when I know she really did” he said looking up and seeing a frown directed at him form the adult.

“That does sound uncalled for,” said Elly calmly but her tone was very disapproving. “Why did you do that?” There is was the question that he didn’t want to answer but he knew he had to get his feelings out now.

A tear fell into the water sending a single ripple outward towards the playing children. “Yesterday on the way to The Great Valley and Red Claw and his Fast Biters ambushed us, my oldest friend Bluey, Ducky’s aunt, she died in right front of us” he said bitterly.

Elly was staring at Trough with a pained expression, she knew how he was feeling but she could only imagine how bad it would have been for Sura and Ducky after Trough shouted at her, that would be a major blow to her emotions. This was something that had to be mended. “You really should try and apologise to her, she would’ve taken that pretty badly” she advised.

“Like sorry will make up for anything, I accused Ducky of being heartless, she’ll never accept it” said Trough sounding even more miserable and downcast.

“How long have you known Ducky?” asked Elly curiously.

“Not Long,” he admitted “I met her shortly before The Killer Storm hit” said Trough.

“Then I think I should clear up a few details Trough because you seem to have the wrong impression, Ducky is a very forgiving child, she’s known for seeing the good in the worst of dinosaurs and if she can forgive a Flyer for kidnapping her and putting her life in danger then I assure you that she will be able to forgive you” said Elly, whose words suddenly seemed to give Trough new hope, this was a dinosaur who knew Ducky well and if she thought that he could make up with Ducky then he would try.

“Thanks Elly, I’ll try” said Trough giving Elly a thankful smile.

“Always glad to help out” said Elly. Trough turned to leave but Elly called him one last time, he turned to face her sympathetic face “I’m sorry about what happened to your friend, to Ducky’s aunt.” Trough looked down again. “Just promise me that you and Ducky will reconcile and help each other to get through this”

Trough smiled and nodded his head feeling suddenly determined. “I promise” Was the last thing he said as he took his leave and headed back to find his best friend.


*


“So, you’ve actually seen it?” asked Sura in fear and awe.

“Yeah and Littlefoot, Cera, Petrie, Spike and Ali saw it too” said Ruphus.

“Well then there is no doubt that there is a Swimming Sharptooth in The Crescent Caves” said Sura after her mate just confirmed her worst fears.

“This shouldn’t be” said Grandma Swimmer.

The four Swimmers including Cyrest, Ruphus, Sura and her mother all stood in a circle in one of the caves of The Secret Caverns. It was Ruphus idea since Chomper and Ruby largely slept with them now and hence would not be in the caves and since no one else ever came along made it the best place to have a conversation without being overheard or spied upon.

“If we tell everyone then they’ll have to stop it, no one would make a child go up against a Swimming Sharptooth” said Cyrest hopefully.

“Maybe but is proof that you’ve seen it enough?” asked Grandma Swimmer.

“What do you mean?” asked Cyrest.

Sura butted in with a frightening fact. “There are about twenty five families of Swimmers here and five of which not including mine have children but two thirds of these families are traditionalists who are probably loyal to Sculra and she will not believe and deny any proof we give short of dragging The Swimming Sharptooth out by its tail and so far all attempts to capture it have failed and I think it’s because it knows we are onto it and besides I’m already sure she knows about this so trying to convince her is out of the question” said Sura thoughtfully.

“But what about the other families, surly they will help us?” asked Grandma Swimmer who was shocked at the situation, their standing was not favourable.

Sura shook her head and Ruphus answered. “They fear Sculra, she has already threatened to kill them off should they oppose her, only two families are brave enough to go further and even they will only go so far, we should try convincing those two families to stop The Trial first but we have to make sure that Sculra doesn’t find out about this” he said.

“What a bleak outlook,” said Cyrest dully “At least Sculra is dealt with for now, stuck in her own hidey hole”

“Don’t be so sure,” said Ruphus firmly “If she can co-ordinate attacks from here then I would guess that she has simply moved to a different place to hide out till the Trials and that means that she could be anywhere, hell she might even be listening to us as we speak”

Everyone tensed at his words and looked around the cave they were in. It was deep in The Secret Caverns where little light penetrated, there was no rocks to hide behind and stalactites and hung from the ceiling but there were three dark passages that led to who knows where and all of a sudden, they and every shadow appeared to be more menacing, as if they themselves were listening. It chilled everyone to the bone and for a minute silence reigned as they looked around the cave and the dark passages nervously as if an attack would come from them at any moment.

