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Beyond the Mysterious Beyond => The Arts => Visual Art => Topic started by: Megatoph on March 30, 2008, 05:09:30 AM

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Megatoph on March 30, 2008, 05:09:30 AM

the cover for the Pilot.

(http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p32/Megatoph/ThaidaMassacre.png)

after the fight with the firenation, Toph's planet is visited by the USCM, and she joins the Marines. her first mission is to figure out why a colony on the Planet "Thaida" has not communicated for weeks. but is this Earthbender ready for a life as an advanced soldier. the Original Pilot for a short series of Comics.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Kor on March 30, 2008, 06:52:39 AM

Looks like it could be interesting.  Though likely very dark and bloody, if it is like the typical alien movie.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Megatoph on March 30, 2008, 11:17:40 AM

the pilot of a show or a comic is usualy dark toned.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Clawandfang on March 30, 2008, 12:39:03 PM

Just a quick suggestion, I think "The Thaida Massecre" could benefit from moving a little away from the edge, and also from being spelt correctly (you were meaning "massacre", right?)

Generally, so far so good. It simply radiates potential.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Megatoph on April 01, 2008, 01:08:42 AM

no its Massecre.

anywho this is just the cover, the full comic won't be posted here.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Clawandfang on April 01, 2008, 03:07:11 AM

Quote from: Megatoph,Apr 1 2008 on  05:08 AM

no its Massecre.

Is "Massecre" an Americanism or something? What does it mean?

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Megatoph on April 01, 2008, 03:12:58 AM

Massive killing in one place. look it up.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Clawandfang on April 01, 2008, 11:49:37 AM

Yes... that's spelt "Massacre"... definately... rrrr... to prove I'm not just April Foolsing you now:

Massacre (http://www.thefreedictionary.com/massacre)

There.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Megatoph on April 01, 2008, 11:50:50 AM

btw, I think I'll have Toph die in the final comic.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Kor on April 01, 2008, 03:46:06 PM

Up to you.  I'm sure it does occur in fiction.  Fits in with a dark theme I would think.

Title: Toph: USCM [The Thaida Massacre]
Post by: Megatoph on April 02, 2008, 04:41:43 AM

nah just kiddin. not gonna kill her off.