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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfiction Audiobooks?
« on: August 26, 2015, 04:39:07 PM »
To be honest, I'd probably need help to get this to work.  :blink: It was just something I came up with on a whim. Still, if anyone has any decent recording equipment, you could send me a snippet of your voice recording a certain fanfic...can you post files here? I'm not sure...

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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfiction Audiobooks?
« on: August 26, 2015, 03:00:15 PM »
One other problem I have is that I have a Southern English accent which might seem weird to people used to voice actors from the US.  :lol

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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfiction Audiobooks?
« on: August 26, 2015, 01:33:16 PM »
True, I also like to act, but I'd worry about misrepresenting people's OC's.  :lol We could always do our own I suppose...although I don't think I can do very good female voices.

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LBT Fanfiction / Fanfiction Audiobooks?
« on: August 25, 2015, 05:03:09 PM »
So, for all those who write fanfiction, I personally think it would be a great idea for volunteers with alluring voices and reasonable acting abilities to do podcasts for certain fanfictions...

If they want to of course... :bang

Just an idea, I'll leave it at that...what do you think?

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LBT Fanfiction / Venatione Venatus
« on: July 31, 2015, 05:28:25 PM »
I seem to have lost control of chapter lengths... :wow

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LBT Fanfiction / Venatione Venatus
« on: July 20, 2015, 05:42:24 AM »
And here's the rest!  :DD

*
“Isn’t Hyp also coming?” Cera asked, struggling over an inconveniently placed rock, as she and Ruby crept as carefully as they could against the shadows of immensely dark caverns.

“Shortly,” Ruby assured her, peering into the gloom, her mind working furiously.

“If you’d like to inform me what exactly you have planned?” Cera asked impatiently, walking closely to her and gazing at her reproachfully. Ruby glanced back and sighed.

“OK – for the time being, we’re going to have to bypass the prisoners.”

“What? Why?”

“We have to find something, quickly. “It’ll all make sense...”

Cera sighed.

“So how come there aren’t any prisoners down this cave?” she asked, her mind snapping unintentionally to her father. She had no doubt he would have kicked up a fuss. The idea made her smile briefly, but it quickly vanished when she remembered that Ulciscor was unforgiving. And what would Tria have said?

Even in the darkness, Ruby could see Cera had her mind in unbidden and unhelpful places, so she continued.

“The reason this cave is so devoid of prisoners is because Ulciscor didn’t want it used as a prison. If you remember, how we got in offered very little resistance from the rock. It’s far too long a tunnel to block off completely, and he doesn’t want the inmates escaping into the Mysterious Beyond. Besides, I think we’ve been moving steadily upwards since we’ve entered the cave. Therefore, the mouth of this cave, likely unobstructed, it’s somewhere high up...”

More walking soon proved her correct. The smell of the night air greeted them, and small cave mouth awaited them.

“And finally...” Ruby breathed, gazing out into the Valley. “We’re finally back, back in the Great Valley, our home to come back to...although it looks like we’re back somewhere else...”

Cera could only agree as she gazed across the dark landscape she had lived in for so long. So much vegetation had been ripped from its place, the trees bare and ghostly...it was almost like the shell of the Valley she knew. Instinctively, she found herself drawing closer to Ruby. Ruby did not resist.

“What now?” Cera whispered.

“Well, we need to climb down,” Ruby replied.

“Into the Valley?” Cera asked, alarmed. “What if we get noticed?”

Ruby didn’t answer. Instead, she carefully began to lower herself down from the place whence she had come, clinging to the rock gingerly, slowly descending. Cera, rolling her eyes, nevertheless closely followed.

It would have felt good to find solid ground again, but Cera’s legs nearly gave way once she had reached it. She would never admit it, but her knocking knees gave it away – she was terrified. Ruby didn’t look all that much better.

“N-now what?” Cera asked, her teeth chattering.

“Now...?” Ruby looked as though she was considering the matter. “Well, now we investigate where the prisons are...”

She reluctantly began to walk off, keeping close to the rocky areas at the perimeter of the Valley, Cera closely following, keeping an eye out for...

“Stop!”

A great ice block had slipped perilously into Cera’s stomach as she heard the imperative. Without really thinking, she broke into a canter, crashing clumsily into Ruby. The two girls rolled haphazardly onto the ground, coming to a stop and noticing two powerful, spiked club-tails in their path.

Two Bludgeoners stood before them, opaque and grotesque against the black sky, the slight breeze whistling through the largely dead grass at their feet. The leaned closer, examining their two new captives with apparent interest. One of them looked carefully at Ruby, and, when the other’s gaze was fixed on Cera, gave her the shadow of a wink. That one was surely Uriah. The knot in Ruby’s chest loosened slightly.

“Well, this is unexpected,” the other Bludgeoner remarked. “These are just children. But I’ve never seen them before. What about you, Uriah?”

Ruby felt Cera exhale in relief beside her, although she was still at a complete loss as to what was going on.

Uriah shook his head.

“There are certainly no fast-runner families within the Valley, Beck,” he replied. “My guess is these two may have come in here from beyond.”

“Beyond?” the Bludgeoner called Beck looked at Uriah, alarmed. “Are you sure?”

Uriah shrugged.

“If they are, we should probably take them to Ulciscor, and see what he’d have us do with them,” he said carefully.

“Right...” Beck didn’t look overly happy with this decision, but seemed to reluctantly agree, and nudged the two girls rather roughly with his tail.

“Get up you two, and come with us.”

Cera couldn’t help but constantly glance at Ruby as they walked. Her mind was working furiously. Had this been part of Ruby’s plan? What the hell was happening? Ruby just kept her head down, and her expression determinately blank.

But even with her mind in the state it was, Cera soon realised the direction they were headed, and recognised the Thundering Falls at once. And standing at its bank, turning to gaze at the approaching Bludgeoners could only be Ulciscor. Even Cera had to admit he commanded a certain awe with his presence.

“What is this?” he demanded, shifting his dark-eyed gaze to Cera and Ruby. “Who are they?”

“We found them near the Great Wall,” Beck explained. “Uriah assumed they may have come from beyond the Valley...”

“Right...” Ulciscor gazed down at them with such a sheer contempt that Cera thought she would surely keel over from the pure force of it.

“I’ll have you know far-walkers are not welcome here!” he snarled. “Especially as you seem to have come from a mixed herd. You will get no pity from me, I assure you.” He turned to the two Bludgeoners.

“I want you to take these two-”

“Wait!” came a gloating call from nearby. “I know them!”

Cera followed the voice across the water, and upon sighting its source felt a hot, ugly wave of hatred rise within her like a snake rearing from grass. Kai, looking positively thrilled at the sight of her and Ruby captive, was gazing directly at the scene with a sadistic merriment.

“They were amongst the group friends with the sharptooth,” he spat out the last word with considerable venom. “I thought you were dead...I thought I’d got rid of all of you back at the fast water. Along with...well, you know who else was amongst them, Ulciscor.” He nodded respectfully in his leader’s direction.

“I see...” Ulciscor frowned. “Then that means they could all still be alive...” he scowled heavily. “That means there is a potential liberation force on its way...” he suddenly looked mortified.

“Who did you come here with??” he bellowed, striking the two of them hard with his tail. The force knocked the two girls, winded, to the ground, and they both tasted blood. Despite this, they both got back to their feet with a bitter resolve.

“You won’t get anything out of us!!” Cera roared back.

“That’s right!” Ruby agreed, oddly reckless. “We have standards!”

Ulciscor was now livid. He was about to raise his tail again, when Uriah spoke up.

“I know it may not be my place sir, but given the circumstances, I think execution might be the most appropriate option.”

Cera’s mouth fell open in horror, not registering Ruby’s tiny satisfied smirk.

“W...wha...?” she gasped, apparently too appalled to speak properly, gazing at Uriah, who would not look at her.

“I disagree...” Ulciscor replied. “If they are part of an attack force, I want to found everything I can from them. They require significant interrogation...”

“Well, an example has to be made,” Kai offered. “Why not get rid of one of them, and keep the other for questioning?”

“Hmm...” Ulciscor turned back to look at them. Cera could not believe how casual he was at the prospect of killing.

“Yes...I’ll keep the threehorn. She is a four-footer, and therefore must be held in higher regard than the fast-runner.”

“WHAT???” Cera screamed. “NO, YOU CAN’T, I REFUSE, DON’T YOU DARE-”

Beck struck her hard in the back, and she collapsed again, thudding to the ground and feeling a trickle of blood escape from her mouth.

“It’s nearly dawn...” Ulciscor observed, raising his head towards the sky. “When the Bright Circle rises, we will stage the execution with everyone watching. I think throwing her off the Great Wall will be a very well received method...” he smiled. “Until then, these two need to be held within the caverns under heavy protection, in a place that we know is inescapable. And I need a full investigation into where they came from. It could be that these two were sent as scouts and the rest of the attack force has not fully amassed where they came from, but I don’t want to take chances.”

“Don’t worry,” Uriah said immediately. “I was patrolling where they were came from, I know the area. I’ll amass a search team to investigate where they could have got in.” Ulciscor nodded, and Uriah strode away.

“Kai and Beck, take these two to the caverns. They will be held there briefly until the execution.” He gazed up at the sky. “The light is already coming. It should not be too long. Hopefully this will be enough time to stay ahead of our enemies, whoever they are.”

Cera was in a state of numb horror as she was dragged away, although she vaguely noticed Ruby didn’t look all that worried...

*
The cave itself was much more compact that the previous, winding, freely spacious cavern they had entered through. This claustrophobia did not help Cera’s case, because right now, she was so on-edge she could not even begin to think what do with herself. Pacing out her frustrations in this small space did her absolutely no good. She felt as though she was on the verge of breaking, and wanted nothing more than escape, not just from the cave, but from everything...

Ruby, in contrast, was sitting quite still, gazing at the boulder that stood in front of the cave, apparently contemplating. She did, however, look round when Cera emitted a particularly loud frustrated yell.

“Cera...” she said uncertainly. “How’s your back?”

“Wha...?” Cera looked momentarily stunned.

“That Bludgeoner struck you pretty hard...I can clearly still see a mark on it...” she sighed.

“Never mind that now!” Cera rushed hurriedly to her side, her face slack with torment. “You’re going to be killed, Ruby! You hear me? You will literally be killed in just a short while – and I have no idea how the others are going to reach us, Uriah betrayed us, everything failed and-”

“Ah, that’s where you’re wrong,” Ruby interjected.

“What???”

“Nothing failed,” Ruby said, now smiling slightly, shifting her gaze back to the boulder. “Everything worked out exactly how it should have done.”

A brief silence hung between the two as these words registered to Cera. Ruby was still smiling. Then, with a snap of rage and a roar of dismay, Cera ground her head straight into Ruby’s side, capsizing her off her plinth and crashing to the ground.

“I’VE HAD ENOUGH OF PLAYING YOUR STUPID MIND GAMES!!!” Cera snarled at her. “WHAT THE HELL, EXACTLY, IS GOING ON WITH THIS PLAN OF YOURS?? Don’t just brush it aside like I’m meant to understand, because if you’re to face death like that, you really think I’m going to take it lying down?? I’m not as stupid as you think, you know!!”

Ruby’s expression now read one of shock and concern. She looked up at Cera, who was panting heavily with furious tears forming in her eyes, and she gave the threehorn a weak smile.

“I don’t think that,” she assured her. “And yes, you’re right. It’s probably time I explained what’s going on.”

Cera, looking mildly surprised, gulped and nevertheless nodded.

Ruby got to her feet.

“The alliance will come for us,” she said earnestly. “Just as they did in the Fanged Forest – we needed to find a way to get into the Valley without Ulciscor noticing. It is therefore deliciously ironic that by drawing attention to ourselves, Ulciscor’s attention was drawn from ourselves.”

“How do you work that out?” Cera asked.

“Some of forces are being led by Uriah to investigate a location far from where the alliance is working a route into the Valley,” Ruby explained. “See, Uriah didn’t betray us – he did exactly what he was meant to and is now diverting attention from the main assault. And soon, Ulciscor will gather all of his forces and all the residents of the Valley for one of his favourite spectacles.”

“You mean your execution...” Cera murmured, a distinct quiver in her voice.

“That’s right!” Ruby agreed, smiling at her nervously. “A shot in the dark, but he’s going to be so distracted organising this, he won’t realise what he’s meant to be focusing on...don’t ask me how that works, but it seems as though Ulciscor puts what he considers justice and honour and before reason.”

“So that was your plan??” Cera looked more anguished than ever. “A wild speculation on the off chance that everyone would behave the way you thought and would result in you getting killed???”

“Oh, Cera!” Ruby placed a hand on her. “There’s every chance the alliance will get through in time to save me! That was the idea, anyway...they’re currently working through the caverns and freeing prisoners at the same time. Eventually, they’ll rescue you, and use their new found intricate tunnel system or whatever route they’ve managed to dig into this wall to come and rescue me. But even if they don’t, I’m not...well, too concerned...”

“Don’t say that!” Cera grunted, tears beginning to form again. “How can you even say that?? We need you, Ruby...we all do...”

Ruby gazed at her, looking positively radiant and considerably moved. She beamed at her.

“Well, thank you Cera. But my point is, it’s this Valley I’m willing to die for. I remember when I first came here, I found a lot of you residents close-minded, and frankly, a little dense.”

“Hm?” Cera looked up at her. “And...?”

Ruby grinned rather impishly.

“Well, that’s it...but actually, there’s something here that I couldn’t even begin to fathom. The fact that you all live together in such a large group with such relative harmony. You even let a sharptooth live here. That’s really progressive!”

“Yeah, then there’s my dad...” Cera sighed. “He’s hardly harmonious...”

“And yet,” Ruby insisted. “He always comes into his own when anyone he cares about, extending to everyone in the Valley, is in danger. And perhaps he ought to be reminded of that from time to time. Just in case it’s something Tria needs to be aware of...”

“Tria...!” Cera sighed, failing to hide her tears once more. “Who knows if they even look at each other now...”

“Maybe you’ll find,” Ruby said soothingly, “That there are chances to repair these kinds of things. And the Cera I know is not going to take any of it lying down!”

Cera looked up to see Ruby continue to smile. This, perhaps more than anything, made her sniff back her tears and hold her head high.

“It’s like Opal was saying...” Ruby continued. “She understands the Great Valley Will...and love that’ll keep us together...and there’s nothing I wouldn’t do to preserve that from the likes of Ulciscor.”

“Yeah...” Cera murmured, watching her closely. “Yeah, I think you’re right...but you’d better come out of this one alive, Ruby! If you die...” she gave a weak little smile. “I’ll never speak to you again...”

“I think that’s fair!” Ruby agreed. Her smile slipped slightly, however, when she heard movement outside the cave. “It’s them...they’re coming for me...”

Both girls’ expressions immediately transformed to one of a chilling, mutual fear, but Ruby quickly shook it off.

“I’ll see you soon, hopefully...” Ruby muttered quickly, moving towards Cera. “The alliance should find you any minute, and then you can go round the other side of the Valley to help me. Remember what I said...keep those Valley spirits fighting. It’s the one true advantage we have over him.”

On an impulse, she leaned over and planted a brief kiss on Cera’s forehead. Cera watched in silence as the boulder rolled away, and a glaring sunlight punched them in the eyes. Squinting, she saw Ruby being dragged out with a smile by two Bludgeoners, who quickly rolled the stone back, and Cera was left alone in the semi-darkness, nevertheless hearing movement in the caves beyond, and thinking very carefully about every Ruby had said and done. Everything was conclusive.

