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Lost in a Forest

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Poor Devon man...that's just sad...really sad. Lol, I seriously can't imagine that Spiketail saying, "Call me Joe," with a straight face because I seriously couldn't, I swear. :lol

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Hey guys! Sorry for the hold up. I had a hard time finishing chapter five.
Speaking of chapter five, here it is!

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Recovery

Devon was the first to wake up the next morning, still tucked safely under Pterano's wing. He smiled, nuzzling the older flyer gently before removing his wings so he could stretch and get up on his feet. He looked at the clear morning sky, sighing before turning his look back to Pterano. He smiled, seeing that Petrie and Ducky were snuggled up against the older flyer's shoulders. It was the most adorable sight he ever saw, but he also noticed that Pterano's blood was leaking through the treestars on his back.

Without a word, he took off to find more treestars, not even noticing a brown flyer in the watching in the trees. "You just wait, Pterano. I'll getcha soon." Sierra mumbled darkly before flying after his son.

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Ducky was the second to wake up this morning, yawning. "Good morning, every one," she mumbled sleepily. "Good morning, Petrie's Uncle."

She received no answer for everyone else was fast asleep. She took a look around in curiosity. She had no idea why, but she felt that something, or someone was missing from the group. She counted everyone in the cave just to be sure, only to count nine instead of ten. She tried her hardest to figure out the missing link. Then...it hit her.

"Hey, where's Devon?"

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Devon took his last treestar he needed, placing it securely in his arm that was holding a whole bunch of treestars. "Hang on, Pterano. I'll be back with yer treestars." He took a few steps back, trying to figure out what he was going to do to carry these treestars to the cavern. Little did he know...

"Hello Devon."

It was then that the blue flyer realized what he was stepping into. He jumped back, accidentally stepping on his father's foot and dropped most nearly all of the treestars. He staggered back from his father, eyes widened in fright. "Miss me, Devon?"

The blue flyer then clenched his fists, remembering what his father had done to Pterano. "You!"

"Oh, come on, Devon," Devon chuckled darkly, folding his arms across his chest. "Aren't you happy to see your old father again?"

"You could have killed him!" the younger flyer growled, trying his best to remain calm.

"Who?" Sierra paused for moment, trying to figure out what Devon was talking about. Then it came to him as he smirked evilly. "Oh, you mean HIM." He shrugged uncaringly. "Eh, he was nuttin but a poor excuse of a leader who can't even keep his heard safe for a single moment, you see."

Devon gritted his teeth, anger increasing as Sierra continued. "Come on, son. Look on the bright side, my revenge is almost complete. As soon as I finish that blowhard of-" the brown flyer was cut off when Devon punched him in the face, sending him into a tree.

"Don't talk about my father that way!" he yelled. "He's better than you think!"

"Father?" Sierra repeated as he sat up, recovering from that sudden blow. "So, you've replaced me, huh?" He chuckled, standing up on his own two feet, shrugging. "That's okay. I was gonna disown ya anyway."

Devon's look turned into a shocked and disappointed look. His own father was going to disown him? But...how could he? Sierra noticed this. "Oh, what's the matter? Did I hit a sensitive spot?" he chuckled. Devon did not answer for he was too busy staring at the ground. He gave him an angry look, but that's about it. Sierra continued. "Come on, you should've known this was coming. I was gonna set ya free, remember?"

The blue flyer's look hardened with more anger in him than before. He was just about to slap his evil father silly when...

"Devon!"

He looked in the direction of where the sudden shout out was coming from, only to get knocked into a boulder behind him, causing him to drop the rest of the treestars. "As much as I'd love to stay and chit chat," Sierra spreaded his wings, preparing for take off. "I have some business to take care of." With that, he flew off, leaving Devon alone...for two seconds.

Out of the bushes stuck out Littlefoot's long neck. "Devon!" the young longneck shouted, rushing to the blue flyer's side. "Are you okay?"

"I'm fine." Devon, using Littlefoot's neck as a handle, stood up on his feet and picked up some of the treestars that fell.

"Are you sure?" Joe asked, stepping out of the bushes along with Cera and Chomper. "You sure don't sound like it."

"Yeah, I'm sure. Just a little tired, I guess."

"Good, now let's head back, shall we?" Joe told him, taking a step towards the right.  

"Yes sir." Devon stepped beside him, spreading his wings.

Joe waited until the kids were ahead of them before ducking his small head next to Devon. "Just out of curiosity, who was that brown flyer you were talking to?"

Devon narrowed his eyebrows angrily; the cruelest father you would ever come across. "He's not important." Devon spoke in a low voice before taking off.

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"...and I told him, 'I hope I don't have to come across another sharptooth again," Pterano ended his story he was telling to Petrie, Ducky, Ruby and Spike. "The strange thing is no sooner did I say that, a couple of fast biters and a sharptooth rammed past us, not even noticing that we were right there next to them. And then I told myself, 'I knew that mumbling was a bad sign!"

The children burst into laughter. "In fact, now that I mention it," Pterano continued, looking at the walls. "Devon and I were standing in this exact spot."

"Wow! Were you really?" Ruby exclaimed. "Petrie was sure right about you leading an exiting life!"

