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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 09, 2012, 03:08:55 PM »



When they hit the Valley floor, they continued running. As they moved, Fyn could see others watching them, wondering what was going on. He turned his head to acknowledge them.

It was his first mistake.

“Fyn!” Labon yelled again, “don’t you dare gaze anywhere other than me! No one but me is your focus today. Stop disappointing me!”

Fyn snapped his head back, only staring at Labon. They pressed on, running towards a rocky section of the forest. They ran through the trees, and Fyn caught several branches in the face. Despite this, he and Littlefoot pressed on. Labon led them up to a small, rocky hill just above the treeline, and indicated for Littlefoot and Fyn to line up side-by-side in front of him. They did so.

“I’m now going to test your endurance, and how well you can think under stress,” Labon said. “When I say ëRockslide,’ you will drop to the ground, then pick yourself up as quickly as possible. When I say ëSharptooth’ you will throw your tail from side to side as if fending off a Sharptooth. Am I clear?”

The friends nodded.

“We’ll see. Rockslide!”

Labon’s call caught Fyn and Littlefoot off guard, but only for a moment. They dropped to the ground and pushed themselves back onto their feet, ready to wait for the next statement.

“Rockslide,” Labon repeated, calmly. Fyn and Littlefoot hit the ground again and recovered.

“This time,” Fyn though to himself, breathing heavily, “He’ll call ëSharptooth.’ He has to!”

“Rockslide,” Labon repeated again, and the two dinosaurs went back down and up. Now Fyn was getting really anxious. When would his father start mixing things up? The “Rockslides” just kept coming. Fyn’s legs were shaking. He’d never done anything like this. Littlefoot had stronger front legs, and was having a considerably better time. After the fourteenth “Rockslide,” Fyn’s knees began to buckle. Littlefoot rushed to his side and supported him. On the next “Rockslide,” Littlefoot helped him up. Then things switched up again.

“Sharptooth!” Labon said. Fyn began to go down. He’d been expecting another “Rockslide.” Labon was immediately on to him.

“Why aren’t you listening? I said Sharptooth!”

Fyn corrected himself and stood up, swishing his long tail through the air with a resounding “crack.” It was that sound, a sound only Fin-Necks and their cousins could produce, that inspired Fyn to keep going.

“Sharptooth.”

“Crack!” Fyn’s tail sliced through the air once more. Now he was feeling motivated again.

“Rockslide!”

Fyn and Littlefoot hit the ground again, breathing hard, but inspired to succeed. The process repeated for a while. Then Labon finally called a halt.

“You two have earned something, amazingly,” he said, “water.”

Fyn and Littlefoot both looked in sorry shape. They were breathing heavily, and could barely move. They simply nodded in understanding.

“Alright, then. Follow me.”

Labon took off running, and Fyn and Littlefoot, with no thoughts other than those of the cool water which awaited them, followed. They chased Labon through the trees until they finally stopped by a trickling, clear stream.

“Drink,” Labon ordered, “but only as much as you have to.”

Fyn bent his head to the water and drank. Water had never tasted so good in his life. He could hear Littlefoot thirstily gulping down water beside him as well. Just as he started feeling satisfied, Labon spoke again.

“Let’s go, we’re moving again, drinking’s over!” He took off running again. Fyn and Littlefoot could scarcely keep up. They ran farther into the woods, where they stopped at a small clearing. Fyn gazed into the forest ahead with interest. All of the trees seemed to have been weakened at the base, and not by natural causes. Someone had set this up.

Labon walked ahead and paused directly in front of the trees.

“As a herd leader or deputy, the possibility of attack by either Sharpteeth, or, in some cases, other Leaf Eaters is a very real possibility. You must be prepared to deal with such attacks should they occur. As a Longneck, your best defense is your size and strength, but that does not mean you should be the aggressor at every point during a fight. More often than not, you will need to be defensive. Learn to dodge attacks, be mindful of your surroundings, and prepare for a counterattack. Rockslide.”

Fyn and Littlefoot almost didn’t catch the phrase Labon had thrown into his speech, but when they did, they hit the ground and shot right back up.

“Good,” Labon said, “you’re still awake. You’ll need to be in here.”

He gestured to one of the weakened trees. “These are your attackers. They are the first challenges you will encounter in this forest, but they will not be your last. You will not let them touch you. Instead, you will dodge them. Obviously, I can’t do this alone, so I have an assistant. Mr. Threehorn, will you step forward?”

 Without warning, Cera’s father stepped out of the trees next to Labon. “Who do I get to break today?” he asked with a malicious grin. Labon continued with his speech.

“Your goal is to make it out of the trees and into the clearing on the other side of the forest. Mr. Threehorn will accompany Littlefoot through, and I will accompany Fyn. When I say move, get into the trees!”

Fyn and Littlefoot stayed stationary as the two adults walked into the forest. When they were inside, Labon took one last check around and yelled “move!”

Fyn ran into the trees, slipping past them with ease. This was going to be easy. Suddenly, there was a loud cracking sound next to him. Fyn looked up just in time to see a massive dead tree falling towards him. He sidestepped quickly, avoiding it, but as soon as he did, another tree was bearing down on him! His father was pushing over the weakened trees. Fyn pulled himself together. His goal was to get to the other side of the forest, and that was exactly what he was going to do.

Fyn resumed his pace, running straight ahead and dodging trees left and right. One very nearly caught him in the face, but he pulled his head back just in time to avoid contact. The path through the trees seemed to go on forever. Left, right, duck, jump, turn- all of the directions were becoming confusing, but Fyn just kept going. If he stopped, he would fail, and that was most definitely not going to happen. Finally, just as it seemed the falling trees would never end, they did, and Fyn found himself standing next to a young, flexible tree. His father was on the other side of the tree, with one foot on its trunk.

