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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: November 01, 2008, 12:51:36 PM »
Tyra also had woken up. "Morning Kai," she smiled, nuzzling his face. She looked at Longtail. "What's going on with you Longtail?" she asked concerend

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 31, 2008, 11:24:04 PM »
"But, didn't your island burn down or something?" Chomper asked, not knowing what to say

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 31, 2008, 11:16:47 PM »
Chomper ran over to Longtail. "Longtail, what's wrong?!" he said, waking his friend up

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 31, 2008, 11:07:20 PM »
Redclaw had a good night's sleep. He promised the herd he would hunt for breakfast.

Chomper meanwhile woke up early and gave his parents a nuzzle. "Morning mom, morning dad," he said

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LBT Fanfiction / Link to my Total Drama Valley fanfic
« on: October 31, 2008, 07:35:54 PM »
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4612919/1/Total_Drama_Valley

Since I doubt I could get an RP, I decided to make a fanfic out of this. The updates will not be as frequent as my Sharptooth Valley fanfic, but I got the plot and eliminations all planned out.

Hope ya like it


Author’s note: I don’t own The Land Before Time or Total Drama Island, but I’d love it if I did.

TOTAL DRAMA VALLEY: THE PROLOUGE



An overly-smiling guy in his mid thirties walked over to the camera. “Hello viewer, Chris MacLane here. You probably know me as the host of Total drama Island, and it’s sequel, Total Drama Action. While, after the musical third season we began running out of ideas. But then I accidentally got my hands on a secret government time machine, and I figured out the most AW-SOME use for it! I traveled back to 65,000,000 BC when I just happened to meet several dinosaurs who somehow were able to speak English. Shocking, eh? Anyways, I introduced my self to them and taught them about human culture. I then realized this could be a ratings bonanza! I told them about the concept of my show, and how I’d need 22 younger dinosaurs to compete in the challenges, and when I needed to come up with a prize worth playing for, I heard about this “Stone of Cold Fire”, so the final player will be allowed to make 2 wishes because of it’s magical mumbo-jumbo. Oh yeah, Chef Hatchet’s back also. Before the contestants arrive, let me tell you what I’ve heard about them.

Littlefoot- A longneck (coughbrontocough) who seems like a nice fellow. Let’s just hope that doesn’t prove to be his downfall.

Ducky- A young swimmer, with a habit of repeating herself, and boy does this girl need to be less positive.

Cera- Didn’t get a chance to meet her because of her pushy father, she’ll probably be the mean ratings-earner

Petrie- A flyer who’s as brave as he is big, he’ll probably be one of the comic reliefs.

Spike- My interview with him didn’t go well, he wouldn’t answer any of my questions…

Ruby- A young runner who is nice and will probably have a relationship during the show (Or in the fanfics the crazed fans write after the show’s over.)

Ali- Another longneck, probably has the most sense out of them all. It takes all sorts of people to make a reality show, after all..

Rory (One of MY Ocs.)- A fast biter who’s learned English, but don’t let his voice fool you, he can be pretty tough.

Guido- A weird..green…flying..thing. Seems to be a chicken sometimes. Oh well.

Hyp-Hey, the rules of a reality show state you have to hire multiple people everyone hates.

Chomper-A sharptooth who’s also nice, but I don’t like the way he looked at me during the interview..

Tippy- A spiketail who talks in the 3rd person often. We’ve offered her help, but she declined.

Rhett- Another longneck who’s a big phony. Just the kind of dino we need.

Rita- (Another OC.) A sharptooth who Chomper seems to like, ooh, more relationships!

Nod- Hey, every bully needs his goons.

Mutt-Same here.

Shorty- Yet another longneck, and he’s apparentally Littlefoot’s step-brother. Will there be a family feud?

Myra- (OC.) A fast biter who we allowed to join because of her already existing relationship with Rory.

Tricia- Cera’s sister and the token always good girl. (In this fanfiction, she’s about Chomper’s age.)

Itchy (OC.)- A feathery flyer with something seriously weird about his voice. Maybe hormones, don’t know

Mo- A swimmer with the unfortunate handicap of being bound o water. Sucks for him..

Tera- (OC.) A freaky flyer who I swear has some problems in the head.

SO, who will win? Who will make (and break) alliances? Who will have a love life?

Found out when my new series premieres, TOTAL…..DRAMA…..VALLEY!

(Read and review, I’ll try to update the episodes when I can. Who do you think should win by the way?)













TOTAL DRAMA VALLEY: Episode 1: Before the Dinos Get Sore.

Chris walked up to the camera and smiled. “Now that everyone knows the rules, the contestants are about to arrive!” The main area was a small section of the Great Valley that was separate from everywhere else by a tunnel. Then, a swimmer riding a spiketail arrived. “Let’s meet our first arrivals, Ducky and Spike!”

“I’m excited to be here Chris, I am, I am. This is gonna be fun!” Spike made a noise suggesting approval also.

“Well, don’t get too excited yet, we have to wait for everyone else.”

A nervous-looking feathery flyer arrived. “Hi…I’m Itchy,” he said. He noticed the cameras. “Keep those out of my face!” he panicked. “Camera shy huh?” Chris responded. “Sucks to be you.”

A pink Runner was the next to join the frey. “Hello, guys, Guys hello.” Ruby smiled. “Ruby! I did not expect to see you here,” said Ducky.

A big longneck was dropping off two players. “Shorty, Littlefoot, just remember to have fun and make friends,” “Sure dad,” they responded, though Shorty sounded sarcastic.

Littlefoot and Ducky got a look at the next 3 contestants. “Oh no..” they said in unison. Hyp, Nod, and Mutt showed up. “What’s up losers?” Hyp laughed. “Knock it off Hyp,” Littlefoot replied. “Yeah,” Nod added, he didn’t listen to Hyp all the time. “Quiet you,” replied Hyp.

A two threehorns were being dropped off next. “Cera, Tricia, be sure to try your hardest and have fun,” Tria smiled. “OK mom, the two siblings replied. “And remember, you are threehorns, I just know one of you is going to win.” Topsy said. “Topsy..” Tria said slightly annoyed. “Don’t worry dad, I will,” Cera smiled confidentally.

