For anybody who hasn't gotten the chance to travel over to fanfiction.net, I have decided to post my fanfic on the forum here so everybody can read it right here! Those of you who have already read it, you don't have to read it again, but if you feel like it then great!
I'm going to post the story slowly by chapter so you guys can have time to comment or just to take a breather. Also, if you guys want to help give me suggestions for any future projects, I would be more than happy to listen to them!
Anyway, here is the prologue of the story:
The Land Before Time
Revenge
Prologue
It was a stormy night in the Mysterious Beyond. Many sharpteeth were running about, looking for their families and trying to get out of the down pouring rain. Lightning lit the sky as two fliers desperately flew to the safety of Hanging Rock. The wind fought them for what seemed like hours even though it only took them two minutes to reach the cavern. Once underneath the rock, they shook their wings dry and looked at each other. Although both the same size, one was a light brown color while the other a somewhat dark pink.
“I’m getting sick and tired of this weather,” the pink flier complained. “Why can’t we find a place with no sky water?”
“Quit your whining,” the other flier scolded. “We only have to deal with this just a little bit longer. It won’t be long now until we return back to the Great Valley.”
“Yeah, and then we can get our revenge on those bratty children once and for all!” The pink flier began to laugh maniacally a little. “What’s the plan anyway?” The brown flier stared at him.
“You forgot already Rinkus?”
“No I didn’t Sierra!” Rinkus objected. “I’m just too excited, that’s all.”
“Well, it can’t hurt,” Sierra agreed. “Ok then. Why are we here?” Rinkus thought for a moment.
“We were forced here, by those pesky little hatchlings.” Sierra nodded
“That’s right. There was one spiketail, that annoying big mouth we kidnapped before, one threehorn, Pterano’s nephew, and that longneck. It’s because they foiled our plot to get the Stone of Cold Fire that we ended up here. Now then, what are we going to do to them?”
“We’re gonna hurt them!” Rinkus exclaimed. “We’re gonna make them suffer!”
“Especially the longneck,” Sierra pointed out. “I will personally take great pride in toying with him.” Sierra began an evil laugh, and then Rinkus joined