Pterano smiled, placing a hand on Ruby's back. "Thank's, Ruby." He then frowned in concern, staring at the ground.

Ducky noticed this. "Are you okay, Petrie's Uncle?"

Pterano sighed. "I'm just worried about Devon. I mean, he's probably off fighting his father for all I know!"

Ducky hopped off of Spike's back and hugged the old flyer's beak sympathetically. "Do not worry, Petrie's Uncle. I couldn't have wondered too far. I'm sure he'll be back soon."

Petrie also hugged his uncle's beak. "Me too."

Pterano smiled, placing his hands protectively over their backs. "Thanks kids."

As if on cue, Joe and the kids returned to the cavern. "How is every one?"

"Great!" Ruby replied. "Mr. Pterano was telling us a story of how he and Devon were standing in that exact spot," she pointed at Pterano. "when we scared the heck out of those sharpteeth!"

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omg, I'm so tired right now. I would love to write some more, but I've really got to go and take a nap. I freakin need it right now.

Sorry guys. I promise I'll post some more when I finish my nap. Unless mom has low census.
Update: Hey guys, sorry for the hold up. "Me took big nap."  :lol  
"Oh vonboy, out of the mouths of hatchlings as they say."  :lol  Back to the story.
PS. Cookie and a big hug to any one who can quess where I got those quotes.

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"Really now!" said Joe. "How about them treesweets, eh?" He then turned to Pterano. "How are you feeling?"

"Much better. Those treestars are really doing the trick." Pterano replied, chuckling.

"Good, cause I've got some more for ya," Devon told him as he landed next to Pterano's wing, taking out the treestars he had in his mouth.  

Pterano smiled. "Devon..."

"Don't move." The blue flyer told him calmly before placing the treestars on Pterano's back, trying his best not to hurt the old flyer. Pterano looked across the cave, noticing a familiar longneck, threehorn, a grown up spiketail and...a talking sharptooth? Pterano's eyes opened wide in fright. "Uhh....."

Chomper noticed this as he approached. "Hello there!"

Pterano jumped, sending pain in his back. "Ow..." he winced. Chomper sighed; why am I not surprised. "Please don't eat me..."

Ducky giggled at the sight and Pterano's reaction of meeting Chomper before approaching Pterano and placed a small hand on his beak. "It is okay, Petrie's Uncle. Chomper is nice. He is, he is. He helped save you from a slow and painful death."

Pterano was so speechless that all he could squeak out was, "Okay..."

"Don't worry, Pterano. You'll get used to me." Chomper held out his hand. "By the way, I'm Chomper."

Pterano hesitated for a second due to the fright a talking sharptooth before reluctantly shaking the small sharptooth's hand. He began to relax as he did so, taking a deep sigh before smiling at Chomper. "It is my pleasure."

He then turned to Littlefoot. "Whoa, Littlefoot!" Pterano spoke. "My, you've grown!"

The young longneck smiled sheepishly in response. "Longnecks grow fast..." he simply replied.

"How's you're grandparents?"

"They're okay. Grandpa's sick though." Littlefoot replied, looking down sadly.

"I'm sorry to hear that." Pterano told him before turning to the threehorn. "Cera? Is that you?"

"How do you know my name?" Cera snapped.

Pterano sighed. "Yep that's her." he muttered. "May I say you've grown alot in the past five years. I mean, you have horns now!"

Cera stood up with pride. "Thank you." Pterano smiled at her before turning to the grown up spiketail.

"And who might you be?"

"I'm-" Joe was interrupted when Chomper placed a hand on his shoulder, blurting out these words:

"This is Joe. He is the reason why you are still alive."

Pterano's eyes widened. "Oh wow! Joe, you have my deepest thanks."

"You're welcome." Joe smiled at the aging flyer.

"Well since you all saved my life an all," Pterano paused for a moment, thinking of what he could possibly do to repay these kids. "How would you all like to hear a story?" He almost slapped himself; come on, old flyer! Is that the best you got?" He was surprised when the kids all shouted, "Yeah!" Okay stories it is!

He took another moment to think of what to tell. A-ha! "Did I ever tell you about," he paused for effect. "the Stone of Cold Fire?" Every one knew what he was talking about except for Chomper, Ruby and Joe.

"Huh?" Chomper asked, not getting to concept.

"What's the Stone of Cold Fire?" Ruby asked.

"And how can fire be cold?" Joe asked.

"Well we're just going to have to wait and see, now aren't we children?" Pterano then started his story. "It all started when I joined up with a herd of far walkers..."

Sunset...

"...and for help saving the kids, my punishment was reduced to five cold times instead of the rest of my life," Pterano finished. "and since then, I've been roaming around the Mysterious Beyond."

"Doing what, Mr. Pterano?" Ruby asked.

"Well, when I first came here," Pterano explained. "I needed a place to live. I found plenty of good caves but I would always get chased out of them by a sharptooth. I soon got so tired of it so I decided to fallow them and study them for a while."

Chomper and Ruby looked at eachother in fascination. "Whoa..."

"I soon found out about Red Claw and how he's always lurking near the Great Valley." Pterano continued as the gang, except for Cera, gasped in awe. "So I'm the one who always has to keep him as far away from the valley as possible, which is quite fun sometimes."

