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LBT Fanart / Gift Art
« on: December 25, 2020, 12:35:18 PM »
Merry Christmas!

Decided to surprise some writers this year with fan art of their fanfics!  Wait ... does that make this 'fan-fan art'?  Anyway, here's the first piece!  I would have liked to create at least 3 digital paintings, but unfortunately I'll have to settle for two because arting takes a lotta outa ya (yep, I verbed a noun, and regret nothing ;)).  You can expect the second one later today.  Without further ado, I give you ...

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Saurus Rock: Member Hall of Fame / Re: Fanfiction Results 2020
« on: December 14, 2020, 03:14:09 AM »
Congrats one and all!  I was pleasantly surprised to see the Land Before Time fandom alive here, and impressed by the quality of writing.

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LBT Fanart / Re: jassy’s Fanart
« on: December 13, 2020, 10:15:55 PM »


https://i.imgur.com/vNzIzsJ.jpg

WOAH!!  This is SUPER good!!  Such a wonderful reinterpretation of the rainbow-face design!  The background is also exceptional!  It perfectly complements the emotive nature of the image!

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LBT Fanart / Re: Sharpneck Tales
« on: December 13, 2020, 10:08:29 PM »
@Sarah Thank you so much!  Good eye, picking up the extra detail.

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The Fridge / Re: Coffee or Tea?
« on: December 12, 2020, 09:59:09 PM »
@StardustSoldier You have my permission!  Though I can enjoy coffee, I drink it rarely.  Besides, it has zero energy-inducing effect on me (last I checked).  I prefer tea: no particular favourite, although Chai tea and Nettle tea with milk are pretty high on my list.

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LBT Fanart / Re: Sharpneck Tales
« on: December 12, 2020, 09:42:09 PM »
To the staff, I'm honoured that you'd feature this little tale in the newsletter!

I've decided to experiment with a comic dub!  It's not perfect, but I hope you guys enjoy it.  What do you think?  Should I make more in the future?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NRNL8A2aI0M

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LBT Fanfiction / Re: War Before Time I: Mentors of Yesteryears
« on: November 29, 2020, 04:09:15 PM »
Chapter 6

Red Claw, Ready or Not



Year 4

Day 33

Chomper almost yawned. Cera was charging him head-on.

Again.

Doc and Mr. Thicknose's input hadn't done much, apparently. Oh well. He couldn't expect her to reinvent her entire fighting style overnight.

Targeting her horn, his predatory mind quickly calculated the perfect timing, the perfect motion.

*CHOMP!*

He'd missed! How could he miss? It was a flawless bite! No ... He hadn't simply 'missed'. She was coming at him, but then she'd stopped, pulling her head back and leaving him to snap air. He'd scarcely registered that before Cera gave her head a sharp swing, striking his jaw with her horn.

The sharptooth froze, eyes wide as he processed the turn of events.

Cera wondered if she'd broken him. "C'mon! I didn't hit you that hard, did I?"

A big smile lit up the sharptooth's face. "That. Was. AWESOME, Cera!"

She blinked in surprise before raising her chin in pride. "Thanks."

Cera had to admit: Chomper's genuine praise and enthusiasm was a pretty good pick-me-up.

"That might be enough to take down a sharptooth!" Chomper excitedly stated. "Of course, you'll need more tricks than that, and you'll need to hit as hard as you can without losing balance. Sharpteeth try to end a fight as quickly as possible, so you should too."

"Oh, I'll hit harder, alright," Cera assured with a smirk. "If it doesn't work, we've got plenty of time to work on some more tricks."

Chomper slowly nodded. His thoughts seemed to wander after the 'plenty of time' part.

"Uh ... hey, you okay?" asked Cera.

Chomper grinned in a surge of confidence. "Absolutely! When we're done, Red Claw himself will be at your mercy!"



Year 4

Day 247



Cera accelerated as Red Claw stood in a stupor, still stunned by her horrendous insult in the sharptooth tongue. She was almost fully grown, but he was nearly twice her size. Nonetheless, she was ready.

Every day of her training had his name on it!

Red Claw's shock turned to outrage. He didn't roar, didn't growl. He simply gestured Screech and Thud to attack the longneck before awaiting her in silent fury. Did he expect her to just run into his jaws? He had another thing coming!

Cera was at the edge of pouncing range when Red Claw lunged. She stopped abruptly, drawing back. His mighty jaws crashed together like a thunderclap, jarring her ears as they fell just short of her. The threehorn screamed a battle cry as she smashed her horns into the side of his chin. The impact sent a shockwave through her skull. It felt good! Time seemed to slow as Cera etched the moment into her memory, relishing the bafflement rippling across Red Claw's face as his head lurched. She bet no threehorn had downed him in one hit, and she would gladly be the first!

Red Claw seemed to flash her a glare as he continued to reel. Wait ... he wasn't falling. He was no longer reeling either. He was turning. While his head pivoted away with the momentum, his tail blazed towards her. She almost didn't see it. There was no time to dodge. No time to counter. Cera could only crouch low and brace herself.

Half the breath blasted from her lungs as Red Claw's tail met her side. The strike arced upwards, like a golfer's swing, specifically intended to overturn her. Trepidation spiked through the threehorn as she found herself toppling. This wasn't supposed to happen! Once she lowered her centre of gravity, no one knocked her down in one stroke! Not Chomper, not even Littlefoot! Maybe that was the problem. Littlefoot and Chomper sparred with her as friends.

Red Claw fought her as a killer.

Upon hitting the ground, Cera skilfully rolled with the blow and rapidly returned to her feet. She could scarcely stand before Red Claw's teeth latched around her horn.

He was fast.

So was she.

The threehorn hammered his muzzle with her fore paw. The horn slipped free. After knocking his head skywards with a headbutt, she rammed his stomach. He slid back, but didn't drop. Why wouldn't this brute go down?! Then came the realisation. She recognised the feel of the hide against her horns.

Red Claw had stone scales.

Unforgiving jaws clamped her back: easily the most painful, terrifying thing she'd ever felt. If not for her own stone-hardened scales, the battle might have ended there and then. Instead, Red Claw flipped her onto her back with a jerk of the jaws. He went for the underbelly, stumbling away when her hind paws found his face half by practise, half by panic.

She hurried to her feet.

The sharptooth shook off the blow and exploded towards her.

He froze, jaws wide.

Cera had perfectly poised her three-foot horn to meet his mouth in the most damaging way possible. A few inches later and he would have made a grave mistake.

Red Claw backed away, tilting his head as he gave the three horned conundrum a calm, contemplative stare.

"Aww, what's the matter?" Cera asked in her most patronising voice. "Is the big, bad Red Claw scared of me? Booo hooo!"

The sharptooth didn't react. His silence was mildly unnerving. Much to her surprise, his posture seemed to relax as he yawned. It almost looked like he was losing interest!

Cera subconsciously slackened her muscles and she stifled a yawn of her own. Oh, great. It was contagious.

He blinked lazily, giving the sky a semi-wary glance.

She blinked as well.

The moment she opened her eyes, Red Claw was silently, ravenously, surging at her. The moment she snapped to attention, he launched into a confusing zigzag. Instead of colliding, they converged in what looked like an intricate dance. Back and forth, left and right, neither landed a blow as Red Claw strained her reflexes with incessant attempts to get by her horns.

...
Thud leapt before Littlefoot's tail snapped beneath him, the thunder crack jolting his bones and robbing his hearing for a split moment. He wasn't expecting the longneck to sharply raise his tail mid-swing, smacking the fast biter high above the ground.

Screech pounced from behind, only to find himself halted inches from contact when Littlefoot's tail snatched him from the air.

Lifting the nonplussed fast biter so that they were face to face, Littlefoot gave the predator a flat smile.

Thud slumped. Yet again, the longneck had him. He supposed he could see the sardonic humour. This time, he was sure he'd be squished.

To the fast biter's utter confusion, Littlefoot set him down with a pat to the head for good measure. Thud blinked blankly, having no frame of reference for what was happening. The longneck wasn't being friendly. He simply gave a deadpan stare as though waiting for something to happen. Hold on a minute, where was that shadow coming fro-?

Thud was starting to look up when Screech crashed down on top of him.

Littlefoot examined his handiwork. The fast biters seemed down for the count. His job done, he rushed to Cera's aid. Scarcely had he left before Screech cut the act and climbed off of Thud. The fall might not have rendered them unconscious, but they couldn't help but groan from the soreness. Thud quietly snarled after Littlefoot.

Screech chittered, telling Thud that they should go after the others while the longneck still thought they were incapacitated.

Thud argued that he wasn't done with the longneck: not after the smart-talking mound of meat made a fool of him twice!

Screech hissed, insisting that Thud needed no help to make a fool of himself. If they really wanted to spite the longneck, they had to go for his weak spot: his friends! Red Claw could take care of himself.

Thud sneered at their alpha, sure not to be seen. It would be a hollow victory. The longneck wouldn't be alive long enough to see what happened to his friends.

