Sorry,computer troubles on my end.

I don't have time right now as I have to leave for work in a few minutes,but I'll post for Grandpa this afternoon and Nahla agreed she'll have Grandma follow after him.

Just hang on for a couple more hours and I'll have something up,I got the weekend shift blah.

Sorry   I too want to get this RP going.

Name of fanfiction: The Seven Hunters
Rating: 9/10
Review: A very interesting story,with a dark but exciting plot. The gang turning into the creatures they thought as enemies for their whole lives so far. The chapters can sometimes be annoyingly long but each chapter is packed full of action you realize that it *needs* to be that long. The name changing can be a bit confusing when say Littlefoot is called by his leaf eater name one line and in the very next line he is called his fastbiter name. Great detail,great plot and great detail regarding characters emotions. It really shows why fastbiters do what they do,they kill to survive and leafeaters call them heartless monsters when they do so. I give this fic 9/10,only little thing stopping me from giving it the full 10/10 is the fact it is incomplete.

Name of fanfiction: Shorty's Dark Past
Rating: 7.5/10
Review: Great plot idea,a full story focusing on Shorty and why he is the way he is,sometimes it can be a bit extreme but it's all fine,it doesn't go super overboard. I love the interactions between the characters and Littlefoot's struggles with Bron being his father. My problem with this fiction is the scene jumping,some scenes seem really rushed when there was a chance for much more detail and action. Scenes being in one block instead of spaces when a different character speaks or does an action can get confusing,but that's just Duck123's style and it's not a problem,just gets  a bit confusing. I've seen Ducky's first works and he has greatly improved so fast,he is getting better at not only chapter length and quality but also his english and grammar. I give this story a 7.5/10,could not decide if to give a 7/10 or 8/10 so I'll give him a 'in the middle' rating. I look forward to not only seeing this story continuing but Ducky improving even more as an author.

Name of fanfiction: Descendants of The Mountains
Rating: 8/10
Review: This story is really interesting,the gang all appear in this as well as a longneck OC family. One of the OC's a lovely tomboyish like girl is a real laugh,she is a longneck version of Cera. Littlefoot and this OC find out the truth about their family and have to go travel to the 'Umoja Mountains' which of course is a fan made place created by the author to find the 'accident longneck herd'. They have to dump everything they always known and travel to a foreign place to see if the legend is really true. The rest of the gang quickly follow after them,however two longnecks have an eye on them-'they will effect them' (referring to Littlefoot and the OC). Lame summary but the plot is so detailed it'll be hard for me to explain. As a sideplot there is some ShortyxOC romance,which I find so adorable. I know CanonxOC parings ain't really popular for some,but I find them adorable if the OC suits the movie character. Since this story is not finished I can't really judge it.but I can see how much Nahla tries,she tries to make a mix of both random and serious moments. I've seen Nahla's other fanfiction and not just LBT. And I can barely believe it's the same writer. I give this 8/10 for a plot no one has tried before,interesting OC and a great improvement of writing skills,we all start somewhere and Nahla is really improving,there are typos but hey,we all have those little slip ups.-Nahla,you show em girl.

Oh oh I love this game .



Get hit in the head by the Stone of Cold Fire

They finally at the Mountains..and then you cut it off...you're evil.

Poor,Nahla that doesn't sound like it was a nice dream at all,found it so sweet how Littlefoot comforted her though,telling her that that will never happen..oh that why I love Littlefoot...


Hmmm wait a second..

Ahote sent DOC to go after the gang? Is that the role we weren't expecting? If so..you were right..was not expecting it. Doesn't seem like Doc seems too thrilled over it though..neither does Cera. Does this mean Doc has some sort of connection with Ahote? I'm confused...just when I figure something out Nahla adds another thing that makes me wonder.

Sharpteeth..wasn't much of a battle..well you didn't write it anyway (laaazy) but I liked how you had Nani have to decide between her instincts to help the herd or her instincts to protect the children.

"Oh you should watch out for that hole,dinosaurs are always stepping into that" he added realizing what happened.

"Thanks for the advanced warning" Nahla replied in a sarcastic tone as Littlefoot helped her to her feet

Yes advanced warnings do tend to help  .

"Goodbye,Great Valley-HELLO Umoja Mountains"

Lets not start judging already now dear,Nahla theres always more then meets the eye.

Good chapter,you could of done a more detailed battle but theres always time for one later.

Can't wait to see what Mountain life is like,and what happens to the gang and Doc. Cera and Doc traveling together...hahaha.