The time had finally come.

~0~

Cliffhanger! Sort of...well, hope you enjoyed - to be honest this felt like a bit of a mess when writing...sorry if you were expecting a battle - this was all about continuing character arcs before the battle!  :nyah However, I can confirm the title of the next chapter is THE BATTLE FOR THE GREAT VALLEY, so you can all look forward to that!  :smile
Let me know what you thought about this one, and as always, thanks for reading!!

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LBT Fanfiction / Venatione Venatus
« on: July 20, 2015, 05:39:17 AM »
And we're back!! Here's the next chapter that I hope you will very much enjoy??  :p
I should point out that this chapter is only partially proof-read, and it contains battle tactics that are probably horribly thought out. Please forgive me for that... :( This is also the chapter where I put all my up and coming potential ships to the test, so that's probably a load of rubbish too...but I'll let you decide that. Hopefully the title itself should generate some sense of excitement... :lol

Chapter Twenty-Four: The Eve of War

Skywater was a cover-all.

It soothed all the senses, and Seizon, sitting amongst a clump of ferns gazing dismally at the shapes of the three adult sharpteeth, discussing and arguing about the next course of action was glad for how the now fairly intense rainfall was obscuring his visibility, drowning out Gigas’ brusque and aggressive tones, making the foliage smell fresh, and splashing gently against his scales...

Seizon had to admit to himself, even allowing the rain to wash over him, as though cleaning his mind, that he wasn’t sure where this would go next. The sight of Saureen being pinned up against the tree by a slavering Gigas was still burned into his consciousness and made him almost want to cry every time it flashed across his mind...

Only he wouldn’t. Crying was not for him. He was, as Xal said, an ëapex hunter.’ And apex hunters don’t cry.
Well, if that were the case, being an apex hunter was incredibly difficult.

Seizon closed his eyes and tried his best to return to his own feelings. If he were honest with himself, he had never really considered the dangers involved in being part of Xal’s army. He hadn’t expected one of Xal’s underlings to turn upon his own friend so...easily. It was a horrifying prospect. Was this necessarily the fault of Xal?
No...
It was his. Or rather, it was his own naivety. When envisioning the revolution, it had always been him and Xal, and maybe Saureen and Chomper and whatnot if they behaved...Seizon’s dream had always reflected on the old stories Xal had told him about Eykion and the great escapades of sharptooth revolution against Ulciscor and other oppressive leaf-eaters. It had been something they were doing together. It had been about someone who had cared for him, including him in something for the first time...

No, he would not cry.

But in Seizon’s vision, it had all been perfect. Through their resolve and familial affection, he and Xal had conquered the world. In this vision, there was no room for the likes of Redclaw, the monstrosity who had terrorized all dinosaurs for so long, or indeed Gigas, who, judging by his own observations and Lini’s stories, was even worse. How could a dream get so scuppered?

Even amongst the rainfall, he heard a small something land next to him. Turning, he noticed Ichy, whose feathers were sodden, necessitating a constant twitch.

“I take it Xal’s utterly devastated?” he asked briskly, turning to nip at something on his wing.

“I don’t really know,” Seizon replied honestly, now watching the sharpbeak. “I mean, the escape was pretty...thorough, but he seems to be maintaining his calm.” Seizon smiled admiringly. “Certainly compared to the other two...”

“Well, what doesn’t anger them?” Ichy muttered distractedly, attempting to ease his sodden form beneath a large fern, wringing out his feathers as he did so. “Their impulsiveness and tendencies to channel their anger into everything they do is what makes them great lieutenants.”

“You really think that’s all Xal’s looking for?” Seizon asked, a littler sharper than he had meant. Ichy’s eyes met Seizon’s, and, realising he had enticed the young bladeback’s defensive attitude, averted his gaze and simply shrugged. Satisfied, Seizon gazed back at the form of his step-father, obscured and muffled by the heavy rain.

“Who knows? I guess they’re good at what they do...but they don’t seem like the sorts with same vision...” Seizon scowled and looked down at the observant Ichy. “What do you think?”

“Me?” Ichy shrugged. “I have no idea. All I know is that I’m here to follow Xal, not the other two. He’s been the first person to give me any hope in a long time...and Dil too...” A faraway smile passed across his beak, and Seizon continued to watch him intently.

“How is Dil anyway?” he asked. “I saw she took some pretty heavy damage from that spiketail...”

“Oh, she’ll be fine!” Ichy replied, with a dismissive wave of his wing. “She’s been through far worse...and this time she didn’t lose an important one of her senses...” He gave a slightly dry chuckle, and shifted his eyes to the ground.

Watching him now, Seizon was forcibly reminded of Nycha, and her desire to avoid recollections and hangovers from her past. Upon memory of what he now knew, his insides became heavy with a leaden feeling of regret, and he concluded that the more he knew about the ones he worked with, the better. It was so easy to see these individuals as pawns in a larger, greater plan, but even with that in mind, they had their own feelings and agendas too. Not to mention stories to tell.

“I’ve been meaning to ask,” Seizon said carefully, watching Ichy for any sign of reaction. “You and Dil – you’ve got to be the strangest pair I’ve ever come across, and you argue all the time. How come you’ve stuck together through all this anyway? Where did you come from? And...well, what’s up with Dil’s eyes?”

Ichy gazed up at him reproachfully, and didn’t speak for a few seconds. Then he sighed.

“When the new dawn we’ve been hoping for arrives...or at least when things are more stable than they are right now, I’ll explain it all. But even then, I don’t know if it’s my place...” he shook his head. “For now, let’s just say we’ve both been through it. Like, badly. We joined together for mutual benefit. I was on my own and in a place where getting hold of food was very difficult. She had similar problems due to an incident which left her nearly completely blind. By working together, I could locate larger prey, and she could kill it. We didn’t like each other, as you can imagine, but...” she smiled slightly. “Neither of us will admit it to each other...but after all this time, there is definitely a grudging respect growing...maybe one day we’ll even be fond of each other.”

Seizon grinned approvingly.

“That’ll definitely be something worth seeing!” he remarked, getting to his feet.

“Where are you going?” Ichy demanded.

“I want to see what the next course of action is,” Seizon replied, his eyes now intently fixed upon Xal. “There’s no way he’s giving up just yet...”

He walked carefully forward, the rain still cascading around him, until he was in earshot of the three large sharpteeth. They seemed to be arguing, both Redclaw and Gigas in indignation at something Xal was saying. Intrigued, Seizon tiptoed closer.

“I can only guess that those two longnecks came from a much larger herd!” Redclaw was saying. “This goes without mentioning Ulciscor’s entire army!”

“I am well aware of the destructive power of longnecks,” Xal replied, fairly calmly, although there was a bite of impatience to it as well. “They managed to wipe out my entire family. And I have fought Ulciscor myself, if you remember.”

Redclaw fell silent, but Gigas just shook his head in disbelief, smiling all the while.

“You’re planning to go after them as quickly as possible? Follow them to the Valley and somehow defeat both them and Ulciscor’s forces? Relax, Xal, there are much less convoluted ways of bumping yourself off...”

“And what else do you suggest we do?” Xal demanded. “I for one am not willing to sit here after getting this far.”

A flash of lightning illuminated Gigas’ perplexed features momentarily.

“Well, how do you suggest going about doing it?” he asked irritably. “We’re down on Piercers as it is...”

“I think you’re misunderstanding what I’m proposing,” Xal replied. “If you would allow me to explain?”

Gigas fell silent, nevertheless watching Xal with a pronounced scepticism. Xal did not avert his gaze as he continued.

“What I have in mind is not a full-on attack. You’re right – that would be far too risky. What I’m planning is something more subtle, which will get us what we want with limited man-power.”

He turned to gaze out of the mouth of the forest, watching the rain splatter and hammer to the ground.

“We will follow them at a distance, all the way to Valley without them noticing and allowing them to penetrate it for us. Or rather, for me.” He turned to his two lieutenants. “You two will not be accompanying me.”

It was evident in their facial expressions and gestures that Gigas and Redclaw didn’t appreciate being told this, and made to object.

“If,” Xal cut across them dangerously. “Something were to happen to me out there, I will need you two to be safe in continuing my ambitions.”

There was a stunned silence punctuated only by the rain. Even Seizon was mystified. Xal had made it clear to him on many occasions that he was only working with these two for necessity’s sake. Asking them to continue the legacy...? Then again, he supposed he didn’t have an awful lot of choice. Seizon held his tongue.

Entirely unexpectedly, Xal then turned to Seizon.

“Seizon,” he said briskly. “Do you know where Ichy is?”

“Oh, right...” Seizon replied, caught off guard. He hadn’t even realised Xal knew he was there. “He’s just back there actually...” He pointed back to where he had been sitting moments before, and, vaguely noticing the form of the sharpbeak watching him, beckoned.

Ichy flew over.

“Yes?” he asked expectantly, looking up at Xal.

“It’s very important I have you with me,” Xal told him seriously. “I will need an eye in the sky, to keep track of our location and our quarry.”

“Sure thing...” Ichy nodded. “Just give me instructions as per the occasion...but...”

“But what?”

Now Ichy looked uncomfortable.
“It’s just...well, with things like this, it’s normally easier to have someone by your side. Someone you’re used to working with...”

“What’s your point, Ichy?”

“Well...” Ichy shifted his eyes to the ground. “I’d like to request Dil accompany us.”

Seizon grinned at that. Xal on the other hand, simply looked annoyed.

“I’m afraid that would be unwise,” he said sternly. “She’d slow us down. Especially if she’s injured.”

“Oh, she’ll be fine!” Ichy said hurriedly. “I can get her to move at our pace, I’m sure! And she’d be useful in case combat is necessary!”

Xal gazed at him in mild interest.

“You really insist upon keeping her at your side?”

Ichy nodded. Xal continued to gaze at him for a while, his amber eyes momentarily flicking over to Seizon.

“Alright,” he relented. “But if she lags, you’re going to have to leave her behind.”

“Got it!” Ichy replied, grinning in a rather relieved manner. “I’ll go and let her know!”

As he flew off, Seizon stepped forward.

“What about me?” he asked.

Xal’s gaze fixed on him.

“Why would you want to come?” he asked curiously. “No offence, but I don’t know if you’d contribute much...”

“I’m aware of that...” Seizon admitted. “But...I have personal scores to settle. Besides...I want...to stay with you...”

He couldn’t bring himself to look Xal in the eye as he said this.

“Seizon,” Xal said seriously, and Seizon immediately found himself frustrated at the lack of emotion behind the way Xal spoke his name. “We’re talking about entering the Great Valley. Right now, there is probably no place in the world more dangerous for a sharptooth.”

“The same could be said for you,” Seizon replied, gazing back up at him.

Xal gazed at him for a long time, until something that might have been the beginnings of a smile flickered briefly across his features.

“OK,” he said. “But...on your own head be it.”

By this time, Gigas and Redclaw had returned to the depths of the forest. Dil soon came lumbering into view, a scar quite visible of her back, and Ichy perched atop her head.

“Are you sure about this?” she demanded grumpily of Xal. “We’re not much of an attack force.”

“Never mind attack right now,” Xal replied evenly. “For now our primary concern is keeping close tabs on the battle. However, we will be joined by an attack company soon enough...”

Seizon frowned.

“But I thought most of our Piercers were out of commission...?”

“Oh, I mobilized a reserve force a while ago,” Xal replied smirking slightly. “Just in case it were a necessity...we can follow our dear friends back to their rendezvous before following them to the Valley, by which time we will have our squad. Although beforehand it will be better to create a low profile, once they’ve regrouped they will be in a group so large, they won’t notice a few dozen Piercer’s in pursuit some distance away...”

“Where are these Piercer’s stationed?” Seizon asked.

Still smirking, Xal gazed upon him.

“I owe it all to you really, Seizon. We’ll find them at the Grand Cave Network.”

*
The sky water was beginning to die down; something that Ducky wasn’t sure how she felt about. The constant hammering of cold water upon her as she lay on Spike’s back may have been the only thing keeping her awake.

She emitted a loud and prominent yawn. Opal gave her a sideways glance.

“I know,” she said soothingly. “I know you’re tired. But you can sleep for ages once this is over.”

Ducky nodded.

“Therefore, we should get it over with quickly! Yep...yep...” she faltered, and allowed herself to slump back onto Spike’s back. Opal watched the two of them intently, wondering vaguely how she was going to reveal her identity to Spike.

“There’s no easy way...” she concluded. “I just hope he understands...”

Zyro was walking at the forefront of the group, his eyes darting over the horizon. Chomper was watching him with interest.

“Aren’t we returning to the Heathland?” he asked.

“Old One thought that would be a bit of a trek,” he explained. “So she agreed to move everyone halfway. We would agree on a route to the Valley from there...ah!”

Chomper too had spotted the distant silhouettes of a large mass of longnecks and sharpteeth. It was very hard to miss – normally such animals didn’t gather side-by-side. He smiled at this thought.

Old One also expressed a warm smile as the group approached her.

“Glad to see you’ve all made it out,” she said earnestly. “If anything had happened...”

“I will admit I’m surprised at how successful it was,” Zyro agreed.

“So, are we going then?” Al asked Zyro.

“Patience,” Zyro told him. “We can’t just march blindly off. We have to know what we’re doing...”

Old One had already called a few burly looking longnecks to her side, and requested that Bron and Opal also join her.

“Screech and Thud,” Zyro beckoned to them. “I want you to listen carefully too.”

“What about us?” Chomper asked, gesturing to the other eleven youngsters and the remaining adults.

“Get some rest,” Zyro told them firmly. “You’ve been through a terrible ordeal, and there’s still more walking to come. After we’ve finalized our plans, we’ll all take a brief break and then we’ll run it past you.”

The youngsters obeyed these instructions, thanks in part to gesturing of the older dinosaurs. Ross, Rhea, Ferox and Fumei all ushered the children away, as the herd leaders and their lieutenants discussed their battle preparations.

“The messenger you saw me send will have already informed the residents of the Valley of our intentions,” Old One explained. “So, they’re likely to be stirred into action when they hear of our approach. We will meet with the messenger there, and he will act as a means of communication between us and the Valleians until we’re inside.”

“And how exactly are we doing that?” Bron asked. “I take it you were drawing up ideas?”

“I was,” Old One agreed, extending her tail and drawing a rough diagram of the Great Valley in the mud. “Now, we know that Ulciscor has a knack for building up all the mountainous walls of the Valley using the manual labour of its residents, until it’s less of a Valley and more of a fortress! It’ll make it difficult to get past those particular walls, but I get the feeling that Ulciscor will be concentrating his efforts on reinforcing one of the sides of the Valley in particular.” She gazed up at the watchful circle.

“Let us not forget that Ulciscor’s regime was brought down once before,” she said.

“By Xal...” Bron murmured.

“Exactly – or at least, the group that Xal now represents,” Old One continued. “And Xal resides in the Fanged Forest, to the East of the Valley. Therefore, it would make sense for Ulciscor to focus most of his effort on the east wall, which means we should attack him via the west side.” Old One marked this on her diagram.

Bron made a sceptical noise.

“It does sound promising, but this is Ulciscor we’re dealing with,” he said, his memory unwillingly flashing back to a much younger figure, yet still tall and intimidating...

Bron, shaking his head, continued.

“If he’s been attacked before, and there’s whisper of revolution amongst the populace, it’s likely he’d increase efforts on all of the walls, not just the east. That would make more sense...”