With a malicious purr, Screech assured Thud that the longneck didn't have to see it. They could state the grisly details of their intentions at a distance.

Perking up somewhat, Thud bobbed his head in agreement. After pausing to scan the sky, the two fast biters rushed after the departed dinosaurs.

They would have to act fast, Thud warned, before The Daybreaker found them.



Petrie felt horrible.

Soaring above Ducky, Spike and Skip as they scrambled for their lives, he was in no danger whatsoever. That made him feel all the worse. He could hear the fight from there. Littlefoot and Cera were risking their necks in a battle just short of suicide. What was he doing? Fleeing through the skies like a coward.

Like Uncle Pterano.

"Keep going! I'll be back!" Petrie called down to the others, making a U turn.

Ducky and Spike exchanged uncertain glances.



Cera didn't even see it coming: a blow to the temple that felt as though it went straight to her brain. Her world was spinning. Her thoughts fell to shambles. Her senses muddied as the moment seemed to smudge. When the threehorn's awareness returned in a blur, she felt Red Claw's jaws on her horn, his foot on her side as she lay prone. She could barely move. Pushing with his foot, yanking with his teeth, he was attempting to break her. A shove of the paw did nothing to budge the jaws fixed to her horn. Maybe there wasn't anything she could do.

Maybe this was it.

Cera felt Red Claw's body jolt. At the corner of her eye, she saw a rock shatter against his side. He released her, snarling at a massive shadow raging towards him.

In spite of her precarious position, the threehorn grinned. "Good luck, Pink Eye. You're gonna need it."

Littlefoot spun into a palm tree, tearing it from the soil and smashing it into Red Claw's head in one, whirling motion. Cera guffawed almost goofily. The look on the sharptooth's face!

Being clobbered by a tree? That was a first, but it was a learning experience. Red Claw learnt that he didn't like it.

The longneck took another swing. Red Claw instinctively caught the tree with his jaws, disarming Littlefoot with a yank. The sharptooth made to toss it aside, but it remained fixed between his chops. His teeth were lodged deep, and the muscles responsible for opening his jaws weren't nearly as strong as his bite.

The longneck's blows landed like thunder and lightning. He wasn't quite as big as Red Claw, but large enough to stagger the giant.

Though he tottered and stumbled, Red Claw never lost his footing. He almost seemed to ignore the blows as he furiously attempted to remove the tree from his mouth.

Cera shook off her soreness as she rose to a stand. The way Littlefoot's tail rained pinpoint melee on Red Claw's ankles, knees, neck, skull and any opportune spot that presented itself, she was almost jealous of the longneck. Almost. She wouldn't trade her horns for anything!

Cera charged the sharptooth, ducking a flail of his tail. The tree went flying from the tyrant's jaws when Littlefoot unleashed a titanic blow. Red Claw's head swung high as he stumbled into Cera. She bellowed, throwing up her horns and slamming him in the opposite direction.

He stumbled, wobbled.

Cera smirked. Any moment and he'd go down with a mighty thud. Much to her astonishment, Red Claw steadied himself, shook his head and regarded them with nonchalant annoyance.

He snorted at their surprise. These naive children took the occasional dip into The Mysterious Beyond, and they thought they knew anything about a real fight? He'd been through battles that would haunt their callow little sleep stories 'till the day they died. This was nothing. Absolutely nothing.

The leafeaters charged from opposite directions.

Red Claw waited for the perfect moment. Then he whirled, slamming aside the incoming Cera with his tail while launching his jaws at Littlefoot's throat. The longneck felt spittle when the chomp rang in his ears. It fell just short as he deflected Red Claw's bite with a tail to the chin. Littlefoot grunted as Red Claw powered through the raised tail. All those years, all that training, and Littlefoot's strength felt like nothing under Red Claw's might. He drew back from another bite. This time, the jaws glanced off his throat. He looped his tail around Red Claw's neck and redirected the sharptooth's weight. The third bite missed not by much. They were too close. The longneck could barely manoeuvre. He needed space. Littlefoot yelled as he shoved the sharptooth with his shoulder.

Red Claw budged, but barely. He spotted Cera rushing in with a bellow and sneered. The foolish child, giving away her position.

Feeling teeth, a sharp gasp was all Littlefoot could manage before his breath cut short. With savage strength, the sharptooth hurled him into an alarmed Cera.

The leafeaters tumbled in a heap.

Cera scrambled to her feet.

Littlefoot did not stir.

"LITTLEFOOT!" she wailed.

Red Claw purred in satisfaction. The longneck wouldn't get up. Not after that. Now to deal with that odious threehorn. He'd be sure to make her end much slower. To his mild surprise, Littlefoot opened his eyes calmly dragged his feet beneath him. With a blazing glare, the longneck rose to a stand, rumbling a deep purr that escalated to a venomous snarl before accentuating the threat with a crack of his tail.

Cera's eyes grew wide. She'd never heard Littlefoot make a noise like that.

"That sounded ... dark. What'd you say?" she asked.

Littlefoot tilted his head towards her slightly, keeping his intense gaze fixed on Red Claw. "I told him I didn't want to fight. We could all walk away, but if he kept this up, someone wasn't going home today, and the identity of that 'someone' might surprise him."

"Yiiikess!" Cera mouthed.

After their journey to The Great Valley, Cera viewed Littlefoot as family. As he grew into an earth-shaking warrior, she inwardly thought he was the coolest guy she knew, but this? Seeing him in action, threatening Red Claw with a sound straight out of a nightmare? She had to come up with a new category for him.

He was beyond cool!

The balefully gleeful cries of Screech and Thud met their ears.

Dismay tainted Littlefoot's glare. In gruesome detail, the fast biters were announcing what they would do when they found the other leafeaters, and they were too far for Littlefoot and Cera to stop them.

Red Claw's lip curled in delight at the sight of Littlefoot's face. He gave a reassuring croon poisoned with malice, telling Littlefoot not to worry. He promised to keep them just alive enough to see what became of their friends. His sneer grew all the bigger as panic touched the longneck's features. Would the leafeater beg? He welcomed him to do so. It was such little pleasures that Red Claw relished so much.

Littlefoot blinked in stupefaction before asking the simple question:

Why?

Red Claw creased his brow.

When the predator only stared, Littlefoot went on: Why would a sharptooth go out of his way to do that? Needing food was one thing. Enjoying suffering was a whole different story. Even when they were young, barely even a snack, Red Claw would go out of his way to pursue them. Why would he do something like that?

The sharptooth gave a deep, contemplative hum. Now this was interesting. He had half a mind not to answer, but intriguing conversations like this were seldom. This conversation could even prove cathartic. He checked the sky. No trouble in sight. Maybe 'trouble' was otherwise occupied that day. Fine. He would indulge the longneck.

Red Claw stated that, long story short, he hated Littlefoot and his friends.

But why, asked Littlefoot?

The sharptooth tapped his claw. Where to begin? For starters, he posed the question: What if sharpteeth had a neutral opinion of leafeaters? They would empathise with them, even spare them. Foolish sharpteeth had done so before, and even at present such fools existed. What if leafeaters didn't hate sharpteeth? They would reach out to them. Make friends with them, and the so-called 'friendly sharpteeth' would sooner starve than turn on those close to them. If such a thing happened on a massive scale, leafeater numbers would increase to the point where they consumed all the green food and began to starve as well. The Circle of Life would be broken. Hatred was a driving force of life. It was wise to hate.

Littlefoot's jaw loosened. Was that the sharptooth philosophy? It went against everything he believed in ... yet Littlefoot could see the twisted logic.

The longneck acknowledged that he understood Red Claw's point, but hatred ate out the heart from the inside, spoiling the life of its bearers and those around them. He knew what it felt like, and he'd almost missed wonderful friendships because of it. It was wiser to love. He glanced down at Cera and stated that threehorns and longnecks once hated each other, but she was his closest friend. It was only through the wisdom of friendship that they made it to The Great Valley, a herd of leafeaters dissimilar as they came who got over their differences. The loved each other like family, and that love had carried them through countless adventures. A sense of kinship was the only reason why The Great Valley worked, as opposed to descending into turf war when various herds with different needs and desires settled into it. In a strange way, they were all like family. They had even made friends with a sharptooth!

Red Claw growled, stating that he knew the sharptooth, the one who was always with them, until that day. Where was that sharptooth now?

Littlefoot glanced about as though searching for an answer.

Red Claw took a step towards them. Enough of this nonsense, he snapped! The longneck could talk 'till the stars fell and The Great Guardians ruled the Earth, but the fact was simple: The longneck hated the sharptooth, and vice versa.

"'Great Guardians'?" Littlefoot mumbled.

"Huh?" asked Cera.

"Nothing, never mind," Littlefoot dismissed, shaking away the curiosity. He couldn't afford to go off topic.

With a step of his own towards Red Claw, Littlefoot stated that he didn't hate him. He actually thought they could be friends, if they let themselves.

The sharptooth snorted, asking how exactly that would work?

