It's Pretty good maybe you should look at my story called Journey to a New World I think you'll like it after it's done so far Vonboy and I finished 3 chapters and I am working on chapter 4.

Okay, I was just confused on it; I may have mis read it. So anyway I am gonna work on chapter 4 and I'll PM it to you and you'll see if it needs to be fixed and needs a little detail. will ya do that?

Vonboy, It's getting good you added Odysseus getting more excited   . Anyway while you work on the complete Finale, will Odysseus appear in the great valley too? to be honest?

Okay    but I am so eager to know what is the Professor's real name. Now I am not saying this in a mean way I am just letting ya know.  

So Far so Good Vonboy. It's pretty good but the Professor wasn't in this chapter but I'm hoping that he will appear in the final.    

 Thank you Campion1   I want ya to know that there's more to come in this story and I'm working on it still. Plus, I am thinking about drawing illustrations to it.  

Hi, everyone Vonboy rewrote The Land Before Time Journey to a New world for me. I am working on chapter 2 re writes to make it understandable with a little help with Vonboy. cause he and I are working on this together.

   I hope you like this cause I sure do.  

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 THE LAND BEFORE TIME: JOURNEY TO A NEW WORLD


   My name is Alan Texan, and my story begins in the 21st century in Kansas City, Missouri. At The Great University at Rockgurst; me and my twin brother, Jay Texan, were working on a strange device in the labs of the University. We called it the Time Laser, and it was supposed to be a time travel device. We spent many months of research at the University, and many more long months of failure after failure. One time, I thought we almost had it. We tried putting rubies, sapphires, emeralds, ambers, diamonds, chromite, jades and quartz separately in the device, like a battery. At first, the device powered on and seemed to be working, but then our experiment blew up in our face, literally. We took out one lab of the University, and were almost kicked out for it. After another failure using Chromite and Jades, we were almost ready to give up.

We decided to try one last time. By combining a ruby, an amber, a sapphire, an emerald, pink quartz and a diamond all together, we created a new mineral. We tested this new mineral, and it was a success! We called this essential stone the Rainbow Stone, A multi-colored stone containing red, pink, yellow, white, green and blue. It was a beauty.
Me and my brother showed this new device to the U.S. Government, General Russell Young presiding. We told them how it worked, and they were very intrigued. The Government tried a test where they inserted the Rainbow Stone inside the Time Laser, and aimed the laser very carefully at a fossilized tyrannosaur skull. A bright light flashed the room, and the chairs of the Government Committee stared in amazement at the stop on the ground where the ancient skull used to be. My brother explained how the skull was still in the same spot it was at before, but over 100 million years in the past. There was a rousing round of applause from the Committee chairs.

In the Dinosaur world, a Fastrunner named Ruby, and the little T-rex she was protecting, Chomper, were exploring their home, the Secret Caverns. They were getting bored, and they were about to get back close to the entrance to get some sleep, when the tyrrannosaur skull appeared out of thin air on the rocky ground. Both of them were shocked.
The next morning, they told Littlefoot and the Gang about the mysterious skull, and they were in disbelief. Littlefoot brought it up at a meeting the grownups were having at the Great Circle. The dinosaurs did not know what to think of it. Some, like Littlefoot’s grandparents, Tria, and Mr. Thicknose, believed Littlefoot. Others, like Mr. Threehorn, Couldn't believe it. He said "Just sounds like a sleep story to me. There is no way something like that could have happened!"
Back in the 21st Century, Me and Jay were called to the White House for a special meeting with the higher ups in the Government. The President said that this time device was extremely dangerous in the hands of the public, and that it should be in their hands for the country's protection. He added "If news has gotten out about this, other countries will be on the hunt for this device, and there's no telling the damage that could be done if this device is to fall into the wrong hands."

Both of us were against this idea. I told them myself that we would keep the device under our protection. It was OUR creation, and no one else was going to tell us what to do with it.

Back in the Great Valley, Littlefoot and his friends began to check out the Tyrannosaur skull, which in the Dinosaur World was called a sharptooth skull. With the help of Mr. Clubtail, the Gang was able to be slowly and carefully get the skull out of the Secret Caverns, and into the Great Valley, where everyone could see it. This skull fascinated the Valley's inhabitants, since it was so different from any skull they ever saw before. It appeared to be made out of stone, and not out of bone. One of the grownups said "This isn't a real skull, is it?" Another replied "It must be. There’s no way a rock could look anything like that!"
Grandpa Longneck told Littlefoot and his friends to run along and find something to do while the grownups try to get to the bottom of this.

In the 21st century, me and Jay were at a hotel, at room 123, Having supper and organizing our clothes inside drawers. While organizing, Jay saw a green button on the side of the Time Laser. I never told Jay what this button was for, so I guess I can't blame him when he pressed it and made the Device disappear. I was still angry at him and tried to blame him for it anyway.
I explained to him afterword’s what the button was for. That button sends the Time Laser itself to the past. Then when someone presses the button, they will be teleported with the device back to the present. He asked me why I put a button like that on the device in the first place, and I told him that I thought we might need it someday.

Back in the Great Valley, Littlefoot and his friends were playing a game of kick the pointy seed. Littlefoot's team was about to win, when the Time Laser appeared right in front of him. He stopped in his tracks, petrified. Chomper came running over and said. "It happened like that, just like that! The little thing just appeared out of nowhere like that sharptooth skull did last night!."
Everyone was scared of this device, everyone that is except Littlefoot; "let's show this to the Grownups!" He said. He tried to pick up the strange device with his mouth, but in doing so, he accidentally pushed the green button with his teeth. In an instant, Littlefoot disapeared with the device.
"LITTLEFOOT!" Cera screamed as she ran over to where Littlefoot just was a moment ago. Littlefoot was gone, and his friends were in shock.

That's great. I just hope the Professor is not too secretive    

WOW    that's really cool FIREWORKS now that's somethings  

Thank You Vonboy. I'll do my artwork and illustrations by the way, ideas come fast while I do illustrations, artwork, when I read books and when i watch TV.
However I have 3 stories to work on and it's a series of science fiction and adventure.    However what are your favorite parts in the LBT project? honestly