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Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on July 23, 2009, 09:12:25 PM
Hi, everyone!

I hope you are enjoying my first ever LBT fanfic "The Time Of Great Need".

While I was writing that story, an unusual offshoot for it came to mind. It would feature two of the main characters(who shall remain nameless...) in some scenes that are, I must warn, NOT MEANT FOR THOSE WHO ARE UNDERAGED!

What do you think?

Am I crazy to think of a story like this?

Personally, I don't think so. Being a grown up myself, I think it's normal.

Would you read a story like this?

Anyways, I don't know if fanfiction.net would allow me to put up an adult themed story like that on their site. I think I read somewhere on there that such stories were not allowed.

If it turns out that such a story is not allowed to be posted on that site, would you seriously request that I send you a copy of it via private email?

I can't wait to see what replies I'll get to THIS. :neutral
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on July 23, 2009, 09:25:03 PM
It depends on how far you go. If what you plan on putting in is rated NC-17, then your story could get removed from Fanfiction.Net because it violates the rules. As long as it's R or under, you should be fine.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on July 23, 2009, 09:33:29 PM
As long as it stays within an R rating it should be fine.

Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: raga on July 23, 2009, 09:51:20 PM
Umm, this story should give you a pretty good idea of how far you can go with a LBT story and not have it removed:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3561389/1/Land...ttlefoot_X_Cera (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3561389/1/Land_Before_Time_Littlefoot_X_Cera)

Quick disclaimer, that story is definitely not for children
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on July 23, 2009, 10:16:42 PM
If that story is what I think it is, I'm pretty sure it did violate the rules, but the moderators are being lazy and haven't gotten around to removing it yet.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: raga on July 23, 2009, 10:21:43 PM
It probably is the story your thinking of, its pretty infamous at this point.  If it is against the rules then the rules obviously aren't enforced very well.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on July 23, 2009, 10:56:41 PM
Well, it depends on how far ya take things.  I have not been able to even stomach the thought of sex in an LBT fanfic, and I'm not about to become a fan of it.  Yeah, I feel that fanfic Raga posted the link to is WAY too graphic for the sites rules, and yet the admins have not removed it :x.  A possibility could be 'cuz more appropriate anatomical terms are used, and not vulgarities (i.e. c***, f***, etc.).  I dunno...I feel I agree with DarkHououmon that the admins are just too lazy.  Two hatefics, "Littlefoot the Homicidal Manaic" and "LBT: The Beginning of the End" (see my rant on this one in the "Things You Hate to Find in Fanfiction" thread, and you'll know what I mean :anger), should not even be on that site!  The second one mentioned had been removed, but was then reposted and no action was taken!  That, to me, is pretty screwed up <_<.

BTW, that fanfic Raga posted the link to left me with a disturbed mind.  It's too bad I was eating my lunch when I opened that story :x.  In other words, graphic sex and LBT just do not mix :x.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: raga on July 23, 2009, 11:17:42 PM
What are the odds of that?  It seems the story has been deleted since I added the link.  Well, its for the best anyway.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on July 23, 2009, 11:26:59 PM
Erm, I was talking with regards to violence.

Sex + LBT = ew.

Violence + LBT = workable
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on July 23, 2009, 11:31:14 PM
Ain't that funny?!  I just went on there when I saw Noname's post in Karkovice's other thread that his fanfic seemed to had been removed, and when I saw the total number of fanfics had gone from 161 to 159, I decided to browse the pages and, long behold, the infamous sexfic has been exterminated!  Praise heaven little kids are no longer able to read that!
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Caustizer on July 23, 2009, 11:33:44 PM
It all depends on how adult the themes are I think. The above poster was right about sex being a no-no but violence is workable. It all depends on how it's written I suppose.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on July 23, 2009, 11:38:33 PM
When it comes to romance stories, in my opinion, some things are best left to the reader's imagination...
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on July 23, 2009, 11:39:11 PM
Here's the list of R rated fan fics (bold are hate/parody, unaltered text are 'true' fan fics)

LBTThe Beginning of the End (WTF writer)

Land Before Time: Warriors of the Solar System (Dark Side of the World)

The Chronicles of The Balaur (The Oracle)

Silent Valley (yoshi396)

The Land Before Time C: Extinction (Golden-Fox19)

Ducky's Torture (pokeplayer984)

Little Foot the Homicidal Maniac (07Matt)

Out of the Shadows 2 (DarkHououmon)

The Land Before Time XXXVIII: The Final Adventure (Tan Wang)

Time Gate X (Cyberlizard)

Out of the Shadows (DarkHououmon)

