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« on: October 06, 2007, 07:42:14 AM »
OK. So I started drawing the comic.
It's harder than I thought. =/

I haven't finished the outlines of the first pages.
So let's start with the cover instead: ;)
Comic Cover

Story:
Sky lost his friends and wakes up somewhere in the Great Valley.
Not to know what to do now, he makes friends with Littlefoot and the others.
They go on a journey to find Sky's lost friends. But will they find them?

Page 01
Page 02
Page 03
Chapter 01

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« Reply #1 on: October 06, 2007, 10:28:27 AM »
That¥s a very nice cover.  :D Think it will be a nice comicstory :rolleyes:

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« Reply #2 on: October 06, 2007, 10:50:15 AM »
Cool! Cover art for your fanfiction! :D

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« Reply #3 on: October 07, 2007, 09:31:57 AM »
Ok. I edited the first post now.
You can find also a little about of the story.  ;)

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« Reply #4 on: October 07, 2007, 04:28:15 PM »
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You can find also a little about of the story
Also by looking closely at your cover art? Does the cover itself tell anything about the story? :)

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« Reply #5 on: October 08, 2007, 12:47:46 AM »
Uhmm..no, not really.  :P:

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« Reply #6 on: October 08, 2007, 03:08:05 AM »
Some years ago I drew cover art for a story I have been writing trying to include some story elements in the cover. This is your thread so I don't want to put up any pictures here, but if you are interested in taking a look, here are two links to an early version and a later version of that story's cover.

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« Reply #7 on: October 09, 2007, 01:50:11 PM »
Thanks for the hints, Malte. ;)
I would really like to put some story elements to the cover but I hadn't got an idea. :unsure:
But it's there now so I'll stay with it. :D
Btw. nice pics you got there. ;)

---Page 01 is up---

Finally finished the first page. :lol:
Page 01

Please tell me if the spellings/grammer are wrong so I can correct them.  ;)

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« Reply #8 on: October 09, 2007, 06:39:04 PM »
As Ratiasu stated, "Beyound" is "Beyond". And, is that one page all there is now?

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« Reply #9 on: October 10, 2007, 01:04:12 AM »
Yep.
I'll edit it if I got the time.

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« Reply #10 on: October 10, 2007, 03:37:57 AM »
that¥s cool. But how is it to read? From the left to the right, from up to down?^^ I have no idea. Never read something like that before. :D

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« Reply #11 on: October 10, 2007, 05:28:01 AM »
I love it :yes
An interesting beginning to start so much from a character's personal point of view rather than some camera perspective. Did you take inspiration from another comic, book, or movie? I think I have seen something remotely similar somewhere, but I can't pinpoint it. In any case I'm looking forward to see the story continue and unfold :)

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« Reply #12 on: October 10, 2007, 09:20:53 AM »
PokÈmon: Mystery Dungeon? :D

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« Reply #13 on: October 10, 2007, 12:25:42 PM »
@Page 01
Edited the "Beyond" error. =)

@Nimrod
It's from left to right and up to down. Like a normal comic.
But you can read the words in the 2nd panel in any order you want. ;)

@Malte
Glad you like it. =)
I got the scene from a game. It is called "Kingdom Hearts" where the main character
 "falls" like Sky here in the beginning. (don't expect a KH-like story line xD)
But I know I saw a movie with a scene like that. But I can't remember.  :unsure:

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« Reply #14 on: October 10, 2007, 04:28:50 PM »
I saw this on dA! I can"t wait to see the rest of it!

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« Reply #15 on: October 13, 2007, 08:09:00 AM »
---Page 2 is up---
Second page is up.  ;)
Page 02

Sorry for the late post. =/

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« Reply #16 on: October 13, 2007, 10:48:42 AM »
There aren't many LBT webcomics (that's what I'm calling this. anyway) that I am aware of (DarkHououmon's is the only other one I am aware of). I like the idea! However, you're style and decision to make this a webcomic are making this story progress slowly, so it's too early for me to make an accurate "review" on it. However, the artistry is good, as always. B)

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« Reply #17 on: October 13, 2007, 04:34:23 PM »
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the artistry is good, as always.
Absolutely :yes
Looking at the last two pictures it seems like Sky is in for an involuntary and painful participation in one of the Gang's fir cone games ;)
I'm looking forward to the next page to see if that guess is right.

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« Reply #18 on: October 15, 2007, 12:47:26 AM »
Thank you.  :)

I'm still sorry for being slow.  -_-

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« Reply #19 on: October 15, 2007, 01:44:54 AM »
You can't rush a good story! Just work on it when you can..that's all we ask! :D