“It really depends on how much time he had,” Zyro mused. “And he’d probably go for the east first...”

“Should we really be going for a single offensive though?” one of the longnecks at Old One’s side queried. “After all, there are lots of us – I think we should make use of the numbers. Have different groups of us attack at all sides. I think that would be preferable...”

“It’s true that we do have numbers on our side,” Zyro agreed. “However, the Bludgeon Brigade is just more professional at this kind of thing. They’ve been trained to be soldiers and thugs, whereas we are just herds...they are much more likely to pick us off if we are in smaller groups, nullifying our numerical advantage. I personally think going for a single offensive is better, and hopefully overwhelming Ulciscor and his troops through sheer numbers. Meaning...” he looked more uncomfortable now. “Meaning we need to find a place we can strike and make use of our vast group. We don’t want to get funnelled in, that would be a disaster...”

“This is why I suggested the west side,” Old One agreed, nodding to her diagram in the dirt.

“But how can we be sure to get a clear shot?” Bron asked. “He may have fortified that...”

“Well...” Opal began, and everyone turned to look at her. Looking slightly nervous, she nevertheless continued.

“I’m just thinking...Ulciscor also has a habit of keeping prisoners...”

“So, we should free them too?” Old One queried.

“This just keeps getting better...” another longneck sighed.

Opal shook her head.

“Well, obviously, yes. But there’s more to it than that. From what I remember, he imprisons them in the Secret Caverns, yes? Those caverns are a network that runs through the mountains walls of the Valley.”

“The caverns won’t make it easier to get through if we want a single, large offensive...” Bron pointed out.

“I know,” Opal agreed. “But having hollow tunnels is likely to make a mountain wall weaker. Ulciscor would have made some effort in trying to counter this. It’s a shot in the dark, but I think he’d have to choose which side of the Valley he’d want to reinforce by blocking the Caverns with rocks, and which side he’d want to keep the Caverns free to place prisoners. And my guess is...”

“...that it would be the east wall he’d want to reinforce!” Zyro finished, cottoning on, and gazing at Opal with blatant admiration. Then he turned to look expectantly at Bron.
“I think it’s our best option,” Old One concluded, also watching Bron for a reaction. He sighed, and nodded.

“It’s decided then,” Old One said briskly. “We’ll have to go a slightly more obscure direction, but once we arrive at the west wall, my messenger will greet us, and hopefully he can confirm what we’re hoping. Then, with help from the prisoners, we can work on getting a safe route into the Valley.”

“Alright,” Bron said. “But assuming all this works, what will we do once we’re inside?”

“Well, if all goes according to plan, we’ll be pressing in on one side, and the Valleians on the other,” Old One replied. “Then we can drive them out through sheer numbers, as Zyro said.”

“What about Ulciscor?” Bron asked. “What happens to him?”

Old One sighed.

“Whatever is necessary. And let’s brief everyone and inform them that we’ll be aiming for him specifically. He and his lieutenant Kai are our targets.”

Opal, satisfied that the plans had been finalized, wandered back over to where the children were resting. It was only as she approached that she realised all was not well...

*
The time had finally come for Lini to explain everything. The entire experience filled her with paramount dread, but with Chomper and Saureen and her side, she had finally begun to recant the tale of her past to the gang. At least, this is what she claimed, but her primary intentions were obvious – although she couldn’t look him in the eye, she was directly facing Al as she spoke, nervously wringing her claws together, and looking apprehensively at him once she had finished. On one side, Saureen held onto her arm, whereas on her other side, Chomper soothingly rubbed her back and watched Al for a reaction.

She had spoken in sharptooth, and Shorty nearby was translating as best he could for the leaf-eaters, as Lini’s rapid talking a shallow breathing had made it difficult for them to keep up. Shorty himself had a slight frown on his face, but looked up Lini after they had both finished and nodded solemnly. Most had expressions of similar understanding, although Cera was looking slightly resentful.

“Hang on...” she murmured in an undertone. “Is she saying that she actually...”

“Shush, for now, Cera...” Ruby whispered to her. She was watching Al closely. Cera sighed, but uncharacteristically did as she was told.

Al himself, with all eyes upon him, simply looked vacant. He was looking at Lini, but his purple eyes betrayed the look of someone far away. Eventually his focus shifted to the ground, and he said, rather sullenly,

“Lini...why are you telling us this?”

“W-why?” Lini repeated, caught off guard. “I...well, I thought you should know. I thought you should all know.”

“Is that so...?” Al murmured back, still staring into space. However, he soon snapped his eyes back upon Lini, and suddenly, their expression was angry. Lini felt a thrill of foreboding and a wave of cold pass over how as Al peered judgementally at her, the corner of his mouth curling.

“Why would we want to know about this?” he demanded of her with an almost venomous quality to his voice. “It would have been much better for you if we had kept this under wraps, so we don’t find out what you really are...” He looked her up and down, something he had previously done with considerable warmth. All of that had vanished now.

“Al...” Lini gasped, her eyes widening and her whole body trembling. “Please...don’t...”

“How could you, Lini?” Al snapped. “I thought I knew you. I thought you were so...sweet and innocent. But you took the path of the likes of scum like Gigas, and decided to torture and kill your fellow sharptooth??”

“Now hang on!” Saureen interjected, stepping forward to face Al, looking equally angry. “Do you mind laying off with those remarks?” For now Lini was openly crying, emitting shallow breaths in a futile attempt to stem the flow of tears that fell from her azure eyes. Chomper, still rubbing her back, was attempting to comfort her, but throwing Al a scandalized look as he did so.

Saureen, still glaring at Al, continued.

“Do you even care how she feels about it? Chomper and I...” Saureen glanced around, and then back at Al.

“Chomper and I had to persuade her not to kill herself!”

She could have sworn she saw a brief flicker of something softer pass over Al’s expressions, but the moment was fleeting, and he just stared coldly back at her.

“You were willing to forgive her, then?”

“Yes!” Saureen snarled. “Why the hell aren’t you?”

“Because I know the measure of some sharpteeth!” Al snarled back. “I thought you would be aware of this by now!”

“Well, I have to say...” came a slightly apprehensive voice. Cera may not have grasped the sharptooth language as easily as Shorty, but she was still able to follow the general gist of what was being said. Heads turned to look at her.

“Weren’t you all a bit quick to forgive...?” she asked, glancing at Saureen and Chomper. “I mean...I’m sure Lini does regret, but it all seems a bit...”

“Thanks for that!!” Saureen snarled at her, now striding in her direction. “But we don’t need him to be thrown a bone!”

“There’s no need to be like that!” Cera replied, firing up. “I’m simply saying that I think you’re being a bit too lenient...”

“That’s easy for you to say!” Saureen snapped. “But you weren’t there, with us, you didn’t see how she was...how could we not be??”

“Thanks Saureen...” Lini murmured, sniffing heavily. “But I can speak for myself.” She glanced at Cera.

“You don’t have to forgive me...” she said simply. “In fact, I don’t know why I expected anyone to...”

Cera looked uncomfortable, but didn’t say anything. Instead, Ruby leaned closer to her.

“Cera...surely you have regrets?”

“Well, yes!” Cera agreed. “But...hmm...” she fell silent.

Ducky was now looking at Lini, smiling sympathetically.

“I am really sorry for what happened to you, I am. I could never judge you for it, no, no, no.” Spike also nodded his agreement. Petrie also gave affirmations, nevertheless shuffling quickly to Spike’s side.

“I won’t hold you to blame either,” Littlefoot added, shrugging.

“Me neither,” Ali affirmed.

Even as Lini gave them small smiles, Al grunted with a combination of bemusement and disdain.

“Well, I am holding you to blame,” he said simply, gazing at Lini with a similar coldness. “I can’t just forget the whole thing this easily. I’m afraid no matter what you try and say, you can’t pretend this didn’t happen.”

“When did I even say that??” Lini demanded, horrified.

“You acted like it,” Al replied, coolly. “All smiles, acting like the big, supporting group member, and all this time you were no better than-”

“Stop it!” Now Chomper was glaring at him.

“Don’t even finish that sentence! I don’t want to hear it.” He marched forward and eyed Al furiously.

“Why the hell are you being like this? This is not the Al I’m used to, you’re normally so level-headed and...” he broke off, the reality of what he was experiencing hitting him.

But Al’s strange mood did not waver.

“I thought you, of all people, Chomper, would understand the very nature these so-called apex predators. Heartless, calculating...”

“This is Lini we’re talking about!” Chomper snarled back. “She had no real idea what she was doing – her morals and worldviews had been shaped ridiculously by the likes of Gigas-”

“Are you really using upbringing as an excuse?” Al demanded. “It doesn’t change someone’s choices, Chomper. She was still acting as a free agent.”
Chomper gave a hollow laugh.

“You really want to call her a free agent? Well, she is now, for sure, which is why she’s no longer in the act of systematic k-killing...” he stuttered somewhat on the word, but continued. “And you’re saying that the way someone was brought up doesn’t matter? Are you going to tell me that Nycha was in the wrong, no matter what the Tetrarchy did to her and her family?”

The memory of Nycha returning to him, Chomper’s emotions took over considerably – his voice was raised to a considerably carrying volume, and there was a deep growling element to it now, alarming is leaf-eater friends and causing Al to take a step back.

“Such a shame you didn’t get to tell her that before she died!!” Chomper roared, his voice heavy with sarcasm and potential foam beginning to form at the sides of his jaws. “I’m sure she would have loved to know it was all her fault!! It’s all easy for you to say isn’t it? You don’t even have a family!!”

This last sentence had an obvious stinging effect. At once, Al’s purple orbs reignited their rage, and he too began to growl.

“You know what??” he snarled. “I’m starting to think Seizon was right about you. You’re too naive, you understand the first thing about how to conduct yourself against your enemies. It was little wonder you were powerless to prevent Pyron-”

Chomper didn’t let him finish his sentence. Barrelling into him with an ear-splitting roar of rage, Chomper had Al on the ground before the latter even knew what was happening. He could vaguely hear his friends panicking and calling his name, but right now he didn’t care. He was snarling, and Al was snarling back, their jaws moving in on each other’s throats...

“Enough!!”

A huge leg had stamped into their midst, forcing them apart and rolling on the ground, shaking their heads in bewilderment. Chomper and Al sprang up to see the form of Opal striding towards them, casting a surveying eye over the twelve youngsters. Chomper glanced back at the others. Although their gaze mainly concerned Opal, they kept glancing back at him, looking quite concerned.

“Alright...” Opal murmured, gazing at them all and sighing heavily. “I heard most of that, and quite frankly Al, you’re being ridiculous.”

Al looked up at her indignantly.

“What do you know?” he demanded.

“Considering my own husband was killed by sharpteeth,” Opal replied patiently. “Quite a bit. I know exactly what sharpteeth do and the desperation of their situations that lead them to do certain acts...I’m sure I’m not the only one who’s experienced this.”

Littlefoot nodded meekly. But Cera, looking suddenly confused, spoke up,

“Hang on...you have a husband?”

“Actually, in my time, I’ve had two...” Opal murmured. She shook her head hurriedly.
“Right now, it’s irrelevant. My point is Al, I’m astounded. I thought Lini had taken you. Or rather, taken your heart.”

Al didn’t say anything. His line of vision was now focused on Zyro, somewhere in the distance, in discussion with Old One. Lini was still gazing intently in his direction however.

“I hate to break it to you,” came a voice. “But he’s always like this.”

All thirteen of them, caught completely off guard, turned to see Screech and Thud standing behind them, looking completely relaxed and slightly amused by the situation, despite their noticeable injuries.

Opal, the only one amongst them who had no knowledge of the sharptooth language, allowed Chomper to translate for her, before asking,

“How do you mean?”

After receiving the translation, Screech laughed loudly, and Thud replied,

“Just because he’s completely blameless, he thinks everyone who has done something regrettable in their entire lives is completely beyond redeeming. Never mind that Shark and Zyro’s vision is to help sharpteeth who are in desperate situations, or that we were instrumental in saving everyone’s butts...no, we were once with Redclaw, so we are the scum of the earth!”

“I see,” Opal murmured, after receiving Chomper’s bitter translation. “Al, it’s great that you such an absolute view of the world’s morality, but maybe it’s time you grew up.”

“What??” Al snapped his head round, suddenly angry again.

“Everyone has some blemish in their past,” Opal went on. “You can’t just push others away via that particular judgement. I have a great regret that I have, up until recently, forgotten entirely...”

All eyes were on her now. She couldn’t not explain now...she sighed.

“I once lived in the Great Valley,” she said. “A long time ago. My husband, Omendric, led the Valley until his death, upon which Ulciscor took his advantage. In our desperation, and our cowardice, I and his brother, Ronan, fled.” She closed her eyes and gave a sad smile. “I get the feeling I was the one who persuaded him to turn his back, but we soon both forgot, trying to ignore the horrifying tales coming from the Valley under Ulciscor’s suffocating regime. We even got together ourselves, and had an egg. But then one day he came for us.”

“Who???” Littlefoot asked in awe.

“Ulciscor’s greatest follower...” Opal replied bitterly. “The fabled stinging longneck, the one called Kai.”

Cera made an appropriate noise of disgust.

“I don’t even know quite what he wanted,” Opal admitted. “By then I was sure Ulciscor’s regime had fallen. But he attacked us. Relentlessly...took out Ronan, and I was sure I was taken out too...I woke up with the rainbowfaces with no memory of who I was.” She sighed. “I think it was payback for running when I did. From this heap of regret, however, I’m glad one thing went right.” She now, drawing deep breaths and heart hammering, finally lowered her eyes upon Spike.

“I’m glad my child survived. And I’m glad he went on to live happily, with those who cared for, and loved him. And I’m glad...that I finally got to meet him.”

For a brief second, everyone just stood in a silent confusion. Then the penny dropped.

“Wait...!!” Cera looked scandalised, glancing from Opal, to Spike, and then back again. “You mean...?”

Ruby made a soft ëohhh’ of understanding, and simply smiled.

Spike was staring back at Opal, completely motionless, his heart pounding against his ribcage, his mind numb with disbelief. Eventually, his lips moved.

“M...ma...”

“I know you might think this is a bad time,” Opal went on hurriedly, tears now beginning to leak from her eyes. “I know we can’t rekindle a proper connection having spent all this time apart, and I know you feel far more connected to the one you now call mother, but...” she gulped. “But soon we will be marching off the war, and although hope is high, we have no guarantee what will happen. The only real certainty is that Ulciscor will not be pleased to see me. And if I go, I’d like to let you know beforehand...and live in hope that what’s connecting us is the one thing we have over Ulciscor. The fact that we’re all here because we believe in each other...” She glanced briefly back at Al. “That we are all connected by a common goal and the love we all have. The love we all share. There is real love here, I can tell...”

Her words sent a shiver through the group of youngsters, who all glanced at one another in equally appropriate ways.

“It gives me some joy knowing that, even if the Valley itself doesn’t survive, what it stood for will continue on for a long time...” she finished, gazing at them all with a very solemn pride.

Al, allowing himself to me momentarily swept away, turned back to face everyone.

“Maybe you’re right...” he murmured. “And I’m sorry for what I said concerning Pyron...he was my friend too...”

Without looking Lini in the eye, he turned his back on her.

“I’ll allow some bonding to go on, if you believe it should,” he said monotonously, before beginning to walk away.

“But Al!!” Lini called, speaking up again after a long silence. “What about us??”

