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Sound Off! / Re: Song That Touch the Heart
« on: August 21, 2018, 01:18:52 PM »
I suppose another would be...

Atmosphere by Joy Division

Walk in silence
Don't walk away, in silence

See the danger
Always danger
Endless talking
Life rebuilding
Don't walk away
Walk in silence
Don't turn away, in silence

Your confusion
My illusion
Worn like a mask of self-hate
Confronts and then dies
Don't walk away

People like you find it easy
Naked to see
Walking on air
Hunting by the rivers, through the streets, every corner

Abandoned too soon
Set down with due care
Don't walk away in silence
Don't walk away

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It's Party Time! / Re: What LBT Song reminds you of the Person Above?
« on: August 21, 2018, 12:50:48 PM »
Hmm, hard to say with you.

"Hidden Runner" I guess. Not too many dark, horror themed songs in the series (shame, the result could be interesting.)

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Probably either a Diplodocus (longneck), Carcharodontosaurus Saharicus (sharptooth) or a Quetzalcoatlus (flyer)...

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The Party Room / Re: Make up a crazy lie about the person above you
« on: July 12, 2018, 07:16:28 PM »
TPAM dates Catwoman.

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Silver Screen / Re: Jurassic World: Fallen Kingdom
« on: July 11, 2018, 11:11:10 PM »
Going in, I figured the film would be at least decent and much like the first Jurassic World - I was pleasantly surprised.

Especially since it has taken the series into unknown territory with that ending.

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It's Party Time! / Re: Ban The Person Above You (game)
« on: July 11, 2018, 11:06:30 PM »
There is no 'U' in banhammer...

Banned.  :lol

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The Party Room / Re: What does the avatar above say?
« on: July 11, 2018, 11:04:32 PM »
(Oh dear, I've created a monster :p)

Get over here!

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The Party Room / Re: What does the avatar above say?
« on: July 10, 2018, 09:46:37 PM »
"There's no escape, be my victim..."

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Starday Wishes / Happy Starday, LoyfeCycleProtector!
« on: May 18, 2018, 01:22:58 PM »
I know this is late, but happy birthday, Loyfe :)  :TreeStar

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Character Profiles / Belmont's original characters
« on: April 22, 2018, 09:21:57 PM »
Name: Sophos

Species: Diplodocus longus (Whiptail Longneck)

Gender: Male

Age: 12 years (variable in RPs however.)

Location: Mysterious Beyond (variable in RPs)

Hatch day: Summer

Family: Mother – Plo, Father – Kleos, Sister – Aglaia

Appearance(Young):  Sophos’ scaled skin is beige in tone, blending into a row of white along his back, which is also lined by a row of keratinous spines from the base of his neck to the base of his tail, the tip of which is a darker brown. His underside is chalk white. His legs are thick, but not as strong as they will be when he is older. Sophos’ neck isn’t as long as a fully grown longneck either. His eye colour is a soft green.

Appearance (Adult): Sophos’ scaled skin is beige in tone, blending into a row of white along his back, which is also lined by a row of keratinous spines from the base of his neck to the base of his whip-like tail; the top of which is a darker brown. His underside is chalk white and his legs are thick and strong as any sauropod. Sophos’ neck is long and limber. His eye colour is a soft green.

Personality: Shy and soft-spoken, even when among his own herd. Sophos prefers rather to listen and be mindful. He can occasionally be mischievous and bold at times, which has gotten him into trouble on more than one occasion. Despite this, he is fairly mature for his age - especially in part to having to look after his younger sibling when their father isn’t around. He can also be fairly clever and a quick learner. But he is also not very confident in his abilities, nor the most optimistic or even the most level-headed when under pressure.

Biography: It is a tale long past, during an overlapping of two periods. A time of famine and decay, when the leaves were dying and water was scarce. As many of you esteemed listeners are more than likely aware of, many dinosaurs struck out in search of land to settle; while the sharpteeth stalked the herds of leaf-eaters along the way.
 It was among one such herd that there lived a story speaker known as Plo. She, along with many other longnecks, had been migrating for many cold times. When the herd rested, she would tell the others of a place known as the Great Valley, how there was more food and water there than they would ever need in a lifetime. The young ones who would often curl up against Plo’s belly and eagerly listened to her tales were enraptured by the thought of such a place, especially in a time such as their current predicament. But many members of the herd only looked upon such stories with skepticism. At best - wishful thinking. After all, how could such a place remain during such a harsh period of time?

