Ok, I got done with my LBT XV fanfic and am excited to finally get commentary on it. I did already some on fanfic.net, though on my second half, a lot of which I uploaded last night and today, still no comments yet.
Somebody liked a part I had where a newcomer asked if there were any Tree Stars in the Great Valley and said Cera said that there were but that he shouldn't eat too many or else there wouldn't be enough for her was pure Cera.
Also, they loved my take on Ducky's aunt (though i heard she was in a LBT comic called 3D Adventure and so this might not be the cannon her. She is the one that sleep swims. And she gives a whole new meaning to the term "Bigmouth".
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My problems I can see with it is that my guest character Ptero seems to be pretty much the main character, so Universal wouldn't likely like this as is.
I'm going to work on XVI: The Lonely Longneck and XVII: The Threehorn Gathering.
XVI is going to have a Longneck OC and also delve into Shorty's past. XVII will go into Topps's past and show how he met Tria, about his father, and have Cera get a boyfriend, as well as explain what happened to Cera's mom and most of her siblings and why Dana and Dinah don't live in the Great Valley.
Also, we find somebody that Topps is afraid of: his own dad, among some others.