"How do you do that?" Chomper asked.

"I throw rocks at him or sometimes, I would lead him into a forest and tie him up with vines."

Cera scoffed. "Yeah right. Like that'll ever happen."

"Cera, just because you don't see with your eyes, doesn't make it a lie." Devon explained to her. "Besides, I saw him do that once..." He and Pterano smirked at eachother.

"You should tell us the story of how you two met." Ducky requested. "You should, you should."

"No problem." Pterano replied. He waited until every one was snuggled up before starting the story. "It all started when I was flying high in the sky one afternoon..."

Night time...

"...And so, we became friends," Pterano smiled at the young blue flyer sleeping next to him. "and he has become such a good son to me." By now, the children were laying down, just about to drift off into a sleep. Pterano couldn't help but smile at them. They looked so adorable all curled up like that, he thought. He rested his head on his arms, closing his eyes.

He was just about to fall asleep when he felt a tug on his wing. He lifted it to see that Ducky had rested herself under his wing. "Goodnight, Petrie's Uncle." she murmured, scooting herself closer to his warmth.

Pterano chuckled as he lightly but protectively rested his beak over her head. "Goodnight, Ducky." he whispered, closing his eyes again. He opened them to see Ruby looking at him sleepy eyes. But he knew what they meant. He opened his wing as she laid herself next to Ducky. He rested his wing on her, pulling her closer.

His smile grew wider as he felt Petrie rest on his shoulder and Devon nestle himself under his other wing. Tears of joy formed in his eyes as he pulled the children closer until he had them all wrapped up, safe and protected under his wings. He fell asleep that way with a smile on his face.

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Whew! That's alot of typing. Well I hope you've enjoyed it everyone. Tata!
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I kind of expected Serris would have disowned Devon at some point.

Has a few days passed by now? Pterano seems like he's made a lot of recovery for one day.

I'm kind of surprised Pterano hasn't even questioned Chomper yet about being a sharptooth. Did they know each other already, or something?
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Awww. I loved the part where Pterano "had the dino children all wrapped up safe and protected under his wings"... and he has tears of joy forming in his eyes..

He's got Petrie on his shoulder and Devon nestled under one of his wings...

That's very sweet and heartwarming!  :D I smiled and started forming tears, too when I read that part.

Don't worry. I won't miss a chapter of "Lost in a Forest"!  :)  I read every new chapter on the same day that you post them.  :yes


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Hey guys! The wait is over! Here's Chappie six.

hehe, I think I might create a character named Chappie.  :lol
Jared, I think you're gonna really like this chapter...

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Recovery Part Two

Days turned into weeks as Pterano continued to recover successfully from his wounds. Devon and the kids were teaching him how to walk again. Boy was he in for a struggle...

Pterano stumbled into Ruby's arms after hours of this, panting heavily as everyone else watched in silence. "I'm getting too old for this..."

Ruby chuckled. What a silly old flyer he is. "Come on Pterano," she urged, pushing him away from her but still grasping his shoulders. "You're doing great! Just keep trying, you'll get it."

"Can't we take a break first?" the older flyer pleaded, completely forgetting that he is the older flyer around here.

"Tell you what," Ruby told him calmly. "If you make it this time, you can take a break." She turned him around to face Devon. He gazed at her nervously as she smiled reassuringly at him. "You can do it..."

Pterano nodded, closing his eyes and taking a deep sigh; Alright, Pterano. You heard the lady. You can do this...He opened his eyes again, taking a baby step towards Devon and another and another. "You can do it..." Ruby chanted, walking behind him to catch him if he falls. "You can do it..."

As he stepped closer to Devon, Pterano noticed that he felt more balanced and began to take bigger steps and seemed to walk faster. He smiled; I can do this...

It wasn't very long until he was able to grasp Devon's hand as it was reaching out to him. His smile grew wider as he stopped beside Devon. They smiled at each other as they high fived.

The children cheered happily. "All right, Pterano! You did it!" Chomper exclaimed. Pterano bowed playfully as the children laughed. He stood up straight, only to completely lose balance and fall backwards...

He was so lucky Ruby was there because if she wasn't, he would've probably injured his back even more. He fell right into her arms as she pushed him back on his feet. "Thanks Ruby." he smiled sheepishly

A few days passed by as Pterano improved on his walking. Soon enough, he no longer needed anyone to escort him to places. He just needed his handy dandy staff that Devon found for him while fishing the previous morning.

And that brings us to Devon as he stood at the entrance of the cave, watching the stars as tears were pouring down his cheeks. He pondered over what his father had told him just a few weeks before. The thought of his father being as evil as he is haunted him. "I was gonna disown ya anyway..." He closed his eyes, only for his quiet moment to get interrupted by a hand on his shoulder. "Are you okay?"

Devon looked up to see his older friend gazing down at him with concern in his dark blue eyes. Without an answer, Devon threw his arms around Pterano's waist, crying into his chest. "What's wrong, son?" Pterano asked, as he wrapped his arms around the kid below him.