Eventually, they decided to travel to the south east, it was there that the herd came upon a land untouched by the famine, Stone Tooth Gulch they called it, for the large cavern that dominated the region. Just in time for the mating season too, for It was here that Plo was courted by a male from the north, by the name of Kleos. For a while, it seemed as if the Gulch was an adequate settling ground.
And it was here, many cold times later, that young Sophos was born and his sibling - Aglaia - soon after.

However, the signs of decay were becoming ever clearer as Stone Tooth Gulch became affected by the drought, at first it was just the fringe of the area that was devoid of food and water, but by the time of their birth, well over half of the Gulch was lost. Sophos and Aglaia’s mother – Plo, had succumbed to the growing heat and increasingly harsh weather naught but a season earlier, leaving only Kleos to watch over and guide them.

Once the next cold time passed, the herd decided that it was best to move on once again, in search of yet another place that would sustain them for the future; a journey that would last many, many seasons. As Sophos grew, he quickly became familiar with the dangers of the world he inhabited. Many parts of the land had shifted, due to earth shakes, erosion and every so often, he and the herd would encounter many kinds of sharpteeth along the way.

It was on the dawn of a day seven years later, the whiptail longnecks were passing through Brightfall Gorge, their numbers reduced significantly and Sophos, alone with his father and sister, pushed on with the rest of them. Migration, the risk of danger and loss, the thought that they may all starve, these were things the young whiptail knew like an old friend, it was life. 

But in an instant, things took a turn for the unexpected when the silhouette of the bloodletting sharptooth known as Charo made his presence known with a bloodcurdling roar, flanking them from the rear. Many of the longnecks - the matriarch, along with Kleos, swung around to face him, while the others continued on – Sophos and Aglaia among them. The gorge’s walls were steep and high, impossible for any longneck to climb. So those unfit to fight could only flee along the path in a tumultuous group. Sophos swung his head around to gaze in his father’s direction, stopping in his tracks, fearing for his father’s life.

For a moment, it seemed as if the herd had the upper hand – six against one, Kleos dealt a heavy blow to the large theropod, sending him crashing into the side of the gorge, the impact caused a rock slide which separated the combatants from Sophos and the rest of the herd. Kleos shouted at the young one to run, but Sophos was frozen in place as Charo gripped the matriarch in his jaws and crushed her windpipe like a vice, then took notice of the young longneck just as a wall of boulders blocked the sight of both.


With a crack of her tail upon Sophos’ rump, Aglaia snapped the young longneck from his frightened stupor and urged him on. So they ran, the adrenaline rushing in Sophos’ veins, as if at any moment Charo would chase them down and strike them both dead. They nary slowed until they reached the end of the gorge and it dawned on both siblings that the rest of the herd had left them both far behind.

Not a moment later, they could faintly hear something smashing through the wall of boulders long behind them, followed by an unmistakable, enraged roar.

“Looks like we’re on our own from here.”

With little hesitation, the two whiptail longneck siblings rushed out into the unknown...into the Mysterious Beyond.




More to come...


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General Land Before Time / Strut or Ozzy?
« on: April 22, 2018, 07:38:43 PM »
Strut, enough said.

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Land Before Time Captions / Cera's happy bout something!
« on: March 28, 2018, 11:52:01 PM »
Smug trike

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Silver Screen / The My Little Pony - Friendship is Magic Thread
« on: January 03, 2018, 11:54:37 PM »
Found this earlier and felt the need to post it.

My Little Pony meets Rush, enjoy:


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WIABaWK5_Ys

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Gamers Zone / Ace Combat 7
« on: December 09, 2017, 02:25:11 PM »
Maybe, but it seems like Namco is committed to a 2018 release.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Land Before Time Unleashed
« on: December 01, 2017, 09:30:40 PM »
I am sure anyone who reads this will likely have one question in mind at this point: Why are you replying in a thread that has been stone-dead since 2009?

Mainly, to give my definitive thoughts on this series of (now lost) stories, my old shame.