As is observed, most if not all the hate and parody fics are in this rating. However a quite a number of good, though more adult themed (relating to violence) fics are present. A note about Ducky's Torture: INTENSELY disturbing but well written.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on July 23, 2009, 11:43:20 PM
Quote from: Serris,Jul 23 2009 on  10:39 PM
A note about Ducky's Torture: INTENSELY disturbing but well written.
Tell me about it!  That one actually gave me nightmares :!.  I felt even more sympathy for Pokeplayer having had such a terrible nightmare after I read that :(.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on July 23, 2009, 11:47:06 PM
On a side note, I am not sure why Out of the Shadows and its sequel are classified as R rated fics. The violence is high but it's nothing like Time Gate X. There is no sex, both fics are intensely dark but I am not sure if that warrants an R rating.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Caustizer on July 23, 2009, 11:47:08 PM
Quote from: Serris,Jul 23 2009 on  10:39 PM

As is observed, most if not all the hate and parody fics are in this rating. However a quite a number of good, though more adult themed (relating to violence) fics are present. A note about Ducky's Torture: INTENSELY disturbing but well written.
Oh god... Ducky's Torture made me wanna throw up

PS. this is coming from the guy who wrote "The Night Ruby Went Crazy"
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on July 23, 2009, 11:51:18 PM
Ducky's Torture completely horrified me.

This is coming from someone who wrote Twilight Valley and LOVED some of the other R rated fics (Out of the  Shadows and Time Gate X).
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on July 24, 2009, 12:00:14 AM
Quote from: Serris,Jul 23 2009 on  11:47 PM
On a side note, I am not sure why Out of the Shadows and its sequel are classified as R rated fics. The violence is high but it's nothing like Time Gate X. There is no sex, both fics are intensely dark but I am not sure if that warrants an R rating.
Out of the Shadows was originally PG-13 rated, but Threehorn had posted a review on my story and said that if I didn't up the rating to R, he would report my story as having an unsuitable rating for the content of the story. As of now, since the completion of the story, I feel Out of the Shadows is far too graphic to become PG-13 again. If it were to become PG-13 again, I'd have to water down the content.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on July 24, 2009, 07:54:35 PM
Well, based on your reactions here, fanfiction.net would not want to leave the story I had in mind up there.

Guess I'll have to keep it on my hard drive, and only send it through private email to those who still want to read it.

The idea I had was basically like this:

On the night following the incident of Cera's breakdown in The Valley of The Sick, Cera herself would visit Chomper in his cave, asking if he could spend the night with him. Finally, he decides to allow her in. They would start cuddling, holding each other, talking; then one thing would lead to another... then they would... "consumate"... their friendship.

It would be rated "Mature Adult", of course.

If this is enough to make you sick to your stomach, I sincerely and humbly apologize.  :oops

But if anyone is curious enough to still want to read it, let me know. Leave me an email address, or something, and I'll send you the file.

I must advise, though, that I can't be held responsible for any physical and mental damage that would result from you reading something you're not supposed to read, or regret reading. You have been warned!  :p
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on July 24, 2009, 07:59:11 PM
So you planned on pairing Chomper and Cera together, a sharptooth and a threehorn?
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Daddytops2009 on July 24, 2009, 08:46:38 PM
I'm interested Karkovice.

I thought about writing an R rated LBT fan fic too.  :lol:
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on July 24, 2009, 11:49:24 PM
Honestly, I thought this fanfic would be about Cera and Wendyk as husband and wife.  The very thought of Cera and Chomper just about made my dinner come up :x.  That is too disturbing, and I'm sorry to say I would not be a fan of such a story and could not read it :x.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: The Chronicler on July 25, 2009, 07:43:52 PM
Usually, I would choose to say nothing on a subject like this, but I feel like I should throw in my two cents.

I'll admit it, I've read just about every LBT fanfic on fanfiction.net that had sex scenes (although some were so poorly written that I just couldn't go beyond the first chapter). In my honest opinion, the one that was mentioned here (and recently removed) actually came closer to being an actual story than nearly all the others (I wouldn't go as far as calling it a good story, but at least it was far better than the pure randomness of most others). Although it was a poor attempt, the author did try to limit the sex scenes (I think about a quarter or a third of the chapters had them, not bad for a first attempt in my opinion).

