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LBT Fanfiction / All In The Family(for the 2013 Fanfiction Awards)
« on: August 14, 2013, 08:25:23 AM »
CHAPTER 1

RETURN MISSION

The starship U. I. S. V. Enterprise made its approach to the planet Terra. They had literally travelled thousands of light years to reach the planet. They had departed from their last mission, which was some exploration in the Alpha Centauri district, when they received their orders from Space Fleet Command. Thanks to their Ultra Light Speed technology, the journey here took only three days, while it would’ve taken years with conventional light speed.

“Standard orbit, Mr. Chang!” Captain Jarrok Tiburon Kirkland ordered from his seat in the Captain’s chair.

“Aye, sir!” said the Senior Tactical Officer from his post as he executed the command.

“Mr. Koralenko, put us in synchronous orbit over the Great Valley area.” the Captain then ordered.

“Aye, sair!” said the Navigator with his native Prussalian accent as he executed the command.

He then opened up the log recorder he had in his hands and stated the following. “Captain’s Log, Interstellar date 10119.9.23. It has been three years to the day since we last left orbit from Terra. We are here in relief of the U. I. S. V. Aries, which departed from here yesterday. Our mission is to continue with the observation of the primitive Saurians still thriving on the planet, until further orders.” He then closed the log recorder.

After a few moments, he had an afterthought and reopened the log recorder. “Personal note: It is not my place to question the orders of Space Fleet Command, but I’m beginning to find that this constant observation mission we’re committed on to be a bit redundant. These primitive Saurians obviously pose no threat to Rainbow Faces, Vulkadians, or any other space faring species who are members of the Federation. My big question is: What does Space Fleet hope to accomplish with this? Kirkland out.”

As soon as he closed the log recorder, the sliding doors to the turbo lift swished open to reveal Mr. Kark, the Vulkadian Chief Science Officer assigned to the U. I. S. V. Enterprise. He was a deep red colored sentient Draconian, who was eight feet tall and had a tail that was equally as long to balance his large frame.

“Captainó” he began as he approached the Captain’s chair.

“Mr. Kark.” Captain Kirkland interrupted as he turned around to face him. The Captain’s chair was on a swivel that could turn around three hundred and sixty degrees, if need be. “Since we’ll be in orbit here until further notice, I’d like you to conduct a scientific study of the planet’s society. You can ask the Lieutenants Riggs to help you with this, since they’re now Senior grade Science Officers under your command, and they’re the ones on this ship who are most familiar with this planet’s inhabitants.” Kirkland smiled.

“Yes, Captain.” Mr. Kark simply said as he left to go to his Science station.

“Oh!” he said as he turned to face the Captain, remembering something he wanted to tell his friend and ranking officer. “By the way, your wife wishes to see you.”

“Really?” Kirkland asked.

Kark simply nodded.

“Were you in the arboretum just now?”

“I was.”

“Why, Mr. Kark! I never pegged you for being a botanist.”

“My father was a breeder of prized Vulkadian orchids, so I was raised around gardens and arboretums from early childhood. I find the opportunity to spend time there to be very.... relaxing. Your wife doesn’t seem to mind my presence there, in any case.”

Kirkland smiled at his friend. Every day, he learned something new about his Vulkadian friend, like he did just now. “All right! ” he said as he got up out of his chair. “You have the ëcom while I go see what missus Kirkland wants.” He then disappeared into the turbo lift as it opened and then closed for him.

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The Enterprise’s arboretum was a landmark experiment. It was established thanks to some lobbying by Jenna Foster Kirkland, Captain Kirkland’s wife. She had convinced the Federation Council and the higher ranking Admirals at Space Fleet Command that a starship arboretum would be beneficial, especially on long space missions. It would allow a ship’s crew to grow its own food, and not have to rely on replicators all of the time. It could also provide some recreation for those whose hobby or profession is botany and gardening. Finally, the experiment was approved. The Enterprise was chosen, not only because Jenna would be the Head Botanist in charge and she was the Captain’s wife, but also because the Enterprise was the flag ship of the Federation, and they had to portray an image of innovation.

Jenna was hard at work planting some new flowers when she heard the swish of the automatic doors open behind her. She turned to look and saw her husband enter. She smiled to him. “Jarrok!”