Al paused briefly, before continuing walking away without a word to her.

*
“Yep, this is definitely the place...”

Seizon’s confirmation caused another, slightly far away grin to settle over Xal’s face.
“The Grand Cave Network...” he murmured. “So many stories I’ve heard...and now it will be the key to our victory.

He strode towards the entrance, Seizon carefully following. Ichy and Dil were nearby, resting against a conveniently placed rock.

“Anyone would think you were hurt!” Ichy observed, smirking slightly.

“I’d like to see how you’d come off in a fight with a spiketail!” Dil retorted, twisting her head around to squint at her wounds. “Ichy, why did Xal want me out here anyway? I’m hardly going to fare well in a fight with Bludgeoners!”

“Oh, he knows I have great authority over you,” Ichy replied dryly. “It’s my tactical skills he wants. Besides...” his tone of voice now changed. “Once he gets what he wants, you’ll be in immediate priority. It’ll be useful in finding...you know...”

“Don’t insult me,” Dil growled. “As if I would forget my own daughter! And what about you? I take it you have agenda too?”

“I thought I did,” Ichy admitted. “But maybe that’s quite considerably gone...I don’t think anything I do will hold any weight...”

“Damn it, Ichy!” Dil sighed. “Will I ever be rid of you??”

Ichy simply smiled, but didn’t reply.

Back at the mouth of the cave, Xal was peering intently into the network. It was still a few hours until sunrise, so he could barely see a think. Sniffing intently, he growled, and said in a carrying whisper.

“The average leaf-eater is the great oppressor.”

Slightly confused at this, Seizon jumped when he heard a reply coming from the cave.

“But the average sharptooth is a sibling to unite with. Well, Xal, you took your time.”

“It was necessary,” Xal replied, now looking more relaxed. “What’s this network like?”

“Bizarre,” the voice replied. “It floods half the time, and there were a pack of young misfits jealously guarding some shiny stones.” At this, both bladebacks noticed a small, slightly whitish object come flying out of the gloom, landing with a clatter at Xal’s feet. Seizon peered round to take a good look at it, and felt his heart briefly stop.

It was a small, sharptooth’s skull. And not just from any sharptooth. This skull was immediately distinguished by its short and deep shape. And the two horns atop it...

Seizon remembered how he had told Nott that he never should have messed with Xal. And how those words had literally come back to him. He felt a stab of sympathy, but it was short lived. Nott had had it coming. Besides, there were more important things to worry about.

Now striding into view was a jet-black Piercer, with several narrow red lines upon her back. Her eyes were a deep, blood-red also, and she was looking at Xal quizzically.
“So what’s the issue here?” she asked.

“It’s quite simple, Zoe,” Xal replied. “We’ve got to follow a large alliance of sharpteeth and flatteeth to the Great Valley, and wait until they and Ulciscor’s forces have all but destroyed each other before heading in ourselves.”

“Sounds like sheer suicide,” Zoe replied boredly. “But it might work. Once you’re in control of the Valley, assuming that’s even a possibility, I’m hoping my own agenda will be considered?”

“As with everyone’s desires, yes,” Xal nodded curtly.

Seizon was watching this exchange with a coupled fascination and outrage. This Piercer, whom he had never seen before, was speaking to Xal as though he were nothing...

“Show respect!!” he snarled at her. “Without Xal, your goal will never be realised!”

Zoe looked at him coldly.

“And what do you want out of this revolution of his?” she asked.

Seizon quickly changed the subject.

“What was it you said to her at the beginning?” he asked Xal.

“A passcode,” Xal replied briskly. “One of Eykion’s sayings. Helps us keep track of each other. Now, I need to help Zoe mobilize the Piercers, go and make sure those two...” he jerked his head in Ichy and Dil’s direction, “know what we’re doing...”

Seizon obediently walked over, his mind working furiously. So, Xal’s pledge was to help all those who helped him revolt with whatever issues the world had given them? It seemed perfectly in sync with the world he had envisaged; he just hoped there would be room for his older friends in that world too.

On the subject of old friends, he noticed a lilac feather sticking out of the ground nearby. It looked a bit worse for wear, but it was definitely Nycha’s – the very one she had plucked from her head to place on Pyron’s grave. After a great many weeks, he was finally back here.

“Fallen companion?” Ichy asked quietly, as Seizon knelt down upon the mound of earth.

“Yeah...” Seizon muttered absent-mindedly, gazing at the single feather intently.

He placed his hand upon the earth, staring hard at the feather, as his mind rolled back to Pyron.

“Forget Al, you were the real peacemaker...” he thought solemnly. “Goodness only knows what you’d say to me if you saw me now, Pyron. Would you rebuke me? Or just tell me to continue, trying to get the best result possible...” Seizon glanced at Xal, whom was in deep conversation with Zoe, as many more Piercers, possible numbering thirty, milled around, preparing...

One objective, Seizon told himself. One objective...and then everything followed on from that...

*

The early hours of the morning continued to trend until obvious signs of pre-dawn were upon the dinosaurs that inhabited the Great Valley. With the clouds rolling over, and the stars beginning to disappear, a light breeze whistled harshly through the largely bare trees, the branches creaking...

The signs would have been obvious, but most Valley inhabitants were asleep, their dreams disturbed my mingled excitement and fear. They had all heard the whisper of liberation, but their lives were still ruled by a monstrosity who could take their lives with a single command...

Movement existed solely in the form of this monstrosity. Ulciscor was wide awake, pacing back and forth at the bank of the watering hole were the Thundering Falls gushed abundantly, and gazing at his reflection. Nearby, his parents slept, guarded by fanatical and loyal Bludgeoners.

Ulciscor knew that they were talking of liberation and rebellion. But finding the source of this rumour and crushing it was a lot more difficult. It had seemingly come from nowhere. If these dinosaurs had rekindled some backbone, then it could prove disastrous for his plans. Maybe some new measure was necessary.

Ulciscor considered. What new measure would keep them under his thumb?

There were their children of course – but kill them and they would have nothing left to lose...although keeping them hostage and holding to a ransom of their undying obedience...yes, that would be better!

Ulciscor smiled to himself, but this smile was short-lived, when he remembered the enemies he had beyond these walls. He knew it were only a matter of time before their forces were scraped together once more.

“I have fortified the Valley...” he told himself firmly. “The East mountain wall is blockaded with solid rock. If those sharpteeth do return, we will be forewarned...”

But if, Ulciscor continued to himself, if there are enemies on all sides, where would he expand next? His plan had always been to fortify the Valley and expand his armies...

“Everything just moves so slowly...” Ulciscor thought mutionously. “If I am to rid the world of the curse that is sharpteeth, I will have to expand my horizons beyond the Great Valley...”

At that moment, he heard a rustling and heavy footfalls heralded the arrival of another at the water’s edge. Peering through the darkness, he saw the distinctive form of his greatest lieutenant, looking very content.

“Where have you been?” Ulciscor demanded.

“Just been cleansing the area,” Kai replied nonchalantly, lowering his neck to drink. “Managed to uproot what looked to be a family group of sharpteeth.” A small grin appeared on his face. “Took only a few minutes to deal with them all.”

“We have Bludgeoners for that!” Ulciscor snapped. “Bludgeoners that are stationed on the exterior of the Valley to watch for any approaching force. Their job is to deal with sharpteeth, I need you here! What if something important had come up? But by all means continue to enjoy your sport!”

Kai, raising his head, glared back at the iron-grey longneck.

“I am merely keeping myself occupied,” he growled back. “I have been asking constantly if there’s any other task you require of me. What with sending me to the Fanged Forest and tailing your nephew, I thought you had planned further ahead. But there is simply nothing left to do. They all live in fear of us, why do I even need to enforce it? Shouldn’t we be cleansing the land of sharpteeth, as you always pledged to do??”

“It’s not as simple as that,” Ulciscor replied shortly, now striding around the water’s edge to be closer to him. “But you are right – it is time we got things moving.”

“Oh really?” Kai watched him closely. “How so?”

“It’s time we rallied more leaf-eaters to our cause. Only the pure stock, of course. But I get the feeling I’ll need to retrace some of my steps from the past.”

“Like when you recruited me?” Kai murmured, a look of what may have been reminiscence passing across his face.

“Technically, yes.” Ulciscor replied. “But I’ve been wandering for a long time, and with something as vital as this, it may result in digging up many ghosts. I’ll have to head off myself, alone. I don’t want to draw every eye.”

“And what of the Valley?”

“Oh, that’s where you come in.” Ulciscor’s smile of malice had returned. “Sorry, did I not mention?”

Kai’s eyes grew wide.

“Yes – because you have generated a great sense of fear and order into the Valley’s populace!” Ulciscor told him, continuing to pace.

“They all live in abject terror of you. Everywhere you go, they call you the longneck that stings, or words to that affect. I know you can control a crowd, and you can fulfil my noble goals. When I leave in a few days time, I will be leaving you in charge. You can do that for me, yes?”

“Oh yes!” Kai’s eyes were gleaming and he was practically salivating with excitement. “Yes sir, I won’t let you down!”

“Good,” Ulciscor said. “Now, go and get some sleep. I don’t wish for you to be wandering from the Valley again without permission, alright?”

Kai bowed his head, and with a grin wide enough to swallow his entire face, strode away, leaving Ulciscor to gaze at his reflection once more, his mind elsewhere.

*
The ghostly shape loomed into view against the inky black sky, but its identity was unmistakable. The destination had been reached.

Chomper knew their journey must have been considerable. Dawn could only be an hour or so from breaking, but the long trek of the large group of longnecks, sharpteeth, one spiketail and few random kids had left him much time to think. He supposed it helped that Rhea had insisted on carrying him atop her head for a lot of the journey so that he could get some sleep, and had gone strangely deaf when he pointed out that she needed her sleep too.

Even as tired as he was, there was no way Chomper could have slept. With every step the great liberating alliance took, Chomper’s panic had mounted. It was just beginning to occur to him what faced them – they, along with everyone he knew in the Great Valley were about to do battle with a group of murderous longnecks in the sheer hope that this would someone leave a decisive victory? It seemed the only option given what he knew about Ulciscor, but all the same, there was a good chance many of whom strode amongst him wouldn’t make it to see the next sunset. What if was Old One, the wise and aged longneck who carried such maternal power? What if it was Zyro, the bilingual and agile sharptooth whom had taken such responsibility on his shoulders? Or maybe even Opal, the once leader of the Valley, and Spike’s real mother? His heart sank even lower when he came to terms with the possibility that it could be either one or both of his parents. Of the casualties of the battle, it could also be Littlefoot, Saureen, Ruby, or another one of the friends he held so dear...

When these kind of thoughts struck him, he had persuaded his mother to lower him to the ground, so he could walk off some excess stress, and spend some time with the friends he had conglomerated. Although none of them spoke much, there was a mutual recognition and appreciation that walking with each other was something they wanted to do, just to linger more with each other before the inevitable battle. Saureen walked close beside him, in the close wake of Ferox, whom kept glancing back to check she was still with him. Saureen’s hand was easily visible by her side, and Chomper, remembering what Opal had told them about their love holding them together, grew curious sensations and felt the overwhelming desire to take hold of it, and squeeze it tight, if just to remind her that he was still there...?

But he refrained. Maybe it would just seem out of place. He had no clue. Was there love permeating amongst their group? Well, yes, definitely, but Chomper was still unsure whether she had been referring to the love you feel for true companions who will always have your back, or the love you feel for someone who you want to spend your life with...? Maybe both. Chomper was pretty sure Ali and Shorty had that kind of relationship – they hadn’t left each other’s side since the Fanged Forest. And Lini and Al had that too – or, they had done. Al had still refused to speak to Lini, and by extension, any of them, walking ahead by Zyro’s side. Chomper felt only a great boiling anger for Al’s self-righteous attitude, but all that bubbled away into cold terror and guilt when he wondered how he would feel if Al were to fall in the ensuing battle without them having reconciled...

And yet all this fear, guilt, anger and the dawning of brewing love largely evaporated from Chomper to be replaced with adrenalin and anticipation once he had caught sight of the unmistakable shape – Saurus Rock stood, lonely but stubborn, against the dark sky. Many months after being forcibly taken from it by a pair of enthusiastic young sharpteeth, he was back home at last. It was hard to believe that beyond the glorious mountain walls he knew so well, was a terrifying and oppressive state that they had come to aggressively resist against.

This sign had obviously been noticed by everyone, as the large marching alliance had come to a sudden halt.
There was silence, except for a few sniffs coming from Zyro.

“OK...” he breathed, though the alliance could hear quite clearly. “We’re facing the West wall, although we can detect a few guards directly ahead. Part of Ulciscor’s Bludgeon Brigade. Before we can get anything done, we’ll need to take them out. Quickly and without drawing too much attention. If you don’t mind me saying so, I think sharpteeth are the best option.”
“How so?” A longneck asked.

“Firstly, we’re smaller,” Zyro explained. “Secondly, we can find our way around the dark with our sense of smell. We have the advantage over them. Thirdly, they are more likely to expect sharpteeth to attack them. It’ll seem less suspicious, and there will be less of a desire to report this strange mishap and just initiate a slaughter.” He had a slightly grim smile as he finished.

After gathering a few medium-sized sharpteeth, including Screech and Thud, Zyro fled quickly but silently off, advising the group to follow him slowly. As they did so, they began to hear the sounds of angry grunts, snarls and thuds, whilst vision was limited. As they drew nearer, the sounds grew louder, until there was a resolute and final thud that sounded like it was caused by considerably more than a body falling to the ground. As they continued their approach, Zyro crept back to them, looking windswept, but noticeably pleased.

“We got a little hand,” he panted, inclining his head towards a figure clearly visible against the wall of rock.

“Pterano!?” Petrie gave a strangled gasp, repeated by many of his friends.

“Quieten down, now!” Pterano advised, nevertheless accepting the hug that Petrie offered him as he zipped towards him. “Yes, Old One recruited me for this task. I’ve been hanging with her herd for quite a while...”

“How come you never said anything??” Cera demanded, casting an accusatory eye over at Old One. Old One merely smiled.

“Pterano preferred anonymity for now,” she said simply.

“Yes, but I figured I would have to show myself at some point, and why not drop a rock whilst you’re at it?” Pterano remarked, gazing at the nearby body of a Bludgeoner, its skull clearly flattened by a fairly sizeable rock. Most of the group averted their eyes.

“In any case,” Pterano also tried to detract attention from the slightly grisly scene. “I have managed to recruit a rebel in the Valley for the task of getting you all through this wall. I left him up there...” He quickly flew upwards to the top of the slope, and upon his descent, carefully carried a figure clinging to his leg.

“Hyp?” Littlefoot exclaimed, craning his neck as soon as he recognised the features. “What...what have you been doing?”

“What anyone would have done!” Hyp replied stubbornly, staggering slightly as Pterano set him down. He gazed curiously up at the liberation force, looking slightly alarmed at all the large sharpteeth.

“According to Hyp, one of the Bludgeoners has defected,” Pterano exclaimed. “A chap called Uriah, who has informed us that this wall is where the prisoners are kept-”

“Now, hang on!” Cera protested. “How can we be sure he’s not just trying to trap us all??”

“Hmm...” Old One looked thoughtfully at her, before turning back to Pterano and Hyp.

“She has a point, you know,” she remarked. “What evidence do you have...?”
“Uriah came to me even before he heard there was rescue force on its way!” Hyp explained dismissively. “And kept me hidden whilst everyone else is baying for my blood! Besides, I have previous. I’ve seen Ulciscor imprison leaf-eaters in here!”

