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LBT Fanart / My art work
« on: April 04, 2015, 02:44:59 PM »
I don't know if you mean if she captures his likeness well by that, but Ptyra is Pterano's daughter. Ada is his mate and Ptyra's mother.

This would be a good time to work on my latest revisions to the Ptyra story though, since I realized a lot in the story that doesn't fit Pterano's personality.
Basically, the update is "Pterano is better at being an uncle than a father."

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LBT Fanart / My art work
« on: March 31, 2015, 10:31:13 PM »
Long overdue art, though I doubt responses after not putting out art frequently after...three years?

I've been dabbling with crafting, and I crotcheted a teeny tiny Dalek with teeny tiny yard, and a teeny tiny crochet hook. I though I was going to give up, but I made it!



With a US quarter for size.



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The Written Word / More Doctor Who fan fiction trouble
« on: March 21, 2015, 04:30:30 AM »
For the last few years, I've been struggling with two Doctor Who stories, both of which now intertwine with each other. But I have another topic for those two.

This one is new, and is probably going to be a bit more...controversial, I guess? If not touchy and perhaps even "gross" to some.

For those who don't follow Doctor Who, Skaro is the planet that the Daleks came from, and its environment was utterly destroyed by their Kaled ancestors' war with another race called the Thals. The war ended when a nuclear bomb was set off and destroyed everything. The deranged Kaled scientist was prepared for such an event, having created a mutant strain of Kaleds that he called Daleks. For a thousand years, the Daleks were unable to leave their city, and had to rely on static electricity to power their casings, and their hearts; they were also sensitive to low levels of radiation, and this prevented them from being able to leave their casings. The Doctor came with his granddaughter and two of her schoolteachers, and they helped the Thals to stop the Daleks from setting off another bomb. And that's just the super diet version.

My story takes place two hundred years after this. The Doctor's visit is a landmark of history, and the Daleks now know that there are other living beings in the universe--information that they are intensely threatened by; they have perhaps the most intense xenophobia the universe has seen. For now, they are figuring out alternate methods of travel outside of their city, creating the solar-powered disks that would later be used in the Daleks' second appearance in the show, where they have taken over the Earth in the late 21st century. The Thals, meanwhile, are starting to fall to a new level of suffering; there has been a dip in their capability to survive the radiation, and infant mortality rates have spiked; it's hard for a Thal woman to even complete a pregnancy in this time, and if it is completed, then it's even harder for the child to live to be five years old.

Ferja is such a Thal, whose longest-lived child dies from radiation sickness at six months old. While trying to work through her grief, she stumbles upon a Dalek whose casing has collapsed down a ravine, stranding it; it was never rescued for several weeks, leaving it to assume it was believed dead. By the time Ferja finds it, it is close to starving to death before anything else can kill it. Seeking only to survive, the Dalek convinces Ferja to nurse it back to health (in more ways than one  ;) ).
The agreement ends up putting both of them on track for disaster; they form a filial bond, and put themselves and Ferja's kinsmen in danger from the other Daleks.

The greatest issue I have right now is for events beyond the meeting of Ferja and her Dalek (who she later names; haven't found a good one yet). Namely, the events in which Ferja is helping the Dalek recover. I'm going to cut the BS and have the other Thals know about the arrangement, and even give her support, hoping it would bring peace. It's easier than having Ferja sneak around and keep the Dalek a secret, plus it works in the benevolence and pacifism of the Thals as a species. The Thals also view Ferja's relationship with her Dalek as an act of piety, thinking of it like the Roman virtue, pietas.
It would probably take a few months for the full recovery, so there would have to be a lot of story to fill in that I'm just drawing massive blanks on. Which includes the other characters; I feel like they're just sitting around. They other four characters are Ferja's best friend, and the three men who Ferja attempted to have children with, which includes the leader of the troop. Hey...you gots to do what you can when your species is at risk of endangerment.

Regarding my concern about the story being considered "gross" or "touchy" is because it's an inter-species (platonic-filial) love story, with breastfeeding at its crux. The title is inspired by the ancient exemplary story Roman Charity and well.... It's probably even The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck with its plot mixed up like a deck of cards. A lot of the themes are similar. I can see how the whole idea does look weird, but I want it to be sweet at second glance. It's still a love story, but not a romance--and certainly not star-crossed love, since there's desire for peace and unity on one side of the factions, and highly approves this particular opportunity for it. Oh, those Thals...optimists at the very worst of times.

