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LBT Fanfiction / A New Life
« on: October 10, 2015, 06:34:48 PM »
I decided to rewrite the story.
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I awoke with a terrible headache. But it wasn't my headache that I was focusing on. The time machine Doctor Valens had been working on actually worked. Not that I should be surprised, with his invention of real life lightsabers using diamonds as crystals, and laser rifles. But still, to be able to go back in time was surprising.
The idea was that I would go back in time, stay there, and wait for him to come get me. But honestly, I thought he just wanted to get rid of me. I was the one who most heavily questioned his rather...strange view of science and the world. I was glad to be gone.
Oh, I'm sorry, where are my manners? My name is Jack Alexander Grant. I was in my senior year of high school before someone framed me for stealing the school's money and I got expelled. Valens took me under his wing, but I never got used to his experiments.
I looked around my surroundings. Based on the flora and temperature, it seemed I was somewhere in the Dinosaur age. Cycads were everywhere, and the climate was hot and humid. I was the first human to come back here.
I was armed with a lightsaber, a backpack which contained all my personal stuff, including some of my favorite movies, games, and my computer. Now you might ask, why bring a computer to the prehistoric age where there was no power? Doctor Valens helped me with that. He created a battery that recycled energy so it never ran out. He said its what kept him from paying the electric bill.
As I moved, I could hear something nearby. What sounded like screeching, and screams of terror. I moved closer, and saw a small Tyrannosaurus, maybe only a few years old, running through the jungle, chased by a pterodactyl. I identified it as a Rhamphorynchus.
Wait...what?! A rhamphorynchus was from the Jurassic, and the T-rex from the Cretaceous, how did...? I sighed. It must be an alternate timeline.
At first, I thought about leaving the little creature to its fate, but my conscience got the better of me. With a roar, I leapt between the two. I activated the Lightsaber, its brilliant blue blade glowing. The Rhamphorynchus stopped, and tried to fly over me.
I swung upward, and cut the wing off the pterosaur. It howled in pain as it fell to the ground. It feebly tried to rise, but it would never fly again. With a sigh, I stabbed it in the heart, ending its suffering.
I turned, the little T-rex was looking up at me in awe. He was dark blue in color, with red eyes, and a white underbelly. "Thank you." He said. "Don't mention it-" I stopped. Did it just talk?!
"Can you repeat that?" I asked politely. "Um, thank you."
I fainted.
When I came to, I felt hot breath on my chest. When I opened my eyes, they got as big as dinner plates. A huge, forty three foot long yellow green Tyrannosaurus was sniffing me. "He saved me mom! He saved my from a sharpbeak!" The baby t-rex cried.
The Rex looked at her youngster, then at me. I was frozen, my hand on my Lightsaber just in case. The Rex lifted her head up. "Thank you for saving my son." The rex thanked. It was official, dinosaurs could talk.
"You're welcome mam!" I said politely. I was in a very bad situation right now. "I'm in your debt, you don't need to act so afraid of me." The T-rex said kindly. I began to relax a little. "What is your name?" The baby asked.
"Uh, Jack." I replied. I still was trying to wrap my head around the fact dinosaurs could freaking talk. "Nice to meet you Jack, I'm Chomper."
"My name is Tyra." The mother stated. "Pleased to make your acquaintance." I replied. "My mate, Bladeclaw, should be back soon, you're welcome to stay with us if you want." Tyra offered.
"Sure, thank you."
Over the next few days, I spent a lot of time with Chomper's family. To be honest, they were pretty nice, well, as nice as two adult T-rexes could be. I found out they lived on an island, and that there were only small sources of food. I even discovered they had an egg that would hatch any day now.
I found at they lived mainly on fish in the rivers of the island, and decided to try a diet of fish as well/ Chomper also showed me where good fruit grew. I actually began to feel at home there.
It was calm, peaceful. No school, no grades, no Valens, just a simple life. Me and Chomper grew quite close over that time. "So you're from the future or something?" He asked. I nodded. "What are the dinosaurs like there? Are sharpteeth and flatteeth friends?"
Suddenly, a roar was heard. "That's not my daddy." Chomper said. A second roar sounded. "That's my mom!" Chomper recognized.
"It sounds like a fight! Stay here!" I ordered. Chomper obeyed, and I ran off to help Chomper's parents.
