I'm nowhere near being a perfectionist, actually, jedi. The points I brought up were just what I could think of off the top of my head. I don't think I should be able to point out such glaring flaws without trying.
Sorry if I came down a little hard, but I find nothing more frustrating is a lack of thought being put into a project and I find the defense of shut lapses even more frustrating. Not hateable, just frustrating.
Three years is plenty of time to work out two mere screenplays. You just have to know what you're doing.