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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: October 25, 2015, 06:40:02 PM »
Chapter Seven: Bleeding Wounds

Just a warning: Lots of Gore throughout the whole chapter.

“How could you lead Coldbreath to us?” Pine shouted. The brown Stegosaurus strode up to the healer, flank facing the red Triceratops. He lashed his tail back and forth, readying to defend the yellow-scaled sprinter if the older male three-horn decided to charge. “He almost killed a passer-by yesterday. Now you brought him back to kill one of the herd?”
 
“How was I supposed to shake off a rabid sharptooth thirsting for my blood?” the Triceratops roared back. He took a step forward, only to have his left back leg almost give out. Blood glanced back at his wounded leg, much of the muscle and tendons ripped to shreds. One small patch even revealed bits of bone. It was a miracle that he was able to run this far to the herd.

“What the hell did you do, Blood?” Pine asked, panic lacing his deep voice as fear swirled within his green eyes. “What the hell did you do?”

Just as Pine asked this question, another roar echoed throughout the forest. A few dinosaurs not already paralyzed by fear, fled. There was no way they would be sticking around to, if not be killed by Coldbreath, watch one of the herd members die at his jaws. They were cowards and would not stand to defend their herd.

Hyacinth and Orchid did not flee. They could not. Orchid stood beside her gray longneck friend, who had painfully managed to climb to her feet when she first heard the roar. She leaned against her purple spiketail friend, still weak from yesterday’s battle. Hyacinth would have ran off with the others if it was not for her wounds. Orchid, on the other hand, was scared stiff, unable to move, memories of not only yesterday, but also of her friend Pebble’s death, replying in her mind. As far as the two adolescent females knew, Coldbreath was back for revenge.

Blood looked over his shoulder again, fuchsia eyes filled with terror as the ground shook with each step the massive carnivore slowly took. Each step silently telling him his end of nearing closer and closer. The threehorn turned back to Pine, completely forgetting about the question the younger male had asked. He tried to take a step forward again, this time his leg giving way. The adrenaline finally wearing off from the surprise attack and savage bite Coldbreath had given him.

Letting out a groan of pain, Blood looked back at his leg once more only to notice the clearly visible trail of blood he had left. He had made it ten times easier for the dark feathered backed rex to follow him. He had put everyone in danger, just like the last few times that he had acted so recklessly without thought. He thought he was doing something good this time for the plant eater world by getting rid of one more carnivore.  

The red Triceratops tore his fuchsia eyes from his wounded leg to his left flank. He gave a hard swallow at the sight of blood oozing out of a deep wound caused by the gray Tyrannosaurus rex’s razor sharp teeth grazing over his side in a glancing bite. He would surely die from blood loss, if not from the jaws of Coldbreath. Tearing his eyes away from his bleeding wounds, Blood focused his gaze onto Pine. “Please, help me. He’s going to kill me. I’m going to die.”

“Then be it,” retorted the orange Antarctosaurus whom had winked at Hyacinth earlier that day.

“Heat!” Pine snapped. “Let me speak.” The brown Stegosaurus took a few steps forward to stand in front of the fallen Triceratops. “Answer my question. What did you do?”

“I crushed a sharptooth egg,” Blood cried out. “I thought I was doing something good. I was getting rid of one more sharptooth that could split a family a part. I didn’t think he would find out and chase after me.”

“Was it Coldbreath’s?”

“I don’t know. Just don’t let him kill me. I have children. My son, Crash, is sick. I was looking for a healer. I came back to you Crooked, to see if you knew any healer that could help me. I want to return to them, alive.”

Pine said nothing, only turning his green gaze away from the terrified threehorn. Crooked turned to him before taking his own steps forward to comfort Blood. He placed a hand-like paw on the Triceratop’s nose horn. “I am very sorry, but I do not know of any other healers that could even come close to healing your son’s illness. I can though, help you get back to your daughter and son, alive.”

The yellow Dryosaurus then turned to his mixed herd. “To all who are left. We must help Blood. He may have been kicked out of the herd for his reckless actions and endangerment to it, but he is still one of us, a plant eater. We must defend him from Coldbreath.”  

A ripple of murmurs flittered among the remaining herd members. They were wary of helping someone who had put their lives in danger more than once. Just as a few began to step cautiously forward, a thunderous roar ripped through the air, the temperature dropping drastically as the sound faded away. Only a moment of pure silence passed before all chaos broke loose.

Coldbreath emerged from the trees. The predator lunged forward and his scaly gray jaws clamped down on Blood’s lower back, causing the Triceratops to roar out in pain. He pulled the herbivore back and away from the waiting herd who was once again paralyzed with fear. Releasing his grip on Blood, Coldbreath looked up at the watching herbivores, red eyes scrutinizing every single one of them. He gave a deafening roar, warning them to not intervene.

The massive beast turned to Blood. He let out a low rumbling roar, lowering himself close to the Triceratops’s head. He gave a huff, bathing the older male in his icy cold breath. He parted his jaws slightly, letting Blood gaze at the monstrous, slimy saliva coated fangs, which had been used to slaughter many. The red threehorn could see the predator’s tongue move as he gave another, louder growl as if he was trying to say something to him. As if mocking him for crushing his beloved’s lone egg.

Blood clenched his bright pink eyes shut, not wanting to see anymore. When Coldbreath noticed this, he snapped his jaws closed. Blood flinched at the sound, his eyes slowly opening. He did not want to see, but he could not keep his eyes close for more than a few seconds.

Coldbreath moved his snout to Blood’s belly. As he did with the threehorn’s head, he let out a long breath, bathing his underside with his icy breath. This time, the red threehorn shivered, his underside much more sensitive than his frilled and horned head. It felt unprotected, even the creamy peach scales were softer.

Blood let out a loud yelp when he felt the carnivore’s snout press into his belly. Coldbreath was truly toying with him. Making him suffer not from pain, but postponing each wound he could inflict with a simple touch. The Tyrannosaurus rex gave another low, rumbling growl before his tongue flicked out. Slowly he licked upwards, leaving an icy trail of saliva on the creamy peach scales of Blood’s underside. As Coldbreath drew back, ice crystals were visible where he had licked the herbivore.

The bonecrusher sharptooth stared down at his prey. His eyes, the same color as Blood’s freshly spilt life retaining liquid, gazed over the wounded threehorn. A low hum resonated from the beast’s chest as he continued to calculate, a delighted twinkled flickering in his red eyes. In one swift motion, he lunged forward; steel jaws clamping down on Blood’s wounded leg.

Coldbreath gave a vicious tug, pulling the herbivore back with the force. The threehorn cried out as pain radiated throughout his body. Teeth scraping against bone. Muscle and tendons straining to stay attached to the femur. The beast gave another brutal tug. The pop of Blood’s hip dislocating echoed through the forest along with his pained bellows that only grew louder in volume and intensity. Another tug. The sound of ripping flesh and sinew either detaching from bone or tearing by the Coldbreath’s fangs. One more jerk of his head, Blood’s leg came loose, spraying bright crimson blood onto the ground and the predator’s face.

Most of the still standing herbivores of the mixed herd looked away. A few vomiting their lunch. Many were also crying, Blood’s howls tearing into their hearts. For any who wanted to help before, there was no way that they could intervene now. Blood was as good as dead, if not from Coldbreath’s jaws, then blood loss. Even Crooked’s miraculous ability to heal wounds quickly were of no use now. The sprinter’s earlier words would not be kept.

Coldbreath turned to the watching herd, having finally noticed their crying and the sound of retching. He stared at them for a moment, Blood’s leg hanging in his jaws. With a loud huff, the carnivore tossed the limb into the crowd, causing many to scream in horror and scatter. Letting out of a sound akin to a coughing, chortling-like laugh, the rex turned back to his dying prey.

He dove forward, jaws clamping down on Blood’s upper back. Coldbreath applied as much pressure as he could, crushing both ribs and spinal cord. The Triceratops could no longer move anything other than his head. Coldbreath had done what his kind were named for, crushing bone.

The predator drew back once more, jaws drenched in blood. He stared down at the herbivore; his shallow breathing and the random blink of his fuchsia eyes were the only indications that his prey was still alive. The gray Tyrannosaurus rex took a step forward. Slowly, he lowered his jaws to the back of Blood’s neck, icy cold breath bathing the dying threehorn. The carnivore hovered there for a long moment, bloody jaws parted slightly, as if teasing Blood. The rex then spoke in a mocking tone, which held a strange smoothness to it. “See what happens when you anger a carnivore?”

Blood’s bright pink eyes widened in horror. A sharptooth had just spooken to him. His living nightmare had just spoke to him. Breathing hard, he moved his head around in a frantic panic. He would not die here. He had to see his daughter and his son. He had to live for them. Sadly, his dying wish would not come true.

The bonecrusher sharptooth moved agonizingly slow towards Blood’s neck. He opened his jaws slightly wider, enabling him to slide them around the plant eater’s neck, large teeth just grazing his red scales. Time seemed to slow as the carnivore stalled, again, in a scene of mocking. Then, he suddenly snapped his jaws shut around Blood’s neck, killing him instantly.

Every dinosaur still watching flinched at the action. Coldbreath released the now dead threehorn from his jaws, staring over at the other herbivores. He red eyes looked them over for a moment before letting out a mighty roar, as if warning them to stay back. He then leaned down and picked up the fresh kill in his jaws, half carrying, half dragging it away.

A high-pitched bellow suddenly echoed through the trees before a dull red dinosaur came charging forward from the underbrush. It was an adolescent threehorn, only a few seasons younger than Hyacinth. She was clearly the daughter of Blood, having followed her father’s blood trail after she had heard him attacked by the massive beast.

Her dull red body slammed into Coldbreath’s left leg, one of her brow horns slicing cleanly through his calf muscle. Coldbreath’s deafening, agonizing roar ripped through the forest, causing many to winch in pain before it faded to ringing in their ears. The feathered Tyrannosaurs rex dropped his prey as he turned on the dull red herbivore, her horn still lodged in his leg. He was too enraged to even notice the pain after the fact of the stab. The temperature around the two dropped significantly. The female’s breath was visible by quick puff of steam floating out from her boney beaked jaws. Steam seemed to roll off Coldbreath’s body as he began to lean forward, mighty jaws agape.

He lunged forward, causing the Triceratops to take a step back, her horn sliding out of the carnivore’s leg.  Coldbreath’s jaws still caught onto her frill. He pulled towards himself, aiming to bring her closer. The young female gave a cry of distress as she thrashed her head from side to side, trying to dislodge the predator’s teeth from her shield. She was already panicking. Her frill had become strangely numb with cold.

The threehorn suddenly felt something soft and squishy press against her frill. It was Coldbreath’s tongue. But as he did this, her head shield become incredibly cold until she could not feel any sensation on her head. She could only feel a strange presser on her frill, no doubt from Coldbreath’s tongue. The sudden sound akin to a thick sheet of ice breaking, rang through the forest. Coldbreath drew back, the female Triceratops’ dark brown eyes staring up at him in disbelief and horror. She knew what had happened not only by the sight of him crunching on her broken piece of frill, but also due to the lightness of her head. He had broken her beautiful head shield.

Rage quickly filled her entire being. With a roar that could match any carnivore’s, she charged forward. Coldbreath stepped out of the way, only to stumble onto the ground, his left leg giving out underneath him. He turned to it, watching the bright crimson blood pour from the gaping hole. Glancing up at the female herbivore, he looked back down at his wound. Leaning forward as best as he could in the positon he was in, he lapped at his wound, tongue still as icy cold as it had been when he had broken the Triceratops’s shield. As soon as he licked it, the blood pouring from his wound began to freeze. With only a few more licks, the wound was frozen shut with blood. He would not die of blood lost or even infection, the frozen blood much too cold for bacteria to thrive in.

Just as he turned away from his wound, he found his face full of horns. Just before the female could stab him in the eye, Coldbreath grabbed onto one of her horns with his jaws. He tugged downwards, blood red eyes staring into the female’s dark brown ones. “I suggest you back off unless you want to lose a horn.”

She glared at him for a long moment before backing off. She understood every word he growled out. Losing a horn would be much worse than what had happened to her frill. Not only was there a chance of her bleeding out, but it would be an enormous dent in her pride. A threehorn with only two horns was pathetic.

Satisfied that the threehorn would stay down, Coldbreath turned to the rest of the paralyzed herbivores, his red eyes landing on Hyacinth. Knowing that she could somewhat understand him, he began to speak slowly in carnivore. “You do not mess with a carnivore as big as me. When one of you idiotic plant eaters think you are doing yourself good by crushing an egg or killing a newly hatched infant, you are only giving yourself a death sentence.”

With those words, the massive beast gave a loud huff. As he began to turn away, he gave himself a shake before walking over to his kill. Just as he bent down to pick up Blood’s mutilated body, he noticed the dull red Triceratops brandishing her horns, clearly getting ready to charge him again. Giving a grunt, he turned to her. “You’re all the same. Hornfaces too blinded by their own pride to back down.”

He approached her, jaws only slightly parted. Lowering his head, he let out a low, rumbling snarl. With a snap of his jaws, he lunged forward, only a faint, but still frightening the already shaken Triceratops. Seeing that she had taken a step back, Coldbreath used his massive head as a battering ram, slamming it against the adolescent’s flank.

The female stumbled and before she could regain her breath or footing, Coldbreath’s jaws clamped down on her back. He was not aiming to kill her though. No, he was going to do something much worse. He forced her down with a thrust of his head. She now lay on her side, and to keep her there, the feather backed rex placed a massive foot onto her side. His three, enormous clawed toes digging into her side, reducing her struggles. She may be prideful, but she did not want to be killed.

Her dark brown eyes watched as Coldbreath leaned forward, jaws slightly parted. Slowly, he slide her bloody left horn into his jaws, the one that had stabbed him in the calf. Knowing exactly what he was going to do, the female began to struggle again, distressed whimpers sounding from deep in her throat. He was going to fulfill his promise, to rip off her horn.

Coldbreath gave a mock tug, causing the female to let out a loud whine and clench her eyes shut. At this, he gave a chuckle before releasing the horn. He licked at the base of her horn, icy crystals forming on the dull red scales of the adolescent’s head. He continued to lick and the base of the horn steadily decreased in temperature until the female could no longer feel were that horn was on her head. Only the heaviness of it told her it was still there.

The Tyrannosaurus rex pressed his nose to the threehorn’s neck, letting out a slow breath, which bathed her in icy cold air just as he had done with her father. In a menacing whisper that only the terrified female could hear, he spoke to her in herbivore. “I don’t want to kill you, so I’m just helping your chance of survival by freezing your flesh and bone. It’s pretty lucky that the infamous healer Crooked is here.” He paused, letting out a low rumbling growl before touching his nose to the underside of her neck, tongue flicking out to ever so slowly lick at the ash colored scales.  “Impale,” he breathed. “No, I will not kill you, dear Impale. I will just let you live a miserable life of torture, knowing that it was your prideful mistake of even thinking about charging me once more. Now you’re a threehorn with only two horns.”