I would love suggestions for filling in the gaps of the story, as well as anything else, including character development and interactions. Other thoughts in general would be great too.

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Land Before Time Captions / Pterano had too much sweet bubble juice
« on: March 21, 2015, 03:35:34 AM »
Moments earlier, the children had been pushing rocks off hills again.

Shortly thereafter, the game was restricted.

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The Written Word / Cursing in fanfictions
« on: March 18, 2015, 11:01:46 PM »
"A pox on you" would be a phrase Rarity would say, and to a lesser extent Twilight. And while Rainbow Dash probably is one of the last who would say it, it would be better in a funnier situation.

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Real-Life Captions / Off with her socks!
« on: March 17, 2015, 02:08:32 PM »
Quote from: Dalekdino,Mar 17 2015 on  03:10 AM
Quote from: Ptyra,Mar 17 2015 on  01:08 AM
"Now Stacy, it's time to make a sacrifice for the washing machine monster"
Stacy?
Just a random name that I pulled from the air for my caption

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Real-Life Captions / Off with her socks!
« on: March 16, 2015, 08:08:08 PM »
"Now Stacy, it's time to make a sacrifice for the washing machine monster"

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The Fridge / Pet Stories
« on: March 05, 2015, 04:25:25 PM »
We're taking care of another cat from the foster center. Initially he needed a bath, but then we realized he had Upper Respiratory stuff going on. His name is Cuddles, and for good reason.

And he became friends with our youngest cat Mink REALLY fast; it's hard to tell them apart. Except that Mink's tail is fuller and she's chunkier and taller. Cuddles has been having hair loss problems...

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The Party Room / How's the Weather?
« on: February 22, 2015, 04:36:47 PM »
It's raining; probably going to freeze overnight, and potentially close my college.

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General Land Before Time / Rob Paulsen
« on: February 17, 2015, 05:05:54 PM »
Strut...mostly because I keep expecting something from Pinkie to bust out...because Pinkie of Pinkie and the Brain is my overall favorite Rob Paulsen voice.

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The Fridge / Who is your favorite fictional mongoose?
« on: February 17, 2015, 04:39:40 PM »
My personal issue with RTT is that it is a big huge MASSIVE promotion of British Imperialism over India, and general colonial rule. (Especially Victorian Rule, as Queen Victoria was made Empress of India while Kipling was writing)That means the British culture (represented by Rikki living with a British military family) wiping out the population of the native Indian culture (represented by the cobras and their offspring). I've seen adaptations where RTT lets Nagaina leave the garden with the last of her eggs, which for me looks like native Indians fleeing with what they can rather than bow to their invaders. And that is pretty much what was going on with British Imperialism in India during Kipling's time. "Convert to our ways and be second class citizens, or die".
That mindset carried through most of the British Empire at the time, right down to Australia with (for lack of a better term) kidnapping Aborigine children and forcing them to learn British culture.
Kipling was a massive supporter of not just British Imperialism, but United States Imperialism, which is what the White Man's Burden is about. In fact, RTT has passages very much like The White Man's Burden.
Also, I would expect a very young mongoose to be stricken with trauma and homesickness after being flooded out. But this is an Imperialism story! Gotta do your duty for queen and country!

Here is a passage from the study website Schmoop, comparing a passage of Kipling's colonial rule poem The White Man's Burden, to a passage in RTT

From a postcolonial perspective, Rikki-tikki can be viewed as a subject of colonial rule. Consider this excerpt from Kipling's poem "The White Man's Burden":

Take up the White Man's burdenó
And reap his old reward:
The blame of those ye better,
The hate of those ye guardó
The cry of hosts ye humour
(Ah, slowly!) toward the light:ó
"Why brought he us from bondage,
Our loved Egyptian night?" (source)


The poem speaks to what Kipling called the white man's burden, a rally cry for Imperialist British society to civilize so-called "primitive" societies. According to Kipling, no matter how much the other societies may hate British rule, civilizing will ultimately be for their benefit. Or, as K.B. Rao put it, Kipling wanted to "portray the heroism and self-sacrifice of Englishmen working in India for the empire" and promote imperialism as the great cause (source).