Now that I've finished reading your first fanfic, it seems to me that this idea is more like a deleted scene from that fanfic, so to speak. I think you could put it up on fanfiction.net, but not without a few precautions. You already said it would be rated 'M', but I think we both know that alone wouldn't be enough. My first suggestion would be to plainly state in the summary that there would be mature content in the fanfic. Also, (for what I would call a last line of defense, so to speak) you could mark the beginning and the end of that scene of mature content with notes in bold letters, so that a reader who wanted to skip that part would know exactly which part to skip. (the suggestion is based on a well-written fanfic I read not too long ago (not an LBT fanfic))

I'm actually interested in reading this. (I'm just one of those guys who wants to hear the complete story)
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Petrie. on July 25, 2009, 09:41:32 PM
Surprised no admins read this yet.  The GOF won't associate with any of these stories and we don't encourage their posting on the board.  Other hosting and links are ok, but having it posted here won't sit well with me and a lot of board members.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on July 25, 2009, 10:08:28 PM
Darkhyooman:

That was the idea, yes!

CT:

I apologize if I almost made you lose your lunch. Don't worry, though. This story is not going to be posted on fanfiction.net, so you won't have to read it, if you don't want to.  :neutral
I'll just leave it to you all to let me know, if you're still interested, to send it off to you in a private email. Speaking of which.

The Chronicler and DaddyTops:

Did you guys put up your email addies in your profiles? If so, I'll send them off to you. But I must repeat: I cannot be held responsible for any physical and/or mental damage stemming from you reading something you're not supposed to be reading!  :p

And The Chronicler? Yes! You could say that that scenes wound up on the "cutting room floor".  :p
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Jasper on July 25, 2009, 11:59:35 PM
When I start writing fan-fics(so far I have one that's on fanfiction.net that's rated T, but I might change it to R)I will avoid trying to hit R, but I can tell ya the one I'm writing currently will.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: StarfallRaptor on July 26, 2009, 02:30:09 AM
Hmm...Guess I may as well take a look-see...
Send me it, please!
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Stitch on July 26, 2009, 02:14:08 PM
I might as well see what this off-shoot is like.
Please send it to me.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: metadude1234 on July 28, 2009, 04:04:12 AM
send me a copy too please, i'm game....

my email is:

fullmetal_136@msn.com
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: metadude1234 on July 29, 2009, 12:53:24 AM
this fanfic will be very 'interesting'
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: metadude1234 on July 29, 2009, 08:47:12 PM
can you please send me a copy of your story when you get the chance please karkovice? it sounds very interesting because chomper is my fave char ^^ :D
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: pokeplayer984 on July 31, 2009, 08:46:00 PM
I believe that sex has it's own place in fanfiction, even in kid-related franchises like LBT.  In fact, you can find such stories in stuff like Dora, Care Bears, even Barney has a few.  However, if a story isn't well made, it hardly interests me.

When it comes to sex scenes I expect a level of maturity from the creator when handling such scenes.  This not only means making the scene itself well-written, any immature writer can do that.  This is a different level of professionalism that must be understood to the fullest.  It's kind of hard to explain really. (Okay, it's not, but what I would say I choose not to reveal since this is a public board and children could be reading this.)

That being said, I would like to take a look at this story of yours, karkovice.  If I end up liking it, and I feel it has maturity, I can reveal to you personally a few places you can post it if you wish me to.  Just know, some of them expect the same level of maturity that I do with such a fanfiction.  So don't take this offer lightly.

With that being said, please send the fanfiction to pokeplayer984@gmail.com

Remember, I will be taking it seriously.

For now, I await the fanfiction. :)
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: aabicus (LettuceBacon&Tomato) on July 31, 2009, 11:50:25 PM
Quote from: DarkHououmon,Jul 24 2009 on  06:59 PM
So you planned on pairing Chomper and Cera together, a sharptooth and a threehorn?
Since when has cross-species relationships stopped anybody? Ducky/Petrie and Cera/Littlefoot have always been the most popular pairings, and Ali/Littlefoot could be considered incestuous by some. I've always seen that as a bad reason to disapprove of a fan ship.

Quote from: metadude1234 on  
send me a copy too please, i'm game....

my email is:

You might want to delete your email from your post, so that anonymous internet guests can't get to it. Your e-mail is already available to karkovice through the blue "E-Mail" box above and to the right of your name, and guests can't get to it.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Kor on August 01, 2009, 12:22:18 AM
Just write the best you can and something you'd like to read.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Daddytops2009 on August 01, 2009, 04:40:49 PM
Give me your mail if you're interested in my adult story.  :oops
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on August 01, 2009, 06:17:14 PM
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Since when has cross-species relationships stopped anybody? Ducky/Petrie and Cera/Littlefoot have always been the most popular pairings, and Ali/Littlefoot could be considered incestuous by some.

BLT(Even you name's enough to make me hungry! HEH!):

Funny you should say that, because I was thinking of writing a fanfic where Petrie and Ducky actually become mates. But I may have to put that on the back burner for a bit, as I have other fanfic ideas fresh in my mind.