Kirkland smiled back at her as the doors swished closed behind him. Jenna removed her gardener’s gloves and soil stained apron and laid them on a nearby table before sidling up to her husband.

“You wanted to see me?” Kirkland asked as he took Jenna in his arms.

She giggled. “Does a wife need an excuse to see her husband?”

“Sorry. Force of habit.” Kirkland said softly. Then they both shared a few kisses.

“Have we arrived in orbit around Terra?” Jenna asked as they both started swaying back and forth together, like they often did when they held each other in this way. “I felt the ship drop out of Ultra Light Speed.”

“We’ve arrived.” Kirkland admitted.

“So this is where those Saurian kids you’ve met three years ago live.”

“It is. Though they’re probably not ëkids’ anymore. Saurians tend to grow up fast, and it has been three years.”

“Well, I’d like to meet them, if I can... Do you think that would be possible?”

Kirkland shrugged. “Who knows?” They then shared a few more kisses.

“I love you!” Jenna said.

“I love you, too.” Kirkland reciprocated.

“There’s something else you should know.”

“What?”

She hesitated. “I’m pregnant.”

Kirkland’s eyes grew wide in surprise. “Pregnant!!?”

Jenna nodded.

“Are you sure!!?”

“I can feel the egg inside me.” She said as she unconsciously rubbed her belly. “I only found out this morning.”

For a few moments, Kirkland was speechless. Then he smiled brightly as he grasped his wife by the shoulders. “Why... by the Primal Force, that’s great news... fantastic news, even! Dear, dear! There’s so much we have to do! We’ve... we’ve gotta build a nursery, find bigger quarters, andó”

Jenna interrupted him with a giggle. “Relax, Captain! We still have a few months to go before I lay the egg. There’s plenty of time for that!”

“You’re right, you’re right... How silly of me.” Kirkland was unconsciously hopping from one foot to the other in a mixture of excitement and nervousness. “Pregnant!... Wow!... I...” He shared a few more kisses with his wife. “I love you, dear!”

Jenna smiled up at her mate. Of all the males she knew, he was the most... unique. She was never able to fully predict what he would do next, which was probably why she loved him. “I should get back to work.” she said to him.

“Work... Yes! And I... I should get back to the Bridge.” He finally tore himself away from his wife and headed towards the exit. “Take it easy, ok!? Pregnant...” he muttered as he walked out of the room. Jenna just smiled and shook her head as she put on the gloves and apron and went back to potting her plants.

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Kirkland regained his composure by the time he emerged from the turbo lift. He knew he had to maintain his tough exterior image in front of the crew; while inside, he felt like celebrating and worrying at the same time. He saw Kark at his Science Station’s scanner, working away at analysing data the ship sensors was already getting for him. Kirkland approached him from behind.

He cleared his throat before speaking. “Mr. Kark.” the big Vulkadian turned to face him. “I’d like to arrange a meeting in the conference room in a half an hour. Get both Lieutenants Riggs join us.”

Kark nodded. “Very well, Captain.” Kark saw that there was something else on his friend’s mind. “Something else, Jarrok?”

Kirkland was a bit surprised at hearing the logical and formal Vulkadian call him by his first name rather than by his rank. He had tried for the longest while to get Kark to loosen up a bit more. Kirkland felt he was making some progress, if Kark was going to start referring him by his first name every once in a while.

Jarrok moved to the other side of Kark, and spoke softly so no one else could hear him. “Jenna just told me that she’s pregnant.”

Lieutenant Urbina, the Communications Officer sitting nearby, reacted to the word “pregnant”, but wasn’t sure if she heard correctly. She decided to let it slide for the time being and went back to monitoring her work station.

Kark simply raised his eyebrows in his own expression of surprise. “Indeed. Most interesting.”

Jarrok was rubbing his hands nervously. “I’ve never been a father before... I don’t know if I’ll even be a good father... I... I don’t know what to do.”

“Jarrok, please restrain your emotionalism!” Kark practically begged. “Many males do not look forward to the prospect of fatherhood. Unfortunately, there is no formal training one can take to become a good parent. Children do not come with instruction manuals, and no amount of advice can make you better at it. You’ll just have to... ëwing’ it.” Kark unconsciously flapped his bat-like wings slightly.