“This is just scary” said Grandma Swimmer after a long silence then she looked at Ruphus “I agree,” she said to him. “We’ll start with families that are sure we can trust and get them to side with us and we can try that with our herd when it gets here, many of them are opposed to the idea of The Trial and the more voices the better” she said hopefully.

“It’s a good plan but we are forgetting that it’s the judges we need to convince and Sculra is one of them due to her running of The Trial and they might be on her side but they must listen if everyone protests at once they might have to stop it” said Cyrest.

“If only we knew who the judges are then we might have a better chance, if we sway them then we will stop The Trial” said Sura.

Everyone nodded then Cyrest cleared his throat and spoke formally “And in the meantime, we need to teach Ducky how to outmanoeuvre a Swimming Sharptooth, everyone should help, soon we’ll have a whole list of manoeuvres we can teach her, it’s the only thing we need to do now to prepare her for The Trial of Destiny, just in case it does go ahead.”

Everyone nodded in agreement “Your right Cyrest” said Sura “But we must wait till Ducky is fully recovered before we begin” said Sura. “Now let’s go, our children will probably be wondering where we are”

The four adults took their leave a little more confident that they could stop The Trial before it began.


*


It wasn’t with a warm reception that Trough finally arrived back at Ducky’s home. Many of her siblings regarded him with cold looks which seemed to be even colder and angrier with the older siblings. However, Trough made his way through quickly and silently as he now realised that the whole nest knew somehow, either they were told or they heard what he had said last night, that made him feel even for uncomfortable and ashamed. He had denounced Ducky in front of all her family and by the looks on their faces he could tell they wanted him to pay and unlike with the bullies of his herd they all had a legitimate reason to beat his sorry backside to a pulp.

When he got in sight of Ducky though who was surrounded by her friends who all turned to look with him with a mixture of looks and none of them to Trough were favourable looks either and Diver who was at the water’s edge when she caught sight of him looked seething mad which did nothing to lighten Trough’s spirit’s, out of all of them he was not sure who looked worse. Cera, Diver, Chomper or Shorty who looked mad at him and he would not want to get in the way of any of them.

Ducky however did not have any look of anger, but he could clearly see the apprehensiveness and the hurt he had caused on her face. He regarded her with a sorrowful look and sat on his knees in front of her and held her hand gently, he looked deep into her eyes and she into his. Taking a deep breath Trough finally said what he should have ages ago” I’m so sorry Ducky, I never should have yelled at you when you were just as hurt as I was and I was wrong to think that. I’m so sorry” he said quietly.

Ducky looked at him closely then all of a sudden, she flung her arms around him and let out a single sob and whispered. “I know and I forgive you, thank you Trough” she said. Those words caused Trough to smile and return her embrace and for the first time since Bluey’s death he actually felt warm again. He had no doubt that Bluey would have be pleased to see him and her niece get back together again.

They broke off each other, finally content but that was broken almost a second later.

SLAP!

“Ow!” cried Trough as Diver, appearing to come out of nowhere and slap him in the face. Trough rubbed his hand onto his red right cheek. “I guess I deserved that” he said.

“Your damn right you did!” said Diver firmly.

“Diver!” exclaimed Ducky “Dad told-ed you not to hurt Trough he did, he did” said Ducky reproachfully.

“I know but he still deserved that and it’s not like I hurt him that bad” replied Diver angrily.

“That is very mean Diver” said Ducky firmly but Trough looked down sadly.

“It’s okay Ducky, Diver was right to do that after I acted so mean and selfish to you” said Trough, still rubbing his cheek. “But I’ll be fine” he said reassuringly.

“Well, I’m glad to see you two have sorted out your little problem”

Everyone turned to see the rest of The Grown Ups arrive, Merri was left at the nest while they went off someplace and they had arrived back in time to see all that had passed between the young ones. “Mom, Dad” said Ducky in surprise.

Sura walked back to her spot beside her eggs, next to Ducky. “Yes dear, I’m happy to see you two together again and considering that everyone knew what happened I’m surprised he only got a slap on the face” she chuckled.  

Trough looked a little alarmed but Ruphus gave him a reassuring wink that seemed to say “I took care of that so don’t worry”

“Now Ducky I want you to know that once you are all better you will start practicing Sharpooth manoeuvres” said Cyrest. Ducky nodded and Diver piped up.