Now consider this quote from "Rikki-Tikki-Tavi:

[…] because every well-brought-up mongoose always hopes to be a house-mongoose some day and have rooms to run about it, and Rikki-tikki's mother (she used to live in the General's house at Segowlee) had carefully told Rikki what to do if ever he came across white men. (17).

Unlike the free-willed hero above, here Rikki-tikki seems like someone who has given up his traditional role as an Indian for the comforts of colonial rule. He desires to become domesticated but not just by anyone. His mother specifically tells him to seek out and come into the good graces of the imperialist conquerors. So he protects the British family from the native dangers in exchange for the comforts of their home.

In this light, Rikki-tikki is the "burden"óand he's working with his colonialist overlords to civilize and sanitize the garden for the British family. The cobras, which stand in opposition to such change, must be eliminated because they are getting in the way of the British's family's desire to live in the garden. (And never mind that the cobras lived in India first.)

In this light, Rikki-tikki is less a hero fighting for the protection of the family than a subject fighting to introduce the presence of his colonial masters to the land.


It's incredibly irking to me when storytellers try to use RTT as an allegory for courage, because he has very little fear in what he does. He has tentativeness, but he never once thinks about backing away or trying to find his home burrow from where he was washed out from. He goes straight in because it's what he was taught to do, because "a good mongoose never looks back".  

Point two is that it's pretty much the first two thirds of Beowulf with animals. Big Cool Warrior comes to Place Needing Help by water. Kills Primary Enemy #1 in the dead of night; fight results in death by body being split (Grendel having his arm ripped off, Nag being shot in half). Turns out female family member is a much, much bigger threat, and is p!$$ed beyond all reason. Big Cool Warrior fights and kills her in her own home. Like RTT, Beowulf is about a dominant culture wiping out another culture that's very livelihood is being threatened by their presence. Just switch out Paganism/whatever the rival religion was for Hinduism.

The Cobras' perspective of RTT matches that of the native Indians when they started taking over. They came out of nowhere, started parading around like they owned the place, and started attacking their people. Of course they were going to fight back, there was an invader on their doorstep! To this day, Kipling's work is thought of very negatively in India because he supported utter British takeover, which was narrowly avoided.

So what do I have to say? Native subjugated people that are bullied by pompous colonialists Cobras. Because in the context of RTT, mongooses represent one of the most horrible, evil things a person or a population can do, and that is colonial rule. To violently intrude into a place where one doesn't belong and shed blood to take it. And should the native population kill to keep it? I say yes. It's their culture, their home, their land, their families, their children. The colonialists have no right to get uppity and try to claim it's their moral duty to rule them; because it's not. This behavior is matched throughout the world of European colonists as they spread. The whole of the Americas were underfoot by the British, French, and Spanish and their White American heirs, who to this day subjugate the Natives. I even support giving Native Americans back their native lands, especially because they're living in deplorable conditions in the reservations. Up until the 1970's, and maybe even a little tiny bit to this day, the Aborigines of Australia pretty much had their children kidnapped (for lack of a better term) and had even greater force and pressure to learn British behavior and practices. Same for the Maori of New Zealand a little bit more north. India was mercifully freed a few decades ago.


*Whips of finger* And on another note, Nag and Nagaina are very badly written King Cobras!
King Cobras DO NOT have marks on the back of their hoods, and DO NOT eat birds! There's a reason why they're called King Cobras and it's because they nearly exclusively eat other species of snakes! It's even in the scientific name for King Cobra, as the single member of the genus Ophiophagus, which means snake eater. Now, in the context of Nag eating the baby tailorbird, let me say this. A flightless baby bird is helpless. Once it falls out of the nest, there's no way to get it back up, and it is effectively doomed. Really, really doomed. Something was going to eat it anyway, or it would die from exposure.

And Muskrats don't live in India!

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Attic Treasures / What are you reading?
« on: February 12, 2015, 11:59:42 PM »
I just got three non-fiction books from my college library.
One is "Autism's False Prophets", which focuses on the bad science and hysteria to "cure" Autism. I like how the author has compared the present freakout and horribly dangerous attempts for cures to the same panic as Polio at the start of the 1930's. The other is a maternity prenatal guide for natural pregnancy. No, guys, I swear to you, I am not pregnant  :lol . But I like learning about these things way ahead of time, because that's the way I intend to go.