Littlefoot thought for a moment before shaking his head. He admitted that he wasn't sure, but they could figure it out. His friend, Chomper, had figured it out. It was somewhat uncharted territory, but some paths only appeared to those who looked for them. He knew Red Claw grew up without a family. Didn't he get tired of hating? Wasn't there a part of him that yearned for friends and family?

Red Claw's battle-hardened face twitched.

Much to Cera's surprise, he broke away from Littlefoot's imploring gaze. Okay ... She couldn't make heads or tails of most of the conversation, but whatever Littlefoot said, it almost looked like it was working!

The sharptooth's expression snapped back to severity.

Cera frowned. Never mind.

Yes, Red Claw admitted, as he stalked towards the leafeaters. He had considered family, but Littlefoot and his friends had taken that away from him.

"What?" gasped Littlefoot, before asking Red Claw to explain.

With a sadistic grin, Red Claw stated that he might tell the longneck, but only after he'd brought him down. He was on a bit of a schedule.

"LEAVE MY FRIENDS ALONE!" came a squawk from above.

The sharptooth exhaled. Another young one giving away his position before attacking? It wasn't even amusing. How had they ever slipped through his claws in the past? Foolish children.

Petrie darted in. He didn't have to fight. All he had to do was flap around Red Claw's face a bit. Close enough to draw attention, but not too close. That would buy his friends some time, right?

"Ooowff!" he exclaimed as Red Claw's swift tail swatted him out of the air.

"PETRIE!" Littlefoot shouted.

Red Claw purred. They could watch this one go first!

As the sharptooth's shadow fell over the flyer, Petrie opened his mouth to give a warning he had no hope of backing up. Instead of a shaky threat, everyone froze when a piercing screech seemed to come out instead.

Red Claw's eyes snapped to the skies as he roared for an unseen foe to stay away.

"... 'The Daybreaker' ...?" Littlefoot muttered, tilting his head in curiosity.

"What did you say?" asked Cera.

"Red Claw roared at something he called 'the one who interrupts the flow of a sharptooth's day, and literally breaks the light of The Bright Circle': 'The Daybreaker'."

Rapt with wonder, Cera attempted to follow the sharptooth's gaze. "What could do something like that?"

The answer came pouncing from the heavens like sky fire. Everyone squinted at the silhouette framed by The Bright Circle. It was some kind of flyer. They could scarcely make out the details, scarcely even look at him. The Sun was on his heels, straining their eyes. Littlefoot was forced to turn away, noticing that even Red Claw's eyes watered as he forced a glare up at the flyer.

"That ... that flyers' using The Bright Circle as an attack! To blind Red Claw!" Littlefoot exclaimed in amazement.

Petrie's thoughts raced. Another flyer ... was attacking Red Claw? He'd never heard a flyer screech like that. It was honed to the chilling ferocity of a sharptooth's roar, with a touch of rasp that only heightened the effect. However, it sounded vaguely familiar. When the flyer gave another screech, ear-splittingly closer than the first one, it clicked.

No! It couldn't be, but it was!

"U-Uncle Pterano?" Petrie gawked.



Yep, yep, yep, Pterano's been up to some interesting things during his banishment. I really enjoyed reinventing the character as something you'd never expect ... unless of course you did XD.

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LBT Fanart / Re: Flathead770's Fanart
« on: November 23, 2020, 03:36:48 AM »
"But what if you cannot find any boulders, Mr. Littlefoot?"
"If you can't find any, then then that just means you are not looking hard enough."
Yeah, child!  Do you expect instant gratification?  The comic had me snickering 'till the end after that!
"If you're ever afraid, alone, sad, happy, or anything in between really, singing a song is really the most optimal thing you can do."
Flyer: "What if you don't like to sing?"
Littlefoot's reaction, HA HA HA!!!!   :Mo  I think he's trying to explain the phenomena of plot armour and crowd singing, without really realising that they're phenomena in the first place.

Littlefoot: "... I'm sorry ... what was that?"
Flyer: "What if you don't like singing?"
Littlefoot: "... I hear the words, but I don't understand the way you're putting them together.  I know!  Why don't you sing it?"
Flyer: "I don't want to."
Littlefoot: "... Come again?"
Flyer: "I don't want to sing.  I don't like singing."
Littlefoot: (Thinking) He's trying to speak to me, I just know it.

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LBT Fanart / Re: Sharpneck Tales
« on: November 21, 2020, 05:38:09 PM »
I'll see what I can do about continuing the story.   :Mo Thanks!

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LBT Fanart / Re: Sharpneck Tales
« on: November 20, 2020, 10:10:28 PM »
Haha this is great! I'm glad to see more comic strips sprouting up in the fanart section.

Hopefully you'll have the chance to participate in future fanart prompts! Keep it up and looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!  :chompysmile

Thanks so much!  I'll try.

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LBT Fanart / Re: Sharpneck Tales
« on: November 20, 2020, 09:48:47 PM »
I love comic formats!!! :D
Well drawn!  Did you draw background by yourself?

(sigh, why all pre-historic bumper-heads are so mean and insulting?)

Woould love to see more!

Thank you!

Yes, I did draw the background myself, although I was looking at Land Before Time backgrounds for reference.

Mean as threehorns can be, they're especially prejudiced towards sharpnecks for ... reasons ...

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LBT Fanart / Sharpneck Tales
« on: November 20, 2020, 03:07:02 PM »
Wanted to submit this for the 'Stuck at School' prompt, but I was a little late  :rhett_smile.  Besides, the first page doesn't exactly fit the bill, but the following ones will!  ... Provided I keep this comic going.

As you can see, sharpnecks (amargasauruses) like Dagara change colour to reflect certain states of mind.  Her fiery 'Battle Blush' is a threat display.  They're an extremely aggressive species, so getting through the day without maiming threehorns can be reeaaaally difficult for her.  Luckily, she has a tremendous amount of self control.

Check out her story at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13556382/1/Because-You-re-a-Sharpneck-A-War-Before-Time-Oneshot.


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LBT Fanfiction / Re: Weathered Gorge
« on: November 16, 2020, 09:47:33 PM »
Chapter 1 - There is a magnetic quality to this story that drew me in from the beginning.  The memories interspersed with narrative works very well.  I've never imagined seeing that side of Petrie's mom.  The story flows very well.  It only briefly seemed to drag near the end of this chapter, perhaps because I was wondering why Skylar was vocally venting her thoughts to that degree.  However, I now see that it was a necessary plot catalyst.  I expected Petrie's father's demise, but it was more unceremoniously poignant than I anticipated.

You could leave Petrie's father nameless, buuut, if not I have a few humble suggestions: Diem, Atmos, Stratos, Zenith, Empyrean, Apogee.  'Diem', referencing the phrase 'carpe diem' / 'seize the day', would be an interesting nod to the fact that Skylar attempted to hold onto him in her effort to save him, and is still learning to move on and seize the day ever since.

Chapter 2 - Yyyikes ... Early on it was obvious that Gyro and Roll were shaping up as S-grade griefers, but that verbal assault took things to an unexpected extreme.  Cera is a walk in the park by comparison.  The fact that Petrie's speech pattern isn't shared by any of his siblings (if anything, their eloquence seems slightly above average) accentuates the impression that he's a bit of a pariah.

The literal nature of being 'grounded' is a funny touch.

Petrie's spur-of-the-moment cleverness is an interesting foil to Gyro and Roll's claims.  It was fascinating to see such a cunning side of him.  I don't think they even realised how thoroughly he outfoxed the others.

Chapter 3 - Petrie's introspection was effective in creating the impression of the time it took for him to reach Weathered Gorge, yet it did not strike me as boring.  It was an effective calm before the storm, quite literally.

The action that followed was a satisfyingly intense read.  I'm mildly disappointed that it didn't end exactly the way Petrie envisioned, but I guess that's true to life.  The Weathered Gorge itself is an interesting concept.  This allegorical setting almost serves as its own antagonist, seemingly sinisterly conjuring a cocktail of horrors in an effort to claim its prey.  I guess it's the Bermuda Triangle of the prehistoric world.

Chapter 4 - "ugh this was supposed to be a one-shottttttt"  I can totally relate to that lament, but despite its experimental nature, this fic turned out wonderful.  It had a good moral that came naturally without being forced.  Though Petrie was the focus, his mother had a fair share of character development herself.  I wasn't expecting us to delve this deeply into the personalities and interactions of his siblings, but it was a pleasant and effectively executed surprise.

In summary, this fic may not be a theatrically proportioned tour de force, but it's its own kind of masterpiece that I found equally satisfying!

(One Inevitable Later)
Littlefoot: "Hey, guys!  Let's go see the Weathered Gorge!  You won't believe the stuff I've heard about it!"
Petrie: "Me pass.  Me already fly through there."
Ducky: (Busts out the doe eyes) "Ohh, c'mon, Petrieee!  It'll be fun!  It will, it wi-  Wait, WHAT?!  WHEN??"