And I think you're right. A story where Littlefoot and Allie become mates might be like incest. Aren't they like second or third cousins?

But you know what's even worse: Littlefoot and Rhett... (OOPS! Maybe I shouldn't've said THAT!)  :oops  :smile
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on August 01, 2009, 06:29:34 PM
Personally, I don't believe they are actually related. I think the term "cousins" was only used once, if memory serves right, and it might not have been used as an indication of family relationship, but perhaps species relationship, or an affectionate title (perhaps they are good friends that haven't seen each other in a long time). But other than that single utter of "cousins", I don't think there's been any real indication that Ali and Littlefoot are related.

And in LBT 4, did they not mention that longnecks of the Great Valley could join them? Perhaps they increase their numbers by asking strangers to join them. It could very well be that Ali's mother was not born into the herd; she joined, perhaps pregnant with Ali. Or perhaps Ali's mother became mates with a member of the herd that was new as well, not born into the herd.

That's just my guess, though.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: AvestheForumFox on August 01, 2009, 06:45:03 PM
I do have an opinion about this (as much as the next person, really)

I suppose its okay to have your little 'adult' stories. but let me advise it to you, you do not want to make them public in any way.

Not to cause a stomach ache of worry, but LBT is about kiddie sauropods. While such things do exists all across the net, adult themed fanfics based on a kiddie series is generally frowned upon and trolled constantly, the authors are usually looked upon as pedo types.

(most end up on that notorious troll hive known as Encyclopedia Dramatica. Something you want to avoid.. I'll admit, I go there for a good chuckle every now and then (. but that place can ruin lives!)

just a suggestion. keep such stories to yourself, or exchange them with those whom you'd trust and also those whom would share a liking of such stories

never post anything on the internet that can mark you for troll targeting... just take my word on it

Post regular fan fiction, but keep your private ones private.

and no, I did not read this entire thread, so if I missed something and said something that's already been covered, I apologies.

This is just something I felt that needed to be said.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Kor on August 01, 2009, 06:48:15 PM
They may use the term for others of the same species since with the moving around some do who knows who may be potentially a cousin of yours.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Malte279 on August 02, 2009, 03:51:30 AM
As for the cousin bit, I consider it quite certain it was a reference to them being of the species. In any case I have heard the term being used on people who were not directly related. In the German translation the term used is "Verwandte" which literally means relatives but which in that case could also be interpreted as related by kind rather than blood.

As for the whole matter in general I see it, putting it mildly, with great suspicion <_<
It's no new discovery that almost everyone in the GOF will tell he or she would not want to look at any LBT porn but the moment anyone says it everyone is rushing there to see it.
The GOF however is a group open to all age groups and so it shall remain!
If any explicit material is being posted here the staff is going to remove it and take whatever other steps may be necessary in accordance with the rules of the board.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on August 02, 2009, 09:08:11 AM
Darkhyooman:

If what you say is true, then writing a fanfic about Little Foot and Allie becoming mates would not be considered incest. But the general opinion I've noticed here is that such stories would be frowned down upon because it is viewed that they ARE, in fact, cousins.

But if ever I write a fanfic about Little Foot taking on a mate, I'll make sure it's a totally unrelated long neck he mates with.  :smile

Aves the fox:

You need not worry about me putting up my adult themed LBT fanfic on fanfiction.net; or anywhere else, for that matter. If anyone wants to read it privately, they have but to send me their personal email and I'll send them the .doc file. But I make sure that these people are grown up and mature enough to read such stuff.

And if anything, I am certainly NOT a pedophile.

Malte270(Mr. Admin):

You can rest assured that I wouldn't put up anything on here that would be viewed as explicit or profanic in any way. I know that kiddies and "Big Brother" may be watching.  :smile

Finally(General comment):

I am literally quite surprised by the amount of reader response I've gotten from this initial post! It was initially intended as kind of a whimsy, but it is quite stunning how much interest this has generated!

Anyway, I'll keep looking for update every other day, on average, in between my fanfic writing and RL craziness!

Peace and long life!
Live long and prosper!
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: pokeplayer984 on August 02, 2009, 10:09:17 AM
Well, well, well.  I read your adult-themed story all the way through and I am impressed.  To be honest, I am unsure of how I feel with the Chomper&Cera pairing.  In all honesty, I'd pair Cera up with Shorty. (In all honesty, Malte inspired the idea when he pointed out how well they got along.  It just seemed to spark something right then and there.)

