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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 06, 2008, 08:24:57 AM »
Redclaw looked over at the nearby water pools. "Yeah, I've been in those before. They're pretty warm."

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 06, 2008, 12:08:09 AM »
"Sounds awesome!" Tyra cheered. Chomper led his friends, parents, and Redclaw to the mudpools, and jumped in first

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 06, 2008, 12:00:00 AM »
"So let's just play for now, then we'll take off," Chomper smiled. "We should relax in the mud pools," he smiled

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LBT Fanfiction / Link to my Total Drama Valley fanfic
« on: November 05, 2008, 11:13:03 PM »
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4612919/4/Total_Drama_Valley

The link to the latest episode!  :DD




Brekclub85 presents:

TOTAL DRAMA VALLEY EPISODE 3: Una-Maze-ing Developments.

The 21 remaining dinos were resting up before the next challenge. Littlefoot and Ali were having odd dreams, because for some reason, they were in each other’s. “Oh Ali..” Littlefoot said in his dream. “Yeah,” she replied.

HONK!!!!!!!!!!

Littlefoot, Ali, Rory, Chomper, Cera, Ducky, Shorty, and Guido all received a rood awakening from Chris’ air horn. The remaining 13 had already awoke. “Kudos to you for making the series premiere the highest-rated program in the Great Valley,” Chris commented.

“It’s the only show in the Great Valley,” Cera mutter angrily.

“Anways, you all follow me to your next challenge,” Chris said. The young dinosaurs followed Chris all the way to the hole Redclaw made in the side of the Secret Caverns long ago. “Here’s the challenge: Each team takes one path through the labyrinth of caves of the Secret Caverns. First team to get out of the other side wins invincibility.”

Ducky gulped “But haven’t other dinos never come out of the Secret Caverns sometimes, they haven’;t they haven’t.”

CC

Tippy: Tippy knows they aren’t going to let us die…….right?

Chris blew his whistle. “Get going players!” The teams entered their paths. “This is spooky,” Petrie said on the Super Sharpteeth team. “This is nothing,” replied Shorty. Although Shorty isn’t as tough as he looks, he can still be pretty touch.

CC:

Shorty: I’m as tough as I look.

Meanwhile on the Fighting Flatteeth team, some water was leaking from the stalagtites. “Tippy doesn’t like cold water,” Tippy said. “But I do,” replied Ducky. “But Ducky, you’re a swimmer,” she replied. Ducky chuckled a little while Spike was giving her a ride.

Cera walked up to Ducky. “What Hyp said to you was mean,” Cera said. “It was, it was,” Ducky replied, trying to forget about it. “I was thinking: even though he was voted off, it would really show him if you one those wishes, huh?” “Oh, I just want to have fun, I do, I do,” replied Ducky. “But maybe we should form an alliance, so you can at least get far,” Cera suggested.

“Ok, ok,” Ducky smiled. Myra walked up to Cera. “Even though I don’t care about winning,” the fast biter said “I don’t want to be voted off early, so yeah, I’ll take your offer.”

CC

Cera: Great. Now with 2 other players on my side, I’ll never get voted off now.

On the Super Sharpteeth team, Rory remembered something. “Careful, I heard rocks fall from the ceiling here.” “Me got it,” Petrie replied, flying low to the ground. Suddenly, a rather big one was falling straight towards Ruby! “Look out!” Mutt cried, and dove to save her, but missed.

“AGH!” yelled Ruby, but Rory managed to push her out of the way just in time. “Wow, thanks Rory,” Ruby breathed. “Yeah, for a sharptooth you’re not half bad.” Shorty added. Rory felt proud, and Mutt looked embarrassed.

Tricia still looked nervous. “Daddy told me not to trust sharpteeth,” she said. “You can’t believe verything your dad says Tricia,” Tera smiled. She hadn’t really met anyone here before, so she wanted to make a good impression.

In the FF’s maze, they came to a dark tunnel. “I’ve heard of this part, you just got to keep walking forward,” Ali advised. “And everyone hold hands/paws.” Littlefoot took Ali’s paw, and Ali blushed. Rita took Chomper’s. “I’m not letting you go, cutie biter,” she complimented. Chomper also blushed. Spike and Ducky held on, as well as Cera and Myra, and Nod and Tippy.

Spike began sniffing the air. “I bet he smells treesweets,” Littlefoot smiled, everyone vanishing in the darkness, “He’s always like this when he smells food back home.” “It’s probably better than anything Chef made,” Cera commented. Everyone agreed on that.

The Super Sharpteeth reached a room where a small current was going down the center. “Anyone want to take a slide?” Tera asked. “Me not so sure,” Petrie gulped nervously, but Tera grabbed him, and they began riding the waves, followed by Guido, Tricia, Itchy, Shorty, Rory, Ruby, Mutt, and Rhett. Again, Mo couldn’t compete in this challenge.

CC

Petrie: Me think Tera’s crazy. Me like her.

CC

Rory: So, it seems I’m getting along with everyone, that’s good.