The younger flyer didn't answer his question as he buried his face into his chest, tightening his arms around him. Pterano just held the boy close, rubbing his hands up and down his back, trying his absolute best to calm him down. He held him for what seemed like forever before Devon pulled back, gazing up at the older flyer with great admiration. "Are you okay?" Pterano asked, wiping the sad young flyer's cheek.

Devon hesitated, sighing and laying his cheek directly over Pterano's heart. He closed his eyes. "He disowned me..."

Pterano's eyes widened in horror and disbelief, before gritting in teeth in anger. It didn't even take a millisecond for him to figure out what Devon was taking about. Sure he expected it, but it sure made him mad. If Sierra was in sight, Pterano wouldn't hesitate one second to feed that no good dirty rotten poor excuse of a father to the sharpteeth himself. Oh yes, he was going to kill him...

"It's okay," Devon spoke after a while, snapping Pterano out of his thoughts. "I probably deserved it."

Pterano pulled him away from him but he still held on to him. "Devon, don't you dare talk about yourself that way! Do you hear me? You are an amazing kid." He made sure to emphasize the word 'amazing'. "When I told you I couldn't ask for a better son, I meant it."

"Please don't leave me."

"Devon, that is never going to happen. Do you hear me? It's not! Sierra can't get rid of me that easily." Devon laughed at his friend's statement. Even in times like these, he absolutely loved how Pterano spoke. "And speaking of Sierra, you'd better hope beyond all hope that I don't see him again. Cause if I do, I'm going to knock him straight off his perch!" Devon laughed harder as Pterano cupped his cheek gently. "I'm not going anywhere."

"Ya promise?"

"With all of my heart."

Devon threw his arms around Pterano's neck, hugging him tightly as he felt strong, protective arms warp around his waist, pulling him closer. He smiled through his leftover tears. "I love you...Dad."

Pterano's eyes widened; Did I finally hear those four words? He smiled the biggest smile, letting tears of joy run down his cheek, not giving a rock if Devon knew he was crying or not. "I love you too, my son." He tightened his arms around the kid, pulling him even closer.

Devon nuzzled his shoulder happily. Never before had he felt so protected. Never before had he felt so comfortable. So loved. There was no safer place in the world than being in Pterano's arms, he decided, not even the Great Valley. He literally felt like, no matter how scary or confusing the world may seem, Pterano's arms would be the safest place to turn to. His warm embrace was something that could never be replaced. He even fell asleep, right there in the older flyer's arms.

Pterano chuckled softly as he lifted his son off the ground and carried him into the cavern, placing the younger flyer gently on the ground. He smiled proudly as he continued to hold the sleepy blue flyer he wished his son. He nuzzled him gently, chuckling. "Sweet dreams, my son." No sooner than this, he fell asleep with a smile on his face.

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One word: DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just love father son moments! Especially when I write them. Pterano would make a cool dad wouldn't he?

Any way, hope you liked this chapter. It may not be as long other chapters. But it's not as short as Chapter three either.

Jared, I'll bet you're in tears right now. This chapter made me cry too. Just leave feedback as soon as you can.

That goes for all of you!
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One word: DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another word: YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG that scene with Devon and Pterano was SO CUTE!!!!! I loved it!!! And I know a certain someone who will also like this...*shifty eyes* :lol

Loved the chapter and please update as soon as you can!!!

Jared, you're gunna have a kick outta this one! ;)


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AWWWWWWW! Yes! It moved me to tears, too! I LOVED the WHOLE scene with Devon and Pterano! It was very cute, and so tender. I quickly started flooding tears...

The whole Devon and Pterano scene was the most TENDER, LOVING flyer moment I've ever read! It touched my heart!!

The part where Devon told Pterano "I love you...Dad"  :cry  That was so.. TENDER!!

Yes, Pterano would make a perfect father!    :)

 I'm still crying right now. :cry  :cry  I LOVED the ending where Devon fell asleep, and Pterano held him and gently nuzzled him in his arms..  :cry  That was VERY tender, heartwarming, and so LOVING!!! :cry

:cry *snifff!* CHAPTER 6 was PERFECT, trulyfantasticme! I'm STILL in TEARS! :cry


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This chapter was so cute! The father-son moment was so beautiful. Keep updating, I look forward to more of this story.


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Yes, this was a very tender chapter, and I loved it. I'm likign the way your being very descriptive with how the characters are moving and interacting with each other. It really shows a lot of emotion, and how the characters feel about each other, which is great. Also, looks like it's about time to head to the Great Valley, is Pterano going to go?

Also, how much longer is this story going to be?
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*GASP!* OMG! Guys I'm so sorry for the long wait! But I had lots of school work to do and I couldn't get to my stories.  :cry But I finally got it done today. So uhh...

HERES DA NEXT CHAPPIE!

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The Warning

A few more weeks pass in the Mysterious Beyond. Pterano made even more recovery as he no longer needed the stick. And ever since, Pterano, with the help of Devon would tell adventurous stories to the children. They were closer than ever now. Ever since that night, they would treat eachother as father and son. Every thing they did together brought them closer, whether it was telling stories, fishing on a sunny afternoon or just watching the stars at night. Their father son bond was something that could never be taken away from them, not even by Sierra.

