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This is another DS story I'm planning. I'm starting this thread early because I want to give DS RP'ers a chance to tell me whether they approve of me using their characters.  In its current version, at least one main character has been taken from each user's roster, including some characters that have never seen the spotlight in my stories before. Please let me know if you don't want your characters to partake.

It includes aspects of Card of Ten, but is by and large its own story, starring the real characters from our RPs. It's set on Earth sometime after the (EDIT! now third) RP. Updates to this thread won't start until Card of Ten is finished, which is wrapping up.

For those not privvy to Darwin's Soldiers so far, read my summation in the first post of the Card of Ten story thread.

Reactions to my other two stories have been mostly positive, so I hope you guys will enjoy this one as well!


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You can use my characters in this new story.


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Permission granted to use all characters.

I have not determined if this will be canon.



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All right, here we go!
For those who aren't privvy to the Darwin's Soldiers story: In the first RP, Pelvanida Base was attacked by terrorists. One of the terrorists, Hans Donitz, switched to Pelvanida's side and helped defeat them, but not before they built an Einstein-Rosen Bridge, a device capable of transporting you through space and time.
In the second RP, James and a large team of ex-personnel from Pelvanida Base discovered an unethical and illegal underground project called Dragonstorm. They invaded the base with intentions to shut the project down, and the RP is still ongoing. Pavlov's checkmate takes place two months later.
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"…more reports coming in, an anonymous source claims that the recent shootings and car bombings at Las Vegas was a failed attempt at yet another terrorist attack…”

James Zanasiu changed the radio station in his car. A whole two months after the chaos James and his team caused, and it was still on every radio station and major news channel. The later takedown of Dragonstorm was still being overshadowed by the melee through Las Vegas that had occurred a month earlier.

“…so I don’t know what the commanders of Pelvanida were thinking, but personally, if I had had a helicopter crash into my base a few hours earlier, I would have taken steps to prevent the catastrophe that of course occurred later…”

Click.

“…Well, Bill, I don’t believe that the same people involved in the last attack could be responsible for this one. What I want to know is, what was so secret in Pelvanida that the government felt it necessary to blow it up?”

At least this time the actual participants were never disclosed. After publicly praising them for their work in shutting down Dragonstorm, the government didn’t want anyone to know of their involvement in the second raid on Pelvanida. James was okay with this. He didn’t enjoy his last experience in the media spotlight, and was grateful not to have to do it all over.

His headlight reflected off a green road sign: SANTA BARBARA: 20 MI.

Before the government had clamped down on everyone involved in the affair, James had left town. He hoped he could get to his isolated cabin on the beach, and stay home until everything blew over.

He stopped at a gas station to refill. The cashier leered at him over the counter.

“Everyone’s got something to hide, eh, shifty?” She smiled coyly.

James left in a hurry. He didn’t have much longer to go.

Twenty minutes later, he recognized the dark spot on the horizon as his cabin. He clicked his brights on against the darkening sky, and immediately saw something was wrong.

There were already cars in the driveway. James’ headlights reflected of the blue-red glass of police cars.

His chest tightened. He couldn’t try anything weird without giving his identity away. He ruffled his hair wildly, and was grateful he’d never gotten around to shaving the beard that he’d formed.

A sheriff crossed his arms and walked up to the car. James rolled his window down, trying to lower his voice more than normal. “What’s going on here, sir?”

“What’s your name?”

James thought quickly. “Nigel Munroe. Just heading into town to visit my son. He’s going to UCSB.”

“Have you seen any other cars on the road?”

“No.”

The sheriff started writing on his pad. “We’re looking for the guy that lives here. Supposed to get him to sign something.”

The sheriff showed a picture of James, minus the beard, with combed hair, and looking significantly cheerier.

“If you see him, let us know, okay?”

James nodded. “Good luck.” He rolled his window up and continued driving down the road.

A confidentiality agreement, and a way of tracking him. That was probably what they wanted. Well, they didn’t have to worry. James had no intention of telling anybody about his involvement any time soon.