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Saurus Rock: Member Hall of Fame / Re: Fanfiction Voting 2020
« on: November 16, 2020, 09:37:16 PM »
Fanfiction: Weathered Gorge
I rate it: 9.9/10
Because: Chapter 1 - There is a magnetic quality to this story that drew me in from the beginning.  The memories interspersed with narrative works very well.  I've never imagined seeing that side of Petrie's mom.  The story flows very well.  It only briefly seemed to drag near the end of this chapter, perhaps because I was wondering why Skylar was vocally venting her thoughts to that degree.  However, I now see that it was a necessary plot catalyst.  I expected Petrie's father's demise, but it was more unceremoniously poignant than I anticipated.

Chapter 2 - Yyyikes ... Early on it was obvious that Gyro and Roll were shaping up as S-grade griefers, but that verbal assault took things to an unexpected extreme.  Cera is a walk in the park by comparison.  The fact that Petrie's speech pattern isn't shared by any of his siblings (if anything, their eloquence seems slightly above average) accentuates the impression that he's a bit of a pariah.

The literal nature of being 'grounded' is a funny touch.

Petrie's spur-of-the-moment cleverness is an interesting foil to Gyro and Roll's claims.  It was fascinating to see such a cunning side of him.  I don't think they even realised how thoroughly he outfoxed the others.

Chapter 3 - Petrie's introspection was effective in creating the impression of the time it took for him to reach Weathered Gorge, yet it did not strike me as boring.  It was an effective calm before the storm, quite literally.

The action that followed was a satisfyingly intense read.  I'm mildly disappointed that it didn't end exactly the way Petrie envisioned, but I guess that's true to life.  The Weathered Gorge itself is an interesting concept.  This allegorical setting almost serves as its own antagonist, seemingly sinisterly conjuring a cocktail of horrors in an effort to claim its prey.  I guess it's the Bermuda Triangle of the prehistoric world.

Chapter 4 - "ugh this was supposed to be a one-shottttttt"  I can totally relate to that lament, but despite its experimental nature, this fic turned out wonderful.  It had a good moral that came naturally without being forced.  Though Petrie was the focus, his mother had a fair share of character development herself.  I wasn't expecting us to delve this deeply into the personalities and interactions of his siblings, but it was a pleasant and effectively executed surprise.

In summary, this fic may not be a theatrically proportioned tour de force, but it's its own kind of masterpiece that I found equally satisfying!

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Saurus Rock: Member Hall of Fame / Re: Fanfiction Voting 2020
« on: November 11, 2020, 08:45:15 PM »
Oh boy ... I was looking at the wrong section waiting for the award nominations to come out, hence the delay.  Anyway, here are my votes so far.

Fanfiction: Our Past and Our Future
I rate it: 7.5/10
Because: So far, this story feels like it could have been one of the better Land Before Time movies (not that that's a requirement for a workable fanfic).  Navigating a friendship with a sharptooth always has potential for fascination, which you explore quite well.  Arya's introduction as part of the cast sold me, and Cera's treatment of her was as wince-worthy as it was satisfyingly resolved ... for now (wince).  It's easy to forget that Cera is officially described as 'sweet but strong-willed', and you gave her a little more depth than we usually see by portraying that.

I'm sure the plight of growing up as a sharptooth among leafeaters has been explored in many stories, but I thought it was well done in Chapter 2, 'Lessons'.  It is easy to forget that, being an omnivore, I would be far less bothered by Chomper eating a fish than his friends would be.  I think that detail is somewhat easy to forget, so kudos for remembering it.

There are some pretty adorable moments contrasted by poignant ones.  'The Coldest Day' stands out as the most moving chapter so far, perhaps masterfully so, and by 'moving', I mean (insert excessive man-tears here).

Personally, I can't criticise much in this story.  Minor grammatical errors are understandable.  The wordsmithery could be a bit more engaging and I would enjoy seeing more heart-pumping adventure, but in short, I really like this story and I expect it to improve as we go along.

Looking forward to seeing more!


Fanfiction: A Friendship Born of Fear and Courage
I rate it: 6.5/10
Because: Interesting take on the beginnings of Ruby and Chomper's relationship!  It's hard to imagine them having anything dissimilar to the brother/sister dynamic, but it makes sense that they could have had a rocky start.  Good job thinking to portray that and fleshing it out.  The interaction between Chomper and Ruby's family was understandably painful to read.  The end was rewarding, but logical in its imperfect closure.  After all, we can't expect Chomper to have a perfect relationship with Ruby's family all of a sudden.

The scene-building was quite good!

My biggest issue was some of the execution, which made it hard for my mind to flow with the story.  You clearly have a good vocabulary, but a fair number of moments were more wordy than they needed to be.  Perhaps that was an effort to fully encapsulate what was happening, but it elongated the moments and interrupted the fluidity a little too much for me.  I've made that mistake a number of times, trying to be clear/thorough and sacrificing readability in the process.  Some words and phrases were repeated a little too frequently, such as "by the second", "knew full well" and "(he/she/name) was beyond (adjective)".  They're good phrases, but overuse can become conspicuous ...  which I'm sure I've also done without realising.  Another example of repetition would be:

'Pearl sighed deeply before starting to speak.

“My love, calm down. Let’s try to live a moment at a time. We don’t know anything about how things will turn out.” She said, causing the other omnivore to sigh deeply and look at the ground.'

Using different words for the second sigh, such as 'exhale wearily', or excluding the second sigh would have helped ... unless this writing pattern is in part meant to mimic the speech pattern of fast runners, as much of it is written from their perspective.  If so, refining that writing technique so that it does not interrupt the flow could be a very interesting read.

I don't recall sharpteeth knowing how to communicate with leafeaters (except Chomper), but perhaps you've established something in your continuity of which I am unaware.

Referring to the sharpteeth as 'two footers' when everyone present falls under that category was a little confusing.  Perhaps you were referring to them in a general sense, much like how you can call them dinosaurs without being redundant.

The brief battle was a nice touch.  I was somewhat surprised that the duo stood a chance against three fast biters, as I recall Ruby being at least 3x smaller than Screech and Thud.  However, I suppose there's nothing to say the predators were as big as Screech and Thud.  Besides, if a rabbit's bite can do a fair amount of damage to a human, it's reasonable that a small sharptooth's attacks could be pretty nasty.

Ruby's reason for stepping up to the challenge is plausible ... perhaps more so than many of the times the gang has made perilous journeys unattended.


I really liked how the fast runners have a complex sharptooth protocol besides 'RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!'

The fast biters' reluctance to talk to, far less encourage the company of a threehorn, was a nice nod to how differently things work in The Mysterious Beyond.  Perhaps that's one of the reasons why Ruby's parents wanted her to figure out how dinosaurs in The Great Valley get along.

All in all, the execution made it hard to follow, but it was a good idea expanded upon with a good storyline!

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LBT Fanfiction / Re: War Before Time I: Mentors of Yesteryears
« on: November 07, 2020, 04:04:26 PM »
As I've mentioned, the scale difference between dinosaurs in this story's continuity is closer to real life (though not necessarily perfectly accurate). While a fully grown Littlefoot would be much larger than most sharpteeth, there are some who grow exceptionally large in this story, like Red Claw, The Sharptooth from the original movie and others who were capable of facing adult longnecks one on one throughout the franchise. Why the size fluctuation? We'll get to that in this chapter.

Enjoy, and thank you for reading!




Chapter 5

Think Like a Sharptooth



Year 4

Day 32



"Okay, Chomper. You can let go now," Cera declared.

The young sharptooth's mind was somewhere else, barely grasping her statement.

"Huh?" he asked through his teeth.

"You win. Let. Go." she commanded.

Chomper loosed his jaw from her horn. "Oh! I'm sorry!"

Cera stood up straight and shook her horns, more to fling off the indignity than anything else. She felt like a pretzel ... not that she knew what a pretzel was. Chomper was an easy sparring partner when he was half her size, but now? After hitting a growth spurt, he had the strength to bend her into all sorts of awkward positions from which there was no escape. When he got a good grip, it was usually over. He often went for the horns, her pride and glory. She hated that, though the competitive fighter in her refused to say it. Sure, Cera was nearing the end of The Time of Great Growing herself. In fact, she was certain that she was just a tad heavier than he was. That bothered her most of all. It wasn't just his size or his teeth. He was just ... better than she was. He instinctively knew how to get the upper hand, consistently winning at least two out of every three battles lately. Though less than ideal, that wasn't the worst ratio for her, but considering the fact that they fought over multiple rounds, he invariably won overall. The fact that he was so sheepish about his victories irritated her even more, but the thing that bothered her most this time around?

He hadn't even been paying attention, and he still won!

"Should I stop grabbing your horns?" Chomper suggested for the umpteenth time.

"Chomper, don't you DARE go easy on me!" Cera snapped before smiling smugly. "Besides, the girls can take anything you dish."

Chomper was about to ask who 'the girls' were, until he remembered that Cera referred to her horns as though they were dinosaurs. She'd even named them, though he could never quite recall the names.

The threehorn assumed a combat stance. "Okay, let's go again."

"Hold it," Doc interrupted.

"I think we see what your problem is," added Mr. Thicknose.

