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LBT Hatchling Series

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Hi all, anyway I have decided to write the hatch days of our Gang, based on the ideas posed in The LBT authors Q&A, started a couple of days ago in a power outage to keep from getting bored and now I want to finish the series. This series will focus on each of The main character's first days as a hatchling. I might do 2-3 days for each character or just their hatching days. However I would to be advised if anyone wants me to write more then a day after I have finished writing.

The series will go in order of age (or at least my thoughts on age so the order will be:

Ducky
Ruby
Cera
Littlefoot
Petrie
Spike
Chomper

Also word of warning this story will show newborn hatchlings relieving themselves at some points, also in terms of Ducky's siblings and parents from the first story I'll be using my OC's from The Swimmer Trials. Anyway hope you enjoy the first story of the series. Oh and please don't forget to post any feedback or constructive criticism you might have. Thank you.

Here's there first story.
         


LBT Hatchling Series: Story 1

Ducky’s First Day    

She opened her eyes and yawned, she felt tired as if she had only just woken up from a deep sleep but that drowsiness did not last long as she was confronted by so many things, well it was actually rather familiar to her now, the constant rhythmic beating noise that was actually her heart that felt every one of her waking hours. The warm gooey substance that she was bathed in, that felt really soft on the skin, it was actually a pleasant feeling for her and it didn’t taste too bad so when she was hungry she’d just slurp it down her throat. The same warm smell of mucus and yolk was present in the air and the sight was the same as it had always been. A smooth, hard barrier that her whole body was encased it, however she could see the light outside it whenever she was awake and every now and then a shadow would be cast down over the barrier but usually it was unrecognisable and there were some occasions were all she could see was black and no light at all, those times always made her shiver in fright as she didn’t like the dark. Through the dim light that penetrated the barrier she could see herself or at least some of herself, her legs, arms, the whole front of her body and tail but she could not see her own head or back, they were a light green colour and whenever she would touch the barrier or some new part of herself she’d squeak in excitement especially when she was feeling her head with her hands, she could feel her beak and nose and crest when she did that.

The sounds that she perceived were the most different, she could hear her own voice and knew that was her but sometimes she would hear another squeaks that sounded similar to hers and it aroused her curiosity, she’d wag her tail with excitement and notice how her hole small world would wobble, she did that every now and then as she really liked how it felt. But what really aroused her curiosity was the sounds outside the barrier, if there even was an outside. The sounds were now rather familiar to her now and comforting, the sound of flowing water, the blowing of a wind but what would make her feel best was when she heard the deeper but soft voice of something big and that really made her curious and excited. Sometimes the sound was excited, sometimes there was more than one, one was soft, the other was deep but no less gentle. However, it was the soothing humming noises and the occasional song from the soft voice that she really loved, it made her feel very happy and completely safe, whenever she heard that voice she would always place her ear to the edge of the barrier so she could hear the sound better. She had been in here for so long now that she had actually been contemplating what to call her but she had no knowledge of words or language but there was one instinctual sound that came to mind and she said it slowly, in a whisper in different ways until it rolled off her tongue easily and just saying that word would make her feel comforted and sometimes her small world be gently nudged or nuzzled but something unknown but the gentle voice outside reassured her that everything was okay.

However, if there was one thing that she did not like about her small world was that she could not stretch out her legs or tail or hands and neck, she just stayed in a tightly curled ball all the time, she wondered of her world was getting smaller because it felt like there was less room in it each day and when she closed her eyes and slept she would sleep for ages until she woke again. Finally, however as her tiny world was gently nuzzled again and the gentle hum the she had come to love so much was heard right above her she couldn’t take it anymore. She wanted out, seeing her feet in front of her she started shaking her body as hard as she could and hitting the edges of her little world as hard as her strength of her tiny body allowed her. She kicked out at the bottom of her world with her legs again and again, trying desperately to get through the barrier, she squeaked loudly in frustration, the voices outside became hushed and excited as if a special event was about to take place, but she didn’t care at that moment she wanted to get and see the noise makers and any other new thing that might be out there.

Finally, after so much kicking she gave one last powerful kick and suddenly with a loud ëCrack!’ both her feet went through the barrier. She was instantly assaulted by bright light that made her feel warm and extremely excited. She tried to squeeze her beak through the gaps but instead hit the barrier between her legs, she pushed at it with her head and felt the barrier bending, her heart was beating with excitement as she finally burst her head through the barrier and onto the other side. The light momentarily blinded her so she closed her eyes, when she opened them slowly her vision was a little blurred as she was not used to seeing in this kind of light. She stretched her tail out and felt it break through the other end of her egg. She was hardly aware of the seven other eggs that were now rocking around beside her as she caught sight of a little flying thing that hovered in the air above her head, maybe that is what made all the gentle noises while she was inside the egg. She reached out to the strange creature with both of her tiny arms extended and opened her mouth wide in a quiet squeak. However, she stretched herself out way too far and began rolling down the slope of the nest, still half trapped in her egg.

She stopped on a small pile of dust and squeaked cutely as the little flying creature made its way over her again she reached out her arms but her egg was still spinning on the spot and she couldn’t keep her balance she gently fell onto the soft ground looking mildly annoyed. Then she felt a little stinging spot on her head as the mosquito bit her. She did not like the feel and with a little struggling she righted herself and charged after the little annoying flying thing, that did not make lovely noises but instead made stinging feelings. She hopped after the little creature as fast as her egg would allow, through a hollow log and out the other end but there was a short drop on the other side and as she fell to the ground the egg shattered beneath her, freeing her entire body. It was a new sensation to finally be in the open and not cramped up inside her egg and as much as she liked being in her small little world, she liked being outside it even more.

There was a small rustle as she caught sight of another strange creature, a small furry thing with four legs and long white thin stickily things sticking out of the side of its face (whiskers) and it had not noticed her. Jumping up onto a small stick pointing diagonally out of the ground, she looked down upon the creature with intense curiosity, it was not making the same noises she heard in the egg but it did look nice. Her tail wagged with excitement as she pounced onto the furry things soft back however she fell off as the furry creature took flight but she pushed herself up and remembering how she was like, as she hopped in the egg, she placed one foot in front of the other instinctually and she did it as fast as she could so that she was running almost as fast and she loved the experience.

However, her run was not to last as she didn’t really know how to turn so while the rat skidded past a large foot she went straight into it, but not so hard that it hurt, she fell on her tail and looked around, her vision was no longer blurry and she could see so many things that were completely new to her. Suddenly there was a large movement right next to her as a large creature with a smooth, but hard back and an ugly snout looked down at her and opened his mouth in front of her.

She was curious at the opening and wondered what was inside and whether this thing wanted her to go inside, so she got to her feet and started to climb into the snapping turtle’s mouth, she put her hands on the slimy tongue and felt the rasp of warm breath coming up to meet her nose as she gazed into the depths of his maw, not knowing that she was in mortal danger. Then all of a sudden she felt something close down on her tail and the next second everything was rushing backwards as the turtle snapped his jaws shut one second too late.

Now the little Swimmer was surprised she was dangling from her tail every high above the ground, from here she could see lots of things that she could not see before from her elevation, the river, and the reeds and lots more things but her chief interest was to what was holding onto her tail. She looked up and down and beheld a huge brown body, with two legs and a tail she looked up and saw a neck and the bottom of a large beak that was currently holding her tail, the massive creature had arms like hers too and had a warm feel to it. Then that was when she heard the creature sigh in relief and that’s when she realised that she recognised that voice, it was the voice that hummed to her in her small enclosed world. She immediately felt affection for this giant being and said the name that she had come up for her while she was still inside her small world. “Mama?” she asked.

She could not see her mother’s eyes widen in astonishment as she said that from her position but she did feel her move slowly, turning around and heading back the way she had come, what was a lot of steps for the little Swimmer was actually only a few steps for her mother. She came back to the nest and from her tiny daughter’s height she could see her father, the nest that was filled with her newly hatched brothers and sisters. She squeaked in excitement and wagged her tail, or at least tried to as she saw all these similar looking creatures. They looked up at her in equal curiosity as her mother slowly and carefully lowered herself to the ground and then placed her little one back into the nest with her siblings.

As she was placed in the nest she looked back and saw her mother’s loving face smiling back at her, then her dark green sister opened her beak next to her and she did the same, their beaks coming together with their mouths open for a short time. She was so excited and she really loved these small creatures that looked so much like her. Suddenly her mother pressed her muzzle beneath her chin and hummed warmly and she hummed with her contently, she loved her and she loved the new feeling of being nuzzled. Finally, her mother broke off and looked at her with an expression filled with the same unconditional love as her daughter had for nearly everything she rested her eyes upon.

“Hello, my little Ducky” she said to her and gave her a lick with her tongue causing Ducky to laugh as she experienced being tickled for the first time. She didn’t know what her mother had said but the words touched her heart and she loved her with all her heart as both her mother and father were now nuzzling her and her clutch mates. When she heard her father’s deep voice she knew who it was and lovingly hugged his beak and said the word that she had found for him “Dada” Her father’s eyes widened in astonishment while her mother smiled lovingly as they both nuzzled her. When they broke off Ducky looked around at her siblings with excitement and curiosity. She touched her identical twin Opal while her sister hugged her and she hugged back and the light brown Swimmer Echo was the first boy to touch her. He squeaked at her curiously but Ducky nuzzled him just as she had seen her parents do to her and Echo nuzzled her back, she loved him already, she loved her new family.

It was at that moment that Echo was lifted into his mother’s arms along with his dark brown brother Rapid and his sister Opal their mother took them to a small pond of crystal clear water and placed them all into the pond. They immediately started swimming and splashing around in the water in utter enjoyment.

Ducky and her other siblings. Her dark green sister. Her light green, mustard coloured brother. Her light yellow and red sister and her brown and aqua green brother who was a spitting image of his father, light brown on the back and an aqua green on his belly. All crowded close to the ridge of the nest overlooking their two brothers and sister. However, the red Swimmer had stretched herself out to far and suddenly found herself sliding down the slope of the nest and into the sand on the bank of the small pond.

The little hatchling squeaked in joy and started rolling around in the sand, getting it all stuck to her yolk covered body, of course Ducky’s body had some dust encrusted on it but it was nothing like her sister who was rolling around in the sand in joy.

“You’re a playful little girl aren’t you Sandy” said her mother and proceeded to lightly tickle her daughter’s belly with one of her fingers. Sandy burst into laughter as her body registered the tickling sensation, she held out her little arms to her mother and closed both her hands around one of her mother’s fingers. Her mother smiled warmly and hoisted her up and gently placed her into the water of the pond with her brothers and sister.

