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Great action chapter! Takua can fight, man! B)


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An interesting and action packed chapter.  The ways they got out of danger did seem to fit in with some of the movies and tv episodes.


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Time for the next chapter!

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Chapter 21
The Energy Stones


The gang had gone to Ko-Koro to show Turaga Nuju the tablet that Takua had found. Nuju was unable to understand most of it, but he did ask that they have the other Turaga join him in a meeting at the Kini-Nui temple. Not only did they gather the Turaga, but they also asked a few of the Great Valley residents to attend as well.

Now it was late in the evening, and everyone was gathered around Kini-Nui, where the Turaga stood. Nokama was capable of translating written language, so she was helping Nuju with understanding the writing on the tablet. Everyone waited patiently to hear what the Turaga had to say.

The Turaga stepped forward to begin the meeting. Nokama held up the tablet and said, “This tablet describes the existence of great items of power: the Stones of Elemental Energy.” Everyone in the crowd was surprised to hear this, including the gang. What were these “Stones of Elemental Energy”?

Vakama stepped forward and said, “Before we describe the purpose of these stones, we have a confession to make. Back on Mata Nui, our hopes that the Toa would one day arrive provided us with great encouragement to fight off the Rahi until that day came. However, now that we face the Rahi here in a different universe, there is no hope of the Toa coming to rescue us from the shadows of Makuta. We chose not to tell anyone, not even the Matoran, because it would easily discourage everyone to the point of failure. But fear not, my friends. We now have a new hope to stop Makuta.”

Nokama began to describe what was written on the tablet. “Each of the Energy Stones contain elemental energy of each of the elements. Whoever possesses those stones will have the ability to control the elements of whatever Energy Stones they possess. They will not have as much power as a Toa, but still enough to be a worthy opponent.”

“Looks like Jala's theory has been proven,” stated Takua. “There is no doubt that Makuta will want these stones to prevent any chance of being defeated. We need to find these Energy Stones before he does. Where do we begin our search?”

“The tablet says that clues to each of the Energy Stones will be revealed on this tablet one at a time. How these clues will be revealed, I am uncertain.”

“Whatever must be done, we will do everything we can to find these Energy Stones,” said Vakama. “For now, my friends, let us return to our resting areas. It is now very late, and I am sure that we could all use a good night's rest.”

“I agree,” said Littlefoot's grandfather. “It is getting late, so we shall worry about this tomorrow.”

The Turaga left and headed back to their villages. As the dinosaurs headed back to their nests, they all had mixed feelings about the Energy Stones.

Many believed that the Energy Stones actually existed, simply because it was the only thing they could hope for. Some of those believers believed in the existence of those stones for more than just that reason. Cera's father was among those who did not believe in the existence of those stones. He was willing to put his faith in something that was already working to fight off the Rahi, and that was to simply fight them off.

As the gang headed back to each of their nests, Ta-Matoran guards went with each of them. The gang had forgotten that, as part of the Matoran's effort to protect the Great Valley, some guards were periodically assigned the duty of protecting children. None of those guards liked it, but while some didn't mind it much, others greatly despised it. Complaints about this were not uncommon. Often, the younger a child was, the more the guard hated watching over that child. Despite the hatred, it was still a duty they were willing to accept.

Takua and Littlefoot also had a guard with them as they headed to their sleeping area with Littlefoot's grandparents. The guard couldn't help but complain about Takua's recklessness. “Alright, rock-head, what were you up to this time?” asked the guard.

Takua looked at him and asked, “What are you talking about?”

“Why did you go into the Mysterious Beyond without a proper escort? Why did you even bother to bring those kids with you?”

Takua shrugged. “I didn't think it would be a problem. They had been in the Mysterious Beyond countless times, so I figured one more time wouldn't hurt.”

“Do you have any idea what kind of dangers are out there?”

“Oh yes, I even saw them myself. By the way, you might want to tell Jala that we shouldn't have to worry about Fast-Biters. They have an incredibly weak bite on a Matoran body, and I have a barely scratched neck to prove it.”

“Let me guess, you got yourself attacked by Sharpteeth.”

“Yeah, but I handled those Fast-Biters with no problem. I just didn't want to take on that big Sharptooth because... well... he's big! And that alone is terrifying enough for me.”

“About time you actually did something smart.”

Takua knew that he had actually attempted to take on that big Sharptooth. He just didn't want to talk about it to the guard.

“And don't think about using a search for the Energy Stones as an excuse to go wandering off with your dinosaur friends again!”

“What makes you say that?” asked Littlefoot.

“If Makuta wants these stones, there's no doubt that searching for these stones will be very dangerous. Leave it to us, we can handle the risks.”

“Don't worry, I'll let the guards do their part. You can look for the Energy Stones,” replied Takua. Littlefoot noticed that Takua had his hands behind his back and his fingers were crossed. He knew that Takua was intentionally letting him see this. He immediately knew what Takua was actually thinking, and he agreed with him.

When they reached their sleeping spots, the guardsman stood guard a few meters away and faced away from them. Littlefoot decided that the distance would be good enough. “I know what you're really thinking, Takua,” whispered Littlefoot quietly enough so the guard wouldn't hear. “You want to find those Energy Stones yourself.”

“Yes, I want to find the Energy Stones,” replied Takua just as quietly. “But I don't want to find them on my own. I want you and the rest of our friends to help me find them.”

“Don't worry, Takua. We will help you. Goodnight.”

“Goodnight, Littlefoot.”

Both of them soon fell asleep. Tomorrow, they would begin their search for the Stones of Elemental Energy.
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Note: For those of you unfamiliar with Bionicle, the Energy Stones are not an actual part of Bionicle, it was just something I came up with for the purpose of this story.

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My unfinished and canceled second fanfiction: Quest for the Mask of Life
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Sweet chapter! I wonder how the Enery Stones will be used...


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Next chapter! The search for the first Energy Stone begins.

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Chapter 22
The Quest Begins


It was the middle of the morning, and Takua and the gang were at Kini-Nui. Since this place was already well-guarded, they were all glad to not have those Ta-Matoran guards personally watching over them constantly. The tablet they had found yesterday had been left here and now sat atop a short pedestal. Despite all the information the tablet provided, they couldn't help but notice that most of the tablet was blank. The writing covered only the top quarter of the tablet.

“So... where do we begin?” asked Cera.

“I don't know,” replied Takua. “The tablet said that clues to find each of the Energy Stones will be revealed one at a time. So maybe we are supposed to read the first clue, find an Energy Stone using that clue, then read the next clue, find another Energy Stone using that clue, and so on.”

“But how will the clues be revealed?” asked Ducky.

“I'd like an answer to that question as much as any of you would. However, I do have something good to say. Remember that small tablet that Matoro gave us? I think it was not referring to this tablet, but to the Energy Stones themselves. So wherever we will find the Energy Stones, they will not be in the Great Valley.”

Ruby then noticed Chomper jumping as high as he could in front of the pedestal. She could easily guess what he wanted. “Do you want to see the tablet, Chomper?” she asked.

Chomper nodded. Ruby then picked him up and lifted him high enough for him to see the tablet. He didn't know why he wanted to see it. Maybe there was something on it that the others missed. As soon as his hands touched the tablet, something amazing happened. A single row of letters suddenly appeared just below the writing on the tablet. Everyone else quickly noticed this. “Did I do that?” asked Chomper who was completely shocked at what had just happened.

Takua took a look at the new writing. “Well, at least I can read it,” he said.

“What does it say?” asked Littlefoot.

Takua immediately noticed a symbol before the words. It was a horizontal line with four dots under it. “I recognize that symbol. That's the symbol for the element of earth. This must be a clue to find the Energy Stone of Earth. It says 'Seek within a tunnel within a cave'.”

“What does that mean?” asked Chomper.

“Me think it wants us to seek-find Energy Stone underground,” replied Petrie, who was clearly annoyed by such a fact.

“I can agree on what Petrie said, but I can't agree on something else about that clue. What is the difference between a tunnel and a cave?” asked Ruby.

“I'm actually not sure,” replied Takua. “But I think I know someone who would.”
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“Onepu!”

Onepu turned around to see Takua and his dinosaur friends approaching him. “What brings you here to Onu-Koro?” he asked.

“Have you heard about the Energy Stones?” asked Takua.

“Yes, Turaga Whenua just told us about it this morning.”

“We just found a clue to the Energy Stone of Earth, and we need you to help us figure out what it means.”

“Alright, what does the clue say?”

“It says 'Seek within a tunnel within a cave'. We were wondering if you could tell us what the difference is between a tunnel and a cave.”

“Sure, a cave is an underground area that forms naturally. A tunnel is an underground passage that was dug out by someone. If you want to find the Energy Stone, I suggest you look for a cave and look within that cave for any signs of digging having occurred there.”

“Thanks for your help. I guess we'll be leaving now.” Takua and his friends then turned around and began to leave.

“Oh no you won't. You're not going anywhere.” Everyone turned around to face Onepu. Onepu then smiled. “Not without me.”

“You want to help us find the Energy Stone?” asked Littlefoot. “Why?”

“You need a proper escort, and of all the Onu-Matoran, I'm the best choice there is. I am Captain of the Ussalry. I'll even bring an Ussal crab with me for assistance.”

“Thanks,” said Takua. “As soon as you're ready, we'll meet you at the entrance of Onu-Koro.”

“Agreed. While I'm getting some supplies for us, I recommend you ask Taipu to accompany us as well. He may not be the brightest lightstone in Onu-Koro, but his great strength could prove valuable on such a journey.”

“Good idea. We'll go to the Great Mine and tell him that you want him to join us.” Takua then turned around and headed for the Great Mine. His friends followed right behind him.

