Bad ideia:Stop doing the fic just because its your first one.
Its a bad ideia, I just posted my first one today, my 1? chaper xD,and after I posted all I wanted was to see the coments, i want to see what i did wrong, and what I did good, to help me in my next chapter.
If u start yout first ever fic, and if u get well, not "bad" coments,but helping coments, read them, and see what you did wrong, because there is always someone that is better than us :^.^:
Take a look at my first chapter and tell what you think ^^