He couldn’t be positive the policeman hadn’t recognized him. He hadn’t asked for his license, which was unusual. James couldn’t afford to take chances.

Once he was in town, he ditched the car in an underground parking lot and hiked a mile inward to a nondescript hotel.

It was a generic hotel, with white walls, four-paneled windows, and three floors. Checking in under a fake name, he found he could get a pretty good room on the second floor. He knew the cops would be able to trace him to this hotel in time, but he hoped to be long gone by tomorrow.

The room had a bed, a table, and a television. Also sitting on the sink was one of those goody baskets stocked with candy and chips. James’ stomach growled, but he knew they charged you exorbitant prices for each piece eaten once you checked out.

Taking off his coat and shoes, James collapsed into bed, not even bothering to get under the blankets. All he needed was a good night’s rest.

That’s when his cell phone rang.

Curious, James looked up. There weren’t many people he’d be willing to pick the phone up for right now, but he should check.

He was surprised to see it was Werner. He flipped the phone open. “Hello?”

“Hi James.”

“Hey, not to be rude, but why are you calling me this late?”

Werner and Hans were living in a government-provided house in Nevada. Werner had taken a job at a gun store to earn them money.

“I just got back from work. Hans is missing.”


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Mmm. Nice, off to a high octane start.

And I consider this story canon.

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James was taken aback. “Are you sure?”

Hans had been cleared of all personal charges in the terrorist attack, but their lawyer advised him to stay at home and avoid doing anything their opponents could use against them.

“Yeah. He’s gone. But I know where he went.”

“How?”

“Well, I’m not supposed to do this, but because he’s gone missing I read through his mail. I want to show this one letter to you.”

“Hold on.”

James went back down to the front office and requested their fax number. Minutes later, the receptionist handed a piece of paper over, and James read a short letter addressed to Hans.


Richard Warden
Red Dune Caves
October 25th, 2009

Dear Mr. Donitz,

Let me be the first to congratulate you on your successful acquittal from the crimes of your compatriots. Your remarkable ability to deflect blame coupled with your knowledge obtained while in the terrorist ranks makes you an invaluable asset to me. I was wondering if you wouldn’t mind visiting me at the Red Dune Caves, on the outskirts of the Nevada Deserts, to discuss some services you could provide for me.

Please don’t involve anyone else. It would be a shame if others (say, your son) were brought to this.

Sincerely,


Ricky W.



“This doesn’t sound good.”

“It’s dated from a week ago,” said Werner. “He must have been worrying about this for a week and finally decided to go to protect me.”

“Hmm.” James crossed to the public access computer in the lobby. “The Red Dune Caves are at the edge of the mountain range, across the desert from Pelvanida and Carson City Camp. It’d be tough, but he could get there by foot.”

“We need to go find him!”

“Agreed,” said James. His heart sank. Time to drive all the way back to Nevada.

“I’ll make some calls, and we’ll see who else is available,” said Werner. “Thank you so much for helping us here.”

“Don’t worry about it.  What’s a team for? I’ll cal you back.” James hung up and immediately called Zachary.

“Hello?”

“Hey, Zach.”

“James. What can I do for you?”

“I’m wondering if you’re available sometime in the near future.”

“No. The next two weeks begin the trials on the surviving Dragonstorm scientists. I’m working with the Equestrian Scientific Union to give testimony against Dr. O’Neill. What precisely do you need?”

“I don’t feel comfortable discussing it over the phone.”

“Then you shall have to fill me in at a later date. Good luck.”

“Thanks, Zach,” James furrowed his brow. Somehow he’d always assumed Zach would be available whenever there were missions to go on.

Zach seemed to pick this up. “However,” he continued, “this might not be a completely bad thing. Remember, Aisha is your assistant now, not me. Perhaps you should call her.”

“That’s actually a great idea. I’ll do that. See you, Zach.”

“And you, James.”

James used the operator to call Carson City Camp.

“I’d like to speak to Aisha Tennes. See if she’ll accept a call from Dr. Zanasiu.”