As Chomper walked, he remembered another Onu-Matoran that he and his friends had met during their previous visit to Onu-Koro. He believed that this Onu-Matoran would also be useful in this search for an Energy Stone. “You guys go ahead. I'll meet you at the village entrance,” he said before turning around and heading somewhere else. Ruby decided to follow Chomper, while the others decided to continue towards the Great Mine.

After about a minute, Chomper entered what he assumed was the correct hut. Inside, he found the Onu-Matoran he was looking for: Nuparu. Nuparu was busy disassembling a very rusty machine part, but Chomper hardly noticed. “Hey, Nuparu?” asked Chomper.

“Come back another time. I'm busy right now,” Nuparu quickly replied without even looking away form his work. He was now struggling to unscrew a bolt that was very difficult to remove due to all of the corrosion on it.

Chomper decided to ask his question to Nuparu anyway. “I was wondering if you would like to help us find one of the Energy Stones.”

The instant Chomper finished saying this, the wrench Nuparu was using suddenly slipped off the bolt and painfully smacked Nuparu on his left wrist. He quickly dropped the wrench and clutched his wrist while he grunted in pain. He then grumbled, “Stupid piece of junk. I'm sending you back to the scrap pile.”

Frustrated, Nuparu quickly grabbed the rusty machine part and carried it out of his hut. Chomper and Ruby were smart enough to move out of his way as he left the hut. They then followed him to where he got the rusty machine part. He then tossed the machine part towards a pile of scrap, too frustrated to care about where it ended up.

Nuparu calmed himself down after a few seconds. He then turned his attention to Ruby and Chomper and asked, “Alright, what were you saying?”

At first, Chomper didn't want to say anything, but he soon noticed that Nuparu really wasn't angry or frustrated anymore. He replied, “I was wondering if you would like to help us find one of the Energy Stones.”

Nuparu thought about this for a moment. He then said, “I do have some digging equipment that could be useful. Alright, I'll help you. Just let me get my things and I'll be right with you.”

“Thank you. Meet us at the village entrance.” Chomper and Ruby then headed there while Nuparu headed back to his hut to get a few things.

Ruby and Chomper waited at the entrance of Onu-Koro for a few minutes. Takua and the others were the first to arrive, along with Taipu. Taipu was very excited to be able to go on an adventure, especially so soon. “Don't get your hopes up,” said Cera to Taipu.

Onepu was the next to arrive. He assured everyone that Turaga Whenua had granted them permission to go on this search. Onepu had decided to bring his fastest Ussal, Puku, because he believed that they should be prepared to run from any danger. Not knowing how long the search might take, he decided to bring enough supplies to last them for a few days.

Takua told Onepu about the fact that they would be searching for the Energy Stone in the Mysterious Beyond. Based on reports from the Le-Koro Gukko Force, Onepu suggested that they begin their search in the north, where many cave entrances were sighted. Onepu also suggested that Takua, for his own safety, should carry a throwing disk with him at all times now, so he gave him one of his own. Takua decided to put it in his backpack for now.

Nuparu soon arrived, carrying a backpack full of various items. He simply said that he was bringing more than just some digging equipment.

Now that everyone was ready, they all left the village to begin the first part of a quest to find the Energy Stones.
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My first fanfiction: Quest for the Energy Stones
My unfinished and canceled second fanfiction: Quest for the Mask of Life
My currently ongoing fanfiction series: LEGO Equestria Girls



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Good chapter. Looks like the first stone is somewhere in Onu-Koro.


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You probably didn't read the last chapter good enough. The first stone is in the mysterious beyond in a region similar to the terrain of Onu-Koro. Anyway, here's the next chapter.

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Chapter 23
A Quick Escape


The gang, along with the three Onu-Matoran who had volunteered to help them, had recently entered the Mysterious Beyond to begin their search for the Energy Stone of Earth. They were now walking through a small canyon. While the others walked, Onepu was riding on Puku's back, since she belonged to him.

Petrie was flying not too far above everyone. He couldn't help but find it interesting that he was traveling with four Matoran, and they all wore the same kind of mask. He thought that perhaps the Pakari was a popular kind of mask, at least for Onu-Matoran.

Taipu, being so enthusiastic about being on an adventure, was practically running all over the place as he tried to find a cave for them to search. Obviously, his attempts were proving futile.

Cera was having a hard time trying to tolerate Taipu's behavior. She sighed and asked Takua, “Remind me again, why did we even bring him with us anyway?”

“Because he's the strongest Onu-Matoran,” replied Takua. “If something were to happen, like we get buried by a rock-slide, he may be the only one who could save us.”

Cera shook her head and sighed. She would just have to put up with it for now.

Meanwhile, Littlefoot noticed that Nuparu was scribbling something on a stone tablet. Curious, he asked, “What are you doing?”

“Drawing sketches,” replied Nuparu.

“Of what?”

Nuparu then showed Littlefoot the sketch he was making of a Fast-Runner, like Ruby. “Different types of dinosaurs. I figured that while I'm out here, I should take notes on how the bodies of different kinds of dinosaurs are built and how they work for certain purposes. I think it might help inspire me to create an excellent invention.”

“Wow, how much have you got so far?”

“Quite a few, actually. This one for example, Fast-Runners are built for speed. They are lightweight, compared to other dinosaurs of their size, and they have long thin legs for excellent speed.” Nuparu then reached into his backpack and pulled out a sketch of a Flyer he made.”Another example, Flyers have a very small, lightweight body to make flying possible. Also, to keep them airborne, nearly half of their surface area, or skin as you would probably call it, is on their wings.”

“Wow, you seem very smart, Nuparu.”

Nuparu then put the sketches away. “I just take careful notes on everything I notice. It's amazing what you can learn just by observing.”

“Could you tell me what you know about Longnecks?”

“I'm not studying dinosaurs that much. I'm an engineer, not a biologist.”

While the group continued walking, Redclaw, Screech, and Thud watched them from behind one of the canyon walls. The intentions of these Sharpteeth were now more evil than before. A strange creature named Makuta had spoken to them. He had asked them to stop those kids and their Matoran friends from finding the Energy Stones. In return, he promised them total control over the Great Valley once he left to return to his universe.

They noticed that the kids were not only traveling with the same strange creature they had seen earlier, but now there were three more of those strange creatures. That could easily mean that they were searching for one of the Energy Stones. Now that their goal was clear, they decided the time had come to take action.

The group of dinosaurs and Matoran were still walking when, suddenly, they heard a loud roar throughout the canyon. “What was that?” asked a very panicked Taipu.

“That would be a Sharptooth, and I'm talking about a big one.” replied Cera. They then heard that roar again, along with the roars of two Fast-Biters. Everyone looked back and saw Redclaw, Screech, and Thud approaching them.

“Them again!?” exclaimed Takua.

“You've seen them before?” asked Onepu.

“Yeah, back when I found that tablet yesterday. They're probably the worst group of Sharpteeth we'll see out here, so I say we start running!” Takua then ran as fast as he could. Everyone else soon followed.

Taipu was easily convinced to run. Nuparu was uncertain at first, but decided that it would probably be best for him to stick with the group. Onepu tried to urge Puku to run. However, when the Sharpteeth began chasing them, Puku panicked and took off with such force that Onepu fell off and had to run on his own.

When Takua looked back and noticed Puku coming in his direction very fast, he got an idea. It was a crazy idea, but he was willing to try it. As soon as Puku was beside him, he jumped onto Puku's back and tried to urge her to turn around and run in the opposite direction. Surprisingly, she did so with almost no hesitation, as if she was being very loyal to him.

As Takua rushed past his friends and the Onu-Matoran, he shouted, “Get out of here! I'll distract them!” He rushed past them so quickly, they didn't have time to object him.

Puku quickly carried Takua towards the Sharpteeth. Considering how fast Puku could run, Takua believed he would be able to easily outrun the Sharpteeth. He urged Puku to run around in all directions, greatly confusing the Sharpteeth. No matter how hard they tried, the Sharpteeth just weren't fast enough to catch them.

Meanwhile, the others were still running. Suddenly, Nuparu stopped and shouted, “Everyone, wait!” Everyone immediately stopped and turned to face him.

Onepu thought Nuparu wanted to do something that would be unnecessary for such a time and place. “Nuparu, we don't have time for this!” he exclaimed.

“Of course we do! Takua is distracting them for the moment, so we'll use this time to escape from the danger.”

“And we'll do that by running!”

“No! We won't be able to outrun that big guy!” Nuparu gestured towards Redclaw. “Instead, I suggest we get to a place where they can't reach us. Up that cliff.” Nuparu pointed up at the canyon wall to his left.

“Do you really expect us to climb up that cliff?” asked Cera.

“Not exactly. Onepu, Taipu, follow me.” Nuparu then quickly hurried up the cliff. Taipu quickly followed. Onepu was unsure about what Nuparu was planning, but he decided to follow anyway.

“Hey! What about us?” exclaimed Chomper.

“Don't worry! I've got some rope in my backpack. As soon as we reach the top, we'll lower the rope, you grab on, and we'll haul you up the cliff.” Now that everyone knew Nuparu's plan, it made perfect sense to all of them, so they were willing to follow it.

Takua and Puku were still busy confusing the Sharpteeth. Takua then noticed the Onu-Matoran climbing up the cliff while the others waited below. Clearly, they were planning something. He decided to help them by continuing his distractions, since it was working very well. He urged Puku to continue running around.

Once the Onu-Matoran reached the top of the cliff, Nuparu took three long ropes out of his backpack. The Onu-Matoran each grabbed one and lowered the ropes down. They were just long enough to reach the canyon floor.

Once everyone was holding onto the ropes, the Onu-Matoran began pulling them up. Onepu lifted Ruby and Chomper, while Taipu lifted Cera, Ducky, and Spike, and Nuparu lifted Littlefoot. Petrie, being a Flyer, had no need to be hauled up, so he just flew up to the top of the cliff.

