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LBT Fanfiction / One Long Tail
« on: December 08, 2007, 03:05:40 AM »
Hello:
To be the first fanfic, it is very well done, it may get confussing at times (not alaways even though my native language is the spanish), but you do know how to get the characters to show emotions, and that's both an importat and a hard part of any story.
Again, keep it up!
To be the first fanfic, it is very well done, it may get confussing at times (not alaways even though my native language is the spanish), but you do know how to get the characters to show emotions, and that's both an importat and a hard part of any story.
Again, keep it up!