After verifying his identity, Aisha was put on the phone. “ ëS pretty late, James,” she muttered sleepily. “Is something going on?”

“I don’t feel comfortable mentioning it over the phone, butó”

“Hold on.” James heard a click, and the sound quality of the call drastically cleared up. Aisha came back on. “Alright, security tele-monitoring turned off. It’s just the two of us now.”

James wondered who else had been on before now. “Hans has gone missing. Werner and I have  location, somewhere in the Nevada deserts, where it seems he’s been coerced into joining some Richard Warden. We’re going to see if we can figure out exactly what’s going on and help him out if he needs it.”

“Cool. I can supply the weapons and a Jeep. When are we going?”

“James was surprised at her readiness to guarantee transportation and arms. “Your dad won’t clear this mission. It’s completely off the record.”

“I’ll tell daddy it’s for a date. To a hunting lodge or something. That’s worked before. What time?”

“You’re supplying all the stuff. What time would work for you?”

“Quickest I could get everything ready is tomorrow, 11 o’clock. That good?”

James formed a map in his head. A drive from Santa Barbara to Carson City would take about eight hours. He’d be getting up early. “That’s great.”

“Our Jeeps have room to fit 4 comfortably,” Aisha yawned. “If that’s it, I need to get some sleep now so I can prepare for our ëdate’ tomorrow.”

“ ëNight. And thank you.”

James counted off the personnel in his head. Werner, Aisha, and himself. That left one slot left.

But Kerzach didn't pick up. James also noticed the messaging system had been taken off. Odd.

He dialed another number. It also had been disconnected, but James knew the government had done it months ago. Luckily, he checked his Instant Messaging system on the hotel computer and saw the person he wanted was online.

James: Shelton, are you on?
Shelton: By law, all scientists have to be online at least 17 hours a day. What’s up?
James: I was wondering if you had time to go on a trip tomorrow.
Shelton: What?

James waited. He assumed Shelton was slowly realizing what James meant.

Shelton: Oh. Yeah, I’m free.
James: You sure? Not everyone I invited can make it.
Shelton: Lemme check my schedule. . .still blacklisted. . .still disinherited. . .yeah, I’d say I was pretty free.
James: You’re still disinherited?
Shelton: Dear sweet mom hasn’t gotten around to changing the paperwork yet.
James: If you say so. 11 o’clock at Carson’s place.

The reference was to Carson City Camp. James hoped Shelton got the reference.

Shelton: c o soon!

The typo was deliberate; Shelton was referencing the periodic symbol for cobalt, showing he understood. James logged out of IM and recalled Werner.

“Zachary’s busy, but I got Aisha, and she’s going to provide transportation to the location. Shelton is coming too.”

“That’s good. Cale would like to help as well.”

“Cale?” That wasn’t a name James expected to hear. “How did he find out about all this?”

“I told Bailey, who was running the phone line at Pelvanida. He said Cale had received a similar letter, but ignored it. He patched me through to Cale, who feels if he had done something about Ricky when he learned about it, Hans wouldn’t be in danger. He feels obligated to make up for this.”

“He doesn’t have to do that.”

“I’ll tell him that if you like, but I don’t think he’ll listen.”

“No, we can use all the help we can get. Aisha wants all of us at Carson City Camp by 11 o’clock.”

“I’ll tell Cale. We’ll be there. James,” Werner suddenly said, “I just want to remind you that even if we do rescue Hans, the government is going to find out about this, and they won’t be happy.”

James knew. That’s what he’d been thinking about since the first call. “Since when have I cared what they think? We’ll get Hans back, Werner. Don’t worry.”

James hung up and trudged slowly back to his room. All the ground he had covered since leaving Nevada, and now he has to drive all the way back. In one night.

In his room, he eyed the goody basket again. His stomach was still growling.

“Aw, hell with it.” He grabbed a bag of cookies and started stuffing his face.


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I like it.

Can you add Dr. Kerzach in here as well? I'm not sure what role he'd play in here but I think having him as one of the missing ones would be interesting.