Suddenly there was a loud cry from the nest as the aqua green Swimmer rolled down the slope after sticking himself out to far. He rolled up into the air and splashed down into the water looking awfully dizzy but no less proud of himself for getting in the water. “Nice move Spinner” said his father as he nuzzled him contently before allowing his son to break off and play in the water with his siblings.

Next it was Ducky’s last two siblings the dark green girl and the light green, mustard boy to be taken out of the nest. The dark green girl was simply trembling with excitement, so much so that as her father arrived at the pond she leapt out of his hands and performed a perfectly straight dive that would have got her a 10/10 at the Olympics. “Diver, you little rascal” said her father, Ruphus as he scrubbed some excess sand off of Diver’s back then he brought the little boy in his arms to his mate. “What shall we name him?” he asked her.

His mate, Sura thought for a moment before nuzzling her little son “You’re my little Ray” she said in a loving voice, her son squeaked happily, enjoying the affection of his mother. She broke off and placed him in the water with his brothers and sisters and began to splash around happily. Now Ducky was the only one left in the nest.

She watched her siblings playing with excitement, she was practically jumping with excitement, she wanted join them, it looked so fun, she was about to run down the slope herself when another gentle voice caught her attention. “Hello little one” she turned to see her aunt for the first time, she was startled by how similar she looked to her mother but her voice was different to her mother but it was indeed familiar. Ducky got to her feet and ran up to her aunt, who was surprised at seeing Ducky running at that moment as newborn hatchlings didn’t run or talk really for that matter. However, she quickly returned Ducky’s hug by nuzzling her and placing a hand around her and hugging her to her beak. Ducky felt her aunt’s beak, it was smooth and warm under her hand and she loved how it felt when she was nuzzled.  

“That’s Ducky” said Sura to her almost identical twin sister, Merri as she had heard her arrive.

“Oh you are beautiful aren’t you” said Merri as she tickled Ducky’s belly with her finger. Ducky fell on her back and laughed like crazy, she coiled up and wagged her tail in a berserk fashion. She grabbed her aunt’s hands and held them, she smiled up with a look that conveyed utter love and innocence in its purest of forms. Her aunt lifted her into her arms and took her over to the pond and gently placed her in the water where Ducky began to swim, splash and play alongside her brothers and sisters contently.

The adults watched the newborns play with loving smiles on their faces. This was in no doubt the most precious moment that they had ever witnessed and they would treasure it for the rest of their lives. “They’re so beautiful aren’t they” stated Merri.

“Yes, yes they are” said Sura who was beaming in utter joy, she could hardly believe that she was now a mother and that Ruphus was now a father and one thing was for sure, that they would both die before they saw their beautiful little babies come to harm.

Ducky was having so much fun, while running required more of an effort swimming was felt completely effortless to her, she was completely at home in the water and found joy in the splashing games she played with her siblings. She didn’t realise how much time had passed but pretty soon she felt her throat becoming all dry and her stomach started doing something that she never expected; it started rumbling and it wasn’t just hers either but her other siblings as well. Ducky looked down at her belly curiously and touched it where she felt the rumbling, puzzling over the sound but with the sound came a feeling of emptiness, for the first time she was hungry.

She squeaked for attention and opened her mouth, in her little world she had a source of food but out here she didn’t know what to eat. Her siblings were also making similar gestures and squawks, this roused both their parents.

“Oh, sounds like they’re hungry” said Ruphus.

“Could you get me some of the river food Merri?” asked Sura, his sister nodded and walked off to the river while Sura took Ducky, Rapid, Spinner and Sandy in her arms. Ruphus took Opal, Echo, Diver and Ray and placed them back in the nest. Sura gave her little ones a gentle nuzzle while they were in her arms. Spinner held his arms out for more but his mother was already placing them down into the nest.

“Here you go Sura” said Merri handing some stands of aquatic plants that were completely drenched to her sister, they had been pulled from the river and would satisfy the hatchlings hunger and thirst.

Ruphus also took a mouthful of underwater green food and started munching on it in front of the kids while Sura held the first strand river weed in her right hand. “Alright little ones, now who’s hungry?” she asked as she placed the first strand down into the nest. Ducky walked up to the strand and sniffed it curiously, she saw her father eating the same stuff so this was definitely food. Sticking her tongue out Ducky licked the plant and gasped as her taste buds fired off, she really liked the taste and picked up the strand and out some in her mouth and started to chew.

Since hatchling Swimmers didn’t really have proper teeth developed until after the first two to three days, she took her time in eating the green food, swallowing the fluids it released and finally swallowing her meal. She noted that her stomach stopped rumbling and she felt much better but she still felt hungry and started to eat another strand while her siblings joined in, apparently motivated by their father and sister’s example.

Ducky opened her mouth wide when there were no more strands left and looked pleadingly at her mother and squeaked for more. “Okay little ones” said her mother and gave her children a second helping of the river weed. The children made short work of their meal and as Ducky finished her meal she looked where her father was getting some more of the underwater green food and with an excited squeak she jumped out of the nest and landed by the water’s edge, she heard her mother exclaim something but it hardly registered as she poked her head into the water and gazed around. The pond she had played in before was relatively featureless but the river was teeming with life, from plants and insects to larger fish. She gasped in amazement and swallowed a whole load of water. Ducky surfaced in surprise but the water felt good to drink so she took a few more gulps of water and noted how her once dry throat became nice and moist again and no longer hurt whenever she used her voice.

Ducky looked up and found her mother holding onto her tail just in case her daughter had decided to jump into the river. Her mother shook her head in a negative way. Ducky looked down, had she upset her mother? A tear appeared on her cheek, her mother brushed it off and gave her a gentle nuzzle which made Ducky feel much better as her mother picked her up and placed her back in the nest.

“She is going to be a handful” observed Ruphus.

“I know” said Sura “and I can’t believe she can already run and talk” she said in amazement.

Ruphus nodded in agreement. “We are going to have to keep an extra big eye on her” he said as he gazed back at the nest to see the siblings squeaking to each other and Ducky standing up and actually grabbing Echo’s hand and pulling him up onto his shaking feet, Echo squeaked in triumph, he wore a big smile on his face, however he quickly lost his balance and fell back on his tail.

“You might have to keep an eye on more than just one child Sura” warned Merri.

Sura however was smiling as Ducky tried to help her brother and sisters to stand and walk and while it was not working very well she couldn’t help but feel touched by Ducky’s actions. “Ducky is such helpful little one isn’t she?” she stated.

“And adventurous” added her mate.

“They are going to grow up to be fine young ones” said Sura as she nuzzled her mate. It was a yawn from Ducky that caught their attention, she had finally exhausted herself, she didn’t realise that most of her sibling were already drifting off to sleep. Her eyes felt droopy as well as heavy and she knew what would happen but this time she could finally rest her body out unlike when she was still inside her own little world. She lay on her belly next to her siblings and yawned again, looking very drowsy.

Her mother gently nuzzled her children and hummed a quiet calming tune to her little ones. Ducky smiled at the sound of her mother, a reassuring sign that she would always be with her. Ducky finally allowed her eyes to close taking her into a deep sleep.


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Sura couldn’t help but wonder if her mother, if all mothers felt like this when they watched their own children hatch, she had seen many hatchings before and they were all very special and she had babysat many of the kids in the herd to prepare herself for this day but there was something infinitely more special about seeing her own babies hatch, these were her own flesh and blood and they were more beautiful than anything she had ever seen. The love they showed was completely unconditional and Sura had rarely known anyone who could show that much love and even if they could show that much love, they still lacked the raw innocence of her newborns. Rupgus for example always showed her love but he was far from innocent having lost family members to Sharpteeth and having himself been in battle with sharpteeth on more than one occasion. That was why this hatching was so special because here she had kids in their purest state and it melted her heart with love. She resolved to be there for them, always and be the best parent she possibly could for them, for her children.    

Sura wasn’t aware of how much time had passed since her little ones fell asleep as she was hooked to their rhythmic breathing, Sandy shivered softly as she rolled on her back away from her siblings but Rapid nuzzled up to her side and she started sleeping soundly again. A tear of happiness fell down Sura’s eye when she saw that simple demonstration of compassion from her dear son. She felt like she could stay in this moment forever but no matter how much she wished that, time still continued to and fly by early afternoon just after The Bright Circle had reached its full height the little ones started to stir and wake up again.

Ducky opened her beak wide and yawned and slowly opened her eyes to see the nest and her siblings, it took only a second for her to realise that she was not in her small world as she had been the last time she had woken up but was instead in a whole new world filled with so much to see and do. She looked up at the blue sky and strained her eyes as a large yellow ball in the sky blazed overhead creating lots of light from its rays. She turned her head away as her eyes got a little sore and they fell on her mother.

“Mama!” she cried happily jumped to her feet.

If Sura was not sure that he daughter could speak before then she was sure now, there was no mistaking what Ducky had said and it made her feel very different, she had always been referred to by name but now she was referred to as a mother. It made for a real sense of achievement in her to finally had her own babies come into the world, they were hers to look after and she would not allow any challenge to stop her from being there for her children.

“Hello Ducky, sleep well?” she asked gently, she held out her finger which her daughter grabbed with both hands and nuzzled it contently, she looked up at her mother with wide eyes filled with compassion and an incredible curiosity. “She is so cute” thought Sura. She then saw her other children stir awake. She nuzzled each one gently and said their names as she did so, they all opened their mouths and gave another plead for food which their mother obliged too as well as filling a few tree stars with water for the children to drink.

After eating and drinking the babies started play with each other in the nest, this play mainly was just hand play or an occasional tumbling over each other and a little tickling. Sandy was tracing her finger through the dust of the nest in a whole lot of squiggles, she appeared to be really enjoying. Spinner and Ray were tumbling over each other in what like a game of tag in its infancy, they crawled around after each other and jumped on each other and gave each other a tickle. Opal and Diver were engaged with hand play, they grabbed small debris around the nest to look at it, they each took it in turns to touch every inch of each other and occasionally making a high five with the other. Echo was also curious he was scrutinizing everything he got his hands on with a powerful intensity, putting a rock up to his ears, tasting it and puzzling over what it was and what it was for. Ducky meanwhile was helping Rapid stand on his two legs. He gave a happy squeak when he finally stood without Ducky’s help.

His mother nuzzled him and he hugged her beak but after the contact was over he fell onto his belly and squeaked in frustration, pounding his little arms on the ground. Ducky hugged her brother as if it was the cure to all ailments.