As the team kept going on, Itchy kept avoiding being directly in the cameras. “Is there something wrong with you dude?” Shorty asked. “No, nothing at all,” Itchy replied nervously. Shorty and the rest had an odd feeling about him.

The Fighting Flatteeth got to a fork in the road. “Which way do we go?” asked Ducky. Chomper and Rita grinned. “Chris said they sent people to find the correct path through the Secret Caverns, right?” Chomper asked. “Yeah?” replied Littlefoot. “Then me, Rita, and Myra can just sniff the trail they left behind.”

“Good idea,” complimented Cera. “That’s using that harder than a shiny stone skull.” Chomper sighed a bit at that comment, but le his team on.

Meanwhile, Rory had come up with the same idea for his team, but they accidentally walked down a dead end that the interns had went before going the right way. “Darn it,” muttered Rory.

“No surprise, you’re just a stupid sharptooth,” Mutt commented. Rory gasped at that comment.

“I’m not stupid you dumb jerk,” Rory complained. “Yeah Mutt, that was low, low that was,” added Ruby. Shorty and Petrie also supported Rory.

CC

Tricia: What can I say, I have to agree with Mutt here.

Meanwhilt, the FF were walking down a spiral cavern. “We’re getting closer to the end!” Cera commented. “This is what I call teamwork!”

CC

Cera: If I’m going to get those wishes, I need everyone on my side. No one’s gonna stop me.

Ali looked at Littlefoot. “Today’s been fun,” she smiled at him. “Lack of something tasty, but fun.” “Yeah, that’s right,” Littlefoot replied.

CC

Littlefoot: Ali and I, we just no each other well, that’s why we work together well.

On the FF team, Guido was flying ahead of everybody. “Hey Rory, I got an idea,” Shorty whispered in his ear. Rory listened to what the longneck had to say, and nodded. He got into stalking mode, and began sneaking up on Guido. Soon, he let out a large roar and landed right behind the flyer. “WAH!!” screamed Guido, while the rest of the team laughed.

CC

Guido: Ok, I’ve been teased enough already, if we lose, I’m voting Rory off.

Both team’s mazes ended at a rather large cavern with two exits for the end. Both teams arrived in these tunnels at the same time. “Hey look! The finish line!” Rita and Shorty called at the same times. There was a brief moment of silence as each player turned their heads to see that the opposing team was at this point already. Eventually, Cera broke the silence by yelling “RUN FOR IT!”

Chris and Chef were waiting at the end, watching the 21 dinos scramble for it. “Tis is SO bringing in good ratings dude,” he laughed. It was neck and neck, longneck and longneck, sharptooth and sharptooth, and so on. Eventually, the players began crossing the exit. “First team to have all members exit wins!” Chris reminded the young dinosaurs.” The mad dash caused a massive cloud of dust to enter the air, when it cleared, they noticed that…

“THE FIGHTING FLATTEETH WIN!” Chris cheered. The FF team rejoiced. Chomper and Rita held each other’s hands, and jumped up and down happily. Ali and Littlefoot did the same thing.

CC

Myra: I just don’t hope Rory goes, I really like him.

Ruby walked up to Mutt. “That was really mean what you said to Rory, Mutt,” she commented. “But he’s a sharptooth, all of them are dumb.” Mutt retorted. Ruby put her hand to her face. “You just don’t get it, do you?” Ruby sighed, and walked off. Chris walked in front of everyone.

“OK, Super Sharpteeth dudes, you gotta vote someone off at that bonfire ceremony tonight.” The team nodded at those rules.

CC

Mutt: Rory’s going down for sure.

CC

Rory: Mutt’s going down for sure.

AT THE BONFIRE CEREMONY….

Chris looked at the team. “You’ve all cat your ballots and made your decision. There are only 10 sweet bubbles on this plate. If you do not receive a sweet bubble, you must walk the Tunnel of Shame, and you can’t come back, EVER.

Some of the players gulped. “The first name I’m going to call is….Petrie,” Petrie smiled and collected his. “Shorty, Itchy, and Tera, you’re safe. The 3 smiled and collected their invincibility, and Shorty gobbled his up. “Tricia and Ruby, you both are safe.” They did a Hi-5 and got their sweet bubbles. “Mo.” Called Chris, and tossed the sweet bubble into the water, and Mo collected it. “Guido,” Chris said next. “And Rhett,” both smiled and went up.

Only Mutt and Rory remained. Both looked panicked. “The final sweet bubble of the night goes to……………….Rory.” The fast biter smiled and collected his invincibility, and Mutt looked sad. “You can’t just insult every sharptooth,” Ruby reminded Mutt as he walked down the tunnel of Shame depressed.

“Well, have a good night everybody,” Chris said.

NEXT TIME: The dinos are introduced to the game of Volleyball, and 1 team realizes something they should’ve from the beginning of the game.



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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 05, 2008, 06:46:06 PM »
"I find his logic funny," Redclaw said. "According to him, us sharpteeth are heartless killers while all leafeaters are good. Someone needs to hit the longneck on the head with a rock."