There was a lot of muttering at this, before Old One spoke up.

“So, now we attempt to get a clear way through this wall and free the prisoners at the same time.”

“But how?” Zyro looked troubled. “Doing both at once will draw an enormous amount of attention, and we’re pretty close to losing this cover of darkness as it is...”

Old One nodded, frowning, and turned back to Hyp.

“Couldn’t Uriah station himself at the other side to help everyone through?” she asked.

“He has,” Hyp replied. “But he doesn’t want to blow his cover until the entire force has got through, which might be a little difficult...”

“Couldn’t he offer to guard the caverns himself?” Bron asked.

“Ulciscor doesn’t allow it,” Pterano explained. “He’s been getting increasingly paranoid. He requires them always to work in at least pairs, and tends to switch these pairs around so no double conspiracy can happen...”

This led to more, much longer muttering. The leaders were pretty baffled by this turn of events, and it was several minutes before Opal walked over to Zyro and whispered in his ear.

Frowning prominently, he gazed at her.

“Are you sure she’s up to it?” he asked.

“Oh yes,” Opal nodded grimly. “She seemed very enthused when she told me, actually. And we know that someone moving through the caverns can’t be anyone very large, or indeed a sharptooth, as any one of Ulciscor’s followers would kill them on sight. And she promises that, timed correctly, she’s sure it could work.”

“It does seem promising,” Zyro admitted. “But it’s taking an awful risk...”

“We’re running out of time,” Opal reminded him, still looking grim.

Zyro sighed, gazed up into the sky as though asking for forgiveness, before saying,

“Ruby?”

Ruby immediately stepped forward, her face shining with anticipation. Adults on either side of her drew back to let her through.

“Yes?” she asked eagerly.

“I think your idea could be put into action...”

Ruby grinned.
“Excellent.”

“Wait, what idea is this?” Old One asked abruptly. Zyro was about to explain when Ruby cut across him.

“No, I know there’ll be protests – and we don’t have time to waste protesting.” She immediately strode to Pterano and whispered hurriedly in his ear. Pterano frowned, but nodded, and quickly took off.

“Wait!” Chomper stepped forward. “What is this??”

“In short, I’ll be heading into the caverns,” Ruby replied. “Chomper, relax – it’s something I’m very much used to, and the next stage of operations can take place from there...”

“Which I think we all should know,” Old One said sternly. “This is very poor form...”

“Zyro will fill you in,” Ruby explained quickly, gazing around the wall she was facing for an opening. “Right now, we don’t have time...”

“Well,

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The Written Word / Dinosaur Ethology
« on: July 17, 2015, 05:47:52 AM »
TROODON

Description: Some of the most abundant small theropods in North America during the Late Cretaceous, Troodon and their relatives are also noted for being some of the most intelligent – it is probably for this reason that they are so successful. Their ability to hunt at night is unparalleled by any other dinosaur, particularly in the Northernmost species, right within the Arctic circle. Other species spread down as far south as Texas, and are normally found throughout North America. They are typically about 2 metres (6 ft) long, although individuals of the Arctic subspecies, Troodon formosus borealis have been reported at almost four metres (13 ft). In all subspecies of Troodon, the cocks and hens tend to be of similar size, dimorphism being noted in the elaborate head-crest of the cocks, the colouration depending on the species. The most common subspecies, found in the open woodlands of Montana and Alberta (Troodon formosus formosus) are typically mottled and mossy green-brown colour. Most Southern species tend to be a more light tan sandy coloured, sometimes even grading to a deep grey. The Arctic ëborealis’ subspecies, colloquially and popularly known as ëwoolly raptors,’ have black and white patterned plumage, although the black tends to fade into white during the winter months.

Lifestyle:: Troodon are highly sociable animals, and flock together in large groups known by the collective noun of ëassemblies.’ Each assembly can have up to 60 individuals, mainly breeding pairs, who build complex nests of twigs and vegetation, laid within a trench. Troodon tend to be fussy about ornamentation, and decorate the circumference of these nests with stones picked up from all sorts of places. Cocks are usually tasked with picking up the stones, and are noted to prefer larger and more rounded stones than knobbly shingles. Although Troodon couplings are usually long-lasting, some hens have been observed allowing cocks they are not nesting with to mate with them in exchange for superior stones when both their partners’ backs are turned. This is not the only known example of albeit rare dinosaur prostitution, but never is it more prominent than in Troodon.
These Troodon pairs raise chicks together, the down of which varies from canary yellow and snow white to grey. Although for the first week or so they feed the chicks which regurgitated meat matter, soon all the chicks within the assembly forage for food with the adults. Although they do forage for food during the day, Troodon are most active nocturnally, using their large eyes and thermoregulation to come into their own. The chicks learn to forage and hunt by imitating their elders, and there could easily be a lot to learn. The diet of the adult Troodon is immensely varied – they can take on insects, other small invertebrates and grubs by digging deep within the soil. By this method they have also been known to flush out small mammals, which they also eat, along with lizards, snakes, birds and the occasional dinosaur, normally a small ornithopod, although the Northern woolly raptors have been known to take on hadrosaurs such as Edmontosaurus in the harsh, Arctic winter, ganging up on them co-operatively. Although generally carnivorous, Troodon will also dig for roots, tubers and fungi if their normal food sources are scarce. A southern species of Troodon that lives by the coast of the Western interior seaway has been documented as adapting its diet to almost entirely one of seafood. They specialize in crushing ammonite shells and taking on turtle and pterosaur eggs. With such abundant opportunists around, who’s going to tell them to stop?  

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General Land Before Time / Littlefoot's identity
« on: July 10, 2015, 05:51:02 AM »
I agree, Apatosaurus does sound better to me also.  :lol:

Although Seismosaurus and Anatotitan also sounded better... :(

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General Land Before Time / Littlefoot's identity
« on: July 09, 2015, 03:47:11 PM »
So, most of you have probably heard about Brontosaurus' return to the valid genera of dinosaurs earlier this year. For some, it may have generated a lot of enthusiasm, but for someone who learned that Brontosaurus didn't exist from quite a young age, I won't be impressed until they use nomenclature to bring back my old favourites Seismosaurus and Anatotitan.  :lol

But the real question is this - what is Littlefoot?
See, I remember vaguely the blurb of a VHS of the original Land Before Time that identified him as a Brontosaurus, which I dismissed as a pop culture error, and from that point on referred to him and his relatives as an Apatosaurus. But since this reclassification I haven't been sure - it doesn't help that his dad's called Bron. Other people I have seen list him as an Apatosaurus ajax, the type species of Apatosaurus, rather than Apatosaurus excelsus which is now known as Brontosaurus excelsus although I always went with A. excelsus...

So, what do you guys think? I know it's rather pointless classifying these guys as such, but still...

And knowing this makes my potential Cera/Ruby ship cooler, cause Ruby is an Oviraptor philoceratops, or an egg-thief who loves ceratopsians... :lol

That's still a maybe...I'm not sure if I can do dinosaur romance convincingly.  :oops Check out my fanfiction and see what you think.

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Starday Wishes / Happy Starday, Dosu2Dinner!
« on: June 26, 2015, 05:39:40 PM »
I got here a bit late... :o But thanks all anyway!

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LBT Fanfiction / Femslash in VV??
« on: June 07, 2015, 02:46:06 PM »
Alas, I probably still would have went for it. I was just curious to hear other people's opinions.  :p  :yes

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LBT Fanfiction / Femslash in VV??
« on: June 07, 2015, 01:13:41 PM »
Hi all!

Right, first and foremost, I bloody promise to finish VV. At the moment, I am in the midst of exams, and so have not found any time to write and plan. I do however, finish on the 17th, and won't have anything more to do for about three months. So, hopefully there will be relatively rapid updates after that!  :lol

But I have been going over the plot several times in my head, and it's just come to me that I may have to pull something towards the end that I never thought I'd do in an LBT fanfic.

Romance is a tricky issue that I've wondered about as I wrote this. Part of me feels I'm just too sentimental a person not to include romantic elements, but another part of me finds dino romance and little...odd...but I think I'm now firmly in the camp of 'screw it, let's have romance' and one thing that I've found out when considering the plot is that, completely unintentionally, Cera and Ruby have fallen in love.  :blink:

Whilst developing their characters, everything just seemed so fitting. They've had more intimate moments, they've discussed their family, their roles in the Valley, and they just seem like perfect foils and compliments to each other.
I wasn't sure about this, until I remembered something which would just make the Cera/Ruby couple even more perfect. Ruby's species name is Oviraptor philoceratops. That second part? Yeah, it means 'lover of ceratopsians.'
Now, originally this was a reference to the belief that Oviraptor routinely stole the eggs of Protoceratops, but you can interpret it however you like.  :p

But what do you think about it? I think, whatever your opinions are, I'll probably just go ahead and include it. I hope this is a forum of tolerant people, who won't object simply to having a same-sex couple in this. LBT is all about diversity and tolerance.

Yes, they are different species. But so are Lini and Al, and the size differences will be considerable when older...so, over to you! What do you think?

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LBT Fanfiction / Venatione Venatus
« on: April 04, 2015, 06:18:43 PM »
Neeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwww chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Ha, bet you all thought I was finished with this, didn't ya? Ha, don't count me out just yet!!!
 :lol:  :lol
I should point out that most of this isn't proof-read, so...just bear that in mind...OTHERWISE PLEASE ENJOY!!!

Chapter Twenty-Three: Skirmish in the Fanged Forest

Who was this plucky little longneck, who, in a second language, spoke with such command?

Ichy, perching on Dil’s nose, kept his eyes fixed on Shorty as he and the rest of the leaf-eater gang were escorted to a place of confinement. Or, if you wanted to be crude, storage.

It wasn’t as if being bilingual was something far-fetched and out of reach. Ichy and Dil themselves had picked up the leaf-eater dialect when they were both trapped together in the Land of Mists, but only so it was easier to pick out prey. For their prey items to learn what they considered a more sophisticated language was something else – not to mention the way his simple words had affected Xal…

“What do you think?” Ichy asked of Dil in an undertone.

“I’m thinking I want your twittering voice to cease forever…” Dil growled. “What do you mean?”

Ichy scowled.

“That flathead. The green one – how does he carry such command in his voice? He was able to change Xal’s mind. Xal’s! The one who could end his life with a single word…how? How did he know exactly what points to probe?”

Dil considered for a moment.

“Maybe…” she eventually murmured. “Maybe…if we get him into his comfort zone, make him relax a little…he’ll be willing to tell us?”

“A freezing cold cave used for storing food is hardly a comfortable place.” Ichy retorted. “But I guess we can try…”

Unlike Chomper and Saureen’s confinement, Shorty, Littlefoot and the others found themselves led to the opening of a small cave, somehow imbedded into a hill near the other side of the forest. No Piercers were guarding it, which seemed strange, until as the young leaf-eaters approached, their nostrils began to fill with the unmistakable stench of…

Spike, first to smell it, stopped dead in his tracks, eyes widening and emitting frightened noises. The rest hardly needed to ask why when the odour of ancient carcasses came to them as well.

“These caves were used as…well, storage for food quite a while back. Relax, everything in there is dead, mostly skeletons. They all died a long time ago…” Ichy was now hovering above the petrified youngsters, unsure of how best to convince them to go in. Eventually Dil came to his rescue, emitting loud growls and snarls, causing the young leaf-eaters to hurry into the cave quickly, shooting scandalised looks at the two mismatched sharpteeth as they did so. Once they were in, Dil quickly waddled over to a large boulder, roughly spheroid in shape, at one side of the mouth of the cave and, using her brute strength, managed to roll the stone over the entrance, but leaving a small crack to peer through – she and Ichy still wanted to probe answers out of Shorty.

The eight young leaf-eaters, shut away in the dark and the cold, with just a thin slice of silver moonlight giving them illumination, all shivered, before exchanging looks and preparing to make use of their surroundings. Shorty immediately flopped onto the cave floor, his neck to the ground, eyeing the prowling belly-dragger and hovering sharpbeak outside intently. Ali carefully lay down next to him, her eyes upon him, feeling as though it would be inappropriate to say anything. Littlefoot lay nearby, watching them both, his eyes occasionally wandering to see how the rest of his friends were doing. Cera had not settled down – she was busy pacing back and forth, edging between the carcasses and faced away from everyone else, her expression hidden. Only Ruby had a fixed gaze on her. Spike, Ducky and Petrie meanwhile, had huddled together for warmth, in the way they always did, clinging to their routines in act of defying the dramatic and traumatising events of change that now surrounded them.

“Good...”
Ichy landed on the ground beside Dil and also peered through the gap, a sinister gleam in his yellow eyes only matched by the smirk on his beak. “Glad to know you’re all getting comfortable...you’ll soon be used to this after all...”

The youngsters shivered at these words and averted his gaze, with the exception of Shorty, who grew a small, satisfied smile and replied almost instantly.

“Well,” he said in fluent sharptooth. “That just goes to show how much you know...”

All of the other youngsters minus Cera shot him a glance following his words, and each of them felt a simultaneous rush of admiration that he was able to speak for them all so defiantly. Ali gave him an extremely warm smile and closed her eyes in a slow, affectionate manner reminiscent of a kitten.

Ichy’s smile slipped slightly, but he didn’t retort and react immediately. Instead he continued to survey Shorty’s seemingly calm expression, and found that on closer inspection, there was definitely a contrasting emotion, tucked forcibly away behind those blue eyes. One that Ichy normally saw just before he ended the life of whichever unfortunate animal was his prey.

Fear.

Upon noticing this, his smile returned ten-fold.

“Well,” he said superciliously. “There are a few things I’d like to know. Your linguistics. You speak fluent sharptooth, and that to me, is quite an achievement. How did you manage it?”

“Teaching,” Shorty replied simply. “We had a great teacher.”

“And that would be...?”

“Chomper...!” Littlefoot suddenly cut in defiantly, surprising even himself. When Ali turned to watch him, he shook off his inhibitions and continued, now addressing the puzzled avian expression watching him from the mouth of the cave.

“No matter what you may call him, or need him for, you’ll find that he has so much more to give. And you’re not going to take that away, whatever you do to him...”
Shorty nodded appreciatively, and soon everyone else was getting their opinions in.

“He is our true companion, he is!!” Ducky declared boldly.

“That for sure!” Petrie added, fixing Ichy with an expression of profound dislike. “He not abandon us for anything!”

“And what about you?” Shorty asked, eyes narrowing with amusement. “What role do you two play in this grand plan?”

For once, Ichy was lost for words.

Dil chuckled darkly.

“Well, look at that Ichy! Looks like they’ve suddenly grown backbone. How will you respond to that?”

Ichy frowned and turned away from the cave mouth.

“I have no words left for them...” he muttered, walking some distance away before sitting down, his back defiantly turned. Dil just gazed at him with mingled amusement and curiosity, before settling down in front of the cave herself, her gleaming red eyes half-open.

“What I want to know,” Shorty continued, now in a softer tone and in leaf-eater. “Is where you lot know them from?”

Ruby, taking her eyes off Cera briefly, simply shrugged, but Ali answered.

“Way back when I first met Littlefoot, we had to go and get the Night Flower from the Land of Mists for his grandpa,” she explained. “Those guys were there, chasing us around for a lot of it...they seemed to be desperately hungry, now I think about it...”