The dull red threehorn’s eyes snapped open as sheer panic pumped through her veins. The carnivore had just spoked her name in leaf-eater. Breathing hard she looked at Coldbreath, an evil glint in his eyes. Suddenly, he lunged forward, jaws clamping down on her horn. He only had to give one powerful yank for the horn to come loose, the base of the horn shattering like ice.

Coldbreath stepped back, dropping the horn in front of Impale. “Here’s your present,” his voice rumbled out mockingly. He then leaned forward, giving one lasting impression to terrorize the threehorn’s dreams at night. His tongue snaked out to lap at the slightly bleeding wound on her forehead, freezing the oozing blood. “There, now you don’t need to worry about bleeding out for a while.”

Turning back to the watching herd, the gray scaled Tyrannosaurus rex gave a loud huff, satisfied that his message had been received across the herbivores. Do not mess with a carnivore. Leaning down, he picked up Impale’s dead father once again, carrying the heavy body as best as he could back to the cave he lived in. Now he had food to feed his beloved and to comfort her from the loss of her lone egg. She was so weak and small, he did not know if she would survive another egg laying, or if she could even create another one.

The herbivories could only stare in stunned silence as they watched their biggest nightmare slowly disappear into the forest.


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LBT Fanfiction / LBT ideas that should be written
« on: October 16, 2015, 12:56:01 PM »
Awesome! I’ll have to get reading your story then. I’ve always skimmed over the chapters after they were posted. You’re story will be my next story to listen to once I finish re-listening to the Land Before Time Retold series. (I have an app that reads stories, so I can just listen to stories while I do stuff.)

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LBT Fanfiction / LBT ideas that should be written
« on: October 16, 2015, 12:55:50 PM »
Awesome! I’ll have to get reading your story then. I’ve always skimmed over the chapters after they were posted. You’re story will be my next story to listen to once I finish re-listening to the Land Before Time Retold series. (I have an app that reads stories, so I can just listen to stories while I do stuff.)

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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: October 10, 2015, 07:39:31 PM »
Chapter Six: Recovering

Sunlight filtered through the mass of clouds, but did nothing to heat the chilly morning air. The mixed herd began to shift as the sunlight dappled their scales. The sudden chilliness of the wind and the slight warmth of the sun disturbed a few of the dinosaurs from their light slumbers, including Crooked and Leaf. They slowly began to rise to greet the new day.

As soon as Crooked’s best student had stretched out the grogginess from her limbs, she turned to Hyacinth. The gray Apatosaurus was still sleeping soundly, undisturbed from the chilly winds that had picked up strength and began to howl through the towering conifers of the forest. Orchid also slept just as soundly, her soft snores echoing Pine’s much louder ones as the brown Stegosaurus continued to sleep beside her.

Leaf placed a hand-like paw over Hyacinth’s wounds, her brown eyes gazing over the dried pulp covering the gashes. After a moment of observation and thinking, the dappled green Camptosaurus let her hand fall away. She glanced over her shoulder, checking if any of Crooked’s other students were awake. Seeing no movement from the pair of Pachycephalosaurus, nor the sprinter’s two other newest students, she turned away to do the job by herself.

Dropping to all fours, the green Camptosaurus trotted to her mentor’s cave were he kept many hollowed out pieces of wood. She sniffed around the area where they were stored. All of them came from dead, dried trees and had been hollowed out by Crooked or his students over time using their clawed feet. The deep indentations in the wood created a bowl that was useful for carrying a large amount of water to an immobile dinosaur when it was necessary to either clean wounds or quench their thirst.

Leaf pushed around some of the smaller sized oblong bowls before sniffing at a medium sized one. Nudging it with her beaked snout, she sniffed it one more time, checking for any scent of rot. Drawing her head back from the wooden bowl, Leaf sat back on her hunches, picking up the bowl the best she could it her forepaws. She checked it for other flaws, turning it from side to side, before flipping it over. Satisfied, the green Camptosaurus stood up on her hind legs, carrying the bowl in her forepaws.

Within only a few minutes, Leaf was at the stream that ran through the forest. She dipped the hollowed out piece of wood into the steam before pulling it out, now full of water. Carefully, she walked back to Hyacinth. Once she was beside the gray longneck’s lower back, she slowly poured the water over the plant matter caked wounds, moistening the blood mixed, herbal mixture.

When all the water was gone from the wooden bowl, Leaf began to very carefully scape the herbal pulp away from Hyacinth’s wounds. The Apatosaurus gave a groan; finally awakening from her deep slumber. Slowly she raised her head to look at what Leaf was doing only to have Crooked place a hand on her neck. Understanding the comforting touch, Hyacinth laid her head back on the ground, closing her teal eyes once more.

Orchid also woke up, giving a loud yawn before slowly blinking the sleep from her brown eyes. As she did so, she watched Leaf remove the chewed up vegetation from her friend’s wounds. At first, she thought nothing of it until she noticed the puncture marks. They were still open and red, but less deep than they were the night before. The Stegosaurus blinked again in confusion. There was no way those nasty wounds could heal that fast.

Scrambling to her feet as best as she could, Orchid began to walk over to Leaf, disturbing Pine’s sleep by smacking her tail against one of his plates. The brown male only gave a loud groan before opening his own eyes to stare groggily at the purple spiketail’s swaying tail. Orchid now stood next to the green spikethumb, gawking at her friend’s nearly healed wounds. “How-how is that possible? It should take weeks for injuries that severe to heal like that.”

Leaf gave a small shrug, saying nothing, but her brown eyes portrayed something much more. One of the Pachycephalosaurus stood next to Leaf, already chewing up a bundle of herbs in his jaws. Leaf leaned closer to him, sniffing at the plants he was chewing. At the sharp scent of antibacterial agents, she gave a small nod. She had noticed a bit of oozing from one of the punctures and the male Pachycephalosaurus, who had awoken to help Leaf, had observed it too.

The Camptosaurus then turned to the other male Pachycephalosaurus sitting back on his haunches, grinding another type of herb against a flat rock with a stone in his hand. A small smile graced her lips as she watched him. He had mistakenly stuffed the anesthetic herbs into his mouth last night, causing his entire mouth to become numb. For serval hours he could not eat anything for fear of biting his tongue. He also ended up drooling all over himself without knowing until she pointed it out. He had learned his lesson on which plants he could chew and which ones he should not.

When the pair were done with chewing and grinding up their herbs, they spread the freshly made pulp over Hyacinth’s wounds. This time the longneck watched, teal eyes twinkling with curiosity. She may be in a slight amount of pain, but it defiantly was not as bad as the agony she endured yesterday. Leaf watched them until the pair finished, giving a small nod to them as they walked off to the river to clean off.

 Crooked came up from behind Leaf, giving the larger dinosaur a pat on her back. “You did a good job.”

The Camptosaurus smiled down at her mentor. “Maybe, but you’re the one that did the most work. How are you feeling after that?”

“Fine. Just fine. I’ve already eaten,” the yellow Dryosaururs said as he gazed down at his right thigh, dark blue eyes focused on the strange scar. He gave a small scoff at it before turning back to his best student. “Well, since that has been taken care of, we can leave them be and go off to our other business.”  

Leaf gave a small nod, glancing at Hyacinth, seeing that Orchid was lying beside her, girlish giggles wafting from her. The spikethumb smiled at the sight before walking off, meeting up with the Pachycephalosaurus pair again. Crooked watched his student leave before he too, walked away, heading for his cave stocked full of herbs. Maybe he would do a bit of sorting today if no one else needed him. As the thought passed his mind, he paused. Quickly trotting up to Hyacinth, who was gigging with the purple Stegosaurus beside her, he spoke to her. “Are you able to move? I would like to get you away from this massive blood stained area. It may be dried, but there are quite a few predators in this territory and with this wind, they could easily sniff out the scent.”

The gray Apatosaurus gave a small nod. Slowly she heaved herself to her feet, Orchid and one of the Pachyrhinosaurus helping her. Crooked watched her take a few wobbly steps before giving a nod of satisfaction. She could walk well enough, so he led her to another sleeping area. Within fifteen minutes, Hyacinth was laying back down on a new spot.

“It would be nice to have you farther away, but you were just injured and very weak from the blood loss,” the yellow sprinter spoke as he inspected Hyacinth’s wounds again. “When talking about predators, you’re not much better off, but at least you not laying on the blood soaked ground. I would also like to get all the dried blood washed off you sometime soon. Probably when you’re well enough to walk to the river. Your wounds may be clean, but I’m sure you’re not very comfortable with the dried blood on your scales.”

Hyacinth nodded, confirming Crooked’s question.

Crooked gave a nod of his own, as if reinforcing his own thoughts that he was correct in his assumption of the gray longneck. “I’ll leave you here to rest then. Within a few days you should be up and ready to travel again.” With those words, the Dryosaurus walked off, already thinking about how he would sort his herbs. He needed to check on how much he had of each before he could send out his students to get more of what he required to keep fully stocked. The healer wanted to ensure that he wouldn’t run out when the next injury occurred.

“Hey,” Orchid said to Hyacinth, nudging the Apatosaurus who was still watching Crooked walk off in the direction of his cave.

“Do you think he’s cute?”

At these words, Hyacinth tore her gaze from Crooked to look to where her friend was eyeing another dinosaur stripping leaves from a bush. Orchid gave a small sideways thrust of her head, gesturing to a male longneck. He was a deep orange color and his back was flecked with brighter spots. The male was only a slight bit smaller than Hyacinth, but seemed to be a few seasons older. His eyes were a matching bright orange, like the flecks that covered his body.

“So what do you think?” Orchid asked, giving Hyacinth another nudge with her head. “He has to be cute in longneck terms, right? He looks healthy and look at those dark orange scales. They look like the leaves during the Time of Changing Leaves. Then, if you look closer you can see the tiny patches of scales that are a really bright orange, just like his eyes.”

Hyacinth only gave a small shrug, looking away from the male.

“What’s that supposed to mean? You don’t like him?” Orchid asked, standing up. “Come on, he’s good looking, isn’t he?”

“Yeah, I guess,” Hyacinth muttered.

“Then why don’t you like him?”

“I don’t just fall in love with a dinosaur at first sight or even with their appearance. He might be good looking but he could be a jerk on the inside. Besides, there is another problem.” The gray Apatosaurus stared out at the orange scaled male, whom had happened to notice her. He gave her a smile and a small wink, but she gave a snort and turned away. “He’s not my kind. My species. He’s an…” Hyacinth paused looking for the right name Angela had taught her on one of their many travels visiting a large herd of mixed sauropods. “An Antarctosaurus. And of course he seems to have confirmed my thoughts of him being someone who thinks a bit too highly of himself.”

“What?” Orchid asked, not even remotely able to process the name her friend had just said.

“He’s just a different type of longneck than me. Like a pebbleback longneck and sailneck longneck. They are both longnecks but are different in appearance and sizes. Sailnecks have well…sails on their necks and they’re quite a bit smaller than my kind. Pebblebacks, there’s two that I know of, one that would be a bit bigger than a sailneck and the other would be about the same size as me. They have strange rock-like shaped armor on their backs. Not exactly like clubtails, though.”

“So…?” Orchid asked. “I had a crush on a flatplated spiketail. He was so cute with his short back plates, kind of like my broken one, but less jagged. His scales were dark yellow green and he had the most beautiful eyes, they were like the enormous lake in my herd’s nesting grounds. A really dark blue, but not like Crooked’s. No, they were more, deeper. They seemed to shift colors when the light hit them just right. I could always see every line, and detail, in them. Oh, his eyes were so beautiful. I wish my eyes were that pretty. Sadly, he left before anything could happen between us. I think he had his eyes on another female in his herd though. But anyway, what’s the harm of looking at a guy that’s not your kind? It’s not like he’s a threehorn.”

Hyacinth gave a small giggle at Orchid’s words. “No…but I feel that if I would have children with a longneck that was different that my kind, they would suffer. I’ve always wanted hatchlings of my own someday, but then if I had one with a…whiptail longneck, they wouldn’t look like any other longneck and I feel like they would be teased for not only being the ëshortest whiptail’ or ëlongest flathead’. They sound like stupid mistakes, but I know kids can be sensitive to that kinds of stuff. And even if they wouldn’t get bullied for their appearance, I know they’ll get bullied for having parents that aren’t the same kind of longneck. I also don’t want them to suffer with not being able to have children of their own. Angela told me that many hybrids in her world can’t have children because they are too mixed.”

Orchid gave a small shrug, “well at least you can have kids. I’ve heard rumors about dinosaurs that aren’t even the same type at all, like a clubtail and a thicknose. I know that they can’t have kids. I don’t even know if they could mate. How do they even get…aroused. I know when females go into heat, the males can tell by their scent, but if they are different types, I don’t think they’d be able to smell when they are ready.”

Hyacinth gave a small nod. “Even one in the same…family grouping might not be able to have children. Like if a macetail longneck and a skyreacher longneck become a mated pair, they wouldn’t be able to create eggs because they are so different, at least, that’s what Angela told me.”

“Okay…” Orchid said, not fully understanding what Hyacinth was saying.

The gray Apatosaorus gave a small laugh. “It’s okay that you don’t understand. Different species, family, genus, and order, that’s one of the things Angela talked about most.”

A sudden loud bellow echoed within the forest, interrupting the two adolescent female’ conversation. They both turned their heads in the direction of the roar just in time to see a large, red Triceratops charge through the trees. He gave a few loud snorts, pawing the ground as he brandished his brow horns at the dinosaurs that began to gather around him. The muscle on his left back leg was torn to shreds, his blood soaking into the ground he stood on.

“Blood?” Crooked asked, having run out from his cave to see what was happening. “What are you doing here? I thought we kicked you out of the herd for your reckless actions.”

The red Triceratops said nothing, only looking over his shoulder as heavy footsteps echoed throughout the forest. Slowly, the air began to cool down and a thunderous roar ripped through the trees. Coldbreath was back, and he was hungry!


Author’s Note:
The sailnecks longnecks are Amargasaurus. The two pebblebacks longnecks are Saltasaurus (smaller) and Janenschia (larger).  Flatplated spiketail is a Wuerhosaurus. Whiptail longneck is a Diplodocus. Macetail longneck is a Shunosaurus. Skyreacher longneck is an Omeisaurus.

Now I noticed when looking online that my sizes may be quite a bit different than others, but I’m using a book made sometime in 2000-something, so it’s probably a bit inaccurate. It’s just easier to look through books (I have two I use) for the dinos than searching the internet for them. Another thing, the name macetail is influenced by the many humans that have visited this world over the course of time, since dinosaurs don’t know what a mace is.


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LBT Fanfiction / LBT ideas that should be written
« on: October 06, 2015, 10:12:40 PM »
Sharptooth’s child/children: How has someone other than me and another story I read not write about this?

Redclaw’s child/children: I have read some that say Sharptooth is Redclaw’s son…but how about some oc children, hmm?

Dimension Travel of a Human: I’m a big fan of the Land Before Time Retold series and I’m doing my own fanfiction with humans in it. I would personally like to see more fics with people getting to the LBT Universe by more fantasy means, like the Time Stones in LBTR. I’m not the biggest fan of science-fiction, which is what most of the larger human-fics are. I would prefer no guns, no technology and the human staying in the LBT universe for most if not all the story (Which is what I’m doing in my own fanfic)

Superpowers: I know AnthroLover has one he is writing, which is awesome. I also read at least one other that fell into that category. I would like to see a few more of these

Next Generation: The gang of five all grown up with their kids going on adventures, heck yeah!