The teenagers turned their attention to the adults, who had been watching the battles and comparing notes.

"The problem is he thinks like a sharptooth, and you think like something a sharptooth eats," Doc explained.

Cera frowned. She did not like that conclusion. Chomper seemed to like it even less, glancing at his friend before sighing at the ground.

Doc gave him an empathetic look. "It's a good thing you're here to help her out. What you teach Cera might save her in the future."

Chomper's spirits seemed to lift, even if slightly. "Thanks, Sir."

Cera gave him a critical glance. She just called the guy 'Doc'. Chomper insisted on the polite approach. She got the distinct impression that he was intimidated by The Lone Dinosaur, even after all these years. It was strange, hearing Chomper's meek, friendly voice deepen into a mild growl as he grew older. He would often lighten his tone so as to sound less aggressive, especially around Doc. One of these days, she was going to tell him that it sounded more forced than anything else.

"Why do you think it's so hard to break his grip?" asked Mr. Thicknose.

Cera gave him a look that said 'like, duh'. "I'm just not strong enough, I guess."

"No, you're not smart enough," Doc corrected.

Chomper winced. She would not take this well.

Cera gaped at the indignation. "No! No! With all due respect, I am plenty smart! I mean, at least it's not like I'm dumb, and it's not like Chompers a genius or something ... no offence?"

Chomper shrugged his tiny arms. "Eh, I didn't think I was that smart either."

Cera almost flew at him. "Will you STOP being so MODEST!?"

At the back of her mind, Cera noticed Chomper jerk towards her the moment she raised her voice. Usually he winced away, but it was such a fleeting action that she rapidly dismissed it as unimportant. Besides, she was too annoyed to pay attention to such subtle body language. His flight instinct took over and he shrank from her. Now that was the Chomper she knew.

The sharptooth quickly stepped away from the angry threehorn with a nervous smile. "Okay, it's been fun! I gotta go find lunch, bye!"

He made a break for it. Cera looked as though she might give chase.

"You finished breakfast half a nap ago!" she barked.

"I'm still hungry!" Chomper explained.

"Cera, calm down. You too, Chomper," Doc instructed.

The sharptooth froze in his tracks before retracing his steps. "Yes, Alpha ... I- I mean, Sir!"

Chomper was sure to stand a decent distance from her horns, though.

"You need to think like a sharptooth," Doc instructed Cera. "He's a smart fighter. He's always thinkin'. He knows what works and if it doesn't work he tries somethin' new. You think too, but not as much. You fall back on the same techniques - good techniques, but he knows them too well. When things go wrong, you stop thinkin' altogether and try to muscle your way out."

Cera lightly kicked a pebble. She knew that she needed to hear this, even if she didn't like it.

"So ... how do I start thinking like a sharptooth?" she asked.

"If something doesn't work, try somethin' else," Doc instructed. "Don't just throw your strength and training at him. Be methodical. Look for opportunities, note your weaknesses. You can break his grips with mind and muscle. If he confuses you, ask him why he did what he did, how he did what he did. Oh, and show up more often for our Advanced Imagination sessions."

Mr. Thicknose raised an interested eyebrow. "'Advanced Imagination'? Interesting. I'd like to hear about it. Hmm ..."

"What?" asked Doc.

"Heh, call me puerile, but I found myself wondering which of our students will prove to be more formidable."

"We already know the answer," Doc replied with a small smile. "Littlefoot rivals Chomper's resourcefulness. That in mind, I don't have to tell you how he fares against Cera."

The threehorn was practically steaming.

"Remarkable boy, that one," Mr. Thicknose commented, "but don't write off Cera just yet. Her determination is exceptional, even for a threehorn. I believe all she needs is the occasional push in the right direction."

Doc nodded his acknowledgement. "Time will tell, but either way I think we should collaborate more. Our students can sharpen each other, same way we can as teachers."

Mr. Thicknose smiled with a chuckle. "I'm surprised we didn't think of that before! It would be my pleasure."

"Good," Doc finalised. "Now, I'd like to know where you learnt the training Cera's gettin'. It's familiar ..."

"Excuse me, Sir ... um, Sirs," cut in Chomper. "Mind if I come back later? I really am still hungry."

Doc respected Chomper, but nonetheless he gave the sharptooth a borderline wary look.

"Are you not gettin' enough to eat?" he asked.

A mild awkwardness fell upon the leafeaters.

Chomper fidgeted with his claws. "Well ... it's kind of complicated. I've been eating water breathers. Crawlers too, but it's hard to find the big ones. Don't worry, I will. I've figured out that some of them live in nests. I found one and ... kind of ate all the crawlers in it, but I'm sure they're more nests since I'm still finding that type of crawler around here. I just have to find them, that's all."

"Try close to my nest," Doc suggested. "Been seeing a good number there lately. They've been buggin' Darla and I."

"Thanks, Sir!" Chomper exclaimed.

Having faced a few mild crawler infestations, the valley's residents were coming to see Chomper as a manner of pest control. It tempered the disapproval of those who thought a sharptooth had no business growing up in The Great Valley, and Chomper was eager to earn his keep.

"Meet us in two naps," Doc instructed.

"Thanks, bye!" Chomper called as he ran off to do his duty.

Not far on his way, the sharptooth came upon a nest full of recently hatched swimmers, being tended to by their mother.

He smiled at the endearing sight, before finding himself briefly licking his chops.

The mother soon noticed him. Giving the sharptooth an uncomfortable smile and a small wave, she made an attempt to subtly shield her young from his sight. She failed on the 'subtle' part.

Chomper's smile fell. The biggest blow came when he realised he was beginning to drool.

With heavy feet and an even heavier heart, he trudged away from the scene. This crossed the line. He'd made his decision.


Year 4

Day 247

Morning



Skip jumped awake as his burrow shook.

Finally, some excitement!

Make no mistake, the fuzzy creature enjoyed life in The Great Valley, but after growing up in The Mysterious Beyond, sometimes it got a little ... slow. One of his favourite things to do was watch Littlefoot and his friends training over the years, but this? This sounded like a full-fledged battle! Had a sharptooth invaded the valley? He supposed he shouldn't have been happy about that, but if something was going down, it wouldn't hurt to at least take a peek. Maybe he could help in his own small way. Besides, the burrow was beginning to collapse.

Scampering through the entrance (while there was still an entrance), Skip gawked at the sight before him. It was Littlefoot ... wailing on nothing but the earth beneath him.

"Hey, Littlefoot!" Skip called.

Of course, Littlefoot wasn't quite living up to his name anymore. The Time of Great Growing had done wonders in a few short years. He was already two thirds the size of his grandparents, which sometimes made it difficult for him to hear a creature roughly as big as a small dog, Skip fitting that description. The din he made as he pounded the ground with every ounce of his weight didn't help much.

Skip cleared his throat before giving his best shot. "LITTLEFOOT!"

The longneck paused, panting from the exertion. "Oh, hi Skip. Did I wake you?"

Skip looked back at his burrow. He didn't have the heart to tell Littlefoot that he'd probably destroyed half his home to boot.

"Eh, I oversleep anyways," Skip shrugged.

"Sorry, I'm trying to call Chomper with my Earth Whisper," the longneck explained.

"Ain't nothin' whispery about this," Skip commented. "What's up? Somethin' wrong?"

"Chomper told us he was going with Ruby to see her parents, but it turns out Ruby left before he disappeared! He's been acting weird for a while now, especially the past few days! I can't help but worry ..."

Skip scratched his head. "Hm ... and you haven't seen him since yesterday morning, when he left for The Mysterious Beyond?"

Littlefoot almost choked on his shock. "How do you know for sure he-?"

"I saw him."

"Why didn't you-!?"

"Hey, this isn't the first time you guys have wandered into The Mysterious Beyond," Skip parried. "At this stage I'm more accustomed to covering for you than tattling!"

Littlefoot immediately thundered an Earth Whisper, telling Cera where he would be and when to meet him. Yesterday would be a good time. Unfortunately, his other pals didn't understand Earth Whispers, so he had to find them the old-fashioned way.

Skip yelped as he ducked Littlefoot's sweeping tail (not that it swung low enough to hit him anyway). Shock waves ripped through the soil as the longneck thundered off to find the rest of his friends.

"You're welcome!" Skip called after him.

He had half a mind to follow Littlefoot. Tagging along on some of their adventures was the highlight of his life: a rare treat since they never announced plans for their risky escapades beforehand. He still had his burrow to repair, though. The thought of brushing with death (it was bound to happen) and not having a warm home to return to that night didn't appeal to him. Hold on a second ... since when did he care about the finer things in life! Life in The Great Valley was making him soft!

"Hey! Wait up!" he called as he dashed after the, for want of a better word, rampaging longneck. "You need a guide!"



Midday



Skip took a deep breath, savouring The Mysterious Beyond's ever-changing aromas. In The Great Valley, visitors came and went. Some stayed. The occasional resident departed, but other than that not much changed in recent times. Yes, seasons sculpted the valley like clockwork every year, but that was the problem: the clockwork. Out here, the earthshakes hit harder, pounding the land to suit their chaotically artistic vision. Predators and prey were always on their toes in the ever-changing dance of life. However, there was one thing that remained constant.