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(OOC: Sure, I'll add a reference to the last post with James trying to call Kerzach.

I'm leaving on a one-day trip in an hour so tomorrow's post is being posted right now. The plot thickens...)
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Four short hours and eight very long hours later, James welcomed himself back into Carson City. Before he reached the base, however, Aisha and the others met him.

On a long, desolate stretch of road between the city and the base, a Jeep rolled up alongside JamesÔø? car. Shelton saluted him from the passengerÔø?s seat, and Werner sat between the two.

Ôø?Sorry, James,Ôø? said Aisha, Ôø?but youÔø?re going to have to sit in the back, like Cale.Ôø?

James crawled in. Ôø?Fine by me, just so long as someone other than me is driving.Ôø?

The Jeep rolled off the road and started down through the desert, making for the mountains on the other side. On the way, the teammates swapped stories regarding where theyÔø?d gone and what theyÔø?d been up to.

Ôø?IÔø?ve been jumping around, canÔø?t really get any decent jobs,Ôø? told Shelton. Ôø?Nobody even remotely scientific wants anything to do with me, but my tech and mechanic skills have been put to good work. Lately IÔø?ve been working in Vegas, getting paid by casinos to find more ways to rip off their customers.Ôø?

Ôø?IÔø?m training to get a pilotÔø?s license,Ôø? said Aisha. Ôø?And most of my other time is taken up by school.Ôø?

Ôø?By the way,Ôø? asked James, Ôø?who was monitoring our call last night?Ôø?

Ôø?Corporal SternÔø?, said Aisha. "He volunteered to help out around the base. DonÔø?t worry, he wonÔø?t tell anybody. What about you, Cale?Ôø?

Cale, unlike the others, was a chameleon, a successful experiment produced at Pelvanida who could control and manipulate electricity.

Ôø?Still at Pelvanida,Ôø? said Cale. Ôø?Serious restrictions have been put on my clearance levels, since my involvement in the terrorist attack, but IÔø?m slowly getting involved in the electrical engineering department. Lightning-resistant equipment and whatnot.Ôø?

Ôø?When did you get your letter from Warden?Ôø? asked James.

Ôø?A month ago. Said he could use my assistance for something, and threatened to make a pass on Slash and Agito if I refused. I ignored him. I figured they could handle themselves.Ôø? Cale balled his fists. Ôø?I didnÔø?t think he would move onto other survivors and threaten them as well. I need to make up for my mistake.Ôø?

Ôø?All right, but remember our primary goal is to rescue Hans, not take down Warden.Ôø?

Ôø?That reminds me,Ôø? said Aisha. She passed a folder back.

James opened it. It was an employment file on Richard Ôø?RickyÔø? Warden. The picture showed a thin, bony Dalmatian with a lumpy head and bloodshot eyes.

Ôø?Ricky was a security guard at Pelvanida,Ôø? Aisha continued. Ôø?After 13 uneventful years as a night guard, he quit unexpectedly in March 2009.Ôø?

Ôø?DidnÔø?t that seem a little unusual?Ôø?

Ôø?Not really. Pelvanida received dozens of resignations and transfer requests after the terrorist attack. Warden never took another job, and disappeared from the public records after that.Ôø?

Ôø?Hmm. Any past criminal history?Ôø?

Ôø?Juvie Hall a few times when he was younger, but after he joined the workforce he straightened up, and had no more incidents.Ôø?

Ôø?He doesnÔø?t sound too threatening.Ôø?

Ôø?I would have said the same thing about Dr. Branston, before he had me tortured,Ôø? reminded Shelton.

Ôø?Good point. WeÔø?ll keep alert.Ôø?

Ten minutes later he Red Dune Caves became visible. They were embedded into the walls of a brick-colored mesa, with the largest sitting atop a tall collection of rocks at the mesa edge. Tents and some collapsible structures could be seen on the mesa top. Large holes in the mesa walls showed that there were tunnels inside.

Aisha parked the car out of the mesaÔø?s earshot and they prepared to hike on foot.