Odd/Even Crack Parings: The most common I see on here is AliXLittlefoot, CeraXLittlefoot, and DuckXPetrie. How about a few mixed up ones. I tend to get a little irritated when I see couples of different species get together, only because they can no way create offspring let alone have any romantic interest with something so different, but I can get past this after a little bit. I’ll still end of reading the story. Anywho, I would like to see maybe a few more ShortyXAli ones and looking forward to the PteranoXEtta parings that I’m sure will show up after the newest movie comes out. I would also like to see some new ones people haven’t talked about. Maybe BronXOC after Littlefoot’s mom dies? Or a ShortyXCera?

Hybrids: I absolutely adore hybrids. Even though I don’t totally agree with the different species producing offspring, it’s still fun reading about them. I do think that most people whom have written these fics need to mixed the characters a bit better.

That Character in the Background: Have any of you thought of writing a story for any of those random characters you see in the background. Like that one ceratopsian with its two pick colored children in the beginning credits of the 10th movie.

 Siblings: Littlefoot has siblings. This is another one I don’t understand why people don’t write more. When you watch the first movie, the other eggs are NOT SMASHED! They look broken and muddy, like they hatched, probably before the rainstorm. What if Cera’s sibs survived? What if Chomper had a nestmate or a younger or older sib?

Main character with an OC: They are a few of these out there, but I just feel like there isn’t enough. (CeraXOC, LittlefootXOC…)

Not their parent: You can do this with anyone, but the most obvious is Cera and Chomper. Cera is orange with green eyes while both her parents are gray with black eyes. Chomper is purple while both his parents are green. I know genes can be recessive and all, but doesn’t it make you wonder?

The Past: The best one would be seeing what happened to Spike’s parents.

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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: September 28, 2015, 06:28:18 PM »
Chapter Five: A Healer’s Touch

Silence fell over the forest, except for the labored breathing of the two adolescent herbivores. The scene was surreal. One moment the two friends were desperately fighting for their lives against one of most ferocious predators that they had ever encounter, while the next moment he suddenly lost interest as a faraway call seemed to beckon him. The two young females were not sure what had happened, but they knew without a doubt that if Coldbreath had not been distracted by the distant, distressed roar, they would surely be dead.

“He’s gone,” Hyacinth breathed raggedly before collapsing onto the ground with a heavy thud. She laid sprawled on her side; head resting wearily on the ground .The injury to the gray Apatosaurus’s back was beginning to overwhelm the adolescent female. Her lower spine had come close to being crushed by the beast’s powerful jaws, which only added to the pain shooting through her lower back from the deep punctures. Blood loss from the savage bite wound was not helping either.

“Hyacinth!” Orchid cried, rushing over to her fallen friend. The spiketail was in just as much pain, but it only resonated from a single point on her body. There was little to no blood leaking from the broken plate protruding from her back, as it was made almost completely of bone, but the damaged nerves within the broken plate caused intense agony. It was only Orchid’s frantic concern for her new friend that kept the pain tolerable.
 
The purple Stegosaurus gently nudged her fallen friend, who only gave a small groan in reply. Orchid glanced at the longneck’s lower back, her stomach sinking at the gruesome sight. It was torn to shreds as a result of Hyacinth’s panicked struggles while Coldbreath’s iron-grip had held her. Blood continued to ooze from the puncture wounds and the thick hide surrounding the damaged area was strangely discolored. Giving Hyacinth another nuzzle, Orchid called out for help with a single, loud bellow.

Not knowing what else to do, Orchid then laid down next to Hyacinth. “I don’t want to lose you like I lost Pebble,” she whimpered.

“Don’t worry. You won’t,” the longneck gave a weak, reassuring smile back.

Orchid could only let out another small whimper as she watched Hyacinth. Although the Apatosaurus was trying to put on a brave face, Orchid knew the other dinosaur’s injuries were serious. The blood loss alone could easily kill her new friend.

“Girls!” called out a male voice, followed by the slight tremor of pounding footsteps.

Orchid tore her eyes away from Hyacinth to watch the approaching brown Stegosaur that they had met only a short time ago. Had it really only been a little while? It felt like days since she was casting eyes at the male. How the world can turn upside down in the blink of an eye.

The male Stegosaur’s galloping pace slowed down to a walk before he stopped, mouth agape as he stared at the sight before him. The purple spiketail was missing a plate that was there not even an hour or so ago and the gray longneck was bleeding from a deep bite wound on her lower back. Seeing that there was no sign of the predator, the male took a step back before raising his head and letting out a loud bellow, signaling others to come. He then called out in words as the first dinosaurs of his mixed herd approached. “We need the healer. Now!”

Bellows, yowls, and long series of grunts filled the forest. Satisfied that his message had been passed, the Stegosaurus approached the two adolescent females. He gave a long look over Orchid’s broken plate, his instincts compelling him to first take care of one of his own kind. Seeing nothing life threating, he turned his attention to Hyacinth, giving a hard swallow at the sight of the female Apatosaurus. He had seen the ghastly injuries left by Coldbreath’s attacks a few times before, but they were always hard to bear. This one was lucky, at least she was still breathing; at least, for now. The gray female lay limp on the ground, teal eyes glazed over and hooded with fatigue. A large pool of blood was forming around her backside.

Slowly, without lifting her head off the ground, Hyacinth’s eyes blearily looked up at the brown Stegosaurus. She gave a drowsy blink before asking, “Who are you?”
 
“I’m Pine. I found you and…,” he paused for a moment trying to think of the purple spiketail’s name. “Orchid. A healer should be coming soon.”

“Oh, good,” Hyacinth breathed before closing her eyes.

“No you don’t,” Pine ordered sternly before giving her head a push with his own head. “You can’t fall asleep. You could pass.”
 
At those words, Hyacinth gave a small groan before taking in a deep breath. She forced her eyes open again and stared at the brown Stegosaurus, letting his words register in her muddled mind. She needed to survive. Not only was her life at stake, but if she did not make it to where Sorrel would be arriving, the human girl may not survive as well. She could not bear the thought of letting her adopted mother, Angela, down.

 Orchid walked up to stand besides Pine, looking down at her friend. She turned to Pine, tears in her brown eyes. “Is she going to be okay?”

“I don’t know. Only the healer will be able to tell.”

“And the healer will tell you when he is done with his work,” called out a soft, male voice. “And one must not disturbed the healer while he works.”

Orchid and Pine turned to see a Dryosaurus slip out of the tall ferns. His yellow and darker yellow dappled body was perfect for hiding within the forest. He approached Hyacinth, glancing over at Pine and Orchid for a fleeting second before walking around to the gray longneck’s lower back.

“Crooked?” called out a female voice.

The yellow Dryosaurus looked up from his observations. A green-scaled Camptosaurus stood only half way in the underbrush. Her body possessed the same darker dappled tones as the Dryosaurus.

“Yes, Leaf?” Crooked asked as he padded onto the blood soaked ground by Hyacinth’s lower back, dark blue eyes still inspecting the massive bite wound.

“You want the dark green ferns of the swamp? The ones that help clotting?”

Crooked nodded, before giving a small chuckle. “No wonder you’re my best student. Go gather them right away. I can get whoever comes next to retrieve the other plants we need.”

Leaf gave a small nod before disappearing into the trees once more, setting off to collect the plants needed to stop Hyacinth’s bleeding.

“What were you talking about?” Orchid asked Crooked, finally figuring out that the large sprinter was the healer.

“Do not interrupt the healer while he is working. Did you not here me before?” Crooked gave a small grunt before turning back to Hyacinth. He reached out a hand, almost touching the deep, bleeding puncture wounds.

“Crooked!” called out another voice, this time a male.

The yellow sprinter did not look up from his observations. “You’re late. Get me some of the purple fruits that grow from the trees nearby my cave. Those will keep infection away and we’ll need some for the spiketail’s wound as well. Oh, and please tell whoever is on the way to get some pinecones from the smaller conifers. They’ll numb the pain once she comes back to her senses.”

The hidden dinosaur nodded his head before running off. Within only a few seconds, he was telling another dinosaur about what to get.  Yet more dinosaurs appeared from the trees, this time a pair of Pachyrhinosaurus. Crooked looked up and gave them a small nod, “Perfect. Just the pair I need. I want you two to push this female onto her belly. She has a savage bite wound from Coldbreath. She’s lucky to be alive.”

The tan scaled pair gave small nods before walking up behind Hyacinth, who was still lying on her side. One placed themselves at Hyacinth’s shoulder and the other at the middle of the longneck’s back, being careful not to touch her wounds.  Pressing their beaked snouts against her side in order to obtain more leverage, but being careful not to press against her spine, they began to push the female, in order to roll her onto her stomach. The gray Apatosaurus gave a loud groan, but she struggled to turn onto her belly just as Crooked instructed.

Within moments, she was resting on her underside, her long neck and head weakly laying on the ground. Her breathing was shallow as the blood continued to seep from her wounds, staining the ground dark red. After a few more minutes, Leaf came back, chewing up a large bundle of ferns that were held in her jaws.

“Hey!” Orchid shouted. “What are you doing? You’re not supposed to be eating those. They are for Hyacinth. Give them-”

The purple Stegosaurus was interrupted by Pine’s hip bumping abruptly into her side. His green eyes glared at her, “she knows what she’s doing.”

As Pine had said this, Leaf approached Hyacinth, spitting the chewed up ferns onto the gray Apatosaurus’s wounds. Using her beak, she gently brushed the mixture evenly over the adolescent’s wounds. “There,” the green bigmouth breathed. “That should stop the bleeding.”

“Good,” Crooked nodded. He then turned to Orchid. “If your friend’s bleeding stops soon, she should eventually be fine. She’ll have to stay here for a few days to heal up though. She’s lost a lot of blood.” The yellow sprinter padded onto the blood stained ground, sniffing it. “I would also like to move her as soon as possible. Even if Coldbreath doesn’t come back, some other sharptooth could smell the blood. A wounded leaf eater, especially one this weak, is an easy meal for them.”

Crooked stopped talking as he gazed over the longneck’s wound, frowning. Within the bite mark, Hyacinth’s scales were discolored. They had become paler and lost their healthy glow that most dinosaurs possessed. They were also cold to the touch when he brushed his hand over the larger patch of scales surrounding the wounds. This type of damage was only seen on injuries created by Coldbreath. Frostbite.

“Crooked,” chimed in a pair of male voices before two Pachycephalosaurus walked up to the Dryosaurus, showing him the plants and fruit they had gathered.

Giving a small nod at the sight of the plants, he gave them a simple flick of his hand. The pair then stuffed the leaves and fruit into their mouths’. The first one that had spoken to Crooked, and had gotten the antibacterial fruit near the large sprinter’s cave, winced at the bitter taste that now flooded his mouth.  

When the pair were done chewing, they took a few steps closer to Hyacinth’s lower back, spitting out the chewed up plant matter onto her wounds before spreading it out evenly with their hands. They glanced at one another before turning to Crooked for approval. He looked over the wounds once more before giving a small nod. “Good. Now go wash your hands in the river; same with your beak, Leaf.”

The green dappled Camptosaurus gave a nod of her own before following the other two students of Crooked.

“How do you know what those plants do?” Orchid asked as her eyes drifted from her injured friend to the yellow dappled sprinter.

“I’m a healer. I’m supposed to know what herbs and other vegetation are best used for specific injuries.”

“No,” Orchid shook her head. “I mean you know what they do. Like…what is an infection? My herd healer never knew what that was. All she did was give dinosaurs certain plants when they had a cough or were in pain. The only time she used the ferns that you used were when she saw this nasty smelling yellow-green stuff coming out of the wounds and they were all swollen and painful.”

“That would be pus,” the Dryosaurus stated in a soft voice. “That is when an infection sets in. I use these plants to keep infection from happening. It can be extremely dangerous when it reaches a certain point. One symptom is a high fever, which is when one becomes very hot. An infection can also permanently damage the surrounding area of a wound if not treated soon enough and ultimately cause death.”

Orchid nodded before turning back to Hyacinth. “So she’s going to be okay?”

“I believe so,” Crooked spoke, running a hand over the gray Apatosaurus’s neck. He then turned to the other dinosaurs standing around Hyacinth. “Alright everyone. I want us to sleep around her tonight. I don’t want to move her in this state.”

Mutters of agreement rippled throughout the small mixed herd. Most of them began to lay down in a circle, surrounding the injured gray longneck as darkness had already fallen. Nodding at the sight, Crooked walked away from the herd. “I’ll be back. I just need to get something from my cave.”

Crooked returned minutes later with a strange blue flower clutched in his hand. Feeding it to Hyacinth, he hopped over her neck and walked toward her lower back and laid down on the blood soaked ground. Pine looked up from his spot next to Orchid. “You sure you want to lay there?”

“Yes. Its fine,” the yellow sprinter replied, giving a wave of dismissal with his hand. “I’ve done this quite a few times already. Being a healer means having to deal with a lot more than just blood.” With those words, Crooked laid his head down to sleep.

Hours passed and Pine was awaken by the sound of movement. Normally he would just ignore it, recognizing the sound of one of his own herd, but tonight he raised his head, worried that it could be a sharptooth. It was not, only Crooked. He was sitting up, brushing his hand over the strange bends in his tail, the reason he had earned his name. After a long moment of gazing at his tail, Crooked soundlessly stood up, brushing a hand over Hyacinth’s back. The Apatosaurus did not move.

Giving a small nod, the Dryosaurus placed both hand-like paws onto Hyacinth’s wounds, the mixture of blood and vegetation having dried up, forming a seal to cover the punctures. Taking in a deep breath, he held it in for a few seconds before slowly releasing it. When he did this, the female began to softly whimper in her sleep, twitching as if in pain. This went on for several long minutes before Crooked drew back, a smile gracing his lips. He gave a click of his boney beak before laying back down where he had been sleeping.

Pine stared at Hyacinth and his herd healer for a moment longer before slowly lowering his head. He could ask Crooked about it later. It was probably just the yellow dappled sprinter working his miracle magic. It always amazed him when after a night of life threating wounds; they were all but gone the next day. The brown Stegosaurus assumed that it had to involve something about the healer’s strange looking scar on his right leg. Whatever; he was too tired to contemplate it any longer. Tomorrow would be a new day, now it was time to rest.


I won’t be getting a new chapter next week because of Homecoming.
If you want, you can check out my DeviantART profile for what all my characters look like.


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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: September 28, 2015, 06:27:57 PM »
Chapter Four: Unearthly Beast

Several days had passed since the two adolescent herbivories’ journey began. The past ten days were spent in comfortable companionship; the pair managing to find enough food and water to sustain themselves. It became easier to forage for food as they traveled northward, the warm barren land turning to a cooler temperate climate. It now flourished with plant life along with many dinosaurs, big and small, herbivores and carnivores.

When Hyacinth and Orchid had entered the forest just a day ago, the Stegosaurs knew they were going the correct way. Even though they were traveling north, they had to push a bit towards the west to ensure that they would reach the cave where Sorrel would arrive at.