Another spiketail arrived. “It’s Tippy!” said Ducky. “Spike! Tippy’s glad to see you,” Tippy called. The two spiketails ran around, playing with each other.

Then, a t-rex came through the tunnel. “Chomper” called Littlefoot. “Hey Littlefoot, haven’t seen you in a while.” Chomper smiled, hugging the longneck. “My parents heard about this, and they wanted a sharptooth in the games.” Cera gave a relieved laugh. “Well, they should know you’re the only sharptooth in the game.” Chomper suddenly chuckled nervously. “Not exactly….”

Shortly following in the tunnels was another rex and two fast biters. “Everybody run!” called Cera. Chomper laughed. “Don’t worry guys, these are my friends I met in the Mysterious Beyond.” The boy fast biter spoke up. “I’m Rory,” he said. “And I like playing games, so I figured this would be awesome. “It’s nice to meet you Rory, it is, it is” Ducky said, a little unsure.

“I’m Myra,” the girl fast biter smiled. “I go wherever Rory goes.” “And I’m Rita,” the girl sharptooth smiled, hugging Chomper slightly. Chomper blushed.

Water splashed nearby. “Mo!” said Ruby and Ducky. “Hello again mud brothers!” The friends laughed, although Mo had a problem: he was bound to the water, which, luckily, was all around the area that Total drama Valley was being held. “I doubt he’ll win,” Cera said.

A longneck known as Old One dropped off the next two players. “Ali, Rhett, I just want you to try your hardest.” “We will Old One.,” Ali replied. “And don’t worry Ali,” Rhett smiled. “If you’re ever in any trouble, I’ll help you out.” “Oh Rhett,” Ali chuckled, remembering the incident when they met Chomper.

A flyer was the next to arrive. “Me hope I’m not late,” said Petrie. “Don’t worry Petrie dud, you’re not,” Chris said.

Another flyer showed up next. “Guido,” Littlefoot laughed. “You entered too?” “Sure I did, I have nothing better to do,” Guido explained. He saw Rory. “AHH!!” he screamed, and jumped back. “Ha ha, scaredy egg!” Shorty taunted. “Don’t laugh!” yelled Guido.

The 22nd and final player arrived. Another flyer, Guido’s age, but Petrie’s species and Petrie’s mom’s colors. “I’m Tera,” she said. Suddenly a rock fell from the sky and knocked her on the head. “You OK?” Petrie asked. Tera seemed unfazed. “Yeah, don’t worry,” she replied, even though she sounded dizzy.

Chris clapped to get everyone’s attention. “OK, now that all 22 of you have met each other, it’s time to explain a few more of the rules. You see those weird square things, those are confession cams. You can go in just to say your private thoughts….which the viewers back home will see.” “Got it,” replied Tricia. “And before we go to the mess hall for lunch..” Rory licked his lips. “We have to divide you into 2 teams of 11. After every challenge, the losing team will have to vote off 1 team member, who will then walk….The Tunnel of Shame. And that loser can’t come back…ever. Some of the dinos gulp. “I have reviewed your interviews and decided how to divide up the teams…”

TEAM ROLL-CALL:

The Fighting Flatteeth- Littlefoot, Petrie, Nod, Itchy, Rita, Myra, Cera, Ducky, Chomper, Tippy, and Ali.

The Super Sharpteeth- Mo, Ruby, Hyp, Mutt, Rory, Tera, Spike, Shorty, Rhett, Tricia, and Guido.

The 22 players all met in the Mess Hall, which they learned meant “Place where you eat.” Chef Hatchet served the 18 leafeaters fruits and plants and the 4 sharpteeth meat. Shorty looked grossed out by eat, but he was even further grossed out when he tried the leaves Chef had gotten. “Eww.. did you get this stuff from someone else’s stomach, these are terrible!”

“You got a problem with my food?!” Chef yelled. “No, he doesn’t Ruby replied for him. “Shorty, do you really want to make an enemy on the first day?!”

Chris walked to the front of the mess hall. “Hope you all enjoyed your lunch, because your first challenge starts IMMEDIATELY after.” “All right,” cheered Rory. “Oh come on, right away?” complained Hyp. “”We haven’t even been here 2 hours.” “I know. Sucks, doesn’t it?” Chris replied.

“Don’t worry Hyp, the first game couldn’t possibly be anything bad.” Littlefoot smiled. Chris chuckled

CUT TO: Bottom of a large cliff.

“Me think you should rethink that Littlefoot,” Petrie said nervously.

NEXT TIME: The 22 players compete in an epic rock climbing challenge, and the first person will be voted off. Who will it be
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TOTAL DRAMA VALLEY EPISODE 2: Rock of Ages

The 22 dinos gulped looking up at he massive cliff above them. “You dudes realize to expect these things when you signed up,” Chris reminded them.

CC (Confession Cam.)

Cera: They weren’t actually going to put our lives on the line,, were they?

CC

Chomper: This sounds fun…except for the potentital pain part. I just wanna prove to everyone that sharpteeth are not stupid.

NORMAL:

“Here’s the challenge,” Chris explained. “!0 of you will play. 5 players from each team will have to climb to the top of the cliff, while the other 5 help them climb up the rocks using these what humans called ropes.” “Sounds easy,” commented Guido. “Flying is considered illegal in this challenge Guido man,” Chris replied. Guido sighed.

Petrie flew up to Chris. “Hey Chris, could me switch teams?” he asked. Chris checked his rule book. “Sure dude, but it says someone from the Super Sharpteeth would be willing to take your place.” “I will,” laughed Hyp. “Your team has too many little ones, you’ll never win, so I’ll guess I’ll lend you a hand.” Littlefoot, Ducky and Chomper looked mad. “Knock it off Hyp,” said Littlefoot.

Spike looked at Ducky, and made a noise. “Spike wants to switch teams too, he does, he does,” Ducky said. Itchy volunteered to switch teams, again sounding nervous.

TEAM ROLL-CALL UPDATED:

The Fighting Flatteeth: Cera, Ducky, Spike, Ali, Littlefoot, Tippy, Chomper, Rita, Myra, Hyp, and Nod.