“Congratulations, you’ve made it this far. Now, it’s time to learn the next step: repelling and following up on an attack. Before we start, however, Sharptooth.”

At the phrase, Fyn swished his tail from side to side, cracking it through the air.

“Good,” Labon said, and this time he sounded different. Pleased, perhaps? Fyn didn’t dare presume, but it made him feel a bit better.

“This tree I am standing behind is your attacker. Keep it away from your face, belly, and back. Those are all vulnerable areas. I don’t care how you do it, but if this tree hits you in any of the areas I just mentioned, I guarantee you will regret it.”

Fyn nodded and gave the approved affirmative.

“Yes, leader!”

“Outstanding,” Labon said, then pushed the tree violently towards Fyn, bending it towards his midsection. Fyn sidestepped, striking the tree with his tail. Labon countered by releasing pressure and swinging the tree up towards Fyn’s face. Fyn recoiled, throwing his head back to avoid the branch. Unfortunately, he also exposed his neck. Labon saw his chance and swept the tree across Fyn’s throat. It wasn’t hard enough to cause damage, but it was enough to surprise Fyn and knock him off balance.

“Do not expose your throat!” Labon said, “that is the last mistake you will ever make! If a Sharptooth’s jaws so much as graze you there, you’re lost to us. Sharptooth!”

Fyn swished his tail again, and prepared for the next attack. This one came for his face, but Fyn was ready. He lowered his head and presented the “attacker” with only his spines; perhaps his most intimidating feature. Labon tried again, aiming for Fyn’s back. Fyn was ready again, and promptly sliced his tail across the tree, diverting it. Finally, Labon came in for a low strike, and Fyn saw his chance. He pushed himself up onto his back legs and brought his front ones down onto the tree, pinning it.

“Good!” Labon said, “push harder, finish this!”

Fyn pushed the tree even harder into the ground with all of his strength. Suddenly, there was a loud “crack!” and the tree snapped in half. Fyn was suddenly reminded of his childhood journey to the Great Valley. His mother had saved the herd by snapping an attacking Sharptooth’s neck- the same one that had killed his grandfather. He had been amazed at his mother’s strength, but also somewhat frightened. He’d never seen his mother end another creature’s life. Now, he’d practiced the same. He was truly growing up.

“Good job, Fyn,” Labon said, and for the first time that day, there wasn’t a trace of harshness in his voice. “You ended the attack quickly and decisively. Just remember that a Fin-Neck never takes another life unless it is absolutely necessary. If loss of life can be avoided, then it must be.” He turned and glanced farther into the trees. Ahead, Fyn could see a faint glimmer of light. He was almost done.

“Finish this strong,” Labon said, “go!”
Fyn took off running faster than he’d ever gone before. He raced through the trees until he came to a small, steep depression. Without a second thought, he ran down into it and forced himself up the other side. It was grueling, but he kept going. Now he was plunging headfirst through vines, unable to see. He pressed on regardless, until he met his final challenge. The vines ended abruptly, and suddenly Fyn found himself tripping into a massive, deep, muddy pool. He kept going, slogging through the viscous, putrid slime, forcing his burning muscles to perform, and slowly, he began to crawl out again. Finally, he’d made it. Fyn raced to the treeline, and just as he made it through, collapsed on the ground with a shout of triumph. Momentarily, he heard Littlefoot do the same nearby. He glanced over at his friend. Littlefoot was dirty and exhausted, but smiling. Seeing him, Fyn broke into a smile, too. They had accomplished much, and as Fyn looked up at the sky, he noticed the Bright Circle; most specifically its position. It had already reached its highest point, and was now on its journey back to the horizon. Starfall was almost over.

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Saurus Rock: Member Hall of Fame / Fanfiction Voting 2012
« on: August 09, 2012, 10:28:48 AM »
Thanks for letting me know! I just wanted to make sure.  :smile

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Land Before Time Captions / Gang, Pterano and Sierra caption
« on: August 09, 2012, 01:32:26 AM »
That awkward moment when Sierra realizes that this is most definitely not his monthly jelly of the month club membership meeting...

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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 08, 2012, 02:49:58 PM »
Chapter 2: Starfall


As he’d done many times before in his life, Fyn woke early, to the soft glow of the night circle. He looked at it as he awoke, marveling at its delicate beauty. The sight filled him with inspiration. Today, he and Littlefoot were going to prove themselves. He stood up and checked up on his mother before leaving. She was sleeping peacefully. Fyn made up his mind at that point: the next time he saw her, he would be his father’s deputy. With new resolve, he walked bravely out into the early morning, heading for Littlefoot’s nest.





The first thing Littlefoot saw when he woke up was Fyn standing determinedly over him. Littlefoot had barely cracked his eyes open, but Fyn noticed and immediately began to urge him on.

“Come on!” he pressed, “we can’t keep my dad waiting!”

“Right behind you,” Littlefoot said groggily, swaying as he stood up. He looked tired, Fyn reasoned. He probably hadn’t slept well the previous night.

“Come to think of it,” he realized, "neither did I.”

Once Littlefoot had gained his footing, he started walking immediately in the direction of the lake. Fyn followed. It seemed like his friend was ready to face the day. Fyn only hoped his assumption was true.

