The Adventures of Littlefoot and Ali

Kor · **Reply #60 on:** December 01, 2007, 04:31:55 PM

I enjoyed this chapter of the story. The plot seemed to flow in a natural way with no choppiness and the characters.

Manny Cav · **Reply #61 on:** December 01, 2007, 11:26:17 PM

pokeplayer984, you are THE master at procrastination related to promises concerning this story.

Nice scene-- whoops, did I let that slip?

: I meant to say nice chapter. I hope you didn't throw Pat into this as a one-timer and that he'll make more appearances.

Kor · **Reply #62 on:** December 02, 2007, 12:02:40 AM

Guess we have to wait to see if Pat is a 1 shot appearance and he'll go for a coffee break after or if he's around for a while.

lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #63 on:** December 02, 2007, 11:45:38 AM

Let me guess how it will end. Somehow, it will end and will connect to you next fan fiction.

Kor · **Reply #64 on:** December 02, 2007, 12:09:09 PM

Nah, it'll likely end with Ali joining Bron's herd with Rhett. Shorty will stay in the valley and Cera will join Ali's former herd.

lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #65 on:** December 02, 2007, 12:11:31 PM

I highly doubt that will happen.

Kor · **Reply #66 on:** December 02, 2007, 03:20:45 PM

Perhaps not, but it would be a surprise ending wouldn't it?

lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #67 on:** December 02, 2007, 03:21:54 PM

You've got me there.

Manny Cav · **Reply #68 on:** December 02, 2007, 05:41:22 PM

Quote from: lbt/cty_lover,Dec 2 2007 on 09:45 AM

Let me guess how it will end. Somehow, it will end and will connect to you next fan fiction.

Assuming that this fanfiction will ever have a sequel, then this is very likely for obvious reasons.

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lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #69 on:** December 02, 2007, 06:33:24 PM

Isn't pokeplayer writing another fan fiction? Where the gang is wrongly accused and forced to flee. and they return 20 years later.

If the ending wouldn't be pretty, then the perfect sequel would be the one pokeplayer is planning next.

Kor · **Reply #70 on:** December 02, 2007, 09:53:55 PM

I dislike bad endings, if he did that I'd not read any of his fan fiction again. I'm must weird that way. I usually don't like bad endings. Just me.

lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #71 on:** December 02, 2007, 10:21:11 PM

It wouldn't be a bad ending. Just an awesome beginning to a new story.

Manny Cav · **Reply #72 on:** December 02, 2007, 10:24:49 PM

Actually, it would be a bad ending. Kind of like Star Wars Episode 5. Bad ending, but good start and ending for Episode 6.

lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #73 on:** December 02, 2007, 10:27:47 PM

Somewhat. It depends on how it ends. If it ends like Episode V, then it will be bad. But there probably is a way to make it possible to link two stories like such.

Kor · **Reply #74 on:** December 02, 2007, 11:33:59 PM

Why do they have to be linked at all. Why can't they be 2 different stories? completely separate?

Manny Cav · **Reply #75 on:** December 02, 2007, 11:35:54 PM

Quote from: Kor,Dec 2 2007 on 09:33 PM

Why do they have to be linked at all. Why can't they be 2 different stories? completely separate?

There's none that I can think of.

pokeplayer984 · **Reply #76 on:** December 03, 2007, 02:42:52 AM

Okay, let me clear up everything here.

First off, this story WILL have a sad final chapter. Yet that won't be for quite some chapers. There's still alot to do with this story. Not to mention so many charcters left to put in. (Since I'm planning to do 1-12 and the TV Series charcters, that's quite a list. :^.^:) I'll be quite busy with this story.

Next up, this fic and Dark Future (My LBT R Rated Dark Fic) are NOT of the same series, but two completely different ones. On top of that, Dark Future was actually abandoned quite some months ago. I have sadly lost interest in continuing it until further notice.

Third, when The Adventures of Littlefoot and Ali ends, IT WILL END! There will be no sequal whatsoever. I have a way of designing the final chapter that is VERY unique. Most of my stories don't get a sequal. This one will be quite lucky to get one if it does happen, so don't keep your hopes up.

Now, as for Pat, he WILL appear again in a few chapters. After all, he does have an important role now that he's part of the herd searching for Ali and Ret's herd. Remember, due to the earthshake, they have to go through HEAVY sharptooth territory, so there should be quite some excitment when THAT happens.

Now, as for the next chapter, get ready for THE moment that will change Ali and Littlefoot's relationship forever.

It's a BIG one. So be ready.

Kor · **Reply #77 on:** December 03, 2007, 03:17:02 AM

Thanks for the info. I"m sure many here are waiting for your postings of your story installments. Good Luck.

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #78 on:** December 03, 2007, 07:21:19 AM

Oh....this is gonna be a good one...I can feel it! And I look forward to it as well!

Manny Cav · **Reply #79 on:** December 03, 2007, 10:35:14 AM

I look very much forward to it, as well, but with that information in mind, I look forward to it with a chest full of worry rather than excitement. I don't know, I feel like I got slapped upside the head again. Sorry if that came off wrong.