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Escape The Shadowlands

Nahla · 8 · 1530

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This poem is about my OC Nahla (where I get my name) escaping the Shadowlands if you read my fic you'll know what that is but if not it a barren wasteland lead by a cold hearted longneck named Hades,oh and he Nahla's father....




Run she said,escape with your life.
The Shadowlands are such fright.
No one ever escapes alive.
But if I stay I'll surely die.
Fastbiters closed in on my tail.
In the distance I hear my herd wail.
I know they have found my mother dead.
But tears I do not have time to shed.
Father I'm sorry I disappointed you.
But be evil I refuse to do.
I want to be good,I don't want to be bad.
I don't want to make others sad.
Fastbiters corner me on  the wall.
I look down-it such a fall.
I have no choice I jump with my life.
In a way I know this was right.
I land on the ground,the pain I do bare.
The fastbiters left,they were gonna leave me there!.
Sorry my herd I left you behind,
But for you my love will always shine.
For we will always be one.
Expect dad-he a total bum.
I look to left
I look to right.
I escaped the Shadowlands...
I'll be alright.




This one was hard,only so much I can do to make an escape story into a poem.


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There should be an award for best poetry :D
Well done! This is really emotional :yes :yes
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I really love how you can fit the summation of her story into a mere 26 lines :) well done!
"Not all who wander are lost"
J. R. R. Tolkein


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It was amazing. Well done again Nahla, you've wow us all again. :DD


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Aww thanks everyone.


My next poem is about Nahla and Littlefoot together.

Love poem naww.



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Fluffy and love are good :DD
"Not all who wander are lost"
J. R. R. Tolkein