They had quite a distance to walk. They were in the forest, near Littlefoot’s nest, but they still had to cross the vast plain leading up to the lake. Fyn decided to enjoy the cool breeze and the soft sounds of night-dwelling creatures, chattering and humming quietly. The grass felt good on his feet, comforting, in fact. He had just started to enjoy all of these small things, when he and Littlefoot found themselves on the plain. Ahead, they could see the lake, where Starfall would begin.

“Ready?” Littlefoot asked, looking Fyn steadily in the eyes.

Fyn nodded. “I’m ready. Let’s get this done.”

They began to head towards the lake, swishing through the plains’ tall grass. As they drew closer to the lake, Fyn squinted, trying to make out a shape that had just appeared on the shore. He looked hard, and finally realized it was a Longneck.

“My dad,” he thought. Fyn swallowed hard, not knowing what to expect. Now they could see him clearly, staring out over the water. They had almost reached him, when he turned and stared at them, sizing them up with a neutral expression and piercing, green eyes. He regarded them for a moment longer.

Then Littlefoot’s and Fyn’s world was turned upside down.





Littlefoot nearly jumped out of his hide at the next thing that happened. Without warning, Labon yelled out “Too slow! You two are moving too slowly! Get over here!”

Not knowing what to think, Littlefoot complied, and Fyn did the same, running towards Labon. They drew closer and slowed down, expecting to stop, but Labon suddenly took off running around the lake.

“This is ridiculous!” he yelled, watching Fyn and Littlefoot speed up again after slowing down for him, “how can either of you possibly expect to get through today if that’s all the effort you’re going to give me?!”

Labon was running fast now, especially for a Longneck such as himself. Littlefoot was having trouble keeping up. Fyn seemed to be having an easier time, due to his slightly lighter weight and smaller size, but he was still obviously suffering.

“Fyn-” Littlefoot panted, falling back, “I don’t-, I don’t know-”

“Oh no,” Fyn said, tucking in behind Littlefoot and pushing him, “don’t ever let me hear those words come out of your mouth. We’ll do this together!”

Together, the two Longnecks picked up the pace and fell back in behind Labon. The senior Longneck had changed directions and started running away from the lake. Now he was leading them towards the Great Wall.

“You’d better not let me leave you behind on this run,” Labon warned, glaring back at the two dinosaurs following him. “If you stick with me all the way up, Starfall will end early.”

Fyn and Littlefoot shared a glance of delight. All of this could be over soon, and it looked like Labon was leading them towards a gradual, smooth path up the wall.

Then things changed.

Labon turned towards a high peak- the one he had been looking at the day before. The sight very nearly broke Littlefoot then and there. The mountain was huge. There was no way they could run to the top. Littlefoot turned to look at his friend. An expression of complete disbelief was plastered across his face. It dawned on Littlefoot that this, under any other circumstance, might be somewhat comical, but at the moment, all he wanted was to be done. Soon, they were climbing, still running. The path they were on was steep. Every muscle in Littlefoot’s legs was burning, and Fyn didn’t look like he was feeling much better. They were higher up, now, and Littlefoot could see the Bright Circle rising. With its light, he could tell that the peak was still very far away. Suddenly, Fyn slipped. Labon whipped around sharply.

“Are you slipping, Fyn?” he yelled. “Slipping is a sign of weakness. You are weak! How can I expect to call you a son if you can’t even impress me?”

The comments obviously stung Fyn. Even Littlefoot was crushed. He’d known Labon for a long time, and he’d never heard him say anything with such hatred. He could see tears welling up in his friend’s eyes, but Fyn blinked before they could show, clearing them away. He would not show weakness. They kept climbing and running. To Littlefoot, it seemed like the peak wasn’t getting any closer, and now he was falling behind. Fyn didn’t notice; he was too exhausted, and all of his strength was focused on staying behind his father. Littlefoot glanced down at the Valley below. The Bright Circle had almost completely risen. His friends would be getting up soon and enjoying a peaceful day. He longed to be with them. Suddenly, there was a sharp pain in his chest. Breathing was getting difficult. Littlefoot collapsed.

Fyn heard him and rushed to his aid, but he wasn’t fast enough. Labon was right behind him, and he was madder than a Sharptooth in a hole in the ground, as the saying went.

“You completely disobeyed me!” he screamed, berating Littlefoot who was gasping on the ground. “Get up!” he yelled. Slowly, unsteadily, Littlefoot got to his feet.

“Don’t you ever show weakness to me again, do you understand?” Labon almost whispered. His face about a leaf’s width away from Littlefoot’s.

“Yes, Lab-”

“Do not call me that!” Labon roared. “From this moment until I say otherwise, both of you will address me as leader.” He turned to Fyn.

“I am stressing teamwork here!” he said, approaching his son. “You failed me, and you failed your friend by not helping him. A leader does not leave his comrades behind like you just did. You think you can get through today by yourself? I’d like to see you try!”

He backed up and addressed them both. “Today is going to be a long day for the two of you if you keep failing like this.” He began to pace. “Look behind you,” he said suddenly, without yelling.

The two turned around, looking down into the Valley. Labon continued talking from behind them.

“Everyone down there is going through a normal day. They will not experience the hardships or the challenges you will face today. Someday, maybe soon, many of them may have to rely on you for guidance. You cannot falter when leading them. After Starfall, should you make it that far...” he paused, “which you won’t, you will be a leader. If you fail, your herd fails. Now gaze behind you and upwards.”

Littlefoot and Fyn did as they were told. Above them was the top of the mountain, and Littlefoot could see now that it was a lot closer than he’d thought when he was running.