The adolescent females had shared many stories over their journey. From Hyacinth’s many adventures with Angela, even the few near death situations they faced, to Orchid ranting about her mother’s insane obsession with pinecones. At the moment, the pair was slowly walking down a warn path used by many of the migrating herds, including a select few of Orchid’s old herd whom could not handle the colder months of the year. They were singing a childish song Angela had taught Hyacinth when she was young, voices alternating from silly high pitched, squeaky, to low rumbling growls. Soon enough, the pair was giggling too much from their antics and began stumbling over their feet as laughter coursed through their large bodies.

“Oh!” Orchid suddenly said though her fading giggles. “Maybe I should find a really cool pinecone for my mom. Maybe we’ll met my herd. That would be so cool. Wouldn’t that be cool? You could met my family, Hyacinth.”

The gray Apatosaurus just grinned back at her friend, having also recovered from her laughter. Her grief over her adoptive mother’s death still lingered, but it no longer weighed her down like the first few days. It helped that the purple spiketail was so talkative and friendly; the longneck would easily get distracted from her thoughts about Angela’s death. This was what it was like to have a true friend.

Hyacinth’s thoughts turned to something else. Her teal eyes stared up at the sky, which was filled with big, fluffy clouds. The sun hung low in the sky, signaling nighttime would be here within little over an hour, meaning the pair would have to stop soon. Both knew it was dangerous to travel through the night, not only because of the predators that lurked in the veil of darkness, but because they needed sleep to keep their energy up. “We should come across a herd that we could sleep with soon.”

“Yeah. Hopefully we won’t have to find separate herds like that one night. Other dinosaurs too proud or scared or whatever to let in someone different than their own kind. We’re all leaf eaters here! Heck, we’re even both big dinosaurs that walk on four legs, we’re less different than a domehead and a flyer traveling together. No one has territory staked out either and it’s not like we’re going to hurt anyone, we just want to be safe since there are vicious predators out there. It’s not like we’re going to eat them!”

Hyacinth only silently nodded as she walked beside the ranting spiketail. As Orchid continued her tirade that was now trailing to how prideful all the hornedfaced dinosaurs could get, the longneck let her teal gaze wander to any herd that would possibly allow them both to sleep in. There was no way she or Orchid would sleep as just the two of them, alone tonight in this forest. They had already heard others warning them that sharpteeth infested this forest and always came out at night. A dinosaur that does not have the protection of a herd or seems to be injured, weak, or sick, became a perfect target for a ravenous sharptooth to prey upon.

“Hey,” Hyacinth spoke up, halting Orchid in her rant which had now turned to the subject of her mother’s pinecone obsession. “Do you think we should try that herd?”

The purple Stegosaurus looked out into the trees left of the path. It was a mixed herd. Ceratopsians, Sauropods, plated dinosaurs, and armored dinosaurs. It was small, but would be good protection with the other large herbivores. Orchid’s brown eyes continued to wonder over the group, until they stopped on a large, brown scaled male Stegosaurs. “Hmm…he doesn’t look too bad. Hey, maybe we should hook up with someone in this herd. I’m sure you can find a longneck for yourself. What do you think?”

Hyacinth only stared out at the small mixed herd before shaking her head. “No. I have to find Sorrel. If we begin flirting with boys and end up having them come along, they will just slow us down. I would like to find her a soon as possible.”

“Yeah, but they could protect us too. I don’t think it’s a bad idea,” Orchid mused as she continued to watch the brown spiketail.

The gray Apatosaurus did not reply, only narrowing her eyes at the mixed herd. A few of them seemed anxious as they chatted in harsh whispers with one another. Feeling a little uneasy about this, she spoke up as the two companions approached the herd. “Excuse me. Would it be possible for my friend and me to stay with your herd for the night?”

The brown Stegosaurs walked forward, having heard the question. He glanced at Orchid, causing the purple female to grin and let out a small giggle of excitement. “You can. We could use all the dinosaurs we can get. Rumor has it that Coldbreath is in the area.”

At those words, Orchid’s smile slipped from her face. “Wh-what? He’s here? I thought he lived farther north. Like almost in the mountains where my herd sometime stays.”

“That may be so, but we can only assume that he is traveling, possibly looking for a larger territory. A few dinosaurs say that they spotted him here in this forest. I would keep your guard up. I am glad that you joined us. Only for the night though?”

“Yes,” Hyacinth answered, giving a concerned glanced back at Orchid as the spiketail stumbled behind her.

The male gave a small nod before stopping abruptly, head raising sharply. His intense gaze slowly scanned the forest surrounding them before giving a hard swallow. Hyacinth shudder, noticing how cold the air had suddenly become. She nervously glanced to her side to see Orchid next to her, brown eyes wide with fear and her breath coming out in short gasps. The air had cooled down so much now, that every dinosaur’s breath in the area turned to vapor when it hit the now frosty air.

“He’s here,” the brown Stegosaurus breathed as many of his herd began to back away in fear. A few had already turned tail, too fearful to face off with the massive beast that awaited them.

A loud crunch sounded behind Hyacinth causing the gray Apatosaurus to swing around. She was just as terrified as the rest of the mixed herd. From the stories Orchid had told her, this rex was ruthless and could kill her with a simple snap of his jaws.

The large conifers in front of the mixed herd began to shake as the Tyrannosaurus rex gradually approached but still remained hidden from their sight. His deep breathing was easily heard by every listening ear as it echoed through the forest, along with the crunch of underbrush with every thunderous step he took. A deep ragged exhale from Coldbreath caused Hyacinth’s blood to run cold. The trees closest to the group began to tremble and a gray-scaled snout peaked out, nostrils flaring with the intake and outtake of breath. The carnivore took another step, reveling slightly parted jaws and rows of saliva coated, elven inch, thick, bone crushing fangs. His massive silhouette could be seen from behind the trees as he took yet another step, this time revealing his head and muscular neck.

Hyacinth let out a small whimper, taking a step back. This was a big mistake as the carnivore’s blood red eyes locked onto the sudden movement. With a low rumbling growl, the terrifying beast completely emerged from the trees. As in Orchid stories, he was massive. Where the tip of a full-grown Stegosaurus’s largest plate would reach mid-chest on an average sized Tyrannosaurus rex, on Coldbreath it would only reach his thigh. Other than his massive size, the rex possessed another unique trait that Orchid failed to mention to the longneck. From the top of his head, covering his back, upper tail and ending in a thick fluff, were dark gray, almost black feathers. His underside, like most dinosaurs, was a lighter color, his being a paler gray than his main dark-gray body.

Lowering his massive head, the carnivore snapped steal jaws shut, but his lips were still pulled back, displaying impressive, deadly teeth. He was grinning. “This is going to be fun.”

Hyacinth’s teal eyes widened in fear. She could understand some carnivore language, as Angela had taught her. This simple phrase struck fear in her heart. “Run,” she hissed to Orchid. “We have to start running now.” With those words and without waiting from her friend, Hyacinth tore off from the group, running as fast as a creature of her size could. Luckily for her, Coldbreath could not run very fast either with his massive bulk and the large trees posing obstacles.

The Apatosaurus frantically glanced to her side, seeing Orchid running alongside her. She also heard the gray rex thunder past the mixed herd, locking his sights on her. The beast’s strides were long and powerful as he pushed himself to catch up to the pair. And he did.

The Tyrannosaurus rex barreled up between the terrified adolescent females, staring down at Hyacinth, but he did not open his jaws. Instead, the carnivore lowered his head and used it like a battering ram, slamming into the longneck’s side. Hyacinth stumbled, almost losing her footing as she gasped for air. She had stopped, but Orchid continued running, Coldbreath looming right beside her. The carnivore had his jaws now open towards the purple Stegosaurs.

“Orchid!” Hyacinth cried out, only to girt her teeth in pain at the ache in her side. Still, she did not take her eyes off her friend, fearing for the other female’s life.

Coldbreath snapped his jaws close, causing the spiketail to let out a scream and stumble to the ground. Hyacinth looked on in horror, only to quickly realize that there was no blood on Orchid. It was just a mock bite; the massive predator taunting his prey. The gray Tyrannosaurs stood in front of the pair, jaws parted once more. He looked them over before letting out a menacing growl. “Come on. You have to make this at least a little bit entertaining for me. Fight back.”

Hyacinth only stood, shell-shocked at the carnivore’s deep, rumbling voice that seemed to echo in her mind after he was done speaking.  Orchid was standing once again, but her entire body was shaking. The adolescent stegosaurus was no match against this massive beast.

Coldbreath gave a snort. “So you’re just going to stand there like all the other frightened prey, aren’t you? Fine.” He then gave a roar a kin to thunder, charging forward, each step shaking the ground. His jaws spread wide open, aiming for the Stegosaurus paralyzed by fear.

“Orchid!” Hyacinth called out, running forward. “No!” The gray Apatosaurus skidded to a stop in front of her friend, flank facing Coldbreath as her tail lashed forward. It hit its mark.

The Tyrannosaurus rex gave a loud snort, shaking his head in aggravation. Hyacinth’s solid tail had created a nasty gash just above his right eye. He would surly have a headache by the end of the day. Blood welled up from the wound, scarlet drops rolling away from the wound and falling to the ground, staining the dirt below with his blood. He shook his head one more time before looking back to the two adolescent herbivores. They were now a ways ahead of him.

The gray carnivore let out a low rumbling growl of annoyance before resuming the chase once more. He had not expected the Apatosaurus to lash out with her tail like that. Almost always his prey was too scared to move, even to save their precious friends and family. He would kill one and let the other live. Sure he liked to toy with his prey, but he had no need to kill more than one big herbivore. Besides, it would be the other dinosaurs fault for not trying to save their friend. They could come back and try to take revenge on him if they wanted to. It was always fun to have a good fight.

As Coldbreath rapidly drew up to the pair once more, he let out a mighty roar, causing the air around the beast to cool down even more. This time, instead of coming up between them, he approached on Orchid’s side, lunging forward, teeth scraping against one of Orchid’s biggest back plates. He bit down harder, fangs cracking into the dark purple, bony armor.

The purple spiketail let out a blood curdling scream. She began twisting and turning, frantically trying to get away from the massive carnivore’s jaws.  She managed to swing her tail out, sharp spike grazing against his leg, but he refused to let go. The only thing that happened was the air began to become increasingly colder and colder with every passing moment. Orchid’s terrified screams continued to echo through the forest as Coldbreath gripped her plate tighter in his jaws and a painful coldness began to seep over her body. As all this was going on, all Hyacinth could do was stand, frozen in fear once more. She felt so helpless, so weak. She wanted to push the rex away from her friend but her body would not move.

A sudden crack, a kin to the sound of breaking ice filled the air. Orchid gave a high-pitched scream of pain as she struggled forward, Coldbreath’s jaws still clamped on her plate. With a savage jerk of the predator’s head, the spiketail was suddenly loose, stumbling away, only an inch or so left of her plate. Tears fell from her brown eyes as she lay on the ground, pain coursing through her entire body. The gray carnivore just stared down at her as he crunched on the now missing plate. He swallowed before taking a step forward, readying to kill the wounded spiketail.

Hyacinth suddenly charged forward, just like she did to protect Orchid the first time, giving a bellow. She plowed into the carnivore with her entire body. This only caused him to stumble a few steps sideways, not toppling him over like she had hoped. Hyacinth turned her body sideways, lashing her tail back and forth. She was ready to wound him as best as she could. The gray Apatosaurus swung her tail out, putting as much power into it as she could. Her tail tip cracked like a whip as it broke the sound barrier. It lashed across the massive predator’s neck.

Coldbreath let out a pained roar, stumbling back in surprise at the scorching pain emanating from his neck. He could feel his warm blood well up from the wound and flow down his neck. He watch as droplets fell to the ground below. It had been a while since someone dared to wound him this badly. Maybe it was because he had not hunted any ceratopsian lately.

He turned back to Hyacinth only to see that the longneck had reared up on her hind legs.  Staggering forward, she brought her weight down. The feathered rex took a step back just in time, Hyacinth’s sharp toe claws just grazing the tip of his snout, drawing more blood.

As she landed back onto the ground, Coldbreath lunged forward, jaws clamping down onto the longneck’s lower back. She was now the one in trouble, screaming in pain just as Orchid had done. This time, Hyacinth was the one to feel a strange yet agonizing freezing pain sweep over her body. Just as Hyacinth thought she could hear and feel her bones cracking as Coldbreath bite down harder, Orchid came to the rescue. The purple Stegosaurus swung her tail, the milky white spikes cutting deep into the carnivore’s jaws.

The gray rex instantly let go, letting out a roar of pain himself. Giving himself a shake, spraying droplets of blood from his wounds everywhere, he glared at the two herbivores. Now it was time for them to die. They were both wounded. The Stegosaur was in immense pain from the breaking of one of her biggest plates and the Apatosaurus sported a nasty back wound. This would be one of the few times he killed more than one leaf eater in a single hunt.

Coldbreath lunged forward, jaws open for Hyacinth’s neck. The gray sauropod clenched her eyes shut as she waited for the pain to come. A least she would get to see Angela after this. The snap of jaws sounded close to Hyacinth, teeth grazing her neck as icy cold breath bathed her. A pained carnivore’s roar echoed far away in the distance. Why had he stopped?

The feather Tyrannosaurus drew back, red eyes staring out into the distance, worry swirling in his eyes. The distressed roar sounded again before Coldbreath backed off, calling out with his own roar. “Lily!” he roar before turning back to the two herbivories. “Consider yourselves lucky.” With those words he ran off towards the other carnivore.  


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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: September 13, 2015, 09:19:50 AM »
Chapter Three: The Flowers’ Stories

Yet another day began as the sun rose above the horizon. Orchid and Hyacinth had slept side-by-side, backs facing one another, during the cool night. The two adolescent, female herbivores had fallen asleep beside one another after they finished eating the juicy berries, both exhausted from the long day. Although Orchid was curious about Hyacinth’s story and wished to chat with her, the spiketail knew that the gray longneck was still grieving over her recently departed mother and was in no mood to talk. It was best, Orchid decided, to get a good night’s sleep before they started their journey to the northern lands the next morning.

As the sun’s rays filtered through the clouds and sparse trees, one of the adolescent females began to stir. The sun’s golden light penetrated Hyacinth’s dark gray hide, warming her chilled muscles. The Apatosaurus gave a small groan of discomfort as she shifted a little, pushing herself backward only to be poked in the back by Orchid’s dark purple plates. Hyacinth stopped moving, teal eyes slowly opening as she remembered where she was. She glared at the sun, only to squeeze her eyes shut against the bright, burning light.

The purple spiketail gave a sudden, loud snore with an intake of breath. Hyacinth let out an exasperated sigh while rolling her teal eyes. Spiketails were known for snoring, a lot. There was no way she would be able to fall back asleep now with the sun up and Orchid snoring. She may as well get a start on food. She would need her fill for the journey. Orchid had mentioned last night that she did not know when they would reach another oasis with such an abundance of plants.