Jarrok smiled and nodded. “You’re right, Kark... how foolish of me.”

Kark nodded in turn. “I’m curious, though: Since, in your words, we are ëlike brothers’, does this mean that I will be your child’s ëuncle’?”

Jarrok chuckled lightly. “Carry on.” he said as he went to take his seat in the Captain’s chair, while Kark opened the ship’s intercom to Lieutenants Briank and Yolanda Riggs’ quarters.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Alternate Factor
« on: July 29, 2012, 09:09:04 AM »
And here's  the other:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5552141/1/The_Alternate_Factor

P.S. - I hope I did this right.

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LBT Fanfiction / Time Of Great Need revised
« on: July 29, 2012, 09:07:41 AM »
As per Mumbling, I'm putting up the links here for the two fanfictions I wrote for the contest.

Here's one:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7608452/1/Time...at_Need_revised

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LBT Fanfiction / New story
« on: December 05, 2011, 10:56:38 PM »
Wow! It's been a long time since I've been here!

Just to let you know that myself and "The Chronicler" have put up the first chapter of our third corroborative story: All In The Family on fanfiction.net.

Anybody interested in reading it can go here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7608427/1/All_In_The_Family

Enjoy!

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LBT Fanfiction / It's completed...
« on: April 10, 2010, 10:18:03 AM »
For those of you who are interested: My latest fanfic "Knight In Time: Return To The Great Valley" is now complete... Just look for it on fanfiction.net.

Don't when the sequel will be completed, though... But I'll let ya'll know.  :smile

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LBT Fanfiction / Latest fanfic...
« on: March 27, 2010, 10:01:47 AM »
Here's the link to my latest fanfic, an LBT crossover with the original Knight Rider; and it's the sequel to my two previous ones: Accidental Time Travelers and Knight In Time.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5819057/1/Knig...he_Great_Valley

It's about half way finished right now. Just a warning: Chapter 5 is really long. Make sure you have plenty of time to read it(and maybe a cup of coffee while you're at it).

I plan to maybe do a sequel to this one. I just have bits and pieces of it right now, but I don't know if it'll be viable... It may even be too controvertial... I don't know.

Anyway, just read what I've got so far.

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LBT Fanfiction / Pterano the Baptist...
« on: February 07, 2010, 02:39:39 PM »
WARNING: RELIGIOUS SUBJECT MATTER FOLLOWS....









































































Being a Catholic, and having it been brought up in a Catholic family, it was a tradition around Easter time, in my household, that the entire family gathers around the TV to watch The Ten Commandments, Ben Hur(in the last few years); but most importantly, the mini series Jesus of Nazareth.

In my opinion, this is the best retelling of The Holy Gospel story ever done.

But where I'm getting at here is that, in case you didn't know, Michael York, the actor who voiced Pterano in The Stone of Cold Fire, also played the part of John the Baptist in that epic movie.

I never realized it until a short time ago. Thinking back on my childhood, and those times I watched Jesus of Nazareth with my family, it wasn't long before I put two and two together; and it was like I hit a brick wall: THAT WAS HIM???

It's amazing to me how much the two characters are alike! Both are vibrant and fiery, both inspire followers to their cause- although being on opposite sides of the scale; Pterano being up to no good, while John the Baptist only had the best of intentions- both were persecuted for what they believed in, and both were eventually "punished" for the "wrongs" they did by the ruling governments. Only difference is: While the ruling Roman government in the time of John the Baptist was corrupt and evil, Pterano himself was corrupt and evil in The Stone of Cold Fire.

I only think about this now because Ash Wednesday is coming up in a little over two weeks, which marks the beginning of Lent. But I'm not here to preach to the masses. You believe what you want to believe, and I'll believe what I want to believe.