And speaking of telling stories, one night Pterano stood above the children, telling them the one story he had never told them before. "It all started when I was soaring in the sky, just watching over my sister and her new born kids..." He winked at Petrie as he stared up at him with great admiration.

FLASHBACK

Pterano soared over the herd below him. It had been a few weeks since Petrie and his siblings was born. He couldn't help but smile with pride as he watched over his sister and her children. But he noticed one was missing: Petrie. He craned his neck to see a curious baby Petrie sniffing a treestars.

He smiled lovingly. This just had to be the cutest sight. But he also noticed a dark figure of a sharptooth...AND IT WAS HEADING STRAIGHT FOR PETRIE!!!! Pterano gritted his teeth. When you're a flyer, there are times you gotta do what a flyer's gotta do. This was one of those times. "Not with my nephew, you don't." he muttered before diving into the trees below.

He landed on a treebranch with a vine, just waiting for the right time to strike. The sharptooth came into view and Pterano saw his chance. He dived for the sharptooth's jaws, tying the vine around them as tight as he could. Then he aimed for the legs and tied them just as tight, causing the sharptooth to fall over. "Yeah, not on my watch, you over grown rats with teeth!"

"Pterano!"

This caught the red flyer off guard, nearly knocking him over. He knew that grumpy voice anywhere. "What's the big idea?!? It's me!!"

Things aren't always what they seem as this so called "sharptooth" appeared to be none other than...

"Mr. Threehorn!" Pterano landed beside the old threehorns face. "I'm so sorry! You looked so much like a sharptooth from up there..."

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The kids burst out laughing as Cera was the first one to do so, spitting out the chewed treestar that was in her mouth. Pterano laughed as well. "That was you!?! Pterano nodded, smiling at the young threehorn. "I can't believe you thought my dad was a sharptooth!"

"Me neither, Cera." Pterano agreed.

"Well, what happened?" Littlefoot asked curiously.

"Well, let's see here," Pterano thought for a moment, scratching his head. "Petrie finally came into view, he was staring from a tree branch. And then a certain young threehorn girl," he winked at Cera. "appeared from behind the trees and laughed her tail off. The next thing I knew, we were in front of the whole herd!"

"Did you untie him?" Ruby asked.

"Of course, after he promised not to kill me." He chuckled along with the kids while saying that.

"And then what?" Chomper asked.

"He chased me off," Pterano smiled as they chuckled. "Never act without thinking, kids. It'll ruin you..." he drifted off, hanging his head in shame. This reminded him of his when he lead part of the herd into their deaths. "Literally..."

Petrie immediately noticed this and knew exactly what he was sad about. But before he could do anything to comfort his uncle...

"Already, kids! Bedtime." Joe told the kids as Pterano nodded in agreement.

So the children curled up in the corner, noticing that Joe was right. It was bedtime! Pterano lied himself by Petrie, who was already sound asleep against Littlefoot's side. He smiled at his nephew; he looked so cute all curled up like that. He curled himself protectively around Petrie and Littlefoot.

Devon laid himself beside Pterano, laying his head on his shoulder. "Goodnight, Dad."

Of course, he received no response because they were all asleep. Devon too fell asleep in a matter of seconds.

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Devon opened his gray-green eyes, sitting up immediately after. He noticed that Pterano was missing from the group. He looked around unti something caught his eyes: Greenfood...and a great big pile of it. Then a certain red flyer caught to corner of his eye. None other than...

"Pterano?"

The older flyer smirked at him and then at the green food. "Did you...?" Devon drifted off in shock. Did Pterano really fly to get all this food?

"Enjoy." Pterano simply replied, handing Devon a treestar.

"Thanks, but uhh...how'd you get all this food?...Did you fly?"

"I climbed," Pterano chuckled. "Who knew my big feet would one day come handy." They laughed at the statement.

"Yay! It's not a dream!" Cera shouted, being the first one to rush into the pile instead of Spike.

Pterano chuckled. "Breakfast is served."

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Later that day, Devon, Petrie and Pterano stood on top of the cave, right over the cave opening. "Now all it takes," Devon demonstrated, spreading his wings. "is a little wind and you're up in no time."

Pterano did exactly what Devon demonstrated and spreaded his wings for the first time in weeks to feel that cool breeze h missed so much. "Got it." With that, he ran to the edge and flapped his wings...

Only to fall straight onto Joe's spiky back. "Ow..."

The old spiketail couldn't help but laugh at the red flyer. "Goodness, Pterano! What have you been eating?"

"Uncle!" Petrie, along with Devon, flew down and landed next to Pterano. "You okay?"

"I guess so," Pterano replied, sitting up and rubbing the bottom of his beak. "It could have been worse if Joe wasn't here."

Joe smiled up at him. "Well, ya wanna try again?" Devon asked. The red flyer nodded, smiling like a five year old.

The next few days was spent working on Pterano's flight. It may have been a pain in the butt to do this, but each day, Pterano improved and got stronger and faster and way better at flying  than before. Each day, Pterano would be flying with more force.

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Okay I have to stop there. I'm friggin tired right now, It's 10:40 and I have school tomorrow. But I should be able to post the rest of this chappie tomorrow and I have Chappie 8 done so...