Also, a book about cats and cat behavior to better improve coexistence with household cats.

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Silver Screen / Maleficent
« on: February 10, 2015, 04:54:51 PM »
There is only one Maleficent to me, and that is the animated. I don't know who the live action is, but it's certainly not her. Come back to me when there's a story about her past encounters with Flora, Fauna, and Merriweather; come back to me when it covers how she came to command the Forbidden Mountain; come back to me when she still relishes in how deliciously devious she is. I want to know how the flip she never realized her minions had been trying to find a baby for sixteen years, and what she had done to not receive an invitation to the baby's christening. Whoever Angelina Jolie is portraying, it is not Maleficent.

There seems to have been a trend in making fabulously devious female villains into tragic figures who were hurt when they were young. And it's just...no. Just let them be what makes them fun! To me, there is something seriously wrong with making female villains (or any female character) what they are because they were neglected, bullied, raped, and so forth. And as much as I support having female characters with a feminist story, it feels like pandering to include those elements, and to characters who don't need it. Keep female empowerment away from Maleficent because she has always had it. And away from the Witch of the West for that matter. Run, green skinned magic ladies! RUN! RUN FROM THE TRAGIC BACKSTORY!

In my mind, follow the example of Grendel, not Wicked. It's okay to have some kind of childhood/youth trauma, but don't pander to it. Grendel was unable to communicate with his mother and learned his ruthlessness from watching the ruthlessness of humans among one another. I would love to see a live-action Maleficent with more in common with Grendel than with Wicked. Let her have some weird aspect of youth, but the thing about Maleficent is that she RELISHES in being the bad guy, and she does it in a way that is awesome. Is there a level of tragedy? A little, but not enough to be overpowering. Grendel might not have been able to connect with his mother, but she never neglected him; she loved him dearly. But there was still a mutual wall between them that made things difficult.

Then there's another infuriating aspect of the live action is that Aurora's fairy caretakers didn't know how to take care of a baby, which is a bit of a slap in the face to the true leading ladies of Sleeping Beauty. In the end, the animated Sleeping Beauty is the fairy godmothers having to cope with giving up their ward and trying to protect her from something that was destined to happen. I would take a movie about the Three Good Fairies raising Briar Rose over a movie about Maleficent any day. Or just a story about the lives of the four fairies. They all have great personalities in the animated, and oh to see all of them clash together in one big pink and blue dress of a mess.

I love the animated Maleficent, and wouldn't touch the live action with a forty nine and a half foot pole.

Wait, wrong evil green person...(but that's another live action green person I don't care for either)


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The Fridge / Pet Stories
« on: February 10, 2015, 02:53:06 AM »
That is a mighty large dog! But he sounds so sweet!

Two of the kittens I'm fostering got their spays done today. By the rules of the adoption/rescue group I clean and foster for, the cats must be fixed before they go in. They're set to go in later this week, with the last of the kittens we fostered last spring.

We're putting the three of them together in one big unit because they get along really well. They'll sleep together, and Mink will actually pin them down to groom them. Hopefully at least one kitten wil get to go home with her, which would be great.

From what I've noticed in the last few years, 1 year old cats with 8-week-old kittens is a REALLY good age mix. Fluer, our three year old, does excellently with kittens too, and has ever since she was a little bit older than Mink.

 
Twoey, Audrey, and Mink

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The Fridge / Pet Stories
« on: February 08, 2015, 06:38:18 PM »
This is Ricky, one of the kittens I socialized last year. He and his siblings were passed off to me and my family by a lady who had them born in her backyard, but she didn't have time to socialize them once they were up and romping around. Ricky was the last to get adopted because he got a little sick. With him and only two of my bottle-fed kittens left, his personality (as well of theirs) came exploding out. As well as that he was addicted to playing fetch with little stuffed wine bottles filled with catnip.


There were EIGHT of those things in total. And I occasionally had to sew up the seams because they would pop from being played with so hard.

