The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: Nahla on March 13, 2013, 02:15:55 AM

Title: Joined At The Heart
Post by: Nahla on March 13, 2013, 02:15:55 AM
But this time it a love poem....naw


Littlefoot/Nahla (OC) romance thingy.


Underneath the starry sky,
Two lovers watch the world go by,
Her eyes blue as day.
Her fathers orders she won't obey.
"Stay away" Hades said.
"If I see you's your both dead".
But their love knows no bounds.
Each other their glad they found.
His friends don't understand.
"Love a Shadowlander? Your crazy man!".
They both still remember that day.
When they both took each others breath away.
Though she was scarred,he still believed.
She was the definition of beauty.
After the war which they both nearly died.
They vowed to stay by each others sides.
Littlefoot and Nahla,odd but true.
They look at at each other and whisper "I love you"
Together,their bond grows strong.
They promise they'll always be one.
Even if Hades tries to break them apart.
They know they'll always be joined at the heart.






My first love poem...ever in my life yay.
Title: Joined At The Heart
Post by: Mr Wonk on March 13, 2013, 07:35:24 AM
I love the ending "Even if Hades tries to break them apart. They know they'll always be joined at the heart" I think this is the first love poem I've ever read and enjoyed and it was great. Well done again Nahla. Do you have anymore poems to be posted?
Title: Joined At The Heart
Post by: Ducky123 on March 13, 2013, 08:11:07 AM
again WELL DONE!!!
like Mr.Wonk said, the end is amazing  :yes
Title: Joined At The Heart
Post by: StrutEggStealer on March 13, 2013, 11:01:50 AM
Aw, you really have a knack for poetry, Nahla... I cannot wait for the rest of the story now