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 04, 2008, 10:34:10 PM »
"That's a good idea Longtail," Redclaw commetned. "You DON'T want to be the really big flatteeth when they're angry."

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 04, 2008, 10:12:27 PM »
"Me too," added Tyra.  "You'd be crazy to think we wouldn't help you Longtail," Chomper smiled

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 04, 2008, 08:53:51 PM »
"We're all here for you Longtail," Chomper smiled. "Were friends, that's what we do."

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: November 04, 2008, 07:44:53 PM »
Here’s the next chapter: hope you like the direction it goes in J

Chapter 17: Turning Over A New Leaf-Eater Part 1

SOMWHERE MILES AWAY FROM THE GREAT VALLEY…

“Oh will you shut up?!” a feathery flattooth flyer yelled. (Hey, alliteration.)  “It’s your fault anyway!” a large grown-up spiketail retorted. “You stupid spiketail,” the flyer complained. “Not this again,” a little spiketail said, walking into the cave where they were arguing. “Mom, dad, do you have to argue everyday?” Greg sighed. “It’s all your father’s fault Greggy,” Dil replied. “As if,” replied Icky.  “So what’s for dinner?” Greg asked, trying to brighten the mood.  “Treestar salad,” Dil replied, she was rather good at gathering green food.  Now at 9 sentences into this chapter, you may or may not be wondering what’s going on. Even if you’ve figured it out based on evidence from the previous chapters, I will now take the time to explain exactly what is gong on here, hope you like it.

When Chomper made his wish on the Stone of Cold Fire and altered reality, the universe had to balance out the sharptooth: flattooth ratio.  So, all the former sharpteeth (minus Chomper, his parents, and Sharptooth) were transformed into leaf-eaters.  Before the sharpteeth moved in, the leafeaters did live in the Great Valley, but the sharpteeth were too strong and they were forced out.  They eventually found a not quite as big but decent-sized valley (like the one the characters found at the end of 5.)  There was enough greenfood for the leaf eater inhabitants to survive.  The dinosaurs were satisfied with the new living conditions, but that wasn’t the case for one of the leading longnecks, Redfoot. (Redclaw.)  He had come up with constant strategies to get revenge on the sharpteeth, but none had been successful.  

“Well, I guess I’ll go play with my friends seeing dinner isn’t ready,” Greg smiled, and ran off. “See you later son,” Icky called. Greg’s actual father/Dil’s mate died when Greg was still an egg, Icky, for a reason no one could figure out, started hanging out with Dil a lot and became Greg’s father in a way. The situation was made even weirder besides the species difference because of their constant bickering.  Still, both the flyer and the belly dragger both cared for Greg, so that’s the one connection they keeps then together all these cold times.

“Myra, Rita, Rory, where are you guys?” Greg asked, looking for his friends. Since he wasn’t able to use his sniffer, finding them would be quite hard. “HERE WE ARE!” the longneck and two threehorns laughed suddenly, jumping on top of him. “Come on guys,” Greg laughed from under the dino pile “Playing Sharptooth Attack again?” he sighed. “You know we like the game,” Rory chuckled in reply.  The 4 friends got off each other. “So what’s the plan guys?” Myra asked.  “I was thinking…” Rita began. “What?” asked Greg.  “I always wanted to see the valley from atop the Great Walls surrounding it, I heard from Strut that it’s an amazing view.” “Cool,” her friends said in reply. “Lead the way Rita,” said Greg. The 4 friends began walking around the leafeater valley, passing Redfoot’s cave eventually.  “Don’t wanna go in there,” Rory said nervously. “Agreed,” everyone said.

Redfoot had his heart in the right place, but he mind wasn’t exactly the most stable. Ever since getting the news that Screech and Thud had been hunted down, he had grown slightly more bitter than usual.  He thought the typical leafeater way of thinking that sharpteeth were nothing but heartless killers, although some had noted that the only leateaters who were hunted down were ones who had wandered out of the Valley, and they all occurred during what Redfoot deduced were the regular hunting hours.  “They’re all gonna pay..” some of his fellow dinosaurs heard him mutter repeatedly.  Redfoot did get along with a lot of the other leafeaters, but they were really concerned about him. They hoped he’d never do anything drastic.

Rory, Rita, Myra, and Greg arrived at the base of Edge Path, which led up to the walls surrounding the valley. “Oh hi Mrs. Clubtail,” Rory called as the elderly clubtail walked down from the path. “Oh hello children,” she smiled, “Be careful when climbing up here. Some of the paths get really bumpy,”  she advised. “OK Mrs. Clubtail,” Rita replied, then the gang and the grownup walked passed each other.  As they were walking up, Myra had a comment. “So what do you guys think of Chomper?” she asked. “I don’t trust him.” “Myra,” Rita replied, “We met Chomper again not too long ago, he didn’t want to hurt us.”  “That just what his sharptooth mind wants you to think.” “Man you’re paranoid Myra,” Rory laughed.  “Come on Rory, you know you can’t trust a sharptooth,” Myra replied. “I’m sure Chomper nice, and maybe he has sharptooth friends who are also nice.” Rita said, almost confidentally.