You did incredibly well with the sex scene, especially with Cera not knowing what mating with a male was like. (Did Cera's father even have "the talk" with her?  I almost feel like that's missing somehow, especially since they aren't even allowed to look at another male when they go to the bathroom in your story. (Not to mention she's a freaking doctor in this story.  You'd think they'd at least "allow" someone like that to look there if needed, despite the gender.)) When this is done, it creates limitless possibilities of how it could be taught and executed.  You did really well with the choice you made.  It did feel more natural.

This being said, you exceeded the level of professionalism required for a story to get a more positive response from me.  So I think it could do well at the other places I'm thinking of.  Especially at those that take it more seriously.  So, if you wish, I can give you the information of where you can post it by either e-mail or PM. (Your choice if you choose to do so.) However, understand that these places aren't really associated with LBT, so you might have to explain a few things.

In the end, I'd give the story 10/10, 5 stars, A+, whatever.  You did a great job.

Way to go.  You exceeded my expectations. :)
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Daddytops2009 on August 02, 2009, 04:41:21 PM
I send mine, but I have not found Karkovice's yet.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on August 03, 2009, 07:44:03 PM
Poke player:

It makes me glad that you truly did appreciate that story I wrote.  :DD

But I wanted this to have a beginning and an ending to it. Not just have it be a "Slam! Bam! Thank you, Ma'am!!" type of story you'd see in a porno film or read about in a nudie magazine. (To the admins, if such language is not allowed on this board, my sincere apologies!). I wanted a level of intimacy that was befitting of two characters who, deep down, care for each other very much.

To put it into perspective, though, I'd say Topsy must've had some sort of talk about "the birds and the bees" with Cera; but just like anything else, you never really learn unless you try it.

Keep in mind, though, that Cera is 10 seasons older than Chomper in my fanfics(it makes sense because, in the cartoons, Cera's the oldest of the gang; and Chomper is the youngest.) Yet, oddly enough, Chomper has been"intimate" with V'leck many times, while Cera's obviously never been mated to a male of any kind before she did what she did with Chomper. She saw Chomper as the young, strong male who was capable of teaching her this "great secret of togetherness" in a "we may die tomorrow" scenario.

I wanted Chomper to refuse, at first, thinking that it wasn't right; and then let Cera talk "sense" into him. At the time, they still haven't found the cure to the Bloody Tummy disease; and Cera wanted to experience this "cardinal sin" before they got sick themselves and moved into The Great Beyond.

You say you know of sites that would love to have me put my story up for all to see? Well, you can email me the links at lbelley34@hotmail.com.  :smile

But I want this to be a morality story, not just a "Hey! Come check out my porn flick!!" type of story. I'd like it to teach those old enough to read it something like "this is what procreation/love making is all about." or "don't do this until you're married" or "only do it you love the guy/girl you're with enough to be this intimate with them, and you're mature enough to handle it, and the consequences involved."

THAT's the kind of mark I want this story to leave with people!  :angel

BTW, since I have no idea who "Shorty" is, I can't tell you if he and Cera would make the ideal couple or not.  :p

Daddytops:

Yeah! I got your mature story "effort", read it, and replied to it.

I could've sworn I've sent you mine, though. It was .doc file. Do I have to send it to you again?

Peace and long life!
Live long and prosper!


Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: pokeplayer984 on August 03, 2009, 09:00:28 PM
Quote from: karkovice,Aug 3 2009 on  05:44 PM
BTW, since I have no idea who "Shorty" is, I can't tell you if he and Cera would make the ideal couple or not.  :p
Just so you know, Shorty is from LBT 10: The Great Longneck Migration.  He is Littlefoot's adopted brother.

Here's an image.  He's the green longneck laughing at Littlefoot.

(http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/pokeplayer984/ShortyLaughingatLittlefoot.jpg)

Yeah, they really didn't get along at first. -_-

Anyways, I'll be sending you those sites soon. :)
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on August 04, 2009, 08:50:28 PM
Okay, I haven't had a chance to go through all of the LBT movies and TV episodes yet. I've been so busy with RL stuff, and getting these fanfics in my head onto a .doc file. But I DO intend to see all there is to see about LBT!  :smile
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: metadude1234 on August 18, 2009, 02:44:57 AM
very well written, Bravo
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Daddytops2009 on August 19, 2009, 04:14:00 PM
I did not get the story yet.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: karkovice on August 21, 2009, 10:52:19 PM
Then resend me your email address at lbelley34@hotmail.com.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: The Chronicler on September 01, 2009, 08:01:13 PM
Well, now that I've (finally) read this, I must say that I am impressed. Like you and other readers had said, this is actually a well-written story (something I don't see much here on the internet when it comes to this kind of subject). I'm also impressed by how realistic you made it, even the fact that the 'male parts' on dinosaurs were different than those on humans (something most people either don't know or simply just don't understand).
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Caustizer on September 02, 2009, 08:09:52 PM
Curiousity is getting the better of me... could you send me a copy of this story?
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: aabicus (LettuceBacon&Tomato) on September 02, 2009, 11:54:27 PM
How many pages is the story?
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 17, 2010, 11:59:24 AM
Can someone give me the link for the author of LittlefootXCera (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3561389/1/Land_Before_Time_Littlefoot_X_Cera). I am going to ask him to post it (temorarilly) on Fanfiction Wiki (http://fanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Special:MyHome), so I'll have my own copy of it.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: The Chronicler on April 18, 2010, 05:00:28 PM
A better idea would be to ask him to simply e-mail the story to you. That way, you can have your copy of it without having to post it online.