As a lot of you know, I'm always looking for new ideas to put down into a story. As I thought about this parallel between two of Michael York's characters, the idea came to me about eventually writing a story where Little Foot could be a sort of Jesus Chirst, or "Messiah", to The Great Valley; and Pterano could fill the role of John the Baptist in that universe. I only have bits and pieces in mind right now. Not enough to make a whole story. I know even less how soon I'll begin writing it. I'm still working on my LBT/original Knight Rider crossover. But if ever write this story, I'll let you know. :smile

In the meantime, I'd like have your own opinions of what you think about this. Would you read a story like this, or would it be too touchy a subject matter, as religion so often is among strangers?

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LBT Fanfiction / New story...
« on: January 31, 2010, 05:10:39 PM »
Hey all!

Just to let you know that I've put up a new story on fanfiction.net.

It's a crossover story with the original Knight Rider, and it's the sequel to my first story: Accidental Time Travelers...

I find it's pretty good so far... I hope you think so, too!  :smile

I'm not sure where i can go from there. I already have an idea, but I'm not sure if it'll be good enough. I'm open to some of your ideas, though.

Click on the link below to read:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5685486/1/

Peace and long life!
Live long and prosper!

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LBT Fanfiction / Another complete story...
« on: December 30, 2009, 12:23:05 AM »
My latest effort is finally done!  :DD

Just follow the link below and read through the chapters from there.

And most of all... Enjoy!  :DD

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5552141/2/The_Alternate_Factor


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LBT Fanfiction / New story: Preface & Chapter 1
« on: December 02, 2009, 12:03:33 PM »
The start of my latest effort.  :DD

There's not much there now, but I'll add new stuff as I go.

I'll try and get this done before Christmas.

After that, I have another story in mind which I should start working in in the new year.

Go here to read:  :DD

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5552141/1/

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LBT Fanfiction / Story done...
« on: November 16, 2009, 10:38:43 PM »
My latest story is finally completed...

The last 2 chapters have been done for about 3 weeks now, but I haven't heard back from my "editor" as to whether or not they were good enough to be put up on the website. So I took it upon myself to put them up anyway.

For the complete read, just go here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5421533/1/

Let me know what you think! :DD

I don't know when I'll be writing another story. I need to come up with some ideas.

I'm open to write up any other corroborative stories, if I like the idea enough.

I hear there's also an RP thread on here somewhere. I'm thinking of participating a little bit there. But life's pretty busy now. I may be sporadically missing for a bit.

But whenever I have a few moments, I'll come on here! Even if it's just to say 'hi'.  :smile

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LBT Fanfiction / Corroborative fanfic...
« on: October 04, 2009, 06:04:00 PM »
My latest effort!  :DD

This is a fanfic I'm currently working on in cooperation with someone I know on here simply as "The Chronicler".

Some of you may know him. He's got this theory about the origins of the rainbow faces that were seen in LBT 7. He's provided me with his ideas, and asked me to write a story about it.

It's incomplete right now, for "The Chronicler" has made himself my personal "editor", and I only have so much time in a day to write this story. RL has a tendency to do that!  :p

Anyway, I invite you to follow the link and read up on what we have so far:  :DD

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5421533/1/

Peace and long life!
Live long and prosper!

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General Land Before Time / My impressions on LBT 11...
« on: September 20, 2009, 09:11:14 AM »
I don't know if this is the right place for this, but I couldn't see anywhere else to put this up.

I saw the 11th movie, "Invasion Of The Tinysauruses", for the first time yesterday.

Overall, it's not a bad movie, but I've seen better LBT movies. I guess my absolute favourite will always the be LBT 5. Maybe it's because I'm more partial to Chomper.  :smile  With LBT 7 a close second, because of the rainbow faces.

Whoever produced this movie must've seen "The Wizard of Oz" when (s)he was a kid. I'm sure a few people on here are at least familiar with the movie. I know I've seen it a few times growing up. The munchkins must've been the inspiration for the tiny longnecks. I was half expecting Little Foot to say "Somehow, I don't think I 'm in Kansas anymore!" when he saw all the tinysaurs gathered around him at the foot of the sweet leaf tree. I also half expected them to start singing "We represent the lollipop guild etc." When Little Foot fell through that hole into their underground lair, and they came out from hiding.

I'm guessing those tinysauruses were also full grown, as "big daddy"'s about the same size as they are.

I also find that the side story of Cera not liking her father's new love interest, Tria, truly reflects what today's society's countless girls must feel when they see their father, who's been single for years, falls in love again; and is faced with the process of having a stepmother.