When the leafeaters were chased out of the Great Valley, the gang of four had found what they thought was a leaf-eater egg, but it was actually Chomper’s.  Even after they found out it was a sharptooth egg, they still cared for it. Rita had just a motherly-instinct in her that she showed around Chomper. Her friends thought this was weird till Chomper’s parents tracked him down and got their son back.  “I just trust him,” Rita concluded to her friends.

Just then, Greg caught sight of something. “Hey…some tree fruits over there.” “Wow!” said Rory, and Ran over to get them. They were suspended on a branch on a wall   “I can’t get them down,” Greg sighed. “Neither can I,” added Rita. “I can,” smiled Rory. “Myra, help me with this.” “Sure, Rory,” Myra smiled. The two threehorns took a second to gather strength, and charged the wall, the impact was just barely enough to knock the tree sweets down. “Alright!” smiled Rita and Greg. “You were a big help Myra,” Rory said. Myra blushed. For a while now, she liked Rory, but to her, as her mother put it, it felt more like she “liked” Rory. She decided to just ignore these feelings for now, but maybe, in the future, there’d be more.

MEANWHILE…..

Two oviraptor brothers were walking around: Ozzy and Strut. (From movie 2.)  Strut looked concerned. “Brother, why does everyone seem uneasy around us?” Strut asked. “Because we’re omnivores you moron,” Ozzy replied. “They think one day you and I are just going to randomly gobble them up.” “Can’t they trust us at all?” said Strut.  “I’ve never eaten meat in my life, and the still don’t even seem to like ME.” Complained Ozzy. “Well…you know that I ate meat before we came here, but why can’t they just accept the fact that I don’t have to have to rely on both,” said Strut.  “Well you know Redfoot and all the other leaders of this gosh forsaken place,” commented Ozzy. “They can never be too careful.” Strut began chewing on a few treestars. “Ya know….despite what they do, I don’t hate sharpteeth,” he commented. “Are you crazy brother?” Ozzy said, upset by that comment.

“It’s just that…I can’t blame anyone for following their instinct.” Strut explained. “Talk like that, and all the longnecks and threehorns would kill you,” replied Ozzy.  “You know everyone here has to hate sharpteeth, it’s an unwritten rule.”  “I know, but…” Strut sighed.

Rita, Myra, Greg, and Rory arrived at the top of the stone walls. “This is amazing,” Rory said. “Yeah, you are…I MEAN, IT IS.” Myra commented and quickly corrected herself. Rory looked oddly at her, but shrugged. “You feel something weird guys…” Greg began to say, when suddenly, they slipped down the side of an angled rock wall! “WHOA!” they all yelled. Luckily, they never fell straight down, so they were fine except for a few bumps. “Oh great, we’re in the Mysterious Beyond now,” Myra complained.   “Don’t worry,” replied Rory. “We’ll get back soon.”

TO BE CONTINUED…

Read and review. Hope ya liked this chapter.

PS: From ideas me and Great Valley Guardian shared in PMs, eventually (I can’t give you an exact point, he would write one chapter featuring his OC, Longtail. I’ll give him credit when he PMs it to me and I post it. Can’t wait to read as much as you do

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 03, 2008, 08:36:49 AM »
Here's a short summary Nimrod:

Ina not-so GV-ish place in the Mysterious Beyond, all different types of sharpteeth herds live togteher. The only canon sharpteeth in the story so far are Chomper, his parents, and Redclaw (Whose sort of like a babysitter in a way for the younger ones.)  Anyways, Chomper and friends go out on adventures and currently, the storyline is this:  We're helping GVG"s OC Longtail, find his old home, which apparently burned down a while ago

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 02, 2008, 08:48:19 PM »
"We all are," Chomper said. So it seemed Longtail's traveling group would be: himself, Chomper, Kai, Tyra, Redclaw, and Chomper's parents

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 02, 2008, 08:33:27 PM »
"Maybe we'll only help you to a certain point then?" Chomper said, not knowing what to do after Longtail's comment

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 02, 2008, 07:04:45 PM »
"And I'll come too," Tyra smiled. "After all, friends help friends."

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 02, 2008, 04:50:32 PM »
Chomper and his friends joined intoo. "How far is your island from here anyway?" he asked between bites

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: November 02, 2008, 03:51:12 PM »


(Next chapter, thanks for all the reviews guys!)

Chapter 16: The Trouble with Tricia

Ruby quickly got into Sharptooth’s cave, looking nervous. “Ruby? Is something wrong?” Sharptooth asked, waking up from a nap.  Ruby shuddered. “I think….someone’s watching me,” she said nervously. Sharptooth was concerned. Ever since he saved Ruby’s life, he had become her legal guardian, and cared deeply for her safety.  Sharptooth took a few steps outside.  He sniffed the air. All the other sharpteeth had headed to their sleeping places. There was currently no one around. “I’ll stand guard if you want,” he smiled at Ruby. “That’s ok,” replied Ruby. Sharptooth was tough. He could spent a week without sleep if he wanted too. If something worried Ruby, he could stand guard all night.  By that point, the mystery Velociraptor  had slipped away.