Anyway, I think the author of that story was LBT writer, or something like that. That story was taken down nearly a year ago, and I can't find any fanfics written by that guy. You can go ahead and find his profile on Fanfiction.net, but I doubt you'll be able to contact him, let alone convince him to send you a copy of that story. (My theory, when the author noticed his story got removed, he probably realized how bad it was and he simply deleted the whole thing from his computer.)
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Malte279 on April 18, 2010, 06:47:04 PM
I must point out that if links were posted in the GOF the admins may have to delete the links as we have done in similar cases before. While we try our best at the splits between wide freedom of discussing and contents on the one and the interest to keep this a board for all ages on the other hand we do not want the GOF to become a distribution place for adult themed LBT stuff of any sort. Those who want access to this kind of material will certainly be able to find a place for that.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 18, 2010, 06:55:15 PM
Quote from: The Chronicler,Apr 18 2010 on  04:00 PM
A better idea would be to ask him to simply e-mail the story to you. That way, you can have your copy of it without having to post it online.

Anyway, I think the author of that story was LBT writer, or something like that. That story was taken down nearly a year ago, and I can't find any fanfics written by that guy. You can go ahead and find his profile on Fanfiction.net, but I doubt you'll be able to contact him, let alone convince him to send you a copy of that story. (My theory, when the author noticed his story got removed, he probably realized how bad it was and he simply deleted the whole thing from his computer.)
I found the website of the author: LBT Writer (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1264633/LBTwriter). I asked if he could post it on fanfiction.net because my email was deleted from the website I'm on, besides I'd remove the content from the page, so as it's on the website, so LBT Writer dosen't get in trouble. I just want to see how the story ends, I read the whole thing and I want to see the ending. If something like Twilight Valley can be posted and kept on Fanfiction.net then I don't think LittlefootXCera would be trouble just for a few minutes.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on April 18, 2010, 10:46:59 PM
Quote from: ScratteLover2,Apr 18 2010 on  06:55 PM
If something like Twilight Valley can be posted and kept on Fanfiction.net then I don't think LittlefootXCera would be trouble just for a few minutes.
There is a HUGE difference between a VERY graphic NC-17 rated porn without plot story and a PG-13 war story. For starters, NC-17 stories are not permitted on FF.net.

Seriously Scrattlover, is Twilight Valley THAT violent that you actually questioned whether it was allowed on FF.net? Because if you did question that I can point you to a fair number of FAR more violent stories on FF.net

And your comment on Fanfiction Wikia:

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Rated PG-13 for Intense Violence/Graphic, Disturbing Scenes/Gore, Suicide, Blood, Drug Use and Strong Language


makes TWV sound like Reservoir Dogs.

It took months for the admins to remove that story but that does not mean that LBTWriter is going to post it for you and possibly risk getting banned. Emailing him would probably be the best way to get in contact with him. Or I can private message him for you.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on April 18, 2010, 11:02:59 PM
Graphically violent stories are permitted on Fanfiction.Net. It's NC-17 stories that are not allowed. Anything above R can't be posted. Twilight Valley is only rated PG-13. R rated stories can be even more violent, and there are a lot of R rated stories on FF.Net, including my Out of the Shadows story.

LittlefootXCera was a story that I had reported twice and there's probably other people who reported it as well because it did, from what I recall, contain sexual depictions beyond the rating of R (NC-17). Stories that depict graphic sex are not allowed on FF.Net. It is probably a better idea just to have him e-mail you the story (it is easy to get a new e-mail account if you need one) rather than have him post it back on FF.Net after it was removed.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 19, 2010, 06:49:45 AM
Quote from: Serris,Apr 18 2010 on  09:46 PM
It took months for the admins to remove that story but that does not mean that LBTWriter is going to post it for you and possibly risk getting banned. Emailing him would probably be the best way to get in contact with him. Or I can private message him for you.
Yes you can email him a private message for the story, if he still has it. I wasn't saying that your story should be removed, it's actually the best of the violent stories I've read. I was actually referring to stories like Time Gate X, I just can't think straight when I'm tired, from what I can remember it was late when I last posted.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on April 19, 2010, 06:20:16 PM
ScratteLover, a private message has been sent to LBTWriter alerting him of your request. Your name has not been used.

