Land Before Time fancomic

DarkHououmon · **Reply #20 on:** May 08, 2007, 09:15:08 PM

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I made a mistake in one of the panels. That's why it kinda looks like there's snow.

Note: The reason the fastbiters are so small, well that was an error. I accidentally made Redclaw's foot too big, and had already inked it before I realized the mistake.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #21 on:** May 09, 2007, 03:59:19 PM

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Highsoar · **Reply #22 on:** May 10, 2007, 01:49:09 AM

Nice

I wish I knew how to draw online. I think you have talent.

*doesn't have Photoshop which could be part of the problem*

Akiko · **Reply #23 on:** May 11, 2007, 06:25:19 PM

Wow...I'm loving this one!

Personally, I like how the characters are drawn and how you've given Chomper's parents, Claw and the raptors more distinctive personalities. Screech and Thudd look great...especially where Screech is 'sharpening his claws', they just look so...cute. I'm a sap for raptors, though

I really like how you're drawing Chomper for some reason, his expressions are fantastic, and he looks a little older too. From the looks of the story so far, it's just the kind of plot I enjoy too...can't wait to see what happens next! I haven't seen too many lbt comics either, so I applaud the creativity of the project too.

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KingdomKey23 · **Reply #24 on:** May 13, 2007, 05:41:35 PM

What can I say? You are awesome at this! At least you gave us an idea on how the three stooges met Chomper. XD

DarkHououmon · **Reply #25 on:** May 14, 2007, 05:45:30 PM

Sorry for the delay. Here's page 6: http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u72/Inf...Tcomicpage6.jpg

I must apologize for how Redclaw looks. This was due to me making the mistake of having Jana ink the image. I corrected it as much as I could.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #26 on:** May 16, 2007, 10:19:38 PM

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DarkHououmon · **Reply #27 on:** May 18, 2007, 02:28:11 PM

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This'll be the last page for a while. I need to get to work drawing new pages. I'll be doing that over the weekend.

novaflare · **Reply #28 on:** May 18, 2007, 08:03:24 PM

Ohh thats so wrong.
Get to some action then say will be a few days before next pages

I love the close up of the mouth shot.
Your also doign a great job at keeping the charector art very consitant in each page and panel. Thas not a easy thing to do. Ask any comic book artist. Its a entirely seperate skill that normally takes time to develop. Seems you happen to have a nack for it.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #29 on:** May 21, 2007, 05:45:11 PM

Okay, here's page 9: http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u72/Inf...Tcomicpage9.jpg

I almost forgot to explain. In this page, Sly's head was low because he was aiming for Redclaw's leg, in an attempt to knock him off balance. Seeing this opportunity, Redclaw strikes Sly on the head, since the head was low enough for his foot to reach.

In the final panel, we see that Sly's head is up, but Redclaw's foot is still up there as well. This is because, while I did not draw it in the comic, Redclaw had lost his footing and is actually falling because Sly's head rearing up like that has knocked him off balance.

I hope that clears any confusion.

KingdomKey23 · **Reply #30 on:** May 21, 2007, 06:59:47 PM

(Hisses) That's got to hurt! Nice one, DH! Can't wait for the next one!

novaflare · **Reply #31 on:** May 21, 2007, 10:13:09 PM

ooooh nice even got motion blur

I think some one has a nice chance of doing this for a living some point in the future

Seriously your really quite good at all of this and getting better page by page as well.

Malte279 · **Reply #32 on:** May 22, 2007, 01:20:12 AM

It looks very interesting and the blur is a very suitable effect in such an action scene. But why did you use negative colors in the last panel? Because of the blood?

DarkHououmon · **Reply #33 on:** May 22, 2007, 01:51:58 AM

I thought it would look cool.

novaflare · **Reply #34 on:** May 22, 2007, 01:35:19 PM

Quote from: DarkHououmon,May 22 2007 on 01:51 AM

I thought it would look cool.

heheh good enough reason because it does look cool

Ive seen similar done in production comic books esp in spiderman with his spider sense.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #35 on:** May 23, 2007, 05:46:15 PM

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pokeplayer984 · **Reply #36 on:** May 25, 2007, 08:25:56 AM

Okay, I've gotten caught up now, and you've got a good story going here. I was shocked to see what happened to Sly there. Now, one thing I like with a comic are graphic novels that contain blood. Of course, the one's I've read are a bit more dramatic with it.

Anyways, this is good so far. Keep it up!

Oh, and are you EVER going to reveal how they got off that island? Seriously, we need to know that part.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #37 on:** May 25, 2007, 02:53:56 PM

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Oh, and are you EVER going to reveal how they got off that island? Seriously, we need to know that part.

I have not fully decided on when would be the best time to reveal that. Currently, with what is going on in the comic, now would not be the best time for them to discuss how they got off the island.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #38 on:** May 29, 2007, 11:21:12 PM

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pokeplayer984 · **Reply #39 on:** May 30, 2007, 08:22:48 AM

Uh-oh! How is Chomper going to get out of Screech's jaws of death? I'm guessing his mother appears and saves him. (Kind of predictable right now.)