Lumbering over to the nearest tree, Hyacinth reached up with her long neck, grabbing ahold of a branch. She stripped it of its greens before chewing the leaves, teal eyes gazing over the small oasis. It was much like the one she and Angela had been in, with a small pool of water and an underground spring feeding all the plants thriving farther away from the visible water source. Most of the other dinosaurs who had taken refuge within this smaller oasis were still sleeping. They were not early risers like the gray Apatosaurus, who was usually awaken at the brink of dawn by her caretaker, eager to start the day with a new adventure.

At the thought of the elderly woman, Hyacinth’s heart sank. For a brief moment, she had almost forgotten that her caretaker, her adoptive mother, was gone, forever. She could already feel the tears welling up in her eyes as she gazed out at the rising sun, another memory surfacing. She and Angela would always watch the sunrise and the sunset. It was like a signal to the start and end of the day. The tears began to spill down her scaly cheeks as she gave a small sniff. The Apatosaurus hated that she was crying so much, but the grief was still too overwhelming.  

“I love you, Mother,” she whispered, tears rolling off her snout as she looked down.
 
“Hyacinth?” Orchid’s voice sounded from behind the gray longneck. “Are you okay?” The spiketail had awaken upon hearing her new acquaintance’s sobs and had ambled over to where the distressed dinosaur stood grieving.  

The Apatosaurus gave another sniff as she shook her head. “No, I’m not okay,” she spoke in a voice choked with tears. “It’s only been two full days without my mother. I miss. I miss her so badly.” Hyacinth hung her head, tears now rolling down her face as she unsuccessfully choked back her sobs. Her breath was shaking and she began to hiccup.

“Oh, no. Hey, hey,” Orchid started, rubbing her small head against Hyacinth’s foreleg. “I know it’s hard,” the spiketail soothed. “I lost my sister to a sickness. It was difficult for all my family. Me, my mother, my father, and my brother. You learn to live on. Now come on, “the spiketail hummed encouragingly. “Let’s eat and drink our fill and get moving. We need to find that cousin of yours before a sharptooth does.”

The Apatosaurus gave another small sniff, tears still trickling down her cheeks. She sluggishly followed the purple Stegosaurus back to a clump of bushes they had slept near. The dark green shrubbery was just the right height for the shorter herbivore to eat from. At first the longneck just stood and watched the other herbivore devour the tender, oval-shaped leaves. After about fifteen minutes, Hyacinth finally regained control over her emotions and also joined in, knowing that Angela would be disappointed in her if she didn’t take care of herself.

The pair of adolescent females ate in silence, just like the night before. When they were full, the two lumbered over to the pond to take a long drink of the cool, fresh water. Once they finished, their thirst quenched, the pair began to head out of the oasis, Orchid leading the way. They halted at the edge of the oasis, the purple spiketail looking over her shoulder at Hyacinth. “Before we go any further, I just want to give you a layout of where we’ll be traveling and what we’ll have to cross.” Orchid turned back to the horizon, brown eyes studying the many tall, needle-leaved conifers which even towered over Hyacinth. “The first day or so should be easy, just walking through the forest. We’ll have to watch for Sharptooth though, but you’re use to that, right?”

The gray Apatosaurus gave a small nod of her head, her own teal eyes gazing out to the tall trees she had not noticed before since she had been too wrapped up in her grief.

“It gets a little tougher as the weather turns colder the further north we go. I honestly hate the cold, that’s why I was traveling with a herd from my mother’s side of the family when I left the nest a few seasons ago.” Orchid gave a small shudder at the thought of the cold that she would soon enough feel. “With the cold there will be snow, have you seen snow before?”

Hyacinth nodded again. “Yeah. My mother and I traveled to the northlands a few times before, but I can’t quite remember how to get back there since we traveled from a different location.”

“Oh,” Orchid sounded surprise. “Well, that’s good. At least you are aware of what type of weather to expect.” The spiketail began to move, leading the longneck toward the direction of the northern caves. “Anyway, we’ll get to the land that’s always covered in snow, which will not take too long. Maybe a few days of travel from here. It shouldn’t be difficult to find the sickleclaw pack and the caves once we reach our destination. The travel itself isn’t too bad, it’s just the cold and the predators that we need to worry about.”

“What type of meat-eaters are there?” Hyacinth asked, not looking at Orchid as her eyes continued to sweep over the landscape.

“Well…there are a lot of larger sharpteeth…” Orchid trailed off. “Like bonecrusher sharpteeth, ridgeeyed sharpteeth, and the sickleclaw pack. There is a really big gray bonecrusher,” she added as an afterthought. “He’s kind of a legend around the area. We call him Coldbreath for his really cold breath. You know when a sharptooth breaths on you when they get too close, well his breath is cold, like ice cold, not hot. He also um…he…killed my best friend.
 
Hyacinth turned to the purple spiketail in surprise. It was not uncommon to have at least one family member or friend killed by a carnivore. The beasts needed to eat and large herbivores were the biggest meal they could get.  It was a surprise, however, that a Stegosaurus was killed by a lone predator. Sure it was a big sharptooth, but still, Stegosaurus were not only armored but had a weapon at the end of their tails. Even an adolescent was large enough that it would have been difficult for a predator to kill it.

“How did it happen…? How did the Tyrannosaurus rex kill your friend?”

“What? I never heard that name used for them.” Orchid spoke curiously, brown eyes tracking a small buzzing insect whirling around her beak. “Why do you call the sharpteeth such a strange name?”

The gray longneck did not respond, causing the purple spiketail to utter a small defeated sigh, knowing Hyacinth wasn’t going to answer since she wanted an answer to her own question. Orchid knew that almost every dinosaur went through deaths of their loved ones by the claws or teeth of a sharptooth. Dredging up memories of her friend’s death was not pleasant, but maybe if she divulged some of her past with Hyacinth, then the longneck would be more willing to reveal some of her own story.

“The Coldbreath was stalking our herd,” Orchid began quietly, her eyes drifting toward the sky as memories played out. “We had no idea he was even there until it was too late. Pebble, my friend, was traveling at the back of the herd with me when he attacked. The bonecrusher sharptooth head butted her, rolling her over on her side before sinking his teeth into her belly. It happened so fast; there was nothing I could do.”

Hyacinth stumbled in her walk as Orchid finished her story, teal eyes wide with horror. “And this sharptooth is still in the area? Is he still alive?” The gray longneck was horrified at the story. Angela always told her that carnivores were smarter than they look, but Hyacinth never thought one would be smart enough to knock over a spiketail to get to their soft underbelly. Most would just avoid them or, if they were hungry enough, go after them and bite down on their plates. Sometimes this trick would work as an infection would set in on the Stegosaurus’s plate and kill them within a few weeks, but the carnivore would still need to find food to sustain itself during that period while trailing the injured dinosaur. Then there was also the real possibility that the sharptooth itself would be injured by the sharp spikes of its prey’s tail.

Orchid gave a nod of her head, confirming Hyacinth’s worst fears. The Apatosaurus exhaled sharply, a shudder running through her body. Now she would have to keep an eye open for the large, gray rex. It did not sound too hard except for the fact that the massive predator had managed to sneak up on a whole heard of spiketails. Just that thought alone caused another shudder to run through the Apatosaurus’s body.

“Can you tell me about your family?” Orchid asked out of the blue.

“What do you want to know?” Hyacinth replied, drawn out of her unsettling thoughts.

“Anything. Your parents. Siblings. Friends. What was your childhood like?”

“Well…” the gray longneck started, looking out over the scenery, trying to push the thoughts of Coldbreath out of her mind as she began to recall her childhood. “I never knew my father. My mother…I honestly never knew my mother either. The one that passed away only a few days ago, she was my adoptive mother, my caretaker. She…she was a thinskin, a human.” Hyacinth glanced over at Orchid, hoping that the spiketail would not have an offended reaction to this unexpected news.

“Is this cousin really your cousin then? Is she a longneck or something else?” the Stegosaurus slowly asked, browns eyes now narrowed in suspicion.  

“No,” Hyacinth sighed. “Sorrel is my caretaker’s great niece, meaning she is also a thinskin.”

“So we’re going to these caves to find Sorrel, a thinskin? How could a thinskin survive there?” Orchid questioned. She turned back to the small, dirt path they were following that had been used by many other far walkers to reach the small oasis. “At least it’s just a thinskin and not some type of sharptooth like a Slicingfanged sharptooth; or a territorial leafeater like a domehead. They are so aggressive and rude and almost all of them hate other leafeaters.”

Hyacinth nodded in agreement as she thought about the domeheads. “Probably because most of them live in rocky terrain. They don’t have much food so they are very competitive. But answering your question about thinskins. They can’t live in the freezing cold.  At least I don’t think they can. Sorrel is going to arrive in the northern cave sometime soon. I’m not sure why she has to arrive there. Angela once told me that they cannot pick and choose where they arrive but must come where the stone takes them. She will be coming to this world by the use of a glowing blue stone. Angela, my caretaker, had a necklace with one in it. Angela also said that the stone will also allow Sorrel to understand and speak our language because humans have a different language than us.”

“What? Things other than us can talk? You’re not telling me that sharpteeth talk.”

“You didn’t know that?” Hyacinth questioned in surprise. “Angela spoke to some of the smaller kinds on our travels. She even befriended a few. They can defiantly speak. One…one spoke to me in flat-tooth only yesterday. How she knew our language, I’m not sure, but she defiantly spoke it and could understand what I said. She is a sandy feathered Utahraptor and…and she comes from the pack that the cave is near. She said that there will be another sickleclaw there to guard Sorrel if I do not make it in time.”

Orchid only stared at Hyacinth with wide, dark brown eyes as she stopped in her tracks. “What?” she exclaimed before shaking her head in disbelief. “Are you mad? Why would a sickleclaw protect a thinskin when they could just as easily eat them?”

“No! I promise you I’m not. Just wait and see. At least lead me to the cave where Sorrel is supposed to be. You’ll see,” Hyacinth pleaded with the spiketail as she also halted. “She’ll have a ring and will be able to understand and speak like us. I can probably get her to talk to one of the sickleclaws to prove that sharpteeth have a language. Please, believe me. I know how insane it probably sounds to a dinosaur like you. Please.”

Orchid exhaled slowly but smiled back up at Hyacinth. “Don’t worry. I’m not going to leave you. I still find it hard to believe this thinskin traveling and sharpteeth having their own language thing.”

The gray Apatosaurus let out a long sigh of relief.  She was grateful that she would not have to worry too much about the purple spiketail leaving her. It was also nice to have a traveling companion to keep her company. Since she was little, she had always had Angela by her side to teach and guide her. The thought of being alone was very unsettling.

“Do you have any friends since you were traveling with a thinskin?” Orchid asked as they began to walk once more.

“No. We never stayed in one place for too long. Angela was the only family I had.”

“Oh…” Orchid sighed. “Well, I had a sister and a brother. My sister died of a sickness, I told you that before, and my brother is still with my parents in the north, but they are in a different area than where we are going. My mom is purple like me and my dad is a dark green. I had a few friends in our traveling herd. I hated the cold so I ended up leaving just a few seasons ago. Yeah, I know it’s a bit early to leave my family but I just couldn’t handle the cold anymore, especially since my sister died of an illness and was weakened from the cold. I found a herd from my mom’s side of the family somewhere in the tropical lands far away from my cold loving family, and lived with them for a while. I think it was only a cycle or two ago since I left them.”

“Wow,” was all Hyacinth said as she reflected on her new friend’s story.

“Yeah,” Orchid replied.

With that, the two fell into silence as they walked through the conifer forest. Their journey was only just beginning.


Just a little note: ridgeeyed sharpteeth are Allosaurus and slicingfanged sharpteeth are Giganotosaurus.

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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: September 05, 2015, 03:04:14 PM »
Chapter Two: Journey North

   Hyacinth awoke the next morning in the shade of the flowering trees. She still lay at Angela’s grave, stains of the tears she cried last night evident on her scaly cheeks. She slowly lifted her head up from the ground, only to look over at the upturned dirt near her front feet. Her teal color eyes became moist at the sight. Closing them tight, Hyacinth lowered her head to the ground, tears silently spilling from her eyes. Giving a small sniff, the gray Apatosaurus moved her head to the grave, nuzzling it.

   “Hey…,” a female voice spoke from behind Hyacinth.

   The gray longneck raised her head from the grave, tears rolling down her cheeks as she wearily stared at the sandy feathered Utahraptor. The Apatosaurus gave another sniff and a blink of her teal eyes, causing even more tears to roll down her scaly cheeks, before laying her head back down on the ground. She did not want to leave yet. She could not leave her beloved caretaker just yet. Angela had not even been gone for a full day.

   “I came by the check on you,” Shifting Sand spoke, her voice soft, yet holding the predatory growl that most flat-tooth speaking carnivores possessed.

The large raptor slowly approached Hyacinth, careful not to startle the larger dinosaur as she did not know if the herbivore had heard her. She did not need a broken limb or ribs from an angry whip of the Apatosaurus’s tail.

With a few more cautious steps, Shifting Sand stood next to Hyacinth’s lower back, the place where she had jumped onto the Apatosaurus. Making sure the longneck was fine with her presences; she lowered her head to the wounds, sniffing them. They seemed fine, but it was only last night that Shifting Sand had caused them. Carefully, the sandy feathered carnivore began to lick at Hyacinth’s wounds, cleaning any dirt they may have gotten into them from last night.

Hyacinth did not respond to the soft licks, knowing what Shifting Sand was doing. She did not have to worry about the carnivore biting her, even if she was tasting her blood. Angela had told her that the Utahraptors of Shifting Sand’s pack had extremely good self-control when it came to hunting instincts around leaf eaters. Even with that knowledge, the longneck could honestly care less what the raptor was doing at the moment, all she wanted was to have her adoptive mother back.

   “Hyacinth?” the sickleclaw spoke again, having finished her cleaning. “You need to get moving. I know you would like to spend a bit more time with Angela, but you’ll miss Sorrel. I have no idea when she’ll be coming to this dimension. The only thing I know is that she has not already. We have a scout set at the cave entrance every night, but our pack is not very trusting of humans. They will not let her in the pack caves, even if she is related to Angela. She could freeze to death if this happens.”

   The Apatosaurus raised her head once more. She turned to look at Shifting Sand with distaste, but none the less stood up from her spot. Gazing mournfully at the freshly turned dirt of her caretaker’s grave, Hyacinth turned back to Shifting Sand. “Okay.”

   Shifting Sand gave a small nod before turning away from the adolescent longneck. She led Hyacinth out of the flowering grove and to the edge of the oasis. Many of the herbivores from last night had already moved on, fearing that a pack of sickleclaws was now making their home in the oasis. Still, some of the brave souls stayed behind, most being the ones that had witnessed Hyacinth and Shifting Sand speaking to one another.

All of the remaining plant eaters stiffened at the sight of the large raptor traveling just in front of Hyacinth. They watched from afar as the two walked to the edge of the oasis, breathe baited. No one estylepets","o":2},{"i":1moved a muscle, as they did not know if the female sickleclaw would turn on them or not. They did not know exactly what was going on between the predator and the longneck. The idea of them working together crossed a few of the herbivores’ minds but it quickly vanished as they thought it was impossible. Still, it seemed to be happening right in front of their eyes.