James looked at the gun she handed him. Ôø?This is a hunting rifle.Ôø?

She shrugged. Ôø?I told them I was going hunting; what else could I bring?Ôø? She offered one to Werner, but he shook his head. Ôø?IÔø?m good,Ôø? he said, holding up his Berattas.

Cale politely declined, holding up his fingers to reveal an electric current running between his thumb and index finger. Ôø?I can defend myself adequately without weaponry.Ôø?

Ôø?I donÔø?t do guns,Ôø? Shelton. Ôø?I have a tendency to shook the wrong thing. Like my foot.Ôø?

Aisha kept the rifle for herself.

The team crept silently through the desert until the mesa loomed above them. No guards were in sight.

Ôø?All right, hereÔø?s the plan,Ôø? said James. Ôø?Cale, go up there and pretend youÔø?ve changed your mind and want to join Ricky. Find a way to get us in, and see if you can locate Hans.Ôø?

Cale nodded. Ôø?IÔø?ll contact you as soon as possible.Ôø?

He left the others and made his way to the mesa. For the next two minutes, James and his team waited. FinallyÔø?

Ôø?James. This is Cale.Ôø?

Ôø?Are you in?Ôø?

Ôø?Yes. IÔø?ve searched the entire complex. The base is completely abandoned.Ôø?


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College starts back up in about two weeks, so I want the whole story posted before that time. So updates might get a little more frequent. I hope you don't mind :)
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James and his team climbed up to the mesa top. Just as Cale had said, nobody could find any personnel, dead or alive.

“This is so odd,” said Aisha, exiting yet another tent. “Most of these haven’t even lost their new-tent smell. This place wasn’t used very long before everyone cleared out.”

Shelton looked through some papers. “I can’t even tell what they were planning to do. Ricky and his men weren’t much for record-keeping.’

“What have you got?”

“Nothing. Loads of rubbish. Most of these papers are filled with half finished games of ëhangman’ó” He broke off. “This one’s got my name on it.”

“What?”

Shelton handed him one of the papers, pointing to a hangman game near the top.

_S_ ___ _E_ ___ _T_ _O_ ___

James squinted. “That’s missing half it’s letters. It could be something else.”

Shelton shook his head. “The wrong guesses correspond as well.”

“Did you know Ricky before?”

“No, I’ve never heard of him.”

“Isn’t Shelton a city in Connecticut?” said Aisha. “They may be referring to it.”

James crumpled the paper up. “Let’s not read too much into this. Especially when it might not even be your name.”

Cale and Werner showed up. “We finished searching around the mesa,” said Cale. “We can’t find any signs of a large group of people leaving the mesa.”

“But remember that some time has passed,” said Werner. “The wind and sand could have covered their tracks.”

James rubbed his forehead. “So we still don’t know anything for sure.”  He looked at the highest cave. “Cale, what was up there?”

“I didn’t look very closely, once I saw it was abandoned,” said Cale. “It was a pretty empty room.”

“Let’s check it out.”

The team started climbing up the stacked rocks to the cave entrance above.

Werner was the first to hoist himself into he cave. “Cale’s right,” he said “Pretty empty.”

James got to his feet and looked around. “Shelton? Can I borrow your flashlight?”

“Yeah,” Shelton grunted, not yet in the cave. He held it up over the edge. James took it.

The flashlight beam showed the room to be a massive cavernous one-room cave. A few tables were set up, and a dented file cabinet sat in the corner. That was it.

“Yup. Pretty empty.”

Shelton collapsed onto his hands and knees, panting heavily. “You made us all climb up here for nothing?”

“Sorry.” James turned to go, and the flashlight beam reflected off something on the sidewall. Something huge.

James’ mouth dropped open as the flashlight beam traced a massive metallic ring embedded in the wall. “Guys…”

It was the Einstein-Rosen Bridge.


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(Don't worry, this isn't a Card of Ten remake. They won't be leaving Earth this time :) )
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“What the hell is that thing doing here?” breathed Shelton, his exhaustion forgotten as he stepped forward, staring at the deactivated bridge.