When I got there, I saw Tyra and Bladeclaw battling a grey T-rex and three utahraptors. Suddenly, the grey T-rex grabbed Tyra by the neck and threw her into a tree. "Tyra!" I cried. A raptor noticed me, and leapt into the air.
I slashed at it, cutting through its stomach. With a cry of pain, it died. That allowed me to get slashed on my left eye by another raptor. I punched it in the jaw, and ran to help Bladeclaw. Then the impossible happened.
The Grey T-rex grabbed Bladeclaw, and bit down hard on the neck. I knew it was over. Tyra roared in rage, and attacked. But the raptors hit her in the neck, and the T-rex bit into her skull. She fell to the ground.
No. No! NO! I let out a cry of anguish. The T-rex family who took me in, was gone. But I could still save their egg! With renewed determination, I knocked a raptor out of my way by slashing at its side.
The T-rex lunged down. I swung my lightsaber. He roared in rage as the Lightsaber made contact with his scales. He ran off in pain. The raptors followed. Finally they were gone. I deactivated my lightsaber, and dropped to the ground.
We were no longer safe here. That monster had killed my new family! Then I rememberd the egg. And Chomper. He was my responsibility now. I wouldn't abandon him.
I walked off to break the news to the little t-rex. "Jack?" He asked, then he cringed. I saw a puddle of water nearby. I looked into it. A scar ran down my eye. A scar similar to that T-rex's.
"Where are my mommy and daddy?" He asked. I looked at him. He was so young, so full of innocence. I could hardly tell him the news. "I couldn't save them." I choked out. He looked at me in shock.
Then he let out a cry of anguish. I walked over, and hugged him. He sobbed. He cried. I felt like doing the same. But I had to stay strong for his sake. "We can't stay here." I decided.
"Come on, lets go."
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After gathering all my things, we began to leave the island. A land path luckily connected us to the mainland. After a long hour of walking across it, we got to the beach. The trip was a silent one. Usually, me and Chomper talked all the time. But we couldn't think of anything to say.
When we got to the mainland, the two of us began to head inland. Apparently, Chomper had some friends in a place called the "Great Valley", so we decided to go there. As we moved, I kept thinking about that horrible T-rex. That monster.
I would avenge Tyra and Bladeclaw. One day.
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Chomper and I sat in the tent after a long day of walking. Chomper was still visibly shaken by the loss of his parents. "They were always there for me. They saved me and my friends from sharpteeth and eggstealers once." He said sadly.
"I lost my parents in an accident before I left high school." I replied. "But like you said, they were always there."
"Always there, someone you can count on to comfort you." Chomper sang quietly. I put a hand on his shoulder. "I'll always be here for you, don't worry." I said. "Thanks." Chomper replied. "You know, you and one of my other friends are the closest things to brothers I've ever had."
I stopped. Brother? I always wanted a little brother. I guess I had found one. I let out a small sigh. We had been through so much today. We had lost so much.
"Chomper, one day, we will avenge your parents." I vowed. Chomper smiled a little. "Tommorow, we'll go to this valley of yours, and hopefully live away from that monster."
As we lay there I thought of a song that I loved.
I am a question to the world
Not an answer to be heard
Or a moment that's held in your arms
And what do you think you'd ever say
I won't listen anyway
You don't know me
And I'll never be what you want me to be
Chomper looked at me for a minute, before starting to hum along.
And what do you think you'd understand
I'm a boy - No, I'm a man
You can't take me and throw me away
And how can you learn what's never shown
Yeah you stand here on your own
They don't know me
'Cause I'm not here
And I want a moment to be real
Wanna touch things I don't feel
Wanna hold on and feel I belong
And how can the world want me to change
They're the ones that stay the same
They don't know me
'Cause I'm not here
And you see the things they never see
All you wanted I could be
Now you know me and I'm not afraid
And I wanna tell you who I am
Can you help me be a man
They can't break me
As long as I know who I am
And I want a moment to be real
Wanna touch things I don't feel
Wanna hold on and feel I belong
And how can the world want me to change
They're the ones that stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
They can't tell me who to be
'Cause I'm not what they see
Yeah, the world is still sleepin'
While I keep on dreamin' for me
And their words are just whispers and lies
That I'll never believe
Chomper joined in.
