*Ducks frying pan*

Yeah I read 'the fic'. And you owe me a new IQ xD. And acording to the Authors Note I am a saint,awww.


Anyway,on to Nahla's fic that makes sense (somewhat anyway xD)

I love the part with Nahla and Tara,haha Tara sure caught Nahla on her own words  .

Looks like Littlefoot now learns his destiny,luckily for him Ahote didn't go on that 'many many many etc years ago' road.

I like how Teetonka and Nahla sorta clash,Nahla wants to joke around and Teetonka is Mr Serious   .

Tara is like my favorite character in this fic (I don't know why,I just like her),I love how she said (and it is so true)

"Listen,life isn't meant to be easy. It will throw challenges at you and no one will know the outcome. The only real certainty is life,is no one makes it out alive,we all die in the end"

And Nani is obsessed with wisdoms?

Thats fine,but if you bring in yellowbellies...

I think all of us are going to hit you with a frying pan.


Goob job,Nahla. And yes you deserve a break,we all do  

Crazy horse lady,aye? Not on THESE boards

BANNED

"When you really know someone,and you're really bonded to that dinosaur,you begin to know their habits and how they act. What's normal and what means 'something is wrong'"
 

Thats my new favorite quote from this fic,it just...epic to me.



I so like this better then your old fics.

I'm loving Nahla's attitude,I have this feeling her attitude is going to result in some hilarious moments later on xD (just like the 'rock' scene in chapter...umm 4?).


Glad all the original movie gang is here now,and Nahla is finally in the valley

Btw,you forgot the itliacs when Nahla was 'thinking' the words Littlefoot just told her,so it kinda looks like Nahla is saying her name is Littlefoot xD.

Ok it about time I left you a deserved review,after all. Only fair since I gave Horse Lady (or Nahla as she so refers herself) a review.


This story constantly has be on the edge-what will happen next? Now questions are in my head,if/when they return to leaf eater state,will they have to learn to become leaf eaters again after having to survive on killing and eating meat for there meals? Will it just come right back to them?

I admire your writing skills,you make the hunting detailed but not so detailed I feel like I'm watching a documentary on Animal Planet.


I love the quotes you have at the start of the chapters,even know until I read this fic I never heard of 99.9% of them. Zimmy here lives in a shoebox you see...

I've been following this since the start,it just took me this long to get to commenting
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I totally rate this fic 5/5 even though it ain't even complete.

Great detail
Great chapter length


Keep it,GOFs most loved parallelogram.  

No more Shadowlands? Well,you're just gonna have to tell me what would of happened .

No more Hades? Thats so wonderful! I mean-thats too bad...I liked Hades...in a I wish you would kill him off forever and I would cheer kind of way...


Nahla,you soo improved in just one fic. You have put more detail and length into chapters now (yeah I know,I can talk but honestly I don't like writing fics I just want to read other peoples ones so I really don't try xD).

I love the Nahla and Tara bonding you got happening,and that you made Shorty Littlefoot's adopted big brother,I'm curious to know what the reason is to make Shorty a teenager instead of 'Littlefoot aged' like the movies. Then again I find it sweet that Littlefoot kinda has a big brother to protect him,just like Nahla has her big sister.

I loved it when Littlefoot called Bron 'dodo' in the first chapter,I nearly spit out my drink with laughter.

I'm curious who the Mystery Longnecks are,well you made it pretty clear they are indeed Mountain Longnecks,but other then that you have me stumped.

Can't wait until Nahla first gets to meet this..umm whats his name Treetona? Wait...Teetonka,

Gee Nahla,can't you ever use ENGLISH names (kidding by the way  ).

I know 'Nahla' is Arabic,'Nani' is Hawaiian and since you have not revealed Nahla's father's name yet not sure what he would be.

Nahla,this fic is very promising. You're improving so much quickly. I mean I read one of your old fics and what you have so far on this one-I can't believe they are written by the same person. You're style changed that much.

Seriously,who are you and what have you done with Nahla?!!

Keep it up,Nahla.

"For example?" Nani challenged..these old longnecks really got on her nerves.

"Why should I leave?' Nani asked forgetting she actually wanted too only a minute ago "I can stay here if I want"

Nani walked off,not looking back. She thought Zimba and Nahla were behind her. She stomed up to the Grandparents "I'm just going to say this-HOW DARE YOU SAY I ABUSE MY DAUGHTER WHEN YOU DON'T KNOW EITHER OF US!" she screamed at the top of her lungs "Now all three of us are leaving,as you see behind me. They do not wish to see anyone is the valley because everyone here is a disgrace"

Smell like  a horse?!! Well,I do consider that  a problem.


B-A-N-N-E-D

Nani was soon looming over Nahla "Come on,get up" she said before she looked at Zimba "We are leaving,get her up please" she started stepping away and looked backed "Chop chop Nahla,on your feet,Zimba make sure she gets up" she walked forward again not bothering to check in they were actualling following and headed to the exit.