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The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: Threehorn on January 11, 2005, 09:28:58 AM

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Threehorn on January 11, 2005, 09:28:58 AM

this is a short fic I did for fun.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2214891/1/ (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2214891/1/)

this is the link to it on fanfiction.net

Reviews are welcomed on that site.

-Threehorn

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Petrie on January 11, 2005, 05:36:01 PM

I was certainly surprised with the ending I will say that. ;)  You fooled me.

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Threehorn on January 14, 2005, 04:48:22 PM

glad you like it, wonder who else will read it.

-Threehorn

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Malte279 on January 18, 2005, 06:22:31 AM

I too was surprised at the ending, but I sure prefer your version from the idea of a knock on the head turning people friendly all of a sudden.

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What can I say Threehorns love a challenge, specially one that I would find hard to do, but you Cera you have friends that show you the meaning of caring which I never had when I was your age.

The challange is certainly a good explanation for the reaction of Cera's father. Still he does act and talk in somewhat uncustomarry manner. Maybe it would have been a good idea to let somebody make some witty remark that almost lets Cera's father errupt the way we are accustomed to. One logical flaw is the question how Cera's father and Littlefoot's grandpa could've planned this. It would be very difficult to make sure that Cera's father is hit by a rock hurled by the children. Maybe their plan was more basical and it was the coincidence that created such a good occasion.

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: RFZT on January 26, 2009, 08:00:44 PM

Looks like I'm bumping this up from the last page.

I found that a nice story. The writing was clear enough so that you could understand and visualize the story, without being so descriptive it's practically a college-level fanfic. I thought the simpler style worked for a fanfic with a concept like yours. I thought that made the story...sweeter.

So, Topsy CAN be nice! I was fooled. I seriously thought he was affected by getting struck, but it turns out a lot different. I suppose it worked though...I was doubtful that one of the kids could hit his head that hard! Now that I think about it, this was my favorite passage from the story:


"Mr Threehorn, Cera’s father was eating some leafs when all the sudden the rock stuck him on the head very hard indeed. Mr Threehorn stumbled and collapsed on the ground blacking out.

“Wow that must have been one knock on the head to make your dad collapse” Littlefoot said with some surprise in his force."

 :lol  :lol  :lol

Well, that was a sweet little story. I enjoyed reading it.

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Explorer on January 26, 2009, 08:13:43 PM

This is quite a necro-post, but I've got to say, smooth going! Great short story! - Yeah, I only got to read this know <.<.

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Chiletrek on January 27, 2009, 02:00:31 AM

Hello:
 That was very fun to read. And I like how it had a good twist :DD .

Title: The Happy Threehorn
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on January 27, 2009, 02:07:59 AM

Hehe, I read this a couple of years ago when I found FF.net and I really enjoyed it :yes  ;)!