Red Claw.

"You still have Chomper's scent?" Petrie asked a little too loudly.

Wincing, Skip answered in a low voice, hoping to lead by example. "Yup, and Red Claw's."

"You say that everywhere we go," Cera quietly remarked.

"'Cause I don't want you to forget it," Skip explained. "Sure, Red Claw's not the only sharptooth around here, but he's definitely the biggest."

"Yeah, big enough to take on a fully grown longneck by himself without much of a problem," Littlefoot agreed in an equally subdued voice: no small feat considering his size. "I've seen unusually big sharpteeth before, but Red Claw's almost as big as the one who stalked us when the five of us first met."

"That's because they're rogues," Skip explained. "Most big sharpteeth hunt by themselves, but they were raised in a family and they can call on each other for a difficult hunt. Not rogues like Red Claw. They grew up all alone, so they had to get even bigger to take care of themselves. They usually don't work with other sharpteeth."

Doc had told Littlefoot more or less the same thing years ago, but the longneck wordlessly nodded anyway. Then his mind wandered to Chomper's seemingly never-ending growth spurt. He'd shot past Cera in the last year, and it didn't seem like he was going to stop soon.

"From the look of things, Chomper's gonna be one of the larger ones," Littlefoot commented, "but he didn't grow up alone, so he can't be a rogue. Then how's he getting so big? Hmm ... maybe it's because we're not sharpteeth, and he had to do all his hunting by himself, so it's like we don't count."

Skip nodded. Littlefoot had answered his own question quite conclusively, so he saw no need to add anything.

"Red Claw works with Screech and Thud, doesn't he?" Ducky chimed in. "He's not exactly alone either."

Skip flinched at her 'outside voice'. "They must have met him when he was fully grown. Oh, and he doesn't 'work with' them. They work for him, and they're very good at it, so try to keep the noise down and stay vigilant."

The fuzzy jumped as several rocks tumbled down a hill to his side. He shot Spike a glare.

Having created a miniature avalanche after tugging at a bush growing from beneath the rocks, Spike gave the Skip a guilty glance ... before proceeding to devour the bush ... loudly.

Skip shook his head as they moved on. It was a wonder they'd survived The Mysterious Beyond without him! He updated his mental record of all the things they'd done to draw attention to themselves, right down to their noisy, indiscriminate footsteps. If there were a dry plant or an unstable rock, he could count on someone to step on it. In all fairness, The Great Valley was a pedicured garden compared to jungle of obstacles that was The Mysterious Beyond. Even the plants and geography had an almost conspicuously tame sense of order, and the residents made it a point to keep their environment tidy. The youngsters weren't used to manoeuvring through such a rowdy setting, especially after their growth spurts. Even so, most leafeaters were like walking dinner bells outside of The Great Valley.

He looked back to check on Littlefoot and Cera.

"What?" asked Cera.

"Oh, nothin'," Skip answered. "Just making sure you're still with us."

That statement felt ... weird. Honestly, he was expecting the most noise from those two. Littlefoot was quite massive and Cera had a tendency to stomp for stomping's sake. Sometimes he wondered if she liked feeling the ground shake beneath her feet as she got bigger, but out here? Littlefoot and Cera were like ghosts. He couldn't hear them. He could hardly feel their footfalls unless they were a few steps away. The way they moved ... the way their eyes subtly hunted their surroundings for threats. They weren't acting like leafeaters.

They were acting like sharpteeth.

Skip shook unsettling nature of that thought from his head. Come to think of it, that only made sense. They were trained to fight sharpteeth. Matching wits with a sharptooth meant thinking like a sharptooth to some degree.

Still ... it was creepy.

Wanting to move on from the thought (and kicking himself for being so easily perturbed), Skip decided to elaborate on the rich history of Red Claw. "The big guy prefers to avoid herds, but half the far walkers who travel alone run into him. Few live to tell the tale. It's like he's everywhere. His territory encircles the entire valley. Not the part at the edge of The Big Water, though. Those tiny arms ain't much good for swimming."

Littlefoot raised an eyebrow. "But the valley's huge."

"He, Screech and Thud patrol around it regularly," Skip went on. "Can't figure out how he always knows where to hunt, though."

Littlefoot looked up at a flying nibbler in the canopy. If he hadn't kept his eyes peeled for sharpteeth, he probably wouldn't have noticed it. Upon leaving the valley, he had spotted two grooming each other. One flew off as they drew near. The other one? He was pretty sure the nibbler above them was the same one. He recognised the white speckles on its dark fur.

The nibbler blinked at him before setting its eyes on a grasshopper. The insect caught wind of its would-be hunter and took flight, chased by the flyer.

Cera followed his gaze and smirked. "First the Cornerstones. Then the flying nibblers? Is there anything you're not scared of these days?"

"I'm not scared of the nibblers ... yet," Littlefoot answered. "Although I wonder why they behave differently outside The Great Valley."

Cera shrugged. "They eat dead dinosaurs instead of bugs out here, but I don't see the big deal. Who knows why critters behave the way they do?"

Littlefoot cast the canopy another glance. "They're not just critters. They're little sharpteeth, and what I do know is that most sharpteeth are as smart as we are. They're even smarter in some ways."

Cera huffed. "Yeah, so I've heard."

"I mean, not in all ways, but you gotta admit they're smart when it comes to hunting and fighting," Littlefoot went on. "Take Chomper for example-"

Cera rolled her eyes. "Don't remind me. When we're training, he just naturally knows how to think on his feet."

"Yeah, and and he's one of the nice ones!" Littlefoot added.

"Try the only nice one," the threehorn corrected.

Though she had no way of confirming that statement, Cera was feeling a tad disagreeable. She still didn't like the idea of a creature having sharper teeth and a sharper mind than she did.

"If they're so smart, why do we even bother training to outwit them?" she pressed.

"We've outsmarted them before. It's not impossible," Littlefoot parried. "My point is we shouldn't underestimate them."

"Eh, I guess you have a point," Cera conceded halfheartedly. "After all, they've got to at least be smart enough to pick their battles and win regularly ... otherwise, they wouldn't eat." She shook her head in disgust before shifting the subject. "But flying nibblers are barely even sharpteeth. Chomper says they can't speak his language. They're just ... tiny things, like buzzers."

Littlefoot checked the canopy one last time. "I dunno. Maybe that's what they want us to ... I dunno."

Cera gave a slow nod as though she were speaking to a conspiracy theorist oozing paranoia.

Littlefoot sighed. "Nevermind. Let's just ..."

She caught him freeze for a nigh imperceptible moment as his eyes flicked to the bushes.

"What?" asked the threehorn.

"Act casual," Littlefoot instructed.

He sounded normal enough, but the subtle quaver in his voice was not lost on her.

"Huddle up, guys," the longneck instructed.

Catching his drift, Cera sauntered to the opposite side of her friends, managing to keep the tension in her muscles at a minimum. They'd practised this.

"Okay ..." agreed Ducky, confused by the way Cera gently herded her closer to the others. "Is something wrong?"

Littlefoot smiled down at her. "Stay calm. Cera and I will-"

A fast biter exploded from the bushes, brandishing teeth and talons.

Screech.

With the exception of Cera and Littlefoot, the leafeaters froze.

*( ( KRA-KOOOM! ) )*



A distance away, Chomper raised his head, recognising the boom and charging towards it with urgency.



Two fast runners proudly smiled down at their daughter, who had been floored by her mother's swing of a tail.

"Good job, my daughter, good job!" her father commended.

"Yes," her mother agreed. "Although you'd be much harder to knock down as quickly if you moved quickly enough to not be knocked down."

Ruby rolled onto her feet. "Yeah. I've lost some speed, living in the valley. It's a good thing you guys are here to help me find it again."

"You're getting faster," her father stated. "And you'll only keep getting faster if we keep this up on your visits. Let's try again."

Suddenly, the thunder crack met their ears.

Ruby squinted in thought. That noise was somewhat familiar, although it was hard to tell with the way it bounced across the cliffs.

"Sounds like someone's facing a sharptooth," Ruby's mother commented.

Her siblings stared at the landscape beneath the ledge of their cave under Hanging Rock. Their parents joined them, following their gaze to spot trees violently shaken as a massive, unseen form barrelled beneath them.

"That 'someone' is not facing Red Claw, but they will face him when he gets there," her father declared.

Her mother turned her eyes to the sky. "And that brave, crazy flyer's heading where Red Claw's heading again. Ruby! Where are you going?"

The pink fast runner didn't even chance stopping as she bolted down the pathway. "I just realised! That thunder sounds familiar, 'cause I'm familiar with the one who makes it!"

Her parents exchanged glances before her father nudged her mother.

"Take care of the children, Cerise," he requested. "I'll be back."

She returned the nudge. "Stay safe, Cerulean, just as I know Ruby will be safe with you."