“That’s very true...” Littlefoot agreed, craning his neck to keep them both in earshot whilst feeling it would be awkward to move closer. He wasn’t quite sure where this idea came from, but part of him was nudging and whispering at him to stay still.

“I wonder,” Littlefoot continued, turning to glance at the mouth of the cave. “How did they end up here, working with Xal?”

“Maybe Xal just has a habit of picking up all the dispossessed...” Shorty murmured, his mind reeling. “No wonder Seizon follows him so blindly...”

Littlefoot and Ali were now both gazing intently at him.

“You think that’s the reason?” Littlefoot asked. Shorty shrugged.

“All I know is that a dedication to someone who gave your whole life meaning isn’t something you can shake off easily. Probably not at all in fact.” He sighed.

“I know exactly how he feels...it’s just a shame that the one he chooses to pledge his life to someone who will waste it. Perhaps that’s Xal’s greatest strength – turning ordinary dinosaurs into weapons because he knows they’ll do anything for him...”
He relapsed into silence. Bar Cera, all his companions were watching him, wide-eyed, as though he were about to blossom into something paradoxically miraculous. But after a few more moments of silence, Littlefoot spoke up.

“But how do you know Xal doesn’t feel something for Seizon?” he asked carefully. “He is his stepfather after all – that’s got to have a deeper and more profound meaning than, say, the reasons Redclaw and the others are working with him.”

“Believe me,” Shorty answered at once, now fixing his gaze upon his stepbrother. “I know and understand the deep and profound meaning fatherhood of any kind has. And you may be right – but so is Chomper. Xal is mad and dangerous if he even considers forming an alliance with Redclaw and this Gigas character, no matter what he may mean to Seizon. As similar as mine and his cases are, they’re also different. Because there are some who it’s worth putting your faith in.”

He gave Littlefoot a small smile before placing his head back on the floor. Ali, who was already monumentally close to him at this point, moved her own head atop her neck across the cave floor so it was touching Shorty’s.

“I always knew you’d grow to understand,” she whispered, flashing him a bright smile that caused heat to rise in Shorty’s cheeks.

“Oh?” he managed to mutter back.

“You’ve spent a lot of your life learning to put your faith in many individuals,” Ali replied, her eyes moving across the features on his small head. “Starting with Bron – but you don’t like to talk about it, and perhaps for that reason you forget how much the rest of us have grown our faith in you.”

Shorty didn’t respond. He just kept watching her, eyes still wide. Ali, still smiling, lifted her head up and placed it on top of his.

“Never forget who else you mean something to,” she continued. “Because it’s often more than you think...”

Shorty closed his eyes, and despite the trepidation, allowed his delight and raw emotions flood his brain and leak a broad grin across his face.

Littlefoot, watching them, lowered his head to consider his conflicting thoughts and feelings. Part of him was resentful, feeling as though an angry turbulence inside him would be eased if it had been his own head, rather than Shorty’s, that Ali was now resting. But the other half knew that Ali only spoke the truth, one that beat in sync with his own heart and how he felt about his stepbrother. Eventually, he also closed his eyes, considering the words Shorty had previously spoken.

“There are some who it’s worth putting your faith in.”

Littlefoot had known them since he had gone out to find the Valley long ago. And since then, the number of those individuals had just kept growing.

Satisfied that this part of the conversation was over, Ruby carefully approached a secluded Cera, whom she had been watching with notable concern since they had arrived in the cave.

Upon nearing the threehorn, Ruby was somewhat surprised to see that her teal eyes were dry. But as she sat down beside her, the truth became clear. Not only were those eyes dry, they were completely lacking of almost anything. Cera looked like something of a shell of her old self, and that sight was more grating to Ruby than a fresh waterfall of tears would have been. This shock must have shown, as Cera gave her a contemptuous glance and murmured,

“Problem?”

Somehow this snark gave Ruby new hope, perhaps as though giving some evidence Cera was still there, and could still be reached. Ruby swallowed hard before speaking.

“Just...came to talk...”

“Oh? Why’s that?” Cera’s expression was completely devoid of curiosity.

Ruby hesitated, wondering briefly whether this talk would be completely futile after all – but something in the back of her mind, something she couldn’t quite pin a name to was coaxing her to continue, gently soothing and massaging her, whispering to her, encouraging her...

“Well, I’m just worried about you...” Ruby told Cera earnestly.

“Worried?” Cera repeated, her mouth twisting into an expression of disbelief. “Just about me? You should be worried for yourself...actually, there really is no point...” she shifted her eyes to the ground and fell silent.

“No point?” Ruby queried, attempting to lower her head to talk to Cera face to face. “No point to what?”

Cera didn’t answer straight away. She first replied by growling angrily under her breath and turning away from Ruby, before she spoke in a hoarse, almost dead tone.

“There’s no point in anything now...we’ve fallen into the hands of these psychos, and soon enough they’ll be fighting off those other psychos at the Valley. Whoever wins it’s going to result in us all getting killed one way or another. That alliance isn’t coming for us, and it won’t last. Even if by some impossible chance we get out of this alive, back at the Valley...”

She drew a sharp breath, in a pitch that Ruby recognised as being very close to one attempting to hold back tears. She felt a frown forming in sympathy, and Cera continued, now in a mortified whisper.

“Dad and Tria...they’re not going to ever want to get back together...”

“Hey, come on now!” Ruby protested. “What makes you think they’re-?”

“They’re under an insane oppressor!” Cera snapped at her. “My dad’s probably already tried to unseat him, and then Tria would get angry at him, and I can’t...he might even be...” she broke off, her breathing rapid and shallow.

Ruby, edging closer to her, began to attempt to formulate soothing sentences in her head. C’mon, think! She told herself.

“You really shouldn’t give up before anything’s started, you know,” she told her quietly.

“Started...?” Cera muttered back, looking up at Ruby in disbelief. “So, we’ve nearly been drowned, heard our Valley’s been subjugated, had to join an alliance, got kidnapped by sharpteeth...when will this start then Ruby?”

Despite her obvious irritation at Ruby’s hesitant optimism, Cera nevertheless leaned tiredly upon her in support. Ruby, laying a comforting hand on her neck frill, said gently,
“When I said ëstarted,’ I was referring to the fighting back – the resistance.”

Cera gave a sceptical noise.

“You may disagree,” Ruby continued, now smiling weakly. “But I’m sure the very smallest of things can reignite your hope. That’s what I’ve come to expect from residents of the Great Valley...”

*
The re-ignition of hope may have come sooner than either of them had expected.

Seizon, for whatever reason, had declined to return to where Chomper, Saureen and Lini were being held, leaving them to be guarded by the two Piercers alone. This made things a lot easier.

They didn’t know quite how the discussion begun, but after hearing about what Lini had done during her childhood, Chomper had been adamant that Gigas needed to be brought down just as much as Ulciscor, and after rekindling their hope with his motivational speech, they had begun to discuss possibilities for escape.

Now, obviously, such freely open chatter about such a thing would normally have caught the attention of the Piercers who guarded them, but, completely aware of this, Saureen had prompted the debate in a different direction, or rather, a different language.

Xal had failed quite prominently to do his research on leaf-eaters and how they communicated. Up until very recently, he had just assumed it was a simple language of animalistic livestock. Hearing Shorty speak in fluent sharptooth had changed all this, but his foot-soldiers hadn’t got the memo. The Piercers guarding the three of them didn’t recognise flattooth language for what it was, and merely heard a series of grunts that they probably refrained from listening into to preserve some dignity. Either way, they completely ignored the sounds as the three young sharpteeth conspired against them.

“I haven’t really considered escape before now...” Lini murmured, sweeping her eyes over the knotted roots that incarcerated them. “I think I was just hoping I would die here...but as a far as I can tell, there isn’t an easy way out...”

“Well, there’s a difference between a way out, and an easy way out,” Chomper replied optimistically, his eyes also sweeping over the roots.

“I’m not sure that the way out is the problem...” Saureen put in, shifting her gaze nervously onto the guards. “The point is, once we do break out, they’ll be over us in seconds...”

Chomper nodded, and sat down in the middle of the prison to consider this.

“Maybe there’s more than one way out...” he said slowly. “If all three of us escape in different directions...”

“If there are such different directions...” Saureen mused.

Chomper frowned and furrowed his brow, staring at the ground and hoping for some solution to present itself. In his mind, he played through several different scenarios, each one fairly abysmal, and ending inevitably with the pair of Piercers coming down hard on the three of them...

On the three of them...

On the...wait a minute...

And in that next second, it came to Chomper like a thunderbolt that illuminated his consciousness. It should have been obvious from the start! It was simple numeracy.

His sudden stroke of inspiration showed in the goofy and now giddy smile he gave his two companions, who, through looking quizzical, prompted him to explain.

“It’s pretty simple, actually,” Chomper elaborated in an undertone, despite the fact that the Piercers could not understand him. “We just need a diversion.”

“A diversion?” Lini frowned. “How?”

“What’s the betting these two have checked these roots for weaknesses?” Chomper prompted. “They don’t know which parts of the roots are escapable from and which aren’t. Even if there’s only one route to escape, they don’t need to know that. There are two of them, and three of us, so...”

“So if we all make to escape through different parts...” Saureen added slowly. “They won’t know which of us is making the actual escape, and who’s just causing a diversion...”

“They couldn’t risk leaving it to chance!” Chomper replied, grinning. “Not if they don’t leave one of us covered!”

Saureen frowned.

“It’ll become quite obvious though as soon as one makes their escape,” she said. “And what about the two left behind?”

Chomper’s smile faded somewhat, and he resumed pacing the length of the prison.

“OK...” he said uncertainly. “Well, perhaps only one diversion is the answer...yeah, that might work! If one of us makes a big thing of trying to get out, the Piercers will want to make sure that that edge is secure...and in the meantime the other two can escape...”

“And what about the one making the diversion?” Lini queried in a low voice.

“They’ll come out soon after, just as soon as the Piercers realised they’ve escaped...and...give pursuit...” Chomper’s rambling slowed as he hit this realisation. “Well, it’s probably best to have a pre-prepared escape route, so it’s easy for...”

“I think you’re missing the giant longneck in the glade,” Lini interjected bluntly. “Who’s going to create the diversion?”

There was a pause. Saureen’s eyes flickered from one to the other nervously. Lini sighed.

“I told you before you should have left me behind,” she said quietly. “I’m perfectly willing to help you two escape-”

“Lini, we’re not leaving you behind!” Saureen said firmly.

“How am I supposed to make a speedy getaway on this?” Lini demanded, prodding her injured leg. Saureen didn’t seem to have an answer for this. Chomper, however, steeling himself, provided one.

“I think it’ll be much easier to do so should you not be the diversion,” he told Lini firmly. Lini simply stared back at him, blinking her bright blue eyes in sceptical despair. How he hated seeing her like this! If nothing else, it would be worth getting the old Lini back. He continued.

“You know it’s got to be me...” he said carefully. Predictably, Saureen and Lini both began to protest.

“Think about it!” Chomper said loudly, chancing a nervous glance over at the Piercers. “If I don’t manage to get away, I’m sure Xal will...well, he’ll want me alive for his Valley infiltration plan. You two...probably don’t carry the same convenient protection.”

Saureen and Lini glanced at each other, apparently unable to think of a suitable counterargument.

“And Lini,” Chomper added fiercely, looking her dead in the eye. “I will not allow you to sacrifice yourself in such a way. Maybe it can be heroic, but honestly, there’s definitely something off about it...”

Unbidden, images of Pyron’s final moments as his blood and life ran from his body worked their way into Chomper’s mind. But he brushed them aside, and continued.

“We’re going to do this. As soon as we escape from here, we’re going to save the others, and then we’ll make it back to the Rocky Heathland, and with the alliance of liberators we will march on the Valley and free it from Ulciscor’s grasp! So, let’s get started!”

The stars continued to twinkle unconcernedly down on them as they walked as subtly as they could in the semi-darkness, inspecting the roots that imprisoned them carefully, and gently nudging them and testing to them to see which ways they would bend, how they would pick apart, if they snapped. Lini hadn’t said anything following Chomper’s message to her, but he was confident his words had gotten through. She was moving with almost as much deliberate speed as Chomper and Lini, testing the roots with gusto more reminiscent of the self he remembered. And it was her who had struck the gold they had been looking for.

A network of knots on the opposing side to where Chomper and Saureen had been placed beneath to hulking tree was visibly less complex than others that surrounded it, and snapping through the finer twigs with her claws, it soon became clear that a little digging would allow space to slide through and make a hasty exit.

“There’s no way they won’t notice though...” Lini sighed, gazing at the Piercers.

“There might be a way...” Chomper said thoughtfully. “As long as we take turns digging this as quietly as we can, it may just look like we’re still looking for a way out...”

And so began the next phase – the three of them continued to shuffle around, but taking time around the looser sets of roots to dig away at the earth beneath, using their tails, or, taking a larger risk, their claws. Lini was the most effective digger, having a larger tail and claws than the other two, and although it took a while, so much that Chomper felt fairly dizzy after the whole affair, soon the hole was dug, large enough for two of them to squeeze through and bolt.

Nervously, the three young sharpteeth looked once more to the Piercer guards. Incredibly, they hadn’t noticed the massive gaping escape route. They were in fact, seated on the ground, their forearms tucked beneath them, not even looking directly to their prisoners. Perhaps part of it might have been at the speed and volume the escape route was dug – things that happen at a slower rate are a lot less noticeable, though presumably their hearing was still pricked up. They had looked over several times during the youngsters’ rounds of the prison, when they made a noise more jarring than expected on some of the tighter roots. This diversion tactic might have been better suited to their quarry than they expected.

Chomper, inhaling heavily, looked over at the two girls. They were already in position, and, to his immense relief, were smiling, albeit nervously. Chomper returned the smile, winked on an impulse, and then turned to a spot in the opposite direction to the escape route.

He charged.

He hammered straight into the dense roots and began to claw and bite at them in earnest. The effect was unbelievably beautiful, and immediate. Even as the tree they were incarcerated under shuddered under Chomper’s bombardment, the two guards leapt to their feet, and following immediate adrenaline instincts, both instantly rounded on Chomper, pressing their snouts towards the roots he was attacking and snarling warningly at him.

Then things started to go a little wrong.

The entire prior happened in the space of about five seconds, and in that same time, even amongst his growling at the hapless though tough roots, Chomper heard the unmistakable sound of snapping twigs and scuffling movement that meant Saureen and Lini had fled through the escape route and into the dense starlit forest. This was also noticed by the Piercers.

Giving a cry of shock and anger, one of them immediately straightened up and headed for the other side, the other following suit quickly after. Realising he only had seconds, Chomper bolted for the escape route, pleading as he felt the cool night air on his face that he would taste the air for longer...

STOMP.

The second Piercer had decided to take a quicker route to follow his companion, climbing straight over the ancient and crooked tree and landing right in front of Chomper as he tried to make his escape. Skidding to a halt, Chomper put all of his effort into launching himself haphazardly at the opposite direction, just missing his quarry’s jaws as they came down...

Chomper bounced off the root networks that had held him captive previously and hit the ground running, tearing off into the undergrowth with the Piercer in hot pursuit...

The other Piercer had gone immediately in the direction of Saureen and Lini, which was now the opposing way to which Chomper was now running at top speed. In hadn’t gone quite according to plan, but things could have been a lot worse. Chomper only hoped that Lini’s leg wouldn’t slow the girls down, and also that this running blindly into a forest he barely knew would achieve anything.