Update: Hello, everyone! Miss me much? Here's the rest of the chapter that you all have been waiting for!

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The eighth day...

The three flyers stood on top of the cave once again with a usual self-confident Pterano. "Are you ready?" Devon asked.

"I was born ready." Pterano replied, spreading his wings as the sun reflected off his crest. Without another word, he took off to the skies, at first falling, due to the fact that this was his first time he actually flew since that fight with Sierra. But then he caught his flight back as he rose to the sky, causing an eclipse between the sun and the cave.

"There ya go, Dad!" Devon shouted after the red flyer. "Now yer gettin the hang of it! Just don't go bumping into trees this time!"

Pterano laughed as he flew even higher and faster. He took a deep breath of that familiar fresh air that flew into his face. He couldn't help but swell with pride and joy as he flew over the trees, memories of his childhood hit him. He and his uncle would race over trees like the ones below all the time. They would always race to the Rock That Looks Like A Longneck all the time back in the day. And when they got there, they would camp there for the best two nights of Pterano's life.

He chuckled joyfully at the memory as he flew around a tree and back. He was so happy that he was in the skies once again. Literally, he felt like he was in his teens again. The joy and pride finally got to him when he began to shout gleefully. "WHAAA-HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Everyone chuckled at this, even Cera. Finally he landed in the cave, scooping Ducky up in his arms and dancing with her playfully. Ducky, at first was shocked by Pterano's sudden action. Then she just laughed happily, wrapping her tiny arms around his neck, just enjoying the fact that Pterano was playing with her.

He spun her around multiple times until he placed her on the ground gently before falling on his back beside her, gasping for air. "Whoo!"

Devon flew to his side, standing over both him and Ducky. "I take it that you've had fun with today's lesson..." he told the older flyer. The both of them and Ducky chuckled at Devon's statement as Pterano sat up. It was silent now.

"...When do we eat?" Chomper asked, noticing that his stomach was growling. Every one laughed their heads off at the young sharptooth's comment. Chomper will be Chomper...

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Within the next few days, it was about time to head back to the Great Valley. Devon was invited to come along. And so was Joe. But he refused, saying that his family still needs him. And so they said there reluctant goodbyes and thank yous and headed their own directions. Also at sunset, Pterano and Devon would have their own mini races at sunset so that Pterano would grow faster. That and just for the heck of it. But the fun ended when...

Pterano and Devon raced in the forest, doing their absolute best not to bump into any trees. "Come on, old timer," Devon teased. "Is that the best ya got?"

"You wish, hotshot," Pterano returned. To Devon's astonishment, he flew faster but not even thinking about where he was going or what he was flying into. Thump! He flew straight into a tree and fell to the ground. "Ow..."

Devon chuckled, landing beside him. "Oh, Pterano...Out of the mouths of hatchlings as they say..."

Pterano stood up, rubbing his back in pain."Very funny..." Their moment ended when they heard a low voice coming from the branches above them.

"Just like old times, eh Pterano?"

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There ya go everyone! Just like I promised. Hope you enjoyed it.

lol, Pterano bumping straight into a tree.  :lol
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Nice chapter, it's funny how Pterano landed on Joe's...gosh I just can't get over how funny it sounds, back. :lol

So THAT'S where that caption came from, I was wondering where you got that idea. Heh heh.

Anyways, good chaoter and get the next one up soon!


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Actually that's just part of it. I'll PM you when I get the rest done.

*coughcough*later today! *coughcough*
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Ooh, Pterano's about to go to the Great Valley, how exciting! I'm interested to see how everyone reacts to him, expecially Mr. Threehorn! Let's see how welcomed he really is in his old home.

Anyway, great chapter! I liked actually seeing the story you spoke of in a few other posts, and also the other glimpses into Pterano's past.

I look forward to what happens next :DD
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Here's Chappie Eight.

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Final Battle

"Just like the old days, eh Pterano?"

Devon and Pterano nearly jumped out of their skin as they turned to the branches above. They gasped. Devon was the first to act as he clenched his fists and glared at his former father darkly. "What do you want?"

Sierra landed in front of them, smirking evilly as usual. Pterano stood protectively in front of him, taking out his claws. "Harm a single claw on him, and you're dead meat!" The red flyer growled, preparing himself for any kind of combat he'll have to face.

Sierra chuckled. "As much as I'd love to pound on the both of you, I'm afraid I'm the least of your problems."

As if on cue, a loud roar shook the land, nearly knocking Pterano and Devon to the ground as they gripped onto each other for support. A familiar scream came after the roar with a loud-

"HHEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Pterano's eyes widened as he knew that call for help any where. "Petrie!" He then glared harshly at his former comrade, gritting his teeth. "What have you done with my nephew?!?"

Before Sierra could answer, Devon placed a hand on Pterano's shoulder. "I'll take care of him." Devon told the old flyer. "You go save the children."

Pterano stared at him with a concerned "are you sure?" look but Devon just nudged him gently. "Your nephew needs you."

Finally, the older flyer nodded in response before flying off in the direction in which they heard the roar. Devon gazed at him for a meaningful moment before turning his glare towards his cruel father. Sierra chuckled. "Whoa, Devon, this is not like you to fight your dear old father."