“You failed to meet my expectations, which means Starfall will continue all day. Rest assured, I never leave something unfinished. Before the day is over, you will complete this run, but for now, follow me.”
Labon started running back down the hill. Fyn and Littlefoot shared a glance and a tired sigh, then followed him. Today was going to be a very long day.

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Saurus Rock: Member Hall of Fame / Fanfiction Voting 2012
« on: August 08, 2012, 01:51:02 PM »
Title: Impossible Reach
Rating: 7.5/10

(Note: I would prefer if you did not count my rating unless it is beneficial. I really wanted to rate this story, but if my rating is lower than others, I feel it shouldn't count because I currently have entries here.)

Because: This was a very good read. The beginning lost a few points from me because it started off rather abruptly. I didn't really sense any sort of "lead in." However, after that, the story really picked up. I enjoyed your characterizations and the use of a new Sharptooth: the Spitter. I enjoy reading about and writing in new dinosaurs, since the prehistoric world was by no means limited to the creatures we see on the LBT movies. The character Harper was really well fleshed-out, too, instead of being put into the story for the sake of having an OC, as I've seen happen with fanfics all too many times before. Good prose, as well. There were a few parts where the characters' speech didn't seem "in character" (if that makes any sense) but they were few and far between. In short, this is one of the best fics I've read on this site.

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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 08, 2012, 12:49:02 PM »



Fyn returned to his nest, worn out from the day’s events. His mother was waiting for him. She looked up from her position, laying by his nest, when he arrived.

“Hello, son,” she said simply.

“Where’s Dad?” Littlefoot asked.

“Gone,” Keva answered, “preparing for tomorrow.”

“Am I really not allowed to know what’s going to happen tomorrow?” Fyn asked, settling into his small but comfortable nest. Keva shook her head.

“I wish I could tell you, but that would be breaking tradition. Just remember that your father still loves and respects you, no matter what he says or does tomorrow, and remember- he went through this, too.”

Fyn nodded, yawning. “I just wish I didn’t feel so nervous.”

“Everything will be fine,” Keva reassured him, “you’ll do wonderfully. Your father and I know.”

“I just wish I felt the same,” Fyn said.

“Do you remember when we had to journey back to the Great Valley without your father? Remember how tough that was? I almost gave up, but I kept my eye on the goal: getting to the Great Valley. You need to do the same. Make your father proud and become his deputy. That should be your goal.”

Fyn nodded. “I’ll remember that.”

“You’ll do fine,” Keva said, touching her muzzle to Fyn’s, “now sleep. Tomorrow is an important day.”

Keva stood and walked to her nest, leaving Fyn to sleep. He felt more reassured now, but he still couldn’t help but wonder what challenges were in store for him tomorrow.

...

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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 08, 2012, 12:24:19 PM »
...

It was now the last round of hide and seek, and once again, Fyn had found himself “it.” Littlefoot was currently hiding amidst a tangle of weeds, and was crouching low to avoid detection. So far, his plan had worked. Before long, Petrie had joined him as well. It seemed this was the perfect cover. Now they were huddled together, scarcely daring to blink as Fyn walked past, searching for them. Littlefoot was pleased with how stealthy he and his Flyer friend were being. So far, they’d drawn absolutely no attention to themselves. However, it seemed Fyn was hanging around the weeds often, and his presence was already unnerving Littlefoot.

“Come on,” he whispered ever so slightly through clenched teeth, “go somewhere else!”

As if he’d heard, Fyn finally turned and began to walk away. Littlefoot breathed a sigh of relief.

Then Petrie coughed.

Immediately, Fyn’s head snapped back around and he began to move back towards the weeds. Littlefoot glared at Petrie who simply grinned back nervously.

“Alright,” Fyn said, “I know someone’s in here.”

Nobody moved, but Petrie could feel another cough coming on. Littlefoot stifled it with a glance.

“Where are you guys?” Fyn mused, scanning the area. Unfortunately for the intrepid hiders, Petrie could not contain himself any longer. This time, he let out a tremendous sneeze, which was powerful enough to blast him straight out of his hiding place. Once Fyn saw him, he immediately knew Littlefoot’s location as well.

“Ah ha!” he said, “I’ve got you.”

Littlefoot stood, shaking the plants from his back and legs.

“Yes, you did. No thanks to Petrie here.”

He glared at Petrie in mock disappointment. Petrie laughed.

“I guess me just better at the ëseek’ part, even if me not seeking.”

His comment prompted laughter from Fyn, which brought everyone else out of hiding; the game was officially over.

“So what now?” Cera asked, glancing at the Bright Circle, which was at its highest point.

“Well,” Fyn said, recalling what his parents had told him the previous day, “my Star Day celebration won’t be until much later, so we’ve still got a bit of time left. What do you guys want to do?”
    No decisions were forthcoming; no one could concentrate. The day was growing warmer, and the heat was affecting everyone. It was that certain moment where no one really wants to do anything- where one becomes lazy and bored. No one spoke for a while, until Ducky voiced her opinion.
    “Why don’t we go to the Tree Sweet pond?” Ducky asked.
    Cera shrugged. “I’m fine with it. Anyone say otherwise?” No one challenged her.

“Then let’s go!” Ducky said, eagerly. “What are we waiting for?”