She broke off and stood on her own two feet and noted her father on the other side of the nest giving Sandy a tickle. Ducky wanted to feel that too and took only a step forward when something very unexpected happened that made Ducky squeal in surprise and her siblings to gasp at her in startled shock and amazement.

Ducky looked down on the ground behind her and at her tail to see what looked to her like yellow water trickling into the nest but that was not what shocked her, it was the fact that the source of this phenomenon was herself, it was coming out of the opening in her tail. Ducky raised her tail in order to get a better look but in doing so accidentally getting her brothers Rapid and Echo wet. Echo looked very curious, this water actually felt much warmer then the water he had taken a drink from before, perhaps it tasted just as good too. Echo licked his hand which had a few drops of the yellow substance his sister was creating and spluttered in disgust, the taste was awful and Spinner evidently didn’t like the smell of it either as he put a hand over his nose so he could stop the smell.

“Oh dear” said their mother in alarm as Ducky wet the nest, the puddle expanded around the nest and engulfing her siblings and reducing the ground to mud and with Ducky holding up her tail her siblings were getting sprayed. “Tail down dear” she said and gently placed Ducky’s tail in a down position and held it there till Ducky was done.  

“Ruphus!” called Sura.

Her mate rushed to her side and saw what the trouble was, the nest was now a muddy bog. “What happened?” he asked.

“Ducky wet the nest” said Sura. They both exchanged a quick nod.

“Merri?!” called Sura to her sister who was currently on watch duty, because their nest was further away from the herd there was a constant watch for any Sharpteeth that might come around and just a few days ago one did. The Great Sharptooth himself and he had ravaged the herd, killing adults and children and destroying nests. Out of the fifteen nests that there were in the herd only three of them had survived including Sura’s.

Merri appeared from the bushes a short distance away. “What is it Sura?” she asked in concern.

“Could you dig a round scrape for the kids, this nest is not useable now” said Sura. Merri saw what Sura meant and started digging a shallow scrape in the ground, close to the nest. Meanwhile Sura and Ruphus lifted their little ones out of the muddy nest and into the pond and began to wash the children thoroughly as their feet were caked with the dark mud. Ducky allowed her mother to bathe her though she was looking at her tail all the time as if the yellow water would suddenly come out again. Her mother lifted her head up with her finger and said: “Don’t worry dear, everybody does it.”

Sura finished bathing the kids just as Merri finished digging the scrape for the hatchlings. Sura and Ruphus placed their children in the scrape. “We should have remembered to put the leaves on the bottom of the nest” said Ruphus, inwardly cursing his clumsiness. “Now we have to wait till the nest dry’s” he said sighed.

Sura nodded and looked down at the babies in the small scrape, looking curiously at their parents and the new scrape. However, it would take a repeat of the same mistake for the two new parents before they got it correct as Ducky suddenly felt something travel through her and instinctively pushed, relieving herself where she stood. “Oh no, not again” said Ruphus as the new scrape was quickly fouled by Ducky who was now gazing curiously at her own excrement, though she kept her distance because the unpleasant smell, while her siblings started wetting, she was amazed that these things came out of her and wondered what they were. However, she didn’t have much time for pondering as her parents took her and her siblings for another bath.  

This time after bathing the children there was no room to build another scrape and what’s worse was the dark clouds gathering from above them that signalled the coming of a storm. Sura placed her huge body beside her children, the ground beside her body was covered in leaves in case of anymore incidents it had already caused more than enough trouble today. Sura made sure that the leaves were dry so her children had no motivation to eat them. The children were huddling close to her belly where it felt warm and comfortable. Ducky even climbed up her mother’s tail and onto her back, she didn’t stay up there for too long before her father picked her up and gently nuzzled her.

“Oh little Ducky, you don’t want to fall of your mother back now do you” he said and gently placed her down with her siblings just as the first rains start to fall. Sky water was something completely new to the little ones and it astonished them, they gasped in awe at seeing water falling from the sky. Ducky gasped and looked up at the sky and immediately blinked as some sky water fell into her eyes, she wasn’t afraid of it, rather she was enchanted by the mystery of where the water was coming from. She hardly noticed the lightning flash in the distance but to her eyes the water seemed to be coming from the large dark puffy things floating in the sky. Another flash of lightning lit up the land, this time it was in plain sight of Ducky and her siblings and they gasped as the clouds were lit up with a light blue light however their fascination was quickly replaced by fear when the inevitable thunder that follows the lightning made itself known.

Ducky screamed and jumped in fright when she heard the thunder, there were also similar response’s from her siblings and suddenly the rain started pouring down on them. Sura quickly put a broad leaf over her frightened hatchlings so as to keep them warm and dry. Ducky latched onto the first person she was next to: Ray and he held tightly to her as they both shivered in fright. Ducky had no idea where the thunderous noise was coming from but it was huge and loud and it scared her. She ran up to her mother’s warm body and curled up in fright, she now recognised that the thunder followed the white flashes of light in the sky. She closed her eyes tightly and shivered, however when a large flash of lightning struck close by the rolling thunder was instant and deafening.

Ducky blocked her ears with her hands and screamed then she started to cry, she didn’t really care about the tears she was producing, she was just too scared. The reaction from her siblings mirrored her own as well. Sura wrapped her tail around her little ones and placed her head right next to the leaf and allowed her children to huddle, cuddle and hold onto her beak for comfort. Ducky quickly ran to her mother’s beak, embraced it and sobbed in fright. Her mother nuzzled her and all her little ones and started humming a calming tune to help keep her children from getting to scared and it worked a bit, her children noticeable calmed down.

Ducky was so relieved to hear her mother’s calming voice, it was a sign that she was right next to her and that she would be safe, she felt that her mother would protect her from any storm, as she was with them, she knew everything after all and Ducky trusted her completely. “Mama” she said gently and hugged her mother’s beak in thanks.

“I am here, little ones” said their mother in a soothing voice “and I will never leave you”

Ducky smiled, the storm no longer seemed frightening to her, as long as her mother was around and as if on cue the storm almost as quickly as it had begun suddenly ended, the clouds parted allowing The Bright Circle to shine down upon the land. Sura took the leaf off her little ones. Ducky smiled at the sight of The Bright Circle, she was sure her mother had made all those scary lights and noises go away, she hugged her beak in thanks and let out a content sigh.

Suddenly the ground jolted, small rocks were tossed around as the sound of footsteps approached and a short time later it was followed by a feminine voice. “Sura?! Ruphus?!”

”Is anybody there?!” called a much younger male voice.

Sura’s face brightened. “Over here guys!” she called.

A few seconds later a dark green adult female Swimmer appeared with a little light green boy of about five years old walking beside her, they both looked relieved to see her and Ruphus. However, because of the angle they could not see the babies looking curiously around for the source of the noise on the other side of Sura’s massive bulk.

“Hello Ellie and hello there little Elliot” said Sura to the two approaching Swimmers.

“Oh thank goodness” said Ellie in relief. “We haven’t heard from you since the attack” she explained.

“We were worried about you” said Elliot, he one of the children that Sura regularly babysat and he had grown rather fond of her. He was rather mature for his age having seen and been in situations that no youngling his age should see and he had survived Sharptooth’s attack.

“We’re fine dears” said Sura politely.

“How are the eggs?” asked Ellie.

“Well…” said Ruphus but he needn’t have explained anymore as Ducky made herself know, having located where the noise was coming from she jogged past her mother’s bulk and stopped next to her mother’s head in plain view of the newcomers whom she gazed at very inquisitively, she cocked her head to the side.

The newcomers however gasped at the sight of Ducky.

“Is she…?” asked Ellie letting the question hang in the air.

Sura smiled warmly at her “This is my little Ducky” she said and gestured for them to come closer. “Come around the other side and you can see the rest of my little ones”

Ellie nodded, looking delighted “I didn’t know you children were this old Sura” too which Sura laughed.

“They only hatched today dear” she chuckled.

Ellie looked surprised as she looked at Ducky “She must be very advanced for her age” she thought to herself as she walked around Sura’s bulk along with her son. It was there that she beheld the little hatchlings. Her heart melted on sight “Awwww, they’re so cute” she said sweetly “Hello little ones.”

Elliot smiled at seeing the children but then found Ducky walking up to him, she looked at little hesitant. She didn’t know who this was, she had not seen him before though and she wondered who it was and how it was that size. She sniffed him and touched his hand. “Hello” Elliot said in a voice softer then he was accustomed to using “I’m Elliot” he said, putting his hand on his chest. Ducky squeaked a welcome and suddenly hugged him before excitedly grabbed his hand and led him to her siblings before Elliot could do anything as he was still surprised about Ducky’s hug. The children all gathered Elliot, touching him and squeaking inquisitively to him.

“Wow, they are gorgeous” commented Ellie.

“Yes they are” agreed Ruphus who chuckled as Elliot was assaulted by the curious pokes and prods of his children.

“Feel like a swim Elliot?” he asked.

“Yes please” said Elliot in a respectable voice.

“Come alone little ones, Elliot’s going to swim with you” said Sura.

“Huh!?” said Elliot in surprise, suddenly taken back but it was too late to back out now as Sura moved her children into the pond. Elliot sighed. “Go on Elliot” said his mother. Elliot braced himself and walked into the water with the hatchlings. However, it was not as bad as he expected, on the contrary it was actually quite fun as he swam and splashed with the hatchlings, his mother chuckled at the scene as Elliot’s inner child was finally released as he started to really get involved with Sura’s children.

He made it known who he was and when he found out there names he made it clear who he was talking too. Ducky already loved how Elliot played with her and she really liked how he talked but her mind also made the connection as to what he was saying. She recognised some of the sounds that were same as the ones her mother and father used with her and her siblings but when Elliot pointed to her last of all and said her name, it clicked, that was how her mother addressed her, that was her name. “Ducky” she said pointing to herself and repeating exactly what Elliot said slowly. The adults gasped. Ducky moved slowly to each of her siblings and pronounced their names slowly. “Opal, Rapid, Spinner, Echo, Diver, Sandy, Ray” she looked at Elliot and then said “Elliot” though she said his very slowly and she had difficulty pronouncing all the sounds in his and her sibling’s names.  

Suddenly Ducky found herself in her mother’s arms and being nuzzled lovingly “Oh, my beautiful little Ducky, that’s right, that’s your name dear and the names of all brothers and sisters” she said as she nuzzled her to Ducky’s immense joy. She loved happily and hugged her mother’s beak and sighed happily as her mother gently rocked her back and forth in her arms and hummed softly.

