Pfft, I gave up on my fic after the first chapter-2 years ago
I so should write a fic..you are all inspiring me.
Anyway, allow I to review though I don't much to add other then what I told you on Skype.
Poor, Littlefoot he really is struggling. Which we can all relate too. We all struggle as we grow older and face the reality of life.
I see Cera hasn't changed much, but that's a really good thing. You're trying to make the characters older and more mature but at the same time keep them in character.
I look forward to seeing the reaction to what Littlefoot tells them, and I hope they understand. I seriously feel for Littlefoot right now.
And that's what an author should do, they should allow it so the reader really can feel for the characters and understand their struggles. You really have come a long way, you really are becoming more confident, planning things out better putting more details into everything even small things such as the wind, how the snow falls. It's really really good.
I've seen some of your first works, and not just counting fanfiction. I can barely believe it's the same person. How in the world did you improve so fast? I do not understand..tell me so I can do that too.
I really look forward to seeing this story develop, just don't rush through the story.
Take time
Add detail
And don't have the characters fall in love within 5 seconds xD well you can if you want but I hate that, it makes the story less interesting, but each to their own