Once standing in the sparse, sandy soil where a few clumps of grass grew, Shifting Sand turned to Hyacinth. “Travel north. Far north. It is where my pack lives. I wish I could lead you there, but I have another mission to take care of in the near area.”

   The gray longneck only gave a small nod in response and with that began to sluggishly amble northwards, her heart heavy with sadness. Shifting Sand frowned at the sight, watching Hyacinth slowly lumber off. After a long moment, the large raptor called out, “remember to eat and drink. I, nor Sorrel or the rest of my pack want you dying on this journey. Please take care of yourself.”

   The only response Shifting Sand received was a flick of Hyacinth’s tail. The frown did not disappear from the raptor’s muzzle but there was nothing she could do. She could only hope that the gray Apatosaurus would listen to her advice and not starve herself to death in her grief. With a small sigh, Shifting Sand turned away from the fading form of Hyacinth. She needed to begin her next task as soon as possible. There was no point in worrying about the longneck. She would learn what happened to the herbivore once she arrived home in the next few cycles of the moon.

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Only a few hours into her travel and Hyacinth already felt like giving up. Even though she had never noticed Angela’s presence before on her back before, now it felt empty. There was no warmth or even the slightest bit of pressure on her back from where the elderly woman would sit or lay. The longneck’s mind was full of thoughts she never knew she had, as it had always been filled with the woman’s fascinating tales. Her soul was numb with grief at the death of her caretaker.  She missed Angela so much. She was the mother she never had, she was the aunt she never had, and she was the friend she never had. They had taken so many adventures together and met so many different kinds of dinosaurs. They could not do that anymore now that the elderly woman was dead.

   Even with these thoughts, Hyacinth continued as best as she could. She had to, for Angela. She needed to find Sornd tell her the stories of Angela and the legends Angela told her. There was also the feeling that Hyacinth should find Sorrel for another, deeper reason. It was as if something was gnawing at her soul, pulling her toward the young woman that would await her. This was the only thing that truly kept to longneck going. This feeling made her feel like she was still alive. It was the only thing that had not been numbed by her caretaker’s death.

Hyacinth gave a small sigh as her gaze drifted from one side of the horizon to the other. She only spotted a few plants here and there along with an occasional puddle. Neither would be enough to even satisfy the slight pangs of hunger that would come to her from time to time or wet her parched tongue. It was not like she cared though. The feelings of physical discomfort disappeared when her thoughts drifted back to Angela.

When Hyacinth’s teal gaze swept the horizon several hours later, she spotted a patch of green in the distance. Frowning, the gray longneck changed her path slightly so that she would arrive in the forest by nightfall. The adolescent knew she would not eat when she came to the forest. She had no appetite and the mere thought of food made her stomach churn.  She was only going to the forest for protection. She still wanted to live and being killed by sharpteeth in her sleep was not her idea of a good death.

   “Remember to eat and drink…” Shifting Sand’s words suddenly echoed through Hyacinth’s mind. The gray Apatosaurus looked to the patch of green she was traveling towards, giving a small sigh. The feathered carnivore was right. She needed to eat and drink if she wanted to stay healthy during the trip. Angela had insisted she get in contact with Sorrel, and she wasn’t going to let her beloved caretaker down. There was no doubt that the longneck would encounter a predator or two on the trip north to the cave where Angela’s kin would appear. She would eat and drink for Sorrel, she needed to let the young woman know of her great-aunt’s fate and also impress upon her how much the older woman meant to Hyacinth. But now, the adolescent longneck focused on the long hours that it would take for her to get to the tiny clump of trees in the distance.

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Nightfall arrived as Hyacinth laid her massive, weary body next to the nearest tree; an immense, elderly oak with a trunk as thick as one of her legs. She would eat in a minute, she just needed to rest her achy body. Normally she could handle this much travel. She had, had much worse, but with the death of Angela, everything became three times as hard as it used to be. Even the thought of eating tired the Apatosaurus, but she had to.

   “Hey there,” a female voice greeted Hyacinth from behind.

   The longneck raised her head from the ground, turning to find a Stegosaurus around her age. The spiketail was a rich purple color with her throat, underbelly, and underneath her tail a cream color. Her plates were fully-grown and were a few shades darker than the rest of her body. The four tail spikes at the tip of her tail were also fully grown in, though they were a milky white color.  

   Hyacinth said nothing to the newcomer, only resting her head back on the ground. She did not want to talk to anyone right now. She still needed to get herself to eat and having another dinosaur around would just make the struggle harder. Sadly, the spiketail did not get the unsaid message and approached the gray longneck. She began to nibble on a nearby bush, happily swaying as she chewed.

   “Spiketails always love their food,” Hyacinth thought scornfully. Her teal eyes watched the other female rip apart the leaves of the shrubbery with her sharp, bone-like beak. As she grounded the food, she turned to Hyacinth, as if feeling the other female’s eyes on her. The Stegosaurus continued to chew in silence as her brown eyes watched the longneck. When she was satisfied with her chewed up greens, the purple spiketail swallowed, then licked her beak to clear it of any remaining plant matter.

   “Do you want any?” she asked, moving aside for Hyacinth.

   The Apatosaurus said nothing, only turning her teal gaze back to the ground, tears suddenly welling up in her eyes.

   “Hey, hey. What’s wrong? Was it something I said? Oh, I hope not. I don’t like hurting other dinosaurs’ feelings.”

   Hyacinth just shook her head, tears spilling over her eyes. “No,” she sniffed. “You didn’t say anything wrong. It’s just…my…mother passed away only a day ago.” She gave another sniff as she turned away from the purple spiketail. “I couldn’t mourn her because I need to find someone as fast as I can.”

   “Oh my! I’m really sorry to hear that. Is there anything I can do? Maybe gather some tasty treestars, berries, and flowers, or show you were there is fresh water.”

   “Umm…” Hyacinth mumbled, teary eyes looking over the forest landscape as she thought. “Some berries would be nice, but…you should probably lead me there. You couldn’t possibly bring enough for me.”
 
   “Right,” the adolescent Stegosaurus grinned. “Come on, follow me.” With a hop in her step, the purple female walked away from the small clump of trees before stopping a few feet away. She glanced over her shoulder, waiting for the other female. Her grin turned back to a frown as she watched Hyacinth struggle to her feet, almost too weak from hunger and grief to stand. The longneck did manage to get to her feet and began to lumber over to the concerned spiketail.

   “So,” the purple Stegosaurus asked, wanting to start a conversation as they walked. “What’s your name?”

   “Hyacinth,” the gray Apatosaurus muttered, teal eyes already locked onto the berry bushes ahead.

   “That’s a pretty name. It’s a flower like mine. I’m Orchid.” The spiketail paused, looking Hyacinth over. “So what are you doing out here. I’m mean if your mother just…died only a day ago. Shouldn’t you be with the rest of your family mourning her?”

   “I don’t have any other family. It was just me and her. I’m…” Hyacinth paused, not knowing if she should tell the purple spiketail where she was heading. “I’m traveling north to find…my cousin.”

   “North?” Orchid spoke, looking up at the gray longneck. “My father’s side of the family lives in the north. Do you know where you’re going? I could probably help you there. I know where all the plants grow and which ones are best to eat. The roots of the needle-trees are always really tasty once you chew through the tough bark. The leaves are pretty good but they could hurt your mouth if you don’t eat them right because of their weird and spikey shaped.”

   “Um…I’m going to a cave near a sickleclaw pack. My mother said that my cousin could be found there.”

   “Near a sickleclaw pack?” Orchid questioned, brown eyes growing wide at the thought of the large, feathered predators. “Why would a longneck go anywhere near that big pack of raptors? I know where the pack lives and I’m sure the cave you are looking for is somewhere on the outskirts of their territory, but still. I have heard that they are rather strange, not acting like most raptor packs. Like they don’t really go after many leaf eaters. They just live in this giant cave system and eat smaller creatures such as lizards. I have also heard that they only kill larger herbivores that would otherwise not survive due to illness or injury.”

   Hyacinth just gave a small tilt of her head, equivalent to a dinosaur shrug. It was then that the two came up to a large clump of berry bushes. The gray Apatosaurus could not help but smile at the sight of the colorful berries. They were probably her second most favorite food. The large, red berries were always so filled with flavor and so colorful. The only problem was that to fill her enormous belly, she ended up eating a few bushes before she was satisfied. Most of the other dinosaurs would get angry with her for eating the entire bush and not just the berries. Because of that, it was a rare occurrence that she allowed herself the succulent treat.  

Hyacinth gave Orchid a small smile of thanks and lowered her head to eat a bush full of bright red berries. Orchid smiled at the sight before digging into the nearest berry bush, one containing succulent, tart, dark purple fruit.

   “Well,” Orchid started with a mouthful of her dark berries. “Since I have nothing better to do, I guess I’m helping you find your cousin.”

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LBT Fanfiction / Truths: Search and Chaos
« on: August 29, 2015, 01:01:41 PM »
Chapter One: A Mother’s Dying Wish

Disclaimer: I do not own anything of the Land Before Time franchise.    

Hello lovely readers and welcome to my story. I just wanted to say that if you have read my other story, Connections; this is in no way related to it. I was going to use a few of the characters from it but then decided not to, as it would give away some of the characters’ surprise plot twists.  So, all new characters and really messed up family trees again (which I have actually built in a PowerPoint with color and all). I would also like to mention that, like my other story, I’m going to try and stay as realistic, dinosaurs-wise, as possible and this story will be highly OC centered, though, you’ll eventually be able to see the Gang of Seven.

This story takes place when the Gang of Five (excluding Spike) are around 16 years old. (Dino’s in my story will age like humans and then slow down when they reach adulthood).


The sun hung low in the sky, half of it suspended over the horizon. Its light painted the open canvas shades of orange and stained the massive, fluffy clouds pink. A warm, late spring breeze danced though the small trees of an oasis. It brought the scent of rain in its wake, as the enormous, fluffy pink clouds loomed closer towards the tiny patch of green within the dry, cracked sandy desert.

The oasis thrived from an underground spring that feed all the plants nutrient rich water. A pool of the same nutrient rich water formed in the middle of the sanctuary. Herds of dinosaurs from all around would stop to rest and feed here after long, tiresome journeys.

On this late spring day, only a small herd of Mussaurus had taken refuge. They had found the oasis a few days ago when their leader had become sick over the past few days and needed a place to rest while she recovered. A few of the primitive long necked dinosaurs were gathered around the thick, waxy leafed bushes. Others were resting in the shade of the few trees, tails casually flicking like content felines.

The ground began to shake with the slow, heavy footsteps of a massive beast. A pair of tan scaled youngling Mussaurus darted away from the leafy tree they were circling in play. They looked back over their shoulders to stop at the sight of another herbivore, albeit, much, much larger than them. The pair of younglings stopped in their tracks to stare up at the massive flatheaded longneck before their mother called to them from the other side of the small lake. They gave one last glace at the mighty, gray-scaled dinosaur before they scamper to their mother.

The newcomer was an adolescent sauropod and a very distant cousin of the smaller, primitive tan scaled Mussaurus. She was one of the larger species of longnecked-dinosaurs, an Apatosaurus. Her scales were gray and she possessed the typical, thick stripe that ran from the top of her head all the way down to the tip of her tail and the lighter underbelly, throat, under-length of her tail along with common snout markings of the Apatosaurus. Her back stripe was a darker gray than her main body color, and her underbody and snout markings were a light mocha color.

The adolescent sauropod swung her long neck from side to side, looking for the perfect tree leaves to feast on. Finding one to her liking, she approached it, scaring off another set of darker brown scaled Mussaurus children. She watched them for only a few seconds before raising her head to the highest branch she could reach. The female then began to quickly strip the smaller branches of their dark, juicy leaves. As she chewed, she turned her head away from the tree, teal eyes gazing out towards the many Mussaurus and a pair of Pachycephalosaurus grazing by a nearby flowering bush. All the dinosaurs stared at her strangely, not only because of her massive size, but because of the being she carried on her back.

The Apatosaurus swallowed her mouth full of leaves, turning to the object placed on her back.  It was an elderly female human. She lay on her back, resting comfortably on the darker area of the Apatosaurus’s gray hide. Her shoulder-length, wiry, thin gray hair was splay around her head and her long, gangly arms were crossed over her stomach as she slept. The elderly woman’s wrinkled, spotted skin was pale in complexion and her clothing was faded.

“Angela?” the Apatosaurus whispered, teal eyes watching the elderly woman with worry. “Are you awake?”

“Yes. I’m alive, Hyacinth,” a weak, scratchy voice responded as the woman slowly opened her eyes to reveal them to be a dark brown in color. “You’re going to have to live with the idea that I am dying and that I will pass away sooner than later. I can’t live forever.”

“I know,” the gray longneck muttered, head dropping. She scuffed the ground with her front foot before turning back to Angela, watching the elderly woman rest peacefully on her back. Hyacinth turned back to the tree, munching on the leaves. They did not taste as good as her first mouthful, having lost her appetite from the few words she exchanged with Angela. After several minutes of slowly chewing leaves, she walked over to the small lake located in the center of the oasis.

Hyacinth stopped at the muddy edge, dipping her head near the cool water, just submerging her jaws. She began to drink her fill before completely immersing her head underwater. From an early age, she had learned that her favorite food was the aquatic plants that grew at the bottom of lakes. Pulling a clump out, Hyacinth raised her head out of the lake, water rolling off her head and neck as she chewed the slimy plant matter.

The Apatosaurus dipped her head into the water once more, pulling another clump of aquatic plant matter out of the bottom of the lake. As she was chewing, she turned back to Angela, droplets of water falling onto the elderly woman. Angela gave a small groan, wiping the water from her face before opening her dark brown eyes to glare up at the longneck. “Hyacinth, please watch where you’re eating. It dripped onto me.”
 
“Sorry,” the adolescent female muttered, swallowing her food. She brought her head back to Angela, nuzzling the elderly woman only for Angela to push her back. This simple action then caused the elderly woman to go into a fit of coughs. Hyacinth stared down at her, teal eyes swirling with concern. She nuzzle Angela once more, which did not help the human’s situation. It was only when the Apatosaurus pulled back for a long moment that Angela was able to get her breath back.

“I’m so sorry, Angela. I didn’t know you would react like that,” Hyacinth apologized, holding herself back from nuzzling the frail woman again.

Angela gave a dismissive wave of her hand. “I’m as fine as I can be at this stage of my life. I expected that to happen one time or another. You’re always so use to nuzzling me all the time. But don’t worry, I don’t want to go back into the cave that Stone Claw wanted me to stay in. It’s much better laying on your back and watching my last sunset.”

“How do you know it’s going to be your last?” Hyacinth asked, panic laced in her voice.

“I just do…” Angela trailed off, turning her head to look up at the Apatosaurus she was riding on. The elderly woman returned her gaze to the sky before glancing at the ground from the corner of her eye. “Hyacinth, can you please placed me on the ground.”

“But won’t that be uncomfortable?”

“Maybe, but I would I like to be on the ground now. To feel solid earth beneath me when I pass.”

“Please stop talking like that. You’re scaring me.”