Any girl with a single father who watches this may identify with Cera in this respect. They may not like their new stepmother at first; but once they realize that the woman in question loves them just as much as their real mother would, like in the case of Tria's compassion to Cera, may grow more attached to the new mother figure in their lives.

Anyway, those are my impressions on this movie. I invite your comments!  :smile

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LBT Fanfiction / My latest fanfic...
« on: September 13, 2009, 05:21:39 PM »
It's finally done!

My latest in this series of stories featuring the gang all grown up.

I should warn you: It's pretty long! It's even longer than my first story "The Time Of Great Need".

My next planned fanfic is in cooperation with someone else. I won't say any more than that for now. I'll let you know when THAT one is completed!

Follow the link to read:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5374674/1/

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LBT Fanfiction / It's finally done!
« on: August 28, 2009, 08:33:41 PM »
My second sequel to "The Time of Great Need".  :DD

One thing I should mention, though: This story features the controvertial relationship between Ducky and Petrie, where they actually become mates.  :wow

Just thought I should warn you before you follow the link.

Don't worry, though! No dirty stuff!

If you DO read it, let me know what you think.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5338669/1/

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General Land Before Time / Does anyone know...
« on: August 23, 2009, 01:30:50 PM »
Of any websites where I can view the 6th movie, The Legend of Saurus Rock? i could only fine the 1st part on Youtube. I'd like to be able to see it without having to go out and buy or rent the DVD.  :neutral

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Land Before Time TV Series (2007) / My impressions...
« on: August 23, 2009, 01:10:58 PM »
Well, it took me about a month, but I've finally gone through all of the episodes of the TV series...

Overall, I think they're pretty well done...

If I had to pick a favourite, it'd be The Brave Longneck Scheme. I liked the way the gang all got together to teach Rhett a lesson... It's only fitting that michievous Cera be the one to mastermind the whole thing! >:) I also find it's a good morality story to teach kids not to lie to their friends and be a showoff.

My second favourite episode would have to be The Mysterious Tooth Crisis. I loved the way Chomper was so panicky! He makes Petrie look calm in this episode, and it was the first time I remembered seeing Cera so calm, relaxed... and friendly. I guess mud baths ARE therapeutic!!  :p

Anyway, that was all I had to say...

Any idea if a second season is in the works?

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LBT Fanfiction / Star Trek crossover fanfic...
« on: August 17, 2009, 08:35:07 AM »
It's done!  :DD

My latest story involving the loyal crew of the Enterprise meeting the LBT gang and their friends. Enjoy!  :smile

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5308609/1/Unusual_Exploration


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LBT Fanfiction / new fanfic ideas...
« on: August 11, 2009, 01:53:57 PM »
Just thought I'd give you all a heads up on my upcoming fanfics...

I've got two in mind right now.

The first is a crossover story with the Original Star Trek series where Captain Kirk and the crew of the Enterprise go back in time to explore Earth's prehistory, which would coincide with the time of Little Foot and his friends when they were young. I plan to do that one first.

The second is a sequel to "The Time Of Great Need" and "Cera's Mysterious Sickness". I plan to make it a love story involving Ducky and Petrie actually starting a romantic relationship. I may even throw in their first child: A swimmer/flyer hybrid of some kind!  :smile

But it would also involve Little Foot and Ali meeting up again, and starting a romance of their own.

I may even have Cera and her male threehorn mate Wendyk expecting their first clutch, and Chomper and his mate V'Leck having a second child!  :DD

I just need to figure out how to develop this a little bit more to make it a story worth reading.

I have no idea when these stories'll be completed. I'll have to work on them in between other interests and RL craziness.

But you guys'll be the first to know once any of these stories are done!  :smile

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LBT Fanfiction / new crossover fanfic...
« on: August 07, 2009, 10:12:03 PM »
Well, it's done!

My next in a series of LBT fanfics!

This time, it's a crossover with the original Knight Rider TV series. It's mostly intended for people who are at least familiar with both shows.

Let me know what you think!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5284544/1/Acci..._Time_Travelers

Peace and long life!
Live long and prosper!

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