Slowly, the gang forced themselves to move, following Ducky, who was positively skipping with excitement. The Tree Sweet pond was her favorite place in the Great Valley, and, in all honesty, possibly everyone else’s as well. As they walked on, their excitement began to increase again. The unseasonably hot weather had almost robbed them of the realization that today was supposed to be fun- a day of celebration, and now they were going to what was quite possibly the most fun place in the Valley. Ducky continued to lead, bringing the gang down through a few very tightly-grouped trees  near the Smoking Mountain and over a few treacherously unstable rock paths. The way the Great Valley was arranged, with mountains and rocky walls enclosing everything within, it seemed a wonder that small, hidden places like the Tree Sweet pond could exist practically undiscovered, but one had merely to look at the path leading to it to discover why. When the gang had first discovered the place, they’d had a very difficult time getting to it. The path had been hidden and dangerous. Time had not been good to it, and now, despite the fact that all of the gang was older and much more coordinated, the path was even more risky. The prize at the end was worth the risk, however. As Ducky practically leaped through the last stand of trees between them and the pond, the area was revealed in all of its beautiful splendor.

Littlefoot was slack-jawed as always. It was hard not to be, despite having been here several times before. The Tree Sweet pond was a small alcove carved out of windswept rock in a corner of the Great Valley. Water flowed into the pond from a small waterfall, which poured directly out of the rock face and flowed down into the Valley as a small stream. Everywhere, one could see Tree Sweets of all sorts, hence the pond’s name. Coming here was a truly uplifting experience, and for a while, the gang just stared in silence. Then Ruby broke the spell.

“Well, come on! Let’s have some fun!”

Littlefoot, Spike, and Petrie immediately headed over to the Tree Sweets. Cera, Chomper, and Ducky headed for the pond to cool down. Ruby seemed interested in getting a closer look at a few of the Tree Sweets, eating a few but mostly observing with a keen interest. Fyn decided to sun himself on a large, flat rock near the pond. Once everyone had settled in, Ruby decided to speak, looking up from her specimens.

“Well, since we never really finished our talk about Star Days earlier, why don’t we finish it now?”

“What do you mean?” Littlefoot asked.

“Well, what do all of you do for your twelfth Star Day?”

Cera, after thinking hard, was the first to answer. “Well, like I said, Threehorns do something fun and challenging, like climb Threehorn Peak.”

“Oh yes, and Swimmers get to eat a special meal,” Ducky added. “I don’t know what Spike does, but I think it also has to do with eating.”

Spike mumbled and nodded, smiling, causing everyone to laugh.

“What about you, Chomper?” Fyn asked.

“Well, most Sharpteeth have their first hunt. They have to do it alone. It’s hard, but it shows they’re growing up.”

“You’re not planning on doing one of those here, are you?” Cera said, wincing.

“Of course not!” Chomper said in mock exasperation. “I would never do that!”

“Me try to fly as high as me can on twelfth Star Day,” Petrie stated, stretching his wings.

“My twelfth Star Day is coming up pretty soon,” Littlefoot said. “My dad’s supposed to come visit. Apparently he has plans for me.” Littlefoot turned to Fyn. “So what do other Fin-Necks do for this Star Day?”

Fyn shrugged, then spoke hesitantly. “I’m not really sure, but I did once hear about something called ëStarfall’.”

“Starfall?” Petrie said. “That sound kind of spooky!”

“I can’t imagine it would be,” Fyn said, “it’s part of the Star Day celebration, and that’s supposed to be fun!”

“Hm, I guess you right,” Petrie said, still not sounding entirely convinced.

“Still,” Cera said, speculating from her corner of the pond, “it is kind of interesting how Starfall follows Star Day. I’m sure there’s nothing to worry about, though.”

“Yeah, of course not,” Fyn agreed. Now, however, he was beginning to feel a bit apprehensive. What if Cera and Petrie were right? What if Starfall really wasn’t something nice?

“Well, whatever Starfall may be,” Littlefoot said, “be it fun or not, we’ll be here to stand by you.”

“Thanks, guys,” Fyn said, “you’re the best, but I’m sure there’s nothing to worry about.” He settled back down onto his rock. Fyn hadn’t even realized he’d been standing up throughout the whole conversation. He only stood unconsciously when he was nervous about something. Why was his next Star Day making him nervous? He shook the thought from his mind and tried to relax, but relaxation was difficult now.

For a while, the gang simply relaxed, only talking occasionally and enjoying the wonders of the Tree Sweet pond, until finally, they began to notice the Bright Circle falling.

“It’s getting late,” Chomper observed, “I guess we might want to start heading back.”

“I agree,” Fyn said, but before anyone could move, a voice sounded from out of the trees.

“Leave now? But the celebration’s just started!”

“What-?” Fyn looked towards the voice just as his parents stepped out of the trees.

“Happy Star Day, Fyn!” His mother stated.

“Twelve of them already,” his father said, smiling, “you’ve grown so much.”

“Thank you so much!” Fyn said, beaming. As he looked more closely at his parents, however, something unnerved him: his father’s smile. It seemed forced, and fake, and once again, Fyn’s mind went back to his previous thoughts of the mysterious “Starfall.”

“Everyone eat!” Keva said with a grin, pulling a massive pile of the best green food and Tree Sweets the Valley had to offer off of her back and dumping them in front of everyone. Fyn temporarily forgot about his worries. The food looked excellent. Fyn looked to his friends.

“Well? Let’s dig in!”

The adult Fin-Necks watched on with contented smiles as the young dinosaurs stuffed themselves on the delicious food. It wasn’t long before everything was gone. When the last Treestar was downed by Spike, Labon stepped forward to address Fyn.

“Fyn,” he said slowly, as if trying to find the right words to say, “doubtless by now, you understand just how important the twelfth Star Day is.”

Fyn nodded.

“Do you know the Fin-Neck custom for this ceremony?”