“Can I join in too?” she asked excitedly.

“I’m afraid not Diver” said her mother.

“But I want to try! Ducky can so why can’t I” pouted Diver angrily stomping her foot.

“It’s the fact that you are not meant to know these manoeuvres till your older, having only Ducky know them means less chance of being discovered in The Trial because using such techniques could be seen as cheating and have bad consequences for us all” explained Sura.

“I hope you understand that as well Ducky,” said Ruphus “You understand that during all The Trials except for The Trial of Destiny you must not use any of the advanced skills you’ve been taught, it would mean big trouble for us all if you were discovered” Ducky nodded, understanding exactly what her father was telling her but that meant that she would not be able to use her full strength while doing The Trials even when some of her new skills were now starting to become unconscious habit now.

With that said everyone moved to the other activities but she was keen to know how her family had been in her absence. “Echo?” she called when she saw him standing nearby watching, he was quick to come to her side  

“Hey sis, you feeling alright?” he asked in his friendly voice that Ducky hadn’t known she had missed.

“I am fine now Echo I am, I am but what about our family? How are they?” asked Ducky.

“Well,” said Echo, considering all that had happened. “You already know how Diver is and you’ve seen how…ah…annoyed Rapid is about his leg” That was putting it rather lightly, Rapid was angry and miserable about having a broken leg which would heal only after Ducky could walk again but it would at least be fit for use before Ducky’s ribs healed.

“Oh, and Sandy made a new masterpiece while you were away” said Echo.

“Masterpiece?” asked Trough in confusion.

Ducky looked curious. “What is it?” She asked.

“It was of you, mom, Diver and Spike in colour arriving back home” said Echo.
Ducky’s mouth was open, she obviously very touched but Trough still looked confused. “You wanna see it?” asked Echo.

“Oh yes, yes, yes Echo, please” came Ducky’s enthusiastic response that made both boys think that she would get up on her own to legs again but alas she was far from that stage so Spike helped her onto his back and he with Trough and Echo headed off. Echo, Spike and Ducky both knew the path to Sandy’s Rock and Trough followed closely behind. When they arrived Ducky’s and Trough’s beaks looked like they were going to touch the ground as well as Spike’s mouth.

In front of them on the sand was the picture that Sandy had so dedicated herself to creating. It was a coloured with ochre from trees and the detail on it just stunned Trough as to how life like Ducky, Spike, Diver and their mother looked in the pic. He found himself in awe he never ever saw anything like it nor did he know anyone capable of such a stunning picture. Ducky and Spike however were not stunned by Sandy’s skill, they had seen it countless times, it was the picture itself that touched both of them, it represented what their return could’ve, should’ve been like. Of course, Bluey and Grandma Swimmer were missing but Sandy had never seen them and the drawing she created was still amazing.

“It is beautiful it is, it is” said Ducky as she wiped a tear from her eye.

“How did? Who?” said Trough in amazement.

“Do you like it?” asked another female voice behind them.

They all turned to see Sandy standing behind them with a wide smile on her face. “Sandy, it is amazing” said Ducky. Spike nodded in agreement.

“But what did you? How?” asked Trough, completely struck dumb.

“I drew it,” explained Sandy “With a stick and used some tree ochre to colour it” To a still astonished Trough.

“Suggestion” said Echo to Trough “Don’t get in a drawing contest with Diver, she’s to well-practised in this art” Trough couldn’t help but agree with Echo statement, he had never seen anyone able to create such a beautiful and life like drawing.

Both boys nearly stumbled as Ducky almost fell to the ground, having leaned over to far on Spike’s back, Echo and Trough were both quick to help her back onto his back properly “Let’s get you back to your spot Ducky” said Echo and guided her back to her sleeping spot where Ducky was laid back down on her belly with a sharp grimace even with Spike doing it as gently as he could.

“You alright” asked Sandy in concern.

“I will be fine” said Ducky reassuringly, though she still felt a strong pain up her leg and her chest was aching badly and she felt a little short on breath, now she understood why she couldn’t engage in active play, it would probably be the death of her. “How are Spinner and Ray and Opal” asked Ducky.

“Spinner’s been the same as ever, still stuck on his ëhopeless’ case” said Sandy, referring to Spinner’s endless failed attempts of trying to create a whirlpool by swimming in circles very fast.