And I want a moment to be real
Wanna touch things I don't feel
Wanna hold on and feel I belong
And how can they say I'll never change
They're the ones that stay the same
I'm the one now
'Cause I'm still here
I'm the one
'Cause I'm still here
I'm still here
I'm still here
I'm still here
After that, Chomper asked if I had anymore songs.
I set the song "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" to play on my computer.
It was true, the both of us were alone, but we were still here.
The next morning, we continued our trek. However, I was a bit nervous that the valely would accept us, especially since one of us would be an animal they never seen and the other was a predator.
As we moved, however, I got the sense we were being watched. When we finally came within sight of the valley, I ordered Chomper to head over there, while I confronted whatever was following us.
"I'm not leaving you!" Chomper declared resolutley. "Don't worry, I'll be fine, just go!" I ordered. I could see in his eyes he thought he would lose another. "I promise, I'll be fine." I said as I headed off.
As I moved, I suddenly screaming, Chomper was among them.
No.
No!
NO!
I ran at full speed, and activated my Lightsaber. I saw one of the raptors from before chasing a group of young dinosaurs, Chomper among them. Just as the Raptor was upon them, I slammed into the raptor. I tackled it to the ground.
"Run for it, I'll keep him busy!" I cried. The raptor got up, and upon recognizing me, it's eyes went red with rage. "Its me you want you son of a bitch!" I snarled. Suddenly, a series of roars and screeches were heard.
That T-rex and another raptor had found us. I ran to the kids, and got between them and the predators. "Stay behind me!" I ordered.
The Rex closed in. "When I give the order run." I whispered. "What?" Chomper squeaked. "I'll hold them off, just run!" I repeated. "No!" Chomper said. "Get him out of here!" I cried, and to my surprise, the herbivores followed my instructions, and ran. "Jack! No!" Chomper yelled.
One of the raptors lunged, and I slammed my saber into its chest. Then I cut through its comrade. That left just me and the rex. Suddenly, a rock hit the T-rex. I looked up. The kids were rolling rocks at the T-rex.
With renewed determination, I charged at the Rex. I slashed at his claws, which brought the scar all the way to his claws. The Rex roared in pain. Then at his feet, then at his stomach.
Then I hit him square in the leg. The attack caused him to lose his footing, and he rolled down the hill.
When he got up, he let out a roar of rage. I panted under my breath. It was over.
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I awoke with a terrible headache. But it wasn't my headache that I was focusing on. The time machine Doctor Valens had been working on actually worked. Not that I should be surprised, with his invention of real life lightsabers using diamonds as crystals, and laser rifles. But still, to be able to go back in time was surprising.
The idea was that I would go back in time, stay there, and wait for him to come get me. But honestly, I thought he just wanted to get rid of me. I was the one who most heavily questioned his rather...strange view of science and the world. I was glad to be gone.
Oh, I'm sorry, where are my manners? My name is Jack Alexander Grant. I was in my senior year of high school before someone framed me for stealing the school's money and I got expelled. Valens took me under his wing, but I never got used to his experiments.
I looked around my surroundings. Based on the flora and temperature, it seemed I was somewhere in the Dinosaur age. Cycads were everywhere, and the climate was hot and humid. I was the first human to come back here.
I was armed with a lightsaber, a backpack which contained all my personal stuff, including some of my favorite movies, games, and my computer. Now you might ask, why bring a computer to the prehistoric age where there was no power? Doctor Valens helped me with that. He created a battery that recycled energy so it never ran out. He said its what kept him from paying the electric bill.
As I moved, I could hear something nearby. What sounded like screeching, and screams of terror. I moved closer, and saw a small Tyrannosaurus, maybe only a few years old, running through the jungle, chased by a pterodactyl. I identified it as a Rhamphorynchus.
Wait...what?! A rhamphorynchus was from the Jurassic, and the T-rex from the Cretaceous, how did...? I sighed. It must be an alternate timeline.
At first, I thought about leaving the little creature to its fate, but my conscience got the better of me. With a roar, I leapt between the two. I activated the Lightsaber, its brilliant blue blade glowing. The Rhamphorynchus stopped, and tried to fly over me.
I swung upward, and cut the wing off the pterosaur. It howled in pain as it fell to the ground. It feebly tried to rise, but it would never fly again. With a sigh, I stabbed it in the heart, ending its suffering.
I turned, the little T-rex was looking up at me in awe. He was dark blue in color, with red eyes, and a white underbelly. "Thank you." He said. "Don't mention it-" I stopped. Did it just talk?!
