Discussion: Blackclaw's Dark Ambitions

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #40 on:** December 18, 2007, 07:09:15 PM

Syrius's story is an interesting one. having a history with Kragoth

I think I should make it a note that back in their day, they were the Spy vs Spy of the Prehistoric era

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #41 on:** December 18, 2007, 07:30:18 PM

I used to love SpY VS. SPY on Mad TV!!!!!!!!!

Kor · **Reply #42 on:** December 18, 2007, 07:42:38 PM

They have those on the mad dvd-rom, the spy vs spy animated cartoons. They are funny.

Is he a relative of Ducky at all, uncle, distant cousin ect?

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #43 on:** December 18, 2007, 07:45:59 PM

Quote from: Kor,Dec 18 2007 on 06:42 PM

They have those on the mad dvd-rom, the spy vs spy animated cartoons. They are funny.

Is he a relative of Ducky at all, uncle, distant cousin ect?

hm, I started to wonder that myself. at first I was planning on making him a loner who happened to had entered at the valley at the time. though he seems rather knowledgeable about the vally and the lands that suround it.

hence also his dealings with Kragoth

a relative of Ducky's... its something to think about

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #44 on:** December 18, 2007, 08:03:19 PM

I should also mention that in these days, Syrius is very much like the Van Helsing in the Bram Stoker novel Dracula. an expert and know it all in the arts and a master at sharptooth slaying

I guess it's also safe to assume that Kragoth was kind of like Dracula in this context XD

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #45 on:** December 18, 2007, 08:08:53 PM

So it would appear. I don't think I've ever seen Van Helsing.

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #46 on:** December 18, 2007, 08:13:40 PM

Quote from: The Great Valley Guardian,Dec 18 2007 on 07:08 PM

So it would appear. I don't think I've ever seen Van Helsing.

I'm not referring to the movie/comic book version. I'm referring to the original Bram Stoker version. who was nothing more than an old man who specialized in the knowledge of the dark arts, occultism and other such things

he was also a professor.. if my memory serves me correctly. who often spoke in riddles and long paragraphs with big wise words

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #47 on:** December 18, 2007, 08:16:36 PM

Ahhh...that explains it.

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #48 on:** December 18, 2007, 08:26:25 PM

Oh my, this is going to be an interesting battle XD

an elderly duckbill vs a young flyer

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #49 on:** December 19, 2007, 09:41:26 PM

to be honest, there is some irony concerning the conversation between Syrius and Longtail's uncle

Before you mentioned Longtail's effect from within the belly of a sharptooth, I was gonna have Syrius say something very similar: "I'd hate to see what that'd look like if he did that from within the belly of a Sharptooth."

no lie... I was actually thinking up that exact quote for later in the conversation

Kor · **Reply #50 on:** December 19, 2007, 11:50:42 PM

Interesting how those thoughts can occur to folks at the same time like that.

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #51 on:** December 20, 2007, 02:12:59 PM

Well orignially I was going to have Longtail do something like that in my fanfic, but now...I don't know...it would seem a little physicaly impossible...maybe...I dun know!

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #52 on:** December 20, 2007, 07:24:56 PM

actually, what I had pictured was something terribly graphic... a stomach explosion... YECH!

Poor Longtail would be covered in that stuff!

Kor · **Reply #53 on:** December 20, 2007, 08:31:50 PM

Reminds me of an rpg, forgot which one. You meet this npc dwarf who mentions as part of his story how he was swallowed by a dragon but ate his way out. I assume he had on armor at the time. Still messy either way.

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #54 on:** December 21, 2007, 03:05:21 AM

Quote from: AvestheForumFox,Dec 20 2007 on 06:24 PM

actually, what I had pictured was something terribly graphic... a stomach explosion... YECH!

Poor Longtail would be covered in that stuff!

Actually what I had planed was just for the sharptooth's vital blood vessel's to burst inside his body and he bleeds to death, granted all that blood has to leak out somewhere right and Longtail just crawls up and out of the sharptooth stomach....granted he's covered in stomach slime and blood, but safe none the less.

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #55 on:** December 21, 2007, 03:21:24 AM

This conversation is leading me to have images of cleaning fish after a long day's fishing trip.

and mind you, cleaning fish is something I can never stomach... yes I'm that weak!

Any who, back on topic. I should revive the Blackclaw and Torgo scene... though Torgo's only mentioned one line so far I'd like to know what y'all think of em ^^ and I hope some of you know the character he's really inspired from.

also, another big surprise is about to come up... not sure if it'll be in my next post or not.But it is coming!

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #56 on:** December 21, 2007, 03:29:14 AM

I look for forward to it...and as for your question as to my reaction to Torgo...he seems like he has potential, and I can't wait to see what kind of evil he can create!

Kor · **Reply #57 on:** December 21, 2007, 04:08:01 AM

It should be interesting.

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #58 on:** December 22, 2007, 01:41:38 PM

If anybody here is concerned about how to post after my recent add on to the story, you do not have to post where it left off. Just cut back to the valley and continue the story there =)

if it'll make ya'll feel better, I'll go ahead and edit an extra bit in which will make it easier

AvestheForumFox · **Reply #59 on:** December 22, 2007, 01:45:14 PM

Aaaand Done!