The Super Sharpteeth: Shorty, Petrie, Mutt, Ruby, Rory, Guido, Tera, Itchy, Mo, Tricia, and Rhett.

“Now, it’s time to get ready!” Chris called.

The FF team was deciding their strategy. “Ok, the climbers will be me, the swimmer, the sharpteeth, and Ali,” Hyp said. “Who made you the boss of the team?” complained Ali. “Myself, little kid,” replied Hyp.

The SS team: “I’ll go, also with Tera, Ruby, Rory, and Rhett,” Shorty strategize. “Mo, sorry, you’ll have to sit this one out,” Ruby said. Mo wouldn’t be able to help at most of these challenges. “That’s OK mud-brother,” Mo replied.

CC

Shorty: I mean, Littlefoot’s tough and everything, but he can’t beat my team.

Littlefoot was helping Ali get the rope around her waist. “Thanks Littlefoot,” Ali said. “Hey, it’s the least I can do. I mean I rarely see you now,” Littlefoot replied. Chomper and Rita were helping each other get the ropes together. Rita accidently slipped on one, and landed with her face on Chomper’s. The two rexes blushed and got back to work.

Tera flew over to Petrie. “Why did you want to switch teams Petrie?” she asked. “Well Tera, me..” Petrie began to say but Chris interrupted them with his megaphone. “Two minutes till the challenge starts players, everyone better be prepared.” Ali, Hyp, Ducky, Chomper, and Rita got all roped up, as well as Tera, Ruby, Rhett, Rory, and Shorty.

CC:

Rhett: I know Ali thinks Littlefoot is cool but when she sees me climb those rocks she’ll be impressed.

The ropes were connected to hooks at the top of the cliff. Littlefoot was helping Ali. Spike was helping Ducky, Myra was helping Rita, Tippy was helping Chomper, and Nod was helping Hyp.

Meanwhile, Petrie was helping Tera, Guido was helping Shorty (Because Shorty forced him), Tricia was helping Rhett, Itchy was helping Ruby, and Mutt was helping Rory. “We can do this team,” the fast biter said. “If we don’t suck,” Shorty said under his breath.

Hyp meanwhile was taking charge of his team again. “OK everybody, since I’m the biggest, strongest, and smartest, just follow my lead.” “Why should Tippy or the rest us?” Tippy complained. “I just said why,” Hyp retorted.

Ducky looked up at the cliff nervously. “I don’t think I cn do this, I can’t I can’t.” But it was too late to back out now.

Chirs took out the starting gun. “At the sound of the bang, GO! 3…2….1…BANG!” A random dead flyer suddenly fell from the sky. “Hope no on saw that..” Chris muttered.

The 10 climbers rushed to the wall. Hyp, Tera, Ruby, Shorty, Ali and Rory weren’t having much trouble, but Chomper, Rita, Rhett, and Ducky were struggling. “You’re too little swimmer,” Hyp called, he was currently in the lead. “The first team to have all 5 players reach the top wins,” Chris called from his signature helicopter.

“I’m trying Hyp, I am, I am,” Ducky huffed. Meanwhile, Cera was watching from the ground below, trying to come up with an idea how to win….not her team winning the challenge, but how she herself could be the final winner!

CC

Cera: I figured if want to win, I need an alliance. My sister’s on the sharpteeth team, so that rules her out.

“Careful Rhett!” Tricia called from the ground level, supporting his rope. “Don’t worry,” the longneck called. “Hey Ali, watch thi…WOAH!” Ali turned her head just in time to see what slip and get tangled up in his rope. Ali chuckled. “You’re funny Rhett.”

CC

Rhett: See said I’m funny (faints.)

CC

Ali: Rhett’s one of my friends, but I don’t like him, just so you know.

Cera walked over to Myra. “Hey Myra,” she said. “What is it Cera,” Myra huffed, supporting the rope that was holding Rita up. “Winning those wishes from the Stone of Cold Fire sounds awesome doesn’t it?” She asked. “I guess,” she said, trying to not let her friend fall. “I was thinking, maybe you and me should form an alliance, make it to the final 2.” “Yeah right, I doubt I’ll make it,” Myra replied. “Suit yourself,” replied Cera, walking off.

Along the cliff’s edge, Shorty, Tera, and Rory had caught up with each other. “We can do this guys,” Shorty encouraged. “I’ve done this before in the Mysterious Beyond,” said Rory. “I love life-threatening situations,” Tera smiled. Shorty and Rory looked at the flyer awkwardly. “ok…” said Shorty, and began using his paws to help himself up further.

Hyp had reached the top first. “Ha, see! When you’re big, you’re always the best!” “Be quiet Hyp!” Tippy yelled from the ground level. Back on the Super Sharpteeth’s area, Tricia’s rope began slipping. “Oh no!” she said, and caught it in her mouth. “Hurry Rhett!” she called without letting go. Rhett meanwhile had managed to get himself untangled and he was able to reach the top.

“Two players up, 4 remaning for each team!” Chris called.

“We can do this Chomper!” Rita cheered, eating a dragonfly that passed by. “I can’t go on,” Chomper huffed. “I’m sure you can do it,” Rita said, and kissed Chomper. Chomper suddenly got a burst of energy and managed to make it all the way up to the top of the cliff.

CC

Rita: Yeah, I met Chomper when my family met his. He’s simply the COOLEST sharptooth ever!

Shorty was the next to get to the top. “There it was,” he smiled. He looked down, getting slight vertigo from the sight. “Ok Tera, Rory, and Ruby, you can do this!” he said. Rita had reached the top at this point.

Ali was making her way up the final feet. “My team’s counting on me..” she said mentally. She took a pause for a few breaths, then made it. “Only Ducky needs to reach the top for the Flatteeth team to win!” Chris called. “But will she make it in time?”

Rory and Ruby showed up next. “That was hard, hard it was,” Ruby sighed. It was now Ducky Vs. Tera, and it was anyone’s game. “You can do this little swimmer!” Hyp called. Ducky was losing breath. “I can’t make it, I can’t..” she huffed just as Tera reached the top of the cliff.