Fyn shook his head. “I do not.”

Labon tried smiling, but his smile quickly faded away. Now he was completely stone-faced. “Most Fin-Necks have the privilege of enjoying a day full of fun and exciting events-”

“Really?” Fyn interrupted, beaming.

“-But not all do,” Labon finished, talking over Fyn. “For some, a select few, there is a tradition known as Starfall.”

“Oh no,” Fyn thought, “here it comes.”

“Starfall is a rite of passage only undertaken by those about to accept the position of herd deputy.”

“But I thought I already was next in line,” Fyn said.

“By circumstance, yes. Officially, no. Fyn, you did an outstanding job leading the rest of the herd here seasons ago, and if I could make you deputy based solely on that reason, I would. Unfortunately, tradition stands that you must undergo Starfall before you become my deputy.”

“Alright then,” Fyn said, “but what exactly is Starfall? You make it sound like a bad thing.”

Labon sighed. “It’s certainly not a bad thing, but it will probably be one of the most challenging things you’ve done in your life up to this point.”

“What’s so challenging about it?”

“I can’t say. Just know that you will be mentally and physically tested. Starfall is essentially a day dedicated to the herd leader and the upcoming deputy. Its purpose is to determine if the deputy is ready for leadership.” Labon turned to Littlefoot, who was standing slightly behind Fyn.

“Your father asked me to address you on his behalf when we last met. His herd has a similar tradition, and he asked me if you could go through Starfall as well, since your twelfth Star Day will be soon. I told him I would ask for your consent first, and that if you agree, you can undergo Starfall with Fyn.”

Littlefoot and Fyn looked at each other. Together, something like this could be a lot easier. Littlefoot nodded to his friend, and the two turned to face Labon. The Fin-Neck spoke.

“Very well, we’ll start this, then. Fyn and Littlefoot, do you willfully agree to commence Starfall on the day following Fyn’s twelfth Star Day?”

“I agree,” they said together. The rest of the gang looked on in awe from behind. Everything had happened so suddenly, they could scarcely believe it.

“Then repeat after me,” Labon said. “I, state your name.”

“I, Fyn.”

“I, Littlefoot.”


“Do now agree to the rite of Starfall.”

“Do now agree to the rite of Starfall.”

“Knowing well that, should I fail.”

“Knowing well that, should I fail.”

“I will never be considered as deputy.”

“I will never be considered as deputy.”

“May my actions and behavior be honorable.”

“May my actions and behavior be honorable.”

“And may the Bright Circle guide me down this difficult path.”

“And may the Bright Circle guide me down this difficult path.”

Labon stopped. “That’s all there is. I cannot see either of you until tomorrow, so before I leave, these are my instructions: both of you are to meet me at the lakeside tomorrow before the Bright Circle rises. Heed my words. You must be together. And a bit of advice from someone who’s done this before: whatever happens tomorrow, don’t let it affect you. I will be a much different Longneck tomorrow than the one you see here today. Know that, and be ready. I will not lie. Tomorrow will not be easy for either of you. Stay strong, stay together, and stay committed to finishing Starfall. Goodnight to both of you.”

Labon turned and began to walk away. As Keva left, she spoke as well. “Good luck to both of you. I’ll see you later, Fyn.” Then she was gone, leaving the gang in silence. Littlefoot turned to Fyn.

“What did I just get myself into?”

Fyn shrugged. “I guess we’ll find out tomorrow.”

“Just stay tough, you two,” Cera said, stepping forward, her voice devoid of the usual sarcasm.

“We’ll all be rooting for you,” Chomper said quietly, and Spike went as far as to lick Littlefoot’s front leg, bringing a smile to the Longneck’s face.

“I’d guess we’d better get going, then,” Fyn said, “Littlefoot, we’ll meet at your nest tomorrow and walk to the lake together. It’s time for sleep now.” The others nodded, and they departed together. When they left the trees, they began to head back to their separate nests.  
Not a single word was spoken for the rest of the walk.

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The Party Room / Classify the member above's avatar
« on: August 08, 2012, 11:44:07 AM »
Quote from: vonboy,Aug 8 2012 on  10:42 AM
8/10

Very nice pic of your OC, Fyn. Did you draw that?
I did, yes.

9/10 for your Chomper avatar. The quote sealed it for me!

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Land Before Time Captions / Determined Sierra
« on: August 08, 2012, 09:57:49 AM »
Those kids may take our screen time, but they will never take...

OUR FREEDOM!!!

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The Party Room / Classify the member above's avatar
« on: August 08, 2012, 09:55:47 AM »
Quote from: Blais_13,Aug 8 2012 on  06:10 AM
6/10
Sorry,but I just can't tell what your avatar is....but the colors are kinda relaxing and you have nice text on it.
Cera+Devious Expression=Win. I give your avatar an 8/10

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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 08, 2012, 03:13:35 AM »
Not far away, Labon and Keva, Fyn’s parents, watched their son and his friends playing. Keva was smiling warmly, touched by the sight of the friends together. Labon, on the other hand, was observing the festivities with a grim, expressionless face. It wasn’t long before Keva noticed him.

“Labon,” she said, “is something on your mind?”

Labon didn’t answer, still closely watching his son.

“Labon,” Keva repeated, “what’s the matter?”

“Starfall,” Labon said evenly, without any trace of emotion. Keva’s eyes widened.

“My goodness,” she said, “I almost forgot about that. This is his twelfth Star Day, and he’s still in line as the next herd leader. That means his Starfall is coming.”