Over the course of the next week, Chomper, Ruby, Littlefoot, Spike, and Cera were busy practicing for the upcoming Pine Cone Tournament. Spike, Ruby, and Cera were already pretty good while Chomper and Littlefoot needed to improve their skills.  “Go long!” called Cera and tossed it out of her hand. Ruby and Littlefoot jumped up, but Cera threw it a precise angle to avoid their claws. “I got it!” called Chomper. He opened his mouth and caught the pine, and rushed to his side’s makeshift goal. “All right! The score’s 8 to 6!” Chomper bragged. His day was going great. He had a lot of practice playing this with Rory, Rita, and Myra in the previous reality. He hope they hadn’t got caught or anything. “That’s right,” Cera laughed. “With our combined skills, the 5 of us will beat every team!” Even though Cera had a tendency to be a braggart, Littlefoot almost agreed with her this time.   However…..

THE NIGHT OF THE GAMES…..

“What da ya mean I can’t compete in the games?!” Cera asked Veli and Cira shocked.  “I’m sorry Cera,” Cira replied. “Your father and I have some grownup things to do, and we can’t find anyone else to watch Tricia.” “But that’s not fair!” complained Cera. “Could be worse,” replied Veli. “That flyer friend of yours won’t really be moving for a while,” he added with a laugh. Cera thought about that. Pterano, feeling guilty about Petrie and Guido’s injuries, decided to stay in the Valley and help out his family until Petrie got better.  Rinkus and Sierra also decided to stay around. “Ok, ok,” Cera said, giving in. Veli and Cira gave the two little fast biters kisses. “Bye girls,” called Veli. “Bye Daddy, bye Cira,” Cera called back.

Tricia went up to her sista and rubbed her leg. “Sistuh..” she said smiling. Tricia was able to speak words now, but only a few and she couldn’t really say them properly. Cera sighed. “Yeah, I guess your OK Tricia,” Cera smiled back. “It’s just that I want to play but Cira and Dad want me to watch you….” Suddenly, Cera had an idea. “They just want me to watch you…,” she smiled cleverly. “But they didn’t say WHERE……” She put her sister on her shoulders. “Hold on Tricia, you’re going for a ride,” Cera smiled, and ran to where the Pine Cone tournament was being held.  “Whee!” Tricia said as Cera went to her destination. The games had already started. “Just stay in the crowd Tricia,” Cera advised. “Hope I’m not late..” Tricia nodded and walked to the other really little sharpteeth.

Turn’s out, the Gang’s team had made it into the finals. Ruby, Chomper, Littlefoot, and Spike managed to hold their own against their first couple of opponents. A big swimming sharptooth (image Elsie from 5) named Watra was serving as another judge along with Sharptooth. After some negotiation, Sharptooth allowed Cera to join as a late entry.  “Great to see you Cera,” said Littlefoot. “Great to be here,” Cera replied. The team that the Gang’s team was taking on in the finals consisted of 3 belly draggers and 2 of Petrie’s siblings,  Glider and Dacty.  “I don’t care who wins,” sighed Petrie, who had been carried their by Tera and Pterano.  He liked his friends and siblings equally, so it didn’t matter to him.

“On the count of 3, start,” called Watra to the players. “3….2…..1…..GO!” Sharptooth dropped the pine cone into the center of the playing field.  The game had begun, and both teams were ready. Meanwhile, Tricia and the rest of the crowd was cheering on whatever team they were rooting for.  But Tricia’s eyes soon caught sight of a stinging buzzer. It was about double the size of a regular buzzer. Tricia tried to chomp on it, but missed.  It was lying low to the ground, so Tricia tried again. She still missed. Tricia didn’t want it to get away, so she followed it. She had left the crowd, and since everyone was focusing on the game, no one had noticed. Anyways, it was a close game. The score was 5 to 5, and the first one to 6 won. “You can do it friends, you can, you can!” Ducky called, watching from the water.  Cera passed the pine to Spike. Dodging the other belly draggers, he reached the goal. “WE WON!” Chomper, Ruby, Littlefoot, and Cera cheered.

Sharptooth gave the shiny stone prizes to the winning team. “Congratulations Ruby,” Sharptooth smiled. “Thanks Sharptooth,” Ruby replied. “What was that about?” Littlefoot asked surprised. “Oh nothing,” Ruby replied. She and Chomper gave each other a smile. Only they knew.  Suddenly, Cera came running up to them. “I can’t find Tricia,” she said. “Last time I saw her, she was in the crowd, but now sh’e gone!” “Don’t panic Cera,” Littlefoot said calmly, “We can just follow your sister’s trail and we’ll locate her.” “Good idea,” replied Cera. The gang sniffed the air, and Spike started making noise. “I think Spike’s found her trail,” Chomper smiled. The gang went to a point at the other end of the GV.