Aisha ran a finger along its smooth surface. “So this is that giant wormhole thingy you were all going on about.”

“ ëGiant wormhole thingy’?” quoted Shelton incredulously. “This thing can take you to anywhere in the galaxy! To any time period!”

“No, it can’t,” said James. “We tried it, remember?”

“It spat us back out and shut down,” said Werner.

“Well, yes,” conceded Shelton. “But what if they fixed it?”

“ ëFixed it?’ The best top government sciences couldn’t figure to what was wrong with it! You think some rogues led by a night watchmen could in a cave?”

“That’s all the terrorists had when they came up with the blueprints! They only attacked Pelvanida for the materials, something a night guard could smuggle out while on the job!”

“But how did the bridge get here?” asked Werner.

“It was stolen three months ago,” said Aisha. Everyone looked at her. “From an armored truck taking it to Area 51,” she continued. “After initial searching failed, further attempts at locating it were put on the back burner following the Dragonstorm controversy.”

“Wait,” said James. “Are you saying Ricky and his men fixed the bridge, went through it, and never came back?”

“Someone who understood the bridge that well would have left men behind to reactivate the bridge and bring them home,” said Cale.

Shelton studied the control panel. “Well, yeah, but they did. The coordinates they traveled to are right here.”

“Where did they go?”

“I told you, right here. They traveled to the same spot. It’s the t-coordinate they changed.”

“How much?”

“I don’t know! I don’t know where it was going to take us the first time!” Shelton shook his head. “I’ve got no reference point, I can’t find out anything. It cold lead to any time in the past or future.”

James looked at the bridge. “This mission just keeps getting better and better. Well, it’s too risky. We don’t know anything about where this goes, or even if it works. Last time we tried this thing it could have killed us, and I’m not taking that chance again.”

“That is your choice to make,” said Werner, “but Hans is my father, and I’m not giving up on him. I’m going through.”

“As am I,” agreed Cale.

James looked from Werner to Cale. He realized neither were going to back down. He sighed, swinging his rifle off his back. “Fine, majority wins. Let’s get this over with.”

“Oh, boy! Ever sine I heard about this thing, I’ve wanted to try it out!” exclaimed Aisha.

“Now hold on!” Shelton interjected quickly. “Let’s not make the same mistake they did! Someone other than just me needs to stay behind for back up!”

“How do you know we’ll even be able to call for back-up?” asked James.

“I don’t, but it’d be nice to have that option.” Shelton folded his arms. “You were the one preaching caution ten seconds ago.”

James looked from Werner to Cale to Aisha. His eyes fell on Aisha.

She sighed. “Just because I’m the one without family or a personal vendetta with these people?”

James nodded. “Knowing this bridge, we’ll probably just get shot back out, and you won’t miss a thing. Shelton, dial it.”

Aisha glared at Shelton. “You’re just afraid to be in this creepy abandoned base all on your own.”

“You know it,” said Shelton. He set the control panel. “I’m adding one to every coordinate, since we don’t want you flying through at the exact same time they did. You’ll need some wiggle room. Bridge open.”

A wave of blue and white space-time fabric wove into existence inside the ring. “Power supply secure,” reported Shelton. “I’m going to search around for more information while you’re gone.”

“Don’t hold your breath.” James stared at the looming bridge. He tightened his grip on the rifle. “Go!”

He, Werner, and Cale jumped into the bridge.


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The faster updates are cool with me. Will you still be able to continue Darwin's Soldiers II or should I place your character "in stasis"?

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Naw, Darwin's Soldiers II is the one thing I plan on continuing during the school year. You can keep me in :)


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Okay, I assume updates will be less frequent and I will slow down my posting.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

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I have a question regarding my involvement in Darwin's Soldiers 2.

Is Fredrick Clyco a counter-productive character to intrude in the RP with? I get the feeling that, unlike with the fanatsy roleplays, DS is more like a story written by a few seperate writers rather then a welcoming RP.

Don't get me wrong, but it's the genuine feeling im getting from it so far.