“Oh I am so happy for you” said her father and nuzzled his daughter as she lay in his mate’s arms. Ducky squeaked in joy.

“Yep, she is advanced” said Merri.

“Yep, yep, yep!” said Ducky happily to the astonishment of the adults, the placing of those words was actually in the correct context but really Ducky just liked the sound of the words and happily repeated them three times, little did she know that these words would soon become her catchphrase.

“I can see that” said Ellie in awe but then she looked at the sky, it was turning orange as The Bright Circle started to set. “Alright Elliot, time we went back home dear” she called to her son.

Elliot groaned “Do I have too?” he asked.

“Yes dear, the hatchlings have had enough fun for today I think” said his mother.

“Okay” replied Elliot reluctantly and hastily got out of the water and shook himself dry. “Goodbye” said to the hatchlings and waved at them. As he ran back to his mother. Ducky gave a sad cry “Elliot” she cried. The boy looked back and saw the pleading Swimmer with tears in her eyes. She walked out of the water and attempted to dry herself like Elliot but accidentally fell on her belly. Elliot returned to Ducky’s side and held her hand.

“I’ll come back and play with you again sometime Ducky I promise. I will come back” He said the last words slowly and clearly and gave Ducky’s hand a slight squeeze and parted with her even though Ducky was looking at him with a pleading expression. Ducky let out a sad squeak as her new friend, her first friend left her for the day. She sat on the ground and started to cry. Her father gently nuzzled her until she had calmed down but Ducky still didn’t understand why Elliot had to go.

“Goodbye Sura, it was great to see you again and to see your little ones” said Ellie as she hoisted her son into her hands “Thank you” said her son and waved his hand.

“Your welcome dears, come back anytime” said Sura as they left and returned to the nest. She observed that both the original nest and the back-up scrape had not dried up yet so it looked like her babies would be sleeping with her tonight. So as the evening descended and the light started to fade. Sura and Ruphus hoisted their little ones out of the water and dried them up. This was followed by the hungry calls from her children. Thankfully the bedding leaves came in very useful as half her children relived themselves on them just after they finished their supper. Merri quickly replaced the leaves while Sura and Ruphus held their children in their arms each parent had four kids in their arms. Ducky was being cradled in her mother’s arms as she was gently rocked back and forth along with Echo, Opal and Ray.


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It was also quite amazing for Ducky to see the whole world go dark but as the night came on a full moon and shining stars shone, emitting a pale light down upon the land. Ducky gasped in awe at all the stars and reached her hands out to The Night Circle and squeaked tiredly. “Yes dear, that is The Night Circle and those little dots are the stars” said her mother softly, noting how tired her children looked.

Ducky didn’t feel very scared of the dark now with the moon and stars casting light into the darkness and with the comforting presence of her mother. “Mommy” she said tiredly and held out her hands, which gently gripped the front tip of her mother’s beak. Her mother brought her beak down to her and Ducky gave her a loving lick. Her mother smiled lovingly and hummed gently over them as she and Ruphus got into their sleeping spots though Ruphus placed the children in his arms down together with their mother and settled down right next to his mate. “I will never forget this day” he said to her. She smiled back “Nor will I” she said.

She laid the rest of her children down beside her belly where they all huddled up together beside her warm bulk. Sura then wrapped her tail around them and curled her head so she could always see her children. “Goodnight my little ones” she said softly as they all dropped off to sleep “Sweet dreams, I’ll see you all in the morning”

Sura finally allowed herself to place her head down just as she saw Ducky open her beak and yawn tiredly, her little arms stretching out wide for a few seconds before she brought them back in again. Ducky hummed softly as she placed her head on the ground and fell asleep. Dreaming of her first day and the days countless yet to come and of her loving family, how she loved them with all her heart. Ducky slept contently as she began her journey in this brave new world with her brothers and sisters, her aunt, father and her loving mother. She would sleep contently this night.

Her mother smiled as she watched her baby daughter fall asleep, she was a mother now and she loved her little ones, there would not be a day gone by that she would not be there for them. “Goodnight dear” she said to her mate and finally allowed herself to fall asleep with her new family.


Well their you go, hope you enjoyed the first story don't forget to give some feedback and make sure you say if you want me to continue another day with Ducky or move on to Ruby. This story was rather easy to write.
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Great story so far I really enjoyed it a lot.


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Aww, reading this was a joy. Another day of Ducky please  ^^spike
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Glad you enjoyed it :)littlefoot  I'll make sure to do another two days for Ducky before moving onto Littlefoot. Looks like I'll be doing three days for each character.
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Great story! Duckys my favorite character so it was great to read a day in her life :yes


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Aww, this is too cute❤!  I can't wait to read Cera's story💖.


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Ducky’s First Day’s; Day 2:



The early morning was dry, unlike the night before, which had several showers - which was a huge relief for everyone in the land due to the harsh drought and heat that had been scorching everything and everyone relentlessly for over a year. Yet the clouds were still about and they sheltered the Swimmer herd from the Bright Circle’s rays, which was a mighty blessing. The moderately sized herd had made its home near a long winding river that was surrounded by dozens of lagoons, some large and some small. The land had lots of tall grass and reeds and shrub but there were few tall trees around. This meant the only way for anyone to cool down here was to stay in the water. It was to a cooler morning that Sura awoke.

She was the first of her family to awake. She raised her head slowly, yawned and blinked a few times. She took a look around at her surroundings, she spotted Ruphus still sleeping in as usual a few paces from her and beyond him was Merri who was also sound asleep. The next thing Sura turned her head to was the nest expecting to see her eggs but all she saw was an empty nest with broken egg fragments inside it. It was enough to almost make her jump in horror at the thought of her eggs being snatched from right under her nose by egg stealers but thankfully the memories of the previous day had started to come back and she managed to calm herself before any panic attack could happen.

Sura turned her head to look down at her side and saw a broad leaf which was rather wet that shielded her newborns from the rain. While Sura might be more willing to let her new children get wet she could not forget that many babies didn’t survive their first few weeks due to sickness, and being drenched by a storm was sure to bring sickness which her little ones had never had to deal with and nor would all of them survive if that happened . So Sura had placed the leaf back over them after she felt the skywater start falling last night.

Now however the leaf was no longer needed. With her hand she carefully pulled the leaf off and placed it to the side and rested her gaze on her sleeping children. Once again Sura felt her heart melt at the sight of her sleeping babies. They were all sleeping together; Echo and Ray were resting with their heads laying on the backs of Diver and Rapid. Sandy was sleeping on her back with her head up against her mother’s body, while Spinner was also laying on his back with his head up on Sandy’s gently rising and falling belly. Opal was sleeping on her belly next to Ducky, who was nestled between her twin’s body and her mother’s.

“Awww, why do they have to be so beautiful? I’ve seen so many hatchlings before yet none of them are as lovely as my little ones” thought Sura with a wide smile on her face. She brushed away a tear of pure happiness, as pure as the innocence that her children now had. With her hand she stroked each of her babies with a finger. Ducky gave contented sigh as her mother stroked her back. She received similar responses from everyone until she stroked little Sandy on the belly. She giggled happily at the touch, which in turn caused Spinner to be dislodged from his rest. Sura really should have been a bit more careful with Sandy because her tickling had prompted her daughter to start wetting in the wrong position. To avoid getting her daughter’s siblings wet Sura gently turned Sandy onto her belly, which woke Spinner and Sandy.

The two awoke with adorable twin yawns, their mouth staying wide open for a few seconds before they drowsily looked around and squeaked, waking their siblings. In just a few seconds the nest was filled with yawns, stretching and squeaking infants, already wide awake. “Hello my little ones” Sura lowered her beak over her children who all made their way over to it so they could be nuzzled.

They were led by Ducky’s squeak. “Mamayy!” she said, it may have been a vocal butchery but it still caused her mother to chuckle as she greeted her children.

Sura raised her head. “Ruphus?” she said turning to his sleeping form “Ruphus, come and look at this” she said but when she looked back, her mate was still sleeping. Rolling her eyes and smirking she placed the end of her tail over her mate’s nose so he couldn’t breathe. After all, one good thing about Ruphus was that he hardly ever snored. Ruphus on reflex pushed her tail aside with his arm only to have Sura ‘politely’ hit his beak with her tail. “Wakey, wakey daddy” she said to him loudly.

Ruphus groaned and opened his eyes and rubbed his beak. “Why did I become your mate? You never let me sleep in” he said as he slowly pushed himself up onto his legs and rubbed his eyes with his normal morning scowl on his face.

“Well if you weren’t my mate then you never would have had these beautiful children, now come along they want to see their Daddy” said Sura.

Ruphus yawned and made his way around Sura and laid down parallel to her so his children could see him and they were ecstatic. “Dadayy!” cried Ducky as she ran over to her father’s body. Ruphus felt his weariness vanish and his heart soften at hearing that. He lowered his beak just in time for Ducky to embrace it with a content hum. Her brothers and sister followed by crawling but Echo had to the amazement and joy of both parents was walking on his hands and feet and got to his father seconds after Ducky.

“Oh my Echo, you clever boy,” Ruphus and Sura nuzzled the laughing boy who was loving the attention, while Ray gave an envious squeak as he wanted attention as well and crawled faster over to them. In a few moments. The whole clutch was being nuzzled on either side by their parents in a heart-warming display of love.

“You all look perfect together” Merri was up and standing over to the side watching them all with a wide smile on her face and her hands held together by her head.

“Get down here Merri, you’re also a part of the family and that means that you’re included too” said Sura. She was silenced by the shrill squeak of Opal as her mouth hung open in an obvious plead for food. “Looks like you have the pleasure of feeding the little ones” said Sura to Merri. “Some of the Water Greens should do, they liked those yesterday.” Her sister nodded and walked off to the river. 

While Merri was off getting breakfast the sound of footsteps approaching got Sura and Ruphus looking in the distance to see their current herd leader approaching them. He was a very elderly Swimmer and looked upon the world with tired eyes but he was known for his wisdom that was why no one had that heart to say that his time had come, he would die before he would be replaced. His body was almost dark brown-blue shade and his steps were slow but not weary. He looked upon them with a smile when he spotted them.

“Good Morning Sura, Ruphus. I must say that I’m glad to see you both alive but I heard today that your eggs have hatched” said the old herd leader.

“Arron, I’m not sure if Ellie has been spreading the word but yes, my eggs have hatched. Come take a look” said Sura, she was still lying next to her nest with Ruphus. Usually they’d be standing to give him a welcome but today they were keeping an eye on their children. Arron approached and couldn’t help but smile when he saw Sura and Ruphus children. “Are you happy now Sura?” he asked.