Tricia had followed the buzzer, and she was now trying to bite at it from a log that was suspended over a part of the waterhole where the waters got very rapid. “Tricia! Careful!”  Cera shrieked. She ran over to the log. “I’m coming!” she called. At this point, the buzzer had flown away, and Tricia carefully made her way off the log. Cera, however, since she was running fast, caused the log to roll over! “AGHH!” Cera yelled.  “Hold on Cera!” called Littlefoot. “Spike, stick out your tail!” he said. Spike nodded. Even at his young age, Spike’s tail was long enough to be dipped into the water enough for Cera to grab it. Being careful to avoid hurting Spike with her claws, Cera was pulled back on to land before being whisked away by the current.  But they had a problem: Tricia was on one side of a gap, while they were on the other.

“Cera, you and me can make this jump,” Ruby strategized.  “Chomper, you, Littlefoot, and Spike stay here and see if she finds her way back to this side.” Chomper and Littlefoot nodded. “Got it,” they both said.  The two fast biters took a few steps back, then dashed towards the water and managed to jump the gap. “See ya guys soon!” Cera called.  Tricia had gotten a little lead on everyone else.  The buzzer, trying to avoid being eaten by the baby fast biter, was trying to reach it’s nest among some trees.  The trees were on a lower plateau than where Tricia, Ruby, and Cera were now.  Ruby and Cera had finnaly caught up. “There she is!” said Cera. “Oh no, she’s gonna fall over the edge,” panicked Ruby. “I’ll save her!” called Cera, and dashed forwards.  Tricia was about only 3 feet from the edge….


“TRICIA STOP!” screamed Cera.  Tricia started to go over the edge… “WAIT!” Cera shrieked again, and jumped to stop her sister. Suddenly, both vanished from Ruby’s sight. “On no,” said Ruby, and quickly ran over. But when she saw what was next, she could only say. “You have to be kidding me..”  Turns out, there was a small muddy path on the side right over the edge that Tricia managed to safely follow all the way down. Cera however, in her panic, over shot it and landed on the ground.  “Uhh….,” she muttered. She was still conscious, but a little bruised up.  Tricia walked over to her. She finally had managed to catch the buzzer. “Sistuh,” she smiled again, chewing on the insect. Tricia had never realized once that she was in danger, probably because she was more careful than her sister. J  

When the current in the waterhole calmed down, Ruby was able to help Cera and Tricia back to the other side.  “She was just chasing a buzzer, who knew?” Cera said, almost finding the situation at this point. “Anways, me and Tricia should get home. Dad and Cira could be back any moment now,” she smiled.   “Night everyone,” the gang said to each other. Chomper decided to walk with Ruby back to Sharptooth’s cave. “Hey Chomper…” Ruby said to him.  “A few nights ago, I felt a weird presence. Like someone was….watching me,”  Chomper looked concerned. “But why would anyone be watching you?” he asked. “Besides thee fact you’re pretty..” Ruby blushed at that comment. “I’m probably just being paranoid,” Ruby said. “Well, goodnight Chomper,” she said, and went back to her cave. “Goodnight Ruby,” Chomper called back, and ran back to his parent’s cave.

Veli and Cira had returned. “What a night,” Cira said. They saw Tricia. She ran over to them happily.  “Oh, I’m happy to see you too Tricia,” Cira said, getting licked by her stepdaughter. “She Cera, babysitting your sister for a night isn’t so terrible, is it? Veli asked. But he saw that Cera had already fallen asleep, and that her body was slightly muddy. “What happened to her?” he asked. Tricia made an “I dunno?” motion with her head and arms.

Sharptooth, meanwhile, was confused about what Ruby had told him earlier. Why would someone be watching Ruby? And the weird part was that…besides the flyers who had arrived last week, all the scents he had sniffed that night were of sharpteeth he knew….

(There’s chapter 16. 17 and 18 will be a two-parter, and you’ll be surprised about what they’ll be about.!)

PS: Dark Fox Tailz has an idea actually about those 2, and

PPS: Read and Review.

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 02, 2008, 01:35:32 PM »
"I'd come too, and I'm sure my mom and dad would," Chomper added.

"So would I<' said Redclaw, who had just shown up with a few spiketails and clubtails. "Breakfast."

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 01, 2008, 02:39:33 PM »
"I wonder what made last night sleepable for you Kai?" Tyra asked. Chomper gave a grin. He knew the reason

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: November 01, 2008, 02:08:45 PM »

(Conclusion of the two-parter, as well as a little plot development

Chapter 15: Bad to the Beak Part 2

“I can’t believe there actually going through with this,” Chomper laughed. “We should talk them out of it,” Littlefoot agreed. “But what are we gonna do? IF Petrie and Guido do this, they’ll stop arguing, but if they don’t they’ll continue fighting,” Ruby commented.  “Good point Ruby,” replied Littlefoot. “Chomper, me you and Spike will talk to Petrie while Ruby, Cera, and Ducky, you guys talk to Guido.” “Agreed,” the gang said, and went off to find their fair flying friends.  Littlefoot could see that Pterano was with his nephews and nieces. “Maybe we can change Pterano’s mind too,” Chomper suggested.

