a character i've created is based on james bond. my version of bond is a raptor. he is in my current story. he has no human technology in my current story.
they are very realistic they are better than the movies. the movies are fun to watch most of them have a pg rating only 2 have a pg-13 rating those ones are licence to kill and the world is not enough. i did not really like on her majesty's seceret service. the ending is very sad
i'll post a full chapter of my story tommorrow. i've gotta work on homework now later! The story i'm working on now has a few references to my next story.
i for one beleive i have done a very good job on my fanfic. i've been getting writers block from all writing i've been doing in school. i would like some reviews for this bit of my story.
(ok here is what i have done with chapter 6 of my story.)
Hey littlefoot! Yea ali? What are you doing? Thinking ali. What are you thinking about? Nothing. I think we'll see cera soon. What makes you say that? I just have a feeling we will. My mom gets those feelings sometimes. What's that over there? Over where littlefoot? Just ahead of us. The large flyer and rinkus fly overhead. What was that all about? i don't know ali. we see another flyer going after rinkus pteranno flies overhead. Pteranno flies after the other two fliers and manages to knock rinkus out of the sky. They struggle on the ground for a moment the other flyer lands to help pteranno. They manage to knock rinkus out. Pteranno: "well that was easy." Large flyer: "yep serria went after vond after he jumped off my back with a young threehorn clinnging to his tail." Pteranno: "do you know what happened after that?" large flyer: "No because i was trying to out fly rinkus." Oh. Littlefoot: "so it's been five cold times already?" Pteranno looks around to see ali and littlefoot standing there. "I guess it has liittlefoot." Ali: "littlefoot who is this?" Pteranno: "i was just about to ask the same thing." Littlefoot: "Ali this is petrie's uncle pteranno." "Pteranno this is my friend ali." "It is nice to meet you pteranno." "It is nice to meet you ali."
(so what do you think?) (i'm working on my story right now.) (I'm thinking of ideas for my story.)