Let's start on why I wrote the blasted thing in the first place. To put it plainly - escapism as a way to cope with a rough patch in my life. I had just rediscovered The Land Before Time at that point, after having long forgotten it. At the time, I was still coping with being dragged from the panhandle of Florida to the Keys against my will two years prior, along with struggling in school at the time (both academically and socially, the latter I decided to wash my hands of completely) and a deep depression. Feeling nostalgic, inspired by other fan fiction I had read (perhaps a bit too much) and wishing I was anywhere else, I wrote the very first version of The Land Before Time: Journey Across Time (then called 'The Land Before Time: Unleashed) one afternoon in late 2008.

It was quite different to what would eventually be put up on FF.net. For one, it was a shameless self-insert (as in, I was the main character. No Author Avatars in sight) and it was written from a first person perspective in what I can now only consider a pale and nearly insulting emulation of the writing style of British author Herbert George Wells (whose works I was quite the fan of at the time, still am to an extent.)

The plot was still very much the same and downright plagiarized another fan fiction written by one Jedi472 to such a shameful degree so as to strip my own story of any unique touch it could have had.

The three sequels followed, all written in this fashion, all with the plot going completely off the rails and all objectively as rubbish as the original.

Of course, when I first joined FF.net, I saw these stories as a good thing to throw out there. But I thought they required some changes, so I rewrote it with the perspective changed to third person and with the protagonist changed to that of a chap named Ethan Sullivan (The surname being a reference to Sullivan Bluth Studios), who would go on to be among the worst written Gary Stu's in fan faction
 
The stories themselves (the prequel and rewrite included) are irredeemably terrible, the concept was something that would better fit a novel with chapters, but I wrote them like one-shots, not splitting anything into chapters - square peg, round hole. If that wasn't bad enough, older versions of the first story didn't even have spacing between the paragraphs, making it two giant walls of text.

The villains suffered the most, the primary antagonist - Andrew Jones was one dimensional and forgettable, the fact that he was a child made him very difficult to take with any grain of seriousness. The fact that I demonized the Spartans (no, I don't know why they were there either) in the first is a bit ironic, had I written it today, I would have treated a portrayal of Sparta or any Greek state with far more respect; not to mention they wouldn't be antagonists.

The mythology I tried to add to the series was contrived and generally forgettable. Plus, I went too far with the crossovers, making the concept something it was never intended to be.

Bottom line, these stories were a good stepping stone and they drove me to get better at my craft...but I'm glad they met a fate similar to many silent films of the 1920s.


 


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Sound Off! / What are you listening to?
« on: November 16, 2017, 03:48:00 PM »
What Difference Does It Make by The Smiths


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbOx8TyvUmI

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Sound Off! / Song That Touch the Heart
« on: November 12, 2017, 04:45:16 AM »
I guess the big one for me is Epitaph Of Seikilos by...well...Seikilos, the man wrote the melody in rememberence of his deceased wife, Euterpe. The melody has been dated to, at the very latest, 1 CE/AD but it could possibly be older.

 It's about how life is fleeting and that even the smallest moments are never trivial.

The lyrics, in Ancient Greek, are as follows:

HÛson z’is pha“nou,
mēdÈn hÛlōs sy lypo?,
pros ol“gon est“ to z’n,
to tÈlos ho chrÛnos apaiteÓ.

Roughly translated:

"While you live, shine,
have no grief at all,
life exists for only a short while,
And time demands an end."


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Real-Life Captions / Let me sleep
« on: November 12, 2017, 04:21:00 AM »
Reminds me of being woken at six in the morning back in my high school days, my expression wasn't all that dissimilar

Cat: Get lost and tell my can opener to buy more food while You're at it.

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The Party Room / Classify the member above's avatar
« on: November 10, 2017, 02:34:33 AM »
Quote from: Littlefoot505,Nov 10 2017 on  01:21 AM
That's a beautiful leopard!
8/10
A jaguar rather, still the sentiment is appreciated  :p  :)

Your avatar, Snik, looks like a character straight out of Freedom Planet. 8/10

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The Party Room / Classify the member above's avatar
« on: November 10, 2017, 02:18:28 AM »
Cyber, that is asking to be the poster image for a crossover between to Hasbro franchises. 9/10

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