I'll play her,unless Zimmy was hoping too since she suggested it,

I think it would help if she could say at least baby words,otherwise who ever players is going to have an awful time trying to type some baby gibberish and everyone else trying to understand it.

She all yours,I don't want to play her anyway. I was just suggesting,then I was going to dump the suggestion on someone else-which happens to be you.

And yes,at least basic talk or make her older then the hatchling in the series..maybe like a toddler or whatever the LBT version of a toddler would be. And maybe have her want to go and look for her sister and bring her home?

So guess,Tricia is all Nahla's...that means I have to work with her even more..I did not think that through..theres no escaping this girl.

I'd be happy to work something out with you concerning Topsy and and the grownups. You on skype much?
 

If you mean me,Rarely,I'm only on during the afternoons in Australia which would be in the middle of the night/ early morning for you..I think.

If we need to discuss something your best off just pming me on here to be honest,it'll be slower but this way we won't have to worry about the massive timezone difference.

Nahla and I are currently trying to decide what we can do with Grandma and Grandpa,we'll let you know when we figure something out so you can see and tell us it's all okay.

And I like the Red Claw thing ^^,though I really have no say in it since I only play as adults that stay in the valley.

Ok made my way through all this. Instead of a year or 2 it was a day or 2-close enough.


Hmm,what can I say that hasn't already been said?

I like 'thing' going on between Littlefoot/Seeker and Ruby/Ponder,unless it's just my mind it's like a little romantic thing,it's kinda cute and never seen a LittlefootxRuby pairing before..but to be fair..they are now the same species.


Glad,Littlefoot will be ok and his injury is not going to be too crippling or fatal. And the way Ruby is acting about it makes me more and more sure Ruby has feelings for Littlefoot,but Littlefoot has no signs of feelings for Ruby.

I so await this 'reunion',I hope it goes well  if not..then I'll forever call you evil.


Great job,hopefully I can read this when you update instead of having to catch up on like 10 chapters,would make my life eaiser.

Oooh,Nahla wrote a long one .


Ok,it's awesome.

Cera admitted Nahla was her best friend? Someone get a camera!

I liked how everyone teases Littlefoot and Nahla about love,is that going to be running joke or something? xD I love it,it's funny..to me. And how they both protest saying it would be gross..hehe

Also Teetonka...

"NOT NOW,CAN'T YOU SEE I'M YELLING?" Teetonka shouted back at him

Yes,Teetonka..yes we can.


I also love this line from Nani

"No,you're not" Nani snapped at her daughter "You will listen to what he has to say,it's important. Last thing we need is for Teetonka to be so mad at you he zaps you with a bolt of fire and you explode"

Silly,Nani xD but yes that would be bad.

"Hah!" Nahla scoffed "Danger? I walk on the wild side,I laugh at the face of danger! Ha ha ha!"

Nahla you are not Simba xD also I love Teetonka's reply to that

"Lets see how much you laugh when you're cornered by a pack of hungry fastbiters shall we?"

Oh I almost forgot. I LOVE this part.

"Ok" the girl smiled in response.

"Great now kiss her" Ahote sneered with a short laugh.

"EW!" Littlefoot cried "I don't want to kiss her! I'm not even in love with her and never will be!"

"Why whats wrong with me?" Nahla whimpered.

"Nothing.."

"THEN WHY WON'T YOU EVER BE IN LOVE WITH ME!"

"Umm..do you want me to be in love with you?" Littlefoot frowned

"No thats gross" the girl snortred in disgust.

"But you said...wait now I'm confused" Littlefoot tilted his head,Nahla was upset he would never love her...yet she didn't want him to love her because it was gross-what on earth did she expect him to do?!

 


Great chapter,I found it funny..then again I'm easily amused.

Look forward to the next chapter.

Banned for punching innocent walls! How DARE you! Banned for the safety of walls everywhere

Poor Nahla,Teetonka is so mean to her xD telling her a girl can't be in charge.  I love how Littlefoot backs her up,agreeing they were equals,thats really sweet and so fits Littlefoot character as he would never think he was higher then someone else..unlike a threehorn we shall not name.


I also laughed at how Teetonka tried to get Ahote to swap Nahla for Littlefoot xD
And Teetonka,you can't hide in,somewhere inside,you love Nahla for how she is.



Great work.



And thanks for the preview of the next chapter,I won't spoil it for you other guys though,but from what I read so far it's gonna be worth the wait for it.