Sura nodded in response. “The happiest I’ve been in so many cold times.”

“You’ve moved past your fear of motherhood; I remember how fearful you were when you first heard that you were going to have children” said Arron.

“Oh boy, do I remember” said Ruphus with a shake of his head. It was a period of panic for Sura. It had taken years for Ruphus to work up the trust with Sura to actually make love with her but soon afterwards Sura started acting different. She became obsessed with keeping a clean nest and there were also her giant cravings for massive amounts of food. It didn’t take long for the other members of the herd to notice and Ellie confirmed that Sura was pregnant much to the latter’s horror.

There was a reason why Sura had never made love with Ruphus despite being mated with him for a few years and her fear had come true. Sura at this time was terrified of the prospect of being a mother. Ever since her early adulthood she had convinced herself that her mistakes throughout life - including the deaths of her siblings Bright and Clover and her being driven from home by her father and nearly being killed in a river - would mean that she would be a terrible mother. The prospect of somehow killing her own flesh and blood or raising them to be failures in a harsh world was something that she swore to never do but in making that oath to herself she had also made an oath to never ever have children.
 
So, when Sura found out that she was pregnant she started spiralling down into panic and emotional turmoil. Over the years she had convinced herself that she would be a terrible mother and that she was doomed to live her years as a childless female but now she was actually producing eggs. Sura began a fierce struggle with her instincts, trying to contain her cravings and cleanliness and trying to stay away from the Sand Creepers. It was a fact that she hated about Swimmer’s. That to produce eggs they needed to eat the shells of crabs or they would not produce eggs. She could not bear to take another life like that and she also thought that if she couldn’t produce eggs then she would never have children.

But Sura could not hope to win this fight, her battle was fruitless, her instincts victorious. An unpleasant secret of Swimmer pregnancy was the need to eat Sand Creepers, whose shells provided the material they needed to make eggs but Sura never ate any living Sand Creepers. She only took the dead and discarded shells from moulting Sand Creepers and she did so as little as possible for the idea had always sickened her to the core. Sura’s cravings were unmatched; she tried to starve herself but she couldn’t stop herself from uncontrollably salivating when she saw any green food and it took all her will power to reject the food that was offered to her but after Ruphus cheekily teased her with some red tree stars which just happened to be her favourite food the poor Swimmer found himself overrun almost instantly by his mate whose instincts went wild as she tried to snatch the tree stars from Ruphus and rather successfully too. After that she made no attempt to hold back her cravings but the next challenge came after she had finished laying her eggs.

Sura was in emotional turmoil. She told herself again and again “I can’t be a mother”. Her words got stronger and stronger and her mind filled with memories of all her various mistakes. Soon the tipping point was reached, and during the middle of the night Sura stood over her nest with her foot raised over her eggs. Another battle of will versus motherly instinct took place with more ferocity than The Killer Storm itself - and all within Sura’s mind. She stayed in that precarious position, her mind on a tether as she gazed at her eggs and tried to force herself to end her fears then and there… but she just couldn’t. How could she harm her own flesh and blood? She would be a killer of her own children! But she couldn’t be a mother! 

Sura’s will eventually broke and in full turmoil she fled the herd in an attempt to escape motherhood. However, her absence was noted in the morning and it wasn’t long before a search party was gathered and with such clear tracks, she was easily found by Ellie, Arron, Ruphus and Merri. This was the breaking point for Sura. The poor Swimmer had run herself to the point where her legs refused to support her and she was battered with exhaustion. Upon seeing the search party find her, she burst into tears next to the river bank and confessed everything to them. Her fears and insecurities about motherhood and her battle with her instincts and eventually her desertion. To say that her story was received with shock was an understatement. No one had known just how much turmoil Sura had been in, she had hidden her secret with such determination but it was their comfort and support that eventually brought her back to the herd and to accept her situation.

Arron even set Sura up with looking after the other children within the herd over the next year till she soon felt confident with handling children at a multitude of different ages. Now Sura’s eggs had hatched. While she still felt the fear of letting down her children, she had it firmly under control and even then her fear was overwhelmed by the sheer joy and love that she felt for her newborn hatchlings. It made her wish that she had known that motherhood wasn’t as bad a prospect as she had led herself to believe. 

“I have moved on” said Sura to Arron with a smile. “And I am glad I have; they are so beautiful” she looked at the nest and her children, who were enjoying breakfast now. Sura held a hand over her heart and felt a single tear of joy fall down her cheek.

“That is why I have come to offer you a new position to you Sura” Arron said, breaking Sura out of her train of thought. She turned to him with a curious expression, along with Ruphus.

“I think that you should be the herd’s Chief Mother”

“Hmmm” said Ruphus with a smile, but Sura looked rather startled by this sudden offer of promotion of position within the herd. The structure of Swimmer herds was far more complex then they seemed from the outside. There was a Herd Leader which could be either male or female and their mates would also have a large say in how the herd was run. The herd also had a suitable number of deputies who were given charge over certain portions of the herd to look after. The other positions in the herd included the High Elder, who was the keeper of traditions and wisdoms and was usually one of the older more experienced members of the herd. There was also the Swimmer’s Defensive Command which belonged to the Swimmer who was best fighter and most experienced in combat, they were in charge of the defence of the herd; This was Ruphus’s position. The Herd Healer had the most knowledge of curative plants in case of sickness and injury. The Chief Mother however, was also one of the higher positions and it belonged to the best and most experienced mother of the herd and they were responsible for overlooking, taking care of and teaching all the children of the herd as well as keeping all the other parents in check and helping resolve family issues. It was not a position to take lightly and this is what Sura was offered.

Parents and elderly were also important for the herd dynamic. The lowest members of the herd were generally Swimmers with no family. They were still looked after by the herd. However, depending on the herd size and complement these positions were not always available which was why herd mingling and sometimes merging would happen. Children started to have a small tasting of herd ranking positions after they finished The Swimmer Trials as the elders would be able to tell what role they could perform in the herd and those that did well had far more opportunities and were hence sought after by different Swimmer herds.

“Chief Mother…. But I’m not experienced I-“

“Sura,” cut in Arron “There is no child that you haven’t looked after in the herd, no family that you don’t know, no parents that are aren’t friends with you. You understand the children, their parents and now you understand the importance of family. I only held off giving you this offer because you weren’t a mother till now. It is a valuable way to gain experience and it will allow the other parents to help you too, it’s not just about you helping them” 
   
Sura sighed “I’ll have to think about this Arron, just give me some time” Sura said after a few moments to consider her leader’s proposal.

Arron nodded, “I wish you and your new family well, Sura, Ruphus, Merri. I’ll see you all later” he turned and trudged slowly away as the family called out their farewells briefly before going back to their children.

The children only had just finished their meal when the water from the river stirred and Elliot surfaced as quietly as he could and pulled himself up onto the bank and hit at the base of the nest. He poked his eyes over the rim to see the children but as soon as one of them or the adults looked at his direction he ducked down behind the nest. It caused a little head scratching from Ducky, she kept on thinking that she saw something outside the nest but there was nothing there. However, her parents were not fooled.

“You can come out Elliot” said Sura.

Elliot poked his head up over the nest looking a little embarrassed but it was with an excited cry that Ducky and indeed all her brothers and sisters headed over to him. Ducky leapt into Elliot but he fell back with her extra weight and he fell on his back with Ducky sitting on top of him. 

Ducky was jumping up and down happily on Elliot’s belly. “Oof…Du-oh…” Elliot could not say anything with Ducky jumping and knocking the wind out of him. Ducky soon stopped jumping on him but she still stood on Elliot with her tail wagging as she licked his face making Elliot chuckle. He tried to get his head away but Ducky kept coming to lick him.

“He-e-elp” giggled Elliot. “I’m being licked!”

The adults laughed at his expense and Sura grabbed Ducky’s tail in her beak and lifted her up, off of Elliot. Ducky squeaked in surprise as she felt herself being pulled into the air but she didn’t really like the feeling of being upside down so she pulled herself up and grabbed her mother’s bottom lip and pulled herself up till she stood on her mother’s lip and lay on her beak. Sura chuckled as she looked into the eyes of her little one but she didn’t release her tail yet, at least until she put her hand around Ducky’s back and placed her in palm of her other hand.

Ducky lay on her back and looked up at her mother with a big smile, her tail wagging from side to side like mad, she laughed loudly as her mother licked her belly and nuzzled her before placing her back in the nest with her brothers and sisters.

“And just what are you doing sneaking around our nest Elliot?” said Ruphus with a slide snide in his words.

“Um….”

“Your mother, know your here?”

“I…er…no”

Ruphus sighed at the youngster. “You know I’m going to have to tell your mother about this don’t you?” Elliot grimaced. “And you know full well that she doesn’t like it when you sneak off, it really stresses her when she’s worrying where you are all the time” said Ruphus.

“I just wanted to say hello to you” said Elliot quietly, still looking down.

“More like you wanted to say hello to my little ones” said Sura. She picked him up by the tail with her beak just like she had with Ducky and placed him in the nest with her little hatchlings, who almost instantly swarmed him.

“If you so desperately want to spend time with my children then you might as well get in the thick of it, like a big brother” said Sura with a grin as Elliot fell on his back as Sandy jumped on his belly. Ducky was trying to nuzzle his face again and Echo was offering Elliot some of his breakfast while the others crowded around him all trying to get his attention.

“Help!” cried Elliot, he half laughed the word as Sandy tickled his belly.

“Oh, I don’t think so. You had this coming for running away from your mother, naughty little Elliot” said Sura in a stern tongue but with a humorous smile on her face. “You want to be with my hatchlings so much, so be it but they are my babies and I might not be responsible if I get too caught up in looking after you too”

“Truce please! I’m sorry I sneaked from home! You happy now!?”

Sura just grinned at him and Merri chuckled. “You apologised to the wrong mother Elliot” she said.

“No please don’t leave me in here the nest needs cleaning!” Elliot begged. His legs and arms and indeed his whole body was being pulled every which way by the curious hatchlings.

Sura’s conniving grin grew larger and Ruphus could tell that she was planning something devious for Elliot “You are right and I’ll have to clean it. Right after I let my children finish greeting you”

“Noooo!” Elliot cried out, he knew he probably was getting off rather light from running away from home but that still didn’t mean he wanted to be swarmed by a pack of ruthlessly adorable hatchlings or lay on his back on the rather wet leaves at the bottom of the nest.
 