Thanks to Taipu's immense strength, Cera, Ducky, and Spike were at the top in no time. Ruby and Chomper soon reached the top as well. Littlefoot was almost at the top when, suddenly, the rock beneath Nuparu's feet crumbled away, forcing him to let go of the rope and back up to prevent himself from falling off the edge. This made Littlefoot fall to what would very likely be his death. The others could do nothing but watch in horror.

Fortunately, Takua had seen this happen just in time. Ignoring the Sharpteeth, he urged Puku to run as fast as possible towards where Littlefoot would land. Puku was indeed very fast. She reached the location at just the right time. “I got you!” shouted Takua as he tried to catch Littlefoot. However, Littlefoot's size caused him to land on top of Takua and nearly made them both fall off of Puku's back. Everyone was relieved to see that Littlefoot was alright.

No longer distracted, the Sharpteeth were approaching fast. The added weight clearly slowed down Puku. Onepu knew that Puku was trained to be fast, not to haul things around. He knew there was only one way that Takua and Littlefoot would be able to escape. “Puku! Up here, Puku!” he called.

Puku obeyed and headed towards Onepu. It would be tricky, but not impossible, since Ussals were capable of climbing up vertical rock. As Puku began climbing up, Takua and Littlefoot held on as best as they could. Fortunately, by the time the Sharpteeth arrived, they had just moved out of reach of even Redclaw. Puku soon reached the top of the cliff, where Takua and Littlefoot hopped off.

Takua patted Puku and said, “Good job, Puku.” Puku responded by licking him repeatedly. Takua laughed and said, “I guess she likes me.” Everyone else laughed as well. Redclaw's loud roar of frustration brought them all back to reality. Everyone looked down into the canyon to see Redclaw and the Fast-Biters walk away. Now that the danger was over, it was time to continue the search for the Energy Stone of Earth.

“Alright, Puku, back where you belong,” said Onepu. Puku obeyed and let Onepu climb onto her back. “Okay, where shall we continue our search?”

“How about that cave over there?” asked Taipu, pointing at a large cave entrance nearby. “We were looking for a cave, right?” Indeed, they were looking for a cave, since that would be where the Energy Stone would be hidden. In fact, this was the first cave they had seen all day.

Everyone approached the cave entrance. “Alright everyone, when we enter this cave, look for any signs of digging having been done here,” said Onepu. “If we do, we'll likely find a tunnel that will lead us to the Energy Stone.” Everyone then split up and began searching the cave.

Within a few minutes, Chomper found something unusual about the shape of a smaller cave that branched off. The walls of it seemed very smooth. Almost like the tunnels of Onu-Koro. “Hey guys! Look at what I found!” he shouted.

Everyone soon arrived to see what Chomper had found. “Looks like someone blasted a hole in the wall,” commented Nuparu.

Onepu took out a lightstone and used it to see further into the darkness. “It's a tunnel,” he stated. “I guess this is where we'll find the Energy Stone.”

“Tunnels again?” complained Petrie. “Why not seek-find Energy Stone up in the trees?”

“I guess you're the Le-Matoran of the group,” commented Taipu.

“Enough with the jokes,” said Onepu. “We need to find the Energy Stone, and we need to find it now.” Onepu then urged Puku to bring him into the tunnel. Everyone else followed him. Takua also decided to take out his lightstone, considering how dark it was in this tunnel.

After a few minutes of walking, they soon arrived at a place where the tunnel split in two directions. Nobody knew which direction they should go in. “Okay, somebody choose: left or right?” said Petrie.

Takua was about to suggest that they should split up and look down both tunnels when, suddenly, he felt the ground starting to shake. Everyone else felt it too. “Earthshake!” shouted most of the kids.

“I guess that's what dinosaurs call an earthquake,” commented Nuparu.

Onepu then heard a cracking noise. He looked up to see cracks rapidly forming in the ceiling of the tunnel. This definitely meant a cave-in would occur. “The ceiling's collapsing! Run!” he shouted.

Everyone ran in different directions to avoid the falling rocks. None of them knew which way they ran, nor did they care. Eventually, the falling rocks raised so much dust into the air that it became impossible to see anything. The earthquake soon stopped, along with the caving-in of the tunnel. Then all was quiet.
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My unfinished and canceled second fanfiction: Quest for the Mask of Life
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Great action chapter! Wonder what happened to everyone?


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I got this chapter done quite quickly. Here it is!

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Chapter 24
Separated


The dust raised by the tunnel caving-in began to settle. Petrie had flown back the way the group had come to avoid the falling rocks. Now he was flying back to the site, fearing that he would see some of his friends crushed by the rocks, or worse, all of them.

The only one he saw was Cera. She was on the ground, but no rocks had fallen onto her, fortunately. “You alright, Cera?” asked Petrie.

Cera slowly got up and replied, “Yeah, I'm fine.” Cera then looked around and noticed that they were the only ones in this part of the tunnel. “Where's everybody else?” she asked.

“Me no know. You think they were crushed-flattened by rocks?”

“I sure hope not.”

Suddenly, they heard some of the rocks start to shift. They both looked to where they thought they heard the noise. They then heard a grunting noise as one of the rocks was suddenly shoved aside by someone. That someone grunted as he pulled himself out from underneath the rocks. They quickly noticed that it was Taipu.

“Taipu! You alright!” exclaimed Petrie.

“Of course I'm alright,” replied Taipu. “I've had bigger rocks come down on my head before, and even that didn't bother me much.” He then looked around and noticed that Cera and Petrie were the only ones with him. “Where's everybody else?”

“I'm guessing they're stuck on the other side of those rocks,” replied Cera, gesturing towards the cave-in.

Taipu turned to face the rocks. He took a deep breath and said, “Well, I guess I'd better start digging.” He then grabbed a rock that was easily more than twice his size. He struggled for a second, but he soon managed to lift the rock onto his shoulders. He then raised it over his head and tossed it aside a few meters. The rock broke into a dozen pieces when it hit the ground.

“Wow, you very strong, Taipu,” commented Petrie.

“Yeah, but I'm a slow digger. It may take me a while to clear away all these rocks. I just hope everyone else is alright.” Taipu then lifted another large rock and tossed it aside.
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Some of the others who were also alright were in the tunnel that went to the left. Thanks to Puku's fast legs, Onepu managed to get away from the cave-in. He returned to see the entire tunnel blocked off. That was the bad news. The good news was that at least some of the young dinosaurs were okay. “Is everyone alright?” he asked them.

“I am okay. I am, I am,” replied Ducky as she got up. Spike got up and smiled to let everyone know he was okay. “And Spike is okay too. Yep, yep, yep.”

“We may be alright, but I'm not sure if any of the others are also alright,” said Ruby as she also got up.

Onepu took a look at the rocks that had piled up in front of him. Most of them were too big for him to move. He listened closely for a few seconds for anyone on the other side, but heard nothing. “I'm afraid there's nothing we can do here. We can only hope that Taipu will be able to clear away enough of these rocks to allow us to find the others.”

“Why are you putting your faith in Taipu?” asked Ruby.

“Remember how I said that his great strength could prove valuable on this search? Well, it seems that it's now become a necessity. Most of these rocks are so massive that only someone with his strength can move them aside.”

“What are we going to do?” asked Ducky.

“We came here to search for the Energy Stone, and I say we should still look for it. Taipu is a slow digger, and I'm sure you would much rather come with me than to wait here for hours.” Onepu then urged Puku to carry him further into the tunnel. He was glad to have his lightstone, since this tunnel was quite dark.

Ruby, Ducky, and Spike had no choice but to follow him. Before leaving, Ruby took one last look at the cave-in, silently hoping that everyone else, especially Chomper, would be alright.
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In the tunnel that went to the right, Takua, Nuparu, Littlefoot, and Chomper were recovering from the cave-in. “Is everyone alright?” asked Takua.

“I'm okay,” replied Littlefoot.

“Me too,” replied Chomper.

“I'm fine, but I think that cave-in has separated us from the others,” said Nuparu who looked at the massive rocks that blocked up the tunnel. Everyone else looked at the cave-in as well.

Takua walked up to the rocks and shouted, “Hey! Is anyone there!? Can anyone hear me!?” Everyone listened, but they heard nothing.

“What are we going to do?” asked Chomper.

“I do have digging equipment, but I don't think any of us have the stamina to dig through all of these rocks. Instead, I suggest that we continue on into the tunnel and try to find the Energy Stone. We'll let Taipu handle the digging.”

“Good idea,” said Takua. “While we wait for someone as strong as Taipu to dig us out, we should search for the Energy Stone.” Takua then led the way into the tunnel.

After about a minute of walking, the four of them had found nothing in the tunnel. “I wonder how far this tunnel goes,” said Littlefoot.

“I'm more interested in finding out who dug this tunnel,” said Nuparu. “I'm guessing this tunnel was probably dug to provide an excellent hiding place for the Energy Stone. In fact, I'd like to know where the Energy Stones came from in the first place.”

“I would like to know the answers to those questions, too.”

“I hope we don't run into anything dangerous,” said Chomper.

“Don't worry,” said Takua. “As long as I have my lightstone, nothing bad is going to happen to- woah!” Takua suddenly tripped on a rock. The fall caused him to drop his lightstone. After hitting the ground, he looked up just in time to see the lightstone fall through a crack in the ground. He rushed towards the crack, but it was already too late. He looked though the crack to see the lightstone fall a long way until it plunged into an underground body of water.

Takua moaned in frustration and said, “I lost my lightstone.”

Without Takua's lightstone, Littlefoot and Chomper quickly realized how dark it really was in these tunnels. Littlefoot didn't panic. He remembered that lightstones came from the Great Mine in Onu-Koro. He asked, “Nuparu, do you happen to have a lightstone in your backpack?”