“Oh hey there Petrie,” the rex called to his friend.  “Are you sure you want to do this?” “I’m sure,” replied Petrie. “I’ll prove to Guido that my uncle and I are tougher than he’ll ever be,” he laughed. “But Petrie,” Chomper replied. “Everyone knows you’re tough, and Guido’s seen your stunts before.”  Petrie chuckled. “You know Guido, he’s such a skeptic loser,” the flyer explained. “Once I prove to him me and my uncle can do this, he’ll stop doubting.” Chomper sighed. “This isn’t working,” he thought. Littlefoot tried talking to Pterano. “Um…Mr. Petrie’s uncle, have you heard about this little bet that Petrie and Guido have?”  Pterano laughed. “I know, but I doubt they’ll go through with it. My nephew’s smart enough to know not to try something THIS extreme.” Littlefoot felt relieved, but only slightly. Suddenly they saw the shadows of 2 other flyers appear overhead.

Pterano looked up. “Well, haven’t seen THOSE two in a while,” he said. “Rinkus and Sierra! How ya been?” Rinkus sighed. “Fine…considering that injury me and Sierra got the last cold time.” “Who are these two uncle?” Petrie asked. “Rinkus and Sierra,” replied Pterano. “They’re two flyers I met while traveling the world. They joined me in my stunts, but after one went wrong they got injured and decided to travel on their own.” “Don’t worry P,” replied Sierra “We know that accident wasn’t your fault.” Pterano smiled. “See you around,” called Rinkus.

Meanwhile, Ducky, Ruby, and Cera managed to find Guido.  “Guido wait up!” Ducky called from the water. “What is it guys?” Guido asked. “We don’t think you should do this dumb dare you have with Petrie,” Ruby said. Guido scoffed. “But if I back down, Petrie will never let me hear the end of it. I’ll prove to everyone that I’m the most super sharptooth, the coolest carnivore, the mightiest meat-eater, the fantastic…est flyer!” Guido than flew off, laughing triumphantly. “Well that didn’t work,” Cera commented matter-of-factly.  “Let’s just let them get their commupance.” “Cera, Petrie and Guido are our friends!” Ruby said slightly angrily. “So? Those flyers are being dumb today. Let’s just see what happens.”

Guido went on to practice flying and gliding. “Finally, I’ll be able to stop Petrie’s bragging,” he chuckled to himself.  He did some impressive swooping through small gaps in some rocks. “Beat that Petrie,” he chuckled.

The gathered again at dinner.  Chomper, Littlefoot, Ruby, Cera, Spike, as well as Tippy (who was also a belly dragger in this reality). Sharing a clubtail the grownups had caught, Tippy asked. “What’s this Tippy heard about the flyers?” “Oh, Petrie and Guido are having a bet involving another stunt Petrie’s uncle is doing,” Chomper explained.  “Tippy says that doesn’t surprise Tippy,” Tippy replied.  Petrie eventually flew in. “After a day of practice, I’m ready to prove Guido wrong!” Petrie laughed. The gang sighed. “Oh just give it a rest Petrie,” Cera said. “I will…after I beat Guido,” Petrie laughed, and flew off. “Huh, you guys tell me if my ego ever gets that big,” Cera said. “Uh…yeah,” the gang responded, and walked off. “What?” the fast biter asked confused

The next day came. Despite their parent’s orders to not watch the event, Littlefoot, Chomper, Ruby, Cera, and Spike gathered at the top of Crumbling Rock. Spike was a little nervous. Watching the falling rocks, he was worried the surface he and his friends were on would eventually crumble.  It hadn’t happened before, but the belly dragger just had a feeling. They looked down and could see Pterano talking with his nephews and nieces (minus Petrie) explaining his upcoming trick. “Gather round young ones,” he called. “Watch as I, your brave uncle Pterano, who will now fly among the barrage of falling rocks all the way to the peak of Crumbling Rock!” “OOOHH!” all the little flyers said in unison. As stupid as the idea was, it would be considered impressive by whoever would be able to pull it off.

Meanwhile Petrie and Guido were off on the sidelines. “Here’s the idea:” Petrie whispered, “After my uncle starts up, we enter from the side, and then I beat you to the top well you lose and hit the ground. “Oh ha ha,” Guido laughed sarcastically. “Anyone can do this, it’s so simple,” he said. “I already told you…” Petrie began to say, but decided not to bother. He noticed among the crowd of flyers was Rinkus and Sierra. “Better stay out of their sight,” Petrie commented, “Knowing them, they’ll probably try to stop us from doing this.”