“Tera has finished! The Super Sharpteeth win the first challenge of Total Drama Valley!” Chris called. “ALL RIGHT!” Guido, Rhett, Tera, Rory, and Tricia called. “And for winning, they get to have a reward: Spend 3 hours in the nearby Hot Spring!” All the dinos looked excited. “Me love this place!” Petrie said, flying towards the water.

“Last one in’s a rotten hatchling,” Mutt called.

Chris looked at the Fighting Flatteeth team. ”Ok FF, since you lost, you have to vote someone off the team tonight.” And then he walked off.

CC

Hyp: I can’t believe that little swimmer made us lose. She’s so off the team!

Night came. Chris and Chef had the bonfire ready. Chris had prepared a plate with one of the flatteeth’s favorite treats: Sweet bubbles. But there were only 10 of them

“You’ve all cast your ballots in the confession cam. If I do not cll your name, you will be the first player eliminated!’

All the team looked nervous. Chris began:

“Tippy..” Tippy walked up and ate the sweet bubble happily. “Ali…” Ali walked up and did the same thing. “Littlefoot..” The longneck walked up and he and Ali did a high-five motion with their paws. “Cera..” Cera smiled confidentally and collected hers. “Chomper..” Chomper got his, but he threw it away because it tasted awful to sharpteeth. “Rita…” Rita did what Chomper did. “Myra…” Myra got her sweet bubble, but she didn’t throw it away. “Spike…” Spike walked up, but as he collected his, Chris had to remind him. “Only 1 per dinosaur dude,” “Nod….” Nod looked nervously at Hyp and got his invincibility.

“Players, only 1 sweet bubble remains. And either Hyp or Ducky is going home.” Ducky looked nervours, Hyp looked confident. “The final sweet bubble of the night goes to………….Ducky!’

“Oh yay!” Ducky cheered as she collected hers. “But why would you vote me off?!” complained Hyp. “Because you’re a meanie Hyp,” Tippy laughed. “Hyp, the Tunnel of Shame awaits..” Chris said, pointing down a tunnel.

Chris looked at the rest of the team. “The rest of you are safe…for now.” “Goodnight everyone,” Chomper said, walking back to the sleeping places prepared for the competitors that the humans called “Cabins.”

NEXT EPISODE: The teams are put into a race through a labyrinth of caves. Alliances are formed within both teams, and another player will be voted off
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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 30, 2008, 06:58:45 PM »
"You're welcome," replied Redclaw. "Now I hope you can get some sleep."  Elsewhere Chomper was getting a goodnights sleep, dreaming of being the world's greatest hunter.

And Tyra, also in her dreams, began kissing Kai on the snout. "thanks for eveything," she said to him

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 30, 2008, 04:57:26 PM »
Redcalw tried his best at counseling. "Well...you're still here, right? I believe you have a purpose on this world, and that's what keep you alive. I mean, remember what you did for Tyra toda, that was pretty heroic."

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 30, 2008, 04:09:52 PM »
"I'll try," Redclaw replied. "But what would you want me to do?"

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: October 30, 2008, 03:27:31 PM »

(Here’s the next chapter, thank Dark Fox Tailz for the idea to bring Pterano into the story.)

Chapter 14: Bad to the Beak Part 1

Chomper enjoyed spending time with his friends, especially Ruby now after their night at Saurus Rock. Ruby felt that Chomper was the friend she could always come to.. “You’re pretty nice Chomper,” she had told him more than once since.  That day, Chomper came up to her. “Littlefoot told me that all of us should meet at the waterhole, he has something cool to tell us.” “That sounds neat, neat it sounds,” Ruby replied. As they walked off, Chomper’s parents looked at them. “Our son is growing up,” Papa Sharptooth smiled. “Ok,” said Terri “Who’s gonna give him the Flyers and the Buzzers speech?”  “That’s not for more cold times,” Papa laughed in reply. Terri looked slightly embarrassed. “Don’t worry about it for now,” he added.  Mama Sharptooth looked better, watching her son run off.

Ruby and Chomper ran all the way to where Littlefoot, Cera, Ducky, and Spike were waiting. Petrie currently wasn’t around.  “Here’s something I think we could do for fun guys,” Littlefoot began. “What?” asked Chomper.  “As you probably already know, we’ve been seeing a lot of the kids forming Pine Cone teams right?” “Yeah,” they all replied. “I thought, maybe we should start a team. We’re all good friends, and we’ve all played before, except Ducky of course.” “I know I know,” Ducky sighed in reply. Her water-boundness affected a lot of the things she could do, but there still were plenty of things she could do.   “That sounds fun,” Ruby said. Cera looked around. “Guys, has anyone seen Petrie? I swear, those flyers always get themselves lost.” “Cera!” said Littlefoot. The fast biter Cera was just as arrogant as threehorn Cera.

“But that’s not the best part!” Littlefoot smiled.  “Sharptooth heard about all of the teams, so he decided to make a tournament out of it! He said the winning team members each receive a Shiny Stone!” Chomper smiled. His parents loved the shiny Stone he won them a while back, and thought it would be cool if all of his friends had one. “What do you say guys?” Littlefoot asked. “Sure!” they replied. Chomper, Ruby, Cera, Littlefoot, and Spike all put their claws together, and raised them in a cheer. Spike went to eat a swimmer Ducky’s mom had caught. At this point, the gang got curious. “OK, where is Petrie already?” Cera complained. “This is getting annoying.” Suddenly they heard wings flying towards them. It was Petrie, looking excited. “Oh, sorry I’m late guys!” he called from above. He landed on a branch near the gang. “I have great news?” “What is it Petrie?” Chomper asked.

“Well, when I woke up this morning I was about to leave to catch up with you guys when my mom told me and my brothers and sisters that…” Before Petrie could say what it was, the answer came to the gang. “Hello down there!” a voice called from above. Chomper and Ruby looked confused, it was a voice they hadn’t heard before, but Littlefoot, Cera, Spike, and Ducky had. “Oh don’t tell me…” Littlefoot muttered. “You gotta be kidding me,” said Cera, putting her hand on her face. “Oh no no no,” said Ducky. They looked up. It was Petrie’s uncle Pterano!  “That’s Petrie’s uncle?” Chomper asked, having heard about him now in both realities.  “It is, it is,” Ducky replied. The big flying sharptooth landed near the gang. “Uncle, I haven’t seen you in a while!” Petrie said, giving him a hug. “I know, I know,” replied Pterano.