“Of course I do,” replied Nuparu. “I know I've got one here somewhere.” He began looking through his backpack. Strangely, it was proving hard to find. Finally, after searching through every part of his backpack twice, he sighed in frustration and exclaimed, “Mata Nui! I forgot to bring one!”

Now Chomper was starting to panic. “Now what are we going to do!?” he asked.

Nuparu put his backpack back on. “We continue on through the tunnel. Let me lead. I'm an Onu-Matoran. We can see in the dark more easily than other Matoran.” Nuparu began walking through the tunnel. Takua, Littlefoot, and Chomper had no choice but to follow him.

After about a minute of walking, the tunnel had noticeably gotten very dark. It was so dark that they didn't see that the tunnel split in two directions. Worse, they didn't see that they accidentally split up and went in different directions. Takua and Littlefoot went in the tunnel to the right, while Nuparu and Chomper went in the tunnel to the left.

Less than a minute after being unknowingly separated, Littlefoot asked, “Are you sure you know where we're going, Nuparu?” He didn't hear a reply. “Nuparu? Nuparu!?”

“Nuparu, where are you?” asked Takua. Again, no reply. “Uh-oh, I think we lost him.”

“Chomper, are you still here?” asked Littlefoot. Again, no reply. “We lost Chomper, too!”

“Mata Nui! If only I hadn't lost my lightstone!” exclaimed Takua. He sighed and said, “It's so dark in here, I can't even see- oof!” He had run into one of the tunnel walls.

“Are you alright?” asked Littlefoot.

“Yeah, I'm fine.”

Littlefoot was having a very hard time moving around in such darkness. “Where are you?”

“Over here.”

“Where?”

Takua knew it would be useless to tell him where his was. He tried to find Littlefoot, while Littlefoot tried to find him. Neither of them knew if they were going in the right direction or the wrong direction.
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Less than a minute after being unknowingly separated, Chomper said, “It sure is very dark in here.” He had expected Littlefoot to say something to comfort him, but he heard no reply. “Littlefoot, are you there?” Again, no reply. “Littlefoot? Takua? Nuparu?”

“I'm right beside you, Chomper,” replied Nuparu. He looked back and noticed that Takua and Littlefoot were no longer there. “Uh-oh, something happened to Takua and Littlefoot. They're not here anymore.”

“Do you think the tunnel ate them?” asked a very panicked Chomper.

“Don't be so ridiculous! A tunnel is not a living creature! If anything got them, it would have been something living inside this tunnel.”

Chomper finally lost it. “I don't want to die down here!” He then ran off into the tunnel, screaming.

“Chomper, get back here! Chomper!” He sighed, realizing he had no choice. He would have to chase after Chomper. Fortunately, being an Onu-Matoran, he would be able to see Chomper running down the tunnel. As he chased after Chomper, Nuparu thought, How does Ruby manage to put up with him?
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My unfinished and canceled second fanfiction: Quest for the Mask of Life
My currently ongoing fanfiction series: LEGO Equestria Girls



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Good chapter. I wonder if Chomper could accidentaly find the Stone in his terror...


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Next chapter! This is probably the longest chapter I've written yet.

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Chapter 25
The Dark Tunnels


Littlefoot had lost his way in this extremely dark tunnel. He was still trying to find Takua, but the longer he looked, the less likely it seemed he would find him. He was now losing hope fast. Littlefoot felt scared.

Littlefoot...

Littlefoot immediately stopped. Did he just hear a dark voice call his name? “Takua?” he called. “Where are you?”

Littlefoot...

This time, he definitely heard that dark voice. But where was it coming from, and from who? “Takua?” he called, now trying to get out of here fast. “Takua!” Suddenly, he collided with one of the tunnel walls. He backed up a few steps as a pair of red eyes suddenly appeared on the tunnel wall.

“Shadows are everywhere,” said that dark voice, apparently coming from those red eyes. “And where they are, so am I.”

Now Littlefoot was terrified. “W-Who are you?” he asked.

“Have your Matoran friends not spoken of me? Surely, you would know Makuta when you saw him.”

Littlefoot couldn't move. He was standing face-to-face with the master of shadows himself. At least, it seemed like it. “W-Why are you here? What do you want from me?”

“What do I want? I want you and your friends to give up on your search for the Energy Stones. Let me have the stones, Littlefoot. Once I have them, I shall leave this universe. I'll even let your Matoran friends stay here with you.”

Littlefoot wasn't sure about what to say. Makuta leaving the dinosaur universe in exchange for the Energy Stones seemed like a good idea. But why did Makuta want these stones? Surely, there must be a better purpose for these stones. “No! I won't let everyone down!”

“You'll fail them more if you refuse. If you continue the search, you and your dinosaur friends shall die. For the Energy Stones, your lives shall be spared. Don't be a fool.”

“No, I can't... I can't...” Littlefoot couldn't manage to say anything else. The red eyes disappeared. Presumably, Makuta had gone elsewhere.

“Littlefoot!”

Littlefoot recognized that voice. It was Takua! “Takua, over here!” he called.

“Littlefoot? Where are you? Woah!” Takua had backed up far enough that he fell backwards over Littlefoot's back and hit the ground head-first. Takua groaned in pain and exclaimed, “Mata Nui! I'd give anything to have a lightstone by now!”

As Takua got up, Littlefoot noticed dozens of pairs of small eyes light up in the tunnel. “Takua? What are those?”

Takua also noticed the eyes. Considering how small those eyes were and how low to the ground they were, He could easily guess what they were. “Kofo-Jaga,” he replied. “Small, fiery scorpions. They're hardly a threat on their own, but in a swarm, they can be very dangerous. Too bad I don't have my lightstone. They can easily be chased away by light.”

“What do we do?”

“Run!” Takua and Littlefoot immediately turned away from the little eyes and ran down the tunnel as fast as they could. Dozens and dozens of Kofo-Jaga quickly gave chase.
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Chomper continued running down the tunnel in panic. He finally stopped when he became too exhausted to continue. After he caught his breath, he suddenly realized that he was all alone in the middle of this dark tunnel. It was so dark that he couldn't even see his own hand. He never thought he could ever be as terrified as was right now.

Chomper knew his only hope of getting out of here alive would be to find Nuparu, who had been right beside him before he had panicked. “Nuparu!” he shouted. “Nuparu! Where are you?”

“I'm right behind you, rock-head!” Startled, Chomper quickly turned around to see the dark green eyes of an Onu-Matoran looking at him. This had to be Nuparu. “Now could you stop panicking so we can find the others?” asked Nuparu, who was clearly frustrated with him.

“O-Okay,” replied Chomper nervously.

“Now just turn around and keep walking forward. I'll be right behind you the whole way. That way I can see where you are going and we won't end up going in different directions without realizing it.”

Chomper did as he was told. It felt very assuring to hear Nuparu come up with a complex, but effective solution to his problem. He was already starting to regain confidence in finding the others.

Nuparu had to admit that this plan was working quite well. Why didn't he think of it earlier? If he had, Takua and Littlefoot would still be with them. There was no time to worry about this, however. He soon noticed a crack in the ground large enough for Chomper to fall through, and Chomper was heading right for it. “Watch where you're stepping,” warned Nuparu.

Chomper didn't even have time to react. He suddenly fell through the crack. Fortunately, he hardly fell far at all. The ground he was now on was just barely low enough that he couldn't reach the crack he fell through.

As he looked through the crack, Nuparu was relieved to see Chomper was not only uninjured, but also close enough for him to be able to get him out of there with ease. “Are you alright?” asked Nuparu, just to be sure.

“I'm okay,” replied Chomper. Suddenly, he noticed something unusual. He noticed a dark green light, and it wasn't coming from Nuparu's eyes. He turned around and saw a stone, but it wasn't just any stone. It was shaped like a lightstone, but it glowed a dark green light. It also stood upright on the ground, possibly indicating that it was intentionally placed here by someone. Was this the Energy Stone? “Hey, Nuparu, I think I found the Energy Stone,” said Chomper.

“Really? Let me see it.”

Chomper walked up to the stone and grabbed it with both of his arms. He then tried to pull the stone out of its position. At first, it didn't seem to budge at all. Suddenly, the stone came out of its place. He nearly lost his balance as he was thrown backwards from the sudden release of the stone. He stared at it for a few seconds in awe and wonder at such a strange object. Remembering that Nuparu wanted to see the stone, Chomper walked back to the crack he had fallen through.

Nuparu then grabbed Chomper and pulled him up through the crack and back into the tunnel. Chomper then let him take a look at the stone. Nuparu studied it for a minute. Finally, Nuparu said, “I don't know if it's my imagination, but I think I can feel the elemental energy from within this stone. If anything is the Energy Stone of Earth, this would definitely be it. Good work, Chomper!”

Chomper felt proud of himself. Sure, it was an accident, but he had actually found the first of the Energy Stones. If only his friends were here to see this.

Nuparu then put the Energy Stone in his backpack and said, “Come on. As soon we find the others, we can get out of these tunnels and get back home.” The two of them continued on into the tunnel, with great hope that they would soon find the others.
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Taipu was still busy clearing away the cave-in. He had made good progress, but it was still taking a long time.

Cera had now become very bored and frustrated. She sighed and asked, “How many more rocks do you have to move?”

“I don't know, but please try to be patient,” replied Taipu. “I did say I was a slow digger, after all.” He then tossed aside another large rock.

Although Cera had already lost a lot of patience, Petrie was quickly losing patience as well. Petrie sighed and complained, “Us never gonna leave dark-tunnel!”

Suddenly, the roar of a Fast-Biter was heard throughout the tunnel. “Did you hear that?” asked Taipu.

“Of course we did!” replied Cera, still frustrated. Suddenly, they saw two Fast-Biters run towards them. It wasn't too dark in this tunnel to see who they were: Screech and Thud.