Back at the top, the gang was watching the Pterano and the the younger flyers prepare for the death-defying flight of fate. “Want some ground crawlers?” Chomper asked his friends, eating them like a human eats popcorn at the movies. “I”ll take some,” said Cera, and Chomper gave her a handful. “I could use dinner AND a show,” she said as an  attempt at a joke, but it didn’t work. “Oh never mind,” Cera said, and continued looking over the edge. Chomper was slightly nervous. In both realities he had a fear of heights that acted up sometimes, and now was one of them. But he tried his best to ignore the feeling this time. “I’m sure everything will turn out OK,” he said. “For Pterano maybe, but those two…” Ruby laughed. “Good point,” smiled Chomper.

Pterano took a few steps in front of the falling rock pile. One of Petrie’s sisters was giving the signal for “go.”  “On my mark…get set……GO!” she called, and Pterano took off. A straight flight from the bottom to the peak would take about 45 seconds considering all the rocks that had to be dodged. Pterano lived up to his reputation, he began by avoiding a rather large boulder that everyone thought would crush him. “Awesome!” one of Petrie’s brother called. “Now’s the time,” said Guido, and the young flyers took off.

“Here they go,” Littlefoot said nervously watching from above. Not too surprisingly, Guido and Petrie avoided the center part of the falling rocks for two reasons: 1. Pterano and everyone else would see them, and 2. They wanted to stay away from the REALLY BIG rocks. “I’m gonna beat you!” Petrie called. “Don’t count you eggs before they hatch,” Guido taunted back. The two fyers flew upwards in what could be called a figure-8 pattern considering they way they dodged most of the walks. Both of them had worked up a sweat.  It was getting difficult. “Maybe this isn’t so easy,” Guido thought to himself.  “Maybe Guido and my friends were right,” Petrie tought. “But I’m not going to let Petrie/Guido know he was right!” they both thought. Little did they know, trouble was about to happen up above.  Littlefoot started to feel the ground they were on shake. “Oh no...” he said.

“We gotta get outta here!”” Littlefoot yelled. Spike’s fear had come true. The ground was crumbling, and if they didn’t get out of the way, the gang would all fall down! Ruby, Cera, Spike, and Littlefoot managed to get to a safe zone, but Chomper had tripped! “Help!” shrieked chomper. “NO! CHOMPER!” Ruby yelled, and tried to grab him, but it was too late, the ground had crumbled, and Chomper was falling. “AAHHH!” screamed Chomper at the top of his Sharptooth lunges. However, Guido and Petrie managed to hear him. “Oh my goodness! We have to save him,” Guido panted, and they flew to the rescue. The got right under Chomper, however…Chomper’s weight only forced the flyers down too! “HELP!” all three of them yelled. Luckily, their screams were overheard by Pterano. “On no, the children!” he yelled, and quickly flew to where they were falling. “WHOA!” all of the flyers watching below. Pterano swiftly dodged many falling rocks and managed to catch Guido, Chomper, and Petrie.


SOME TIME LATER….

“Uhh….uh…” Petrie sighed. He and Gudio had been knocked out cold by the fall. The two flyers began to slowly open their eyes. “Petrie…Guido?” Chomper said, smiling while staring down at them. “Chomper?” Petrie said weakly, “You’re alright?” Chomper nodded. “Yeah, your uncle managed to save us.”  “I’m so glad you’re alright,” Ruby smiled, and the fast biter gave Chomper a big hug.  Chomper blushed at the sign of affection. “That’s good to hear,” Guido smiled, but suddenly, when he tried to get himself up, he felt a stinging pain. “OW!!!!” cried both flyers. “Yeah,” Littlefoot laughed nervously. “You see, what happened was…”  To explain it more clearly, since Chomper fell head-first, Petrie and Guido landed between a t-rex’s head and Pterano’s back. Since a sharptooth’s skull is harder than metal, they were lucky the impact didn’t kill them. Pterano only got a few bruises meanwhile.

“Anyway, after we found you,” Ruby said. “We took the 4 of you to Mr. Belly Dragger. He got a special juice from some fruits in the trees. Pterano should be ok in a little while, but you two…” Chomper laughed. “Let’s just say Petrie that your mom didn’t ground you because you’ll be grounded for quite some time. “Nonsense,” Petrie chuckled. “I’ll be back and flying in no time,” he said, avoiding movement. “Or quite some time,” Cera said with a smirk. “We should probably go to bed now, the Bright Circle’s going down,” Littlefoot said. “Agreed,” the rest of the Gang smiled, and headed back to their caves.

On the way back to Sharptooth’s cave, Ruby’s path was blocked by the fast biter herd returning from a hunt. “Um...excuse me, pardon me, coming through,” Ruby said, navigating her way through the group. Suddenly, she froze in her tracks. She felt SOMEONE give her an icy cold glare, but she couldn’t see who or what. She looked around nervously for a second, than quickly ran over to Sharptooth’s cave.

(I wonder what that was…..  Read and Review!)

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 01, 2008, 01:18:51 PM »
"That's terrible," Tyra frowned. "But, it's not just you who has nightmares like that," she said nervously.

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 01, 2008, 12:51:36 PM »
Tyra also had woken up. "Morning Kai," she smiled, nuzzling his face. She looked at Longtail. "What's going on with you Longtail?" she asked concerend

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