Parting with a smile, Ruby's father dashed after her.



It was Screech's turn to freeze.

Cera smirked. Most of her friends were stunned by the ear-pounding sound. It was like thunder. They were sure it was thunder. It took a moment for them to spot Littlefoot's tail drawing back after doing its work. Eyes popped. They had heard grownups do it on occasion. They had heard Littlefoot practising it at a distance, but never this close. Never had they thought that Littlefoot's tail could crack the thunder of a longneck twice his size. Since the beginning, training had been Littlefoot and Cera's 'thing'. Sometimes the others felt as though the two were part of an exclusive club. Training seemed to have its place in a vacuum outside their friendship, but when Littlefoot shattered the air with his tail?

Things were starting to get real.

With Littlefoot and Cera guarding them on either side, the leafeaters' spirits found cause for confidence.

"Screech is alone! He is, he is!" Ducky cheered.

"And Cera and Littlefoot are bigger than he is!" added Petrie. "Teach 'im a lesson, guys!"

Meanwhile, Cera frowned. Screech and Thud always hunted as a pair.

Littlefoot scanned the bushes. Screech tugged at his attention with a snarl, but Littlefoot tried not to focus on him alone. Clever boy, trying to keep all eyes on him.

Even as the others were still speaking, Littlefoot gave the ground a light stomp. When Cera stomped back in response, he discretely pattered the soil with his feet. It looked like fidgeting, but she read his Earth Whisper loud and clear.

( ( Thud is here ) )

Cera replied with an Earth Whisper of her own.

( ( I figured ) )

"Eyes peeled, everyone," Littlefoot warned.

Screech tilted his head at the longneck, clicking the gravel with his sickle-shaped claw. He knew these youngsters. They'd slipped through his claws on many occasions. Now that they were bigger and presumably less 'slippery', he was looking forward to using his wits to take down such sizeable prey ... but something wasn't right. Looking into the longneck's intense, intelligent eyes, he saw that they now had something in common.

A mind with sharp teeth.

Littlefoot opened his mouth to speak sharptooth when Screech released a deafening cry.

Skip shuddered. "He's calling Red Claw!"

The fast biter flicked his gaze at the bushes to his right. Littlefoot followed his gaze. Thud was hiding there? Bad move, giving away his partner's position.

"Watch the bushes on your right," Littlefoot cautioned Cera.

Screech chittered a command before charging. It was a trick!

"Your left! Your left!" Littlefoot corrected.

At the side of her eye, Cera saw the blur. She whipped around, startling Thud with her speed. He scarcely managed to dodge the horns before darting past her. She wasn't the target? Then who-?

"LITTLEFOOT!" Cera called.

The longneck spotted the shadow of the fast biter pouncing from behind him. It made perfect sense. His long neck was more fragile than Cera's. Big as he was, he seemed the easiest, most rewarding target of the two.

They couldn't be more wrong.

Littlefoot swiftly swayed into a dodge. Thud's claws glanced off his back. This longneck was fast!

Screech scrambled out of the way as his partner came crashing down.

Thud was quick to his feet, only to find the longneck's powerful tail wrapped around him. He bit and scratched as best he could. Though flexible, a longneck's tail was built for battle, the tip being one of the hardest parts of their bodies. Though that was always the case, something wasn't right. Never had a longneck's tail so thoroughly withstood his teeth and claws.

Not since The Lone Dinosaur.

Littlefoot could practically see the deadly thoughts racing through Screech's mind as the predator tried to hatch a plan. The fast biters' met eyes in a moment of non-verbal agreement. Without warning, Screech released a heartfelt croon of concern for his friend, just loud enough to be heard.

Thud crooned back, assuring Screech that he was fine.

Cera raised an eyebrow. She'd seen those two in danger before. It brought out fear or anger. It never made them release borderline cute sounds designed to tug at the heartstrings. She huffed. Her heartstrings would remain rigid, thank you very much. However, she caught Littlefoot soften a nuance. Oh please! Was he actually falling for this? ... Maybe that was the point.

Littlefoot cleared his throat. Okay, time for the secret weapon. He rumbled and cooed in the sharptooth tongue, assuring Screech that the fast biter didn't need to save his friend. They could all be friends.

Cera almost laughed. She would bet tree sweets that Screech never, in his wildest sleep stories, had expected a leafeater to speak his language. The look on his face was priceless! If he'd let his jaw hang much longer, something would crawl in there an have babies! She didn't like the way his expression morphed into intent, contemplative silence, though. She couldn't tell if he was considering Littlefoot's offer, or simply rethinking his battle plan.

Screech gave an incensed glare as he growled in accusation: If they wanted to be 'friends', why were they trespassing on Red Claw's territory?

The longneck swallowed. This was his first conversation with a sharptooth, notwithstanding Chomper. Exciting as it was, he had to tread carefully.

Littlefoot undulated his response. Red Claw's territory encircled the entire valley, except for the part that touched The Big Water. How were they supposed to come and go without trespassing?

Screech thought for a moment before throbbing that the longneck had a point. Some negotiation was in order.

Littlefoot couldn't believe it! They were making progress!

Screech glanced among the group, briefly scowling at the fuzzy creature who had eluded their jaws even more so than The Gang of Seven. It almost looked like a quick head count. He remarked that the young sharptooth was missing. Were they looking for their friend?

The longneck hesitated. He knew sharpteeth were smart, but seeing Screech make such a rapid deduction was rather unsettling.

Littlefoot grunted an affirmative.

Thud informed him that they had seen a young sharptooth not long ago: a distance off, but in retrospect he was quite sure it was their sharptooth. He'd spoken with that youngster in the past. He was a good kid. Thud knew where he was heading, and agreed to help them find him, as long as the longneck released him.

Littlefoot carefully considered that. He replied that they already had a guide. The fast biters could point them in the right direction, but he would only release Thud when they called off Red Claw.

Screech's gaze hardened. Nonetheless, he lifted his head and released a long-distance roar before demanding they release Thud.

Littlefoot remarked that he understood Screech's first roar. The biter had addressed Red Claw by name, telling him exactly where they were. Littlefoot did not recognise the second call. Had Screech actually called off Red Claw, or just pretended to do so?

The fast biter gave an indignant snarl before explaining that some of their calls were personal, and would not be understood by other sharpteeth. Besides, why would he endanger his best friend with a fake call?

Thud released a sudden cry, claiming that Littlefoot was crushing him. The longneck insisted that he was not. Thud only squealed all the louder, making it harder for Littlefoot to hear his own thoughts, much less voice them. Suddenly, Thud's squealing ceased.

Littlefoot looked back to see Cera with her horn inches from the sharptooth's neck.

She smiled brightly. "Excuse me. Hi, Thud. I'm Cera. Now shut. Up."

No translation necessary.

Screech fumed an accusation: They were LIARS! They cared NOTHING about friendship! If they did, they would stop hurting his best friend and let him GO!

Littlefoot's gaze snapped to his feet. If not for his Earth Whisper training, he might not have noticed the tremors rippling through the ground. They were subtle, but they were unmistakably getting bigger.

Clearly Skip picked up the same thing. "R-Red Claw's coming! He's coming FAST!"

Littlefoot growled at the fast biters: This conversation was was over! Screech hadn't called off Red Claw! He was just buying time!

Screech growled back, arguing that this was Red Claw they were talking about! There was no 'calling him off', but their alpha would have mercy if the leafeaters would just calm down and-!

The longneck cut him off with a snarl. No! They would be leaving now! They would release Thud later, and Screech had better not follow, otherwise Thud was history!

Screech's eyes fluttered. Had that leafeater just snarled at him? Like an actual sharptooth? Growls were one thing, but this was bizarre, unnerving and altogether unacceptable! He began to protest, but Littlefoot chased him off with a swing of his giant tail regardless of its flailing captive, Thud. He had no intention of ending Thud, but he was betting that Screech didn't know that.

"Skip! Lead the way!" Littlefoot commanded. "We're not leaving Chomper out here! How fast can you track?"

"As fast as I need to!" Skip assured, putting his speed to good use as he darted ahead of them.

"Cera! Clear a path behind Skip!" Littlefoot went on.

The threehorn was already charging behind the fuzzy. "Way ahead of you!"

There was nothing quite like watching a full-grown threehorn tearing through the jungle. Cera wasn't fully grown, but she was close enough and already stronger and faster than most of the adults. Ducky, Petrie and Spike were briefly stunned by the sight as Cera expertly uprooted trees, splintered trunks, flattened bushes, knocked aside boulders and smashed those that refused to cooperate.

"Have you ... done this before?" asked Ducky.

"We've practiced," Littlefoot replied. "Petrie, we need eyes in the sky! If you see Chomper or Red Claw, tell us! Everyone, MOVE!"

Jarred by the urgency in his voice, Petrie flapped above the trees. Ducky and Spike rushed after Cera and Littlefoot followed, guarding the rear.

"I think I know where Chomper's headin'!" Skip called back as he hurried to stay ahead of a rampaging Cera. "There's a shortcut we could use to shake Red Claw, but ... uh oh ..."