Last time, Takua had been the one to save the group from these Fast-Biters. This time, Taipu wanted to be the hero like Takua. He quickly grabbed the largest rock he could find, which was easily twice his size, and managed to raise it over his head. He then shouted, “Back off, Fast-Biters, or I'll crush you!”

The Fast-Biters would have considered themselves fools to not see this as a threat. Clearly, this creature possessed great strength, and it would obviously be a bad idea to try to fight someone who was holding a massive rock over their head.

Taipu then tossed the rock towards the Fast-Biters. It barely missed, shattering into a dozen pieces as it hit the ground. Such an impact was enough to frighten the Fast-Biters, causing them to turn around and run back out of the tunnel. Taipu decided to pick up the biggest piece of the rock and chase after them.

“What do you think you're doing?” asked Cera.

“Trying to be a hero like Takua,” replied Taipu. It wasn't long until he reached the end of the tunnel, where he came face-to-face with Redclaw. Taipu quickly came to a stop. The Sharptooth stared down at him angrily. About a second later, Taipu dropped the rock and screamed in terror for a few seconds. He then ran back into the tunnel as quickly as he could.

About halfway into the tunnel, Taipu, being as clumsy as he was, tripped over himself and tumbled uncontrollably down the tunnel. He finally came to a stop right in front of Cera. He looked up at her and immediately realized that he had impressed her in a way he would have never intended.

“That was really impressive Taipu,” said Cera in a clearly sarcastic tone. “In fact, I think I should tell everyone in the Great Valley about what you just did out there.”

Not wanting to hear more of such humiliation, Taipu stood up and said, “I... I guess I should get back to digging.” He then walked up to the cave-in and resumed tossing rocks aside.
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Onepu, Ruby, Ducky, and Spike were still walking down the tunnel they were in. It was quite dark in this tunnel, so it felt very comforting that they had a lightstone. They had been walking for many minutes now, and they had found nothing so far.

Finally, they arrived at a small cavern. Onepu took a look around the cavern. After a minute, he said, “It's a dead end. I don't see any other tunnels out of this cavern.”

This disappointed them greatly. “What do we do now?” asked Ducky.

Ruby then looked up and noticed a small hole in one of the cavern walls. It was so small that only someone as small as Ducky would be able to fit through it. However, there was sunlight coming through that hole, and that could only mean one thing: a way out of these tunnels. She pointed at the hole and said, “I think I see a way out of here that you probably didn't see before.”

Everyone else looked up and noticed the hole as well. “That could definitely be a way out of these tunnels,” stated Onepu. “I suggest we take a look and see where it goes.”

Since the hole was so high up from the ground, they would all have to stand on top of another. Onepu guided everyone into proper positions. Puku stood directly beneath the hole. Spike then climbed onto her back, and Onepu climbed onto his back. Ruby then carried Ducky and climbed onto Onepu's shoulders. Ruby held Ducky up to the hole, where she was able to see what was outside.

Once everyone was in position, Onepu said, “Tell us what you see, Ducky.”

Ducky took a look at what was on the other side of the hole. Apparently, this side of the cavern was also the side of a cliff on the other side. The other side of the hole was indeed above the ground. Outside, she saw all kinds of terrain in a small area; jungle, desert, even ice. This area could only be one familiar place. “It is the Great Valley! It is, it is!” she exclaimed.

“Are you serious?” asked Onepu.

“Oh yes I am! Yes, yes, yes!”

Ducky's cheerful mood was a clear indication that she really was serious. Everyone then carefully got back onto the ground. “Well, at least now we've found an easier way back home,” stated Onepu.

“How can that be a way home?” asked Ruby. “Most of us are too big to fit through that hole.”

“If we can't use that hole, then we'll just make another one. Nuparu said he had some digging equipment with him, so as soon as we find the others, we can come back here and use that equipment to dig a hole in the wall.”

“Won't that allow Sharpteeth to get into the valley?”

“We'll just have to be careful to not make the hole too big.” Onepu then got back onto Puku's back and said, “Come on. Let's get back to the cave-in. I'm sure Taipu will have finished clearing away the rocks by the time we get back.”

“But what about the Energy Stone?” asked Ducky

“We are going to come back in this direction. We could just look for it in this area when we do, if the others have not found it yet.”

“That plan sounds like a good plan, Onepu,” commented Ruby.

They then headed back into the tunnel they had recently come from, hoping that they would soon rejoin the others they had been separated from.
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My first fanfiction: Quest for the Energy Stones
My unfinished and canceled second fanfiction: Quest for the Mask of Life
My currently ongoing fanfiction series: LEGO Equestria Girls



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Great chapter! they finally found the energy stone! Looks like Makuta's out to get them, though. This story's going great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!


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Time for the next exciting chapter!

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Chapter 26
An Explosive Return


Nuparu and Chomper were still walking down the same dark tunnel. As soon as they could find Takua and Littlefoot, they could head back to the cave-in and, hopefully, find the others waiting for them there. It was now taking a long time to find them.

Suddenly, Chomper picked up the scent of two creatures. He sniffed the air to determine whose scents they were. It was a Longneck and a Matoran. Takua and Littlefoot must have passed by here!

Nuparu noticed Chomper sniffing the air, so he asked, “What is it, Chomper?”

“Takua and Littlefoot have been here,” replied Chomper. “Follow me.” He then ran forward into the tunnel. Nuparu followed. Surprisingly for Nuparu, Chomper always seemed to turn in the exact direction the tunnel turned, despite the fact that it was obviously too dark for Chomper to see where he was going. He was definitely on their trail.

After about a minute of tracking, Nuparu suddenly noticed something up ahead in the tunnel. “Wait!” he shouted.

Chomper immediately stopped as soon as Nuparu did. “What is it?” asked Chomper.

Nuparu looked more carefully at the shape up ahead. He soon noticed it was two shapes. Then he recognized those shapes. It was Takua and Littlefoot, but something wasn't right. “I see them up ahead, but... why are they running this way?”

Takua and Littlefoot were still running from the large swarm of Kofo-Jaga. Takua looked ahead and saw Nuparu in this tunnel. He assumed Chomper was with him as well. They weren't moving and he had to warn them of the danger they were running from. “Run! Kofo-Jaga!” he shouted.

Less than a second after they heard this, Nuparu and Chomper saw the dozens of scorpions quickly chasing Takua and Littlefoot. Nuparu knew how dangerous Kofo-Jaga were, but Chomper didn't. However, the fear everyone else showed was enough to convince him to show the same amount of fear. Soon, all four of them were running from the swarm of Kofo-Jaga.

They ran down the tunnel, running in a new direction without realizing it. This tunnel eventually led to a dead end. Nuparu was the first and only one to notice this. “Dead end!” he shouted.

The others didn't react quickly enough. They collided with the end of the tunnel and fell to the ground from the impact. Then to everyone's surprise, the end of the tunnel seemed to come down on them like a wall falling over. All four of them were buried in earth and rock. As the wall collapsed, a large hole that revealed the surface opened up, letting in a lot of sunlight. The sunlight was too much for the Kofo-Jaga, so they turned around and fled.

Soon after the Kofo-Jaga fled, Nuparu emerged from beneath the rubble, followed by Littlefoot. “Ow, my head,” groaned Chomper as he also emerged.

Takua noticed the huge amount of sunlight as he emerged. “Well, at least we got rid of the Kofo-Jaga,” he said. He then realized that this was a possible path out of these tunnels. “Hey, look! We just found another way out of here.” He headed for the exit. “Come on, let's- woah!” Takua suddenly fell out of sight. The others rushed over to see him hanging on to the floor of the cave. “Bad idea! Bad idea!” He was on the side of a tall cliff, and it was a long way to the ground below.

Thinking fast, Nuparu pulled a small pickax out of his backpack. Holding onto the end of the handle, he held the head of it on the ground right in front of Takua's hands. “Grab on!” he said. Takua managed to grab onto the head of the pickax. Nuparu then pulled him up to safety.

After thanking Nuparu, Takua said, “Well, I guess we can't go this way.”

“At least now we are together again,” stated Chomper.

“But what are we going to do now?” asked Littlefoot.

“We're going to go back to the cave-in,” said Nuparu. “If the others haven't dug through yet, then I guess we'll have to dig through, ourselves.”

“What about the Energy Stone?” asked Takua.

“Don't worry, we already have it.” Nuparu pulled the Energy Stone out of his backpack for everyone to see. Takua and Littlefoot were amazed to see such an item. Nuparu then suggested that Takua should hold onto it.

Takua agreed and put the Energy Stone in his backpack. The four of them then headed down the tunnel, hoping that they would soon be out of these tunnels.
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Taipu was still clearing away the cave-in. Despite the vast amount of progress he made, it was now seeming that he would never reach the other side. Taipu was close to giving up when some of the rocks shifted and collapsed. Had he finally broken through?

Meanwhile, Onepu, Ruby, Ducky, and Spike had just arrived at the cave-in. To their disappointment, it was still there. They were about to think about what to do next when, suddenly, some of the rocks of the cave-in collapsed. A hole had formed in the cave-in, and someone familiar was standing in front of it.

“Taipu?” asked Onepu.

“Onepu!” exclaimed Taipu. “Thank the Great Spirit you're alright!”

Cera and Petrie also emerged through the hole to see Ruby, Ducky, and Spike were okay as well. Everyone was glad to see each other.

However, they couldn't help but notice that four of them were still missing: Takua, Littlefoot, Chomper, and Nuparu. Onepu reminded everyone that the tunnel was split in two directions, so perhaps they were in that other tunnel.

Everyone agreed that they had to clear away the rest of the cave-in. This time, everyone was pitching in, although Taipu still had to move the big rocks aside. As they dug, everyone hoped that they would not be too late.
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Takua, Nuparu, Littlefoot, and Chomper arrived at the cave-in to see that it was still there, to their disappointment. “I guess this means we'll have to dig,” said Nuparu. He took two pickaxes out of his backpack and gave one to Takua. They both began to dig through the rock. Takua was very reluctant to dig, but knew he had no choice. Chomper couldn't help because he was too small, and Littlefoot couldn't help because he didn't have hands.