"Can you repeat that?" I asked politely. "Um, thank you."
I fainted.
When I came to, I felt hot breath on my chest. When I opened my eyes, they got as big as dinner plates. A huge, forty three foot long yellow green Tyrannosaurus was sniffing me. "He saved me mom! He saved my from a sharpbeak!" The baby t-rex cried.
The Rex looked at her youngster, then at me. I was frozen, my hand on my Lightsaber just in case. The Rex lifted her head up. "Thank you for saving my son." The rex thanked. It was official, dinosaurs could talk.
"You're welcome mam!" I said politely. I was in a very bad situation right now. "I'm in your debt, you don't need to act so afraid of me." The T-rex said kindly. I began to relax a little. "What is your name?" The baby asked.
"Uh, Jack." I replied. I still was trying to wrap my head around the fact dinosaurs could freaking talk. "Nice to meet you Jack, I'm Chomper."
"My name is Tyra." The mother stated. "Pleased to make your acquaintance." I replied. "My mate, Bladeclaw, should be back soon, you're welcome to stay with us if you want." Tyra offered.
"Sure, thank you."
Over the next few days, I spent a lot of time with Chomper's family. To be honest, they were pretty nice, well, as nice as two adult T-rexes could be. I found out they lived on an island, and that there were only small sources of food. I even discovered they had an egg that would hatch any day now.
I found at they lived mainly on fish in the rivers of the island, and decided to try a diet of fish as well/ Chomper also showed me where good fruit grew. I actually began to feel at home there.
It was calm, peaceful. No school, no grades, no Valens, just a simple life. Me and Chomper grew quite close over that time. "So you're from the future or something?" He asked. I nodded. "What are the dinosaurs like there? Are sharpteeth and flatteeth friends?"
Suddenly, a roar was heard. "That's not my daddy." Chomper said. A second roar sounded. "That's my mom!" Chomper recognized.
"It sounds like a fight! Stay here!" I ordered. Chomper obeyed, and I ran off to help Chomper's parents.
When I got there, I saw Tyra and Bladeclaw battling a grey T-rex and three utahraptors. Suddenly, the grey T-rex grabbed Tyra by the neck and threw her into a tree. "Tyra!" I cried. A raptor noticed me, and leapt into the air.
I slashed at it, cutting through its stomach. With a cry of pain, it died. That allowed me to get slashed on my left eye by another raptor. I punched it in the jaw, and ran to help Bladeclaw. Then the impossible happened.
The Grey T-rex grabbed Bladeclaw, and bit down hard on the neck. I knew it was over. Tyra roared in rage, and attacked. But the raptors hit her in the neck, and the T-rex bit into her skull. She fell to the ground.
No. No! NO! I let out a cry of anguish. The T-rex family who took me in, was gone. But I could still save their egg! With renewed determination, I knocked a raptor out of my way by slashing at its side.
The T-rex lunged down. I swung my lightsaber. He roared in rage as the Lightsaber made contact with his scales. He ran off in pain. The raptors followed. Finally they were gone. I deactivated my lightsaber, and dropped to the ground.
We were no longer safe here. That monster had killed my new family! Then I rememberd the egg. And Chomper. He was my responsibility now. I wouldn't abandon him.
I walked off to break the news to the little t-rex. "Jack?" He asked, then he cringed. I saw a puddle of water nearby. I looked into it. A scar ran down my eye. A scar similar to that T-rex's.
"Where are my mommy and daddy?" He asked. I looked at him. He was so young, so full of innocence. I could hardly tell him the news. "I couldn't save them." I choked out. He looked at me in shock.
Then he let out a cry of anguish. I walked over, and hugged him. He sobbed. He cried. I felt like doing the same. But I had to stay strong for his sake. "We can't stay here." I decided.
"Come on, lets go."
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After gathering all my things, we began to leave the island. A land path luckily connected us to the mainland. After a long hour of walking across it, we got to the beach. The trip was a silent one. Usually, me and Chomper talked all the time. But we couldn't think of anything to say.
When we got to the mainland, the two of us began to head inland. Apparently, Chomper had some friends in a place called the "Great Valley", so we decided to go there. As we moved, I kept thinking about that horrible T-rex. That monster.
I would avenge Tyra and Bladeclaw. One day.