Once he confirms that he has the story, I will private message him your email address (which would ideally be sent via forum PM to me).
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 25, 2010, 01:04:59 PM
Quote from: Serris,Apr 19 2010 on  05:20 PM
ScratteLover, a private message has been sent to LBTWriter alerting him of your request. Your name has not been used.

Once he confirms that he has the story, I will private message him your email address (which would ideally be sent via forum PM to me).
How long is it going to be is it going to be until I get the story, when you get it copy and paste it on my talk page on the Ice Age wiki (http://theiceage.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Scratte_Lover2). Rated NC-17 stories are allowed to be posted there, as I am the person that started it, I put that in the guidlines page too.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on April 25, 2010, 01:44:38 PM
I got the PM from him. He will not send it to you or for that matter, anyone else.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: The Chronicler on April 25, 2010, 06:30:34 PM
Quote from: Serris,Apr 25 2010 on  01:44 PM
I got the PM from him. He will not send it to you or for that matter, anyone else.
I had a feeling that would be his response. Honestly, when that fanfic got removed from fanfiction.net, he had to have realized that it was probably too explicit. And since it's been nearly a year since it was removed, he probably has a better understanding about writing such things and probably wishes he had never even written that fanfic.

Hey Serris, can you confirm the last part of my theory here from that PM he gave you? Did he delete the whole thing, or does he still have it but refuses to let anyone see it?
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on April 27, 2010, 09:58:56 PM
Not only that, but this "story" even has a Wikipedia page that describes it as the worst fanfic of its kind.  Who would be proud to be the author of such a work :oops?

Just Google "Littlefoot and Cera", and you'll find this on the first page of search results :rolleyes.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: jedi472 on April 27, 2010, 10:40:23 PM
Man, that sucks. I was just going to pick up my courage and ask to read it, too...oh well.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 28, 2010, 07:00:48 PM
Serris, tell LBTWriter that I just wanted to see how it end, I'm not a sick person and that ScratxScratte story was written because I read it, now I rarely care about that stuff, once I'm done writing it, I going back to normal Ice Age fanfiction.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on April 28, 2010, 07:31:48 PM
ScrattLover, LBTWriter explicitly told me in his PM that "there never was an ending and there never will be" and "it shall never be spoken of again". There is no way to see that fan fiction again.

And Chronicler, he apparently has the fan fiction but as he said "it shall never be spoken of again".
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on April 28, 2010, 10:13:43 PM
That fanfic was way too screwed up and the characters were so OOC.  This dude was so off with their personalities, especially Cera's.

Cera's a nymphomaniac?  C'mon now!  No better chance than a snowball surviving in hell :rolleyes:.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: aabicus (LettuceBacon&Tomato) on April 29, 2010, 12:32:41 AM
Quote from: Cancerian Tiger,Apr 27 2010 on  08:58 PM
Not only that, but this "story" even has a Wikipedia page that describes it as the worst fanfic of its kind.  Who would be proud to be the author of such a work :oops?

Just Google "Littlefoot and Cera", and you'll find this on the first page of search results :rolleyes.
I believe you mean a Wiki page. With the exception of Dante's Inferno, no fanfic has ever been notable enough to receive a Wikipedia page.

Dangit, does this mean I had the opportunity to read a legendarily bad fanfic before it became infamous and I didn't?!?! I've read every legendarily bad fic from My Immortal to Half Life:Full Life Consequences, but never before it became famous!!!

As one who is fascinated (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/BileFascination) with reading trainwrecks, learning what I've missed has made me very sad indeed  :cry
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Serris on April 29, 2010, 01:11:16 AM
Someone on Tv Tropes named Dommie222 called TWV So Bad It's Horrible.

I deleted their entry for this reason as cited on the So Bad It's Horrible page:

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Please remember to add only outstanding examples of suckitude to each of the individual categories. Dislike by you and some people you know does not a So Bad It's Horrible make.

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On a side note, I try to stat away from bad fics. Granted, I inevitably stumble upon them.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 29, 2010, 10:14:18 PM
Quote from: karkovice,Jul 23 2009 on  08:12 PM
Anyways, I don't know if fanfiction.net would allow me to put up an adult themed story like that on their site. I think I read somewhere on there that such stories were not allowed.