About a few minutes later, Takua was already becoming exhausted. He was on the verge of giving up when, suddenly, some of the rocks shifted and collapsed. A large hole opened up in the cave-in, revealing some familiar faces on the other side. “Guys, look! We found the others!” exclaimed Takua.

The four of them quickly moved through the hole to find everyone else alive and well. Both groups were excited to see each other again. Everyone was relieved to hear that no one was even slightly injured.

“Now that we're all together again, we can continue our search for the Energy Stone,” stated Onepu.

“No need to worry about that, Onepu,” said Takua. “We already found it.” He took the Energy Stone out of his backpack and showed it to everyone. Everyone was amazed to see such an item. Takua then put the stone back in his backpack and said, “Now all we have to do is get back home.”

Takua was about to go down the tunnel they had all originally taken when Onepu stepped in front of him and said, “We've found a quicker way back home. It's down the tunnel my group was trapped in. All we have to do is dig a small hole in a cave wall and we're home.”

“Great, more digging,” grumbled Takua. “My arms are tired already.”

Only a few seconds after entering the tunnel, the ground began to shake a little. Onepu quickly looked up and saw the ceiling was going to collapse again. “Run!” he shouted. Unlike last time, everyone ran in the same direction. The ceiling caved-in, trapping everyone in this tunnel. Now their only option was to continue on down this tunnel and hope that it would lead them home.

As they all walked down the tunnel, each group talked about what had happened in the tunnel they were each trapped in. Littlefoot chose not to tell anyone about his encounter with Makuta, thinking that telling his friends about something so frightening would be unnecessary.

After a few minutes, they arrived at the small cavern. Onepu pointed at the correct cavern wall and said, “Ducky confirmed that the Great Valley is right on the other side of this rock. All we need to do is dig a hole through it. What kind of digging equipment do you have, Nuparu?”

“I've got something even better,” replied Nuparu. He took out of his backpack a long cylinder-shaped object. The gang didn't know what this was, but Onepu was clearly shocked to see such an item.

“Explosives!?” exclaimed Onepu. “You brought explosives with you!?”

Nuparu just shrugged and replied, “You never know when they might be useful.”

“Nuparu, the objective here is to dig a hole in the wall, not blow ourselves up!”

“Don't worry, I've thought of everything that could go wrong and came up with solutions to all of those problems. We'll take shelter behind those large rocks over there when the blast occurs. I didn't bring much with me, so even if the blast was somehow directed right at us, those rocks should be more than enough to protect us. I'm an engineer, so I'll be able to determine precisely where to place each of the explosives to create the most effective blast. And, best of all, we don't even have to worry about how big of a hole we make. The other end of the tunnel is blocked off, so even if we create a hole big enough to let any Sharptooth in, they wouldn't even be able to get here in the first place.”

“Wow, that is a great plan you came up with. You come up with great plans,” commented Ruby.

“Yeah, even I'm impressed by how much thought you put into it,” agreed Cera.

“I'm an engineer. It's what I do,” said Nuparu.

About a few minutes later, everyone but Nuparu was sitting behind the rocks, while Nuparu was setting up the fuse. As soon as he finished, he said, “Alright, as soon as I light this fuse, I want all of you keep every part of your body behind those rocks. I also recommend that you try to cover your ears. The blast will be very loud, considering the fact that we're underground.”

Nuparu then left his backpack behind one of the rocks and took an item out of it that would allow him to ignite the fuse. He grabbed the end of the fuse and used the item to ignite it. As soon as the fuse was lit, he rushed back to the rocks and shouted, “Take cover!” Everyone did what Nuparu told them to do and he did likewise.

The fuse continued to burn until the flame reached the explosives, detonating them. A massive explosion shook the cavern and everywhere else nearby. A huge cloud of dust was quickly raised, filling the entire cavern. As everyone coughed from all the dust, they heard the sound of many rocks falling. The explosives seemed to have worked.

Once the dust began to clear, everyone emerged from behind the rocks. Soon, enough dust cleared away to reveal that nearly the entire cavern wall had been blasted away, letting in a lot of sunlight. Everyone approached the giant hole to see most of the Great Valley in front of them.

“I'm still not sure if this was a good idea, but at least we saved some time,” said Onepu.

“I may not be someone who likes explosions, but at least it's better than digging,” commented Takua.

“Look! All of the rubble from the blast has created a pile of rocks we can use to climb down!” exclaimed Taipu. Everyone followed him down the pile of rocks and pebbles.

“You'll probably need to do some explaining, Nuparu,” said Cera. “I think everyone in the valley heard that explosion.”

“I knew you would say something like that,” said Nuparu. “I guess I'll just stay here and explain myself to everyone when they come here.”

“In the meantime, Taipu and I shall return to Onu-Koro and confirm that we have found the Energy Stone of Earth,” said Onepu.

Before they left, Takua wanted to give back the throwing disk Onepu had given him, but Onepu said that he could keep it. Takua then took the Energy Stone out of his backpack and said, “Here, take the Energy Stone. Give it to Turaga Whenua because I know he'll keep it safe.” He gave the Energy Stone to Onepu. Onepu accepted it and urged Puku to take him back to Onu-Koro as quickly as possible. Taipu followed on foot as quickly as he could.

Everyone else chose to stay with Nuparu. Most of the dinosaurs in the Great Valley soon arrived, wondering what had caused such a loud explosion. Nuparu explained to them about the situation that made him use the explosives. Once he was finished, he headed back to Onu-Koro.

Takua and his friends were now the only ones there. They had wanted to tell everyone about how they had found the Energy Stone, but it was getting late so they had to head back home. However, Cera couldn't resist telling her father about Taipu's humiliation she had seen.

As each of them slept that night, they wondered what the next Energy Stone would be, and where they would have to find it.
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Cool chapter! I wonder which stone they'll go after next?


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Finally! After dealing with over-stressful homework, I have finally managed to work on the next chapter and get it finished. Here it is.

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Chapter 27
The Scorpion Nest


Despite what their parents told them, the gang still wanted to search for the rest of the Energy Stones. Reluctantly, the adults had little choice but to agree that this was the only acceptable option. All of the guards were always too busy fighting off Rahi or other dangers, so they didn't have time to do the searching themselves. Everyone wanted Makuta gone as soon as possible, so if these Energy Stones would allow it, searching for them would be necessary.

By mid morning, the gang had gathered near the tablet at Kini-Nui again. It was time to find the next Energy Stone, whichever element it would be. “I wonder which Energy Stone we will have to find next,” said Littlefoot.

“The only way we will know is if another clue is revealed on this tablet,” replied Takua.

“But how will the clue be revealed?” asked Ducky.

“Let's try to remember how the last clue was revealed so we can reveal the next clue,” replied Ruby. “Let's see, Chomper wanted to see the tablet, but he was too small to see it. So I held him up so he could see it. But when he touched the tablet, the clue somehow just appeared.”

As Ruby finished saying this, everyone realized how the next clue could be revealed. “I wonder if I can do that again,” said Chomper. Takua then picked him up and held him in front of the tablet. He touched the tablet, but noting happened.

As he put Chomper back on the ground, Takua said, “I don't understand it. It worked last time.” Nobody knew what to do next.

Spike was just as disappointed as everyone else. Then for a reason even he couldn't figure out, he got an idea that maybe he should touch the tablet instead of Chomper. He approached the tablet and reached up to it with his right front foot. As soon as he touched it, a single row of letters appeared just below the first clue. The second clue had just been revealed.

“I guess someone else needed to touch the tablet instead of me,” commented Chomper.

Takua studied the new writing on the tablet. The symbol at the left was an octagon with four lines inside, two vertical and two horizontal with each of those sets parallel and crossing the other. This was the symbol for the element of stone. He read the clue aloud by saying, “To find the Energy Stone of Stone, we must 'seek within the great nest of the giant scorpions'.”

“Giant scorpions?” asked Cera, a little shocked. “I don't like the sound of that.”

“What are scorpions?” asked Ducky.

“I don't know, but based on things I've heard from Matoran, I think I have seen some before, but they were only very small and not very big,” replied Ruby.

“What about Nui-Jaga?” asked Littlefoot, remembering those descriptions as well.

“I think you're right, Littlefoot,” replied Takua. “Nui-Jaga are huge scorpions. Their tails are twice as long as I am tall. It looks like the next Energy Stone is hidden in a nest of Nui-Jaga.”

“But which Nui-Jaga nest?” asked Cera. “As far we know, there could be dozens of them.”

“The clue said the great nest, so maybe the Energy Stone is in the biggest Nui-Jaga nest,” replied Littlefoot.

“Great, more deadly danger,” grumbled Petrie.

“But where is that Nui-Jaga nest?” asked Chomper.

“I don't know,” replied Takua. “But I think we should have someone come with us in case if we need their help. We'll likely find the Nui-Jaga nest in a desert region, so I suggest we bring a Po-Matoran with us, and I know exactly who we should ask.”
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“You want me to help you find an Energy Stone?” asked Huki.

“That's right,” replied Takua. “You're more physically fit than any of us, and we'll likely find the Energy Stone in an environment that Po-Matoran, like yourself, are best suited for. So will you join us on our search?”

Huki thought about it for a moment. “I can see why you would like me to come with you, but I'm afraid I can't do that today.”

“Why not?” asked Littlefoot.

“There's a Koli match today and I can't afford to miss it, or I'll lose my chance at winning the Koli championship this season.”

“That's it!?” exclaimed Cera. “You won't help us just because you don't want to miss a stupid game of Koli!?”

Huki stared at her angrily. “Koli may not mean much to you, but here in Po-Koro, it is highly valued above many things.”