"Dear old father, my tail bone!" Devon snapped, taking his claws out.

"Come on, son, can't we talk this over?" Sierra asked in his fake friendly voice. This made Devon even angrier.

"I am NOT your son!" The blue flyer yelled. "You are nothing but a dirty liar. First of all, you lied to me my whole life, putting doubts into my head and abusing me! You even lied to me about Pterano. Then you hurt him just because he won't help you in getting your revenge, nearly taking away the only friend I've had."

"Oh boo hoo hoo!" Sierra mocked. "Why do you even love that weakling anyway?"

"I love him because he actually cared for me when you practically ignored me! And he took me in when no one else did. I mean, sure he did some awful stuff in the past. But why does that matter? He's changed! And this is why I call him my father instead of you!"

"How do you know he's not just playing with you? How do you know he's not trying to fiddle with your mind so he can betray you?"

"Because I can see it in his eyes that he loves me and would never do anything to hurt me! He's better than you'll ever be!" With that, Devon punched his former father in the face, knocking him into a tree.

Sierra sat up, feeling the bruise on his face from Devon's punch. He smirked. "Well, I must say I'm impressed. That was a good punch." Unexpectedly, he stood up and punched the blue flyer, sending him a good five feet backwards into a boulder. "But not good enough."

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Pterano soared in the skies, desperately hoping he could get to the children on time. For a long five minutes, he could see nothing but the trees below him. But then, he could see a trees shaking and loud footsteps. Another loud roar took place.

He took a closer look, seeing the children getting chased a red sharptooth, almost twice the size of Red Claw. He narrowed his eyebrows determinedly before taking a dive for the sharptooth.

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Sierra pinned the blue flyer against a tree, squeezing his throat tightly. "I knew you couldn't beat me." He growled darkly, tightening his hand around Devon's throat. "I offered you you're freedom. Yet you refused." Sierra grabbed the pointy rock he used to nearly kill Pterano. "Now you die..."

But before Sierra could really do anything, Devon kicked him in the gut, knocking him to the ground. "I may not be as strong as you, but at least I'm not heartless."

Sierra growled at him, holding his stomach in pain. Without another word, Devon grabbed the brown flyer by the arm, punching him repeatedly. "This is for Pterano!" With that, he kicked the brown flyer backwards into the same tree as before, only this time knocking him unconscious.

Devon breathed heavily, smiling in astonishment. He took baby steps towards the unconscious Sierra, picking up the pointy rock that he dropped. He knelt by him, pointing the sharp rock to his throat...

A few seconds rolled by. Devon still held the pointy rock, pondering over whether he should do it or not. He knew Pterano would not be very happy if he did. He would not be very happy if he didn't. But although, he hated his father, he was not a murderer. And besides, if he did do it, he would not only be a murderer, he would also be no better than Sierra.

He sighed, dropping the pointy rock away from the brown flyer's throat before reaching down to punch him one last time...

All of a sudden, Sierra opened his eyes and grabbed his hand and punched him in the face, knocking him unconscious. "I gotta say, you had me there. Too bad I'll have to kill you." He took the pointy rock and then dropped it as an idea hit him

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The children ran for their dear lives, trying their absolute best to find a good hiding place. But only to see that they were surrounded by nothing but boulders as the sharptooth gained on them.

The sharptooth stood exactly twenty feet from them as things went silent and time froze for a frightening moment.

A whole minute went by as the sharptooth roared again causing the children to topple over on top of each other. He raced towards them, getting closer and closer as the children braced themselves.

Ten feet...

The children embraced for what seemed like the last time.

Five feet...

The sharptooth got closer as he opened his jaws, ready to take in his dinner. He bent down next to the children as they buried their faces, preparing for impact.

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Whew, what an epic chapter that was! Wow! So much better than hand-written.

Enjoy.
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Really exciting chapter, and a cliff hanger to boot! Nice to see that Devon was able to show mercy, even thought it's just getting him into more trouble with Sierra.

Interesting that you didn't just get Redclaw to chase the kids. He's too much of a pushover I guess?

So, no Great Valley for Pterano yet, but at least this was a great chapter. I'm still waiting for his welcome home party...or lack therof. :lol
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Oh noes! A cliffhanger!!!! Darn it!!!! You leave me in suspense.

Anyway, great chapter and part two of the previous chapter was cool too. Great action and like vonboy said, it's nice to see that Devon isn't as bad as Sierra and didn't kill him when he had the chance, but, aw crap, the plan backfired.

Update soon! :)


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Wow! NOW THAT'S what I call one suspenseful chapter....WHAT A cliffhanger... Devon is in danger of being killed by Sierra!! :unsure:  And Petrie and the other children are about to be eaten by a sharptooth!

WILL the poor, young,  innocent blue cearadactylus Devon avoid being killed by the NASTY, DIRTY, MEAN Sierra?  

WILL Pterano be able to save the children from being eaten by a sharptooth?

We'll find out soon enough.....hopefully in the next chapter..

Chapter 8 is your most suspenseful chapter yet, trulyfantasticme. GREAT job!  :yes


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Well now, ONTO CHAPTER NINE!!!!  :lol

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Final Battle Part Two

The sharptooth got closer as he opened his jaws, ready to take in his dinner. He bent down next to the children as they buried their faces, preparing for impact.

