I don't remember much about when I wrote the first story as it was almost four years ago but I do agree with the fifth chapter being rushed. I couldn't come up with anything truly interesting for the chapter except for Titus recieving his dragon name.
And yeah, I think transformation is pretty cool. Well except for the dirty stuff that is. I used to do TF stories but I stopped for a few reasons, one reason being that doing those stories eventually began to feel more like a job than a hobby and I wanted to focus more on developing my art. I do TF pictures from time to time.
I'm glad you liked the story. Like I was telling oogaboo, I'm currently rewriting the first story. The plot will be the same but the characters are going to have more personality, the chapters will be longer, etc. It's my hope that I'll be able to get the series published.