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Chomper and I sat in the tent after a long day of walking. Chomper was still visibly shaken by the loss of his parents. "They were always there for me. They saved me and my friends from sharpteeth and eggstealers once." He said sadly.
"I lost my parents in an accident before I left high school." I replied. "But like you said, they were always there."
"Always there, someone you can count on to comfort you." Chomper sang quietly. I put a hand on his shoulder. "I'll always be here for you, don't worry." I said. "Thanks." Chomper replied. "You know, you and one of my other friends are the closest things to brothers I've ever had."
I stopped. Brother? I always wanted a little brother. I guess I had found one. I let out a small sigh. We had been through so much today. We had lost so much.
"Chomper, one day, we will avenge your parents." I vowed. Chomper smiled a little. "Tommorow, we'll go to this valley of yours, and hopefully live away from that monster."
As we lay there I thought of a song that I loved.
I am a question to the world
Not an answer to be heard
Or a moment that's held in your arms
And what do you think you'd ever say
I won't listen anyway
You don't know me
And I'll never be what you want me to be
Chomper looked at me for a minute, before starting to hum along.
And what do you think you'd understand
I'm a boy - No, I'm a man
You can't take me and throw me away
And how can you learn what's never shown
Yeah you stand here on your own
They don't know me
'Cause I'm not here
And I want a moment to be real
Wanna touch things I don't feel
Wanna hold on and feel I belong
And how can the world want me to change
They're the ones that stay the same
They don't know me
'Cause I'm not here
And you see the things they never see
All you wanted I could be
Now you know me and I'm not afraid
And I wanna tell you who I am
Can you help me be a man
They can't break me
As long as I know who I am
And I want a moment to be real
Wanna touch things I don't feel
Wanna hold on and feel I belong
And how can the world want me to change
They're the ones that stay the same
They can't see me
But I'm still here
They can't tell me who to be
'Cause I'm not what they see
Yeah, the world is still sleepin'
While I keep on dreamin' for me
And their words are just whispers and lies
That I'll never believe
Chomper joined in.
And I want a moment to be real
Wanna touch things I don't feel
Wanna hold on and feel I belong
And how can they say I'll never change
They're the ones that stay the same
I'm the one now
'Cause I'm still here
I'm the one
'Cause I'm still here
I'm still here
I'm still here
I'm still here
After that, Chomper asked if I had anymore songs.
I set the song "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" to play on my computer.
It was true, the both of us were alone, but we were still here.
The next morning, we continued our trek. However, I was a bit nervous that the valely would accept us, especially since one of us would be an animal they never seen and the other was a predator.
As we moved, however, I got the sense we were being watched. When we finally came within sight of the valley, I ordered Chomper to head over there, while I confronted whatever was following us.
"I'm not leaving you!" Chomper declared resolutley. "Don't worry, I'll be fine, just go!" I ordered. I could see in his eyes he thought he would lose another. "I promise, I'll be fine." I said as I headed off.
As I moved, I suddenly screaming, Chomper was among them.
No.
No!
NO!
I ran at full speed, and activated my Lightsaber. I saw one of the raptors from before chasing a group of young dinosaurs, Chomper among them. Just as the Raptor was upon them, I slammed into the raptor. I tackled it to the ground.
"Run for it, I'll keep him busy!" I cried. The raptor got up, and upon recognizing me, it's eyes went red with rage. "Its me you want you son of a bitch!" I snarled. Suddenly, a series of roars and screeches were heard.
That T-rex and another raptor had found us. I ran to the kids, and got between them and the predators. "Stay behind me!" I ordered.
The Rex closed in. "When I give the order run." I whispered. "What?" Chomper squeaked. "I'll hold them off, just run!" I repeated. "No!" Chomper said. "Get him out of here!" I cried, and to my surprise, the herbivores followed my instructions, and ran. "Jack! No!" Chomper yelled.
One of the raptors lunged, and I slammed my saber into its chest. Then I cut through its comrade. That left just me and the rex. Suddenly, a rock hit the T-rex. I looked up. The kids were rolling rocks at the T-rex.
With renewed determination, I charged at the Rex. I slashed at his claws, which brought the scar all the way to his claws. The Rex roared in pain. Then at his feet, then at his stomach.
Then I hit him square in the leg. The attack caused him to lose his footing, and he rolled down the hill.
When he got up, he let out a roar of rage. I panted under my breath. It was over.