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Caustizer, please take discussion of the RP to the Darwin's Soldiers II RP discussion thread.

As for your question, DS is very plot driven but every player has the right to throw in a plot twist whenever they want. And no, your character is not intruding, indeed we can enter your character into the RP with little problem.

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I'm the only one writing extra stories about Darwin's Soldiers, much as I'd wish others would do it so I could read them. The rest of the users merely participate in the RP like any other. It's a very open and inclusive RP, don't worry about disrupting the story for any reason; the whole Dragonstorm plotline was introduced into the first RP with no regard for the terorrist main plot, and it spawned the RP we're all doing now! Who knows, maybe Clyco and his weapon could cause the impetus for Darwin's Soldiers 3!

And there aren't just a few writers. Here's the list of all users that have participated in Darwin's Soldiers:

Serris, f-22, Starfall, LB&T (myself), Mirumoto_Kenjiro, Nick22, lbt/cty
_lover (has dropped out), and now Cautizer! And that's not counting all the people on the Furtopia forum.
EDIT: And now Noname!

I'm glad a Canadian has been introduced into the mix; chalk up another country with a DS representative! (Also, up until now, my character Dr. Shelton had been the only foreigner. He's not alone anymore!)

On another note, now that the character has been introduced into the RP, I'm going to expand his cameo callout in the third post of this story, to explain why he's still at Pelvanida and not Canada.


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Hmm. I may decide to cook up a DS story (aside from the fact that I'm already cooking up a novelization of the first RP and possibly a novelization of this one).

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To James’ surprise, he was not thrown forcibly back out, but instead after a brief trip through blackness landed safely on his feet somewhere completely new.

It was close to twilight, his first sign something was off. The other was that they were now below the mesa, rather then at the top.

“It worked!” said Werner excitedly. “It worked! We’ve moved!”

“It’s night now,” observed Cale. “Are we in the future or the past?”

Werner tapped his watch. “This receives its time via radio signal from an atomic clock.” He read it.

“What does it say?” asked James.

Werner was silent.

“Werner?”

“December 8, 7:25 pm. 1990.”

“1990?” repeated Cale.

“We’re in the past,” said Werner in awe. “We’re 19 years in the past!”

“Shhh!” hissed James.

Dark shapes appeared at the mesa edge. Voices wafted their way.

James whispered. “They might have got a glimpse of the bridge. We need to get away from this area.”

“I suggest we head into the caves under the mesa,” said Cale.

James nodded. “Agreed.”

They sealed the mesa wall until they reached an opening leading into the inter-mesa complex. Two men were in the room, facing away. James readied his rifle and peeked through his scope. “There’s no night vision on this…” he muttered.

“Let me,” whispered Cale, his skin flushing dark to match the surrounding environment. He tiptoed toward the men.

From there James lost sight of him until both men grunted as their heads smashed together. “You can come in now,” Cale said, flashing back to visibility.

James, Werner, and Cale headed deeper into the tunnels. At the first junction, they had to choose between a lit-up passageway to the left and one with noise floating down it from the right.
 
“What do you guys think?” asked James.

“Left,” said Werner. “Away from the noise, which is probably people.”

“Right,” said Cale. “We should stay in the dark.”

James thought for a minute. Finally he pointed. “Coriolis Effect dictates we go counter-clockwise. Left.”

The lit passage eventually came out in a makeshift infirmary. Some empty cots were set up and medicines sat on stools, but nobody was around.

“Guess we head back and go right.”

As they approached, they could make out the canned voice of a radio speaker. It seemed to be instructing someone.

“…Chinese naval base, off the coast. Cold as blazes this time of year. You’ll have a Type 81 assault rifle and a Type 77 pistol, just in case.”

James and his team reached a corner, and peered into what looked like a locker room. A group of men were huddled around a radio embedded in the ceiling. The speaker had a very gruff and commanding voice.

“…extremely valuable and must be handled with care. Report to the ITG in ten minutes.”

Once the radio cut out, the man under it swore loudly while the others laughed at him.

