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Nahla Is Not One Of us

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*SONG FIC*

I just think this song suits Nahla so much,I edited to make it say she and all that.

This is actually a sneak preview of a future chapter of my fic.

Enjoy


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Littlefoot laid on the ground bleeding badly. Serval of the valley dinosaurs gathered around the longneck family.

Grandma laid by her Grandsons side nuzzling him softly. Bron seem shocked when whispers arose.

"She's back"

"It's her..."

"It's Nahla".

Nahla walked forward feeling uneasy from all the stares.

Cera got ready to charge at her only to be held back by her father.

Bron stood in front on Nahla "Why are you back?"

"Please" Nahla begged "I beg for your forgiveness".

"NO!" Grandpa shouted "We trusted you and it nearly cost Littlefoot his life sorry Nahla we have no choice...EXILE".

Littlefoot gasp as the other adults began stomping and Mr Threehorn tried to shoo her away with his horns.


Mamma Swimmer and Flyer:
Deception
Disgrace
Evil as plain as the blaze on her face

Littlefoot tried to get past to get to Nahla,but Spike and Shorty blocked his way "NAHLA!" he screamed.


Tria and Grandma:
Deception (An outrage!)
Disgrace (For shame!)

Mr Threehorn:
She asked for trouble the moment she came.

Nahla backed up scared as Mr Thicknose and Mr Clubtail flicked rocks at her.

Thicknose and Mr Clubtail.


Deception (An outrage!)
(She can't change her stripes)
Disgrace (For shame!)
(You know these Shadowlander types)
Evil as plain as the blaze on her face
(See you later, agitator!)
Deception (An outrage!)
(Just leave us alone!)
Disgrace (For shame!)
(Traitor, go back with your own!)

Mr Threehorn:
She asked for trouble the moment she came.

Nahla screamed as flyers began attacking her with their beaks.

All (Expect Nahla and Littlefoot):

Born in grief
Raised in hate
Helpless to defy her fate
Let her run
Let her live
But do not forget what we cannot forgive

And she is not one of us
She has never been one of us
She is not part of us
Not our kind.


Nahla looked down into a watering hole,she saw herself lined with cuts...just like a Shadowlander. Shaking her head she sprinted away.

All (But Littlefoot and Nahla):

Someone once lied to us
Now we're not so blind
For we knew she would do what she's done
And we know that she'll never be one of us.

Cera:
She is not one of us!.

Nahla was now out of the valley she looked back sadly,seeing the angry residents she put her head down and walked.

Ruby:
Deception

Chomper: Disgrace

Ducky: Deception

Petrie: Disgrace.

Shorty: Deception...

Nahla broke down into sobs.


A ghostly figure shook her head "Oh..." she turned and faded.


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Tried to make it lion the movie scene much as I could but hey.

Your gonna have to read the fic to know what even Grandma and Grandpa hate her now.






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Admittingly, the "Not One Of Us" scene from TLK2 is my least favorite scene. If I watch the movie, I always try to skip this scene.


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That's nice, Nahla! I like it :yes
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This really fits in nicely with the characters :)
"Not all who wander are lost"
J. R. R. Tolkein


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I've never really liked this song that much; but, I don't hate it. You did a good job on this story Nahla.



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