"I see Red Claw!" Petrie interrupted from above.

"That shortcut: take us there!" Littlefoot urged.

"Ya know the advantage you had when you were little?" asked Skip. "You were little! You could hide and fit places the sharpteeth couldn't! Now, even your scents are bigger! We can't shake 'em!"

Cera smashed through a boulder and they began to rush through a narrow gap between two cliffs.

"Careful! It's unstable!" Skip warned.

Littlefoot looked back and managed to spot Screech among the bushes. Either the fast biter didn't care enough about Thud, simply didn't believe Littlefoot's threat, or both.

The longneck rose to his hind legs as high as he could to survey their surroundings before spotting a small lake. He knew he'd smelled water, and he'd heard fast biters could swim.

"How deep is that water hole?" asked Littlefoot.

Skip briefly looked back, taking account of the direction in which Littlefoot was staring. "Very deep! Why?"

The answer came when Littlefoot tossed a shrieking Thud across the trees, right into the water, not that anyone could hear the splash from there.

Skip laughed, having seen what happened with another backwards glance.

The longneck pointedly locked eyes with Screech. The fast biter's teeth were gnashed, steam practically pouring from his nostrils. Still, he refused to go and check on his 'best friend'.

Littlefoot spoke to Screech in a snarl. He knew their ruse! If they didn't care enough about each other, they definitely didn't care to be friends with leafeaters!

With that, Littlefoot charged between the cliffs. He saw Screech hurrying after him. Not for long. Slamming his shoulder into an incline, he sent a landslide of boulders crashing between the leafeaters and fast biter.

Screech skidded to a stop, roaring after the infuriatingly elusive prey before heeding the call of a much larger sharptooth.

...

Once they'd reached a more spacious region of the canyon, Littlefoot pounded ahead of Ducky and Spike. They'd think the longneck and threehorn had surprised them enough for one adventure, but Littlefoot and Cera found ways to keep their friends in a constant state of 'whoa!' Seeing Littlefoot train for speed was one thing. Having him easily overtake both Spike and Ducky, sprinting at their fastest, was another story.

With several tons of rocks behind them, Littlefoot figured he was more useful at the front than the back, using his height to spot any unwelcome surprises they may run into. Of course, that was Petrie's job, but an extra pair of eyes and a good, strong tail whack would always come in handy.

"Petrie! Where's Red Claw?" asked Littlefoot.

"I don't see him!" the flyer announced. "Not sure where he went!"

That should have been good news, but Littlefoot didn't like it. He would have been more comfortable knowing their enemy's movements.

His eyes popped. He'd spotted a shadow cast from beyond the next turn. It was faint, due to the thin layer of cloud obscuring The Bright Circle at that time. However, he recognised the form, even the jaws spreading in anticipation. If not for his high vantage point, he wouldn't have seen it.

"Everyone, to your right! NOW!" the longneck commanded.

The others scrambled away from the corner.

Sensing that his prey was onto him, the sharptooth charged from his hiding place and lunged towards Ducky. A powerful tail wrapped around his jaws, clamping them shut before shoving him away from the swimmer.

The sharptooth growled, though somewhat surprised to find his opponent a teenage longneck who still had a fair amount of growing to do. This sharptooth had felled longnecks that size. They were bigger than he was, but all it took was a little cunning and a deadly bite. None had ever caught him mid-pounce, though. He was sure it had been an adult, considering the powerful grip.

Littlefoot figured this sharptooth had slipped past Petrie on account of his stone-coloured scales blending into the canyon.

"You're not Red Claw," he thought aloud, before growling a warning not to follow them, or else.

The sharptooth's face contorted from surprise to disgust and fury. Someone had taught this leafeater to speak?! Abominable!

He threw himself at the longneck.

Littlefoot turned as though to run, only to hammer the sharptooth with a blow of his tail. Practically flying back, the predator smashed into the canyon wall and down came another avalanche. The longneck took off, scarcely escaping the the rocks before they buried the sharptooth.

Exiting the canyon, the dinosaurs found themselves in a much more spacious stretch laden with palm trees. No longer needing to clear a path, Cera surged to full speed, nearly trampling Skip and leaving the others in the dust.

"Cera! You're going too fast!" Littlefoot warned, accelerating to catch up with her.

"Sorry!" she apologised, slowing.

The Earth was shaking.

Sure, four running dinosaurs had a tendency to make it do that, but this was different. Something big was behind them. Even before hearing the ear-splitting roar, they all knew.

That was Red Claw.

"I see him! I SEE HIM!" Petrie shrieked.

Littlefoot looked back to witness the giant sharptooth storming towards them, with Screech and a very wet Thud laced with pond scum racing alongside him. Maybe he and Cera could outrun them, but the others? They were tired. Their speed was already dropping.

"Guess it's on me!" Cera declared with a cocky grin. "Skip, get the others out of here! Littlefoot, keep Screech and Thud from following them! I'll take Red Claw!"

Littlefoot almost choked on his shock. "WHAT?!"

"Your tail's long and fast: better for handling fast biters!" Cera quickly explained, lifting her horns with what they interpreted as pride. "I can counter Red Claw's teeth with the girls! Chomper taught me everything I need to know! Besides, you've still got more growing to do than I do!"

"But ... we wanna ... help!" Ducky panted.

"You're exhausted and you can't fight," Cera snapped. "Do not make me tell you again!"

The swimmer winced.

"But he's Red Claw!" Littlefoot argued. "You can't-!"

Cera rolled her eyes. Did she have to spell it out for him?

Littlefoot's argument was cut short when Cera gave him a glimpse of her inner self. Her legs briefly quavered. Her grin flickered. Fear flashed fleetingly in her eyes. She knew her chances. She would fight with everything she had, but she didn't need to 'take down' Red Claw. She only needed to take him on until her friends got to safety.

Cera's confident grin returned with a vengeance. "Tell Daddy I went out like burning mountain!"

The threehorn skidded into a turn, allowing the others to pass before raging towards Red Claw. Littlefoot followed, his attention on the fast biters.

"Come at me, PINK EYE!" Cera taunted.

Of course, her trash talk meant nothing to sharpteeth, but Cera had one trick up her sleeve. She remembered that forbidden combination of sounds Chomper had told Littlefoot never to say to a sharptooth. She didn't know what it meant, but she'd privately practiced it for years, waiting for the perfect moment.

The moment had come.

Littlefoot's jaw went loose as Cera growled the granddaddy of all 'no no'es in the sharptooth language. Having learnt much more more about the sharptooth tongue since he had first heard it, he'd figured out what that particular noise meant ... in every ... revolting ... detail ...

Cera grinned all the more. Doc had once explained why sharpteeth roared. It was a psychological attack. They did it to stun their prey with sheer terror. Red Claw, Screech and Thud didn't look 'scared', but they immediately slowed to a stop as they stared at the threehorn in abject shock - definitely stunned.

She laughed. This was better than a roar!



You may notice that Petrie's grammar has improved. That's simply a matter of age, and it seemed logical to me given that none of the older flyers appear to speak the way he did as a kid.

There's a 'Dinotopia: Quest for The Ruby Sunstone' reference in this chapter, as well as a 'Jurassic Park' one. Think you can identify it?

Thanks again for reading!

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Seeing how The Mighty Red Claw already got TWO short fanfics starring him in showcase thread during his showcase while others got none makes me rethink who is the most popular, lovelable and famous characters...





...or rather, infamous. XD


Hmm ... good point.  If it occurred to me (provided I had written more of the story at the time) I would have shared a clip about Pterano when he was featured.  His character arc took a turn for the epic during his exile in 'War Before Time: Mentors of Yesteryears'.

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LBT Fanart / Re: War Before Time - Concept Art
« on: October 18, 2020, 06:48:46 PM »
WOW!! :Mo This is such a unique and well done character design--I hardly ever see Amargasaurus get any attention, but they're such a cool species! I really hope we'll see more art from you in the future!

Thanks so much!! :D  I intend to release more art at some point, roping in The Gang of Five and designs for the Far Beyonders (beings from Beyond the Mysterious Beyond).  Might submit a comic featuring Dagara in the near future.  In the meantime, I'd appreciate your take on her story.  Though she ultimately meets the gang in future instalments, I'd like to know if the OC-driven tale is effective.  You can find it at https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13556382/1/Because-You-re-a-Sharpneck-A-War-Before-Time-Oneshot

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LBT Fanart / Re: War Before Time - Concept Art
« on: October 12, 2020, 02:20:35 AM »
Very cool Mr E! I'm not much into OCs personally but this one is really unique. I like the flowing pattern on the back!

Thank you  :)!  Some of her secondary colour distribution was initially more like Littlefoot's, but I decided to spice it up a bit.  I'd love to see people use the amargasaurus species more in fiction.  Her dynamic with Littlefoot will hopefully be interesting.

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LBT Fanart / Re: War Before Time - Concept Art
« on: October 12, 2020, 02:06:35 AM »
Ah, there we go. Looks great. :D

Wonderful, and thanks!

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