Tera and the rest of Petrie’s siblings arrived. “Are you going to do another stunt uncle?” one of the girls asked. Littlefoot sighed. “It’s because of his uncle that Petrie loves doing all these dumb stunts.” He explained to Chomper and Ruby. “You mean like….”

FLASHBACK

Petrie was showing his friends his latest stunt:  The “Fly In-and-Out of A Sleeping Grownup’s Mouth trick. In Chomper’s family cave, Petrie timed it carefully as Chomper’s dad snored on. As the mouth opened and closed, Petrie swiftly flew in, then waited till it opened again to fly back out.  “Petrie, stop this!” Chomper whispered not wanting to interrupt his parent’s sleep. “Don’t worry,” Petrie laughed in reply. He kept doing this until eventually his wing got caught in Papa Sharptooth’s mouth. “oh no,” said Ruby, but Petrie managed to pull himself free.  “Mmm….tasty,” Chomper’s dad muttered, but it was luckily him just sleep-talking.

ANOTHER FLASHBACK….

Petrie was standing atop Black Rock in the Mysterious Beyond. “Petrie this is stupid,” criticized Cera. “Just wait, this’ll be awesome,” replied Petrie.  “But isn’t this dangerous?” Chomper asked. “Just wait for it,” Petrie responded. As if on cue, a rock slide occurred. “Here I go!” As the gang was rushing to get back to the ground, Petrie landed on one of the rocks, and rode it through the rock slide like a human on a surfboard.  “RUN!” yelled Littlefoot as the gang managed to get out of the way just in time as Petrie kept riding the rock. After that stunt, he was punished by his mother of course.

THE PRESENT…

“And don’t even get me started on the attempt at the “Eat a Longneck From Inside-Out” stunt,” concluded Cera. “Good point,” Chomper replied. “So what does Pterano do if he doesn’t live here in the valley?” the young rex asked. “Well, from what Petrie tells us,” Littlefoot replied. “Pterano likes to travel the world, performing his stunts for all the other young sharpteeth in the world, they all seem to enjoy them.” “Cool,” commented Chomper. “But, you can probably guess that the grownups don’t like him,” Cera said. “I heard Cira say that she can’t believe he’s related to Petrie’s mom.”   “That wouldn’t surprise me,” Ruby chuckled in reply.

Petrie and his siblings were asking Pterano a lot of questions. “So why’d you come back to the Valley uncle?” Petrie asked, eager to know. “Well nephews and nieces,” Pterano said. “I think I have finally come up with the best stunt ever.” “What is it?!” all the flyers asked. “Well, I’m sure all have heard of Crumbling Rock in the Mysterious Beyond right?” “Yeah,” replied Petrie. “The one where rocks are contstantly falling over the edge?” “The very one,” replied Pterano. “I was thinking: I’m going to fly from the surface to the top of Crumbling Rock admist all those falling rock.s”

“Pterano that’s crazy!” complained Tera. “Sister, you have no sense of excitement,” Pterano retorted. “Could I do it too?” Petrie asked. “Nephew, this is too extreme for a young one like you,” Pterano said, he wasn’t that crazy when it came to these. “That sounds cool,” said another voice. It was Guido who had just flown in now. “But I bet anyone could do it,” he commented. Petrie looked offended. “That’s not true! My uncle does the most extreme things that only an extreme dinosaur could do!” he retorted. “Oh please,” replied Guido. “I bet I could do it no sweat.” “You’re on,” replied Petrie.  Guido had different motivations when he said this. In both realities, he was a bit of a laughing stock for some of the other young dinos, so he felt if he could do something cool, the others will finally respect him. Littlefoot, Chomper, Ruby, Cera, Spike, and Ducky already did, but still…

Petrie and Guido flew over to the gang. “Ok, here’s the plan:” Petrie began. “When my uncle does his Crumbling Rock trick, Guido and I will secretly do the same thing from the sidelines,” he laughed. “Petrie, that’s not a good…” Littlefoot began, but Petrie ignored him. “Then I’ll prove to Guido that he is not ready for these awesome stunts.” “And when I win,” Guido replied “”I’ll prove that all these things Petrie and his uncle do are nothing but falling-with style.” Petrie hmmphed.  “We’ll see who’s right,” Petrie chuckled, and flew off.  “See you guys soon,” Guido waved to the gang, and flew off. “You guys smell that?” Littlefoot asked. Chomper sniffed the air. “You mean the swimmer Spike’s eating?” Chomper asked.

“No, that’s the smell of trouble,” Littlefoot replied.

(That’s Chapter 14. Dark Fox Tailz helped me with some ideas to add more of the canpn characters to the story. Hope you like it, and if you have any suggestions for plot or characters, I’d be glad to here them J)

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 30, 2008, 01:51:47 PM »
"Nah, just wanted to check on how Tyra's doing. She's lucky we were able to save her from that horrible longneck. What a bigot that Doc is,"

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 29, 2008, 11:10:13 PM »
Tyra was having a similar dream. She and Kai were running around a wide pen space, playing togethr. Tyra's tail also wrapped around Kai. Outside the cave, Redclaw looked in. "Ah, young love," he chuckled

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: October 28, 2008, 06:24:21 PM »
Next chapter is up, more comments (if you pleases.)

Chapter 13: Ruby's Revelation

"WHAT?!" Chomper yelled. He was lucky he didn't wake anyone up with that tone, but that was quite a bombshell  to him. "It's true," Ruby replied somberly. Chomper looked concerned. He needed to know what had happened to his friend long ago. "Ruby, exactly what happened to you?" he asked slightly horrified. Ruby kept a frown. "I really don't like telling others about this, but I feel there's no getting out of it now." Chomper nodded, he had no idea what to think about now. "But..I don't want anyone else to hear this. Let's head back to Saurus Rock, Ok?" "Agreed," replied Chomper. The two friends silently navigated back to the point where they started the night together, and scaled the sharptooth-shaped rock.  When the two reached the top, Ruby double-checked to make sure no one else was around. "Ok, here I go," Ruby sighed. "But I don't remember exactly when all this started happening, so I'll just start my tale from the best place I can."

