The Gang of Five

The Land Before Time => LBT Fanfiction => Topic started by: StarfallRaptor on January 10, 2008, 03:12:36 PM

Title: My First, my Last, and My Everything
Post by: StarfallRaptor on January 10, 2008, 03:12:36 PM

You’re my First, my Last, my Everything
(Sieg’s Love Poem)

   To Hunter:
      You are my first, my last, my everything.

         You are my sun, you are my moon
         You are my rhythm, you are my tune
         You are my light in Darkest hour,
         You are my rare and radiant flower.

      You are my first, my last, my everything.
         
         To you, my love, my heart belongs,
         To you alone, my chosen bonds.

      You are my first, my last, and my everything.

   Love,
       Sieg Warheit.


So, What do you all think?

Title: My First, my Last, and My Everything
Post by: Chiletrek on January 10, 2008, 04:17:19 PM

Hello:
 That was a really good poem :yes , I liked it.

Title: My First, my Last, and My Everything
Post by: Malte279 on January 10, 2008, 04:30:06 PM

Pretty poem :yes
It can certainly be recited nicely.
The reference to the adored being as "chosen bond" may sound a bit resigned or fatalistic if compared to the other lines.

Sieg Wahrheit?
Victory truth?
What do these two words at the end stand for?

Title: My First, my Last, and My Everything
Post by: The Great Valley Guardian on January 11, 2008, 12:44:02 PM

Hunter would be pleased...of that I have no doubt!

This was an inspirational poem Starfall... :yes I enjoyed reading it!