I'm writting a sequel to my fanfiction, Adder's Story
Adder's Story. The name of the story was thought of by
Noratcat. The sequel will focus more on Lady Blue, Charmer, Fox, Vixen, Whisper, Plucky and Friendly than Adder and Sinuous, who will still appear in it, but not every chapter like the first story. If you haven't read the first one, click the link to it, and read the first twenty six chapters before reading this one. To comment on the story, you'll have to have a fanfiction.net account, I've blocked people without accounts from commenting, due to several rude comments, anyway here's the first chapter of Elder's Lead.
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Chapter 1: A New Life and Fresh Start...Lady Blue walks up to fox, "Fox. Tell me this. Why did you eat my steak? I saved that for me and Charmer!"
Fox looks at her belly, "I highly doubt you need any more"
She gasps, "Excuse! I worked off some weight killing rats!"
He laughs, "Barely Enough to Notice much change."
"Did you come just to make fun of me?"
He laughs again, "No, actually. I wanted to tell you that Roamer and Rusty have spoken their first words."
"Really? What were they?"
He responds, "Roamer's was: Fat and Rusty's was: Blue Fox."
He starts laughing uncontrollably, and she says, "I knew it! That's was the only reason that you came here!"
"Okay, it was. I'm surprised that you didn't eat all the steaks, you did eat more the Weasel. When you came back, I thought that you were expecting another litter."
"What!"
He responds, "Calm down Lady Blue. I was joking."
She growls, "You'd better be."
Meanwhile...Charmer says, "Yes... those are my kids. You've learned to speak, say it again."
Roamer says, "Mommy!"
Then Rusty runs up, "Mommy!"
She sighs, "I wish Ranger and Lady Blue were hear to see this. Your first words."
She hears a voice, Remember what I told you Charmer. I always will be, I know that are kids are talking, and I'm very proud of them. To bad they'll never get to know me, you and mother are the only ones that can hear me. But the others could too, if they would accept that I always watching over you, remember when you saw the cloud of me? That's when you and mother finally accepted it, but the others didn't.
She says to herself, "I know Ranger. I miss you though, why didn't you want until your mother and Fox got back to the nest? You think could have gone looking for food together."
You were so hungry, they would have been gone forever. I had to get you food, I never thought the rats would get me. I thought I could handle them just fine. I'm sorry, I was just stupid to not listen to you.
She responds, "Don't blame yourself Ranger. You couldn't have know they were going to swarm you, despite Adder's warning."
I should have listened to you though. I don't blame myself, but I didn't get time to know my kids, and they never got to know me at all.
She sighs, "I know, but its not your fault you didn't heed her warning. You couldn't have known that your premonition and her warning were going to happen."
I know. You need to sleep Charmer, I'll talk to you later. I love you.
She lays down, her cubs lay up against and they cuddle against her cheek. "Get some sleep kids."
She closes her eyes and starts snoring quitely. Suddenly, a see-through Blue Fox appears next to her and whispers, Goodnight my love and kids. I talk to you tommorow morning.
The next day...Charmer quickly runs up to Lady Blue, "I've got something to tell you. Ranger came into my cave last night and spoke to me. I didn't see him, but I knew his voice."
She gasps, "Are you? You could have been hearing things."
"I'm positive. I heard his voice once a few days ago, and when Fox stepped down from being leader. He must be watching over us, like he said he would when he died."
She suddenly says, "You might be right, I remember him saying the same thing to me once shortly after your kids were born. He said he'd always be with us no matter what."
She responds, "Also, I didn't get cold once all last night, and my kids didn't cry or even make a single whimper all night either."
Fox walks up, "What's going on Charmer?"
"Nothing, I was just telling Lady Blue that Ranger came and talked to me somehow last night. I slept very good, and so did the kids last night, we didn't wake up once last night."
He asks, "How can you be sure that it was Ranger, you might have..."
Lady Blue cuts him off, "I said the same thing, she said she was positive that she wasn't hearing things."
Meanwhile...Sinuous wakes up, and sees himself staring right at Weasel, "Ahhhhhhhhhh!"
Adder wakes up, "What issssssssss it?!"
Sinuous responds, "Nothing, itsssss jusssssssst Weassssel. Wait... why were you even in our nest anyway? You and Measly found your own anyway."
She laughs, "Whisper wanted me to get you two, she has something to tell you."
They come out of the burrow, and Whisper stops them, "Adder, Sinuous, have you see Friendly? He never came home last night, I'm afraid that he is lost somewhere in the park."
Adder yawns, "No, sssssssssorry. I haven't ssssseen him ssssssince the meeting. Did you check Charmer or Plucky's nest? He said he was going to talk to a friend or something before he same to your nest."
Sinuous corrects her, "No, he went to see Ranger's ssssssssissssster, something about letting her know about Ranger or something."
Whisper sighs in relief, "Oh that's good. I thought he was missing or left us."
Suddenly, Friendly walks up with Ranger's sister, and says, "I need to tell you all something, wait... where's Lady Blue and my father?"
A few minutes later...They all arrive at the park, and that's when Friendly says, "Not that my father, Lady Blue and Plucky are here, I need to tell all of you something. Ranger's sister is expecting my children, that's why I was gone for so long. I'm sorry if I worried any of you, did Sinuous tell you where I was aleast?"
Whisper responds, "Yes, but you should up before he could tell Fox and Vixen though."
Ranger's sister says, "I just hope that one of them looks like Ranger, but not close enough that we'll get them confused. I can't believe that rats over powered him, he seemed way to strong for them to do it."
Lady Blue says, "They went for his weak points when he was down, after tripping over a tree root."
"That's what Charmer told me after the meeting, anyway, I'm going to go sleep for a while."
Her and Friendly walk off, then Lady Blue says, "Well, I'm going to be a double grandmother, the step-mother of your daughter and son Fox."
He responds, "I know, I never thought that a Blue and Orange fox would be related by anything other than blood, except for our grandkids."
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Hope that whoever reads this enjoys it, and will comment on it. It will be less violent that the first by a long shot.