The adults around him laughed at his expense. What was worse was that Rapid was mimicking Elliot’s loud noise. Only furthering to increase the laughter and joy of the adults. However once Sura was done drying off her tears of laughter and calmed herself down to a reasonable point, she picked up Elliot and placed him in the small pond next to the nest. Elliot gave a sigh of relief but it was only short lived. Sura had carved out a smooth slide from the rim of the nest, it was something that her children were eager to try out and they all crowded and pushed and shoved each other to be the first one down.

There were loud annoyed speaks from Ray and Spinner, Diver and Rapid as they all piled at the entrance that their mother had carved out for them but ended up getting themselves stuck. It was a tangle of limbs and tails as they struggled to move out. Echo, Opal, Ducky and Sandy watched them from behind, obviously not eager to get into the fray. Besides, there were four tails to get past if they wanted to get even close to them.

Sura gave them a helping hand, literally pushing them all through, they slid down the slope head first, on their bellies. Spinner and Ray came to a stop but Rapid tumbled to the side and rolled onto the ground looking rather dizzy and teary eyed. Diver was the only one that managed to make it into the water. Sura had to go and help Rapid, he had bumped himself quite a bit when he was tumbling and was now crying. His mother was there in an instant, she lifted him into her embrace and licked him. “It’s ok, Rapid dear, I’m here” she said Rapid’s cries quickly dropped off thanks to the comfort of his mother and she carefully lowered him into the water of the small pool which was already filled with splashes from Diver and Ray as they had both made it to the water but Spinner looked up at his mother and squeaked loudly. “Ma…Ma!”

The little Swimmer was obviously after the attention of his mother after seeing Rapid getting it all he appeared rather flustered. To make up for the lack of attention from his mother, he made Rapid his splash target.
 
Sura was already back to making sure the rest of her children made it to the water. Ducky took the slide down next with a loud cry of exhilaration as she slid into the water followed closely be Echo and then Sandy but she was a bit too slow to get out of the way as Opal slid straight into her sending both girls into the water with surprised squeaks. They surfaced and didn’t seemed harmed, to their mother’s relief. 

“Help” said Elliot, he looked up helplessly at Sura from the middle of the pond, he was now the target and shield for all of Sura’s children.

Sura laughed heartily “Ruphus dear, come and have a look at this”

Ruphus began laughing when he saw Elliot “Well, Elliot seems to be in the thick, it shouldn’t be a big problem, it’s only water and he’s no hatchling”

“What are you talking about?” said Sura turning to her mate “He looks adorable! Just like my little ones!”

“Guuuuyyysss!” whined Elliot he had a blush on his face. The two new parents laughed at his expense; he was fun to tease.

Sura smile only grew wider as she turned back to the nest and then to Ruphus. “I believe it’s your turn to clear the nest dear”

Ruphus smile vanished as he looked at the nest which really did need to be cleaned out. “I hate you” he muttered under his breath as he got to the task at hand. Sura laughed louder at her mate’s reaction. “The father does all the crappy work and the mother has all the cuddles” grumbled Ruphus.

I cleared the nest the last time Ruphus so don’t be the mother and hog all the children because that role clearly doesn’t suit you”

“Has anyone ever told you that you are the worst female Swimmer alive?” asked Ruphus.

“You seem to love saying it” counted Sura.

“Yuck!” Elliot let out a fake retch at the antics of the two parents.

“If you want to have that attitude Elliot then I’m fine if you clean the nest” said Sura.

Elliot cringed. Ruphus grinned at seeing an opportunity to get out of the dirty job. “That’s the first good idea you’ve all day Sura, well how about it, Elliot?”

“Actually, I think I’m all good here not cleaning the nest, you can do that big daddy”

“I’m not your daddy” replied Ruphus in a deep voice

Elliot let out a nervous laugh. “You-you’re not-yeah you’re not!” he said quickly wearing an uncomfortable smile. Ruphus turned away chuckling.

“I’m messing with you Elliot,” he said as he went to work.

Elliot wiped the sweat from his face and for good measure dived beneath the water.  Sura’s children followed suit, however they could only hold their breath for a few seconds at a time so they often went up for breaths and Elliot stayed under. Ducky kept swimming down and trying to pull him up to the surface, she could not move him.

There was a sudden commotion from above the water. Elliot and Ducky could hear it and they turned towards the sound. They both surfaced but Elliot was a little alarmed by what he saw. “Oh crap” he groaned.

“And what do you have to say for yourself my naughty youngling?” demanded his mother sternly. The whole pond became silent as the hatchlings seemed rather intimidated by Ellie’s stern gaze.

Elliot tried to duck under but his mother was too fast and he quickly found himself being hoisted up by the tail, held firmly in his mother’s beak. What made it even more degrading was that his mother saw fit to put him in the nest and it was only half cleaned. He scrambled to the dry side as soon as his mother released him. Ducky was approaching, she was climbing up the side of the nest but she was having a lot of trouble moving up hill on sand and she kept slipping and falling on her belly and sliding back down into the water. Ducky squeaked in annoyance and pushed herself up again and tried again and again.

Elliot however was on the spot. “A fitting place for someone who was acting like a hatchling” said Ellie.

“I’m not, I just wanted to see how Sura was doing” said Elliot. His mother raised her eyebrows, clearly unconvinced. Elliot stuttered “I-I-I….oh…I’m sorry mom I….”

“Just wanted to see your new friends, who may be hatchlings but have made more of an impact - in a good way that is -than all the other children in the herd” Elliot sighed and nodded. His mother had read him easily and she was dead right. At this moment Ducky finally made it up into the nest and was standing next to Elliot and held his hand.

Even though Ducky was standing and Elliot was sitting, she only came up to Elliot’s chest. “Well since you like your new friends so much and since you also really like sneaking away without telling me, you can help Ruphus by cleaning out the rest of the nest for him” said Ellie in a way that Elliot knew he was not getting out of this punishment.
 
Ruphus sighed. “I’m saved, sorry Elliot but it looks your tail has been caught”. The young Swimmer groaned and drooped not only cause of the punishment but also Ruphus’ figurative statement which was now very much real as Ducky had found it fun to chase and catch Elliot’s tail whenever it moved. Ducky seemed to be really enjoying this as she let out happy squeaks as she grabbed and jumped on Elliot’s tail. This only amused the adults even more.

“Why am I the one being picked on!? These guys made the mess, why can’t they clean it?” Elliot gestured at Ducky and her siblings which made her reel back at Elliot’s unexpected gesture. He folded his arms and went into an adorable pout which his mother had not seen for years, however as much as she loved seeing her son come out of his shell, she still needed to set some boundaries.

“You know why, they are not cleaning it up and you know perfectly well why it’s your job. Talking is not going to get the task done any faster now is it?” said Ellie
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Sura gently lifted Ducky up into her arms, she seemed to be rather excited about the prospect of going up while Elliot under the close supervision of his mother began to clean the nest. “Ewwww, I hate this job!”

Sura put Ducky back down in the pond with the rest of her children then turned back to Ellie. “I don’t suppose you’ve heard the news yet?” she said to Ellie.

“Heard what?”

“That I’ve just been promoted to head mother” said Sura.

“When?!?” Ellie said, she recoiled her head in surprise.

“Just before you arrived….”

Elliot groaned miserably as his mother and Sura chatted about things that he totally didn’t care about and besides, listening them would not get the nest cleaned any faster. He finished replacing the leaves and looked past Sura’s tail to see the children still happily playing in the water. “Wait a second? Where was Ducky?!” Elliot thought so loudly that he almost thought he heard the words come from his mouth however he didn’t need to look far to find her. Ducky was dipping her head in the river to look about at the creatures in there and the adults were too busy talking to notice!

Ducky pulled her head from the water with a gasp, she certainly was adventurous and coupled with the curiosity of a hatchling, could be a life-threatening combination. Ducky would’ve put her head back in the water had it not been for the beautiful multicoloured butterfly that happened across her and with a squeal of amazement she bounded after it, in the direction of the tall grass. Elliot suddenly gasped. He had seen something that Ducky was oblivious to. Laying low in the grass was the outline and glowing eyes of an Egg Stealer, patiently waiting for Ducky to come close enough for him to strike.

“Not on my watch!” thought Elliot.

“Sura! Egg Stealer!” Elliot shouted, pointing to the devious sneak with a finger, however that was not what caught Sura’s attention when she looked. She felt a lump in her throat.
 
“Ducky! Ducky come back!” she cried out, raising herself quickly. Ducky gave her a confused squeak and turned her head to face her mother but the Egg Stealer had chosen that moment to make his move. He dashed out of his hiding spot the same moment that Sura lunged for her daughter.

Her dive brought her close enough but the Egg Stealer was just looming over Ducky and already bending to grab the little Swimmer! Sura desperately made a grab for Ducky’s tail and caught it in her beak but the Egg Stealer had just grabbed Ducky with his hands. Sura refused to let go and a fierce tug of war started but it only lasted a few seconds. The Egg Stealer’s hands were moist from the muddy bank and he was unable to keep a hold over Ducky and with a strong pull Sura pulled her daughter free of the ugly fiend’s grasp. The Egg Stealer snarled furiously and sprinted away empty handed while Sura pulled her rather frightened daughter into her arms and held her as tightly as it was safe to. Gently nuzzling and cooing to her in order to calm her down. It didn’t take to long for Ducky to finally calm down.

Sura got to her feet and walked backed to the nest and sat on her haunches, she was panting and the overwhelming smell of sweat could be detected by her mate as she placed Ducky back into the cleaned nest and dusted herself off. Silently she lifted all her children back into the nest.

“You alright dear?” asked Ruphus, putting a hand on her shoulder.

Sura let out a long sigh and took a deep breath, “I’m fine now”

“That was too close” said Elliot, he stood on the rim of the nest in front of Sura.

“It wouldn’t have been close if it hadn’t been for you Elliot” Sura nuzzled. “I guess I still have a lot to learn about being an attentive mother.”

Elliot rubbed Sura’s beak with her hands and beak. “Thanks” He broke into giggles as Sura licked him in thanks.

“If you hadn’t warned us then I wouldn’t have saved Ducky in time, I didn’t even notice she’d gone” Sura said with a grateful smile.

“We’d better keep an extra good watch on the kids if we want to stop something like this happening again” said Ruphus… and if only he knew how many times his kids would sneak away from him and Sura, he would see himself as a very bad parent, and in terms of Ducky, she was only starting to get herself into these ridiculous life or death situations that would become very common for her later in her life.