YEARS AGO, IN THE MYSTERIOUS BEYOND....

"Ruby! Watch me!" a young fast biter laughed. "Ok Howler, I'm watching," a younger Ruby replied, watching her younger brother do a curved jump (cannonball) into the little pool of water nearby. Howler caused a big splash, soaking his sister. Ruby laughed after spitting some of the water out of her mouth. "Hey, watch it next time," Ruby laughed. Sorry sis, it's just that since mom and dad are busy all the time I need someone to watch me dive." "That's ok," Ruby said. "Hey sis, can you teach me how to hunt?" Ruby laughed a bit. "You're too little to get meat by yourself, how about I just show you how to get some stinging buzzers al right?" "Sure sis," replied Howler. Ruby sniffed around, and saw a buzzer's nest a short distance away. "Follow me," Ruby instructed.

Ruby and Howler hid behind a rock, and Ruby informed Howler about what to do. "Ok, when you see buzzers outside the nest and not too high off the ground, just go for it and chomp on them." "Got it!" Howler replied happily.  Howler wasn't exactly the most listening fast biter there was, so he kind of misunderstood his sister's instructions. He charged for the nest. "Howler wait!" cried Ruby "Don't bite the.." but it was too late. When Howler jumped up, he bit into the nest, not just the bugs. "OW!" he cried as he landed on his back. Ruby ran over. "You OK bro?" she asked. "Yeah, but my tooth.." Howler replied. Howler opened his maw wide, and one of his teeth fell out. "Oh great, it fell out," he complained. Ruby laughed. "Don't worry Howler, all of us sharpteeth lose our baby teeth before we get our big ones." "But that was my biggest tooth," Howler complained. "I"m gonna keep it." "Whatever you want," Ruby laughed as a reply.

Ruby's parents eventually arrived. They had a good laugh after being told of the tooth incident. "Be careful next time," Ruby's dad said. "Ok dad," groaned Howler. Ruby's other brother, Edge had shown up. "Look, I caught a little swimmer," he bragged. Howler groaned again. "See, even Edge knows how to hunt!" he complained to Ruby. "Don't worry Howler, I'll teach you one day," Ruby replied.  All in all, Ruby's life back then was pretty good. Even before Sharptooth had united all of the sharpteeth herds, Ruby had enough fun playing with her younger siblings. "It seemed nothing could go wrong in my life," said the present-day Ruby, narrating the story. "So what happened?" asked Chomper, listening intentively. "Well..." Ruby began. "It all started a few months before we took over the Great Valley."

"I started noticing that whenever my parents came home, they would have these weird marks on them. I could tell they were injuries, but they always said it was just hunting trouble. The weird part was...I could tell they were lying somehow, but I just never spoke up about it."

THE PAST....

Ruby's star day had came.  Her parents had caught a spiketail for the main course when Howler walked up to her sister looking nervous. "Hey sis, I wanted to get you something really special, but all I could think of was this," he said shyly. He stuck out his claw, and dropped something into Ruby's: It was the tooth he had lost earlier! "Howler, I'm..flattered," Ruby replied, she thought it was cute that he actually DID hold on to it. "Just promise me you won't get me the same thing on my Star Day," Edge laughed. "Ok," replied Howler.  That night, the parents were saying goodnight to their kids. "Goodnight Ruby, goodnight Howler, goodnight Edge," Mama Fast biter said. "Goodnight mom," the siblings replied in unison. Shortly after they fell asleep, the parents snuck off. Ruby, however, had kept one eye opened and secretly followed them.

"I didn't know where they were going, but I had to find out," Ruby said to Chomper.
"But I'm still not sure what I heard or saw back then."

THE PAST....

By the time Ruby had caught up with her parents, they were talking with someone (Ruby couldn't tell who or what it was) in a little canyon, and she had hid behind a rock a little distance away. But all of a sudden, she could tell her parents sounded afraid and were in a heated arguement with whoever they were talking to. "I can't believe you two! It's been almost a year, and you STILL haven't yielded any results!' "We have a family to take care of!" Ruby's father yelled at the mysterious figure. The dino laughed. "Family eh? I figure you'd have more time avaible if they were out of the way.." "DON"T YOU DARE!!!" Mama Fast Biter yelled, and started to attack the unknown dino, but whatever it was slashed it's claw, and it hit Ruby's mom...right in the throat. "NO!" Ruby's dad yelled. Suddenly he turned around and noticed Ruby. "What are you doing here.." he looked back. "RUBY RUN!" her father yelled as the mysterious dino attacked him. Ruby stared in fear as her parents were murdered in front of her eyes. She ran back to his brothers, she needed to save them.

Ruby had reached Howler and Edge. "Guys wake up!" Ruby yelled at the top of her lungs. "What is it?" Edge asked concerend. "Mom and dad..." Ruby said, her tears making it hard to say the next part.."They're dead!" "WHAT?!" Howler and Edge shrieked.  Suddenly, they felt the ground shake. "Oh no," Ruby said in silent fear. "EARTHSHAKE!" they all yelled. Very unfortunately, the siblings were right at the point where the ground began splitting. "Run!" yelled Howler, but it was too late. The 3 young fast biters were being caught up by the crack in the ground. Edge was panting. "I..don't think I can.." then he fell. "Edge NO!" Howler yelled, seeing his brother fall to his doom before his eyes. Howler was soon to follow. "Howler! Take my claw!" Ruby yelled, but her efforts proved to be useless, as the vibrations of the earth caused Howler to fall.

"I can't remember exactly what happened next," Ruby cried. "And sometimes, I wish I would just forget all of this. All I remember was waking up the next morning, and beside me was Howler's tooth. His gift hadn't fallen into the ground, so I kept it in memory of him. I walked for what seemed like forever until I passed out. When I woke up, I felt someone was carrying me. I opened my eyes, and saw that it was a big sharptooth. I first I was scared, I thought he was going to kill me. But I could just tell he had a good heart, and I was right. Shortly afterwards, all the herds had moved into the Great Valley. The big sharptooth, who I had always thought it was funny that his name actually was Sharptooth, let me live in his cave. He told me how he saw me lying on the ground and managed to save me from dieing."