Not wanting to hear an argument, Littlefoot decided to provide a solution. “You could ask Turaga Onewa to have the game another day,” he suggested.

Huki didn't need more than a second to think about the suggestion. “That's actually a good idea. I could ask Turaga Onewa to postpone today's Koli match. I'll go ask him right now.”

“We'll come with you,” said Takua. “I have a feeling he might be able to point us in the right direction to search for the Energy Stone.” Everyone followed Huki to Onewa's hut.

Later, while the gang and Huki were speaking with Onewa, Hafu was working on yet another stone carving not too far away. He was taking great pride in his work, making sure that every detail was perfect.

A few minutes later, he noticed Takua and his dinosaur friends walk out of Onewa's hut, along with Huki. Curious, Hafu stopped his work and got Huki's attention by saying, “Hey, Huki! Where are you going? I thought there was a Koli match today.”

Everyone quickly noticed Hafu. “There was, but I asked Turaga Onewa to postpone it,” replied Huki. “These guys need my help to find another Energy Stone.”

Not wanting to miss out on a chance at fame and glory, Hafu decided that he should come along with them. He could always finish his carving later. “If you need help to find an Energy Stone, then take me with you,” he stated, holding his small pickax over his shoulder. “My skills in stone craft are the best out of all Matoran, and I can prove the benefits of having such skills.”

The others weren't sure about this. They didn't know how a skill at cutting rocks would be a benefit to them in such a dangerous area, but perhaps there was something about it that they didn't know about. Although Cera especially didn't want someone like him coming with them, they decided to let him come.

“Alright, you can come with us, Hafu,” said Huki. They all then headed to the gate out of Po-Koro to begin their search for the next Energy Stone.

Fortunately for them, Onewa had heard about the location of a Nui-Jaga nest outside of the Great Valley. He had told them that it was indeed a huge nest, and they would find it to the northeast. Now all they had to do was find that nest, knowing the Energy Stone would be nearby.
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The trip to the supposed location of the Nui-Jaga nest was uneventful. There was nothing but barren terrain with a few occasional rock formations. Only Hafu was willing to talk about anything at all, and he only talked about either stone carving or himself. Because of this, Cera actually hoped to find the Nui-Jaga nest as soon as possible.

Now it was early in the afternoon. Fortunately, Takua had remembered to bring food and water for his friends to have when they needed it. However, he only had enough room in his backpack for a day's worth of such supplies, so they would have to return home by the end of this day.

Huki was at the front of the group, so he was the first one to notice that they had found the large Nui-Jaga nest when they arrived. It resembled a short canyon with two levels of cave entrances on each side. Everyone assumed that all of the Nui-Jaga were inside the caves.

“Well, we found the Nui-Jaga nest. Now what?” asked Littlefoot.

“The Energy Stone is hidden somewhere here. We just have to find it,” replied Takua.

“I recommend we search as quietly as possible,” stated Huki. “For all we know, there could be a Nui-Jaga inside each of those caves.” Not wanting to draw the attention of such dangerous creatures, everyone agreed.

Everyone spread out and began searching. They looked behind and beneath every rock in the area. No one dared to look inside any of the caves, fearing they would find, and possibly awaken, a dangerous Nui-Jaga.

After a few minutes of searching, no one had found anything yet. Cera was about to check behind another rock when, suddenly, she stepped on a sharp rock without seeing it there. She yelled out in pain as she quickly pulled her foot away from the rock, her shout echoing throughout the area.

Everyone stopped right where they stood as they heard that shout. Soon, they could hear the noise of dozens of moving legs from within the caves. They then saw Nui-Jaga emerge from within the darkness of the caves. There were at least a dozen of them, stingers at the ready. It was also obvious that they wore infected masks.

Everyone slowly backed up until they were all in one location. Many of them were afraid that this would happen. Before the Nui-Jaga made their first move, Takua thought, This won't be good.
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Great chapter. These Nui-Jaga sound like interesting foes. keep it up!


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Man, writer's block can really get to you when you haven't worked on something for a while. Anyway, I've got the next chapter finished.

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Chapter 28
The Koli Champion


The Nui-Jaga were now closing in on the group. It seemed like there would be no way of getting out of there alive. “What are we going to do?” asked Chomper, nervously.

Fortunately, due to all of his travels across Mata Nui, Takua had learned many things about most kinds of Rahi, including how they hunted. He knew how Nui-Jaga hunted, so he knew what had to be done to avoid getting killed. “Spread out and get into an open area,” he demanded. “Nui-Jaga hunt by cornering their prey, so we have to move now!”

Knowing that their chances of escaping were quickly falling, they all agreed that it was their only option. Taking Littlefoot's suggestion, Petrie began bravely flying in front of the Nui-Jaga in hopes of distracting them. “Me quick-dodge flyer! You no catch me!” he taunted. One of the Nui-Jaga then swung it's stinger at him, barely missing.

Taking advantage of the distraction, everyone ran out of the nest as quickly as they could. The Nui-Jaga quickly noticed this and began pursuing them. The group had run towards the only opening they saw and it led into a short canyon. There was no open ground in sight, so they would have to run a long way.

There were a lot of rocks on the canyon floor. This frequently caused someone to trip on one and fall. When Cera tripped on a rock, a Nui-Jaga got dangerously close to her. She managed to get out of the way before it's stinger could hit her. The stinger hit the ground with such a force that it caused the rocky ground to shatter and create a small hole.

When Takua tripped on a rock, he saw another Nui-Jaga, and he knew he wouldn't be able to get away in time. Before it could bring down its stinger, a rock the size of a Koli ball slammed into its head, shattering upon impact. Takua looked back and saw Huki standing on top of a massive rock.

“Why don't you pick on somebody with more skill?” taunted Huki to the Nui-Jaga. He then kicked another rock towards the Nui-Jaga, hitting it in the head again. “You and the others get out of here! I'll hold off these guys.”

Takua agreed, and ran off to rejoin the others. After a few seconds, they had gotten so far ahead of the Nui-Jaga that they could now afford to stop to catch their breaths. “Is everyone alright?” asked Takua.

“I think so,” replied Littlefoot.

“Wait! One of us is missing!” exclaimed Ducky. “Where is Spike?”

Meanwhile, Huki was busy keeping the Nui-Jaga occupied. He was still kicking large rocks at them at a rapid rate. Unfortunately, they were now simply shattering those rocks with their stingers.

Now, they were proving to be overwhelming. One Nui-Jaga swung its stinger at Huki, who was still standing atop the massive rock. He quickly jumped off, landing behind the rock as the part of it where he had stood was shattered by the powerful stinger.

As Huki got up, he noticed Spike was standing right next to him. However, Spike had apparently buried his head into the ground. Huki just wouldn't allow this. “Spike! This is no time to be a coward! You're not going to do anything useful by burying your head in the ground!” exclaimed Huki.

Spike, however, was not cowering in fear. He had found something in a hole in the ground just large enough for him to fit his head through, and now he was struggling to get it out. About a second after Huki had finished speaking, Spike had managed to yank his head out of the ground. In his mouth was a rock that resembled a lightstone, but glowed a dull orange light. This had to be the Energy Stone of Stone.

Huki then took the Energy Stone from Spike and looked at it for a second. He could feel the elemental energy from within the stone. This was indeed an Energy Stone. “On the other hand, maybe you will,” commented Huki.

Suddenly, Huki saw Spike's facial expression turn to one of shock and fear. Huki turned around to see a Nui-Jaga right behind him, stinger at the ready. “Oh, right, forgot about that. Time to run!” Huki and Spike then ran down the canyon with the swarm of Nui-Jaga following close behind.

After running for about a minute, Huki quickly jumped to the side to hide behind another massive rock. He grabbed Spike by the tail and pulled him aside as well. The Nui-Jaga ran right past them. Rahi like Nui-Jaga were dangerous, but not smart.

Now that the danger had passed for now, they had to think of a way to safely get to the others without losing the Energy Stone they just got. Spike gestured towards one of the large rocks nearby and made a kicking motion with his right front leg. This was his way of telling Huki to do what he was doing before.

“Sorry Spike, but that won't work,” replied Huki. “That was only a temporary solution. I can't fight them all off. We need a new strategy.” The two of them then thought about what they should do.

Suddenly, they head a roar from the end of the canyon they had run from. Huki had never heard it before, but he could guess what it was based on descriptions he had heard about. “Let me guess, Fast-Biters?” he asked.

Spike nervously nodded, knowing that things were now going from bad to worse.

“Excellent!” exclaimed Huki in a surprisingly cheerful tone. “Go find the others and get them to safety. I have a plan.” Huki then ran off towards where he had heard the Fast-Biters. Spike was very confused by this, but he didn't want to be left alone so he had no choice but to follow the plan, whatever it was.

Huki ran for less than half a minute when he saw a pack of Fast-Biters at the end of the canyon, but they didn't notice him. He had to get their attention in order for the plan to work. He picked up a few pebbles from the ground and threw one at one of the Fast-Biters, hitting him in the head. The Fast-Biter turned towards him. “Hey! Fast-Biters! Over here!” taunted Huki. Huki threw more pebbles at them, provoking all of them to chase him. Once he thew the last of the pebbles in his hand, the Fast-Biters rushed towards him. Now all he had to was run fast enough to not get caught, but not go so fast that they would lose him.

Being more physically fit than most Matoran, Huki was easily able to outrun the Fast-Biters. He still held the Energy Stone in his hand, and he would need it for the next part of his plan. As he turned around a corner, he saw the whole group, including Spike, not far ahead of him. He also saw the swarm of Nui-Jaga even further up ahead, indicating that the group had avoided them the way he and Spike had.

For his plan to work, Huki needed to get the group out of the way without drawing the attention of the Fast-Biters. “Don't run anywhere! Move over! Coming through!” shouted Huki as he ran past them.