*
The thudding of their feet and their sharp breaths was all Saureen could hear. Dark blurs of the forest rushed past her in a haze as she struggled to support Lini during their run. Whilst Lini was doing her best to maintain the speed, Saureen could tell she was in pain. Her wheezy breaths and the way her face was contorted told her as much. But they couldn’t stop now. The Piercer was still hot on their heels. They had to keep at it...all the same...

Saureen had no clue where they were headed. They were just running aimlessly, determined to leave their pursuer behind. Although she knew the forest well, everything was far too hazed and dark to determine where they were...and what had happened to Chomper?

Lini seemed to be thinking along the same lines.

“Where are we going??” she demanded hoarsely, in flattooth as a precaution.

“Umm...” Saureen could not fathom a response, and instead raised her head to take a sniff of the night air, hoping to catch a familiar scent. But even as she did so, she felt the firm ground slip from beneath her foot as it caught itself in something – possibly a tree root, or even the edge of a mound. But whatever it did caused her to fall, crashing headlong into the ground and beginning to slide uncontrollably downwards. A heavy thud nearby as the dark forest spun and tumbled around her told her that Lini was on the same downhill journey she was.

Both girls’ fall was broken as they crashed into a convenient clump of bushes, nestling inconspicuously into the branches and foliage. Saureen, panting heavily, attempted to ease herself into a more comfortable position, testing her limbs. She was bruised, but nothing broke.

“You OK?” she gasped to the mass right next to her which was no doubt Lini. Lini groaned.

“Mmm...maybe...my leg seems to be fine, which is a bonus, but...” The bushes creaked as Lini shuffled around in panic.

“Where’s the-?”

“Ssh!” Saureen advised, keeping her ears pricked up for the sound of the Piercer. Aside from the wind gently caressing the leaves upon the trees, the forest was largely silent. Both girls strained to hear something more, until the deathly quiet of the wood was almost defeaning...

“C’mon, Saureen. We’ve gotta move!”

This urgent coaxing came not from the forest, but was a blurry memory suddenly regurgitated back into Saureen’s conscience. Many months ago now, when she and Seizon had experienced a similar downward tumble as they had escaped the Fanged Forest, being pursued by Ulciscor’s murderous right-hand. During their most recent great escape, Saureen had neglected most thought of Seizon, and she had no idea why her mind was forcing her to relive the times when Seizon had been a figure of great compassion and courage, even to an admirable state, before he become just another of Xal’s pawns...

Her distress must have shown, for Lini was now gazing at her through her sapphire eyes with concern.
“What’s wrong?” she asked.

“Don’t worry about it...” Saureen murmured, forcing herself to forget about Seizon for the time being. There would be time to worry about him once they had escaped the Piercer.

Having not heard anything, Lini put her nose into action, taking a few sniffs of the air, before freezing, horror-struck.

“What?” Saureen breathed.

“Bellydragger...” Lini murmured back. “We’re stuck between a rock and a hard place...”

Saureen paused, trying to come to terms with the revelation, but she eventually sucked in some air and said bluntly,

“We don’t know for sure the Piercer’s still there. And well...bellydraggers aren’t the most nimble creatures on land...maybe we’ll be lucky?”
 Lini didn’t respond. Saureen flashed her a nervous smile, and began to disentangle herself from the bush.
Cautiously edging around it, she beckoned for Lini to follow her, which she did, groaning slightly and she put weight on her still painful leg.

But before either of them had time to think, a great rapid thudding heralded the approach of the Piercer previously chasing them in their direction. He had been waiting them out, and was now making a beeline for Saureen. Abandoning all rational thought, Lini reacted on instinct and threw herself at the twoclaw. Her heavy body effectively shifted Saureen’s body out of harm’s way, wrong-footing their quarry momentarily, and giving them the chance to hare off...

They were only running for a few seconds when they recognised a large, green shape in the semi-gloom. Dil, on the other hand, could hear and smell them, but they had no idea who they were.

“Ichy!” she snapped. “What’s going on?”

Ichy was caught completely by surprise. He was speechless as he hovered above Dil, gazing open-mouthed at the sight of the chase, and just as his mind was registering that there had been a security breach, Saureen and Lini had bolted past Dil, and the Piercer was attempting to corkscrew round her as well...

Dil, caught off guard, let out a yell of shock and reared up, momentarily knocking the Piercer aside.

“Hey!” he growled. “Groundscraper...!”

But this kefuffle was what another group had been waiting for. Even as Saureen and Lini tried to sidle their way around what appeared to be a stone wall of some kind, they noticed a massive boulder fall inches away from them, and in the next second, a great mass of young leaf-eaters emerge from the cave at a rapid speed, with Spike in the lead.

Ducky from her position on Spike’s back, noticed the two young sharpteeth and beckoned to them.

Well, they didn’t need asking twice.

Exchanging grins of relief, the two girls joined the great exodus with the eight leaf-eaters, only to have the Piercer and bellydragger continue the chase...

*
The previously still night was now being split apart by sounds of confrontations and pursuits, but for Chomper, the only sound was his sharp breath catching in his chest as he fled from the Piercer, darting his way through the foliage for any hope of wrong-footing the predator...

Noticing an opening between two trees, he flung himself bodily into the gap. Focus! He forced himself to scrabble through the undergrowth, working his way beneath tangled trees. The Piercer had noticed, and was attempting to give chase without little concern, although the tangled vegetation was slowing him down considerably. Edging away as quickly as he could whilst still trying to keep his quarry in sight, Chomper allowed his eyes the briefest of darting for anything that would give him an edge. In a place so full of trees, an irregularity caught his eye first – a bent tree with the potential to be snapped. It was thin enough for him to snap it, but thick enough to potential subdue the aggressor...

Chomper didn’t even contemplate the unlikely convenience until he was position at the trunk. He could certainly work through the bark, but it would take time, and he got the feeling the slowly but steadily approaching Piercer with a mix of malice and determination set firmly in his expressions would reach him first. So, he had two choices – take the gamble of landing this on him or just run...?

Chomper, even noting the stupidity himself, found himself chewing through the bark. He couldn’t be sure the Piercer wouldn’t eventually catch up with him however, and besides, he was getting tired of running.

He wanted to fight back.

“I’ve been watching at the sidelines for too long!!” he mentally screamed as he chewed and gnawed ferociously through the trunk. “Before, I would preferred that, but when I stood idly by, I let Pyron die...”

He closed his eyes as the image flashed before him, but no tears fell.

“And I could only stand and watch as Nycha fell...”

Again, the unbidden image. But the eyes remained dry and the teeth kept working.

“Even though I lost against Seizon it felt good to be finally doing something. And I’m not going to stop now!”

But Chomper’s jaw was beginning to ache. The tree didn’t seem to want to fall yet, and...the Piercer was almost upon him.

Chomper’s eyes widened, even as he continued to chew on the bark as best he could...it was no good. He’d soon be out of range for him to land one on his head...he’d have to run for it...

And then the Piercer’s expression changed.

It was incredible, but all of a sudden, his eyes widened, he grunted in what might have been pain, and he twisted around the look behind him.
He had stopped dead in his tracks.

On an impulse, Chomper fought through the pain and finally felt the last bark remnants splinter beneath his powerful teeth. The trunk creaked ominously, and with a beautiful satisfaction, the tree tipped, working its way onto the cranium of his deadly enemy. A loud and dignified thud of wood hitting skin was heard, and both tree and dino crashed to the ground in a final and resolute clunk that Chomper could have sworn made the leaves on the surrounding trees quake.

Edging his way back through the foliage and past the unconscious form to where he had been previously running, Chomper found the source of what had distracted the Piercer long enough for him to make the significant blow. He immediately recognised the purple eyes peering nervously into the trees and the distinctive orange-yellow body with the dark stripes...

“Al!” Chomper gasped, numb relief flooding his being as he pitched forward. Al obviously had the same idea, and the two met at long last, holding each other in a crushing embrace.

“Chomper...!” Al muttered, apparently lost for words. His eyes were wider than Chomper had ever seen them, and he was grinning as he released the other sharptooth.

“How did you get here?” Chomper asked weakly.

“Never mind that,” Al said shortly. “Where are the others? Are they OK? And...” his voice had suddenly hit an extremely fearful tone. “Did you...uhh...is Lini...?”

“Lini’s fine!” Chomper said quickly. “She’s alive and well...but...we got separated...”

At this point, Chomper had felt like explaining what she had told him and Saureen, but upon seeing Al’s giddy relief and amorous eyes, he couldn’t bring himself to do so. Lini would eventually tell him herself, he was sure...

Not to mention, he wasn’t entirely sure what had become of her and Saureen, or indeed any of the others...

“I’m not sure about the others,” he told Al truthfully. “I think...I think they should be fine...”

“Well, let’s hope so,” Al said seriously. “Because we’ve finally arrived.”

“What-?”

“Zyro organised a rescue team,” Al said quickly. “Don’t worry, everything’s OK now. You’re all going to be fine. We arrived at the mouth of the forest see, and we encountered the three big sharpteeth – Xal, Redclaw, and that other one. They all seemed quite upset, apparently everyone managed to escape...”

“Wait, really?” Chomper’s face lit up.

“Yeah, according to what the sharpbeak had told them. But anyway, Zyro and the others confronted them, and I was able to slip away.”

With the noise of his own pursuit gone, Chomper could now hear, somewhere in the distance, the grunts and growls of dinosaurs clashing...

“We’ve got to find the others and bring them to the mouth,” Al said forcefully, grabbing Chomper by the shoulder. “Then we can all get outta here...”

Chomper nodded, and the two of them began sprinting off back whence they came, but even as they rounded more bends, a small figure skidded in front of them, blocking their way.

Chomper and Al simply stared in shock, having recognised the sail-backed figure instantly.

Seizon’s features were illuminated by the light of the Night Circle, his amber eyes heavy with disapproval and an almost hungry dislike. But most of the last part was concentrated on Al.

“Oh, that’s a sight to drive me wild...” he murmured, his voice positively dripping with venom.

This slightly odd statement gave Al pause.

“Happy to see me, Seizon?” he enquired.

“Only in the sense that this gives me a chance to pay you back in full!” Seizon retorted, and without warning he plunged straight at him. Caught off guard, Al staggered backwards, forcing Chomper to leapt aside as the two struggling sharpteeth cantered past him, Seizon eventually slamming Al into a nearby tree.

“You treacherous bastard thought you could get one past me?!” Seizon demanded, placing his foot heavily onto the dazed Al’s chest.

A ripple of anger past through Chomper as he watched Seizon, and was quickly spurred into action. Letting out a guttural raw, he bit hard into Seizon’s side. Distracted, Seizon twisted around to engage him in combat, biting down onto his neck. However, due to the position he was in, the grip of the bite was limited, and Al was able to deliver a well-placed bite onto Seizon’s flank.

Seizon emitted a howl of pain and struck Al with his tail with as much force as he could muster, before slashing a gouge onto Chomper’s head. Chomper reeled back, blood beginning to trickle down the sides of his face, noting that Seizon had once more launched himself at Al, snapping and slashing in a frenzy. Al was countering with bites as well, before twisting round and swatting Seizon with his tail. Not letting this perturb him, Seizon bit down on Al’s tail, and even as Al attempted to bite and slash at his adversary, Seizon was countered with his own powerful claws, leaning into Al in an attempt to topple him.

His body filling once more with adrenalin and fear, Chomper charged blindly in with his head lowered, and soon felt his hardened skull connect with Seizon. Caught by surprise, Seizon gave a snarl of rage as the three sharpteeth fell to the ground, rolling in and dirt as they all detached themselves.

Leaping to his feet, Seizon glared at his two adversaries.

“I want you to keep out of this one Chomper!” he snapped, flexing his arms and briefly inspecting his injuries. “I don’t have as big an issue with you. At least when you wanted to usurp me, you were honest.” He glared murderously at Al. “So, working with the pacifists all this time??”

“I had to keep my task hidden!” Al replied irritably. “It’s called being undercover. It’s not like you had to enrol me in your pack.”

“And as it happens, Sezion...” Chomper growled. “I do have a big issue with you. No matter you and Xal might want me for, I’m going to stick by my friends.”

At this, Seizon sighed.

“It’s admirable, this loyalty you display to these herbivores,” he said. “There, I said it. I just wish you felt the same way about my own loyalties...”

None of them had time to consider this further however, as at that moment, a loud growl of triumph caused them all to turn their heads.

Two distinct forms were approaching them through the moonlit forest, eyes glowing with an aura that only meant doom. One was a Piercer that Chomper recognised as the other who had previously been guarding him. The other was a vehement and distinctly malevolent looking bellydragger.

“Ah, I can smell ëem now!” Dil crowed to nobody in particular.

“Hm...this isn’t the group I had hoped for though,” the Piercer remarked, frowning somewhat.

“Nevertheless, this is the most important one!” Seizon told him jovially, grinning in a slightly psychotic way. “Remember, we need to keep the twoclaw safe. As for this one...” he shot Al a nasty grimace. “I’m not so fussed...”

But the night was not done with sudden occurances, for at that moment, a shrill cry of “Chomperrrr!!!” in the leaf-eater tongue caused all five present to look up.

Petrie had appeared above them, circling and flapping quite erratically.

“Petrie?” Chomper called to him. “What...?”

“Don’t worry, we brought back-up!” Petrie told him cheerfully, pointing off into the forest in the opposite direction to where Dil and the Piercer were.

Chomper looked...and his mouth fell open.

Striding into view, and knocking smaller plants to the ground as though they were twigs was the lone female spiketail, Opal, and hurrying in her wake were Littlefoot, Cera, Spike, Ducky, Ruby, Shorty, Ali, Saureen and...

“Lini!!” Al let out a joyful cry quite uncharacteristic of his mellow self and launched himself straight at the slashclaw, who returned the hug with a matched enthusiasm, but only stared at the ground as he licked and nuzzled her passionately.

“Get behind me!” Opal called to Chomper. Upon closer inspection, Opal’s eyes betrayed the look of someone who’d aged about thirty years since their last meeting, but they were also filled with a determined resolve. Not waiting to be asked twice, Chomper hurried to her side.

“But...!” Seizon gazed wildly around at the sudden party. He was now stuck between two angry masses of dinosaur, and it was quite possible that Dil and the Piercer’s surprise was the only reason they hadn’t charged and flattened him already. But it was only a matter of time.

“Seizon!” Saureen called to him. “Come over here!”

“Yeah!” Shorty agreed, watching him closely.

Chomper could see that Seizon was tempted, but as the Piercer and the bellydragger both charged forward, he simply flung himself to the side.

Opal stepped forward to engage her adversaries and the result was titanic. In a single instant, she had raised herself onto her hind legs, emitting a bellow of maternal power, and Dil instantly skidded sideways to avoid being flattened. At the same time, the Piercer had gone around her to apply a bite to her flank, but his teeth had barely brushed the spiketail’s hide when Opal had swung her tail round, tipped with lethal thagomizers and struck the predator in his side. Opal brought her front legs back to earth with a momentous rumble as her two attackers fell at either side.

Splattering blood across the ground, the Piercer nevertheless went in for another attack, this time aiming for Opal’s head. She was quick to notice and twisted around, holding her tail high before striking it down directly on top of the aggressor’s skull. The Piercer fell to the ground, and as Opal swung round to reengage Dil, who was coming at her cautiously, mouth slightly open, her tail collided with the Piercer’s head once more. A rather sickening crack was heard and the Piercer did not get up again.