Chomper meanwhile, had remembered something. In the past reality, he wasn't quite sure, but one day after he left the GV he and his parents were walking around and found 4 corpses of what were Ruby's species. Chomper thought they weren't her family, but he though differently now. The weird part then was that, it didn't look like a sharptooth killed them, it looked like a leafeater did...  "And so I met you guys one day, and here we are," Ruby finally concluded.  Chomper was moved to tears. "Ruby, I'm....so sorry." He couldn't think of anything else to say. Ruby managed to hold back her tears. "Don't worry, I think I've been able to think about good things, not just the bad things in my life. But I swear sometimes, sometimes I swear, I smell him."

"Who?" asked Chomper. "I didn't see who or what killed my parents, but I caught his scent. Sometimes, I just randomly smell him nearby, but then it goes away. I feel scared." Chomper walked over to Ruby. "You want me to walk you back to your cave?" he asked. "That would be nice," replied Ruby. The sharptooth and the fast biter slid down Saurus Rock  and returned to Sharptooth's cave. When Chomper waved goodbye, Ruby came back out, holding a small tree branch with blue leaves. "What's that?" Chomper asked. "What I wanted to give to you," Ruby replied. "Sharptooth told me about these. See, you hold them over someone you like and.." All of a sudden, to his surprise, Ruby kissed Chomper!  "Goodnight Chomper," Ruby smiled, and walked back into the cave. Chomper went back to his parents, a process made surprisingly hard by his inability to focus on that.

Meanwhile, a strange looking fast biter was standing atop the stone walls surronding the valley, giving a tern-looking glare down at Sharptooth's cave..

(Hope ya liked it! The next couple of chapters will be filler, though. Read and review!)

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 26, 2008, 11:02:53 PM »
Tyra also began snoozing. She wondered what Kai was dreaming about..

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 26, 2008, 10:55:10 PM »
"Pretty nice in here," Tyra commented. She then lied down. "Goodnight Kai,"

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 26, 2008, 10:50:45 PM »
Tyra put her claw in Kai's. "Well, show me the way," she smiled

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 26, 2008, 10:44:09 PM »
"Sure, I could use some Z's." She then looked at Kai. "Could I spend the night with you Kai?" she asked

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 26, 2008, 10:37:49 PM »
Chomper had eaten his share, his stomach was full. "I think we should turn in for the night. What do you guys say?"

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Land Before Time RPG / The Land Before Time: Sharpteeth Adventures
« on: October 26, 2008, 05:52:50 PM »
"Thanks! Don't worry, I didn't get lonely."  She dug into the longneck EXTREMELY fast. "I'm sorry, i just haven't had a good bite in a while," she commented between chowing down

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Role Play Discussion / Total Drama Valley idea updated
« on: October 26, 2008, 04:59:49 PM »
CANON Characters:
Littlefoot- (lbt_cty_lover)
Cera-Great Valley Guardian
Ducky-
Petrie-
Chomper-brekclub85
Ruby-
Tippy-
Shorty-
Rhett-
Ali-
Guido-
Spike-
Tricia- (This would be set maybe 1-3 years later, so she'd be old enough.)
Hyp-
Nod-
Mutt-


OCs: Rory, Rita, and Myra (From my fanfic)-brekclub85 1 OC spot remaining. (1 reserved for the Chronicler.)

Chris-brekclub85
Chef-brekclub85

I altered my original idea. For it, Chris and Chef (From the regular TDI) would have used some government time machine, and since there running out of ideas for the next season of the show, travel to the past and meet all the LBT characters. After introducing them to basic human culture (namely TV) the kids agree to compete in the challenge, some dinosaur-type, and some human-type challenges. (Like video games or human sports.) And since with Chef and Chris there's be 24 characters in total, if I can just have 3 other people play 6 characters each besides me (I've already listed my choices.)

The Prize updated: 2 wishes granted by the stone of cold fire. So, any takers?

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LBT Fanfiction / My fanfic
« on: October 26, 2008, 03:32:13 PM »
Here comes the long-awaited ChomperxRuby Chapter!  :smile

Chapter 12: A Night Under the Stars

It was another day of fun at the waterhole. The Gang was plaing a game of "Biter in the Center" (Monkey in the Middle) Ducky and Cera were on one side, Chomper and Littlefoot on the other. Spike and Petrie were in the center, trying to catch the rock the two teams were tossing to each other. "Littlefoot, here it comes!" called Cera tossing the tone. It barely avoided Petrie's claws and managed to be caught by Littlefoot.  "Ducky! Here!" called Littlefoot. But when he tossed the rock, Spike rose his big tail and knocked it down. "Guess I'm in the center," Littlefoot chuckled. The young rex swam to the center and switched places with Spike.  "I like this game, I do, I do," said Ducky. Chomper smiled, he never played this game before.  The belly dragger gave the rock to Chomper, and he tossed it hard. Cera managed to catch it.  But something was on their minds.

After a few more rounds of the game, they decided to take a break.  Petrie looked around. "Guys, have you noticed we haven't seen Ruby all day?" he commented. The gang nodded. Chomper especially found that odd, as she always joined the gang whenever they went on adventures or played games.  "Gee, I hope she isn't sick, I don't I don't," Ducky said.  "Maybe we should go look for her," Chomper suggested. "Good idea Chomper," Littlefoot replied.  In the bck of Chomper's mind, there was something he should be rememberig about this day, but he just couldn't put a claw on what it was.

The gang (minus Ducky, bound to water.) were using their sniffers to find a trace of Ruby anywhere.  Eventually Chomper caught her trail. "Follow me," he said.  They soon found Ruby, just walking around the valley by herslef. "Hey Ruby," the five friends called. "Oh hey guys," Ruby called calmly. "Where have you been Ruby?" Cera asked. "Oh, nowhere special," Ruby replied, although that looked like it wasn't the truth.  "We were just playing Biter in the Center Ruby, wanna join us?" Chomper asked. "Maybe later, I'm a little tired," Ruby responded. Ruby looked as if she was waiting for something to happen, but then she walked off after a few moments. "Weird," said Cera. The gang resumed their game at the waterhole, though there was that thought that still was bugging Chomper in his mind.  He decided to stop thinking about it for now.