Angela did not reply, only giving a small flick of her wrist. Hyacinth let out a small sigh, gently grabbing the elderly woman by the back of her faded blue shirt and lifting her off her back. She placed the elderly woman  near the base of a tree before giving her yet another nuzzle, though this time a much lighter one than usual. Looking over Angela to make sure she was comfortable, Hyacinth laid down beside her, tucking her legs beneath her much like a cat.

The gray longneck watched her caretaker for a long moment before asking a question. “C-can you tell me more about Sorrel, your great niece. The one you want me to find.”

Angela opened her dark brown eyes at the soft feminine voice of her traveling companion. She gave a small sigh as she stared up at the Apatosaurus. “I guess I can…one last time…but you know everything about her.” The elderly woman gave a small shake of her head, dark eyes gazing out to the other dinosaurs and surrounding landscape. “I’m eighty-seven years only and living in this wonderful, yet dangerous world. I’m surprised that I’ve survived this long.” She slowly pushed herself up slightly to look up at Hyacinth. Angela placed a gnarled, livered spotted hand around her neck where a pale, almost glowing blue stone pendent hung from a simple, thin silver chain.

The massive herbivore stared down at the elderly woman, tears already glistening in her teal eyes. “I may know a lot about your great-nice, but I want to hear you talk about her before you… go. I want to hear your voice one last time. How am I supposed to find her? I know you gave her a ring like you necklace, but where will she appear? Help me remember about Sorrel before you go.”

“Oh, Hyacinth,” Angela sighed, reaching out for the Apatosaurus. “My little blossom. I’m sorry you have to go through this.” The elderly woman stroked the pale brown colored snout of the adolescent longneck as the dinosaur’s head hovered over Angela. She let her hand fall from the longneck’s snout, giving a small sigh as she closed her dark brown eyes. For a long moment, she sat there, against the tree in silence, before opening her eyes again. “Sorrel is twenty-one now. Her birthday was just a month ago. I gave her that ring as a present. Perfect time I say.”

“She knows about your travels, right? And where the ring could bring her? It’s the same type of stone as the one in your pendent?” Hyacinth asked.

“Yes,” Angela breathed, before letting out a small giggle, memories flooding her mind. “Oh, Sorrel was the brightest of my siblings’ grandchildren. When she was younger, she absolutely adored dinosaurs of all kinds and listening to my paleontologist adventures. She loved going on the digs I brought the children on. Sorrel would always find something, whether it be a fossilized shell, tooth, claw, bone fragment, or even a footprint. I always thought of her as a granddaughter, since I never had any children of my own. My only regret in this life is that Sorrel and I will never have a chance to explore this magnificent world together. I know she’ll love you when you find her.”

Angela leaned against the rough bark of the tree trunk, letting out a loud sigh as she closed her eyes once more. “I want you to travel northwards to a cave in the artic lands. You know the one where Shifting Sand lives.”

“Okay,” Hyacinth muttered as she looked down at the elderly woman. She then turned her teal gaze back to the setting sun. Her tail tip flicked from side to side as she watched it slip behind the horizon. A smile graced the gray Apatosaurus’s face as she continued to watch the other, smaller, feeding herbivore, many doing the same as she.

“Angela,” Hyacinth started, standing up from the spot she was laying when the sun had fully set. “I think we should get back to the cave. It’ll be getting cooler soon. Stone Claw said that even just a little coldness could cause you a lot of trouble.”

When the gray longneck did not get a reply, she looked down at the old woman. Angela had not moved since she stopped speaking, but her face displayed a peaceful expression. Hyacinth, panicking, swung her head over to the sleeping woman, giving her a small nudge. When Angela did not move, the Apatosaurus pressed her snout against the elderly woman’s chest. She was still warm, but it was clear that she had stopped breathing and there was no sound of her heartbeat.

“Angela?” Hyacinth whispered, tears welling up in her large teal eyes. She gave a small sniff, nuzzling the elderly woman. She knew this moment was to come sooner or later and she had tried preparing herself for it, but it was still hard to bare. With tears rolling down her cheeks, the adolescent longneck gave her guardian one last nuzzle. “Good bye, Mother.” As she said this, the wind rustled, as if taking the elderly woman’s soul to the heavens above.

Just then, the other herbivores that had not yet left for sleep began to scream in terror as they fled from their resting or feeding spots. Hyacinth did not see any threat in front of her so, with a small sniff, she craned her neck to look behind herself. A female Utahraptor with a thick coat of pinfeathers the color of sand stood calmly behind her. To any of the herbivores that had stood their ground, they were surprised to see that the adolescent longneck had not reacted at all to the sickleclaw.

“Hyacinth,” came a low scratchy, yet feminine voice from the raptor.

The Apatosaurus said nothing, only turning away from the carnivore to nuzzle Angela again. The raptor had found Angela and Hyacinth a week or so ago, having heard the news that the elderly woman would not be able to make it to her pack far away north. Angela had wanted to return there for her last visit in the living world since that was where the portal was in which her great-niece would be able to enter this world. Even if she would have died before Sorrel came to the dinosaur dimension, she would have been buried there. Sadly, that was not happening now.

The raptor took a step forward, giving a small hiss as she brandished her clawed hands and the long, brown decorative feathers on the back of her arms. Her darker, decorative, feather tipped tail stood high in the air as she bent down lower to the ground, readying to jump.  Bright blue eyes filled with annoyance, she gave another hiss before lunging herself onto the Apatosaurus’s back. Her lethal toe claws still dug into Hyacinth’s flesh, but the sandy-feathered Utahraptor did not bite down like most would. Hyacinth gave herself a various shake, dislodging the raptor. The predator fell to the grassy ground with a small thud, but the gray herbivore did not bother finishing the job of crushing her.

“Hyacinth,” hissed the raptor as she stood back up on her feet. “Stop your mourning. You need to bury her now and get on your journey. What if I was a pack scout? You could have been killed. Angela wouldn’t like that.”

“Shut up, Shifting Sand,” the adolescent mumbled under her breath before giving a sniff as more tears rolled down her snout.

Shifting Sand give a sigh before stepping forward, this time standing in front of the gray Apatosaurus. “You need to bury her… You wouldn’t want other predators to eat her body, would you?”

Hyacinth gave a small sigh at the feathered sickleclaw. She looked over at the other herbivores, most having already ran away from the sight of Shifting Sand, though, a few stood their ground, slack jawed at what they were hearing. A carnivore speaking leaf-eater. The large raptor paid no mind to them only leading Hyacinth to a dense grove of flowering trees while the massive sauropod picked Angela up by the back of her faded shirt.

When the strange pair arrive at the middle of the grove, Hyacinth placed her caretaker on the ground. She began to dig a shallow grave with her forefoot. When she was satisfied with the depth, she picked Angela up once more and placed her in the grave. She then pushed the dirt she had dug up over it. When she turned around, she saw Shifting Sand standing at the edge of the clearing. The raptor held a large rock in her clawed hands with a few others already gathered at her feet.

“Here,” the Utahraptor said, thrusting the rock towards Hyacinth. “So other carnivores don’t dig up her grave.”

The younger female gave a small nod, striding over to the pile of rocks Shifting Sand had gathered and pushing them over to the newly dug grave. The Utahraptor helped Hyacinth placed the large stones over Angela’s grave before she looked up at the longneck. “I have another mission to go on so I can’t lead you to my pack, but I still need to take those journals of Angela’s. My pack will keep them safe with other dimension traveling humans’ items. And remember what she wanted you to do.”

Hyacinth nodded, a tear rolling down her cheek as she nuzzle the elderly woman’s resting place one last time. “I have to find the cave Sorrel will appear in when she comes here. I just hope that she doesn’t arrive while I’m traveling.”

Shifting Sand gave a small snort. “She just might. But don’t worry. I’m sure they’ll have a scout to guard her since the cave is at the very edge of our territory. I suggest you eat and drink as much as you can. The journey is long, tiring and very, very cold.” As the Utahraptor turned away from the grieving Apatosaurus, she looked back over her shoulder. “I’m also sorry for attacking you; I needed a way to get most of those other leaf eaters away. The less that know I can speak their language the better.”

 “Thank you, Shifting Sand,” Hyacinth growled in the carnivore language, surprising the smaller, feathered dinosaur. The sandy predator gave the younger female a small nod of welcome before jogging out of the grove of flowering trees, leaving the longneck to mourn for the rest of the night.


Yea! Another Author’s Note! Well, I just wanted to say that if you like my story I would really appreciate it if you could fav and/or follow so I know people are actually enjoying my story. I also absolutely adore comments, good or bad (though good I appreciate more than bad). Constructive criticism is welcome from anyone. It doesn’t have to be nice either, if you like my story or not, explain why. The reason I’m saying this is because I’ve noticed that I had over 1,000 reads on my other story, Connections, but only a few comments and favs/follows. I may be sounding a bit selfish right now, but it’s the only way us writers really know if people like our stories or not. It really pumps me up whenever I see a new review or reread the ones I got. Please review on any story you like, I promise you, the writers will love it. (Originally for Fanfiction.net)

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LBT Fanfiction / Connections
« on: July 06, 2015, 02:41:37 PM »
Chapter Nine: Parting Ways  

Only a few days had passed since the raptor pair had left the Ceratopsian plains and were now wandering through a semi-desert landscape in search for food. The only vegetation their eyes fell upon where sparse plants here and there, though not enough for a large herbivore.  The water was just as scarce, only accumulating in massive amounts following a rare, heavy downpour.  A herd of dinosaurs could usually be found congregating at these oases, but there was no way the raptors would be able to sneak in without being spotting by at least one of the herbivores.  

Blood Stone and her son causally walked through the dry, desert landscape. They may have been hungry, but not enough to start a hunt. The lizard and rodents that scampered around their feet when the pair disturbed a bush on their travels were enough to satisfy them for the day.  Luckily, they did happen to came across a half-eaten Magnapaulia carcass around mid-day.

The raptor pair stopped, sniffing the air for any looming predator that may have taken down the prey. A familiar scent reached Blood Stone’s nostrils as her gaze fell upon a family of small raptors dozing on the other side of the large carcass. The larger raptor smiled in recognition; surely they would share the meat.

Blood Stone gave a small croak as she walked around the Magnapaulia. The brown feathered head of a female Velociraptor appeared over the large hadrosaur’s forelimb. She sleepily blinked her yellow eyes at the larger raptor standing a few feet in front of her. After a moment, her eyes widened, recognition dawning on her.

“Blood Stone!” she cried, jumping over the dead herbivore’s leg to greet the red feathered raptor. “I haven’t seen you for so long.” She then turned to Night Glare, letting out a small coo, “Oh, look how much you have gown.” She approached the dark blue scaly hybrid aiming to exchange nuzzles. Sadly, he only took a step back, giving a loud hiss and raising his wings in an aggressive display.

Blood Stone watched her child before rounding the Magnapaulia. She glanced over at Pebble. “Mind if I and Night Glare have a bite?”

“No, I don’t mind,” Pebble said, watching Night Glare with a wary eye.

Blood Stone gave the younger female a nod before she turned her brown gaze back to the carcass. Night Glare was quickly at her side, instantly diving his head into the already half-eaten stomach. His mother did not feast right away, too occupied at gazing over the two newcomers of Torrent and Pebble’s brood. Torrent was huddled up with Mist, River, and Ivy along with the two new additions, a pair of muddy blue colored males.  
“Who are those two?” Blood Stone asked as Pebble walked back over to her brood.

“Mud and Puddle. Mud is the bigger one,” the Velociraptor answered, beginning to nuzzle her family awake.

Groggily, Torrent opened his eyes, gazing up at his mate. He gave her a small smile before giving his five children a nudge of his own. Slowly, the young Velociraptors began to wake up, giving yawns and squeaks. Mist, the blue, yellow-green eyed female gave a shake of her feathers before noticing Blood Stone. She gave an excited squawk, jumping up to the larger Deinonychus. Blood Stone stared down at the tiny raptor before she began to eat.

Mist turned to Night Glare who was still gorging himself on hadrosaur flesh. The little blue female grinned mischievously as she shook her hind end. She then leaped, landing on Night Glare’s back. Almost instantly the hybrid whipped his head out of the Magnapaulia, letting out a screech at the little raptor on his back. Seeing that she was in danger, Mist leaped off before Night Glare’s jaws could close around her. She ran off, the larger raptor chasing after her.

Blood Stone gave a snarl, standing in front of her son before he could do any damage to the Velociraptor. Torrent stood over Mist banishing his claws at the hybrid. Night Glare only gave another loud hiss, almost completely ignoring his mother. Blood Stone gave a low growl, pushing Night Glare away. The scaly raptor gave another growl but tore his gaze away, turning back to his meal.

“Keep that thing away from my children,” Torrent snarled, still standing over Mist.

“But Daddy, I was just playing with him,” the little blue female said. “I’m sure he didn’t mean it.”

“No. He defiantly did,” Blood Stone spoke, turning to Mist. “He doesn’t do will with anyone other than me. He’s an excellent hunter, though. Probably the best I’ve seen.”

   The little female turned to Night Glare who had finished his fill and was now gazing up at the sky, blood still coating his jaws and clawed hands. Mist looked back at Blood Stone. “Does he speak?”
   
“No. But he communicates well by other means.”

   Mist only gave a confused blink of her yellow green eyes. She then turned to her siblings, not wanting to risk playing with Night Glare again. She was flocked by her newest siblings, Mud and Puddle. The two little males possessed the same yellow-green eyes as she. The two males gave small squeaks of joy as they jumped up and down, nipping at their sister’s jaws.

   The dark blue scaled hybrid watched the trio for a long moment before laying down. He belly was full and his mother was still eating, so he may as well get some sleep. Within seconds Night Glare was fast asleep, his mother looking over him.

   It did not take long for Blood Stone to finish her fill and she to, curled up for a nap. The mother and son pair slept for a few hours, the Velociraptors nibbling at the carcass or play fighting with one another while the time past. It was only after the sun began to paint the sky orange and stain the clouds pink that the pair woke up, and that was only because a certain male voice called out to the elderly Deinonychus.

   “Mom?”

   Blood Stone’s brown eyes opened at the male voice. Quickly noticing a presence standing above her, she looked up. It was a silvery red Deinonychus with blue eyes filled with shock at the sight of the elderly blood red female at his feet. He took a step back, enabling her to stand up. He watched her slowly pull herself to her feet, a small smile gracing his lips. “Nice seeing you again, Mom.”

   “White Havoc,” Blood Stone breathed before jumping forward. She nuzzled the slightly larger male on the side of the neck, he returning the gesture. “I didn’t think I would ever see you again.” She pulled away, gazing at the silvery red feathered male. “A mother like me never thinks she’ll see her children again. Especially when her mate has died.”

   “Dad’s dead?” White Havoc questioned, sadness quickly filling his blue eyes. “How…?”

   “Sickness,” Blood Stone whisper before turning the Night Glare, who was now sitting up, brown eyes starting at the newcomer. She gave him a small nod before turning back to her older son. “White Havoc, this is my newest hatchling, Night Glare. Night Glare, this is your half-brother, White Havoc and part of the last clutch I ever thought I would have.”
   The scaly hybrid only gave a blink before turning his gaze away from his mother and half-brother. He honestly did not care. He gave a small whiff of the air before standing up, walking over to where the scent emanated from. He gave a low growl as a hiss sounded behind a bush. A squawk then sounded followed by a pointed shriek and Night Glare lunged forward, jaws grabbing onto something.

