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The Written Word / My latest written works
« on: July 19, 2014, 11:21:20 PM »
I haven't been on in for ever. I want to share my work and get feedback on it.
A short poem called I Never Thought I'd Get Over You.
I'm looking up at the sky, thinking about our memories--
And all the good times, and the bad; I remember...
When I really blew it hard to the core, beyond recover
After that I never saw you ever again.
I have a longer version of this poem but i want to share something short and sweet of this version.
And here is a spiritual one called Our Father In Heaven
óWe ask you to cleanse us. Give us new hearts and minds. Let us be dead to sin.
Let us grow like plants and you are our gardener who gives us water every day for
we can grow. We need the soil for we can grow. You found us; we were once lost
seeds. Seeds just lying there in the sand exposed to the fiery sun. No one bothered
to plant us, and they didn't even care; they just left us in the dust, but you gave us
your son and he saved us with his blood. He found the seeds that no one believed
in. They thought that we would never grow; but when Christ planted us and gave
us water day…by…day our stems grew taller from the ground and we began to grow.
Everyone is now starting to see. All this time we were meant to succeed! To carry
out your will all throughout the world.
Another short one wrote this when i was in eighth grade and i modified it about few year ago. I just added punctuation to it that's all. It's called My Soul
Deep
So Deep…
Behold a spirit
Shinning bright within
Reaching the heavens for best judgment
To either go to this place
óor the other.
A short poem called I Never Thought I'd Get Over You.
I'm looking up at the sky, thinking about our memories--
And all the good times, and the bad; I remember...
When I really blew it hard to the core, beyond recover
After that I never saw you ever again.
I have a longer version of this poem but i want to share something short and sweet of this version.
And here is a spiritual one called Our Father In Heaven
óWe ask you to cleanse us. Give us new hearts and minds. Let us be dead to sin.
Let us grow like plants and you are our gardener who gives us water every day for
we can grow. We need the soil for we can grow. You found us; we were once lost
seeds. Seeds just lying there in the sand exposed to the fiery sun. No one bothered
to plant us, and they didn't even care; they just left us in the dust, but you gave us
your son and he saved us with his blood. He found the seeds that no one believed
in. They thought that we would never grow; but when Christ planted us and gave
us water day…by…day our stems grew taller from the ground and we began to grow.
Everyone is now starting to see. All this time we were meant to succeed! To carry
out your will all throughout the world.
Another short one wrote this when i was in eighth grade and i modified it about few year ago. I just added punctuation to it that's all. It's called My Soul
Deep
So Deep…
Behold a spirit
Shinning bright within
Reaching the heavens for best judgment
To either go to this place
óor the other.