“A hopeless case that you helped him with,” said Echo to Ducky’s surprise. “And I have never seen you dizzier in my life, you couldn’t even raise you head” he laughed. Sandy folded her arms and looked away annoyed. Ducky and Spike both chuckled under their breath at the thought.

“Anyway,” said Echo “Spinner was actually taking on some of Diver’s tasks when she was away. Ray is training and worrying about The Trials so much that he almost had a nervous breakdown after he strained his leg after he overworked himself.” Ducky looked a little worried, Ray couldn’t swim as readily as any of his clutch mates due to the massive scar on his leg which he received many years ago in The Mysterious Beyond when he was a ësmall tail’ he fell into the fast water and had it cut open on the rocks, since that day he never was able to swim as well as the others and he was always worried when his leg was involved.

“He’s okay though?” Ducky asked.

“Yeah, he’s fine, just glad to have you back” said Sandy.

“and Opal?”

Echo and Sandy stopped and looked a little worried, something that made Ducky and Trough exchange concerned looks.

“Opal has been rather…. Closed” said Echo finally.

Ducky was now very concerned, she and Spike shared a worried look. Opal was very usually very open and social and quite the opposite of closed but considering the stress that she and her siblings were being put under…

“How so?”

“She stays away from home for ages and no one sees her except in the mornings and evenings and even than she’s not herself” said Sandy sadly.

“She’s very subdued and sad, probably about your Trial and having you and mom gone” said Echo.

“Has she been seen today?” asked Littlefoot.

His sudden inquiry caused all the Swimmers and Spike to jump, they had almost forgotten that The Gang was here with them.

“Yeah, but she’s already disappeared” said Echo once he got over the shock.

“Perhaps I could help find her?” asked Chomper but Echo shook his head.

“She heads out into the water and I don’t think your sniffer works underwater Chomper” said Echo glumly. Ducky gasped beside him.

“Mine can,” said Ducky “I could find her”

“Oh, no way Ducky” said Ruby with a shake of her head.

“Ducky you to hurt to go for swim” said Petrie.

Ducky sighed, she knew they were right but it didn’t make her feel any better about Opal, she resolved to talk to her when she got back home. The rest of the day passed quietly for Ducky, the game they played was the cloud shape game but she didn’t care to much for games, she just glad to have her friends company, she just wished Bluey could be here and that her recovery would not take so long.


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Night Time in The Mysterious Beyond

Dried blood and bones lay scattered over a small area in the desert lands outside The Great Valley, these bones were all that was left of poor Bluey after she was killed. There was no more flesh left, all of it was eaten and gone, many of her bones had also been devoured by Red Claw and all the eggs that she had manages to produce were gone, yolk and shells still lay about her bones. The gruesome picture was illuminated by the subtle light of star and moon which provided plenty of light to navigate the barren wasteland. Nearby the bones came the loud snores of Red Claw, Screech and Thud as they slept off their meal, they were the only sound that could be heard but that was short lived.

A large black shadow appeared over the oblivious Sharpteeth, looking like a monster of the night intent on tearing them apart but this was a monster of a different kind “Get up!” ordered a firm voice in Sharptooth that made every Sharptooth jump out of sleep to see the same Swimmer that had tipped them off about the herd above them. “Only one kill? I expected better from you, Sharptooth would have done better” she growled.

“Maybe it’s because you didn’t mention that there’d be a full grown male Longneck with them” growled Red Claw in retort.

The Swimmer looked a little taken aback, she obviously didn’t expect this “I’ll admit that I didn’t know of his presence” she said.

Screech’s eyes narrowed. “Did you ask any other Fast Biters to attack them?” he asked eying her suspiciously.

“Of course not, why?” replied the Swimmer disgruntledly.

“Because there was another Fast Biter that attacked them and singled out that Swimmer you didn’t want us to kill” explained Screech to the surprised Swimmer.

“And who did you kill?” she asked.

“I killed one of the close relatives of that Swimmer you told us not to kill and she was pregnant too” said Red Claw boastfully.

The Swimmer’s expression remained stern but the scent coming off her was one of satisfaction. It was very unnerving. “I suppose you’ve done enough for me to uphold my side of the bargain” She said.

“Yes, so tell us where is this secret entrance?” questioned Red Claw who couldn’t keep his eagerness hidden.