“Why do I always get the Chinese missions?” he spat angrily.

“Well, you right well look like one already!” laughed a comrade.

“Yeah, be glad you aren’t Russian or Scandinavian looking,” nodded another. “Stevens loves to gripe about Russian winters.”

Some of the men were leaving. James and his team darted back to the empty first room.

“What were they talking about?” asked Werner.

“Sounded like that man was being sent to China,” said Cale. “To retrieve something.”

“Could they have the bridge?” asked Werner.

James shook his head. “The reason they’re stuck here is cause the bridge stayed in the present. I do want to know what they’re using to travel, though.”

“Could be something like planes,” suggested Werner.

“I think Pelvanida would notice planes shooting off across the desert.”

“Did Pevanida exist in 1990?” asked Cale.

Werner checked his watch. “We can head back in five and follow that that man to see what he uses to travel to China.”

“Let’s go now. We don’t know how much time the hike takes.”


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When they reached the locker room, the man was alone, and now dressed in a Chinese Naval uniform. James could see rows of other outfits from around the world in the lockers behind the man. After a few seconds, the man took a different exit, and James and his team followed cautiously.

The tunnel started sloping upwards until it was more of a crawlspace than a passageway. James, Cale, and Werner were forced to go single file.

The man finally exited out a hatch. Stars shined above them. When James was sure the coast was clear, he led the way onto the mesa top.

The top was virtually abandoned. Apparently after leaving their tents in 2009, Warden’s men never bothered to set up a new camp, opting instead to live in the pre-made tunnels.

The man made his way to the higher cave. A criss-crossing metal ramp led the way up to the beckoning cave mouth.

“That ramp will wake up the whole mountain if we try to go up it,” whispered James.

“But if we climb, we won’t reach the cave in time,” whispered Werner.

“I’m the fastest climber,” said Cale, flushing his skin to black again. “I’ll report what I see.”

Cale disappeared into the dark. For a few seconds, James and Werner watched the man in the Chinese uniform cross back and forth up the ramp. Then he disappeared into the cave.

“Other people are in here,” Cale reported over the radio. “He’s standing at attention. One of them’só”

He broke off.

“Cale? Cale! What do you see!”

“Itóit is not the Einstein-Rosen Bridge,” said Cale. “But it is close. More rudimentary.”

“They’ve got a bridge!” exclaimed James.

“It’s not as advanced. It’s smaller. But there he goes. It does indeed work.”

James started for the ramp. “This is serious. We need to find out what they’re doing, and how they built themselvesó”

A flash of light, a loud bang, and James heard Werner cry out. James whirled around.

Men had reappeared in the same hatchway James and his team had exited from, and were firing on him. Werner lay on his back, clutching his side. James returned fire feebly, but the hunting rifle was not made for rapid fire. Ducking from another round of fire, James ran for the only cover he had: behind the rocks supporting the cave.

Reinforcements were coming from out of the cave. James took sight and sniped one off the ramp. He wished he had thought to take one of Werner’s Berettas for more close-range combat.

One man rounded the corner and James shot him. But he was still holed up, men converging from above and around, on a mesa with nowhere to run.

At least he seemed to be a little more skilled than his attackers. With just his rifle, he sniped four of the five men climbing down from the cliff face at him. The last was using the rocks to keep out of his line of fire.

“Tricky little…” James muttered to himself, starting up the rock face at the man. At least he’d have cover up there.

Men had surrounded the rocky face, and some were starting to climb after him. James kept going, peering around. Where was that one…?

A whirl to his right, and the lone soldier got a kick knocking James’ rifle to the side. James parried, grasping for his rifle, but his attacker flashed a light in his face, then locked his head.

“Augh!” James cried, covering his eyes.

The man loosened his grip. “James?” Hans gasped.

A man called from below. “You got him?”

“Yeah!” called someone halfway up. I see ëem! Donitz got ëim!”

The men cheered. James got one look at Hans’ horrified face as the others grabbed him and hauled him down the rock face to the circle of men below.



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Nice twist to the story.

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