The Gang of Five

Beyond the Mysterious Beyond => The Arts => The Written Word => Topic started by: Waluigifan on December 15, 2010, 02:10:42 PM

Title: Lyric Correction
Post by: Waluigifan on December 15, 2010, 02:10:42 PM

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Title: Lyric Correction
Post by: Vilstrup on December 16, 2010, 07:52:10 AM

Now, I'm not an English Native Speakers, so... don't believe in everything I say  :p , but anyway, that doesn't stop me from taking a look, and see if I can't find anything.

And did I find anything... one thing which I would change, but since I don't know the music I can't say for sure... other than that, I didn't see any problems. (The change is at the bottom of the lyrics)

Edited - Vilstrup (http://www.sendspace.com/file/jq6spz)

As for the lyrics... they made pretty good sense to me, and I like the theme of the song.

Title: Lyric Correction
Post by: Waluigifan on December 16, 2010, 08:42:01 AM

Wow, thank you! :D

I see that I mixed up "there" and "where" at the end.

Thank you very much, I'm glad that someone helped me out! Your user name "Vilstrup" will be mentioned in the credits (on the album cover)! :)

Title: Lyric Correction
Post by: Vilstrup on December 16, 2010, 11:10:46 AM

Always happy to help, but I would appriciate it if you kept my name out of the credits, please  ;)