Labon nodded. “Soon. The day after his Star Day, in fact. Tomorrow.”

“Is he ready?” Keva asked, somewhat anxiously.

“Oh, I know he’s ready,” Labon said, “but it’s going to be hard... for both of us.”

Keva sighed, “I know Starfall is steeped in seasons of tradition, but this is the first time it’s been done father to son. Couldn’t it just be made a little-?”

“No, absolutely not,” Labon cut her off before she could finish her question. “Starfall never changes. I will abide by my duties, no matter who else is involved.” When he finished his statement, he looked up at Fyn, then back at the Great Wall- more specifically, at one of its highest mountain peaks. He regarded the peak cooly, narrowing his eyes to block out whatever sun he could to better see it. With Fyn’s consent, Starfall would happen, and when it did, he would truly find out if everything he’d said to Keva was true.

He turned back to the sight of his son and his friends, laughing and frollicking through the fertile, green fields.
“It’s best to let him just enjoy this special day first,” he decided, and he and Keva turned to walk back to the nest. Labon didn’t look back. He knew that any unnecessary attachment to his son at this point would only weaken his resolve and possibly jeapordize Starfall. For the rest of the day, he would have to challenge himself to remain neutral. His son’s future depended on it.

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The Welcome Center / I Have Returned!
« on: August 08, 2012, 02:42:51 AM »
Thanks again! Glad to be here!

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1988 Theatrical Release / Tell Your Story About LBT
« on: August 08, 2012, 02:30:54 AM »
I got into LBT at somewhere around age six. I'd never heard of it until then, and probably never would have if my mom hadn't seen it in the rental store and picked it up for me while I was sick. Watching it was pretty darn intense for me when I was a little guy. The death of Littlefoot's mother hit me pretty hard. However, I loved the movie and started watching the sequels like crazy. Like StrutEggStealer said, my favorite game was pretending I was a dinosaur, and I was always either Littlefoot or Chomper. I'd romp around the back yard, exploring the "Great Valley." Fun times. Eventually, I lost interest, but when my little brother was born and of the age when he could understand movies, I dug through my family's old VHS collection and found the original Land Before Time. He enjoyed it, and I watched it with him. Seeing it again reminded me of just how much of a well thought out and inspiring story it was. To that end, I started doing additional research into LBT, eventually going as far as to make an OC (Fyn, an Amargasaurus). After that, I figured it was my turn to contribute to the LBT community, so I started writing fanfiction, which I do to this day. It never gets old.

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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 07, 2012, 06:35:33 PM »
Part I: When the Stars Fall


Chapter 1: Star Day


As it did every day, the Bright Circle rose once again over the Great Valley, its rays of light catching the fast-disappearing dew on the grass. Slowly, it climbed, brightening as it seemed to scale the Great Wall itself, the wall of mountains that encircled and protected the Valley. As it moved along its ever-unchanging path, the Bright Circle ushered in the new day, and brought with it the sounds of awakening. A morning in the Great Valley was truly a spectacle for the eyes and ears. One could hear creatures of every kind stirring and calling to one another as they prepared to go about another peaceful day, and when they began to gather and spread throughout the Valley, one could truly appreciate the sight: so many diverse creatures all living together- eating together, drinking together, playing together- the sight was awe-inspiring, and did nothing if not stir the soul.

Joining the dinosaurs rising from slumber was Fyn, a Fin-Neck approaching his twelfth season. From his waking moment, Fyn was filled with anticipation. Today was to be his Star Day- a celebration which took place on the exact day of his birth each season. His father had hinted that something unique was in store for him during this particular Star Day, and Fyn could barely contain his excitement at finding out what it was.

As he rose up from his nest (which was definitely getting too small, he’d decided) Fyn greeted the new day with a sigh of complete happiness. Soon, so soon, he’d know exactly what his father would have in store for him. He shook and stretched, basking in the warm morning sun.

“Won’t be able to enjoy that for much longer,” he reminded himself, “the Cold Time’s coming soon.”

Deciding to let the rest of his family slumber on, Fyn decided to consider his options. His friends would be up soon, he knew. Littlefoot had a habit of going down to the lake early in the morning, and was probably there now. Or, for a change, he could visit Chomper and Ruby in their cave. As he tried to make up his mind, Fyn felt his stomach rumbling.

“On second thought,” he said aloud, talking to himself as he tended to do when he was excited about something, “maybe my decision can wait until after breakfast.”

Fyn lumbered off towards a stand of Treestar trees. Pausing at the base of one, he stretched upwards and snapped off a few of the succulent leaves, chewing them and savoring their sweet juices. There was truly no better way to wake up. As he chewed, his mind began to wander again, thinking of what else could possibly make this day better; it had already gotten off to a pretty good start, and as his mind wandered, he began to lose his awareness of his surroundings.

Which set him up perfectly for what was about to happen next.


...


The Threehorn stealthily peeked out of the bushes she was hiding behind. From where she was standing, Fyn looked completely oblivious. Perfect. She turned her head and motioned for someone behind her to come forward. Sure enough, a Swimmer took her place by the Threehorn’s side, also hidden. The Threehorn nodded, acknowledging her presence, then made a quick glance out of her hiding place and across to the trees where Fyn was standing. In hindsight, this really had been the perfect trap, and Fyn had fallen right into it. She peered into the trees next to Fyn. Soon.

High above, a Flyer was also circling, watching Fyn closely. This was his only task, and from his vantage point, he was good at it. When he felt Fyn was comfortably in place, he waved to the trees surrounding the Fin-Neck and nodded. Time to put the plan into action.