Everyone was confused as Huki ran by them like that. They then looked in the direction he was running from and saw the pack of Fast-Biters. Before anyone could panic, Hafu quickly reminded everyone what Huki had wanted them to do. Having no time to argue, everyone quickly rushed to either side of the canyon. The Fast-Biters ran right past them and didn't even seem to notice them. They got back together in the middle of the canyon, confused even more by what just happened.

“Huki must have made them really mad,” commented Cera.

Huki looked back. The Fast-Biters had successfully run past the others, and were far enough behind that the next part of the plan would work. He soon reached the Nui-Jaga, who quickly noticed him. He held up the Energy Stone and exclaimed, “Hey, Makuta's minions! Look what I've got! An Energy Stone!” Since they wore infected masks, the Nui-Jaga followed Makuta's commands and immediately began to try to get the Energy Stone from Huki.

“That's it, come and get it! Come and get it!” Huki then looked back to see the others, although far away, were watching him. This was all he needed to make the final part of the plan work. “Here it is, and there it goes!” He then tossed the Energy Stone high into the air towards the others. The Nui-Jaga now rushed to follow it.

Everyone saw the Energy Stone flying towards them, even though only Spike knew what it was. Takua saw it coming towards him, so he reached up and caught it. When he looked at it, he realized that he was actually holding an Energy Stone. He quickly decided to put it in his backpack before anyone else besides his friends saw it.

Meanwhile, Huki knew that all he had left to do was to get out of the way of the Fast-Biters and the Nui-Jaga. He rushed towards one of the short canyon walls and quickly began climbing. By the time he was halfway up, he looked back just in time to see the two groups of hunters collide with each other. Enraged, the two groups began fighting each other. The Nui-Jaga were clearly winning. “That's gotta hurt,” was all he could manage to say from seeing the inevitable destruction of the Fast-Biter pack.

Huki then resumed climbing and soon reached the top. He then gestured for the others to follow him to the top of the short canyon wall. They all agreed, considering that they were at a part that was more easily climbable.

A few minutes later, Huki rejoined the others near where they were. “How do you like that for a strategy!?” exclaimed Huki. “I saved us from the Nui-Jaga, prevented a pack of Fast-Biters from attacking us, found the Energy Stone, kept it safe, and I did it all without suffering any injuries.”

“Show off,” grumbled Hafu.

As Hafu said that, Spike stared angrily at Huki, trying to remind him that he was the one who had actually found the Energy Stone. Apparently, Huki didn't see this.

“I'll admit that the plan you came up with was a good plan,” said Ruby. “But there are other ways to stop a pack of Fast-Biters besides simply destroying them.”

“I agree with Ruby,” said Takua. “Do us all a favor, Huki. The next time you come up with such a plan, please consider some less destructive alternatives.”

“Will do, Takua,” replied Huki.

Hafu then loudly cleared his throat and said, “Can we get going now? The sooner I get back to Po-Koro, the sooner I can resume working on my stone carving.”

“Alright, alright! Stop complaining!” exclaimed Cera.

The group then began their journey back to the Great Valley. If everything went as expected, the return trip would also be uneventful.
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Two Stones down, three to go! Great Chapter as always! I wonder if they'll find the next Stone in Le-Koro?


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I think you need to read through the whole story more carefully. There are six Matoran villages, which means there are six elements (that are known for now) and there is one Energy Stone for each of the elements. Anyway, here's the next chapter.

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Chapter 29
Cutting Rocks


The group wasn't far from the path they had taken to reach the Nui-Jaga nest, so most of the journey back home would be through the same rocky and mountainous terrain.

Since no one was talking, Hafu decided to teach some things about stone carving to any of the young dinosaurs that were willing to listen. “First of all, every stone carving will start as just a large rock. Usually, I find myself starting with a massive block. The first thing you should do is to break off large chunks of the rock so that it will roughly resemble what you are going to carve. Remember to leave a relatively thick layer over the shape that you are going to carve, otherwise you might end up creating something too thin for your liking. Once the stone has been properly shaped, you may then begin the actual carving. Remember, steady hands and a perfect aim create the best results. Also, I recommend you start from the top and work your way down, otherwise the bottom could become too weak to support the extra stone above it and potentially cause the whole thing to topple over.”

While most of them listened to this lesson, Cera was just annoyed by the way Hafu spoke. She turned to Huki and asked, “Is he always this annoying?”

“It depends,” replied Huki. “When he's not talking about stone carving, he's talking about himself, and when he talks about himself, he really brags. At least he keeps his mouth shut when he's actually carving.”

Suddenly, they all heard a loud roar nearby. “I'm guessing that's a Sharptooth instead of a Fast-Biter,” said Huki. They then turned around and saw Redclaw, Screech, and Thud approaching them from behind. “Make that two Fast-Biters and a Sharptooth.”

“Not those guys again,” grumbled Takua.

Hafu quickly looked around for an escape route. He soon saw a tall and narrow mountain ridge nearby that was clearly unclimbable. At the bottom of the ridge was a hole that was just large enough for each of them to fit through. Best of all, he knew how he could quickly bring down the opening so the Sharpteeth wouldn't follow them through it.

“Everyone through there!” shouted Hafu, pointing his small pickax at the hole in the ridge. “I'll be able to stop them.” Having no other plans, everyone agreed and ran towards the hole. The Sharpteeth quickly began chasing them.

As soon as they reached the hole, everyone quickly went through it one at a time to reach the safety of the other side of the ridge. Only Hafu did not go through the hole. He stayed at the entrance so he could observe how the rock around the hole was positioned. He knew he didn't have much time, as the Sharpteeth were quickly approaching.

After a few seconds, Hafu knew exactly what to do. Using his small pickax, he broke off specific pieces from the rock that made up the vertical sides of the hole. Large cracks began forming in the rock. He stepped inside the hole, jumped up, and broke off a large piece of rock from the top. The cracks began to spread at a rapid rate, and the ground started to shake a little. He knew he had very little time to get out of there, so he rushed to the other side, where the others were waiting. Shortly after coming out the other side, he turned around and walked backwards so that he could see the result as he rejoined the others. Large rocks fell and blocked up the hole, raising a lot of dust. As the dust cleared, everyone could hear a roar of frustration from Redclaw on the other side of the ridge.

Hafu stopped walking backwards when he reached the others. He could easily see how surprised most of them were at what had just happened. He gestured towards the blocked-off passage and proudly said, “And there you have it: proof of the benefits of studying stone for centuries!”

“How did you do that?” asked Littlefoot, who was very amazed at how such a thing could be done.

“Every rock has a weak point. If you hit a rock with a small enough force, the rock will break only at the weak point and nowhere else. Since the hole was shaped roughly like an archway, the weak point was the topmost part of the entrance: the keystone area. But taking out only that one piece of rock wouldn't allow quick enough results. By taking out some of the strong points along the vertical edges, I created large cracks in the rock outside the hole, and if a rock cracks it can crumble. As soon as I took out the weak point, the cracks quickly spread, causing the whole thing to crumble and collapse, leaving the Sharpteeth trapped on the other side.”

“Wow, that was a great plan, Hafu,” commented Chomper.

“I'll admit that it was impressive, but that's only because it saved us from Redclaw,” said Cera.

“Shall we continue our trip home?” suggested Hafu. Everyone agreed and they all continued on their way back to the Great Valley.
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By the time they reached one of the passages that led into the valley, it was already late in the afternoon. When they arrived at the entrance to the passage, they saw a Po-Matoran stone carver standing nearby. As soon as he noticed Hafu, he said, “About time you returned, Hafu. You left this morning before I could tell you the good news.”

“Good news?” asked Hafu. “What would that be?”

“We've finally got permission from the dinosaurs of the Great Valley to carve Saurus Rock.”

“Alright! What are we waiting for? Take me there so we can set things up for tomorrow while we still have time today.”

“Wait a minute, what are you talking about?” asked Takua.

“Carving Saurus Rock was my idea,” replied Hafu. “I've been wanting to do it ever since I heard of the existence of that rock. The reason why I want to do it is that the dinosaurs of the Great Valley were kind enough to let us live here, and one way of showing thanks to them would be to give them a great statue that would be proudly looked upon for hundreds of generations of dinosaurs.”

“What exactly do you mean by 'carving Saurus Rock'?” asked Ruby.

“What I and most of the other Po-Matoran stone carvers want to do is to carve that rock so that it will exactly resemble the dinosaur it's based on, instead of roughly resembling that dinosaur.”

“So you're going to make it look exactly like a Longneck?” asked Littlefoot.

“That's right. And yes, I did hear about that little mishap you caused some time ago. Don't worry, we're going to replace that missing piece with the same exact type of stone that makes up the rest of the rock, and we'll use the best methods we've got to keep it in place.”

“Sounds like you'll be busy for a while,” commented Takua. “Well, good luck with the carving.”

“Thanks, and good luck finding the rest of the Energy Stones.” Hafu then followed the Po-Matoran to Saurus Rock. The rest of the group then walked through the passage back to the Great Valley.

As soon as they were back in the valley, Takua took the Energy Stone out of his backpack. He gave it to Huki and said, “Take this to Po-Koro with you and give it to Turaga Onewa. I know he'll keep it safe.”

“No problem, Takua,” replied Huki. “You know, I actually think it was a good thing that those Nui-Jaga attacked us. The Koli match that was supposed to be today will take place tomorrow, and that good amount of exercise I got today will help improve my abilities in that game. Thanks for letting me come with you.” Huki then left and headed to Po-Koro. Takua noticed that most of his friends seemed confused by what Huki had said, so he simply shrugged.

Now that today's part of the quest was over, the gang had the rest of the evening to rest up after everything they had been through today. Tomorrow they would begin the search for another Energy Stone.
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As always, great chapter. I wonder if Saurus Rock will come to play a larger part in the story?