But to their surprise, the impact never came at all. Petrie was the first brave enough to open his eyes to see a familiar red figure holding the sharptooth's claws wide open, preventing him from harming any of the kids. He recognized the old flyer in an instant. "UNCLE!!"

This caused the others to open their eyes. "Run kids!" Pterano shouted as it took all his strength not to let go of the sharptooth's jaws. "RUN!!!"

Without another word, the kids ran for it as Pterano finally let go of his jaws, flying into the air. The sharptooth recovered as he stood up at eye level with Pterano, only to get punched in the nostrils by the red flyer. The sharptooth wiggled his nose uncomfortably in response.

With his focus now on Pterano, the sharptooth snapped his jaws at the red flyer. Pterano dodged the blow, then led the sharptooth into the forest.

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The children continued running for dear life when Littlefoot stopped dead in his tracks with a stern face. Everyone noticed this and stopped as well. "Why are you not running, Littlefoot?" Ducky asked.

"We have to help him." The young longneck replied with a determined face.

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Pterano landed on a tree branch with a vine in hand, waiting for the sharptooth to come into view. Of course, he didn't have to wait long for the sharptooth would be right on his tail. He took a deep breath. "Let's dance..." With that, he took a dive for the sharptooth's legs, tying them as tight as he could and then using the vine to tie the sharptooth's jaws shut just as tight.

He landed on the sharptooth's back as the sharptooth fell onto his stomach. Pterano sighed in relief before gasping, suddenly remembering about Devon. He craned his neck to see two flyer figures hovering high in the air. He also noticed that one of them was blue. He recognized the blue flyer immediately. "Devon!" Without another word, he flew up after Devon.

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By now, the children arrived just in time to see Pterano take off, leaving the sharptooth all tied up. "Wow!" Cera exclaimed in awe. "He sure wasn't lying!"

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Sierra held the unconscious blue flyer's neck, squeezing it tightly as a swimming sharptooth lurked in the Big Water below them. "Say goodnight, Devon," the brown flyer whispered darkly into Devon's ear. With that, he dropped his former son into the Big Water. Sierra chuckled evilly.

Only to be surrounded by a dark shadow. "Get away from my son!"  

This caused the brown flyer to turn around. He was greeted by a red fist to the eye. This knocked him unconscious. Sierra's unconscious body fell into the Big Water.

No sooner than this, Pterano dove after Devon into the Big Water. He almost gasped to see the swimming straight for the blue flyer lying on his back.

Pterano clenched his fists, diving for the sharptooth's head, landing on him and then pecking his eye out. The sharptooth snapped his jaws multiple times in response, throwing Pterano off and opened his jaws to consume the still unconscious blue flyer.

Pterano rammed into him again, this time, closing his jaws before he could actually consume Devon. The monster has just about had it with the old flyer as he craned his head towards him.

With his focus now on Pterano, the sharptooth hissed and Pterano gritted his teeth in response. He took this opportunity to lead the sharptooth away from Devon.

Soon enough, Pterano would be so far ahead of the monster that he could hide, if he hurried. He dove into a small rock formation, watching as the monster swam by, not even noticing the older flyer.

He popped his beak out of the rock formation, watching as the swimming sharptooth swam away from him into the debris. He then craned his neck to see an unconscious Devon laying the rock, just about to fall into the dark abyss below him.

Pterano swam up to him at full speed and took him by the waist. His head rested on Pterano's shoulders as the red flyer swam up to the surface.

"Uncle! Over here!" Petrie shouted from the shore. Littlefoot and Cera tossed the vines they had by their sides into the Big Water.

"Grab on!" Littlefoot instructed.

Pterano did exactly what he was told, he clasped the vine and still held Devon in the other arm. "Pull!" Littlefoot yelled with the vine in his mouth. The gang, Ruby and Chomper helped pull on the vine.

"Hang on, Uncle!" Petrie shouted as he pulled with all his might.

Pterano and Devon drifted closer and closer until they were on shore. Pterano coughed out water before cradling the blue flyer in his arms. Sadness and worry swooped over him as he stroked his head gently. His heart pounded in his chest as he held his claw over Devon's neck, desperately hoping to feel even the slightest thump...

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Another cliffhanger folks! Now this chapter took all my energy to type! It's one heck of a chapter!

Anyway, enjoy.   :smile
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It just keeps getting better and better. Your really making me feel bad about the little Pterano story I'm trying to write for my fanfiction. :unsure:

I do have to bring something up here though. How could a flyer be that strong? Pterano seems to be showing some superhuman strength holding a gigantic T-Rex's jaws open like that. It just seems kinda far-fetched to me

it was still a very cool fight, even though it didn't seem very believable to me. I loved the continued action, how the kids actually helped, and the cliffhanger is great, just like with Pterano from earlier in this story.

You keep holding off from the Great Valley. That dang Valley better be as good as Littlefoot's Mom said it was :p
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Pterano is tough when it comes to Devon or the children.  :lol

You gotta have your imagination. Where would I be without mine? :smile
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