   “Shadow Watcher!” White Havoc cried out, spirting towards the winged dinosaur before leaping onto his back. His deadly claws instantly hooked into Night Glare’s back before he leaned forward, jaws closing around the back of the hybrid’s neck. The dark blue raptor took a step back, dropping the creature he had bit.

   Blood Stone stared down in shock at the marron colored Deinonychus chick, her shoulders and back now drenched in her own blood. A large, black feathered female Deinonychus walked up to the chick, nuzzling her. She gave a small coo before looking up, rage flashing in her pale yellow eyes. With a screech, the female also leaped forward, joining her mate on the attack of the thing that had harmed her daughter.

   The elderly, red feathered raptor watched in horror as her older son and his mate tried to rip apart Night Glare. They had managed a few deep gashes in his sides and back, but the hybrid fought back fiercely. He had ripped White Havoc from his back before jumping around in circles, trying to shake the larger black Deinonychus off him. It was quite a surprise that he could hold her weigh when she was larger than himself.

   The female bit down on Night Glare’s right wing before jumping off the young male. He gave a loud screech in pain as his wing was pulled out of the socket before the membrane began to rip from his side.
 
   “Stop!” Blood Stone shouted. “Stop, there is no more reason to harm him. I’m sure he has learned his lesson. I may have not wanted him when I laid his egg, but he is still my son. You’re done. I’m sorry for what he has done to your daughter…my granddaughter, but…his mind seems to work differently than yours and mine.”

   The black female let go of Night Glare’s wing, watching the elderly female for a long moment before approaching her daughter who still lay motionless on the ground. Blood Stone did the same with her own son, nuzzling his bloody, broken wing. She only got a face full of teeth and a loud hiss of pain and anger in return. Blood Stone backed away, letting Night Glare deal with his wounds as she turned to her other son. He was nuzzling the maroon feathered child, muttering her name as his mate licked the chick’s wounds clean. White Havoc looked up at his mother, blue eyes glaring at her. “What kind of monster have you hatched?” The silvery red raptor then stood up, nudging his mate forward. “Come on, Evening Inferno. I want to get away from that thing.”

    The black female nodded. Leaning down, she picked up her daughter in her jaws as gently as she could, placing the hatchling onto her father’s back. White Havoc looked over the wounded chick before walking away, not sparing a glance at his mother.

   Blood Stone watched them for a long moment, before giving a sigh. She then turned to Night Glare, a snarl escaping her throat. “How could you do this? That was you brother’s child, my granddaughter, your own kind and you just attack them like that. Was your father’s kind some type of cannibalistic alien?”

   The dark blue raptor did not respond, only looking off into the distance, giving the air a small sniff. Turning to his broken right wing, he nuzzled it. Wincing in pain, he shook it off, stalking forward with a swish of his black feather tipped tail. Blood Stone only glared at her son, having been ignored. Still, she followed him.

   After a long trek over the dry landscape and though a bit of dense foliage, Night Glare stopped, his mother walking up beside him. She glared at her son, only to hear a loud bellow of a large herbivore. She turned and peered out of the bushes to see a young adult, dark green Stegosaurus. It was clear by the newly laid egg at her hind feet that this was a female. She gave another bellow, as if sensing the two waiting predators. She turned to the side, flashing her massive, triangular shaped, dark brown plates at the bushes Night Glare and Blood Stone stood within. The Stegosaurus then began to wave her tail back and forth, showing off her deadly spikes at its tip.

   The female gave another bellow, trashing her tail even more. This caused Night Glare to stand up, a small growl emitting from his throat. Blood Stone started at him with disbelief in her eyes. “Night Glare!” she hissed. “You can’t kill that Stegosaurus on your own. Even with my help. We’re too small.”

   The dark blue raptor ignored his mother, suddenly shooting out from the bushes. He dived between the herbivore’s legs to the egg she was guarding. The new mother gave a loud bellow of distress, taking a step back, almost crushing Night Glare. She then took another step back, swinging her tail once more, aiming for the Deinonychus hybrid’s head.

   Blood Stone gave a small shout, running forward towards Night Glare. She pushed her son aside with her body, but paid the consequence. One of the female Stegosaurus’s spikes impaled the elderly Deinonychus’s head. The herbivore looked over at the dead predator stuck on her tail. It was not the one she had seen after her egg. With a snort, she gave a flick of her tail, dislodging Blood Stone from her spike and causing the raptor to be flung into the bushes. The dark green Stegosaurus then looked around for the dark blue, winged raptor she had seen before. Not catching sight of the young male’s scaly hide, she looked down at her lone egg, making sure it was okay.

   When the new mother had turned away from the limp body of Blood Stone, Night Glare reappeared in the bushes. He looked down at his mother’s body, giving a slow blink of his brown eyes. He took a small step forward, sniffing at the dead Deinonychus. His tongue flickered out, lapping at the wound on top of the elderly female’s head. She had died protecting him. Night Glare gave his mother’s body another sniff before turning away. He stopped, looking over his shoulder and spoke for the first time. “Death is everywhere, Momma.”


Whoo! I finally finished it! This chapter took way too long to write, but I just lost interest after the eighth one. Hey, now it’s finished, so that’s good.  

I will be writing another Land Before Time fic, but not a sequel. I’ll probably start posting around the weekend of my first week of school so that I have a few chapters typed up. I really don’t want to have such a long span between chapters like this story.  Also, the chapters won’t be too long, maybe 1,000 – 2,000 or so words each. I will say that my new story will be about Thin Skins (humans if you haven’t figured it out yet), missing siblings, half-siblings, and a few other special elements.

I also would like to say that if I stop posting around the middle of the school year, it’s probably because I have a full school schedule with, hopefully, two AP classes. My original works are also WAY more important and I’ll probably be working on those most weekends, if I can think of ideas.
Thanks to everyone who have read my story. Hope you enjoyed.

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Character Discussion / Chomper and Cera Parents
« on: July 04, 2015, 08:24:01 PM »
Quote from: Ducky123,Jul 4 2015 on  06:08 PM
Well, I know some people wrote fanfictions where Cera and her siblings weren't Topsy's children but some other male's. Including your fanfiction if I remember correctly... :p
Yep, that was mine :p

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Quote from: DarkHououmon,Jul 4 2015 on  10:38 AM
Quote from: Kittybubbles,Jul 4 2015 on  10:58 AM
Different species can produce offspring with one another as long as they are in the same family, animal kingdom wise. For example, a horse with a donkey would make a mule or a lion and a tiger could create a liger or a tigon. I know the hybrid offspring most likely would be infertile, but I°¶m only interested in the original Tyrannosaurs rex hybrid for my fanfic.
I am aware of that. I know about tigons and I know about mules. What I was saying is that two species breeding together would be difficult as the genes have to be genetically close enough to be able to produce an offspring. They have to have enough in common genetically, otherwise it wouldn't work. So yes, your chances are at their best if they are of the same family, but I don't know if that's always the case. I'm not sure if two species of the same family could always produce an offspring.

A friend of mine created a dinosaur character that was a cross between my alimon species (fictional four-legged theropod related to herrerrasaurus) and a carnotaurus (her fav dino). Such a pairing would never work in a realistic setting, but she did it anyway. So I don't see why you couldn't forego realism to have the hybrid dino that you wanted, since this is a fictional setting. But that's up to you.
Okay, I agree with you :p. I remember reading something about a wolf and fox cannot produce offspring. So I looked some things up and found this little thing.
   
°ßCanid hybrids are the result of interbreeding between different species of the canine (dog) family ( Canidae ). They often occur in the wild, in particular between domestic or feral dogs and wild native canid. Members of the dog genus Canis: wolves , domestic dogs, dingoes, Ethiopian Wolves, coyotes, and golden jackals cannot interbreed with members of the wider dog family: the Canidae , such as South American canids, foxes, African wild dogs, bat-eared foxes or raccoon dogs ; or, if they could, their offspring would be infertile. They could meet but couldn't produce offspring.°®

After reading this I had to look up the taxonomy of the Canidae family. Kind of interesting to look at but now I still don°¶t know how I would hybridize those. Eh, I can look up that stuff if I ever need that. So, if I want a hybrid of a dinosaur, I°¶ll just stay with the family and similar sizes since we wouldn°¶t exactly know if they could produce offspring or not.

The main thing about this stuff is that I like science-y things. So, even though it is fiction, I like to keep in realistic-ish, until I start adding my favorite fantasy elements like shape shifters and manipulators of elements of nature.

Thanks for the interesting discussion  :)

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Quote from: DarkHououmon,Jul 3 2015 on  06:49 PM
Giganotosaurus didn't live in the same location as tyrannosaurus. It was a south american animal, and there was no pathway to get to South America from North America. Unless that tyrannosaurus could swim hundreds of miles, there was no way one was ending up in where Giganotosaurus lived, even if they lived at thes ame time.

It is difficult for one species to produce offspring with another, and most of the time, they are infertile and can't produce children of their own. In order to have a hybrid dinosaur, if you're going realistic, you have very few options that would make sense and work, and for the most part, they could not produce offspring of their own. There are exceptions of course. I'm pretty sure polar bears and grizzly bears can make offspring, but I believe this is because they evolved from the same ancestor and hadn't drifted too far apart, and still have enough in common to have babies together.

Some tyrannosaurs did have longer arms, however, most of those would be small. The tyrannosaur family is known for having short, stubby arms. And I don't think tyrannosaurus lived with any other tyrannosaurs unless you count possibly nanotyrannus; the other tyrannosaurs lived at different times, or in a different location, and some were much smaller than tyrannosaurus.

No, I don't think you could give the tyrannosaurus hybrid longer arms. At least not without either stretching realism or making up a dinosaur (since it is fiction). Another option, though it's rare and I don't think it would occur much in nature, is if the gene for longer arms was turned on somehow. Guanlong is an ancestor to tyrannosaurus and it still had the long, three clawed hands.
I understand that Tyrannosaurs rex and Giganotosaurus lived in different parts of the word, but I was referring to the of Land Before Time universe where pretty much any dinosaur from any time can live anywhere.

Different species can produce offspring with one another as long as they are in the same family, animal kingdom wise. For example, a horse with a donkey would make a mule or a lion and a tiger could create a liger or a tigon.  I know the hybrid offspring most likely would be infertile, but I’m only interested in the original Tyrannosaurs rex hybrid for my fanfic.  

I decided that I will not be making the hybrid as all the tyrannosauridae (tyrannosaurus family) are too similar in physical appearance and smaller than T-rex. I originally wanted my character to be bigger than a typical T-rex, but the ones I was playing with (Spinosaurus and Giganotosaurus) I realized that they just wouldn’t work since they are not part of the same animal family.  So now I’m just going to make a big mom and big dad to produce an extra-large child and to make him special, he will have feathers…

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Quote from: DarkHououmon,Jul 2 2015 on  07:06 PM
Even if spinosaurus and tyrannosaurus lived at the same time together, they most likely would not have been able to make an offspring as they would be too genetically different from each other.
Yeah…I kinda figured that. Even though I said this up above in like the third comment that I was going to go with the Spinosaurus hybrid, now I’m not. I wanted to go with the seemingly more able Giganotosaurus T-rex combo until I noticed that they were of different families. So, they cannot produce offspring either, so now I have to look at tyrannosauridae family and find which one I like best and have it breed with the cannon character I wanted to produce the hybrid offspring. Sigh, I guess I can’t totally have my massive carnivore with longer arms.

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Character Discussion / Chomper and Cera Parents
« on: July 03, 2015, 10:58:40 AM »
Quote from: vonboy,Jul 3 2015 on  09:26 AM
Could be a recessive trait. Not good at explaining this, but Chomper's parents could both have 1 recessive gene for purple skin, and Chomper happened to get both of those recessive gens from his parents, making his skin purple, since there's no dominate gene to cover it up. Same thing with Cera's parents.
Yes, that is plausible, and I’m most people write/think that way when they read, but what if it wasn’t a recessive trait?

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Character Discussion / Chomper and Cera Parents
« on: July 03, 2015, 09:59:49 AM »
Has anyone noticed that Chomper nor Cera look anything like their parents? Chomper is lavender and his parents are green, though he does share their red eyes. Cera and her sisters also look nothing like their parents, which are gray and black/dark brown eyed. Another interesting note I noticed is that Dinah and Dana are both a gray coloration.

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Quote from: Simba King Of Pride Rock,Jul 2 2015 on  05:53 PM
Quote from: Kittybubbles,Jul 2 2015 on  04:28 PM
Could a Spinosaurus produce offspring with a Tyrannosaurus rex?

Just a little thing I was wondering about since I kinda wanted to make a hybrid for a new/sequel fanfiction that I already started writing. (If anyone is wondering about my other one, I’m trying to get myself rereading to last chapter, but I haven’t been up to it this week. Hopefully next week when I get my new Kindle with its keyboard so I can type outside.)

Now, I know I can do whatever I want in a story since it is fiction (like some of those LittlefootXCera and PetrieXDucky stories) but I like making my stories more realistic-ish.  I can just go with the Giganotosaurus hybrid (Giganotosaurus X Tyrannosaurs rex) if I have to, but I preferred to have the offspring be bigger with longer arms and longer jaws. (:p, I might just go with the Spinosaurus hybrid anyway now that I think about it…).

But seriously, if the Tyrannosaurus rex and Spinosaurus lived in the same time period (I don’t think they do but I never bothered to look it up cuz I’m lazy :p) and lived in around the same habitat and had no other of their kind to breed with, would they be able to produce viable, healthy-ish offspring? (Which would more than likely be sterile).

I don’t even know if I put this in the right form…
T. rex and Spinosaurus did not live at the same time, or in the same place. Hope that is helpful.
That’s what I figured. Eh, I think I’m still going with the hybrid idea.

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Could a Spinosaurus produce offspring with a Tyrannosaurus rex?

Just a little thing I was wondering about since I kinda wanted to make a hybrid for a new/sequel fanfiction that I already started writing. (If anyone is wondering about my other one, I’m trying to get myself rereading to last chapter, but I haven’t been up to it this week. Hopefully next week when I get my new Kindle with its keyboard so I can type outside.)

Now, I know I can do whatever I want in a story since it is fiction (like some of those LittlefootXCera and PetrieXDucky stories) but I like making my stories more realistic-ish.  I can just go with the Giganotosaurus hybrid (Giganotosaurus X Tyrannosaurs rex) if I have to, but I preferred to have the offspring be bigger with longer arms and longer jaws. (:p, I might just go with the Spinosaurus hybrid anyway now that I think about it…).

But seriously, if the Tyrannosaurus rex and Spinosaurus lived in the same time period (I don’t think they do but I never bothered to look it up cuz I’m lazy :p) and lived in around the same habitat and had no other of their kind to breed with, would they be able to produce viable, healthy-ish offspring? (Which would more than likely be sterile).

I don’t even know if I put this in the right form…

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LBT Fanfiction / Connections
« on: April 29, 2015, 05:52:11 PM »
Ducky123

Yea! I’m glad you’re liking my story, and again, thank you so much for the reviews.

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