Opal was emitting bellows none of the onlookers had ever heard before as she and Dil pushed their heads close to one another, Dil roaring almost as loudly. Both fighters were poised on their toes, Opal having raised her tail, prepared to strike if necessary. But Dil got their first.

Swinging around as much as her heavy body would let her, she brought her own powerful tail straight into Opal’s side. An almighty smacking sound ripped the air apart and Opal staggered. The blow had been completely random – Dil, with her eyesight impaired as it was, had mustered all of her brute strength into an attack that had nevertheless been devastatingly effective, as Opal collapsed onto her side.

The young dinosaur’s mouths fell open in horror, as they watched the bellydragger, with a malicious grin plastered over her face, place her front feet onto Opal’s vast stomach and applying a savage bite.

Opal emitted a shriek of pain, but even as she felt warm blood begin to run down her side, she felt her thoughts travel immediately to the youngsters hiding in the foliage. And, in particular...

Mustering her strength, she strained to stagger to her feet, striking Dil in the face with her heels as she did so, and Dil once more leapt aside to avoid being squashed. Opal was back on her feet and bringing her tail around for another strike.

However, it simply struck the ground as Dil, in a completely unpredictable move, and reared up herself, placing her paws upon Opal’s shoulder and biting onto one of the plates on her back...

But Opal knew this to be merely a scratch upon a surface that ran much deeper. Swinging her tiny head, she brought the hard little skull into the bellydragger’s side. As Dil fell to the ground, Opal found the opportunity she’d been waiting for. Raising her tail up, she brought it finally and decidedly down onto her enemy’s back.

Dil screamed in pain as her blood flecked the ground, and she quickly staggered backwards from the victorious spiketail.

“Go to blazes!!” she roared, before cantering off as quickly as her legs would allow.

A great cheer rose from the watching children as Opal came back to join them, a warm smile now adorning her battle-scarred form.

“Giving what she told Zyro, I had no doubt she had it in her...” Al thought, now easily picturing Opal as matriarch of the Valley. “I want to let the others know...but I’m sure she will, in time...”

He glanced over at Lini, who was suddenly standing stock still, an expression of utter dread having taken residence.

“Lini...?” he asked, shocked. “What...?”

“Smell the air...” she gasped, and at this, many of the others looked around.

“He’s here...” Lini finished in a horrified whisper.

Al, Chomper and Saureen all sniffed, and...

Unbidden, the sight confirming the scent appeared through the trees, toppling them without concern. Opal’s expression joined the children’s shock as Gigas and Redclaw stepped into view, eyes glaring, teeth gleaming...Chomper could see Seizon crouching some distance from them, and even he was looking horrified by this turn of events.

In spite of her fear, Opal stepped in front of the young dinosaurs, raising her tail, prepared to fight to the death if necessary. But this only broadened Gigas’ grin.

“I get the feeling the spiketail means to go down stubbornly,” he told Redclaw, who nodded.

“Well, I have no qualm about speeding up the process...”

“And what about the small twoclaw?” Redclaw asked of his companion. Gigas sighed.

“If we must keep him alive...” he said with a tone of regret. “I’m sure the others aren’t quite so necessary...”

But even they were not allowed to continue in their desired activity, for an intense and rapid rustling heralded the approach of yet more dinosaurs into the vicinity. All eyes were drawn to three emerging figures: Zyro, Screech and Thud.

Upon seeing his two former minions, Redclaw gave a roar of rage and made a beeline straight for them. The two fastbiters were quick to respond and leapt upon their old companion, sinking their claws deep into his hide.

Zyro meanwhile, and leapt at Gigas, sinking his teeth and foreclaws into his side, and leaping back when Gigas had swung around to counter him. He aimed to bite the crested sharptooth straight into his torso, but Zyro leapt to avoid to jaws and purposefully landed on the aggressor’s head, sinking his hindclaws as much as he could into Gigas’ reinforced head. For a sharptooth half Gigas’ size, Zyro seemed to be holding his own well, making the best use he could of his speed and agility to counter the slashclaw’s brute strength. Screech and Thud too were subduing Redclaw to the best of their abilities – even if one was thrown to the ground, the other knew just which points of the twoclaw to attack next...

“Opal!!” Zyro yelled, corkscrewing his body around as he narrowly dodged Gigas’ formidable claws. “Get them all to the mouth of the forest!!”

Nodding, Opal turned to the twelve young dinosaurs and wordlessly gestured in the direction whence their saviours had come.

Even as they galloped in a direct path through the forest, Chomper couldn’t help but glance back.

“What about the others??” he gasped.

Even as he spoke, he noticed, in the growing distance behind him, that something was wrong. Taking advantage of an opening, Gigas had swung his mighty tail straight into Zyro, who had collided painfully with a tree, and slid down the trunk...

And now Gigas was coming for them.

The sight of this red-eyed, slavering, sadistic monster charging at them through the trees was enough to make Chomper scream in terror.

“We’ve gotta get....!” he managed to pant, and the others, noticing the danger, mostly emitting similar screams, picked up the pace. Opal glanced behind her, ensuring none of the children were between her and Gigas’ drooling mouth, and considering her options...

On an impulse, she stopped still and swung her tail with all her might, catching Gigas underneath the chin. It had an effect – her quarry did stagger backwards, but he then lunged. Opal was only just able to avoid his jaws as they clamped shut at her, and she quickly ran also.

But help was at hand, for as Opal caught up with the kids, she noticed another part of the rescue committee coming their way.

“Dad??” Littlefoot and Shorty both cried in unison. Bron couldn’t help but smile as he noted Shorty’s automatic use of the term. He had Fumei were walking side-by-side, bodies together so as to negate injury. Even Gigas could see he had his hands full with the two fully-grown longnecks now approaching him. He stopped charging and emitted a titanic roar, which shook the forest and sent small animals fleeing for their very lives. He aimed bite at Fumei’s leg, but she quickly stepped away and Bron brought his head crashing into him, sending him skidding backwards.

Bron and Fumei then wordlessly intertwined their tails, and revolved on the spot, sending more trees crashing to the ground like dominoes, before finally smacking their conjoined tails straight into Gigas, who was knocked off his feet and rolled haphazardly across the forest floor.

This was the first of a great many signs of join to the rest of the party, who now noted that the mouth of the forest was close. Without the obscuring trees that the two longnecks had now swept aside, they could see Xal and a group of Piercers engaged in momentous battle with Ross, Rhea and Ferox. Where before Ferox had quailed under Xal’s tyranny, he now charged and snarled and scraped at him with Ross battling at his sight. As for Rhea, Chomper could see clearly how his mother’s ferocity had saved him so many times, as the Piercer’s toppled around her, laying nary more than a cut to her hide.

Heavy footfalls heralded the approach of someone else.

“Good – Bron and Fumei, keep him subdued!” Zyro had apparently recovered from Gigas’ temporary stunning, and was now rushing to aid the other sharpteeth.

The twelve kids could only watch in awe as the seven adults battled the hoards of the Sharptooth Revolutionary Army, denying their dogma, and with a determined courage that what they were doing what was good and right...and these were sharpteeth and leaf-eaters working side-by-side. Chomper couldn’t help but smile, and turned to Littlefoot, to share this moment, for he too, looked quite content...

But this contentment didn’t last, for the kids now realised that very soon, this formidable battling and fighting and gritty violence must be repeated at a much larger scale, as they took on Ulciscor and his terrifying armies in an attempt to liberate the Valley...

“Xaaaallll!!!!”

The howl came completely unexpectedly, and they all watched as a much smaller figure rushed through the undergrowth and laid a significant bite onto Zyro’s tail. Zyro staggered back and gazed, thoroughly non-plussed, at Seizon, was now skidding backwards, glaring at the adult sharptooth with a bitter determination.

Bron and Fumei had turned and made moves towards Zyro as soon as they had had heard the cry, but they stopped in bewilderment when they noticed Seizon.

But Xal was clearly angry.

“Get back Seizon!” he snapped, barging Ross and swatting him with his tail as he attempted a counterattack. “We cannot break rank now!”

Just this small shift in movement however, allowed an opening to be made, and one individual had made use of that opening.

With blinding speed, too quick for anyone else to react, Gigas had slipped through the defences the adults were creating and had approached the kids. Even as they scattered, Gigas kicked out, catching Saureen. Even as she was winded, and suspended in mid-air, Gigas slammed his foot into her, and pinned her up against the tree. This horrific sight had turned every eye in the vicinity, and everyone was frozen.

“I feel we should make an example of this particular attack on our sovereignty!” Gigas snarled, leering closer to the terrified Saureen.

“NO!” Chomper couldn’t stop himself. Neither, apparently, could Seizon, who emitted to exact same scream at the same time as him. But he couldn’t think too deeply into it now.
Saureen...
No...
He couldn’t think, his mind was clouding over. Not Saureen, not her too...

“Gigas...” Xal spoke slowly, in an almost uncertain tone. “I don’t think that’s a necessity...”

He was gazing at the trapped Saureen with an almost sickened look, swallowing nervously. Gigas twisted his head round to look at him in disbelief.

“There’s no way they won’t do anything if we-”
Gigas had diverted his attention for long enough, for now both Ferox and Zyro were on top of him, Ferox biting into his neck with a blind fury, and Zyro pushing against him so that his grip on Saureen was loosened. Saureen manage to squirm free and dropped to the forest floor, where Chomper quickly ran to greet her and pull her, almost as a nervous wreck, back to the group.

Gigas managed to squirm free from his attackers and took several steps back, still fixing them with a pugnacious glare.

The four adult sharpteeth and three adult leaf-eaters moved as one to surround the children in a protective defence barrier, and Zyro, seeing Screech and Thud, scarred but determinately alive, quickly rush from deeper within the forest to join them, realised that any break for freedom they were to make would have to be soon.

“Don’t try and fight it Xal!” Zyro yelled at him. “There is no way this can last. Follow us and you will be faced with the full fury of our alliance, which is still alive and well. It’s over. You cannot counter us anymore.”

Xal, who was now standing next to a positively livid Gigas and a somewhat nervous Seizon, narrowed his eyes at this statement, but did not reply. At this, Zyro gave the signal.

At his signal, the rescue team with their rescued hostages amongst them fled out of the mouth of the Fanged Forest and into the open night air, noting with the utmost relief that the mission had been a complete success. All they had to do now was prepare to march upon the Valley.

Gigas made to charge after them, but Xal held him back. Attacking the formation as it was, with the large sharpteeth in front and longnecks at the rear would have been foolish and possibly suicidal.

“You talk a good game, Zyro...” he thought, watching the retreating group get smaller. “But do not discount our victory yet. Do not underestimate our ingenuity. The night is still young enough for a new offensive to be in play...and woe betide you should you be on the wrong end of that when the time comes..."

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OK, now, for some reason, this won't let me bold/italicise/underline some parts of the text, so sorry about that...
But anyway, there you have it! And it's finally beginning, the operation to liberate the Valley from Ulciscor! How will it go down? You'll have to wait and see...
So yeah, don't know when the next chapter will be. Hopefully it won't be as long a wait, but you can never be sure. Ugh, exams...
ANYWAY, PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THOUGHT, SORRY FOR THE POTENTIAL SYNTAX ERRORS AND POOR EDITING, AND THANKS FOR READING!!  :D

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Land Before Time Captions / Ruby is concerned about Chomper
« on: March 19, 2015, 05:57:49 PM »
Ruby: Just need to ask Chomper...how much DID you drink last night?
Chomper: o.o

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Land Before Time Captions / Ducky tells Chomper a secret
« on: March 15, 2015, 06:27:40 PM »
Chomper...I'm pregnant...

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The Written Word / High Fantasy Concept
« on: March 07, 2015, 07:01:23 AM »
Glad you think so!  :lol:

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The Written Word / High Fantasy Concept
« on: March 04, 2015, 05:13:33 PM »
OK, so there are several races I've planned out in this constructed world. Most are based off creatures from Germanic or Greek mythology, but there are few with concepts of my own creation. Either way, I've added my own spin on these races.
The two major races with focus in this story are humans and elves. My elves are a little different from what may be expected, here's just a little profile on them...

ELF
Reproduction: Sexual
Sexual Dynamics: Semi-binary
Average Height: 5’9”
Average Weight: 138 lbs
Average Lifespan: ~250 years
Diet: Herbivorous
Estimated Population: 75 million
Habitat: Varies
Adjective: Elven
Elves are populous and successful beings, noted for being closely allied and associated with humans, but are distinguishable from them most notably by their protruding, triangular ears, which gives them a greater auditory ability. Notably on average also, elves’ skin tone is darker than humans, ranging from deep dark, to light tan, never verging on the paler tones of human skin. Their hair colour is also largely binary, ranging from white and blonde to black and grey, occasionally harbouring on red and brown. This hair colour remains throughout life and doesn’t change with age, although a reduction in the amount is often noted when an elf reaches their bicentennial years.
Unlike humans, elves have a significant asymmetry between the sexes, with only a third of elves being male (known as he-elves). There is also very limited dimorphism, as he-elves greatly resemble the female elves, retaining the feminine face and limb structure. The only noticeable difference (at least to other beings) is in the genitalia. Elves are considered by humans to be chaste, as for them, sex generally serves a ceremonial purpose. Upon courting, two elves will initiate sex and take note of their experience. If both find it beneficial, marriage is generally the next stage, attended by huge numbers. Marriage is generally expected of elves, although it is not an obligation. Reproduction between humans and elves is also not actively discouraged, save for from a few elitists (normally elves). There is an estimated 600,000 human-elf hybrids in the world, and although marriage is not an option for a same-sex elf couple, a human and elf of the same sex can marry. Gestation for elves is around two years, and unlike humans, elves do not experience menopause, although menstruation starts a few years later.
Elves are famed across the continent for their manufacturing skills, which has become a signature magic for the race in its own right. The most commonly manufactured items from elves are metal, weaponry and textiles. They generally wear clothes they have made themselves, although at wedding ceremonies, the bride and groom wear clothes made by their family and friends as a sign of respect. Elves are famed for being a race of barefooters – all shoes in elf culture are considered weapons, due to their long history of manufacturing bladed shoes. Therefore, an elf wearing shoes is seen as a sign of aggression. The soles of their feet have evolved to be leathery, but are not hard and calloused to allow for comfort. Elves are largely herbivorous, being able to digest many for plants and fungi than humans, though they do occasionally supplement their diet with small amounts of meat, mainly fish.

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The Written Word / High Fantasy Concept
« on: March 02, 2015, 07:38:59 PM »
Hi guys!  :lol:

So, despite the fact that writer's block is making a habit of chewing down on me quite severely  :( I nevertheless am still developing new ideas constantly. One of the most prominent has been a high fantasy franchise. Whilst I have numerous character details and things about the world it's set in sketched out, I wanted to see what everyone thought of a high fantasy idea first.

If you're a fan of my writing, or high fantasy, or both, then by all means let me know, and maybe next I'll post some details on my characters/races/world.
Oh, and I wouldn't say no to offers for concept art.  :p

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LBT Fanfiction / Venatione Venatus
« on: January 21, 2015, 07:52:18 PM »
I only wish I could get it to you sooner.  :blink:

I am unbelievably distracted and busy at the moment, but I'm just letting you all know that VV is still underway, and it's about three quarters done, though my mathematics are terrible. So yeah, the last few chapters (about 7 maybe? 8?) will be largely action packed and bringing the story to a climax and hopefully to tie up loose ends. Well, I say that, but a sequel is in mind...

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