Welcome to my first fan fiction ever. I should let you know that my grammar and spelling are terrible. But I need you guys to help me point out my mistakes because when I read it everything looks alright so I would be happy for you guys to ëpick out’ the bad but also the good in my chapters.
In the first few chapters I keep using ëshe said/he said’ a lot so my bad on that. I hope you guys enjoy my fan fiction. And yes you’ve guessed it… It’s another Pterano story. I didn’t know how many there where at first.
Forgive me if it really is that terrible know.
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Introduction
Once ago, there was a time where dinosaurs lived, A time when it really was all about survival of the fittest. But there was also a place where you can be safe. It was called The Great Valley and was home to lots of dinosaurs that where leaf eaters. They did not have to worry about any dinosaurs that where a threat to them because the walls of The Great Valley would protect them. Some have tried to get into The Great Valley but have failed. Because of finding no way of getting in or because of the locals would fight them back to the Mysterious Beyond.
The Mysterious Beyond is a complete wasteland. There are no green trees or grass, little water and food. It was just a brown wilderness. But that was only half of the problem trying to live in the mysterious beyond, Carnivore's dinosaurs also known as sharptooth to the local's leaf eaters, would kill any dinosaur on site if there had the chance. But little did there know about the great valley nearby.
Inside the valley there where dinosaurs playing with each other but these dinosaurs where different types of dinosaurs. Many who visited the valley had never seen this before due to them always stick to their own kind. One of the dinosaurs was called Littlefoot who was an Apatosaurus also known as the Longneck kind.
Cera was the second dinosaur playing in the group. She was a Triceratops also known as a Threehorn. Ducky was the third dinosaur to be playing in the group. She is a Saurolophus dinosaur which is called swimmers. Petrie the Pteranodon also known as Flyer. Chomper the Tyrannosaurus is one of the many kind of sharptooth and the only kind of sharptooth who lives in the valley. And Ruby the Oviraptor, the fast runner.
As these children play, someone was watching them from a distance.
'I'm becoming bored of this game' said Cera
'Well, what other games do you want to play' said Littlefoot
'Let's play hide and seek' Chomper interrupted Cera before she could speak.
'Me up for that' said Petrie
'Let's go' Ruby added
'Oh like it was not MY idea' Cera said
'Well because it's you're idea you can be the one who comes and finds us' Littlefoot said.
Everyone laugh a part from Cera. As everyone went to hide, Cera started to count.
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I make sure I post the rest later on. Thanks for reading guys.
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