In the trees flanking Fyn, a Sharptooth, a Spiketail, and a Fastrunner all saw Petrie’s signal. Everything was clear. The Sharptooth tensed his muscles, ready to move. The entire plan rested on the only dinosaur left.

In the trees in front of Fyn, the Longneck remained frozen, scarcely daring to breathe. Surprise would be paramount here, and any movement might give away his position. He silently praised the trees’ thickness, as they covered him to the point that he could hold his face about a Fastrunner’s length away from Fyn’s without being seen. Looking over at the bushes, he saw the Threehorn nod. It was now or never. It was time to act.

Fyn, still waking up and oblivious as he was, had absolutely no idea what had hit him. The “attack” came from all sides with precision that would have shamed a Fast Biter pack. The Longneck burst out of the trees in front of Fyn first, catching him completely off guard and pushing him back toward the second surprise: the Threehorn and Swimmer who were standing behind him, while the Flyer swooped down from the side, and the Fastrunner, Sharptooth, and Spiketail all bounded in from the sides. At the same time, every dinosaur let out a hearty “happy Star Day, Fyn!” The attackers, of course, were his friends- Littlefoot the Longneck, Cera the Threehorn, Petrie the Flyer, Ducky the Swimmer, Spike the Spiketail, Chomper the Sharptooth, and lastly, Ruby the Fastrunner.  

Fyn shook his head in surprise. He certainly hadn’t expected this.

“Guys?” he asked, “what’s-?”

He stopped mid-sentence and smiled brightly. “Thanks, everyone. I wasn’t expecting such a nice greeting.”

“Well, it’s your twelfth Star Day,” said Littlefoot, “That’s a pretty important one.”

“It is,” said Ducky, “Remember Ruby’s twelfth Star Day last season?” The others nodded and smiled.

“That was something,” Cera said, “I can still remember walking the Great Wall. That was a fun day.”

“What do you think you’ll get to do, Fyn?” Ruby asked.

Fyn thought hard, squinting as he tried to concentrate, trying to recall if either of his parents had dropped any hints; they hadn’t.

“I really don’t know,” he said, “just that it’s going to be unlike anything I’ve ever done before.”

“That sound neat,” Petrie said, settling on a stump. “Maybe it a journey to some neat place.”

“Or perhaps you’ll get to meet someone important,” Ducky chimed in.

“Maybe your parents will just do a lot of really nice things for you,” Chomper added helpfully.

“If it was my twelfth Star Day,” Cera said in her usual superior tone, “I’d want to climb Threehorn peak.”

“Why?” Littlefoot asked.

“Why?” Cera asked, seemingly offended, “Why not? It’s a huge mountain that looks like a Threehorn! It’s perfect for me!”

“Good point,” Fyn said. Cera glared.

“I mean not in a bad way!” Fyn quickly added, attempting to save his hide.

“Everyone knows Threehorns are the strongest there are,” Cera continued. “I could do it.”

“I’m sure you could,” Ducky said, ending the conversation before it got out of hand. Fyn finished his morning meal and stared out into the Valley surrounding him.

“Honestly, I have no idea what’s going to happen later, but if it’s a surprise, then it’s a surprise. Let’s do something else so I can take my mind off of it. Anyone want to play a game?”

The suggestion was met with enthusiasm. “How about hide and seek?” Ruby offered.

“Sounds good to me,” Littlefoot said, “everyone else?”

Nods and murmurs of consent confirmed it. The game was about to begin.

“Alright, then,” Cera said, “since it’s Fyn’s Star Day, he’s ëit’.”

Before Fyn could open his mouth to speak, his friends were already gone, with Chomper calling “the lake’s the boundary. No farther than the lake!”
“Alright, then,” Fyn said, watching his friends quickly disappear. He turned his back, put his head to a tree trunk, closed his eyes, and started counting.

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LBT Fanfiction / Let Your Heart Guide You
« on: August 07, 2012, 06:33:14 PM »
Okay, actually, I've decided to break the chapters into more manageable parts. My other fanfics got pretty lengthy, and I enjoy posting frequently. I hate making people wait. This is my last interruption until the story's end. Read on and enjoy!

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The Welcome Center / I Have Returned!
« on: August 07, 2012, 06:24:15 PM »
Quote from: Mr Wonk,Aug 7 2012 on  03:50 PM
Anytime. I hope you don't get writer's block! :lol
I'm not planning on it. However, don't expect my chapters to be released quickly. Perhaps one a week. I don't get a ton of time to write, and my chapters are going to be long. My current one may not be released until sometime next week, but I feel it's going to be worth it.

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The Welcome Center / I Have Returned!
« on: August 07, 2012, 04:47:31 PM »
Cool, thanks!

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The Welcome Center / I Have Returned!
« on: August 07, 2012, 04:10:46 PM »
Quote from: LBTLover1,Aug 7 2012 on  09:11 AM
Fyn...welcome back...I'm glad you can get back on FanFiction.
Well, funny you should mention that. I just found out that I can't get on fanfiction unless at my "sponsor family's" house. I'll be able to go there on weekends starting at the end of August, and my first chapter probably won't be done until around that time anyway, though.

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LBT Audio Play Project / GOF voice actors
« on: August 07, 2012, 02:42:54 AM »
I would actually love to do a voice, but as far as young characters are concerned, I'm out. My voice is a bit too deep to consider being Littlefoot or any of the gang. Perhaps an adult, though...

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Brain Food / Trivia Tournament #4
« on: August 07, 2012, 02:39:46 AM »
Is this LBT trivia?

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