Sura had to keep a constant vigil over her daughter for a while as Ducky had been rather frightened by her encounter with the Egg Stealer and would cry and squeal if she left her mother’s arms. She was also constantly trembling despite the reassurances of her mother. It took until Ducky was too exhausted to keep awake for her to calm down. The fright had taken a lot out of her and while she slept her siblings were happy to play around in the nest. Elliot stayed with them and while he was still the subject of attention for the little ones, his attention was focused on Ducky. He kept a hand on her back at all times while she slept calmly.

Out of all the kids Ducky was the first to truly connect with Elliot on a personal level simply because of the near-death experience that she’d gone through. It was something all too familiar to Elliot. All over the herd he had a reputation amongst his peers to be either extremely lucky or unlucky depending on how one looked at it. He was always at the place of action right when there was action, whether that be Sharptooth fights or rescuing kids or high-speed swimming races, he was always there for them and he never even tried to be like this, it just seemed to happen to him. The result was that he was somewhat looked up to by the kids his age and even the older kids admired him. However being where there was action came at a cost and for Elliot it was the loss of innocence.

He had now seen combat and blood and ever since he witnessed Sharptooth’s attack he had not been the same.  Then again, it was a herd changing experience.  Much of the herd was simply dead and he was one of the lucky survivors. This led to a disdain for the games and fun that kids like him usually enjoyed, he had grown up way too fast but only now in the presence of pure innocence in the form of these hatchlings was he starting to remotely come back to the fun-loving kid he used to be.
 
“Dear, I think perhaps we should introduce our little ones to the herd. The sooner we have every eye in the herd watching them, the sooner we can breathe easy” Ruphus said and his point was a very good one. Most of the time when new children were born to the herd each individual member would introduce themselves at the parents nest rather much like Ellie had done but this herd had its numbers more than halved and Sura and Ruphus had their nest further away from the others and with danger still around perhaps it was best to move the nest to the middle of the herd. That would guarantee the most safety for the hatchlings.

Sura nodded in agreement to her mate’s statement. “I don’t see why we can’t do that now and maybe it would be best to move in with the rest of the herd now that we have our children” Ruphus nodded and so did Ellie.
 
“I can make a hatchling nest for you while you introduce the herd to your children. It’ll be close to my nest so you shouldn’t have too much trouble finding it”

Ellie received a warm smile from Sura. “Thank you very much Ellie, we’ll meet you there when we are done” said Sura. “Shall we?”

Ruphus nodded and gently picked up all the boys and held them in his arms while Sura picked up all the girls.
 
“Let’s be off” Merri said and started to lead the way through the shrub and long grass towards the herd.

“Wait for me!” Elliot called as he ran after them and entered a walk beside his mother. It was time for the herd to meet Sura and Ruphus’s children.


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The small group made their way slowly along the river side upstream where the vegetation was less dense. This short journey however was made so much more interesting by the hatchlings, nearly all of them were poking their heads over the edge of their parents’ arms and in some cases nearly falling off, had Sura and Ruphus not pulled them back by the tails.

“And this is why we shouldn’t move around with hatchlings” Ruphus said as he pulled Echo back to stop him from tumbling out of his arms. It would be a rather unpleasant fall and there was no way either one of these new parents were willing to see if their children could survive such a fall. Soon the main herd came into sight. It was far smaller and compact now. Nearly every adult was present and arranged within a circle of about six fully grown males. Ruphus had chosen them himself to be guards around the herd, they would keep look out for any danger from afar and let the herd know if there was any threat close by.

The majority of nests were located near the water as that was where the Swimmers felt most comfortable. It provided a quick escape route should they be forced to run. Their herd had colonised both sides of the river with a sentinel at each point. The herd leader had done this for two reasons, one was to make the circle of protection wider and not have to worry about Sharpteeth trying to cross the river and cut the Swimmer’s off from the water. The other reason was a little more personal; the most fertile side of the bank was for herd members that had status within the herd. It was a subtle division but all the nests on the right side of the river were now abandoned. Sharptooth’s attack had limited their numbers so much that the herd only gathered on one side as their numbers were far smaller than they felt safe.

It was into this smaller congregation of Swimmers that the new family walked. There were a lot of relieved faces to be seen when the herd noticed them. Sura, Ruphus and Merri had not been seen since the attack so to see them walk in without wariness or wound was such a relief. Those smiles suddenly became gasps and coos of joy from some of the mothers as they noticed Sura’s new children.

Arron grinned when he saw them. “A little early to show your kids around don’t you think?”

“They are safer here than in our nest” replied Ruphus, to which everyone nodded.

“Sura! Over Here!” Sura turned in the direction of Ellie’s voice and walked over to her, she was sitting by her nest but she had dug out a new nest for Sura and her children. That earned her a grateful smile from Sura.

“Thank you, Ellie you’ve been a great help” Sura said when she arrived and carefully lowered herself down to individually place each of the children in her arms into the new nest. Ruphus did the same on the other side. Once all the little ones were safely in the nest the rest of the herd began to congregate around them to see the new additions to the herd. 

“Oh. My. Goodness.”

“Look at those little hatchlings”

“They. Are. Sooooo cute!”

The older females said as they crowded to look at the hatchlings.

“What did you name them?” Arron asked.

Sura smiled and put a hand of Ducky’s back. “This is my first hatched, her name is Ducky. She’s already more trouble than the others.”

“What do you mean?” asked one of the males of the herd.

“She could walk and even talk just after she hatched and nearly got herself eaten too”

“Wow, keep an eye on her then.”

“This is Rapid” Ruphus said stroking his son belly making him laugh. “Our first hatched boy.” 

Arron nodded thoughtfully, “He could be mistaken for a little tail”

“It’s a good mix of blood” said another one of the males, Arron’s second; Parian.

“This is Opal, Ducky’s twin” Sura said. She held up both Ducky and Opal and from a distance they were identical but if one were to look closer, they’d see the difference in their eyes. Ducky’s eyes were a light aqua blue while Opal’s were a far darker shade of blue like that found on the crystal that she had been named after.

“I hate it when that happens” Ellie said. She never had twins but she’d seen it more than once and it was so easy to get confused when trying to keep track of them or even identifying them and if Ducky was as much of a handful as she had been it would make keeping an eye on her very difficult when Opal looked so much like her. “Better than Natalie’s second clutch at least. I could not tell a single one of them apart”

There was a light chuckle through the herd but it quickly took on a sour tone and eventually translated to a sad silence as everyone thought about all those that they had lost during Sharptooth’s attack.
 
Ruphus cleared his throat. “This is Echo, Ray and Spinner” He put a hand on each boy as he called their names.

“I would’ve named Spinner, Echo” said Parian in a gruff voice as he looked over the youngling “He looks just like his father.”

“Only in looks” Ruphus said.

“And Echo acts like you?”

“Yep”

“Ok I can live with that” Parian said with a smile.

Sura picked up her last two unintroduced girls. “This is Sandy”. Everyone ‘aawed’ as they looked at the small light mustard coloured Swimmer as she lay on her belly and rolled about in the dust and reach up towards the sky puffies, her eyes wide with amazement. “And our youngest hatchling Diver”

Ellie squinted. Diver looked more like a boy, she was taller than the other girls and a bit bigger and there was also the fact that she and Rapid tumbled out of the nest but Diver who fell on the ground beneath Rapid only gave an annoyed squeal rather than crying out; she was tough. “She’s your youngest?” Sura nodded with solid conviction. “Sheesh, she doesn’t look like it. I’d have thought that she’d be the oldest girl” Ellie said.
 
“Looks are deceiving Ellie, she may look like a girl but Diver seems to be as tough as a boy” Arron said as he looked down at the hatchlings who were now being approached by the remaining children in the herd.

“And are you saying that we girls are not tough, that we are as delicate as a sweet-smelling flower!?” retorted Ellie, her gaze could set a forest ablaze.

“Nope” Arron said quickly, recoiling more then he cared to admit at the female’s fiery remark. “You could frighten a Sharpooth with that look.” 

“I’m glad we are on the safe side of the stream” Ellie said in a much sweeter voice.

“You girls are dangerous; you look gorgeous but you’re nothing but incredible maniacs on the inside” Ruphus laughed and dodged the playful swipe from Sura who wore a look that just screamed ‘Oh you!’

*


Everyone seemed to enjoy watching Sura’s new children, well almost everyone. While everyone’s eyes were magnetised to the hatchlings another set of eyes watched scornfully from further away in a thicket of reeds; her nest. She was close enough to have protection within the herd and far enough away to be unnoticed, the reeds themselves provided a good ring obscuring the occupant if they were laying down which was useful cover if one wanted to remain undetected by Sharpteeth.
 
Sculra watched Sura, Ruphus and their new children with a miserable expression though her eyes held the burning fire of rage and the black smoke of hate.

Sculra said no words, she was content to observe and stew in her own anger. Sura had birthed a clutch of children and not only that but a full clutch. A full clutch of healthy children. With Ruphus. “How. Dare. She.” Sculra raged internally. Ruphus was supposed to be ‘her’ mate. Those were supposed to ‘her’ children and that meddling sentimental Swimmer was ‘supposed’ to be dead.

But no and now they mocked her with a full family, not only that but Sura was now chief mother! One Sura was bad enough but what about a whole nest? A whole nest of her children? Her traditions would be thrown out the window and her power would be rendered obsolete and as existent as her current fantasies. It was no secret amongst the herd members that there was a little friction between Sura and Sculra. They got along well enough but there was something unseen. From Sura there was a clear sense of distrust and distaste for Sculra’s inflexible views on keeping old traditions and keeping them to the book.

Sculra radiated a sense of animosity to Sura and open hostilities to her more open views and less tradition orientated way of living. So far there had been no real confrontations or open troubles between them but that only keep their true feeling for each other buried and whether they associated with each other the other Swimmers would always feel a sense of unease from looking at them both.

However, there was one event that had happened which took Sculra’s hatred of Sura to a whole new level. Her mating with Ruphus; the one Swimmer Sculra desired more than any other. He was everything to her. He had the looks, strength, brains and even wit but the one thing that made him stand out was his firm upbringing to traditions, similar to her own upbringing though not as extreme.

Sculra wanted children but she was very picky about mates. Only Ruphus would do, and to make matters worse, not only was he mated with Sura and had…bred…with her but he also didn’t seem to like her either. Ruphus followed traditions and the only arguments they got into was about traditions and for Ruphus old habits die hard but over time he complied with Sura more and more. Sculra hated seeing this. To her eyes Sura was brainwashing Ruphus - the one mate she wanted - and she was going to make her pay.