“On the North-Eastern corner of The Valley which might seem unpassable but there is a pathway undefended in that area that leads into the Valley. You’ll find the entrance behind a large amount of tall grass that only grows in that region then when you get through that, there the path will be but be warned it has an illusion behind it that makes it look like a solid rock wall. The path leads into The Badlands of The Great Valley where nobody goes, it is the perfect place to strike out from” explained the Swimmer.

Red Claw grinned madly, he could almost taste the blood on his lips, soon he’ll have those kids and so much more. He would become The Terror of The Great Valley.

“Well, now that you know that I will take my leave” said The Swimmer and left without another word, she didn’t tell them of course that The Badlands were a labyrinth in their own right but she was sure that the Sharpteeth would eventually find their way through.  

The Sharpteeth watched the lone Swimmer leave until she was out of sight however they did not notice a pair of yellow eyes that had been watching the whole exchange from behind a rock in the distance. Red Claw yawned. “Tomorrow we head to the secret entrance” he said to Screech and Thud. He rested his head on the ground and went back to sleep almost immediately, dreaming of the taste of blood and the feast that he so longed for. “I will be The Terror of The Great Valley”

If Red Claw had actually not gone back to sleep he would’ve noticed that Screech and Thud were both still awake, they were both covered from head to tail in gashes, bites and bruises. Swimmers may not look like much but their tails could still deliver a powerful blow and their bite was certainly worse than there bark, not as deadly as a Sharptooth but the thought of a Swimmer’s teeth actually being sharp instead of flat was enough to make any Sharptooth cringe at the thought of having thousands of small sharp teeth piecing them. Thankfully for both Screech and Thud they only had a couple of bites between them, it was the bruises that were the worst, bruises the size of eggs, sometimes larger.

“That Swimmer freaks me out” said Thud, finally breaking the silence between them.

Screech looking out towards The Valley grimly. “Yeah, I wonder what her game is and how she learned to deal with our kind”

“Whatever it is I’d rather not be a part in it, she’s using us and Red Claw is too blinded to see that” said Thud “And what is the deal with that Fast Biter we saw?” he asked, there was more going on here them meets the eye and the fact that he didn’t know what was going on was enough to make both him and Screech nervous and take cautious steps.

“I don’t know but I’ll tell you what I do know…my body is killing me” Screech let out a pained growl as he held his hand to a huge bruise on his chest that was covered by a long leaf that they had been fortunate to find, it was the only one they found and since Screech took a blow to the chest when he was kicked they both thought it better for him to have it. It was also over his largest cut but Thud noticed it was not held in the right place, it was all droopy as if it was holding something.

“Your right about that, so is mine” he said as he walked over to Screech. “The leaf is out of place” said Thud and was about to adjust its position properly but Screech reacted quickly, trying to jerk away but as he did so something fell out of the leaf and onto the ground.

Screech looked shocked and Thud stared at the object with surprise and confusion.

The object was in fact two objects, a torn piece of light blue flesh with blood over half of its surface and beside it, a small, white egg. A Swimmer egg.      







Well this was chapter was a long time in the works, I had to battle my first real case of writers block to get through it as well as usual Uni and other life pressures. Anyway, all reviews are appreciated and hope the chapter was good enough.  
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It's good to see that the rift between Ducky and Trough has been resolved. :) I really enjoyed the scenes with Through contemplating his actions and trying to reconcile his feelings with the eventual apology. Especially the scene between him and Elly worked really well as it provided comfort to Trough while also opening some kind of relationship between him and the other swimmers of the Valley. Also, the argument between Ducky's siblings was nice to read and they deepened the struggle to accept Trough among them even after the unfortunate outburst. I wonder, though, is it mandatory for Sculra to wait for Ducky's recovery before starting the Trial? I doubt even his most hardcore followers would deem sending an injured swimmer to the Trial. :p

The scene of apology itself however, was a rather quick one. We know that Ducky is quick to forgive but perhaps there should have been some dialogue between the two before the forgiving. For now, it seemed like a brief closure to this event. The aftermath of that scene was rather sweet and it's still nice to see that Trough is accepted by Ducky's family.

As for the Trial, I'll look forward to seeing how you'll handle the herd politics. They are without a doubt an important part of ending Sculra's authority and it'll be interesting to see which way you'll take in resolving them. Also, I cannot help but get the feeling that Red Claw and the others will play a large part in Sculra's (probable) downfall.