Anyone is fluent in german?

Paradise Bird · **on:** March 19, 2010, 12:43:02 AM

http://s730.photobucket.com/albums/ww303/B...encesGerman.flv
I'am now learning german and I figured I tried translating a world without fences in german. So if anyone can correct me that would be great.

Noname · **Reply #1 on:** March 19, 2010, 12:47:12 AM

Just ask Malte. He IS German, so that should solve all problems right there.

Malte279 · **Reply #2 on:** March 19, 2010, 04:17:15 AM

Aye, I am relatively fluent in my native tongue

If you show me the English and the German texts I can tell you if there is anything that needs to be corrected.
Here I guess I can be more useful than I could in case of Latin.

Paradise Bird · **Reply #3 on:** March 19, 2010, 05:48:03 AM

It is in the video Malte

. I was a bit anxious to ask for help at first and I thought it would be best to ask to GOF. The lyrics in german are in the vid.

Malte279 · **Reply #4 on:** March 19, 2010, 06:51:45 AM

There is a typo in the word ungeb‰ndigt (frenetic) which is spelled with an e in the lyrics (the ‰ is not available on most keyboards in the world).
The word "rei?en" is spelled with a ? rather than double s.
Near the end the sentence "Machts gut ich Scho?hunde!" ought to be "Machts gut ihr Scho?hunde" (ich being "I" and ihr being the plural form of "you").
Apart from these small mistakes there was nothing wrong with the transcription of the song lyrics to subtitles. Did you do them yourself?

Paradise Bird · **Reply #5 on:** March 19, 2010, 07:06:53 AM

I did much of it but Sinchei helped me with a few words, I ended up replacing several phrases after that.

I'm not that competent yet. Oh for the german words I got them from a friend on youtube for those I was not sure of. Looks like the ones he gave me were wrong though lol.