But she couldn’t not now. She was the high elder and that was the only power she currently had and ever since that cursed attack, she was now a member of a smaller herd where practicality and those who could do proper jobs for the herd had the most power; Sculra’s power was but a mere figure head. She would have to wait, patiently and watch from the sides look for weaknesses and when the time was right, exploit them to her benefit. One thing was for certain….

Sculra looked back at Sura and Ruphus.  Both were receiving lots of praise and congratulations from the other members of the herd. In that moment Sculra knew that she’d get back at Sura in the vilest way she could hurt the new mother; by taking away her children! But the time was not right. Their numbers were too low and while Sculra hated to admit it Sura was competent and had done a lot in the herd and if this herd needed to survive it would require everyone. So not yet but one day.

One day. She would have her revenge and she would have her true mate. 


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It was a busy day for Ducky and her brothers and sisters, being shown off to the whole herd. It was a little intimidating at first but she realised very quickly that there was no reason to fear. Everyone seemed happy and of course meeting the other children in the herd was a fun time for her. The youngest children in the herd were only at the age of little tails or toddlers and many of the older girls could not get their heads over the adorableness of Ducky and her other clutch mates.

However, through it all she had her family. Already the sibling bonds were being tried between herself and her brothers and sisters and it was with Ducky’s help and even Elliot’s that by the end of the day the whole clutch could walk, which made keeping them in the nest and out of harm’s way very difficult as the tiniest thing seemed to spark their curiosity and now that they could walk, they didn’t hesitate to explore everything around them. For the most part, Sura and Ruphus made a circle out of their own bodies. Some of the other children were inside the circle too while the adults watched from outside.

Another bond that had also grown was the bond between Ducky, her clutch mates and Elliot. He helped them walk, gave them encouragement and apart from their mother and father he was the one they’d go to when they found something that interested them. Unlike yesterday there wasn’t any rain just relentless heat. Thankfully for the hatchlings, their parent’s bodies provided enough shade and their Aunt continued to provide them with plentiful food and water. However, this would be the first day of another heatwave which were becoming far too common, although no surprise - after all this wasn’t called The Time of The Great Drought for nothing.

Soon the coming of twilight turned the sky a beautiful violet and a bright yellow sunset covered the sky and turning the clouds a bright red. The herd soon started to make their way back to their nests as dark approached. Ruphus got up from his spot. “It’s my turn to guard the herd tonight” he said. He trudged to a group of three male Swimmers that would be on guard duty tonight.

“Must you?” said Sura looking up at him.

Ruphus exchanged a quick nuzzle with his mate. “You know I don’t but I will now that we have our little ones. Who better to protect you while you sleep?” Sura sighed, looking down but nodded, she couldn’t fault his motive or logic.

“Be careful out there, dear” Sura said.

“You know I will” Ruphus said but before he left, he bent down and nuzzled his now sleeping children before walking off to his post.

Sura meanwhile looked back at her children and shook her head when she saw Elliot sitting next to the nest. “Sleeping time for you Elliot,” The young Swimmer groaned. His mother whose sleeping spot was only a Swimmer length away from Sura’s took notice.

“Come Elliot” She said. Her son reluctantly pulled away and went over to his mother. “You may think you’re the little one’s big brother but you’re still my son and you still need your sleep - honorary sibling or not”     

Elliot nodded silently as he curled up by his mother. Ellie, Sura and Merri briefly exchanged goodnights and one by one they all drifted off to sleep. However, Sura remained up. She didn’t want to go sleep. Protective instincts were hard to overrule but eventually she managed accept the lure of sleep and nuzzled her children one last time for the night. “Goodnight my little ones” she said.

However, as Sura let sleep embrace her she didn’t notice that her nuzzling had woken up Ducky. She opened her mouth wide and stretched out her arms as she yawned. Blinking a few times, she looked around the now dark landscape and couldn’t help but feel a little afraid. And she didn’t see her father anywhere. “Dada?” she asked but no one replied. Carefully getting to her feet and walking out of the nest with a few trips as her siblings were scattered all over the place and she could see as well in the dark.

Ducky walked down the slope of the small nest and walked a few paces. She had nearly made it over to Elly’s form when she saw the outline of a Swimmer standing in silent vigil on the perimeter of the herd and with the light of a waning crescent she was able to see that the figure was her father. Ducky perked up and smiled but before she could take another step, she heard a small sneeze. Drawn by the sound Ducky walked near Elly and found Elliot shifting a little restlessly.

Ducky walked over to him. She didn’t understand why he didn’t sleep with them but perhaps if he didn’t sleep with her then she could sleep with him. Ducky slowly walked over to him and curled up against his belly. It was cooler but the warmth was enough and she quickly fell asleep just as Elliot woke from her touch.

He looked down in surprise. “Ducky, what are you doing here?” His question was fruitless as Ducky was already fast asleep. Elliot smiled feeling truly touched. She was the first Swimmer kid that he felt he truly loved but not as a friend. “Goodnight…little sister”. He rubbed Ducky’s back and curled himself around her. He found sleep very quickly and the two little Swimmers had a peaceful night. The morning would be less than ideal, with Elliot waking up to a wet nest courtesy of Ducky and her mother in a bit of a panic when she found her nest missing one compassionate little Swimmer and Sura would only begin her laments on how many times Ducky would go missing from the nest in her life.






You asked for another Ducky chapter, you got another Ducky chapter. After 3 years. Well, better late then never. This is going to be the last of Ducky's that I'm going to be doing. Next character you can expect is Ruby. Hope you enjoy ^this and don't forget to give feedback and comments. Sorry this took so long.
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Now, it isn’t every day you see a nearly three-year old story continued though it was certainly a pleasure to read this new chapter. In many ways, this felt like a stronger installment in terms of pure quality of writing than some of your previous works. The way the chapter moved forward and conveyed the feelings of the characters were very well elaborated.

Most of all, I really liked Sura’s characterization here. The way everything felt unreal to her and how you characterized motherhood being something like a previously ungraspable dream which she finally was able to achieve was quite moving. The same went for Ruphus and the others and the feeling of the scene was quite great overall. The same goes for your portrayal of the children as it fit their older selves very well as well.

It was also nice to see Sculra as well as it’s very clear that her bitterness wasn’t a new feature in her personality. It was a good idea to start her part by pointing out just how miserable she is for envying others’ happiness while being unable to accept that she is responsible for building her own family and her own success. It’s just a shame she never realized it herself.

The way you wrapped up Ducky’s part felt fitting as it ended in a positive note while also reminding us of her future. That entire sequence was very nicely done and left a pretty good feeling for the reader. Overall, I’m not completely certain just how you’ll try to make the other parts of the fic feel different from Ducky’s part but I’m sure you have something in mind.

As I’ve implied already, I really liked this chapter and makes me a bit sad that we see new stuff from you relatively seldom. It’s clear that you’re continuing to improve as an author and it’ll be really intriguing to see how you’ll handle Ruby’s first day. :)littlefoot




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It sure is refreshing to see new content from you, even if it's a foreshadowing of your big "Swimmer Trials" story. Ducky's personality in this chapter really fit her character well, and it nicely illustrates just how mischievous and adventurous she'd become later in life. She seems the most curious out of the whole bunch, but as we all know, it may or may not have been for her own good. In all, it was quite cute and adorable, too. :duckyhappy

And, of course, we get to see Sculra's immediate contempt for Sura's children, and right away you can tell she's a character that will eventually make everyone's blood boil. Combining a cute, innocent child with such a heartless, scheming High Elder seems morbid, but you've always done a great job at that, especially when it comes to pitting them against each other, and it's led to, in my opinion, one of the greatest stories on this forum. Keep up the good work! :)petrie

This chapter was such a cute one to read, and I wish you good luck on Ruby's story, and on the rest of TST.
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In a lot of sense, this chapter felt almost like an interconnected prequel to The Swimmer Trials. In particular, I really like the elaboration of Sura's apprehension of the thought of having children as it really explains a lot as to why she's overbearingly paranoid towards her kids, Ducky in particular. Her warming up to her new reality is really touching to read, and so was the antics of the many hatchlings as they were introduced.

Sculra's debut here actually explained a fair bit as to her motives later in life. It always irked me that she seemed to hate Ducky just because she was related to Sura, but if she was redirecting her anger onto Ducky by seeing her as an expy of her mother or of the possible child she wouldn't have, it makes more sense. I can't remember if her end goal of trying to win Ruphus back was ever fully spelt out or emphasized in The Swimmer Trials, but I do remember that he thought that she was insane there, so in a sense, her stubborn futility and refusal to accept the truth was the catalyst for a bitter grudge that would send her spiraling into madness. Nonetheless, her envy of Sura and her new children, plus her willingness to be patient to enact a plan that would crush her rival is very foreboding indeed.

The conclusion also reminds me that I do like Elliot's character. Although he gets dragged into babysitting more than once, I like that the cautionary, disillusioned swimmer managed to break out of his shell upon meeting the many swimmer children. :)
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After re-reading the first chapter, I feel obligated to write a more thorough review of it than I did long ago.

I must say that you have done a great job at writing most of the chapter from Ducky's innocent perspective. This isn't the mind of the not so innocent author but truly ow a baby swimmer might be thinking. Truly impressive and I also have to commend you for the sheer accuracy of not only Canon but also your own universe. It's certainly nice to see well established characters all over again, yep yep yep. :)

Now to the current chapter, it was a pleasure to see this story return after so long! I think it is fairly apparent if you compare both chapters in regard to the writing style and storytelling that you have grown as an author!

Sura's backstory was well written and even though it is not exactly new, it's a different perspective on the same thing that never really surfaced on TST so this story doesn't simply provide some fluffy scenes and fanservice (if I may call it that) but also acts as a supplementary spin-off or prequel quite nicely :^^spike

Elliot is growing on me as a character, a kid who has seen a lot and who is reminded of being a silly child when he meets these little cuties. I certainly would love to see a story that features him in the future (perhaps the prompt challenge may provide a good opportunity? I mean, why doesn't he appear in TST?  :opetrie

You even included Sculra here which was another nice touch as well as some herd dynamics which are portrayed in a rather believable fashion  :yes

Overall, a great chapter!  :)littlefoot


Now I am really curious if you can make the other character's first days great like this as well. Knowing that you are a swimmer fan, I knew you were going to do great with Ducky's part but will you be able to write the other characters in an original and intriguing format as well? Knowing your ability as a fellow writer, I think you can overcome these challenges but time will surely tell  :duckyhappy
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