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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfictions
« on: August 30, 2006, 02:13:36 PM »
you're right i should edit my story a bit. i'll edit my story tonight and post the edited piece
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Silver Screen / Critic of historical movies
« on: August 30, 2006, 12:04:51 AM »
also Sink The Bismarck! is a movie with major historical in acurrices. one destruction of a few sowrdfish biplanes to the bismarcks aa guns. wrong! the sowrdfish flew to slowly for the bismarcks guns to be fixed on them. and two the bismarck only destroyed one ship in it's carrer hms hood but in this movie it destroys hms solent and the "mighty hood." as hms hood was also known as.
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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfictions
« on: August 29, 2006, 11:36:16 PM »
here is chapter 1 of my fan fic.
What do you want to do littlefoot? i don't know cera what do you want to do? i don't know. meanwhile 3 miles from the great valley. Mother is it true that we are going to the great valley? Yes it is ali. at that moment 10 raptors attacked. Then another raptor appeared but instead of attacking ali's herd. it defended it. it swiftly defeated the other raptors then after defeating the raptors it left ali's herd alone. What just happened? i don't know ali. 3 hours later . Look the entrance to the valley. well it looks like you made it said voice of mystery. the herd turned around and there was the raptor that saved them. Who are you? asked one of the elders. Well you can call by my nickname it is "kid". Where do you come from? asked ali. i come from a place called laven valley. i have never herd of it i have the older one said i have been there. have we met before? asked the raptor. the older one said we a long time ago. the raptor responded oh yea i remember now. We were the first one's there. What happened to it? asked ali. i'd rather not talk about it the raptor said. is the question indiscreet? no the question isn't indiscreet but the answer might be. uh kid we have to enter the valley now. i understand tell littlefoots grandpa i said hi for me ok? all right the old one said. Me see ali she back! she is petrie? yes me see her! hello littlefoot said ali. hello ali said littlefoot . hey ali me no see you for a long while. Good to see you to petrie. Oh there you are littlefoot grand ma and i were wondering where you were. Hello again ali. Good to see you to grandpa longneck. Oh by the way the old one needs to talk to you. Ok i'll go talk to her.
(this is part of chapter one. what do you think?) (i'l post the rest of chapter 1 later)
What do you want to do littlefoot? i don't know cera what do you want to do? i don't know. meanwhile 3 miles from the great valley. Mother is it true that we are going to the great valley? Yes it is ali. at that moment 10 raptors attacked. Then another raptor appeared but instead of attacking ali's herd. it defended it. it swiftly defeated the other raptors then after defeating the raptors it left ali's herd alone. What just happened? i don't know ali. 3 hours later . Look the entrance to the valley. well it looks like you made it said voice of mystery. the herd turned around and there was the raptor that saved them. Who are you? asked one of the elders. Well you can call by my nickname it is "kid". Where do you come from? asked ali. i come from a place called laven valley. i have never herd of it i have the older one said i have been there. have we met before? asked the raptor. the older one said we a long time ago. the raptor responded oh yea i remember now. We were the first one's there. What happened to it? asked ali. i'd rather not talk about it the raptor said. is the question indiscreet? no the question isn't indiscreet but the answer might be. uh kid we have to enter the valley now. i understand tell littlefoots grandpa i said hi for me ok? all right the old one said. Me see ali she back! she is petrie? yes me see her! hello littlefoot said ali. hello ali said littlefoot . hey ali me no see you for a long while. Good to see you to petrie. Oh there you are littlefoot grand ma and i were wondering where you were. Hello again ali. Good to see you to grandpa longneck. Oh by the way the old one needs to talk to you. Ok i'll go talk to her.
(this is part of chapter one. what do you think?) (i'l post the rest of chapter 1 later)
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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfictions
« on: August 29, 2006, 09:47:37 AM »
i'll post a portion of it here tonight. gonna get back to work on my story now.
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LBT Fanfiction / Return to the Valley
« on: August 27, 2006, 11:55:06 PM »
i like it! it is very good.
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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfictions
« on: August 27, 2006, 11:42:05 PM »
any one want to read part of my story? if so i'll send a portion of it for you to read. btw i'm now on chapter 5 of my story.
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Role Play Discussion / land before time ali's return
« on: August 27, 2006, 11:14:12 PM »
can't wait for this rpg to start. this is gonna turn out to be an awesone rpg.
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Role Play Discussion / land before time ali's return
« on: August 27, 2006, 09:04:50 AM »
edited list to 15 roles. a few roles are still open.
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Starday Wishes / Happy Birthday Petrie!
« on: August 27, 2006, 08:53:32 AM »
happy birthday petrie!
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LBT Fanart / The Three Pterosaurs
« on: August 26, 2006, 09:50:36 AM »
they look acurate. i am also writing a lbt i think i get bcak to work on it now
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The Welcome Center / Yes
« on: August 26, 2006, 09:27:02 AM »
(sorry this is late as i've was on vacation welcome Ratiasu)
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Brain Food / Fact or Crap!
« on: August 26, 2006, 09:23:19 AM »
fact or crap the first wourd war was the first war where airplanes were used.
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General Land Before Time / New 'kinds' of characters
« on: August 26, 2006, 09:14:38 AM »
a very good point! it would be interesting to have a sharptooth that lost it's mate.
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The Fridge / I have returned...
« on: August 25, 2006, 10:58:11 PM »
just got back from a vacaition from my grandma's. they don't have a computer.
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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfictions
« on: August 11, 2006, 09:41:48 AM »
alreadythough of idea for fanfic working on chapter 4
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1988 Theatrical Release / Come On!
« on: August 06, 2006, 12:53:59 AM »
from what i've observed while watching it in the shadow you can see a vein being ripped out.
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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfictions
« on: August 06, 2006, 12:45:28 AM »
need help with my fanfic! 
i already know howto getchomper off the island but how do get his parents off?
i already know howto getchomper off the island but how do get his parents off?