If it turns out that such a story is not allowed to be posted on that site.
Threre is one website that would allow it, as I started the website. The Ice Age Wiki, I put a link you can upload the story on: The Ice Age Wiki (http://theiceage.wikia.com/wiki/LBT_Fan_Story). After you create it, I will move it to the correct title, so place the title at the top of the page, along with {{Mature Content}}.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: ScratteLover2 on April 29, 2010, 10:19:15 PM
Quote from: karkovice,Jul 24 2009 on  06:54 PM
Well, based on your reactions here, fanfiction.net would not want to leave the story I had in mind up there.

Guess I'll have to keep it on my hard drive, and only send it through private email to those who still want to read it.

The idea I had was basically like this:

On the night following the incident of Cera's breakdown in The Valley of The Sick, Cera herself would visit Chomper in his cave, asking if he could spend the night with him. Finally, he decides to allow her in. They would start cuddling, holding each other, talking; then one thing would lead to another... then they would... "consumate"... their friendship.

It would be rated "Mature Adult", of course.

If this is enough to make you sick to your stomach, I sincerely and humbly apologize.  :oops

But if anyone is curious enough to still want to read it, let me know. Leave me an email address, or something, and I'll send you the file.

I must advise, though, that I can't be held responsible for any physical and mental damage that would result from you reading something you're not supposed to read, or regret reading. You have been warned!  :p
If you want your story on the internet and not being removed post it here: ChomperxCera (http://theiceage.wikia.com/wiki/ChomperxCera). It might be a kids website, but mature stories are allowed there.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Adder on June 26, 2010, 10:49:48 AM
You think mature fanfictions are bad? Mature "fan"art is worse! You wouldn't believe how many mature LBT "fan"art pictures I found just by typing characters names in on google! What is even the point of adult LBT fanart?! It's just wrong! I'm fine with fanfictions as long as it dosen't go to far, but pictures, no!
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: 2007excalibur2007 on June 26, 2010, 12:03:00 PM
^

You should probably stay away from sites like Herpy and Rule 34...

(bless you if you couldn't read those small letters, because you really shouldn't)

(http://i6.ifrm.com/14565/168/emo/why.gif)
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: Cancerian Tiger on June 26, 2010, 11:25:20 PM
Honestly, it's not even safe to just type in the character names anymore.  Just to search for a flippin' screenshot has its risks!  There should be some way of sites that contain very graphic sexual images bein' labeled in order to warn Internet users.  However, there is not enough control to enforce this.  Unfortunately, my mind has been scarred by just typing in a character name or multiple character names and unsuspectingly comin' across one of those sites :neutral.

My point is, one can never be careful enough with the Internet.  If you've got a sensitive stomach, keep a wastebasket nearby :x.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: DarkHououmon on June 26, 2010, 11:34:12 PM
Quote from: Cancerian Tiger,Jun 26 2010 on  11:25 PM
Honestly, it's not even safe to just type in the character names anymore.  Just to search for a flippin' screenshot has its risks!  There should be some way of sites that contain very graphic sexual images bein' labeled in order to warn Internet users.  However, there is not enough control to enforce this.  Unfortunately, my mind has been scarred by just typing in a character name or multiple character names and unsuspectingly comin' across one of those sites :neutral.

My point is, one can never be careful enough with the Internet.  If you've got a sensitive stomach, keep a wastebasket nearby :x.
I tend to use Web of Trust, an add-on for both Firefox and Internet Explorer. It allows users to rate sites themselves (there's thousands of users) and each site has a few categories, one of them being Child Safety (this includes anything that is sexually graphic). When activated, when you do a search, each site will be labeled dark green (very safe), green (safe), yellow (enter with caution), orange (dangerous), and red (very dangerous). If you accidentally or purposely click on a site that is labeled dangerous, WOT will stop you from going to the site and display a warning.

To avoid sexually graphic pictures using Google Search, simply turn the safe search on. Also, though I never use it, there is a parental control program, free, called K9 Web Protection, which can block sites using keywords and force safe search.
Title: An adult themed LBT fanfic?
Post by: The Anonymous Person on January 18, 2013, 09:05:13 PM
Haven't bumped this topic yet, eh?

Anyway, I actually do have a fic like this in the works, but I haven't decided what to do with it when it's finished. Either I'll possibly post it on Fanfiction, or I could just e-mail certain readers who want to read the story.

Synopsis: Not giving it out. I will only state that the story consists of a Ducky/Petrie pairing. For some sensitive people, if this make you go  :x , either keep a wastebasket or trash can nearby, or simply don't consider reading it.

Again, not sure what to do.