He would get so excited for us to throw it that we had to teach him a hand signal for him to sit and wait for us to do it. Then he developed another habit. He would deliberately drop the toy in the water bowl, and make sure it was totally soaked before bringing it to us. My parents have an opening in their bedroom door for cats to come in and out, so he'd come in and drop the soaking wet toy in my mother's face in the middle of the night while she was sleeping  :lol .

So, my mom posted a video of him fetching on youtube, that got to one of the ladies at her church, who showed it to her boss, who adopted him.

Now here's the biggest thing about Ricky: In spite of being very dog-like in demenor, he had never, EVER been exposed to a dog in his life. But the dog he lives with now is his best friend.

He's also the second kitten I've fostered who's played fetch, but he was much more into it than Shambles.

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The Fridge / Pet Stories
« on: February 07, 2015, 07:07:09 PM »
So I realized there hasn't really been a place to talk about our animal companions, so I thought "why not".

Probably won't do all mine at once because then I'd turn into a Forrest Gump of cats XD . And certainly not right away. I should just register as a Crazy Cat Lady and get it over with
 :lol .

Especially after last year. Last year was a whirlwind of cat. Half of which were kittens, and half of those having to be bottle fed. The other half needing socializing, and with only one of them having his true colors come out after his siblings had all been adopted.

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Silver Screen / What are you watching?
« on: February 05, 2015, 02:05:16 AM »
Futurama, Saturday Morning Fun Pit.

My favorite segment of this anthology episode is the PurpleBerry Pond. Just the way it pokes fun at the hamfisted morals and injections of promoting what is supposedly a healthy breakfast...and continuously injecting it with sugar. It takes TWO colors to make a rainbow!

And it's pleasant to look at from a color theory perspective. Look at ALL the shades of purple that actually look nice. And then there's little orange Fry to set it off.

"I must get my hands on those healthy purple berries!"
"Bort!"

But Nixon narrating over the GI Joe parody...it's so beautiful. It's so close to riffing while trying to censor. Especially once it got to the fight scenes. "Here comes a water balloon!" *Explosion* "That's quite a splash!"

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The Party Room / Tell us something about yourself!
« on: January 25, 2015, 07:04:16 PM »
I've been fostering some kittens since the week before Christmas, revived at two weeks old. The boy was adopted by friends of my family, and I just have the two girls now. The girls who are a little needier than the boy, and one of them is a big groomer. I named them after the characters of Little Shop of Horrors. Seymour, Audrey, and Twoey.

Christmas time is a weird period for kittens to be born and they got separated from their mother. I just hope my family doesn't have another kitten storm by the time spring rolls around, and I REALLY hope to get this darn carpet out of my room around my birthday.

One thing I've learned about myself from raising kittens: I am NEVER EVER putting carpet floors in my own household. Maaaaybe a rug. But not over the whole floor. Tile and wood. It's a horror show enough to clean up kitten messes on carpet, it's gonna be worse with kids. Also, it increases my affirmation of eighteen years that I am not bottle feeding my kids. Again, hard enough with kittens, harder with kids. (And I don't mean the goat kind of kid =P ).

And finally, I'm on my last semester of community college and about to get my Associate of Arts! Might do a few more classes in graphic design while I get a job (maybe even get an Associates in Graphic Design), but my personal end goal is to move to Minneapolis, Minnesota. Been there twice and I love it. I want to get out of my parents' house and out of Texas before 2020. Even if it's 2019. That counts.

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General Land Before Time / Were there any poisonous dinos?
« on: January 20, 2015, 02:57:13 AM »
Pro tip: If you bite it, it's poisonous. If it bites you, it's venomous.
The phrase you are looking for is "venomous".  

I personally imagine at least some carnivorous dinosaurs weren't necessarily venomous in the same way that a handful of modern snakes are, (potentially) save for the fellow in Dark's link. Rather, they had a similar toxicity of horror that Komodo Dragons do in their saliva, perhaps bolted up to nightmare levels.

Though there probably isn't any evidence for it, I'd figure that there might be enough rot in a carnivore's level to at least cause an infection in those who survived a bite...which happens a lot more frequently than we typically account for. Remember, just because it's an apex predator in its prime, that doesn't mean it's going to make a kill every time. It's going to fail so much more than it succeeds, like every modern predator.

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Pterodactals aren't a singular species of pterosaur, but rather a genus that includes multiple species. Scientifically speaking, the proper name is Pterodactylus.

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