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LBT Fanfiction / The Sharptooth War
« on: July 01, 2012, 03:09:47 AM »
Okay, I'll edit that, thx for the review, I'll try to update around 2 times a week, if I can. I always did like, Chomper, because I like predatory animals in general.

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LBT Fanfiction / The Sharptooth War
« on: July 01, 2012, 02:53:21 AM »
Chapter 1, the Fall of a Tyrant

Chomper's red eyes opened. It was a warm, beautiful day, no clouds in the sky, insects buzzing in the air, and herbivores grazing miles away. Chomper looked to his left, to see his mate, Tyranna. She was dark green in color, with light blue eyes and a small tinge of light green stripes on her neck.

He remembered the first day he met her, he was just approaching adolescene, about the size of a fast-biter. He had just left the Great Valley, when he heard someone scream.

It was Tyranna, then a hatchling about how old he was when he met Ruby. She was about to be attacked by a juvenile raptor, about half his size. Chomper growled at the raptor, and it stopped.

The two sized eachother up, Chomper had the advantage, he was larger, and hopefully could predict the raptor's movements.

 He would likely try to jump in, pretend to attack, when Chomper would stumble, and he could kill him by stabbing his neck.

Chomper wouldn't let that happen though, so he just stood there growling, baiting the raptor in.

 When the raptor attacked just as planned, Chomper sidestepped, and grabbed him in his mouth, the raptor cried out as Chomper's 5 inch serrated teeth cut deep, but he released his grip, and the raptor fled.

Chomper then walked over to the hatchling, she told him her name was Tyranna, and that her parents were killed by Redclaw, Chomper then decided to take care of her.

Over the years, their relationship turned from that of big brother-little sister relationship to a friendship, Chomper over the years discovered she had a crush on him, and soon, he found he did to.

That was when she was an adolescent, and him a young adult, and when they were both adults, they revealed their love to eachother.

It wasn't long before they became mates, and soon, their was an egg in their nest. They prefered cliffs because they kept the would be hatchling safe, large adults rarely came up.
"Are you going to patrol our territory?" She asked in her soothing, friendly voice.  Chomper was just about to go when she said that. "I didn't know you were up." He replied.

"I'm just nervous, its around the time it should hatch and...." She started. "I'm nervous."
"It's alright, the egg will be-" He was cut off when, as if on cue, the egg started to crack. Chomper and Tyranna turned their heads and waited anxiously.

In one minute, the egg cracked off, and the infant inside opened it's eyes for the first time.
He was a spitting image of his father, he had the same dark blue skin, and white underbelly, the only thing different were those beautiful blue eyes. "He looks just like you!" Tyranna said. Chomper felt a single tear of joy leave his eyes. "He's perfect." Chomper said.

"Hello, I am your mother, and this is your father." Tyranna said as she lowered her head to her baby. Her son thought it was danger at first, but when Tyranna began to lick him, he realized they were his parents, and she gently picked him up, and placed him on Chomper's back.

"Hello, son." Chomper said as he nuzzled his child. With that, the hatchling yawned slightly and curled up on his father. "How about, Rex?" Chomper suggested. "Perfect." Tyranna replied.

"Perfect for his grave," a voice sneered. Chomper and Tyranna's heads shot to the left, it was Redclaw. "What are you doing here!" Chomper snarled. "Here to finish what I started with your pitiful parents!" Redclaw growled. "You take that back!" Chomper growled.

"And to finish off their legacy!" He said. Tyranna let out a scream when she realized what he meant. "Take Rex and run!" Chomper whispered. Tyranna looked fearful, but Chomper's stern look convinced her to. With that, she grabbed Rex, and ran, who was shocked by the sudden change of mood.
"Kill her. and her brat!" He told Screech and Thud, and he attacked. Chomper charged, and their jaws collided, biting eachother. Screech and Thud, during the fight, ran to find Chomper's family.

Chomper knew he had to act fast. As their jaws pulled apart, he used his tail to whip Redclaw in the face, that shocked him just enough to let Chomper ram him. Redclaw was now reeling, and Chomper used this to slash Darkclaw's scarred eye, leaving him permanently blind.

Now it could be finished. Chomper stayed out of Redlcaw's good eye's sight. Then, he charged, biting the neck, crushing the spine and severing the jugular. But to make sure completely, he pushed his enemy off the cliff, Redclaw roared blood out of his mouth as he fell to his death. It was over.

Chomper panted, but realized he had to get to Tyranna, before the raptors did. When he got there, he saw Tyranna battling to keep Rex from Screech and Thud.

They had held on to her, and held on to her, slashing and biting, wearing her down. Chomper wasted no time, in one quick instant, he grabbed Thud in his mouth and crushed him. Screech tried to react, but he to was grabbed and thrown off the cliff, where he hit the ground hard, dead.

Chomper panted as he and Tyranna recovered from the battle, she had suffered several slashes and cuts, but they would heal, and Chomper had blood in his mouth mixed with Redclaws.

But otherwise, no fatal damage. The fight was over. Redclaw was dead.

A/U: I thought I didn't publish this story, so if your going to read it, read the original one.

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