LATER THAT DAY....

Dinner time came. While Chomper was eating with his parents, Ruby showed up again. "Hey Chomper, sorry  couldn't play with you or the rest of the gang today," she apologized. "That's ok Ruby," Chomper smiled back. Ruby then came close. "But could you do me a favor?" she whispered in his ear. "What?" "Could you meet me at Saurus Rock tonight? So me and you can just talk?"  Chomper didn't know what to think, so he replied. "Sure I will." "Thanks Chomper," Ruby said, and walked off. "I wonder what she wants to talk about?" Chomper thought. "What did you friend want son?" Papa sharptooth asked. "Oh nothing," replied Chomper.  Chomper waited for nightfall to come before he left. "Goodnight son," Terri said as she was falling asleep. "Goodnight mom," Chomper replied, and waited a bit till her heard his parents snoring. His dad was a big snorer, so he could always tell when he had dozed off.  Chomper softly snuck out of his family's cave and went off.

It was weird, as Chomper couldn't find Saurus Rock anywhere. The longneck-shaped rock was nowhere to be seen. But when he got in it's general area, he looked up and grinned. "Of course," he laughed. In this reality Saurus Rock was shaped like a sharptooth, not a longneck. "What took ya?" Ruby asked with a grin. "Oh nothing," replied Chomper.  "I got to show you this," Ruby said. She pointed at Saurus Rock. "The back of the rock is just right for climbing to the top of the rock." "Cool!" replied Chomper. "Follow me," Ruby said. The two sharpteeth carefully navigated to the top of the rock. When they reached the stone sharptooth's head, Ruby quickly glanced around. "Ta da!" she called, pointing her claw back towards the valley. Chomper looked amazed.

From where they were standing, they got a PERFECT view of all of the Great Valley. They could see practically every sharptooth that was still awake, as well as the sight of wind going through the trees, hearing the echo of it coming from the caves. "This is incredible," Chomper said in awe. "I know," replied Ruby.  "They valley looks lovely here at night." Chomper kept looking around. "Look! That's Petrie's nest... and the Secret Caverns, and where we found Hidden runner.." Ruby looked at Chomper. "Yeah, I come up here a lot. It always makes me feel better." Chomper found that comment odd. "What's wrong?" he asked. "Oh nothing," Ruby suddenly replied. Ruby then lied down on her back, staring at the sky.

Chomper looked up, wondering if she was watching something, but there was nothing up there, just the stars. They seemed extra bright tonight, actually, it seemed like only 4 were shining very brightly compared to the rest. "They're very pretty," Chomper commented. "I know," replied Ruby. "I love the night, the night is something I love. You see just how peaceful the world can be sometimes." "I know," commented Chomper.  He atared up at the massive night sky. He noticed a few of the stars from some shapes. "Look, a tree." Ruby nodded. "I saw that. There's one that looks like those thing the flatteeth eat, and one that looks like the Smoking Mountain." Chomper also noticed these, they were all pretty cool.  "This is my own secret place, I haven't told anyone else about it until now. Chomper felt flattered, as she was willing to share her little secret with him.

Chomper sighed a happy sigh. "The weather tonight is just prefect, warm but a little wind."  Ruby looked at Chomper. "Chomper," she began "I've wanted to say this for a while, but thank you." "For what?" "And not just you," continued Ruby. "Littlefoot, Cera, Spike, Petrie, and Ducky too, I just wanted to say thanks.. for being there. You're the best friends a fast biter, or anyone for that matter, could ask for." Chomper felt honored. "I'd give anything for these days to last forever." Then it hit Chomper: GIVE. Today was Ruby's star day. "Oh no," Chomper said. "We forgot your Star Day, didn't we?" Ruby nodded, but said. "It's OK, it's not like you needed to give me anything. Just your friendship is enough." Chomper felt relieved but a little disappointed in himself. Then the weirdest thing happened:  the 4 extra bright stars from before all seemed to be shining on..Ruby.  "Whoa, that's cool," Chomper said. "How'd they do that?" "I think I know how," Ruby replied under her breath. Ruby then gasped. "Oh no, I forgot!"

"Forgot what?" Chomper asked. "I forgot something I wanted to give to you." Chomper laughed a bit. "It's YOUR Star Day Ruby, you don't have to give ME anything," he said. "But trust me, you'll love it," Ruby said. "Just stay here, and wait for me. I left it at my cave." "Speaking of which," Chomper started to say, but Ruby had already taken off. "Where does she sleep anyway?" the little sharptooth wondered. "I haven't seen her parents or siblings anywhere since I made my wish."  He then got an idea. "When she doesn't see me, I can just follow her trail and she'll lead me to where she stays the night."  Chomper then slid down the back of Saurus Rock like a slide. "Whee!" he cheered, then landed on the ground. He started using his sniffer. "Ok, let's see... she went that way!" he said, then followed the scent. His sniffer was leading him towards the center-most part of the Great Valley, and he could tell he was closing in on the end of it.

But when Chomper reached the end of the trail, he stopped suddenly. "While this can't be right," he said a little confused. Ruby's trail had led him...right to the outside of Sharptooth's cave! "My sniffer must've made a mistake. It probably just followed someone else's trail by accident." But his theory was quickly proven wrong when Ruby emerged from the cave. "Chomper!" she said surprised. "Did you just follow me?" Chomper looked nervous. "Yeah, but I wasn't trying to be mean or anything, I just wanted to know where you sleep every night." Ruby sighed. "Well, I guess you found me out. Well, some of the grown-ups know too, but you're the only kid who knows." Chomper looked confused.  "Ok, but still, why does Sharptooth let you stay with him? He leads the Valley."  Ruby then sighed. "It's not so much I don't want to tell the others that I do live with him, I just really don't want to tell them why. But I guess I have no choice but to tell you Chomper." "What's going on Ruby?" Chomper asked, knowing there was seriously something going on here.

Ruby started to look sad. "Well, let's just say....if it weren't for Sharptooth...I probably wouldn't be alive right now."


(A cliffhanger! Remember, Read and Review/comment. Next chapter should be up before Friday.)



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